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Flowey

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-04-13T20:48:38+00:00

girleyz-desu wrote:
Thanks for modding my map p/5036164#p5036164

FIRST USE CTRL+Scroll TO DECREASE THE SIZE OF THE IMAGES!!!

U will see some big images so be careful! | OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,1,2) - Circle 16 of them and then use the 17th as the middle of them like this:
Changed to something like that.

00:36:599 (3,4) - this is not rankable, so scale the second one or move it :3 Moved
00:38:221 (4,5) - ^ Moved

00:53:626 (1,2,3,4,5) - scale them, that the jumps get bigger, thats actually kinda funny to play
01:00:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
I'm a bit hesitant about making the map more difficult. Changed a little bit.

01:32:140 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:38:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:45:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
I'll leave this part as is for now, but if more people want it to be harder, I'll change it.

01:07:410 (1,2,1,2) - change them to 2 sliders, that plays pretty well, i just tried it out
Left as is, but I will most likely remap this part in the future.

01:37:612 (1,2,1) - make them look like this if you want, its my personal preference cx :

01:50:585 (2,3,1) - same here :3
That looks a lot better than what I have!

Im sorry for the images :/
The images are really helpful.

Insane
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,1,2) - Circle 16 of them and then use the 17th as the middle of them too
Done
01:00:112 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this seems kinda lame, make a crazy petton out of it!
Done
01:06:599 (1,1) - this doesnt look good, if the sliders are stacked a little, thats my personal preference:

-

Changed
01:19:572 (1,1,1,1) - this also looks kinda lame, here is my preference again :

Changed

01:38:626 (1,3,5) - this is not rankable too, scale it a little x3
Changed

02:05:079 (8) - new combo
Done

02:06:599 (1,3) - still scale it a little
Changed

Hard
Its fine, i couldn't find any mistakes

I can see this map ranked!

Thanks for the mod!

Vivyanne

1,215 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2016-04-15T14:32:17+00:00

as promised

mettateton

only hardest diff yeyey

higher up the od to at least 8, i get that you wanna compensate the double connections between sliders, but od8 will help too

overall I had trouble reading the map due to odd timing and sometimes important beats being left out, or overall inconsistency
00:23:930 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - idk what this is but playing this is awkward and I can't seem to acc it due to the weird timing, please reconsider the pattern

00:33:356 (3,4) - weird connection, check it again

00:40:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - unreadable, straight up unreadable, same goes for 00:53:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - . I'd advice rotating each time by 10 degrees or scaling to make everything nicer to play and more readable

01:01:734 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these clearly should be 5taps, you're skipping a beat each time at the end. Maybe a solution would be to place a circle a bit like this (also relook the symmetry with this one

)

01:04:572 (1,2,3,4,1) - if this could be done the entire time in the song, that'd be great, since now in the kiai some important beats are skipped, making everything harder for no real reason, I mean on positions like 01:11:058 (1,2,1) - these.
^after doing such a 5tap thing, you can also just mix up the jump patterns a bit, squares the whole time can get boring very easily

01:17:748 (2,1) - not combo, but flow breaker, if you're doing this, let this jump too

01:34:471 (4) - crtl+g? makes the pattern more clear, 01:36:092 (2) - same here and at all the same situations

01:33:153 (6,7) - nopenope shouldn't be stacked, impossible to have flow like this. just make em jump
Extra note for the 7: having a different shape of slider would make it easier to read, thus better to play

01:32:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd rotate the sliders, after two came up, by 5-10 degrees, so that it looks better and plays better, since reading will be less harder. Maybe increasing spacing a bit would be fun too

01:57:275 (3,5) - sliders like these need a new NC for readability and playability, I promise it makes it more enjoyable to play

02:11:464 (1,2) - not a double, I'm sure of it!

these are the stuff you have to change whatsoever, due to more players struggling at this. most shouldn't be taken into consideration but straight up fixed, it's for the sake of the map! ;w;

also, add spoiler warning in map desc for the storyboard, this form of mettaton is kinda a suprise yaknow

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-04-15T21:55:08+00:00

HighTec wrote:
as promised

mettateton

only hardest diff yeyey

higher up the od to at least 8, i get that you wanna compensate the double connections between sliders, but od8 will help too
Done

overall I had trouble reading the map due to odd timing and sometimes important beats being left out, or overall inconsistency
00:23:930 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - idk what this is but playing this is awkward and I can't seem to acc it due to the weird timing, please reconsider the pattern
It's supposed to match the percussion that starts in this section, but I'll change it if more people have problems with it.

00:33:356 (3,4) - weird connection, check it again
Switched the two sliders.

00:40:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - unreadable, straight up unreadable, same goes for 00:53:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - . I'd advice rotating each time by 10 degrees or scaling to make everything nicer to play and more readable
Removed most of the overlapping.

01:01:734 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - these clearly should be 5taps, you're skipping a beat each time at the end. Maybe a solution would be to place a circle a bit like this (also relook the symmetry with this one )
I'm only hearing groups of 4 notes in the melody though.

01:04:572 (1,2,3,4,1) - if this could be done the entire time in the song, that'd be great, since now in the kiai some important beats are skipped, making everything harder for no real reason, I mean on positions like 01:11:058 (1,2,1) - these.
^after doing such a 5tap thing, you can also just mix up the jump patterns a bit, squares the whole time can get boring very easily
Rearranged that entire section again.

01:17:748 (2,1) - not combo, but flow breaker, if you're doing this, let this jump too
Rearranged that entire section again.

01:34:471 (4) - crtl+g? makes the pattern more clear, 01:36:092 (2) - same here and at all the same situations
Done

01:33:153 (6,7) - nopenope shouldn't be stacked, impossible to have flow like this. just make em jump
Extra note for the 7: having a different shape of slider would make it easier to read, thus better to play
Remapped these sliders.

01:32:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd rotate the sliders, after two came up, by 5-10 degrees, so that it looks better and plays better, since reading will be less harder. Maybe increasing spacing a bit would be fun too
Hmm... That's a wonderful idea!

01:57:275 (3,5) - sliders like these need a new NC for readability and playability, I promise it makes it more enjoyable to play
Added tons of NCs.

02:11:464 (1,2) - not a double, I'm sure of it!
I definitely hear a double playing in the melody.

these are the stuff you have to change whatsoever, due to more players struggling at this. most shouldn't be taken into consideration but straight up fixed, it's for the sake of the map! ;w;

also, add spoiler warning in map desc for the storyboard, this form of mettaton is kinda a suprise yaknow
Forgot about that.

Thanks for modding!

Troll

47 posts

Joined April 2014

Troll 2016-04-16T16:09:13+00:00

From my queue, thanks for modding first

First of all, the 'oh yes' whistle sound is pretty excessively used, and its super annoying.

It'd be fine if you used it less.

Also, I think the map might have been changed since I started modding.

00:25:856 (1,2,3) - This is hard to play and harder to read

00:36:599 (3,4) - A little better than what you had before, but still pretty hard to read. The starts are still too close together.

00:38:221 (4,5) - Same here

00:41:058 (3,4,5,6,7) - I might just be bad, but this was really hard to read, I wouldn't have the whole section overlap itself too much. Something more like what you have after 00:47:140 (1) is better I think.

00:55:653 (1,3) - You aren't supposed to stack on repeat arrows

01:03:964 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Pretty hard lol. These are effectively 296 bpm jumps

01:04:977 (1,2,3,4) - The pace changes a bit too suddenly here. I suggest a slider to lead into it right after your super fast jumps.

01:31:329 (1,1) - I'm 99% sure these are unrankable, same with 01:44:302 (1,1)

01:34:167 (3,4,5) - All of these are pretty impossible to read. If you want to keep their shape, I would Ctrl+G the second slider for sure.

01:49:977 (2) - Make this symmetrical
paste this in your .osu: 336,128,109977,2,0,B|320:104|288:96|288:56|336:88|336:88|384:56|384:96|352:104|336:128,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
or here's a picture:

suggestion

02:01:937 (2) - stack with 02:00:822 (2) or 02:01:227 (1) for the blanket

02:08:626 (2) - blanket?

02:10:653 (1) - I would make the stream change direction after this note

Nice storyboard btw

Jonarwhal

1,216 posts

Joined November 2013

Jonarwhal 2016-04-17T03:03:02+00:00

M4M as requested~ I'll shoot a star for the sb.

*** means unrankable.
* means strongly suggested.

Generally~

***You must make a Normal. You probably are making a Normal now, but please upload it soon.
Imo, the bg is a bit empty. Player who disable the sb won't have much to look at.
*Raise the SL on every diff. It would make a lot of stacks easier to read.

Difficulty~

01:03:964 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - In Hard, the player must tap all of these, but in Insane, it's a reverse slider. I think it should be the other way around.
Hard seems to have more SV changes than Insane, which also strange. Also, OH YES has even less SV changes.

