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EGOIST - KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)

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Meg
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Meg
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年6月18日 at 10:13:30

Artist: EGOIST
Title: KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Source: 甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags: Koutetsu Jou no Kabaneri ryo supercell chelly tv size Opening iMage-- Del05
BPM: 175
Filesize: 14934kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. DEL'S HARD (3.32 stars, 225 notes)
  2. EASY (1.31 stars, 72 notes)
  3. HEART OF IRON (5.04 stars, 318 notes)
  4. INSANE (4.14 stars, 241 notes)
  5. NORMAL (1.95 stars, 129 notes)
Download: EGOIST - KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Download: EGOIST - KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit) (no video)
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Last edited by Meg , edited 24 times in total.
xxdeathx
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chucentry
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Good luck MegOIST go!
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iyasine
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iyasine
yoshi
Meg
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iyasine wrote:

yoshi
hitsoundわからね～ｗｗｗｗ
Negi
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Negi
Egoist ayy
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
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SnowNiNo_
oki as you req :3
free NM for meg ><

  • [Heart of IRON]
  1. 00:01:435 - im not sure wat you are following at the beginning, but i think you should delete 00:03:320 (3) -
  2. 00:15:663 (4) - well just suggest to use a triplet instead of reverse kickslider, since is the highest diff
  3. 00:48:063 (1,2) - make these the same shape would look nicer
  4. 00:51:663 (3) - why dont use 1/2 slider ;w;? 3/4 sound a bit weird here
  5. 00:54:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could make the spacing bigger ti emphasized the intense music more
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:19:263 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing bigger, it's similar with 1/2 spacing
  2. 00:32:892 - 00:35:635 - 00:38:377 - 00:41:120 - 00:41:806 - unused inherited point, im not sure if you "must" deleted it since you used in Heart of IRON diff
  3. 00:42:577 (1,3) - awww not good blanket
  4. 01:14:806 - 01:16:177 - i would add a note at these two parts, otherwise will lack some hit feeling? (fk my english is poor ;w;
  5. 01:19:606 - the sound here shouldnt be express by slierend, put a note would fit more
osu need more kabaneri \>w</
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
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Joined June 2013
Garden
hi~ really nice song in this season <3
[General]
  1. tag-> opning, u made a typo as it seems
[Easy]
  1. 00:29:892 (2) - 00:39:835 (3,4) - can convert the slider a bit this way to show the slider corner in order to be perfectly safe
[Normal]
  1. 00:22:863 (6,1,2) - objects look kinda too close here, moving 6 a bit like this can be fine
  2. 01:14:120 (1,2) - can somehow be dangerous for a normal diff, maybe consider 1 or 2 for more intuitive reading
[Del's Hard]
  1. 00:06:235 (3,4,5,1) - 00:17:206 (3,4,5) - sliders are touching the triplets like this, should move the triplets away a bit to make them neater
  2. 01:19:606 (1) - somehow i expect a slowdown here cuz u use a slowdown for the first kiai fadeout part..
[Insane]
  1. 00:32:892 - hmm some unused stuffs for this part, it seems that u forgot to delete some
  2. 01:02:120 (2,3,4,5) - imo a spaced stream here instead of a stacked one works better, can somehow make it stand out from those triplets
[Heart of IRON]
  1. 01:03:149 (1,3) - i think this overlap is not intentional so maybe move 3,5 down a bit to make them not touching
  2. 01:16:863 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - imo u can replace the notes here with sliders as u do in the insane diff, since rhythm is a bit inconsistent here, sliders would be a better alternative for saving acc lol
Syph
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Joined August 2014
Syph
as requested

[Del]

00:05:549 - i don't think you should ignore this sound
00:19:263 (1,3) - why do these have different shapes xd // would also make them look something like this for fancy blankets lo https://sy.phic.al/i/ikalyfq.jpg
00:20:977 (2) - try a circle here and a 1/2 slider 00:21:149 - here, sounds better to me
01:07:263 (1) - maybe do a 1/2 slider and then a double
01:26:235 (1) - remove nc? seems kinda unneccesary

[Insane]

