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Hakurei Yoru

Alveryn wrote:

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do it then
Topic Starter
Hakurei Yoru

smallboat wrote:

[General]
  1. Tags not the same in this mapset Fixed
  2. SB看上去沒啥問題

[Nightmare]
  1. 00:38:846 (3) - 這pattern圖形看起來與00:39:187 (5,6) - 不合規律,移到(248|356)附近看看? Fixed
  2. 01:40:892 (1,2,3,4) - 要不然用對稱好了? Fixed
  3. 01:50:778 (2) - 也許能疊在01:49:073 (1) - 的頭? 挺远的……必要不大
  4. 02:40:806 (4,1) - 連打間距建議一樣 Fixed 不不 其实这里ds不一样是因为滑条速度变了 实际上一样的呀。。
  5. 03:02:198 (6) - 跟03:00:835 (6) - 對著看的話,應該是跟03:02:028 (5) - 較近的? Fixed
  6. 03:11:233 (2) - 看起來有點讀不清這是否1/2或1/4 Fixed
  7. 03:36:204 (2,3) - 串子間距建議一樣 Fixed
  8. 04:08:675 (3) - 同上 Fixed
  9. 04:26:914 (9) - 尾端應該能疊好 改近了一点
  10. 04:57:426 (2) - 如果想只跟背景音樂的話這個note可以考慮刪去 Fixed
  11. 05:37:142 (2) - 同上,這次是考慮是否增加 没有很理解……大概没必要?
感谢~
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Congratulations!
sahuang

smallboat wrote:

Congratulations!
Topic Starter
Hakurei Yoru
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Misure

smallboat wrote:

Congratulations!
smallboat
Okay fine #1 Bubbled
Otosaka-Yu
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Iolite
快快快马上飞了
Flask
好想泡呀
Satellite
[Soda's Lunatic]
  1. 04:09:528 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:710 (1,2,3,4) - I was worried about a pattern here. You should unify it in a pattern of either imo.
[Nightmare]
  1. 02:40:551 (1,2,3,4) - why stream pattern ? i think you should be used 1/4 slider pattern. about 02:35:096 (6,7) - 02:43:278 (8,9) - 02:48:733 (8,9) -
  2. 04:09:698 (2,3,4,1) - Yeah. now looks fine it's cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. so try 04:09:869 (3,4) - ctrl + g ? i think more better flow.
  3. 04:13:448 (1) - missing Nc pattern.
  4. 04:26:659 (6) - and 04:26:829 (7) - Overmapping. so should be remove note better. if you want to put object here 04:26:573 (5) - and 04:26:744 (6) - this circle changed 1/4 slider ?
  5. 04:32:198 (2,3) - looks fine. but changed 1/4 slider more better rhythm imo.
  6. 04:57:767 (3,4) - This spacing is really awkward. so Please separate it in the same way as this place about 05:08:676 (3,4) -
Topic Starter
Hakurei Yoru
back to school qwq
Topic Starter
Hakurei Yoru

Satellite wrote:

[Soda's Lunatic]
  1. 04:09:528 (1,2,3,4) - 01:47:710 (1,2,3,4) - I was worried about a pattern here. You should unify it in a pattern of either imo.
ok, as gder's idea, fixed~

[Nightmare]
  1. 02:40:551 (1,2,3,4) - why stream pattern ? i think you should be used 1/4 slider pattern. about 02:35:096 (6,7) - 02:43:278 (8,9) - 02:48:733 (8,9) - fixed
  2. 04:09:698 (2,3,4,1) - Yeah. now looks fine it's cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. so try 04:09:869 (3,4) - ctrl + g ? i think more better flow. fixed
  3. 04:13:448 (1) - missing Nc pattern.
    is it necessary..?i think its better for reading
  4. 04:26:659 (6) - and 04:26:829 (7) - Overmapping. so should be remove note better. if you want to put object here 04:26:573 (5) - and 04:26:744 (6) - this circle changed 1/4 slider ?
    fixed
  5. 04:32:198 (2,3) - looks fine. but changed 1/4 slider more better rhythm imo.
    well..maybe circle can be better here~
  6. 04:57:767 (3,4) - This spacing is really awkward. so Please separate it in the same way as this place about 05:08:676 (3,4) - fixed
Satellite
04:13:448 (1,2) - is better for reading think so too. but please check this. 04:24:358 (4,1) - It is a consistent problem. if you don't changed this it's okay :D
Topic Starter
Hakurei Yoru

Satellite wrote:

04:13:448 (1,2) - is better for reading think so too. but please check this. 04:24:358 (4,1) - It is a consistent problem. if you don't changed this it's okay :D
keep?
04:13:448 (1,2) - here is only one slider, so maybe different from other's nc~
Satellite
#2
TenshiMegumin
右乳无敌
Rizia
nightmare
02:27:255 (1,2,3) - 02:27:767 (1,2,3) - 來回跳怎麼樣, 現在總覺得 2和3卡手

call me back
Topic Starter
Hakurei Yoru
@Rizia
keep?虽然是出现在2分钟的地方可能会坑到人,但在后半段相同的地方差不多也是这个结构,应该不会有很大的问题,还有就是自己比较喜欢现在这种感觉(((
Lasse
Finally!
Could you add "touhou" to tags before this gets qualified?
Cause right now people can't find the map if they search for that :c
yf_bmp
Congratulations
Rizia
qualified
Mint
fun map !!
congrats :3/
Satellite

appleeaterx wrote:

fun map !!
congrats :3/
__Ag
太强了
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