Hard~

*Raise both the HP and OD to 6. 2 is too small for Hard.
Also, lower the AR to 7. 8 May be surprising.
00:07:612 (5) - Ctrl+g and resnap. This is for flow.
00:09:335 (9,1,2,3) - I'm not sure if this overlap is intentional or not. It looks messy either way though.
00:10:856 (5) - same as 00:07:612 (5) - here.
00:11:667 (7) - Ctrl+h and readjust. It improves flow and imo looks better.
00:23:930 (5) - This is soooo close to overlapping 00:24:640 (7) - this. Move it farther away.
*00:25:653 (10,1) - Jump is huge.
*00:26:869 (3,4) - Spacing is confusing. It looks the same as it is 00:26:464 (2,3) - here, but the movement is twice as fast. Move (4) closer.
00:28:795 (5,1,2) - Overlap again. I'll stop mentioning this now. *Look for this and fix it as much as possible.
00:28:795 (5,1) - Spacing can make the player think that these is more time in between them than there really is. Remember to stick with DS and you can avoid these problems a lot.
00:35:788 (1) - You should probably stack this because you use stacks quite often, and it will probably be what the player is expecting.
00:37:815 (2,3) - Fix blankets.
*00:58:491 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Way too many straight sliders all next to each other. Add some curves in some places in this area.
01:02:140 - Add something here.
01:02:950 - ^
01:03:761 - ^ If you do ,then also add then in Insane and OH YES.
01:09:031 (3) - NC because of the change in SV. I could be wrong.
01:10:653 (3) - ^
01:15:518 (3) - ^
01:17:140 (4) - ^
01:22:004 (3) - ^, etc. I won't mention all of these. Just add a NC wherever you change SV, or remove the SV changes.
01:35:585 (6,7) - Fix blanket.
01:44:606 (3,4) - ^
02:08:626 (6,7) - ^
I couldn't find anything after that~

Insane

Fix the blankets, NC changes, and overlaps I mentioned in Hard.
00:17:950 (6) - Stack with 00:16:734 (2) - this maybe.
01:30:923 - Imo, 2x is too high for the whole kiai. I can understand using 2x for parts of it, but not the whole thing.
01:34:167 (3) - These hearts may be hard to read, consider changing.

OH YES

The name is a bit... excessive... this doesn't affect anything and you don't have to change it though...
Other than that, I can't really play this and give you a good mod. Srry.
Generally though, apply the same ideas I mentioned in other difficulties.

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-04-18T06:57:38+00:00

Troll wrote:
From my queue, thanks for modding first

First of all, the 'oh yes' whistle sound is pretty excessively used, and its super annoying. It'd be fine if you used it less.
I only use it once per map now.

Also, I think the map might have been changed since I started modding.

00:25:856 (1,2,3) - This is hard to play and harder to read
Changed to a stack of 3s.

00:36:599 (3,4) - A little better than what you had before, but still pretty hard to read. The starts are still too close together.
00:38:221 (4,5) - Same here
Moved both a bit further away from each other.

00:41:058 (3,4,5,6,7) - I might just be bad, but this was really hard to read, I wouldn't have the whole section overlap itself too much. Something more like what you have after 00:47:140 (1) is better I think.
Decreased overlap.

00:55:653 (1,3) - You aren't supposed to stack on repeat arrows
Fixed.

01:03:964 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Pretty hard lol. These are effectively 296 bpm jumps
Decreased jump lengths.

01:04:977 (1,2,3,4) - The pace changes a bit too suddenly here. I suggest a slider to lead into it right after your super fast jumps.
Remapped section again.

01:31:329 (1,1) - I'm 99% sure these are unrankable, same with 01:44:302 (1,1)
But MTT though... adjusted slightly.

01:34:167 (3,4,5) - All of these are pretty impossible to read. If you want to keep their shape, I would Ctrl+G the second slider for sure.
I think that already changed in a previous mod. I'll probably change these if the problem remains.

01:49:977 (2) - Make this symmetrical
paste this in your .osu: 336,128,109977,2,0,B|320:104|288:96|288:56|336:88|336:88|384:56|384:96|352:104|336:128,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
or here's a picture:
suggestion
Thanks for the slider!

02:01:937 (2) - stack with 02:00:822 (2) or 02:01:227 (1) for the blanket
Done.

02:08:626 (2) - blanket?
Done.

02:10:653 (1) - I would make the stream change direction after this note
Changed.

Nice storyboard btw

jonawaga wrote:
M4M as requested~ I'll shoot a star for the sb.

*** means unrankable.
* means strongly suggested.

Generally~
***You must make a Normal. You probably are making a Normal now, but please upload it soon. I will get to it soon.
Imo, the bg is a bit empty. Player who disable the sb won't have much to look at. Not too much I can do about this. I think a lot of people who disable storyboards play with near 100% background dim anyways, so I don't think this is too big of a deal.
*Raise the SL on every diff. It would make a lot of stacks easier to read. Done.
Difficulty~
01:03:964 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - In Hard, the player must tap all of these, but in Insane, it's a reverse slider. I think it should be the other way around. They are reverse sliders now.
Hard seems to have more SV changes than Insane, which also strange. Also, OH YES has even less SV changes. Kept roughly the same for now, but I'll keep this in mind when I'm remapping portions of the map in the future.
Hard~
*Raise both the HP and OD to 6. 2 is too small for Hard. Done.
Also, lower the AR to 7. 8 May be surprising. Done.
00:07:612 (5) - Ctrl+g and resnap. This is for flow. Done.
00:09:335 (9,1,2,3) - I'm not sure if this overlap is intentional or not. It looks messy either way though. Fixed.
00:10:856 (5) - same as 00:07:612 (5) - here. Fixed.
00:11:667 (7) - Ctrl+h and readjust. It improves flow and imo looks better. I did Ctrl+g instead.
00:23:930 (5) - This is soooo close to overlapping 00:24:640 (7) - this. Move it farther away. Done.
*00:25:653 (10,1) - Jump is huge. Made jump smaller.
*00:26:869 (3,4) - Spacing is confusing. It looks the same as it is 00:26:464 (2,3) - here, but the movement is twice as fast. Move (4) closer. Adjusted spacing in this part.
00:28:795 (5,1,2) - Overlap again. I'll stop mentioning this now. *Look for this and fix it as much as possible. Fixed.
00:28:795 (5,1) - Spacing can make the player think that these is more time in between them than there really is. Remember to stick with DS and you can avoid these problems a lot. I'll keep this in mind for the future.
00:35:788 (1) - You should probably stack this because you use stacks quite often, and it will probably be what the player is expecting. Done. (I think?)
00:37:815 (2,3) - Fix blankets. Fixed
*00:58:491 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Way too many straight sliders all next to each other. Add some curves in some places in this area. Remapped the straight sliders at the end.
01:02:140 - Add something here.
01:02:950 - ^
01:03:761 - ^ If you do ,then also add then in Insane and OH YES. Added a clap in those places.
01:09:031 (3) - NC because of the change in SV. I could be wrong.
01:10:653 (3) - ^
01:15:518 (3) - ^
01:17:140 (4) - ^
01:22:004 (3) - ^, etc. I won't mention all of these. Just add a NC wherever you change SV, or remove the SV changes. Done.
01:35:585 (6,7) - Fix blanket. Done
01:44:606 (3,4) - ^
02:08:626 (6,7) - ^
I couldn't find anything after that~
Insane
Fix the blankets, NC changes, and overlaps I mentioned in Hard. In progress, but will fix as I notice them.
00:17:950 (6) - Stack with 00:16:734 (2) - this maybe. Done
01:30:923 - Imo, 2x is too high for the whole kiai. I can understand using 2x for parts of it, but not the whole thing. Decreased slider speed in some sections.
01:34:167 (3) - These hearts may be hard to read, consider changing. Kept for now, but will change when I make a more readable heart.
OH YES
The name is a bit... excessive... this doesn't affect anything and you don't have to change it though...
Other than that, I can't really play this and give you a good mod. Srry.
Generally though, apply the same ideas I mentioned in other difficulties.

Thanks for the mods!

BigEarsMau

786 posts

Joined June 2015

BigEarsMau 2016-04-21T03:04:07+00:00

Hi Nephroid!
M4M from my queue
Like I said in my rules, I can't mod Extra

Get ready for a wall of text :3

[Metadata]

Toby Fox's name must be written in lowercase letters into "toby fox". Check out the ranked Undertale maps if you don't believe me.
The source, "Undertale", must written in all caps into "UNDERTALE"
Add "chiptune", "radiation", "EX" and "OST" into the tags

[Normal]