00:20:977 (2) - wouldnt this sound better if you place a note here and move 00:21:320 (3) - to 00:21:149 -
01:23:720 (1,2,3) - these overlaps look kinda weird :/

[Heart of IRON]

00:09:835 (2,4) - you could maybe blanket these starting off with a blanket how nice
00:45:320 (1) - i think it's better to do a 1/2 reverse here, so you don't ignore vocal on the red tick
00:50:463 (6,1) - fix blanket xd
00:51:663 (3) - 1/2 slider sounds better imo
01:01:263 (4) - this sounds kinda out of place to me, would probably be better to just place a note on red tick lo
01:14:120 (1) - i think this should end on blue tick
Okoratu
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Okoratu
CAPS ALL DIFFNAMES PLS IM BEGGING YOU
Meg
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Topic Starter
Meg

Okorin wrote:

CAPS ALL DIFFNAMES PLS IM BEGGING YOU
LOL
chucentry
401 posts
Joined April 2013
chucentry
Hi mEGOIST

HEART OF IRON
00:16:520 (7) - NC

00:21:492 (6) - remove whistle ? sounds better for me

00:25:263 (2,3,4,5,6) - i try with this http://puu.sh/paSoz/145f354b30.jpg is roosty but if u like to change it for something similar to it

00:54:235 (1) - maybe Ctrl + G

01:15:263 (3) - nc ?i not sure of this but looks cool for me for the 4 sliders than are in 1/3 i mean 2 sliders them note and them other 2 sliders

01:19:606 (1) - clap

01:20:292 (2) - clap

INSANE
00:03:835 (3) - move to 00:03:663 - add clap and whistle and move more near to the slider 00:03:149 (2) - example: http://puu.sh/paTo2/c30cdfe562.jpg stack 00:04:006 (4) - on the new (3)

00:43:092 (2,3) - looks without flow the 2 sliders together for me. Honestly idk how u can change it i try with something liek this http://puu.sh/paTBd/2231cd4ec8.jpg

01:08:635 (1) - mm i think this looks better with a 15° rotate slider http://puu.sh/paTS8/5bec08316e.jpg for me no broke the flow a lot

01:19:263 (7) - clap

01:20:292 (1) - clap

the other diff looks fine for me

Hope this can be helpful <3 Good luck!
Meg
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Meg
SnowNiNo_

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

oki as you req :3
free NM for meg ><

  • [Heart of IRON]
  1. 00:01:435 - im not sure wat you are following at the beginning, but i think you should delete 00:03:320 (3) - umm keep. it doesn't matter imo
  2. 00:15:663 (4) - well just suggest to use a triplet instead of reverse kickslider, since is the highest diff i like reverse
  3. 00:48:063 (1,2) - make these the same shape would look nicer ok
  4. 00:51:663 (3) - why dont use 1/2 slider ;w;? 3/4 sound a bit weird here ok
  5. 00:54:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could make the spacing bigger ti emphasized the intense music more keep
  • [Insane]
  1. 00:19:263 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing bigger, it's similar with 1/2 spacing no problem, test players could read
  2. 00:32:892 - 00:35:635 - 00:38:377 - 00:41:120 - 00:41:806 - unused inherited point, im not sure if you "must" deleted it since you used in Heart of IRON diff ok
  3. 00:42:577 (1,3) - awww not good blanket ok
  4. 01:14:806 - 01:16:177 - i would add a note at these two parts, otherwise will lack some hit feeling? (fk my english is poor ;w; umm? i keep...
  5. 01:19:606 - the sound here shouldnt be express by slierend, put a note would fit more ok
osu need more kabaneri \>w</

