forum

EGOIST - KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)

posted
Total Posts
118
show more
Topic Starter
PlasticMemor

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hi ~ NM Request from my queue


[Insane]
00:54:045 (1) - finish
01:05:017 (1) - ^
01:10:502 (1) - ^
01:15:988 (1) - ^
01:18:731 (1) - ^


GL ~
hitsounded them

Pentori wrote:

m4m

[General]
make sure video is enabled for all diffs done
drum-hitwhistle2.wav is unused. unless you can prove it is being used you should delete it done
lots of unsnapped things. get you and your gder's to snap timing lines/objects, checked, legit no unsnapped things except 1 timing point


[Insane]
00:04:502 (2,4) - curve these less so they look nicer done
00:10:502 (8) - snap this done
00:05:874 (7,8,1) - increase distance to add emphasis done
00:08:617 (8,4) - these two notes were ignored before 00:03:302 (1,2,3) - you should maintain consistency and either ignore them or add them for both 8 and 4 are a faster part, build up, 1, 2 and 3 were veryslow
00:22:502 (1) - break this into 2 notes to add emphasis to drums done
00:47:017 (1,2) - swap nc done
01:07:245 (5) - add a note here. you included these two beats earlier 01:03:817 (2,4) - that arent vocals so there's no need to follow vocals here extension of the previous vocal
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this section is way too difficult in comparison to other sections of the map. you really should lower the ds to like 3.0x at maximum. done
01:14:159 (5) - delete this. isn't part of the music, again emphasizing the instrumental

[Collab Extra]

01:04:331 (3) - should be 1/3 snap done
01:11:874 (10) - nc done
01:12:560 (1) - remove nc done

remember to mod my map ^^
hope this helped. gl with rank !
thanks for mod

- Frontier - wrote:

Hi ~ From TH Modding Group !!



[Collab Extra]
Is this really collab diff? It's like the same style :o, it is collabed with Kami-senpai
01:07:760 (6) - Break after this note it's a bad idea D: i think its fine the way it is
01:11:874 (10) - NC plz ;w; having non-stream notes with 2-digits looks weird done

Good luck !!
thx for the mod
Asaiga
Lol, Applying everything in one go now :P


Applied mod

Pentori wrote:

[Asaiga's Easy]
you can delete like every timing point that isn't changing kiai time or sampleset because it isn't being used
00:27:988 (1,2) - this doesn't really follow the music well since no obvious beats are used and some are missed. i would change it to something more like this http://puu.sh/p9UPp/778286ae49.jpg Fixed :3
00:33:131 (3) - be careful of your placement of beats like this. sections should not be harder than your kiai time in easy. here you include most of these beats yet in kiai time you ignore them (such as 00:56:445 (4) ), making this section harder than the chorus (which isn't good) Ahhh, I have the whole thing fixed :P
00:40:331 (3,1) - blanket
00:44:102 (1,2) - swap nc deleted :(
00:46:845 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:03:645 (4,1) - flow here is a little awkward You are right, fixed
01:07:760 (1) - finish the spinner here 01:09:131 . recovery time for easy should be longer Done

Hokichi wrote:

[Asai's Easy]
00:04:674 (4,1) - Improve blanket Done
00:19:760 (4,5) - Same Done
01:14:617 (3,4) - Flow break I think it's fine, since that slider is at the end anyways.

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

[Easy]
00:00:560 (1) - finish Added
00:01:931 (1) - remove clap for this slider Done
00:08:788 (3) - ^ ^
00:19:760 (1) - remove whistle and add clap for this slider ^
00:30:731 (1) - finish ^
00:41:702 (1) - ^ ^
00:52:674 - put spinner here I don't think it will work, the spinner would be to short and since easy requires more rest.

Breezy wrote:



[centre][size=150]Asaiga's Easy


00:00:560 (1,2) - Uneven blanket. Fixed

00:14:274 (4,1) - ^ ^

00:27:988 (1,2) - I guess this rhythm works, but it feels empty afterwards. As a preference I would continue mapping out the current rhythm you had previously. Fixed as Pentori mentioned

00:30:731 (1) - I won't point out every v-shape slider, but I personally think they look better symmetrical. The current ones you have throughout the map look uneven in various different shapes, which sort of makes the map look a little messy. You are right, fixed

00:40:331 (3) - Lessen the curve on this for a more smooth blanket with the next slider. Done

00:52:674 - A note here would be better, you skip a mappable beat that is emphasized. Added along with clap

00:56:788 (4,5) - Would look nicer if these were blanketed. No free spacing in Easy ._. //blame the rule//

00:58:160 (5,1) - Slightly uneven blanket if you look at the approach circle. Fixed

01:06:388 (3,4) - Would look better if (4) was at the same slope as (3). Changed the shape :<


Updated, sorry for being late :(
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 43688,60402,84402
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:Asaiga's Easy
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:977203
BeatmapSetID:440761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
560,342.857142857143,4,3,0,70,1,0
560,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
10516,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
10859,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
11531,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
34502,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
41716,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
52602,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,70,0,0
54045,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
67588,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
70160,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
76002,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
76916,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
77374,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
78745,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
84388,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
84688,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
84916,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
85145,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
85374,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
85588,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 55,55,55

[HitObjects]
284,64,560,6,4,P|349:134|343:192,1,139.999995727539,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,171,1931,2,0,P|231:238|294:299,1,139.999995727539
390,314,3302,2,0,P|284:319|218:350,1,139.999995727539
171,253,4674,2,0,P|271:242|299:192,1,139.999995727539
342,116,6045,6,8,P|298:104|196:153,1,139.999995727539
103,104,7417,2,0,P|104:181|153:231,1,139.999995727539
238,166,8788,2,0,P|253:248|212:313,1,139.999995727539
229,296,10160,2,2,B|301:254|301:254|354:288|354:288|426:237,1,209.999993591309,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,251,11531,6,8,P|363:169|298:131,1,139.999995727539
222,186,12902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
118,142,13588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
14,185,14274,2,2,P|46:262|151:262,1,139.999995727539
121,171,15645,6,0,P|178:148|259:158,1,139.999995727539
347,219,17017,2,0,P|276:267|243:273,2,69.9999978637696
458,232,18388,2,0,B|457:147|362:99,1,139.999995727539
350,11,19760,2,8,P|284:79|284:156,1,139.999995727539
389,119,21131,2,2,P|379:191|334:244,1,139.999995727539
298,346,22502,6,8,P|239:289|226:205,1,139.999995727539
301,153,23874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,70,24560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,23,25245,2,2,P|334:90|289:162,1,139.999995727539,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,134,26617,2,2,P|213:224|268:260,1,139.999995727539
300,152,27988,6,8,L|300:82,2,69.9999978637696
246,251,29360,2,8,L|246:321,2,69.9999978637696
142,294,30731,6,8,P|60:294|17:241,1,139.999995727539,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,182,32102,2,8,P|87:117|126:48,1,139.999995727539
205,124,33474,6,8,P|276:101|339:131,1,139.999995727539
269,217,34845,2,8,P|239:277|268:362,1,139.999995727539
353,292,36217,6,8,P|461:269|505:288,1,139.999995727539
407,196,37588,2,8,P|461:153|478:87,1,139.999995727539
366,96,38960,6,8,P|292:80|201:91,1,139.999995727539
117,102,40331,2,8,P|64:154|73:252,1,139.999995727539
167,200,41702,6,8,P|229:260|211:334,1,139.999995727539
117,335,43074,2,8,L|291:353,1,139.999995727539
368,356,44445,2,8,P|355:287|312:233,1,139.999995727539
205,198,45817,2,8,P|88:246|62:282,1,139.999995727539
90,365,47188,2,8,L|51:218,1,139.999995727539
19,122,48560,2,8,P|95:127|157:206,1,139.999995727539
182,271,49931,6,8,P|230:319|298:321,1,139.999995727539
394,262,51302,2,8,P|403:193|378:128,1,139.999995727539
296,205,52674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
53,89,54045,6,0,P|80:167|148:188,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,142,55074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,95,55417,2,0,P|286:132|299:199,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,214,56445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,268,56788,2,0,P|265:312|178:332,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,322,57817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,296,58160,2,2,P|44:232|65:139,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,213,59531,6,0,P|234:238|288:217,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,193,60560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
367,151,60902,2,8,P|363:83|288:36,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,32,61931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,42,62274,2,2,P|187:102|198:201,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,114,63645,6,0,L|413:197,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,273,65017,2,2,P|226:263|166:294,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,297,66045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,312,66388,2,0,P|24:254|29:168,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
30,147,67417,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67760,12,0,69131,0:0:0:0:
305,85,70502,6,12,P|218:107|171:159,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,191,71874,2,0,P|157:248|218:245,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,184,73245,6,0,P|311:248|281:324,1,139.999995727539,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,355,74274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,371,74617,2,0,P|103:343|51:296,1,139.999995727539,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,258,75988,2,0,B|333:245|236:112|445:125,1,279.999991455078
455,219,78045,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78731,12,0,81474,0:0:0:0:
64,219,82845,6,8,P|155:262|217:236,1,139.999995727539
282,191,84217,2,6,B|268:106|215:168|215:168|213:91|213:91|147:122|129:41,1,279.999991455078
Shira
from modding queueueueue