Open AIMod and tick the "Check distance snap" box. There are a lot of problems in there
I don't know if this is your intention or not, but the diff looks like it's mapped back in 2009. Intended or not, try to decrease the use of 1/4 beats (blue ticks) in Normal diffs since they are unrankable and newer players will have trouble with them (in fact, 1/4 beats are never used in Normal diffs these days). Try to follow the basic rhythm of the song instead. Use 1/1 (white ticks) and 1/2 (red ticks) beats at your advantage.You can check out the wiki page for more info
Also, use consistent spacing. Your DS is all over the place. 1.1x or 1.2x is enough
00:00:923 (2) - Like I said before, 1/4 ticks can't be used in Normal. Make this longer until 00:01:734
00:01:937 (3) - Make this a circle and move it to 00:02:140
00:02:545 (4) - Make this longer until 00:02:950
00:04:166 (2) - Make this longer until 00:04:977
00:05:180 (3) - Make this a circle and move it to 00:05:383
00:07:409 (2) - Make this longer until 00:08:221
00:09:031 (5) - Make this longer until 00:09:437
00:10:652 (2) - Make this longer until 00:11:464
00:12:274 (5) - Make this longer until 00:12:680
00:22:410 (3) - Yea this is unrankable. Make this a 1/2 slider instead
00:26:869 (2) - Make this longer until 00:27:680
00:28:491 (6) - Make this longer until 00:28:896
00:30:112 (2) - Make this longer until 00:30:923
00:31:734 (6) - Despite being in a blue tick, I guess this is fine since it fits with the melody and ends in a red tick
00:34:977 (6) - Make this longer until 00:35:383
00:37:612 (4) - Stack this under 00:37:410 (3)
00:42:275 (5) - Unrankable and doesn't fit with the rhythm. Try something else that fits the rhythm
00:48:761 (7) - ^
00:55:248 (7) - ^
01:02:545 (1,1,1) - ^
01:22:815 (4,5) -
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - This surely will mess up newer players. Snap the endslider to the white tick like this
01:11:464 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:707 (1,2) - ^
01:17:950 (1,2,3) - ^
01:21:194 (1) - ^
01:24:437 (1,2) - ^
01:27:680 (7,8) - ^
01:32:545 (3) - ^
01:39:031 (5) - ^
01:45:518 (3) - ^
01:52:004 (5) -
01:29:302 (1,2,3,4) - This will trouble new players. Change these into sliders instead
01:30:923 - Unrankable due to timing speed. Revert it back to x1.00
01:38:119 (3) - Stack under 01:38:018 (2)
01:51:092 (3) - Stack under 01:50:991 (2)
01:56:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh my love, please fix all this, BN King, forbids your map to be ranked

[Hard]

Don't use stack leniency 3. Use 7 instead

Other than that, I guess this diff is fine

[Insane]

Fine too I guess

However, despite that I love 2009-styled mapping, I can say this map's mapping style is a bit unusual. Try to be inspired by other people's map first and then create your own style

Hope this helps
Good luck in being ranked

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-04-21T05:58:45+00:00

BigEarsMau wrote:
Hi Nephroid!
M4M from my queue
Like I said in my rules, I can't mod Extra

Get ready for a wall of text :3

[Metadata]
Toby Fox's name must be written in lowercase letters into "toby fox". Check out the ranked Undertale maps if you don't believe me.
The source, "Undertale", must written in all caps into "UNDERTALE"
Add "chiptune", "radiation", "EX" and "OST" into the tags
Updated all the metatdata.

[Normal]
Open AIMod and tick the "Check distance snap" box. There are a lot of problems in there
I don't know if this is your intention or not, but the diff looks like it's mapped back in 2009. Intended or not, try to decrease the use of 1/4 beats (blue ticks) in Normal diffs since they are unrankable and newer players will have trouble with them (in fact, 1/4 beats are never used in Normal diffs these days). Try to follow the basic rhythm of the song instead. Use 1/1 (white ticks) and 1/2 (red ticks) beats at your advantage.You can check out the wiki page for more info Wait, what? There's a page like that on the wiki?
Also, use consistent spacing. Your DS is all over the place. 1.1x or 1.2x is enough
00:00:923 (2) - Like I said before, 1/4 ticks can't be used in Normal. Make this longer until 00:01:734
00:01:937 (3) - Make this a circle and move it to 00:02:140
00:02:545 (4) - Make this longer until 00:02:950
00:04:166 (2) - Make this longer until 00:04:977
00:05:180 (3) - Make this a circle and move it to 00:05:383
00:07:409 (2) - Make this longer until 00:08:221
00:09:031 (5) - Make this longer until 00:09:437
00:10:652 (2) - Make this longer until 00:11:464
00:12:274 (5) - Make this longer until 00:12:680
00:22:410 (3) - Yea this is unrankable. Make this a 1/2 slider instead
00:26:869 (2) - Make this longer until 00:27:680
00:28:491 (6) - Make this longer until 00:28:896
00:30:112 (2) - Make this longer until 00:30:923
00:31:734 (6) - Despite being in a blue tick, I guess this is fine since it fits with the melody and ends in a red tick
00:34:977 (6) - Make this longer until 00:35:383
00:37:612 (4) - Stack this under 00:37:410 (3)
00:42:275 (5) - Unrankable and doesn't fit with the rhythm. Try something else that fits the rhythm
00:48:761 (7) - ^
00:55:248 (7) - ^
01:02:545 (1,1,1) - ^
01:22:815 (4,5) -
01:04:977 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - This surely will mess up newer players. Snap the endslider to the white tick like this
01:11:464 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:707 (1,2) - ^
01:17:950 (1,2,3) - ^
01:21:194 (1) - ^
01:24:437 (1,2) - ^
01:27:680 (7,8) - ^
01:32:545 (3) - ^
01:39:031 (5) - ^
01:45:518 (3) - ^
01:52:004 (5) -
01:29:302 (1,2,3,4) - This will trouble new players. Change these into sliders instead
01:30:923 - Unrankable due to timing speed. Revert it back to x1.00
01:38:119 (3) - Stack under 01:38:018 (2)
01:51:092 (3) - Stack under 01:50:991 (2)
01:56:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh my love, please fix all this, BN King, forbids your map to be ranked
Welp, I guess it's clear that I've never seen a normal difficulty map before. I'll be remapping the entire thing.

[Hard]
Don't use stack leniency 3. Use 7 instead
Done

Other than that, I guess this diff is fine
[Insane]
Fine too I guess

However, despite that I love 2009-styled mapping, I can say this map's mapping style is a bit unusual. Try to be inspired by other people's map first and then create your own style

Hope this helps
Good luck in being ranked

Thanks for modding!

Kana chan_old

Kana chan_old 2016-04-23T05:18:35+00:00

hitsounds why

DaxMasterix

Former osu!catch Champion: 2013

1,562 posts

Joined February 2010

DaxMasterix 2016-04-23T14:31:42+00:00

Hi! M4M From my Queue!

You surely will need an Easy :3
I didn't understand your ComboColours pattern in all the mapset

Normal:

00:04:167 (2) - Remove the hitsound since you don't use one in 00:00:923 (2) -
00:13:085 (1) - This can be a problem in your easiest diff
00:16:329 (1) - same
00:19:572 (1) - Same, a new player won't know how play those sliders
00:22:815 (1) - Yep
01:59:910 (4) - Ghost note
02:03:153 (4) - Same
02:06:396 (4) - Yep
The diff is good but is a way harder, You abuse of 1/2 streams what is bad in the easiest diff, try to nerf the difficulty or make an easy

Hard:

00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1) - It would be better if you make a consistency in the Distance
00:20:687 (5) - This is pretty unnecesary, you can do it a little better
00:25:653 (10,1,2,1) - This transition is soo hard to being a "hard" ironically, don't do this
00:38:525 (4,1) - I think both objects are so closed
01:01:734 (7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just the S.V, is weird to play with those Slider changes since, it's just a hard, IMO, It would better if you make some pattern without the unnecesary S.V changed on them
02:03:761 (2,3,4) - It would better if you follow the original rythm, instead of that weird machine sound.
02:11:869 (6,7,8,9,10) - Maybe more moves than a Straight line

Insane:

00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This is more easy than hard, and normal maybe
00:25:653 (5,1,2,3) - This transition still so hard, don't make a 1/8 jump
01:34:167 (3) - Oh men, this is unrankeable as hell
01:35:788 (1) - yep 110% sure
01:38:119 (2) - Too, a Slider cannot start where ends, or ends where it start, well you know the point
01:40:653 (3) - 4 sure
01:42:275 (1) - 4 norte (sure in spanish is a folk-way to say south, norte is north in spanish IT'S JUST A PRANK BRO)
01:47:140 (3) - YTEP
01:48:761 (1) - this too
01:49:572 (1,2) - too much hearts
01:53:626 (3) - Is funny how a heart pattern can "break" your heart after rank, (If you know what I mean)
01:55:248 (1) - This I don't know.. maybe if you.. no. It's unrankeable
01:56:869 (1,2) - Wow don't make that streams jumps so suddenly, the same with the next ones
02:03:660 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - BN cans blame you for this, cause Overmapping

OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I don't have points to say in this diff, but not in a good way, since IMO the map is overabussed of difficulty, my experience tell me that diffs like this never get ranked, or maybe, get ranked and after heart-broked by a QAT, just telling you, if you really want to rank this you should remove unnecesary diff points like the next ones
00:19:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4) - This isn't hard but is a creative-killer, since you just stack them, is pretty boring for experienced players
00:25:653 (8,1,2,3) - You know why, it's a 5,78x Jump.
00:38:829 (1,2,3) - Stream jump
00:51:802 (1,2,3,4) - Same
00:54:031 (3,4,6,7) - More unnecesary jumpstream
01:00:518 (3,4,6,7) - same
01:03:964 (1,2,3) - yep
01:04:572 (1,2,3,4,1) - 4 sure, Sorry If I'm a little rought, but It's if you want to rank this, if not, ignore this
01:09:842 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - This too
01:16:532 (2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - yep
01:22:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - yep
The Chorus - This part looks good but in a way of Slider-art, not in a way of rankeable way

Okay That's all! Hope you undertand me when I say, is good, but too far way to rank, make and easy, nerf OH YES and it will be ready to rank (not really but you understand me)
Good luck!