Garden

Garden wrote:

hi~ really nice song in this season <3
[General]
  1. tag-> opning, u made a typo as it seems LOL fixed
[Easy]
  1. 00:29:892 (2) - 00:39:835 (3,4) - can convert the slider a bit this way to show the slider corner in order to be perfectly safe ok
[Normal]
  1. 00:22:863 (6,1,2) - objects look kinda too close here, moving 6 a bit likethis can be fine ok
  2. 01:14:120 (1,2) - can somehow be dangerous for a normal diff, maybe consider 1 or 2 for more intuitive reading umm keep
[Insane]
  1. 00:32:892 - hmm some unused stuffs for this part, it seems that u forgot to delete some ok
  2. 01:02:120 (2,3,4,5) - imo a spaced stream here instead of a stacked one works better, can somehow make it stand out from those triplets ok
[Heart of IRON]
  1. 01:03:149 (1,3) - i think this overlap is not intentional so maybe move 3,5 down a bit to make them not touching ok
  2. 01:16:863 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - imo u can replace the notes here with sliders as u do in the insane diff, since rhythm is a bit inconsistent here, sliders would be a better alternative for saving acc lol i wanna make hard to get acc LOL keep

Syph

Syph wrote:

as requested

[Insane]

00:20:977 (2) - wouldnt this sound better if you place a note here and move 00:21:320 (3) - to 00:21:149 - ok
01:23:720 (1,2,3) - these overlaps look kinda weird :/ cool for me, keep

[Heart of IRON]

00:09:835 (2,4) - you could maybe blanket these starting off with a blanket how nice keep
00:45:320 (1) - i think it's better to do a 1/2 reverse here, so you don't ignore vocal on the red tick ok
00:50:463 (6,1) - fix blanket xd ok
00:51:663 (3) - 1/2 slider sounds better imo ok
01:01:263 (4) - this sounds kinda out of place to me, would probably be better to just place a note on red tick lo i changed flow a bit
01:14:120 (1) - i think this should end on blue tick this is 1/3 rhythm xd

chucentry

chucentry wrote:

Hi mEGOIST

[HEART OF IRON]
  • 00:16:520 (7) - NC ok

    00:21:492 (6) - remove whistle ? sounds better for me keep

    00:25:263 (2,3,4,5,6) - i try with this http://puu.sh/paSoz/145f354b30.jpg is roosty but if u like to change it for something similar to it keep

    00:54:235 (1) - maybe Ctrl + G keep

    01:15:263 (3) - nc ?i not sure of this but looks cool for me for the 4 sliders than are in 1/3 i mean 2 sliders them note and them other 2 sliders keep

    01:19:606 (1) - clap ok

    01:20:292 (2) - clap ok
[INSANE]
  • 00:03:835 (3) - move to 00:03:663 - add clap and whistle and move more near to the slider 00:03:149 (2) - example: http://puu.sh/paTo2/c30cdfe562.jpg stack 00:04:006 (4) - on the new (3) ok

    00:43:092 (2,3) - looks without flow the 2 sliders together for me. Honestly idk how u can change it i try with something liek this http://puu.sh/paTBd/2231cd4ec8.jpg fixed

    01:08:635 (1) - mm i think this looks better with a 15° rotate slider http://puu.sh/paTS8/5bec08316e.jpg for me no broke the flow a lot ok

    01:19:263 (7) - clap ok

    01:20:292 (1) - clap ok
the other diff looks fine for me

Hope this can be helpful <3 Good luck!

Thank you for modding all!
-Maruk-
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-Maruk-
めぐニキ

[Easy]
00:19:263 (2) - (1)をCtrl J Gした方が見た目いいと思います。
　　　　　　　　x256 y280ぐらいに持っていくと曲げたところが00:17:206 (4) と重なっていい感じかと思います。
　　　　　　　　DS合わせるために00:17:892 (1) - をx376 y208へ
00:43:949 (2) - 長い白線なのでWhistleあったほうがいいと思います
00:46:692 (2) - ＾
00:49:435 (2) - ＾
00:56:292 (3,1,2) -Normalの音取りを見た感じこっちの方がバランス取れると思います
img

[Normal]
00:15:149 (1) - (3)をCtrl Hしてx124 y160にすると綺麗です
00:43:949 (2) - Easyと同じです
00:46:692 (2) - ＾
00:49:435 (2) - ＾
00:47:720 (4) - 00:44:977 (4) ここにCircleがあるならこっちにも欲しいです
01:03:835 (2) - 赤線にClapの音無いので1/1でもいいのでは？終端もClapの音無いのでClap外しましょう
01:14:120 (1) - 2回リバースより、リバース一つ消して01:14:806 にCircleがいいのでは？
01:15:492 (3) - ＾