[Asaiga's Easy]
00:00:560 (1,2) - tad bit not straight according to followpoint
00:01:931 (2,3,4) - why the overlap? xd
00:07:417 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:08:788 (3,4) - dunno bout this since its a bit hard to read for easy
00:10:160 (4,1) - ^
00:13:588 (3,4) - maybe blanket?
00:17:017 (2) - this doesnt match any rhythm imo
00:27:988 (1,2) - doesnt match the song??
00:30:731 - just maybe
00:36:217 (1,2) - overlap again
00:38:960 (1,2) - make this similar?
00:41:702 (1,2) - overlapp aopngg[apgnsw
00:43:074 (2,3) - blanket?
00:43:074 (2,3) - overoveroveroverlap
00:49:931 (1,2) - similar pls
01:24:217 (2) - its just really pretty :D

[Jami's Normal]
00:12:217 (2) - maybe less curvy?
00:25:245 (1) - dunno if its just me or is this too long for normal?
00:34:845 (3,4,1) - wai not similar though its purdy now
00:40:331 (3,4) - dont really like the random overlap here
00:48:217 (2,3) - ^
00:56:102 (3,2) - blanket
01:13:245 (5) - repeating 3x?
01:25:588 - spinner to finish? xd
nice map

[ B r o k e n's Hard]
00:00:560 (1) - i think you can do some slider art in this beginning here
00:06:388 (3,4) - blanket pls
00:08:102 (4) - tad bit higher
00:14:960 (7) - turn it to the left so itll be blanketing 00:14:617 (6) - sliderend?
00:17:360 (2,3) - loosen it some up or make it similar?
00:17:360 (2,1) - you can overlap 1 with 2's sliderend :x
00:20:102 (3) - lower?
00:21:131 (1) - i dont really get the rhythm with these repeats
00:31:931 (5,1) - huuge jampu
00:33:302 (6,1) - ^
00:51:131 (4) - this is kinda ugly imo but you can keep it!
00:51:131 (4,1) - huh but why
00:56:102 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:00:902 (1,2) - ^
01:02:960 (4,1) - kinda hard to read
01:05:017 (1,2) - random jump
01:06:045 (5,2) - you can blanket these 2 :D
01:10:160 (2) - why not separate this stream?
01:12:560 (2,1) - weird overlap again
01:13:931 (4,5) - same length?
01:14:445 (1,2,3) - ugly triangle but what do i know
01:21:817 - you can do things here

[Insane]
00:01:245 (2,3,5) - equal spacing?
00:04:502 (2) - ctrl+g for flow?
00:09:988 (6,7,8) - equal spacingg
00:15:817 (5) - triplet?
00:23:702 (6,7) - spacing again
00:23:874 (7,1) - just wanted to appreciate this blanket :D
00:34:674 (4,1) - random jump?
yes! nice map~
you can complain to him
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5286228

thats all for this mod since its a nm :^)
call me for a recheck/do the rest of the diff anytime!

also, im sure you know this but you dont have to listen to my mod, you do you xd hope it helped
Topic Starter
PlasticMemor

Shiratoi wrote:

from modding queueueueue


[Insane]
00:01:245 (2,3,5) - equal spacing? done
00:04:502 (2) - ctrl+g for flow? done
00:09:988 (6,7,8) - equal spacingg done
00:15:817 (5) - triplet? done,
00:23:702 (6,7) - spacing again done
00:23:874 (7,1) - just wanted to appreciate this blanket :D lol thanks
00:34:674 (4,1) - random jump? it emphasizes the guitar in bg
yes! nice map~
you can complain to him
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5286228

thats all for this mod since its a nm :^)
call me for a recheck/do the rest of the diff anytime!

also, im sure you know this but you dont have to listen to my mod, you do you xd hope it helped
thx for your mod
naliem
Hi from queue :D

m4m
Collab Extra
00:03:988 (4,2) - stack?
00:09:474 (3,4) - try to do same shape, looks weird
00:16:331 (5,6) - could improve this blanket a bit
00:16:331 (5,6) - would try to blanket this
00:41:360 (1,2) - move up 1 to be like this
00:44:960 (3,2) - blanket fix
00:56:960 (3,4) - open angle of slider to get the 4 centered
01:11:017 (6,7,8) - could blanket the triple with 01:10:502 (5) - and the sliderend with 01:11:531 (9) -
01:14:617 (1,2,3,4) - I think they are not stacked
01:14:360 (5,1,2,3,4) - 5 is not in center
01:15:988 (1,2) - fix angle of slider 2
01:18:731 (1) - fix spacing, it's smaller than stream

Kami's Insane
00:01:245 (4,5,1) - blanket? or make slider not curved
00:06:388 (3,4) - blanket fix
00:07:245 (1,3) - stack with sliderend
00:11:360 (5,6,1,3) - blanket fix
00:41:017 (4,6) - stack
00:48:560 (1,4) - ^
00:51:131 (1,3) - ^
00:59:531 (1,2) - blanket fix
01:14:845 (2,5) - blanket?

Insane
00:01:245 (2) - lower the angle?
00:03:302 (1,1) - could blanket this
00:10:331 (7,8) - blanket fix
00:11:874 (4,5) - ^
00:21:131 (1,2,3,4) - would move the angle of 3 and 4 to something like this
00:23:702 (6) - move a bit left so it's not that vertical
00:32:102 (6,7) - fix angle and cntrl+g 6?
00:35:188 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:45:302 (4) - open angle
00:46:160 (7) - red point? also blanket sliderend
00:57:131 (3) - open angle
00:59:874 (2,4) - blanket fix
01:02:102 (6,1) - ^
01:02:274 (1,4) - stack with sliderend and blanket it with 01:02:959 (3) -
01:05:702 (5,6,1) - fix angle of 5 so it blankets 1 ; 01:06:045 (6) - remove red point and make the 2 sliders same shape
01:10:160 (9,1) - blue tick ¿?
01:11:874 (3) - random red point attacks again and also I would put them further away (01:11:874 (3,4) - )
01:12:902 (6) - red point
01:17:131 (6,8,1) - stack
01:17:131 (6,8,1) - same shape

Broken's Hard
00:06:388 (3,4) - cntrl+g 3 and blanket with 4
00:13:760 (4,5,6) - distance is not equal and you could try somehow blanket 00:14:617 (6) - with 00:14:960 (7) - ?
00:17:360 (2,3) - shape fix
00:18:388 (5,1,2) - distance not equal
00:19:760 (1) - move up so it's not that horizontal?
00:20:617 (5,1) - blanket fix
00:24:388 (3,4) - looks weird, might be the shape
00:26:274 (5) - ^
00:28:331 (3,5) - blanket sliderend
00:29:360 (1,2) - not a fan of these 2 being stacked
00:29:874 (4,5) - insert shape thing here
00:30:731 (1) - open angle so it "blankets" 2
00:33:474 (1,3) - insert shape thing here
00:36:388 (2,3) - angle
00:37:074 (4,1,4,5,1,3,4) - shapes
00:45:474 (5,1) - ^
00:52:674 (1,4) - fix blanket
00:59:360 (2,3,4) - blanket
00:59:874 (4) - move angle to blanket with 01:00:217 (5) -
01:00:902 (1,2) - blanket
01:05:702 (4,5,2) - move 2 a bit right so it's between 5 and 4
01:08:788 (5) - I'd keep it ending on red tick but it's also right in blue, your choice
01:17:360 (1,2) - blanket?
01:24:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - take a look into angles here

Nice map and song! GL
B r o k e n
sorry, I'm getting quite a bit lazy over summer vacation, not even doing self mod like I always do

-NanoRIPE-'s Mod
00:00:645 (1) - finish k
00:06:045 - 00:52:331 - add hitsound around here I added hit sounds at one point, but it was awful, so I removed it all haha

Hokichi's Mod
00:06:045 - The volume here should be about 40% sure, seems fine
00:14:617 (6,7) - Should blanket I rather not
00:19:074 (2,3) - Flow break 2 sliders into a single note in between both the slider is just something I like to do, so I rather have it like this
00:34:845 (1,2,3) - Same did an adjustment

Pentori's Mod
00:20:445 (4,5) - i'd ctrl g this rhythm adjusted
00:22:502 (1,6) - playing sliders for the intense drum sound feels anticlimatic. i feel it would be much better if you did something like you did earlier 00:06:045 (1,2) adjusted
00:36:388 (2,3) - use the same slider adjusted
00:40:160 (5) - nc to indicate sv change k
00:51:131 (4) - ^k
00:52:674 (1,2,3) - noo don't stack these. supposed to be the most intense part I wonder why did I stack them haha, did some adjustments
01:02:274 - should defs be a clickable beat because its an accented vocaldid quite some adjustments, got rid of the 3 single notes into sliders
01:10:502 (1) - finish k
01:14:445 (1,2,3,4,5) - this goes on 1/3 snap http://puu.sh/p9WmF/b57372a888.jpg it's already on 1/3 snap
01:15:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - so does this k, thought I fixed all of them already I guess I didnt haha
01:16:417 (3,4,5) - i think this is something that belongs to an insane not hard. consider making this a little simplerI think it's fine, I might just make it all single notes instead
01:17:131 - this is an important beat that u missedslider's end is one it, not sure if I should make it clickable
01:25:331 (6) - 1/3 snaphow did I not snap this on 1/3 when I did it for the others e.e, I must had been in a rush