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-04-23T15:52:32+00:00

DaxMasterix wrote:
Hi! M4M From my Queue!
You surely will need an Easy :3
I didn't understand your ComboColours pattern in all the mapset They're supposed to match the storyboard. For normal, I still have to do them, but I want to check over the NCs before I start setting the colors.
Normal:
00:04:167 (2) - Remove the hitsound since you don't use one in 00:00:923 (2) - But I do use one there?
00:13:085 (1) - This can be a problem in your easiest diff Will keep for now, but I'll change it if more people complain.
00:16:329 (1) - same
00:19:572 (1) - Same, a new player won't know how play those sliders
00:22:815 (1) - Yep
01:59:910 (4) - Ghost note Removed
02:03:153 (4) - Same Removed
02:06:396 (4) - Yep Removed
The diff is good but is a way harder, You abuse of 1/2 streams what is bad in the easiest diff, try to nerf the difficulty or make an easy I will probably end up making an easy.
Hard:
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1) - It would be better if you make a consistency in the Distance Kept stacking, but distance snapped jumps.
00:20:687 (5) - This is pretty unnecesary, you can do it a little better Kept for now.
00:25:653 (10,1,2,1) - This transition is soo hard to being a "hard" ironically, don't do this Removed the jumps
00:38:525 (4,1) - I think both objects are so closed Distance snapped second object.
01:01:734 (7,8,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Just the S.V, is weird to play with those Slider changes since, it's just a hard, IMO, It would better if you make some pattern without the unnecesary S.V changed on them I will remap this section.
02:03:761 (2,3,4) - It would better if you follow the original rythm, instead of that weird machine sound. Changed.
02:11:869 (6,7,8,9,10) - Maybe more moves than a Straight line I don't really see a problem with this.
Insane:
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This is more easy than hard, and normal maybe I will keep this for now. I think it sets up an interesting difficulty spike.
00:25:653 (5,1,2,3) - This transition still so hard, don't make a 1/8 jump Removed the jump.
01:34:167 (3) - Oh men, this is unrankeable as hell I will work on the sliders here.
01:35:788 (1) - yep 110% sure
01:38:119 (2) - Too, a Slider cannot start where ends, or ends where it start, well you know the point
01:40:653 (3) - 4 sure
01:42:275 (1) - 4 norte (sure in spanish is a folk-way to say south, norte is north in spanish IT'S JUST A PRANK BRO)
01:47:140 (3) - YTEP
01:48:761 (1) - this too
01:49:572 (1,2) - too much hearts
01:53:626 (3) - Is funny how a heart pattern can "break" your heart after rank, (If you know what I mean)
01:55:248 (1) - This I don't know.. maybe if you.. no. It's unrankeable
01:56:869 (1,2) - Wow don't make that streams jumps so suddenly, the same with the next ones Removed fast jumps.
02:03:660 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - BN cans blame you for this, cause Overmapping Will change if that happens.
OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
I don't have points to say in this diff, but not in a good way, since IMO the map is overabussed of difficulty, my experience tell me that diffs like this never get ranked, or maybe, get ranked and after heart-broked by a QAT, just telling you, if you really want to rank this you should remove unnecesary diff points like the next ones I would like to have an extra-level difficulty. If it comes to it, I will make an easy, but I don't want to make this difficulty easier, because there are already other difficulties that cater towards less experienced players.
00:19:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4) - This isn't hard but is a creative-killer, since you just stack them, is pretty boring for experienced players Kept for now. I think the rhythm here makes up for the lack of creative shape.
00:25:653 (8,1,2,3) - You know why, it's a 5,78x Jump. Changed
00:38:829 (1,2,3) - Stream jump I will keep all of the jumps for now.
00:51:802 (1,2,3,4) - Same
00:54:031 (3,4,6,7) - More unnecesary jumpstream
01:00:518 (3,4,6,7) - same
01:03:964 (1,2,3) - yep
01:04:572 (1,2,3,4,1) - 4 sure, Sorry If I'm a little rought, but It's if you want to rank this, if not, ignore this
01:09:842 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - This too
01:16:532 (2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1) - yep
01:22:815 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - yep
The Chorus - This part looks good but in a way of Slider-art, not in a way of rankeable way Why not? I don't want to remove all of the sliders, if that's what your suggesting.
Okay That's all! Hope you undertand me when I say, is good, but too far way to rank, make and easy, nerf OH YES and it will be ready to rank (not really but you understand me)
Good luck!

Thanks for modding!

TheLeviathan

271 posts

Joined December 2014

TheLeviathan 2016-04-28T16:33:18+00:00

From my Mod Q

EXTRA

00:24:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the hitsound volume increasing gap is waaaaaaaaaay too high. If you want such an effect, increase volume by 7% each inherited point, otherwise last two 80% and 100% just blowing your brain, and then suddenly silent and calm hitsounds

00:48:761 (10) - NC here till 00:50:788 (4) - here, and another NC here, it will fit better. Much more better, try it
00:55:248 (10) - ^
00:57:275 (4,5,6) - nothing wrong with these sliders, just a personal, for me it would look nice if you would angle each slider a bit - like http://prntscr.com/axyd21
I don't know if someone suggested this before o no, but 01:01:734 (1,2,3) - and following similar patterns, consider switching 1 and 3. http://prntscr.com/axyeo3 i it looks so much better

01:17:343 (2,2) - stack them carefully
02:09:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - slightly spacing issues in these space streams, like 3-4 is more spaced then 4-5 and it's visible to aye, recheck them, or just use DS on when you making them

INSANE

00:08:221 (8) - NC ?
00:11:464 (8) - ^
And same thing with hitsounding volume

00:42:275 (10) - NC
00:48:761 (10) - ^
01:16:633 (2) - this 3/4 jump doesn't fit into this difficulty of 3.76* imo, i recommend to stack it with begining of 01:16:734 (3)
01:31:329 (1,1) - stack them carefully
01:34:167 (3,1) - i don't know if those are acceptable for ranking. Sliders don't have any visual mark or call it whatever to guess from first time in which dirrection it will go - clockwise or counter. So you have to find BN to find out if this is acceptable
01:38:119 (2) - basicaly same thing
01:40:653 (3,1) - ^
I well not mention following ups too
02:07:308 (4) - not sure about this jump too on this diff

HARD

00:36:599 (3,4) - i thing you could make them to not overlap
01:34:167 (3,5) - stack them carefully

I guess that's it good luck

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-04-28T23:31:19+00:00

TheLeviathan wrote:
From my Mod Q

EXTRA

00:24:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the hitsound volume increasing gap is waaaaaaaaaay too high. If you want such an effect, increase volume by 7% each inherited point, otherwise last two 80% and 100% just blowing your brain, and then suddenly silent and calm hitsounds Done!

00:48:761 (10) - NC here till 00:50:788 (4) - here, and another NC here, it will fit better. Much more better, try it Done!
00:55:248 (10) - ^
00:57:275 (4,5,6) - nothing wrong with these sliders, just a personal, for me it would look nice if you would angle each slider a bit - like http://prntscr.com/axyd21 I turned it into a triangle.
I don't know if someone suggested this before o no, but 01:01:734 (1,2,3) - and following similar patterns, consider switching 1 and 3. http://prntscr.com/axyeo3 i it looks so much better The two small sliders are meant to match the melody, so I'll be keeping this as is for now.

01:17:343 (2,2) - stack them carefully Adjusted.
02:09:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - slightly spacing issues in these space streams, like 3-4 is more spaced then 4-5 and it's visible to aye, recheck them, or just use DS on when you making them Snapped with DS.

INSANE

00:08:221 (8) - NC ? Done!
00:11:464 (8) - ^
And same thing with hitsounding volume Done!

00:42:275 (10) - NC Done!
00:48:761 (10) - ^
01:16:633 (2) - this 3/4 jump doesn't fit into this difficulty of 3.76* imo, i recommend to stack it with begining of 01:16:734 (3) Distance snapped now.
01:31:329 (1,1) - stack them carefully I think they're already stacked. (?)
01:34:167 (3,1) - i don't know if those are acceptable for ranking. Sliders don't have any visual mark or call it whatever to guess from first time in which dirrection it will go - clockwise or counter. So you have to find BN to find out if this is acceptable Currently working on a better slider.
01:38:119 (2) - basicaly same thing
01:40:653 (3,1) - ^
I well not mention following ups too
02:07:308 (4) - not sure about this jump too on this diff Oops, that slider was reversed for some reason.

HARD

00:36:599 (3,4) - i thing you could make them to not overlap Kept for now for spacing.
01:34:167 (3,5) - stack them carefully I think they're already stacked (?)

I guess that's it good luck

Thanks for modding!

Jonarwhal

1,216 posts

Joined November 2013

Jonarwhal 2016-04-29T00:35:10+00:00

No KD. I already modded this so no KD.

I'll mod Normal now that it's up.
***=Unrankable
*=Strongly suggested.