無名ちゃんかわいいいいいいい
Meg
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Topic Starter
Meg

-Maruk- wrote:

めぐニキ

[Easy]
00:19:263 (2) - (1)をCtrl J Gした方が見た目いいと思います。
　　　　　　　　x256 y280ぐらいに持っていくと曲げたところが00:17:206 (4) と重なっていい感じかと思います。
　　　　　　　　DS合わせるために00:17:892 (1) - をx376 y208へ
00:43:949 (2) - 長い白線なのでWhistleあったほうがいいと思います
00:46:692 (2) - ＾
00:49:435 (2) - ＾
00:56:292 (3,1,2) -Normalの音取りを見た感じこっちの方がバランス取れると思います　ボーカル取りなのでkeepで
img

[Normal]
00:15:149 (1) - (3)をCtrl Hしてx124 y160にすると綺麗です
00:43:949 (2) - Easyと同じです
00:46:692 (2) - ＾
00:49:435 (2) - ＾
00:47:720 (4) - 00:44:977 (4) ここにCircleがあるならこっちにも欲しいです
01:03:835 (2) - 赤線にClapの音無いので1/1でもいいのでは？終端もClapの音無いのでClap外しましょう 音取り変えると配置がめんどいのでこのままで～
01:14:120 (1) - 2回リバースより、リバース一つ消して01:14:806 にCircleがいいのでは？
01:15:492 (3) - ＾


無名ちゃんかわいいいいいいい ウォタクだ・・・ｗ
Thank you for modding!
and i updated del's hard. He will post about replying to modders soon
Mint
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Mint
Sorry for late, as promised.

Insane:
00:47:892 (1,2) - Makes more sense to put the emphasis on (2)?
01:25:092 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Awesome pattern, but strange... hardest difficulty used circle-only... well uo to you

Normal:
00:28:863 (6) - NC here instead?

Easy:
00:11:720 (3) - 1/2 sliders in Easy difficulties should be avoided.

I hope Del can respond the modders as well. Anyways, feel free to call me back c:
Meg
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Meg

appleeaterx wrote:

Sorry for late, as promised.

Insane:
00:47:892 (1,2) - Makes more sense to put the emphasis on (2)?
01:25:092 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Awesome pattern, but strange... hardest difficulty used circle-only... well uo to you　keep. Hardest difficulty is hard to get Acc because they are circles.

Normal:
00:28:863 (6) - NC here instead?

Easy:
00:11:720 (3) - 1/2 sliders in Easy difficulties should be avoided.

I hope Del can respond the modders as well. Anyways, feel free to call me back c:
i fixed others! thank you for modding :3

i will tell Del05~
Del05
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Del05

Garden wrote:

[Del's Hard]
  1. 00:06:235 (3,4,5,1) - 00:17:206 (3,4,5) - sliders are touching the triplets like this, should move the triplets away a bit to make them neater Fixed
  2. 01:19:606 (1) - somehow i expect a slowdown here cuz u use a slowdown for the first kiai fadeout part.. Fixed

Syph wrote:

as requested

[Del]

00:05:549 - i don't think you should ignore this sound What sound ???
00:19:263 (1,3) - why do these have different shapes xd // would also make them look something like this for fancy blankets lo https://sy.phic.al/i/ikalyfq.jpg Fixed
00:20:977 (2) - try a circle here and a 1/2 slider 00:21:149 - here, sounds better to me Will consider it
01:07:263 (1) - maybe do a 1/2 slider and then a double Nope
01:26:235 (1) - remove nc? seems kinda unneccesary Nope
Mint
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Mint
Good luck!
Meg
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Meg

appleeaterx wrote:

Good luck!
<3
Nathan
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qualified
Meg
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Meg
thanks!
Knotts
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Knotts
grats :)
Haruto
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Haruto
Congrats Meg! :D
Sotarks
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Sotarks
Gratz!!
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