Shiratoi's Mod
00:00:560 (1) - i think you can do some slider art in this beginning here naw I'm awful at making nice looking extened sliders so this is fine for me xD
00:06:388 (3,4) - blanket pls adjusted
00:08:102 (4) - tad bit higherk
00:14:960 (7) - turn it to the left so itll be blanketing 00:14:617 (6) - sliderend? naw I dont want this to blanket
00:17:360 (2,3) - loosen it some up or make it similar? adjusted
00:17:360 (2,1) - you can overlap 1 with 2's sliderend :x confused here, note 2 is so far away from note 1
00:20:102 (3) - lower? just a little bit
00:21:131 (1) - i dont really get the rhythm with these repeatswell it is for the music, but I do know it's ugly lmao xD
00:31:931 (5,1) - huuge jampu it's fine
00:33:302 (6,1) - ^ ^
00:51:131 (4) - this is kinda ugly imo but you can keep it! yah i know it is, I suck at slider art lmao
00:51:131 (4,1) - huh but why fixed on a different mod
00:56:102 (3,4) - fix blanket adjusted
01:00:902 (1,2) - ^k
01:02:960 (4,1) - kinda hard to readfixed in a different mod
01:05:017 (1,2) - random jump no it's not a random jump
01:06:045 (5,2) - you can blanket these 2 :D naw it's 1.2 DS from note 1 to 2 to 3, but I did something else tho
01:10:160 (2) - why not separate this stream? I don't separate streams for hard
01:12:560 (2,1) - weird overlap again it's an anti-jump, but this is the only area I did it,, I distanced it
01:13:931 (4,5) - same length?
01:14:445 (1,2,3) - ugly triangle but what do i know adjusted
01:21:817 - you can do things here

naliem's mod
00:06:388 (3,4) - cntrl+g 3 and blanket with 4 adjusted
00:13:760 (4,5,6) - distance is not equal and you could try somehow blanket 00:14:617 (6) - with 00:14:960 (7) - ?ds the same, not blanketing, but everyone is suggesting it, maybe I will
00:17:360 (2,3) - shape fix did it in a different mod
00:18:388 (5,1,2) - distance not equal it is, maybe I did it on a different mod
00:19:760 (1) - move up so it's not that horizontal? I like horizontal
00:20:617 (5,1) - blanket fix I changed this area in a different mod
00:24:388 (3,4) - looks weird, might be the shape adjusted
00:26:274 (5) - ^ adjusted
00:28:331 (3,5) - blanket sliderend I rahter not
00:29:360 (1,2) - not a fan of these 2 being stacked its fine
00:29:874 (4,5) - insert shape thing here
00:30:731 (1) - open angle so it "blankets" 2
00:33:474 (1,3) - insert shape thing here
00:36:388 (2,3) - angle adjusted
00:37:074 (4,1,4,5,1,3,4) - shapesmake shapes? ughh idk, maybe I'm just too lazy, fix quite a couple of sliders
00:45:474 (5,1) - ^
00:52:674 (1,4) - fix blanket changed this area in a different mod
00:59:360 (2,3,4) - blanket this is fine
00:59:874 (4) - move angle to blanket with 01:00:217 (5) - I did an adjustment in a different mod
01:00:902 (1,2) - blanket did in a different mod
01:05:702 (4,5,2) - move 2 a bit right so it's between 5 and 4 changed this area in a different mod
01:08:788 (5) - I'd keep it ending on red tick but it's also right in blue, your choice this is fine
01:17:360 (1,2) - blanket? might as well
01:24:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - take a look into angles hereadjusted in a different mod

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 43688,60402,84402
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:962746
BeatmapSetID:440761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"kabane.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
560,342.857142857143,4,2,0,60,1,0
560,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
6045,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
11360,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
19760,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
40160,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
41702,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
51131,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
52674,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
54045,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,1
67760,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
70502,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,1
78045,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
84217,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 55,55,55
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 192,192,192