Normal

***Check the DS in AiMod. Normal's must follow this. Always.
00:00:113 - from here to 00:06:194 - here, take out all of the whistles. They're unnecessary.
*00:19:572 (1) - Shape is readable, but not for Normal's players.
*00:22:815 (1) - ^
*00:25:653 (4,5,6) - The three claps don't sound nice together. Generally, claps are used to emphasize downbeats, and shouldn't be used on red ticks.
*00:25:653 - From here onward is a spike in difficulty. There's a lot of 1/2 tapping that should probably be converted into sliders. For example, 00:28:085 - here, I would use this rhythm. To give you an idea, if you have a combo that is higher than 8, then you need to make circles into sliders to reduce the difficulty.
00:28:491 (5,1) - Fix blanket.
00:39:031 (1,2,3) - I dislike the flow. Here are a few suggestions: ss1 ss2 ss3
00:47:140 (5) - Stack.
00:46:329 (4,5,6,7) - Fix blankets.
00:52:815 - I dislike the flow. Here are a few suggestions: ss1 ss2
00:56:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fix blankets.
01:11:058 (4,1) - ^
01:13:085 (1,2) - ^
The rest I just found blankets.

Normal NCs

Apply this after the other box.
NCs can be used for fun and to indicate switches in SV in Hard, but in Normal, it is probably best to use them every 1 or 2 measures. 2 measure works best here, but that's just my opinion.
00:48:761 - NC
00:50:383 - no NC
00:52:004 - NC
00:55:248 - NC
00:56:869 - no NC
00:58:491 - NC
01:01:734 - NC or 01:01:734 (1,1,1,1) - remove all of these NCs
01:04:977 - From here to 01:30:923 - here, you do every measure instead of every 2 measures, which will confuse tag-coop Normal players. Remove every other combo to fix it.

Good Luck again~!!

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-04-29T06:28:22+00:00

Thanks for a 2nd mod!

jonawaga wrote:
No KD. I already modded this so no KD.
I'll mod Normal now that it's up.
***=Unrankable
*=Strongly suggested.

Normal
***Check the DS in AiMod. Normal's must follow this. Always. Done. (But for some reason, AiMod complains even though I had DS turned on for the entire map...)
00:00:113 - from here to 00:06:194 - here, take out all of the whistles. They're unnecessary. Oops, that wasn't supposed to be there. Fixed.
*00:19:572 (1) - Shape is readable, but not for Normal's players. Removed slider touching itself.
*00:22:815 (1) - ^ Removed slider touching itself.
*00:25:653 (4,5,6) - The three claps don't sound nice together. Generally, claps are used to emphasize downbeats, and shouldn't be used on red ticks. Removed the first clap. I kept the one on the red tick because there's a clap in the actual music.
*00:25:653 - From here onward is a spike in difficulty. There's a lot of 1/2 tapping that should probably be converted into sliders. For example, 00:28:085 - here, I would use this rhythm. To give you an idea, if you have a combo that is higher than 8, then you need to make circles into sliders to reduce the difficulty. Removed most of the 1/2 tapping.
00:28:491 (5,1) - Fix blanket. I fixed some, but I think most of the blankets are fine. That, and/or DS makes blankets impossible sometimes.
00:39:031 (1,2,3) - I dislike the flow. Here are a few suggestions: ss1 ss2 ss3 Done!
00:47:140 (5) - Stack. Fixed.
00:46:329 (4,5,6,7) - Fix blankets.
00:52:815 - I dislike the flow. Here are a few suggestions: ss1 ss2 Done!
00:56:869 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Fix blankets.
01:11:058 (4,1) - ^
01:13:085 (1,2) - ^
The rest I just found blankets.
Normal NCs
Apply this after the other box.
NCs can be used for fun and to indicate switches in SV in Hard, but in Normal, it is probably best to use them every 1 or 2 measures. 2 measure works best here, but that's just my opinion.
00:48:761 - NC
00:50:383 - no NC I tried doing this, but then AiMod started complaining about distances, so I kept the NCs the same in this section.
00:52:004 - NC
00:55:248 - NC
00:56:869 - no NC
00:58:491 - NC
01:01:734 - NC or 01:01:734 (1,1,1,1) - remove all of these NCs Done
01:04:977 - From here to 01:30:923 - here, you do every measure instead of every 2 measures, which will confuse tag-coop Normal players. Remove every other combo to fix it. Fixed.
Good Luck again~!! Thanks again for the mod!

Kujinn

1,382 posts

Joined December 2013

Kujinn 2016-05-04T10:58:58+00:00

Hi Hi!

Extra

00:19:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I find this part to be too simple, you can do something a lot more fun with it.
01:03:964 (1,2,3) - That triple is a little too spaced don't you think?
01:23:626 (1,2) - When I was actually playing, I mistaken this for another triple (Might just be me). Maybe a slider is better suited
01:30:923 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I personally find this fun to play, and slider art very creative, but I really don't think this is rankable. (From what I know anyway, I could be wrong).
02:09:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know its a low bpm stream, but don't you think its a little too spaced?

Insane

00:08:221 (1,2) - Maybe its better if its not stacked, I've mistaken it for a double tap
00:25:653 (5,1,2,3) - A second repeat slider or maybe just a longer one of 5 would probably be better. Its hard to hit the triple accurately after it ends.
01:16:633 (2) - Too hard to hit
01:38:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't think this is rankable, also its quite dificult to hit those notes.
01:43:491 (2) - Ctrl G maybe? I find it better to play this way
01:43:491 (2) - ^

It's a really good diff overall, Nothing really stood out too much other than the above.

Good luck with your map ^^

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-05-04T16:25:17+00:00

Panda King wrote:
Hi Hi!

Extra
00:19:572 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I find this part to be too simple, you can do something a lot more fun with it. Noted. Will change in the future.
01:03:964 (1,2,3) - That triple is a little too spaced don't you think? Reduced spacing.
01:23:626 (1,2) - When I was actually playing, I mistaken this for another triple (Might just be me). Maybe a slider is better suited
01:30:923 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I personally find this fun to play, and slider art very creative, but I really don't think this is rankable. (From what I know anyway, I could be wrong). Here is the only list of "unrankable" techniques that I could find: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Unrankable_Techniques. What part of this is unrankable?
02:09:842 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I know its a low bpm stream, but don't you think its a little too spaced? Reduced spacing.

Insane
00:08:221 (1,2) - Maybe its better if its not stacked, I've mistaken it for a double tap Keeping for now. Will change if this becomes a problem.
00:25:653 (5,1,2,3) - A second repeat slider or maybe just a longer one of 5 would probably be better. Its hard to hit the triple accurately after it ends. Changed
01:16:633 (2) - Too hard to hit Adjusted a bit
01:38:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't think this is rankable, also its quite dificult to hit those notes. I will point to this again: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Unrankable_Techniques
01:43:491 (2) - Ctrl G maybe? I find it better to play this way Done!
01:43:491 (2) - ^ Done!

It's a really good diff overall, Nothing really stood out too much other than the above.

Good luck with your map ^^

Thanks for modding!

-[ Prxzm ]-

74 posts

Joined June 2013

-[ Prxzm ]- 2016-05-04T22:07:57+00:00

PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD REMOVE comboburst.wav AND normal-hitwhistle.wav PLEASE!!!

kds please <3

Full-Spread Mod

OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Song Setup - Unrankable title. Change title to something less obnoxious.
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remap to better fit the tune. This is Extra diff, not Hard.
00:54:031 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. Stack these or reduce the spacing between them.
00:54:538 (6) - Don't stack this note under the 5. Either move it to the other side or move it slightly higher than the 5 (moving it slightly higher would flow with the above change).
00:54:538 (6,7) - Inconsistent spacing. Stack these or reduce the spacing between them.
01:00:518 (3,4) - Same here.
01:01:025 (6,7) - Your map is very inconsistent. You suddenly decided to stack right here but didn't stack the ones before.
01:04:572 (1,2,3,4) - Don't make these jumps. Make them a stream.
01:04:572 (1) - Kiai time should start here.
01:11:058 (1,2,3,4) - Don't make these jumps. Make them a stream.
01:17:545 (1,2,3,4) - Same here.
01:24:031 (1,2,3,4) - Bring these closer together.
01:29:302 (1) - Kiai end.
90923,-50,4,2,1,80,0,1 - Remove Kiai time.
01:38:119 (1) - Unrankable slder. Shouldn't curve back into itself like that. Remap the slider shape.
01:51:092 (1) - Same here.
01:56:869 (1) - Kiai start.
02:09:842 (1) - Kiai end.

INSANE
Song Setup - Unrankable stack leniency. Change stack leniency to be between 3 and 9. (It is recommended that you never touch stack leniency).
00:16:633 (2) - You're missing a strong note on the blue tick and not being consistent with the rest of the map. Consider placing a circle right before the slider.
00:29:910 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Bad stacking throughout this entire area.
00:30:417 (4) - Consider moving this over slightly to the left for the above change.
00:31:126 (2) - Consider moving this over slightly to the right for the above change.
00:58:998 (2) - Bad stacking. Consider moving slightly in front of the slider.
01:04:977 (1) - Kiai time should start here.
01:04:572 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remap this. This is Insane difficulty, this section should not be so easy. Consider mapping the background.
01:29:099 (3) - Kiai time should end here.
90923,-50,4,2,1,80,0,1 Remove this Kiai point.
01:56:869 (1) - Kiai time should start here.
01:56:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Same as the above section. This should be much harder since this is Insane difficulty. Remap the section.
02:09:842 (1) - Kiai time should end here.
02:09:842 (1,1) - Remap this into a stream. This is Insane difficulty, not Hard.
02:10:653 (1,1) - Awkward jump. Consider moving the circle behind the slider (the direction the slider ends).