[HitObjects]
144,64,560,6,0,P|248:96|352:60,1,210,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,76,1931,2,0,P|448:172|416:292,1,210
340,280,3302,2,0,P|316:160|348:76,1,210
264,64,4674,2,0,P|164:88|60:64,1,210
184,178,6045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
302,100,6217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,6388,2,0,P|302:216|330:248,1,70
384,196,6731,2,0,P|356:124|288:100,1,140
228,132,7245,6,0,P|192:140|148:128,1,70
100,72,7588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,8,7760,2,0,P|192:4|236:16,1,70
288,64,8102,2,0,P|364:80|432:64,1,140
428,236,8788,6,0,L|468:304,1,70
388,336,9131,2,0,L|344:264,1,70
300,212,9474,2,0,P|232:188|156:224,1,140
92,240,9988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,292,10160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
28,292,10331,2,0,P|20:328|28:368,1,70
104,328,10674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,284,10845,2,0,P|240:268|328:304,1,140
388,296,11360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,296,11445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,296,11531,6,0,L|416:244,1,52.5000020027161
436,172,11874,2,0,L|400:124,1,52.5000020027161
352,68,12217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,116,12388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,12560,2,0,P|192:164|168:160,1,52.5000020027161
104,116,12902,5,0,0:0:0:0:
52,172,13074,2,0,L|52:228,1,52.5000020027161
112,264,13417,2,0,P|152:268|176:256,1,52.5000020027161
232,228,13760,2,0,L|272:280,2,52.5000020027161
268,156,14274,2,0,L|316:216,1,52.5000020027161
368,156,14617,2,0,L|324:100,1,52.5000020027161
376,48,14960,2,0,P|428:84|440:128,1,105.000004005432
472,276,15645,6,0,L|408:232,1,52.5000020027161
356,276,15988,2,0,P|324:280|284:268,1,52.5000020027161
240,232,16331,2,0,P|212:228|172:236,1,52.5000020027161
116,264,16674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,16845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,16931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,17017,6,0,L|112:144,1,52.5000020027161
168,92,17360,2,0,P|196:88|232:96,1,52.5000020027161
296,112,17702,2,0,P|300:140|292:172,1,52.5000020027161
232,212,18045,2,0,L|180:252,1,52.5000020027161
256,284,18388,2,0,L|300:336,1,52.5000020027161
216,352,18731,6,0,L|180:308,1,52.5000020027161
112,344,19074,2,0,L|72:288,1,52.5000020027161
140,248,19417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,96,19760,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,152,19931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,172,20102,2,0,L|296:192,1,52.5000020027161
376,212,20445,2,0,L|360:272,2,52.5000020027161
420,116,20959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,64,21131,6,0,L|360:36,3,26.2500010013581
324,56,21474,2,0,L|312:32,3,26.2500010013581
288,64,21817,2,0,L|256:52,3,26.2500010013581
256,96,22160,2,0,L|228:100,2,26.2500010013581
280,172,22502,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,180,22674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,112,22845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,148,23017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,23188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,248,23360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,248,23531,2,0,P|196:252|236:240,1,52.5000020027161
288,216,23874,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,216,24045,2,0,P|292:184|284:148,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,24388,2,0,P|224:88|192:96,1,52.5000020027161
160,160,24731,2,0,P|192:164|228:156,1,52.5000020027161
288,164,25074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,164,25245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,240,25417,6,0,P|244:236|208:244,1,52.5000020027161
152,268,25760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,268,25931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,228,26102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,308,26274,2,0,P|92:332|120:348,1,52.5000020027161
192,344,26617,5,0,0:0:0:0:
268,332,26788,2,0,L|308:280,1,52.5000020027161
352,232,27131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,184,27302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,184,27474,2,0,P|388:164|348:160,1,52.5000020027161
288,156,27817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,100,27988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
172,152,28160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,204,28331,2,0,P|224:240|240:272,1,52.5000020027161
292,300,28674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,344,28845,2,0,P|192:348|168:340,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,288,29188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,29360,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,29531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,156,29702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,228,29874,2,0,P|248:232|280:220,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,152,30217,2,0,P|316:148|352:168,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,220,30560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,80,30731,6,0,L|392:28,1,52.5000020027161
336,76,31074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,104,31245,2,0,P|232:108|192:96,1,52.5000020027161
144,60,31588,2,0,P|116:56|84:64,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,124,31931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,268,32102,6,0,L|168:308,1,52.5000020027161
180,224,32445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,276,32617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,348,32788,2,0,P|284:352|320:340,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,288,33131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,288,33302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,164,33474,6,0,P|236:156|208:164,1,52.5000020027161
164,224,33817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,244,33988,2,0,P|280:248|304:240,1,52.5000020027161
344,184,34331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,184,34502,2,0,P|351:157|344:128,1,52.5000020027161
196,84,34845,6,0,L|168:156,1,52.5000020027161
140,204,35188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,204,35360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,156,35531,2,0,P|72:124|84:88,1,52.5000020027161
136,52,35874,2,0,P|164:48|200:56,1,52.5000020027161
328,116,36217,5,0,0:0:0:0:
328,116,36388,2,0,L|364:180,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,224,36731,2,0,L|276:172,1,52.5000020027161
212,220,37074,2,0,P|184:228|156:220,1,52.5000020027161
112,160,37417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,300,37588,6,0,P|216:304|248:296,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,252,37931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,252,38102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,188,38274,2,0,P|376:192|416:184,1,52.5000020027161
436,120,38617,2,0,P|404:116|368:124,1,52.5000020027161
284,236,38960,6,0,P|256:240|231:236,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,39302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,140,39474,2,0,P|264:144|300:136,1,52.5000020027161
316,68,39817,2,0,P|288:64|256:68,1,52.5000020027161
188,68,40160,6,0,B|144:112|128:176|160:236|256:212|176:200|124:216|164:280,1,245
264,144,41702,6,0,L|312:232,1,70
260,280,42045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,280,42217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,348,42388,2,0,P|344:356|384:344,1,70
400,268,42731,2,0,P|436:260|488:280,1,70
480,184,43074,6,0,L|436:100,1,70
392,184,43417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,184,43588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,236,43760,2,0,P|260:216|188:240,1,140
116,200,44274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44445,6,0,L|156:112,1,70
204,76,44788,2,0,P|240:68|280:80,1,70
352,96,45130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,45302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,45474,2,0,P|352:220|344:248,1,70
264,272,45817,6,0,P|256:232|276:184,1,70
196,152,46160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,152,46331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,46502,2,0,L|188:300,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,280,47017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,344,47188,5,0,0:0:0:0:
220,356,47360,2,0,P|268:360|300:352,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,47702,2,0,L|268:212,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,156,48045,2,0,L|272:88,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,76,48388,6,0,P|400:68|440:84,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,48731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,48902,2,0,P|436:220|472:296,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,316,49417,2,0,P|352:308|316:320,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,260,49760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,204,49931,6,0,L|356:120,2,70
260,148,50445,2,0,P|220:140|184:148,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,208,50788,2,0,P|101:212|67:205,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,132,51131,6,0,B|132:60|196:16|244:88|292:40|320:64,1,245
204,152,52674,5,4,0:0:0:0:
288,260,52902,1,4,0:0:0:0:
424,296,53131,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,168,53360,2,0,P|340:88|376:32,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,260,54045,6,0,L|340:348,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,320,54388,2,0,L|184:236,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,168,54731,2,0,P|336:188|416:164,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,108,55245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,56,55417,6,0,P|196:48|152:60,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,116,55760,2,0,L|36:188,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,180,56102,2,0,P|196:216|204:308,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,276,56617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,368,56788,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,360,56960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,57131,2,0,P|360:268|408:292,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,57474,2,0,P|432:100|364:64,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,57988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,58160,2,0,P|328:200|264:220,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,58502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58760,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58845,2,0,P|140:132|176:116,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,132,59188,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,48,59360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,52,59531,2,0,P|384:44|432:60,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,131,59874,2,0,P|318:139|274:131,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,60217,2,0,P|180:120|232:220,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,260,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,296,60902,6,0,P|408:340|392:388,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,344,61245,2,0,P|260:352|220:344,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,61588,2,0,L|64:208,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,136,61931,2,0,L|188:216,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,100,62274,6,0,L|148:32,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,8,62617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,100,62788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,62960,2,0,P|264:280|236:368,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63645,6,0,L|288:268,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,63988,2,0,L|292:176,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,64331,2,0,P|148:108|172:52,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,64588,2,0,P|244:40|304:60,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,72,64845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
268,196,65017,6,0,P|312:208|352:196,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,84,65360,1,6,3:0:0:0:
420,84,65531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,65702,2,0,P|444:260|428:308,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66045,2,0,P|296:304|316:252,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,148,66388,5,6,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66731,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,160,67074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,352,67417,1,6,0:0:0:0:
340,224,67760,6,0,P|392:212|444:232,1,105.000004005432
392,292,68274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68445,2,0,L|445:348,1,52.5000020027161
360,368,68788,2,0,L|304:304,1,78.7500030040742
272,296,69131,6,0,P|168:328|64:292,1,210.000008010865
160,168,70160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70502,6,0,P|248:152|336:184,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,232,71017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,148,71188,2,0,P|468:104|452:52,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,28,71531,2,0,P|320:16|284:24,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,71874,6,0,P|224:204|128:236,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,72560,2,0,L|296:256,1,167.999994873047
416,92,73245,5,2,3:0:0:0:
300,160,73474,1,4,3:0:0:0:
428,204,73702,2,0,P|436:248|428:292,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,312,73931,2,0,P|372:316|324:296,1,55.9999982910157,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,74445,5,4,3:0:0:0:
192,88,74617,1,4,3:0:0:0:
296,176,74845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
168,224,75074,2,0,P|128:232|84:224,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,248,75302,2,0,P|52:292|60:336,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,60,75988,5,4,3:0:0:0:
244,180,76217,1,4,3:0:0:0:
384,192,76445,2,0,P|392:232|368:272,1,55.9999982910157,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,300,76674,2,0,P|336:304|296:296,1,55.9999982910157,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,76902,2,0,P|208:256|152:276,1,111.999996582031,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,224,77360,6,0,P|44:140|92:44,1,167.999994873047,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,148,78045,2,0,P|256:164|340:136,1,157.500006008148
256,192,78731,12,0,81474,0:0:0:0:
256,136,82160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,136,82845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,260,83188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,224,83531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,100,84217,5,4,3:0:0:0:
164,224,84445,1,4,3:0:0:0:
264,124,84674,1,4,3:0:0:0:
348,236,84902,1,4,3:0:0:0:
464,156,85131,1,4,3:0:0:0:
380,44,85360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
PlasticMemor

naliem wrote:

Hi from queue :D

[box=m4m]Collab Extra
00:56:960 (3,4) - open angle of slider to get the 4 centered
01:11:017 (6,7,8) - could blanket the triple with 01:10:502 (5) - and the sliderend with 01:11:531 (9) -
01:14:617 (1,2,3,4) - I think they are not stacked
01:14:360 (5,1,2,3,4) - 5 is not in center
01:15:988 (1,2) - fix angle of slider 2
01:18:731 (1) - fix spacing, it's smaller than stream

Insane
00:01:245 (2) - lower the angle?
00:03:302 (1,1) - could blanket this
00:10:331 (7,8) - blanket fix
00:11:874 (4,5) - ^
00:21:131 (1,2,3,4) - would move the angle of 3 and 4 to something like this i fixed the entire section into a pattern
00:23:702 (6) - move a bit left so it's not that vertical
00:32:102 (6,7) - fix angle and cntrl+g 6? for flow
00:35:188 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:45:302 (4) - open angle
00:46:160 (7) - red point? also blanket sliderend
00:57:131 (3) - open angle it is a sliderjump
00:59:874 (2,4) - blanket fix
01:02:102 (6,1) - ^
01:02:274 (1,4) - stack with sliderend and blanket it with 01:02:959 (3) -
01:05:702 (5,6,1) - fix angle of 5 so it blankets 1 ; 01:06:045 (6) - remove red point and make the 2 sliders same shape its not supposed to blanket
01:10:160 (9,1) - blue tick ¿?
01:11:874 (3) - random red point attacks again and also I would put them further away (01:11:874 (3,4) - )
01:12:902 (6) - red point
01:17:131 (6,8,1) - stack
01:17:131 (6,8,1) - same shape
Nice map and song! GL
what i didn't write a comment on is fixed
thx for mod
_Stan
hey~ for M4M

[Easy]
00:43:074 (2,3) - blanket?

EZ is great that I can find any problem~

[Jami's Normal]
00:21:817 (7,1,2) - why different ds?
00:34:502 (2,3,4) - ds 1.2?
00:59:531 (1,2) - ds

great, climax has diferent ds I think it's ok but it's not necessary for NM to adjust DS in a part. Only personal suggestion

[B r o k e n's Hard]
perfect

[Insane]
01:11:874 (3,4) - 01:12:560 (5,6) - same rhythm, different ds

Honestly it's great map~ I cannot mod more (sorry), I'll shoot you a star cuz I think this map is great :) :) :) :)
B r o k e n
Self Mod, Update,thx
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 43688,60402,84402
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:962746
BeatmapSetID:440761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"kabane.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
560,342.857142857143,4,2,0,60,1,0
560,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
6045,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
11360,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,0
19760,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,0
40160,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
41702,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
51131,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
52674,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
54045,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,1
67760,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
70502,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,1
78045,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
84217,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 55,55,55
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 192,192,192

[HitObjects]
144,64,560,6,0,P|248:96|352:60,1,210,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,76,1931,2,0,P|448:172|416:292,1,210
340,280,3302,2,0,P|316:160|348:76,1,210
264,64,4674,2,0,P|164:88|60:64,1,210
184,178,6045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
302,100,6217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,6388,2,0,P|302:216|330:248,1,70
384,196,6731,2,0,P|356:124|288:100,1,140
228,132,7245,6,0,P|192:140|148:128,1,70
100,72,7588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,8,7760,2,0,P|192:4|240:16,1,70
288,64,8102,2,0,P|364:80|432:64,1,140
428,236,8788,6,0,L|468:304,1,70
388,336,9131,2,0,L|344:264,1,70
300,212,9474,2,0,P|232:188|156:224,1,140
92,240,9988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,292,10160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
28,292,10331,2,0,P|20:328|28:368,1,70
104,328,10674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,284,10845,2,0,P|240:268|328:304,1,140
388,296,11360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,296,11445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,296,11531,6,0,L|416:244,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,172,11874,2,0,L|400:124,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,68,12217,1,0,3:0:0:0:
288,116,12388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,12560,2,0,P|192:164|168:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,116,12902,5,2,3:0:0:0:
52,172,13074,2,0,L|52:228,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,13417,2,0,P|140:268|180:256,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,13760,2,0,L|272:280,2,52.5000020027161,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,156,14274,2,0,L|316:216,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,156,14617,2,0,L|324:100,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,14960,2,0,P|428:84|440:128,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
472,276,15645,6,0,L|408:232,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,276,15988,2,0,P|324:280|284:268,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,16331,2,0,P|212:228|172:236,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,16674,1,0,3:0:0:0:
84,192,16845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,16931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,17017,6,0,L|112:144,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,92,17360,2,0,P|196:88|232:96,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,112,17702,2,0,P|300:140|292:172,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,212,18045,2,0,L|180:252,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,18388,2,0,L|300:336,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,352,18731,6,0,L|180:308,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,344,19074,2,0,L|72:288,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,248,19417,1,4,0:0:0:0:
216,96,19760,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,152,19931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,172,20102,2,0,L|296:192,1,52.5000020027161
376,212,20445,2,0,L|360:272,2,52.5000020027161
420,116,20959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,64,21131,6,0,L|360:36,3,26.2500010013581
324,56,21474,2,0,L|312:32,3,26.2500010013581
288,64,21817,2,0,L|256:52,3,26.2500010013581
256,96,22160,2,0,L|228:100,2,26.2500010013581
280,172,22502,5,2,3:0:0:0:
200,180,22674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,112,22845,1,0,3:0:0:0:
84,148,23017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,23188,1,0,3:0:0:0:
164,248,23360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,248,23531,2,0,P|196:252|236:240,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,216,23874,5,2,3:0:0:0:
288,216,24045,2,0,P|292:184|284:148,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,24388,2,0,P|224:92|192:96,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,24731,2,0,P|196:168|232:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,25074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,25245,1,2,3:0:0:0:
276,244,25417,6,0,P|244:240|208:248,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
148,264,25760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,264,25931,1,0,3:0:0:0:
80,224,26102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,26274,2,0,P|96:328|124:340,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,344,26617,5,2,3:0:0:0:
272,332,26788,2,0,L|312:280,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
356,228,27131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,27302,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,176,27474,2,0,P|392:156|352:152,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
292,156,27817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,104,27988,5,2,3:0:0:0:
172,152,28160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,204,28331,2,0,P|224:232|240:272,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,300,28674,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,344,28845,2,0,P|192:348|168:340,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
120,288,29188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,29360,5,2,3:0:0:0:
120,208,29531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,156,29702,1,0,3:0:0:0:
212,228,29874,2,0,P|240:232|280:220,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
284,152,30217,2,0,P|312:148|352:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
380,220,30560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,108,30731,6,0,L|384:56,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,40,31074,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,84,31245,2,0,P|228:88|188:76,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
136,52,31588,2,0,P|108:48|76:56,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
112,124,31931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,248,32102,6,0,L|156:304,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,32445,1,0,3:0:0:0:
240,276,32617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,352,32788,2,0,P|292:356|328:344,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,284,33131,1,0,3:0:0:0:
356,284,33302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,33474,6,0,P|264:168|240:172,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,224,33817,1,0,3:0:0:0:
264,244,33988,2,0,P|292:248|324:240,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,34331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,34502,2,0,P|383:165|376:136,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,80,34845,6,0,L|240:152,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,164,35188,1,0,3:0:0:0:
180,164,35360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,144,35531,2,0,P|100:112|112:76,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,28,35874,2,0,P|180:24|216:32,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,96,36217,5,2,3:0:0:0:
312,96,36388,2,0,L|348:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,36731,2,0,L|260:156,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
208,220,37074,2,0,P|180:224|152:220,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
88,184,37417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,308,37588,6,0,L|188:352,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,356,37931,1,0,3:0:0:0:
320,340,38102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,38274,2,0,L|412:240,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,38617,2,0,L|380:141,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,228,38960,6,0,P|260:232|235:228,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,39302,1,0,3:0:0:0:
236,140,39474,2,0,P|264:144|300:136,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
316,68,39817,2,0,P|288:64|256:68,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
188,68,40160,6,0,B|144:112|128:176|160:236|256:212|176:200|124:216|164:280,1,245
264,144,41702,6,0,L|312:232,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,280,42045,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,280,42217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,348,42388,2,0,P|344:356|384:344,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,268,42731,2,0,P|436:260|488:280,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,184,43074,6,0,L|436:100,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,184,43417,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,184,43588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,236,43760,2,0,P|260:216|188:240,1,140,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44445,6,0,L|156:112,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,76,44788,2,0,P|240:68|280:80,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,45130,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,96,45302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,45474,2,0,P|352:220|344:248,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,45817,6,0,P|256:232|276:184,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,152,46160,1,0,3:0:0:0:
196,152,46331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,46502,2,0,L|188:300,2,70,0|0|0,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
88,280,47017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,344,47188,5,2,3:0:0:0:
220,356,47360,2,0,P|256:360|300:352,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,47702,2,0,L|268:212,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
328,156,48045,2,0,L|272:88,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
364,76,48388,6,0,P|400:68|440:84,1,70,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,48731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,48902,2,0,P|436:220|472:296,1,140,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
392,316,49417,2,0,P|352:308|316:320,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,260,49760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,204,49931,6,0,L|356:120,2,70,2|0|0,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,148,50445,2,0,P|220:140|184:148,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,176,50788,2,0,P|108:208|128:264,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
200,260,51131,6,0,P|116:332|28:252,1,245,8|4,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
191,145,52674,5,4,0:0:0:0:
280,252,52902,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,288,53131,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,168,53360,2,0,P|340:88|376:32,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,252,54045,6,0,L|332:340,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,316,54388,2,0,P|196:276|196:228,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,54731,2,0,P|336:192|416:156,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,55245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,55417,6,0,P|192:44|148:56,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,116,55760,2,0,L|36:188,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,180,56102,2,0,P|196:216|204:308,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,276,56617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,368,56788,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,360,56960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,57131,2,0,P|360:268|408:292,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,57474,2,0,P|432:100|364:64,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,57988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,58160,2,0,P|328:200|264:220,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,58502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58760,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58845,2,0,P|140:132|176:116,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,132,59188,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,48,59360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,52,59531,2,0,P|384:44|432:60,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,131,59874,2,0,P|318:139|274:131,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,60217,2,0,P|180:120|232:220,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,260,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,296,60902,6,0,P|408:340|392:388,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,344,61245,2,0,P|260:352|220:344,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,61588,2,0,L|64:208,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,136,61931,2,0,L|188:216,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,100,62274,6,0,L|148:32,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,8,62617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,100,62788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,62960,2,0,P|276:280|212:360,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63645,6,0,L|288:268,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,63988,2,0,L|292:176,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,64331,2,0,P|148:108|172:52,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,64588,2,0,P|244:40|304:60,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,72,64845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
268,196,65017,6,0,P|312:208|352:196,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,84,65360,1,6,3:0:0:0:
420,84,65531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,65702,2,0,P|444:260|428:308,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66045,2,0,P|296:304|316:252,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,148,66388,5,6,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66731,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,160,67074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,352,67417,1,6,0:0:0:0:
340,224,67760,6,0,P|392:212|444:232,1,105.000004005432
392,292,68274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68445,2,0,L|445:348,1,52.5000020027161
360,368,68788,2,0,L|304:304,1,78.7500030040742
272,296,69131,6,0,P|172:328|64:292,1,210.000008010865
160,168,70160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70502,6,0,P|248:152|336:184,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,232,71017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,148,71188,2,0,P|468:104|452:52,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,28,71531,2,0,P|320:16|284:24,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,71874,6,0,P|224:204|128:236,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,72560,2,0,L|296:256,1,167.999994873047
416,92,73245,5,2,3:0:0:0:
300,160,73474,1,4,3:0:0:0:
428,204,73702,2,0,P|436:248|428:292,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,312,73931,2,0,P|376:316|336:308,1,55.9999982910157,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,74445,5,4,3:0:0:0:
192,88,74617,1,4,3:0:0:0:
296,176,74845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
168,224,75074,2,0,P|128:232|84:224,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,248,75302,2,0,P|52:292|60:336,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,60,75988,5,4,3:0:0:0:
244,180,76217,1,4,3:0:0:0:
384,192,76445,2,0,P|392:232|368:272,1,55.9999982910157,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,300,76674,2,0,P|336:304|296:296,1,55.9999982910157,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,76902,2,0,P|208:256|152:276,1,111.999996582031,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,224,77360,6,0,P|44:140|92:44,1,167.999994873047,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,148,78045,2,0,P|256:164|340:136,1,157.500006008148
256,192,78731,12,0,81474,0:0:0:0:
256,136,82160,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,136,82845,1,2,3:0:0:0:
284,260,83188,1,8,3:0:0:0:
164,224,83531,1,4,1:0:0:0:
112,100,84217,5,4,3:0:0:0:
164,224,84445,1,4,3:0:0:0:
264,124,84674,1,4,3:0:0:0:
348,236,84902,1,4,3:0:0:0:
464,156,85131,1,4,3:0:0:0:
380,44,85360,1,4,1:0:0:0:
Seijiro

General


  • I don't know what's up with the ping-pong sounds but I highly suggest changing them. They look like they've been taken from a skin and placed here. For now I checked the Extra only, but the hitsounding is almost non-existant since you just switch from a sampleset to another, without using any additions.
    Edit: it was just a problem on the Extra, but the general hitsounding may be improved everywhere.