HARD
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Why do you map this with the beat in Hard difficulty but not with Insane or Extra difficulty? Consider remapping Insane and Extra's introduction to fit the song like this does.
00:18:153 (6) - New Combo.
00:20:687 (5) - Consider removing one reverse tick and adding a circle to the end. If you go through with this change, make the circle a New Combo.
00:21:396 (6) - If you don't go through with the change, make this a New Combo.
00:59:403 (4,5) - Inconsistent spacing. Consider flipping the slider around.
01:01:734 (7,8,1,2,1,2) - Obnoxious jumps for Hard difficulty. Consider flipping the sliders around.
01:04:572 (1) - Kiai start.
01:29:302 (2) - Kiai end.
90923,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1 - Remove Kiai time.
01:35:383 (5,6) - Swap these notes around.
01:56:464 (9,10) - Swap these notes around.
01:56:869 (1) - Kiai start.
01:57:984 (4) - Move this closer to the previous slider. 1/4 jumps should not exist in Hard difficulty.
02:09:842 (1) - Kiai end.

NORMAL
00:26:869 (2,3,4) - Remove the circle.
00:28:085 (3) - Change slider start to a circle.
00:30:112 (2,3,4,5) - Same here.
00:33:356 (2,3,4,5) - Same here.
00:37:410 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Consider remapping this part to fit the song better.
01:13:085 (4,5,6) - Flow issue. Consider moving the circles between the sliders.
01:04:572 (4) - Kiai start.
01:29:302 (1) - Kiai end.
90923,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1 - Remove Kiai time.
01:56:869 (1) - Kiai start.
02:09:842 (1) - Kiai end.

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-05-05T17:54:39+00:00

-[ Snowflake ]- wrote:
PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD REMOVE comboburst.wav AND normal-hitwhistle.wav PLEASE!!! Ok, I'll remove the comboburst. The hit whistle is staying.

kds please <3
Full-Spread Mod
OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Song Setup - Unrankable title. Change title to something less obnoxious. I will change this if it is actually a problem, but keeping for now.
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Remap to better fit the tune. This is Extra diff, not Hard. I think this is fine. I want to emphasize the base rhythm here, and I also want to set up a small difficulty spike between this and the next section.
00:54:031 (3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. Stack these or reduce the spacing between them. This is intended.
00:54:538 (6) - Don't stack this note under the 5. Either move it to the other side or move it slightly higher than the 5 (moving it slightly higher would flow with the above change). This is also intended.
00:54:538 (6,7) - Inconsistent spacing. Stack these or reduce the spacing between them.
01:00:518 (3,4) - Same here.
01:01:025 (6,7) - Your map is very inconsistent. You suddenly decided to stack right here but didn't stack the ones before. I consider a map inconsistent when the same parts of the music are mapped with different rhythms. In my opinion, changing the pattern without changing the rhythm makes the map less repetitive.
01:04:572 (1,2,3,4) - Don't make these jumps. Make them a stream. Changed.
01:04:572 (1) - Kiai time should start here. I disagree.
01:11:058 (1,2,3,4) - Don't make these jumps. Make them a stream. Changed
01:17:545 (1,2,3,4) - Same here. Changed
01:24:031 (1,2,3,4) - Bring these closer together.
01:29:302 (1) - Kiai end.
90923,-50,4,2,1,80,0,1 - Remove Kiai time.
01:38:119 (1) - Unrankable slder. Shouldn't curve back into itself like that. Remap the slider shape. Please tell me, which of the unrankable techniques does this slider fall under? If you think this is a "Burai Slider," here is part of the description from the wiki: "On the contrary, if you do a similar pattern but leave it as a slight angle it is rankable."
01:51:092 (1) - Same here.
01:56:869 (1) - Kiai start.
02:09:842 (1) - Kiai end.

INSANE
Song Setup - Unrankable stack leniency. Change stack leniency to be between 3 and 9. (It is recommended that you never touch stack leniency). Fixed. It must have reset itself at some point, because I'm sure I already did this though...
00:16:633 (2) - You're missing a strong note on the blue tick and not being consistent with the rest of the map. Consider placing a circle right before the slider. There is no note on the blue tick though.
00:29:910 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Bad stacking throughout this entire area. I will change this if it becomes a problem. Keeping for now.
00:30:417 (4) - Consider moving this over slightly to the left for the above change.
00:31:126 (2) - Consider moving this over slightly to the right for the above change.
00:58:998 (2) - Bad stacking. Consider moving slightly in front of the slider.
01:04:977 (1) - Kiai time should start here. I still disagree about kiai the times.
01:04:572 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remap this. This is Insane difficulty, this section should not be so easy. Consider mapping the background. Keeping for now. If more people think it's too easy, I will change it.
01:29:099 (3) - Kiai time should end here.
90923,-50,4,2,1,80,0,1 Remove this Kiai point.
01:56:869 (1) - Kiai time should start here.
01:56:869 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Same as the above section. This should be much harder since this is Insane difficulty. Remap the section.
02:09:842 (1) - Kiai time should end here.
02:09:842 (1,1) - Remap this into a stream. This is Insane difficulty, not Hard. Changed
02:10:653 (1,1) - Awkward jump. Consider moving the circle behind the slider (the direction the slider ends).

HARD
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Why do you map this with the beat in Hard difficulty but not with Insane or Extra difficulty? Consider remapping Insane and Extra's introduction to fit the song like this does. Because this is the melody.
00:18:153 (6) - New Combo. Changed.
00:20:687 (5) - Consider removing one reverse tick and adding a circle to the end. If you go through with this change, make the circle a New Combo. Done.
00:21:396 (6) - If you don't go through with the change, make this a New Combo.
00:59:403 (4,5) - Inconsistent spacing. Consider flipping the slider around. Done
01:01:734 (7,8,1,2,1,2) - Obnoxious jumps for Hard difficulty. Consider flipping the sliders around. Done
01:04:572 (1) - Kiai start.
01:29:302 (2) - Kiai end.
90923,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1 - Remove Kiai time.
01:35:383 (5,6) - Swap these notes around. Done
01:56:464 (9,10) - Swap these notes around. Done
01:56:869 (1) - Kiai start.
01:57:984 (4) - Move this closer to the previous slider. 1/4 jumps should not exist in Hard difficulty.
02:09:842 (1) - Kiai end.

NORMAL
00:26:869 (2,3,4) - Remove the circle. Done
00:28:085 (3) - Change slider start to a circle. Done
00:30:112 (2,3,4,5) - Same here. Done
00:33:356 (2,3,4,5) - Same here. Done
00:37:410 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Consider remapping this part to fit the song better. Slightly changed.
01:13:085 (4,5,6) - Flow issue. Consider moving the circles between the sliders. Changed.
01:04:572 (4) - Kiai start.
01:29:302 (1) - Kiai end.
90923,-100,4,2,1,80,0,1 - Remove Kiai time.
01:56:869 (1) - Kiai start.
02:09:842 (1) - Kiai end.

Thanks for modding all the difficulties!

-[ Prxzm ]-

74 posts

Joined June 2013

-[ Prxzm ]- 2016-05-05T21:53:09+00:00

HARD
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - Why do you map this with the beat in Hard difficulty but not with Insane or Extra difficulty? Consider remapping Insane and Extra's introduction to fit the song like this does. Because this is the melody. I know this is the melody, that's why I'm asking why isn't it mapped in Insane and Extra?

Nephroid wrote:
Thanks for modding all the difficulties!

No problem :3 Full-Spread mods are my forte.

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-05-05T22:17:29+00:00

-[ Snowflake ]- wrote:
I know this is the melody, that's why I'm asking why isn't it mapped in Insane and Extra?

In my opinion, following the melody is easier than following a different rhythm. That might just be me though. I'll change it if more people bring it up.

Vivyanne

1,215 posts

Joined December 2013

Vivyanne 2016-05-11T17:28:27+00:00

not meant to flame you but i dont think the difficulty oh yes is rankable with that name (^:

because its too long!

BlueberrySansy

256 posts

Joined March 2015

BlueberrySansy 2016-05-12T03:50:43+00:00

Hello!

Nice storyboard to give this map a star.

BlueberrySansy to OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS: screw slider speedups and spaced streams, I have a sucky acc

I've been wondering: May I GD? I love this song so much I wanna map it

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-05-12T15:11:34+00:00

BlueberrySansy wrote:
Hello!

Nice storyboard to give this map a star.

BlueberrySansy to OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS: screw slider speedups and spaced streams, I have a sucky acc

I've been wondering: May I GD? I love this song so much I wanna map it

Yeah, go for it!

BlueberrySansy

256 posts

Joined March 2015

BlueberrySansy 2016-05-14T08:30:10+00:00

Nephroid wrote:
BlueberrySansy wrote:
I've been wondering: May I GD? I love this song so much I wanna map it
Yeah, go for it!

Woo, it's done!