________________



Collab Extra


  • 00:00:560 - Unrankable: do not place 2 timing points at the same timing with different volumes

    00:10:417 (1) - I would silence the spinner's end since it's a bit too loud and breaks the rhythm for the next part

    00:17:360 (2) - since this object is stacked under the previous slider's tail you create an awkward jump on a red tick on the next slider. Why don't you try stacking this on top of 00:17:531 (3) - instead?

    00:24:388 (3) - just personal preference here: maybe a Ctrl + G to emphasize even more the vocals?

    00:30:388 (4,1) - nazi stuff, but they're a bit too close to each other imo. Can you separate them more?

    00:36:217 (1,2,3) - This spacing is a bit awkward too. Visually, there is the same spacing between these 3 objects, yet they have a different snap on the time line.
    00:38:960 (1,2,3) - same

    00:38:102 (3,4,5) - Since this section is using a lot those 3/4 beats I would rather avoid placing little pieces of 1/2 rhythms

    00:41:531 (2,2) - I don't really like overlaps :/

    00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - There isn't much telling me this is going to be a 1/3 slider jump section tho. They just appear and go at their own pace.
    I would give some visual sign to recognize the 1/3 parts, like a different combo color just for them or a similar pattern used over and over, and so on

    01:01:245 (2,2) - again, overlap :/

    01:03:131 (4) - this feels too weak, since you have an awfully low spacing between 01:02:960 (3,4) - after having a lot of spacing before.

    01:04:331 (3,4) - Trust me, no one can read this at first sight. You literally have a 1/6 jump on a repeat slider the opposite way of the slider's direction: it's an overkill lol

    01:05:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well, maybe I'm just dumb, but I can't really figure out the idea behind these random jumps tbh. Just because the song goes full burst it doesn't mean you can place objects here and there xD

    01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - As I mentioned before, it would be cool to put a visual warning for these 1/3 sections

    01:17:360 (1,2,3) - I find this spacing way too low compared to the other patterns around

    01:22:074 (9,10) - another really big jump, this time it is the first seeing another jump after the circle . This jump feels strange because you made the player play 01:19:417 (3,4,5) - this pattern already twice, so once he arrives at this one he will think it is the same and it will miss on the slider

________________



Kami's Insane


  • 00:00:560 - Unrankable: 2 timing sections at the same timing have different volumes

    Your custom drum finish should be used as a finish, and not as a whistle here: 00:06:731 (4,1,4) - there are too many
    Remove finish from 00:07:245 (1) -
    00:10:502 (3) - same

    00:20:102 (3,6) - again, those finishers are too much. Try with a soft whistle instead (the default one)
    00:36:731 (3) - remove finish
    00:39:474 (3) - same
    00:47:702 (3) - same
    00:50:102 (2) - same (from repeat only)

    00:37:760 (2) - it feels a bit forced as it is now. Ctrl + G?

    01:07:760 (1) - Can you maybe improve this shape a little? x) It's a bit sloppy imo
Really nice diff *^*

________________



Insane


  • 00:00:560 - Unrankable: 2 timing points at the same timing with different volumes and samplesets aren't allowed

    00:44:274 (1) - imo this slider should be in the opposite direction, otherwise feels forced on the jump. Like this

    01:06:902 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing here. Make sure that visually, you can tell what snaps the notes are following

    01:11:874 (3,4) - Intentional spacing here? Imo it is too short

    01:20:445 (2) - How did you creater this slider to make it have so many waypoints on it? o.O
    Once you fix that , try doing a Ctrl + G on it for flow reasons

    01:22:845 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - that ping-pong sound is terrible, really

    Reduce OD to 7, since this is an Insane and it has just 4 stars and a half (also the Extra is already OD8, so there's no need for other diffs like that)

________________



B r o k e n's Hard


  • 00:30:731 - 00:41:702 - in this section I would reduce note density, since it feels too heavy for a Hard diff

    01:13:702 (3) - slider end not snapped
    01:15:074 (4) - slider end not snapped

    The spacing between 01:22:845 (2,3,4) - and 01:24:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is misleading. In particular, the first section feels too slow (aka, spacing is too short)
Generally, the map is solid, but feels a bit too cramped in the first half. See if you can remove some beats and increase spacing there.

________________



Jami's Normal


  • Open AIMod and check all the spacings. There are 5 places where you break DS, please fix them

    00:57:474 (2,5) - overlap kinda ugly

    01:13:245 (5) - It's a bit hard to read even number of repeats for beginners, be careful
Apart from the fact you didn't map the first 10 seconds of the song, I would like to point out that the diff itself is rhythmically correct, but the aethetical side of it is lacking quality. What I mean is mostly "tidiness", "meaning for patterns" and "basic flow".
00:21:131 (6,7,1) - "tidiness". This pattern isn't really tidy imo as well as many other patterns. The reason I say this is because there are curved sliders which are usually meant for blanketing, yet they're used loosely just to move the cursor from a point to another

00:38:960 (1,2,3,4) - "meaning of patterns". What is this pattern supposed to tell the player? How is it good to use it for this part of the song? Are there particular reason as to why the objects are placed as they are? And so on... Try to ask you these questions when placing objects

00:42:388 (2,3) - "basic flow". The slider is curved towards the right side of the screen, but the next circle is on the left side: why? In case you have particular reasons to break a natural flow like this, it's fine, but on Normal/Easy diffs we try to make it so beginners catch the flow and the rhythm at first sight with not many "tricks" or such.

________________



Asaiga's Easy


  • 00:01:931 (2,3) - One of the most basic rules of Easy diffs is to avoid overlaps. Please, try to change this pattern with something else
    00:03:302 (3,4) - same

    00:08:788 (3,4) - another basic rule of making Easy diffs: no stacks, no matter what is the situation. They are hard to read because the player doesn't see the starting point of it
    00:10:160 (4,1) - same

    00:17:017 (2,3) - 2 is pointing upwards of the screen, while 3 is sitting below it. This is aclled forced flow, and unless there is a particular trick into the music, this feels off.

    00:36:217 (1,2) - overlap

    00:38:960 (1,2) - I assume these sliders are following the same sound, right? If that's the case, you should use the same slider shape for similar sounds, since music is almost a matter of repetition. The same should happen in the map.
    The map as to follow the song, and if the song is like that you should follow it.

    00:41:702 (1,2) - overlap

    00:45:817 (4,5) - same. You also forgot a New Combo on 00:44:445 (3,5) - both of them

    01:14:274 (2) - I wouldn't use this circle, since this part is playing with 1/3 beats and it might become confusing

    01:15:988 (4) - You forgot a NC here

Contact me in PM if any of you need more clarification about my mod~
Topic Starter
PlasticMemor

MrSergio wrote:

General


  • I don't know what's up with the ping-pong sounds but I highly suggest changing them. They look like they've been taken from a skin and placed here. For now I checked the Extra only, but the hitsounding is almost non-existant since you just switch from a sampleset to another, without using any additions.
    Edit: it was just a problem on the Extra, but the general hitsounding may be improved everywhere.

Collab Extra


  • 00:00:560 - Unrankable: do not place 2 timing points at the same timing with different volumes


    00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - There isn't much telling me this is going to be a 1/3 slider jump section tho. They just appear and go at their own pace.
    I would give some visual sign to recognize the 1/3 parts, like a different combo color just for them or a similar pattern used over and over, and so on
    adjusted the jump patterns and added new combo color

    01:01:245 (2,2) - again, overlap :/ done

    01:03:131 (4) - this feels too weak, since you have an awfully low spacing between 01:02:960 (3,4) - after having a lot of spacing before. changed slider intirely

    01:04:331 (3,4) - Trust me, no one can read this at first sight. You literally have a 1/6 jump on a repeat slider the opposite way of the slider's direction: it's an overkill lol done

    01:05:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well, maybe I'm just dumb, but I can't really figure out the idea behind these random jumps tbh. Just because the song goes full burst it doesn't mean you can place objects here and there xD it is suppose to be emphasize on the vocal

    01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - As I mentioned before, it would be cool to put a visual warning for these 1/3 sections done

    01:17:360 (1,2,3) - I find this spacing way too low compared to the other patterns around done

    01:22:074 (9,10) - another really big jump, this time it is the first seeing another jump after the circle . This jump feels strange because you made the player play 01:19:417 (3,4,5) - this pattern already twice, so once he arrives at this one he will think it is the same and it will miss on the slider changed pattern


________________



Insane


  • 00:00:560 - Unrankable: 2 timing points at the same timing with different volumes and samplesets aren't allowed