BlueberrySansy's Mettaton EXtra

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Lince Cosmico_old

Lince Cosmico_old 2016-05-14T23:45:18+00:00

LOL please dont mess up with the diff name x'D

BlueberrySansy

256 posts

Joined March 2015

BlueberrySansy 2016-05-16T06:37:17+00:00

Nephroid wrote:
If "OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS" is actually a problem, I'll shorten it.

I think I highly recommend you to shorten it.

I don't wanna get silenced for spam when I bring that up

Vanillas

397 posts

Joined October 2014

Vanillas 2016-05-16T10:31:41+00:00

Hi~ From my queue~

Amazing storyboard!!

[Normal]

00:56:869 (1,2) - missing hitsound here?
01:37:612 (1,2,3) - using a slidder to replace circles here. Hard for normal player

[Hard]

00:26:869 (3,4) - the stack here seems not good
00:36:599 (3,4) - ^
01:45:112 (4,5,6,7) - using DS here, I mean you should make 6 and 7 closer.
01:50:788 (2,3,4) - 01:52:004 (5,6,7) - ^

[Insane]

Try to use full screen in Insane diff. Now you only use part of them.(Ctrl + A to check)
00:18:153 (2,3) - blanket
00:31:734 (4,5) - move them a little far away from each other.
00:36:599 (3,4) - ^
00:32:545 (1,1,2) - blanket
00:50:281 (1,2) - actually you miss a note between 1 and 2. what about using 1/8 and put a repeater here?
00:56:768 (1,2) - ^
01:05:687 add a note here?
01:12:173 ^
01:17:545 (5,1) - stack here not looking good.

[BlueberrySansy's Mettaton EXtra]

Hp -> 8?
00:16:531 (2,3,4) - Ctrl + G on (2) and (4) ? It's not flow at the moment.
00:26:058 (1) - fix the slidder to make good-looking with 00:25:653 (1,2,3,4) -
00:52:004 (1) - move it to X:190 Y: 166?
not much to say, amazing rhythm after test play!

So sorry for short mod here... I've tried my best but did not find many...

Good luck ~

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-05-16T13:32:56+00:00

hi m4m

Normal

01:37:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Massive trains like these should have their note density reduce, it is supposed to be the easiest diff in the set and it should be comfortable for beginners.
I dont know how to go about modding this sorry :/

Hard

00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stacking notes of different spacing is really really hard to read
00:25:653 (1,2,3,4) - claps are too loud. Get ird of them or reduce volume
00:25:248 (4,1) - increase spacing
00:26:869 (3,4) - the is an awkward pattern to play for 1/4 spacing imo
00:30:112 (3,4) - ^
01:01:734 (7,8,1,2,1) - I'd get rid of the SV changes as the music seems to be the same intensity for each slider
02:11:464 (3) - NC

Insane

00:16:329 (1,2) - I would stack these objects given that they are 1/1 spaced
00:25:653 (5,1) - this is hard to read
00:27:173 (4,5) - these are 1/4 but are the same spacing as 00:27:477 (5,1,2) when they are 1/2 a beat apart. Having spacings like these makes rhythms hard to read
00:32:748 (1) - delete NC
01:38:626 (1,2) - could be blanketed better
02:04:977 - have the stream start here on the downbeat
02:09:842 (1) - I dont see a reason to have a stream, there isnt a sound on the blue ticks

01:34:977 - for patterns like this beat should be clickable imho
01:38:119 (1) - Having the slider go back on itself seems to jack up the fluid flow same as 01:51:092 (1) -
01:45:112 (1) - I'd prevent this underlap at all costs
02:04:977 (6) - same as Insane
02:09:842 (1) - same as Insane

I had trouble modding this sorry >< GL!

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Flowey 2016-05-17T02:57:12+00:00

BlueberrySansy wrote:
I don't wanna get silenced for spam when I bring that up Oh that's actually a thing? I guess I'll shorten it

Vanillas wrote:
Hi~ From my queue~

Amazing storyboard!! :)

[Normal]
00:56:869 (1,2) - missing hitsound here? That's intended.
01:37:612 (1,2,3) - using a slidder to replace circles here. Hard for normal player Done.
[Hard]
00:26:869 (3,4) - the stack here seems not good
00:36:599 (3,4) - ^ I will change this when I think of a better pattern.
01:45:112 (4,5,6,7) - using DS here, I mean you should make 6 and 7 closer. I increased spacing between 4, 5, and 6 to emphasize that the gap between 6 and 7 is shorter instead.
01:50:788 (2,3,4) - 01:52:004 (5,6,7) - ^
[Insane]
Try to use full screen in Insane diff. Now you only use part of them.(Ctrl + A to check) I think I cover most of the screen.
00:18:153 (2,3) - blanket They're already blanketed.
00:31:734 (4,5) - move them a little far away from each other. The stacking is intentional.
00:36:599 (3,4) - ^
00:32:545 (1,1,2) - blanket They're already blanketed.
00:50:281 (1,2) - actually you miss a note between 1 and 2. what about using 1/8 and put a repeater here?
00:56:768 (1,2) - ^I'm not quite sure I understand what you mean here. I don't think I'm missing any notes.
01:05:687 add a note here? Keeping this as is, but I added notes to some similar parts.
01:12:173 ^
01:17:545 (5,1) - stack here not looking good. Changed.
So sorry for short mod here... I've tried my best but did not find many...

Good luck ~

Kisses wrote:
hi m4m

Normal
01:37:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Massive trains like these should have their note density reduce, it is supposed to be the easiest diff in the set and it should be comfortable for beginners. I applied the change in Vanilla's mod, so it should be better now.
I dont know how to go about modding this sorry :/
Hard
00:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stacking notes of different spacing is really really hard to read Remapped.
00:25:653 (1,2,3,4) - claps are too loud. Get ird of them or reduce volume Fixed. (I thought I changed that already... I guess the timing sections didn't carry over to this difficulty.)
00:25:248 (4,1) - increase spacing Adjusted.
00:26:869 (3,4) - the is an awkward pattern to play for 1/4 spacing imo
00:30:112 (3,4) - ^ Will change when I think of a better pattern
01:01:734 (7,8,1,2,1) - I'd get rid of the SV changes as the music seems to be the same intensity for each slider Kept for now because I like the buildup right before a new section.
02:11:464 (3) - NC Fixed.
Insane
00:16:329 (1,2) - I would stack these objects given that they are 1/1 spaced Done
00:25:653 (5,1) - this is hard to read Unstacked sliders.
00:27:173 (4,5) - these are 1/4 but are the same spacing as 00:27:477 (5,1,2) when they are 1/2 a beat apart. Having spacings like these makes rhythms hard to read I don't think it'll be too much of a problem for players.
00:32:748 (1) - delete NC Keeping for now.
01:38:626 (1,2) - could be blanketed better Adjusted
02:04:977 - have the stream start here on the downbeat
02:09:842 (1) - I dont see a reason to have a stream, there isnt a sound on the blue ticks The stream is supposed to match that electronic sounding percussion here.
01:34:977 - for patterns like this beat should be clickable imho I don't quite understand what you mean by clickable.
01:38:119 (1) - Having the slider go back on itself seems to jack up the fluid flow same as 01:51:092 (1) - Keeping for now. (They're supposed to be high heels.)
01:45:112 (1) - I'd prevent this underlap at all costs Made the overlap less messy.
02:04:977 (6) - same as Insane
02:09:842 (1) - same as Insane
I had trouble modding this sorry >< GL!

Thanks for the mods!

BlueberrySansy

256 posts

Joined March 2015

BlueberrySansy 2016-05-17T07:17:59+00:00

Vanillas wrote:
[BlueberrySansy's Mettaton EXtra]
Hp -> 8? Hey, that's what I thought, too! Fixed~!
00:16:531 (2,3,4) - Ctrl + G on (2) and (4) ? It's not flow at the moment. Well, I don't know if I could do that, But I can reposition it to keep the flow of the triangle.
00:26:058 (1) - fix the slidder to make good-looking with 00:25:653 (1,2,3,4) - Nah, I think I could keep that for now, it's fine
00:52:004 (1) - move it to X:190 Y: 166? Hm, I guess it looks better that way... Fixed~
not much to say, amazing rhythm after test play! Oh! Thanks!
So sorry for short mod here... I've tried my best but did not find many...

Good luck ~

Thanks for modding!

BlueberrySansy's Mettaton EXtra *UPDATED*

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Oh, don't forget the hitsounds! Here!

BlueberrySansy

256 posts

Joined March 2015

BlueberrySansy 2016-05-19T07:18:22+00:00

- WARNING -
IF YOU HEAR SOUND "OH YES" IN HIGHEST DIFF, PREPARE TO ~~HOLDING SLIDERS~~ DANCE, DARLING!

Broccoly

1,359 posts

Joined May 2012

Broccoly 2016-05-20T08:47:11+00:00

oh no..............................................