    00:44:274 (1) - imo this slider should be in the opposite direction, otherwise feels forced on the jump. Like this

    01:06:902 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing here. Make sure that visually, you can tell what snaps the notes are following

    01:11:874 (3,4) - Intentional spacing here? Imo it is too short

    01:20:445 (2) - How did you creater this slider to make it have so many waypoints on it? o.O
    Once you fix that , try doing a Ctrl + G on it for flow reasons

    01:22:845 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - that ping-pong sound is terrible, really

    Reduce OD to 7, since this is an Insane and it has just 4 stars and a half (also the Extra is already OD8, so there's no need for other diffs like that)
fixed all above^

________________




Contact me in PM if any of you need more clarification about my mod~
thank you for your mod
Battle


m4m from q lol

[General]
Green lines unsnapped, snap them

[Easy]
00:01:931 (2,3,4) - You should avoid overlaps in easy, they look visually unappealing and can lead to reading complications for beginners
00:10:160 (4) - I don't really see a reason to stack here due to the fact that the pitch in the music got higher, so you would expect some emphasis
00:10:160 (4,1) - Players may not expect how fast 1 comes since all this time there's been a beat that was skipped
01:24:217 (2) - You'd want to make the turns go along with the white ticks

Overall the diff is pretty meh, like, a lot of the things could be improved visually, and overall it's just bland, because of the fact that it just feels like you're mindlessly clicking in a pretty set rhythm up until the kiai. The increased density of the kiai may catch people off-guard, so that's another thing to watch out for

[Normal]
Start is really inconsistent, there's no rhythm structure that you vary from really, it's just a bunch of random variation tbh
00:14:960 (2,3) - ds
00:17:702 (6,1) - Why is there a gap before and after .-.
00:21:131 (6,7) - There is a pretty prominent string instrument playing, but you continue to go with 1/2 slider which leaves it unemphasized and rather boring
00:23:188 (2,3) - ds
00:23:874 (3,4) - ds
00:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do you really feel like making them all single taps with no clear reason, without anything really increasing intensity in the song makes sense?
00:32:102 (3,4,1) - An extremely curved into a lightly curved slider doesn't look good visually lol
00:33:474 (1,2,3) - ds
00:34:845 (3,4) - ds
00:34:502 (2,3,4,1) - having the directional change on 3 makes the direction change w/ 1 less emphasized, it would be better if you just made it flow up until 1 and broke the flow there since it was the downbeat
00:36:217 (1) - Need to mention how a really urved slider like this plus the adjacent sliders to this make it look really visually unappealing
00:40:331 (3,4) - Should avoid overlaps tbh
00:57:474 (2,5) - these are on the screen at the same time so it looks REALLY bad
01:13:245 (5) - inconsistent w/ 01:14:617 (1,2,3) - shouldn't this have an nc as well? plus two repeats on a normal is very unexpected
01:24:217 (4) - nc maybe

needs a lot of work

[Hard]
00:06:217 (2,3,4) - shift this part of the pattern down a bit, overlaps w/ slider body :/\
00:40:160 (1) - maybe try sv of like .6, the change of .75 to .5 may be too drastic, slider shape could improve tbh
00:52:674 (1,2,3) - Make the 1/3 equal distance or visually similar, it might be hard to read if it isn't
01:10:160 (2,3,4) - aren't the vocals 1/3?

[K. Insane]
The hitsound you use for D:C1 finish really doesn't fit
00:10:502 (3,4) - Emphasizing 3 really takes away from 4, might as well try to prioritize 4's emphasis since the intensity is rising
00:23:531 (1,2) - Strong drums on both beats, so why is 1 not emphasized?
00:31:931 (1) - Why not make the fourth node red as well for a nicer shape?
01:04:331 (3,4) - rhythm would be better if you had 3 be a 1/2 slider, place 4 on 01:04:588 - and add a note on 01:04:845 -

[Insane]
00:11:874 (4,5) - lol u could blanket this if u really wanted to, it kinda just looks awkward w/ how curved 4 is
00:32:102 (6) - Since the claps really fit, you might want to try to add emphasis to these notes, mayb make them single taps and jumps or sth idk lol
00:33:474 (1) - head and repeat should have clap to keep consistency w/ ^
00:34:845 (1,2) - same, im not too picky on hitsounds so you kinda need to fix it yourself lol cuz I'm not pointing any more out zz
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - all these patterns are extremely, boring


y a
Asaiga

Shiratoi wrote:

[Asaiga's Easy]
00:00:560 (1,2) - tad bit not straight according to followpoint
00:01:931 (2,3,4) - why the overlap? xd
00:07:417 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:08:788 (3,4) - dunno bout this since its a bit hard to read for easy
00:10:160 (4,1) - ^
00:13:588 (3,4) - maybe blanket?
00:17:017 (2) - this doesnt match any rhythm imo Fixed to a slider
00:27:988 (1,2) - doesnt match the song??
00:30:731 - just maybe
00:36:217 (1,2) - overlap again
00:38:960 (1,2) - make this similar?
00:41:702 (1,2) - overlapp aopngg[apgnsw Isn't this allowed :s
00:43:074 (2,3) - blanket? It wasn't meant to be a blanket, due to no space.
00:43:074 (2,3) - overoveroveroverlap
00:49:931 (1,2) - similar pls I will take note
01:24:217 (2) - its just really pretty :D Thanks

MrSergio wrote:

Asaiga's Easy


  • 00:01:931 (2,3) - One of the most basic rules of Easy diffs is to avoid overlaps. Please, try to change this pattern with something else Okay I got it
    00:03:302 (3,4) - same

    00:08:788 (3,4) - another basic rule of making Easy diffs: no stacks, no matter what is the situation. They are hard to read because the player doesn't see the starting point of it Haaaiii
    00:10:160 (4,1) - same

    00:17:017 (2,3) - 2 is pointing upwards of the screen, while 3 is sitting below it. This is aclled forced flow, and unless there is a particular trick into the music, this feels off. I will watch out

    00:36:217 (1,2) - overlap I see

    00:38:960 (1,2) - I assume these sliders are following the same sound, right? If that's the case, you should use the same slider shape for similar sounds, since music is almost a matter of repetition. The same should happen in the map.
    The map as to follow the song, and if the song is like that you should follow it. Learned

    00:41:702 (1,2) - overlap I thought it was allowed since it's easy to see. I should not map Easy lol

    00:45:817 (4,5) - same. You also forgot a New Combo on 00:44:445 (3,5) - both of them Fixed

    01:14:274 (2) - I wouldn't use this circle, since this part is playing with 1/3 beats and it might become confusing Deleted

    01:15:988 (4) - You forgot a NC here

Contact me in PM if any of you need more clarification about my mod~

Battle wrote:

[img]
I will post my remap soon this week, since a few lines of mods could change a lot of stuffs in Easy and I'm busy with school works now ;(
I took down notes that I could use to improve on my next version. If you ask people for mods, exclude my diffs until I update it. Thanks :3
Topic Starter
PlasticMemor

Battle wrote:



m4m from q lol

[General]
Green lines unsnapped, snap them done on my diffs lol

[Insane]
00:11:874 (4,5) - lol u could blanket this if u really wanted to, it kinda just looks awkward w/ how curved 4 is
00:32:102 (6) - Since the claps really fit, you might want to try to add emphasis to these notes, mayb make them single taps and jumps or sth idk lol
00:33:474 (1) - head and repeat should have clap to keep consistency w/ ^
00:34:845 (1,2) - same, im not too picky on hitsounds so you kinda need to fix it yourself lol cuz I'm not pointing any more out zz
01:13:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - all these patterns are extremely, boring

^ fixed all, but pattern i will keep same because it is only insane
y a
thank you for mod i will mod your map by either thursday or friday
edit:mod please deny kudos because i made mistakeeee
B r o k e n
MrSergio's Mod
00:30:731 - 00:41:702 - in this section I would reduce note density, since it feels too heavy for a Hard diff did some adjustments, removed most double stack single note, changed 5 sliders into 1/1 sliders

01:13:702 (3) - slider end not snapped snapped on 1/6, not sure if I should keep it like this tho, seems a bit hard for hard?
01:15:074 (4) - slider end not snapped ^

The spacing between 01:22:845 (2,3,4) - and 01:24:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is misleading. In particular, the first section feels too slow (aka, spacing is too short)k, same distance

Generally, the map is solid, but feels a bit too cramped in the first half. See if you can remove some beats and increase spacing there.looked thourgh the first half a couple times, not even sure what to remove or to make into 1/1 sliders, I pretty much like it the way it is

Battle's mod
00:06:217 (2,3,4) - shift this part of the pattern down a bit, overlaps w/ slider body :/\ this area has been adjusted in a different mod, or I have no idea what you ment
00:40:160 (1) - maybe try sv of like .6, the change of .75 to .5 may be too drastic, slider shape could improve tbh this is fine, I SUCK AT SLIDER SHAPE OK, T.T
00:52:674 (1,2,3) - Make the 1/3 equal distance or visually similar, it might be hard to read if it isn't what the heck, was pretty sure I did same DS it, adjusted
01:10:160 (2,3,4) - aren't the vocals 1/3? pretty sure it is, but I wasn't sure to map it on 1/3 because it seems a bit hard to read so I left it on 1/4 and just did a 4note stream into slider for easy read