SadBoi42

44 posts

Joined August 2014

SadBoi42 2016-05-21T11:11:09+00:00

Hey nephroid!
As i can see, u are far with ur map being ranked
OMEGA GOOD JOB :333

BlueberrySansy

256 posts

Joined March 2015

BlueberrySansy 2016-05-23T07:21:45+00:00

girleyz-desu wrote:
Hey nephroid!
As i can see, u are far with ur map being ranked
OMEGA GOOD JOB :333

#RANKMETTATON2K16

BlueberrySansy

256 posts

Joined March 2015

BlueberrySansy 2016-06-10T09:39:56+00:00

BlueberrySansy wrote:

#RANKMETTATON2K16

WHERE ARE THE MODS?!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-06-22T07:54:42+00:00

General:

there are some unused hitsounds
sb\light.psd unused
soft-hitclap2.wav have more than 5 ms delay

OH YES

HP9 is overkill, use 7 as max, HP don't affect the star ranting etc, so try to be more lenient with it.
00:06:599 (1,2) - really unexpected, use a slider instead, unless you want a bunch of people hitting 100 here.
00:09:842 (1,2) - same as above, if you really want to keep this rhythm then use more spacing, current one is missleading
00:12:275 (4,5,1) - 1/4 and 1/2 spacinge are so similar, this is a issue and should be fixed, since this happen in all the difficulty, if you gonna use alot of 1/4 jumps then be sure to make the 1/2s bigger than the 1/4s, see 00:13:491 (2,3,4) -
00:19:977 (4) - here you mapped this drum, but then you randomly decide to ignore 00:20:383 -
00:22:004 (7) - same as above, they are really important in the music and shouldn't be ignored. There are more and your current rhythm is confused and doesn't fit the song that well.
00:22:511 (10) - you can remove this one to bring more emphasis to 00:22:612 (11) - the melody sounds alot better
00:25:653 (9,1) - really bad spacing, this is the same spacing for some 1/4s and 1/2s, but this is 1/8, I doubt someone would icon this map with stuff like this.
00:26:261 (1,2) - then the 1/2 spacing is the same as the before 1/8
00:26:869 (3,4) - and then the 1/4 spacing is bigger than the 1/2 , etc if you want to make antijumps make them noticeables, the same when doing jumps, the spacing in this diff is really bad, I strongly suggest you to readjust the spacing in the full diff, as well at some rhythms
00:53:829 (2,3,4) - see above, etc.
01:30:923 (1) - weird slider shape is some symbol or something? if not try to make it a bit symmetrical , 01:30:923 (1,1,1) - also spacing.
01:38:119 (1) - personally I won't allow this shape, the last part overlap too much
01:40:957 (4) - this is offscreen with HR
01:49:977 (2) - This one is unrankable imo, the head and tail are overlaped perfectly, basically you can't know if you should start the slider to the left or right.
this need more work, mainly with spacing and some rhythms

BlueberrySansy's Mettaton EXtra

Diff name is weird, first to all what is Mettaton ? and can you call it just Extra pls?
00:06:802 (2) - ? at any case make this a slider 00:06:599 (1,2) - , there is nothing that deserve to be clickable at 00:06:802 (2) -
00:10:045 (2) - same as above and etc
00:19:775 (2) - yeah this one is great the music already changed, all the before ones aren't good and should be removed, recheck all the rhythms and improve them at the before section.
00:58:491 (1) - offscreen
01:26:058 (1) - there is some point in the curve of sliders were they look bad and this map have alot of them.
01:30:112 (3,4) - try to follow the song? the bg sounds aren't that prominent as the melody, so it sounds really bad atm.
01:42:275 (1) - offscreen
the clap sound in the kiai is so loud that is the only thing that i hear in all that part, could you reduce the volume of the clap?
design and rhythm need alot of work.

Insane

00:06:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - feels the same as the hardest diff, try to make rhythm less dense and different patterns
00:19:572 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - look at the spacing, why the 1/4s and 1/2s have the same spacing? is really annoying to play, yeah we can yolo click the slider, but once circles come in the game is hard to be accurate, as I say in your hardest diff, this need to be fixed (In the full diff).
00:23:525 (4) - everyone would think the slider will end at the direction of the next one, but it doesnt and can cause alot of slider breaks.
00:38:221 (4,1,2,3) - check how bad this stack look in game, do a manual stack there to fix it
basically same as the hardest diff, this need alot of work

Hard

00:00:923 (3) - just do the same as the hardest diffs, your current rhythm sounds weird, mainly because you ignore some drums and you ma others, also you don't map the full melody either, so follow the melody or the drums, but don't mix them.
00:16:734 (2,3,4) - again, same as the other diffs, why the 1/4 spacing is the same as the 1/2?, also hard diffs barely have 1/2 jumps and using 1/4 jumps really make it don't looks like a hard diff at all.
00:22:308 (5,1) - this shouldn't exist in a hard diff, doesn't matter the bpm being not that high.
same as the hardest diffs, btw the this diff have alot of parts that aren't appropiate for a hard diff, I recommend you to take a look at other ranked hard diffs from your favourite mappers, so you can have a better idea about them.

Normal

01:43:085 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - train patterns are not that nice, since they force the player to hit things early, lets be real the only reason of why this map have such low star ranting is because of the low bpm and the compresed spacing, this set needs an appropiate normal diff, the current one isn't, so my suggestion is:
Respacing this diff, so the 1/2s don't overlap and call it ¨Advanced¨ and map a real normal diff, you can also take a lookt at other ranked normal diff, to get a better idea on how to reduce object density.

I can write a wall of text, but I think the best way to improve the map is to actually take a look to other ranked maps, so you can get a better idea about spacing, design and appropiate patterns and density for each diff.

BlueberrySansy

256 posts

Joined March 2015

BlueberrySansy 2016-06-23T06:16:00+00:00

Natsu wrote:
BlueberrySansy's Mettaton EXtra

Diff name is weird, first to all what is Mettaton ? and can you call it just Extra pls? Difficulty name explanation: This is Mettaton EX's boss theme in Undertale. And, the difficulty name is a pun between his name (Mettaton EX) and Extra. So I don't think I'm changing it. Oh, and if you want to know more about Mettaton, read up all about it here. And if you don't know Undertale, better play it.
00:06:802 (2) - ? at any case make this a slider 00:06:599 (1,2) - , there is nothing that deserve to be clickable at 00:06:802 (2) - Nope. It's still clickable.
00:10:045 (2) - same as above and etc Same reason as above.
00:19:775 (2) - yeah this one is great the music already changed, all the before ones aren't good and should be removed, recheck all the rhythms and improve them at the before section. I'll recheck the rhythms and try to change them. Without changing the design, of course.
00:58:491 (1) - offscreen According to AIMod... absolutely not.
01:26:058 (1) - there is some point in the curve of sliders were they look bad and this map have alot of them. Well, there's nothing wrong with the silders. So there's probably not alot of them.
01:30:112 (3,4) - try to follow the song? the bg sounds aren't that prominent as the melody, so it sounds really bad atm. Well, let me think about changing the rhythm without changing the pattern itself.
01:42:275 (1) - offscreen AIMod didn't detect any offscreen objects in this difficulty. So I don't think it is.
the clap sound in the kiai is so loud that is the only thing that i hear in all that part, could you reduce the volume of the clap? I don't think I can do that. Sorry.
design and rhythm need alot of work.
Sure, I have to work on my rhythm, but the design, let's say that I'm keeping it.

Well... at least you tried!

I'll just rework on the rhythm. Thanks for modding, anyways!

Before you try to criticise the design of my diff, according to Hollow Wings: It doesn't matter if it doesn't make sense to you. It's my own style that makes sense to me. Just remember that.

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-06-23T06:28:15+00:00

BlueberrySansy wrote:
Before you try to criticise the design of my diff, according to Hollow Wings: It doesn't matter if it doesn't make sense to you. It's my own style that makes sense to me. Just remember that.

before you deny stuff atleast open the editor:

01:42:275 (1) - offscreen

1. Seems new mappers are getting really bad example of his words, first to all Hollow Wings have a mapping style and develop good looking maps that aren't liked by all, your current map objetively doesn't look nice or have a design is just placed objects in circular motions that is the difference

2 if you think your map is perfect you shouldn't try to rank it or asking for mods, because you will be criticise hard and people will ask you for quality specially BNs and QATs.

3 check the mods with open mind, 90% of what I said is what you will get from any decent modder.

4 Bring good reply to the mods, the only decent response I got is the one for the name, the other ones are all invalid.

5 Don't take this an offense or anything, I do with the best intentions, I think is better if I tell you this now than later, since you are a new mapper and you must learn to reply and take suggestions, no map is perfect.

6 I'll be honest with you right now the diff isn't rankable and the best option is to remap it In my opinion, anyways GL with this.

BlueberrySansy

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BlueberrySansy 2016-06-23T07:15:51+00:00

Natsu wrote:
BlueberrySansy wrote:
Before you try to criticise the design of my diff, according to Hollow Wings: It doesn't matter if it doesn't make sense to you. It's my own style that makes sense to me. Just remember that.

before you deny stuff atleast open the editor:

01:42:275 (1) - offscreen ~~DOESN'T LOOK OFFSCREEN TO ME-~~ Fine, I'll move it... fixed

1. Seems new mappers are getting really bad example of his words, first to all Hollow Wings have a mapping style and develop good looking maps that aren't liked by all, your current map objetively doesn't look nice or have a design is just placed objects in circular motions that is the difference Actually, I guess that's how my style works.

6 I'll be honest with you right now the diff isn't rankable and the best option is to remap it In my opinion, anyways GL with this.
I knew you would say that I would re-map this.

Sorry for being too salty... my apologies

But I'll work on re-mapping, okay? Probably I wouldn't... HELP ME

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