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 43688,60402,84402
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:962746
BeatmapSetID:440761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"kabane.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
560,342.857142857143,4,2,0,60,1,0
560,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
6045,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
11360,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,0
19760,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,0
40160,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
41702,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
51131,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
52674,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
54045,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,1
67760,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
70502,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,1
78045,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
84217,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 55,55,55
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 192,192,192

[HitObjects]
144,64,560,6,0,P|248:96|352:60,1,210,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,76,1931,2,0,P|448:172|416:292,1,210
340,280,3302,2,0,P|316:160|348:76,1,210
264,64,4674,2,0,P|164:88|60:64,1,210
184,178,6045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
302,100,6217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,184,6388,2,0,P|302:216|330:248,1,70
384,196,6731,2,0,P|356:124|288:100,1,140
228,132,7245,6,0,P|192:140|148:128,1,70
100,72,7588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,8,7760,2,0,P|192:4|240:16,1,70
288,64,8102,2,0,P|364:80|432:64,1,140
428,236,8788,6,0,L|468:304,1,70
388,336,9131,2,0,L|344:264,1,70
300,212,9474,2,0,P|232:188|156:224,1,140
92,240,9988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,292,10160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
28,292,10331,2,0,P|20:328|28:368,1,70
104,328,10674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,284,10845,2,0,P|240:268|328:304,1,140
388,296,11360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,296,11445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,296,11531,6,0,L|416:244,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,172,11874,2,0,L|400:124,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,68,12217,1,0,3:0:0:0:
288,116,12388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,12560,2,0,P|192:164|168:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,116,12902,5,2,3:0:0:0:
52,172,13074,2,0,L|52:228,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,13417,2,0,P|140:268|180:256,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,13760,2,0,L|272:280,2,52.5000020027161,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,156,14274,2,0,L|316:216,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,156,14617,2,0,L|324:100,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,14960,2,0,P|428:84|440:128,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
472,276,15645,6,0,L|408:232,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,276,15988,2,0,P|324:280|284:268,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,16331,2,0,P|212:228|172:236,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,16674,1,0,3:0:0:0:
84,192,16845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,16931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,17017,6,0,L|112:144,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,92,17360,2,0,P|196:88|232:96,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,112,17702,2,0,P|300:140|292:172,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,212,18045,2,0,L|180:252,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,18388,2,0,L|300:336,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,352,18731,6,0,L|180:308,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,344,19074,2,0,L|72:288,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,248,19417,1,4,0:0:0:0:
216,96,19760,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,152,19931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,172,20102,2,0,L|296:192,1,52.5000020027161
376,212,20445,2,0,L|360:272,2,52.5000020027161
420,116,20959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,64,21131,6,0,L|360:36,3,26.2500010013581
324,56,21474,2,0,L|312:32,3,26.2500010013581
288,64,21817,2,0,L|256:52,3,26.2500010013581
256,96,22160,2,0,L|228:100,2,26.2500010013581
280,172,22502,5,2,3:0:0:0:
200,180,22674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,112,22845,1,0,3:0:0:0:
84,148,23017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,23188,1,0,3:0:0:0:
164,248,23360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,248,23531,2,0,P|196:252|236:240,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,216,23874,5,2,3:0:0:0:
288,216,24045,2,0,P|292:184|284:148,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,24388,2,0,P|224:92|192:96,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,24731,2,0,P|196:168|232:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,25074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,25245,1,2,3:0:0:0:
276,244,25417,6,0,P|244:240|208:248,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
148,264,25760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,264,25931,1,0,3:0:0:0:
80,224,26102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,26274,2,0,P|96:328|124:340,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,344,26617,5,2,3:0:0:0:
272,332,26788,2,0,L|312:280,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
356,228,27131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,27302,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,176,27474,2,0,P|392:156|352:152,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
292,156,27817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,104,27988,5,2,3:0:0:0:
172,152,28160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,204,28331,2,0,P|224:232|240:272,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,300,28674,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,344,28845,2,0,P|192:348|168:340,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
120,288,29188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,29360,5,2,3:0:0:0:
120,208,29531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,156,29702,1,0,3:0:0:0:
212,228,29874,2,0,P|240:232|280:220,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
284,152,30217,2,0,P|312:148|352:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
400,196,30560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,76,30731,6,0,P|384:60|320:76,1,105.000004005432,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,84,31245,2,0,P|228:88|188:76,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
136,52,31588,2,0,P|108:48|76:56,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
28,108,31931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,232,32102,6,0,L|124:312,1,105.000004005432,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
184,364,32617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,352,32788,2,0,P|292:356|328:344,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,284,33131,1,0,3:0:0:0:
356,284,33302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,33474,6,0,P|240:160|192:180,1,105.000004005432,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,33988,2,0,P|260:252|292:244,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
356,216,34331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,148,34502,2,0,P|407:121|396:88,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,80,34845,6,0,L|228:188,1,105.000004005432,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
156,200,35360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,144,35531,2,0,P|100:112|112:76,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,28,35874,2,0,P|180:24|216:32,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,96,36217,5,2,3:0:0:0:
312,96,36388,2,0,L|348:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,36731,2,0,L|260:156,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
208,220,37074,2,0,P|180:224|152:220,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
88,184,37417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,300,37588,6,0,L|240:352,1,105.000004005432,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
308,356,38102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,316,38274,2,0,L|404:244,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,38617,2,0,L|380:141,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,228,38960,6,0,P|260:232|235:228,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,39302,1,0,3:0:0:0:
236,140,39474,2,0,P|264:144|300:136,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
316,68,39817,2,0,P|288:64|256:68,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
188,68,40160,6,0,B|144:112|128:176|160:236|256:212|176:200|124:216|164:280,1,245
264,144,41702,6,0,L|312:232,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,280,42045,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,280,42217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,348,42388,2,0,P|344:356|384:344,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,268,42731,2,0,P|436:260|488:280,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,184,43074,6,0,L|436:100,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,184,43417,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,184,43588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,236,43760,2,0,P|260:216|188:240,1,140,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44445,6,0,L|156:112,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,76,44788,2,0,P|240:68|280:80,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,45130,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,96,45302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,45474,2,0,P|352:220|344:248,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,45817,6,0,P|256:232|276:184,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,152,46160,1,0,3:0:0:0:
196,152,46331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,46502,2,0,L|188:300,2,70,0|0|0,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
88,280,47017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,344,47188,5,2,3:0:0:0:
220,356,47360,2,0,P|256:360|300:352,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,47702,2,0,L|268:212,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
328,156,48045,2,0,L|272:88,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
364,76,48388,6,0,P|400:68|440:84,1,70,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,48731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,48902,2,0,P|436:220|472:296,1,140,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
392,316,49417,2,0,P|352:308|316:320,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,260,49760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,204,49931,6,0,L|356:120,2,70,2|0|0,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,148,50445,2,0,P|220:140|184:148,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,176,50788,2,0,P|108:208|128:264,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
200,260,51131,6,0,P|116:332|28:252,1,245,8|4,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
191,145,52674,5,4,0:0:0:0:
280,252,52902,1,4,0:0:0:0:
384,288,53131,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,168,53360,2,0,P|340:88|376:32,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,252,54045,6,0,L|332:340,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,316,54388,2,0,P|196:276|196:228,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,54731,2,0,P|336:192|416:156,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,55245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,55417,6,0,P|192:44|148:56,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,116,55760,2,0,L|36:188,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,180,56102,2,0,P|196:216|204:308,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,276,56617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,368,56788,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,360,56960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,57131,2,0,P|360:268|408:292,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,57474,2,0,P|432:100|364:64,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,57988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,58160,2,0,P|328:200|264:220,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,58502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58760,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58845,2,0,P|140:132|176:116,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,132,59188,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,48,59360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,52,59531,2,0,P|384:44|432:60,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
358,131,59874,2,0,P|318:139|274:131,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,60217,2,0,P|180:120|232:220,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,260,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,296,60902,6,0,P|408:340|392:388,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,344,61245,2,0,P|260:352|220:344,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,61588,2,0,L|64:208,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,136,61931,2,0,L|188:216,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,100,62274,6,0,L|148:32,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,8,62617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,100,62788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,62960,2,0,P|276:280|212:360,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63645,6,0,L|288:268,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,63988,2,0,L|292:176,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,64331,2,0,P|148:108|172:52,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,64588,2,0,P|244:40|304:60,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,72,64845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
268,196,65017,6,0,P|312:208|352:196,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,84,65360,1,6,3:0:0:0:
420,84,65531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,65702,2,0,P|444:260|428:308,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66045,2,0,P|296:304|316:252,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,148,66388,5,6,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66731,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,160,67074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,352,67417,1,6,0:0:0:0:
340,224,67760,6,0,P|392:212|444:232,1,105.000004005432
392,292,68274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68445,2,0,L|445:348,1,52.5000020027161
360,368,68788,2,0,L|304:304,1,78.7500030040742
272,296,69131,6,0,P|172:328|64:292,1,210.000008010865
160,168,70160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,168,70502,6,0,P|248:152|336:184,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,232,71017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,148,71188,2,0,P|468:104|452:52,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,28,71531,2,0,P|320:16|284:24,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,71874,6,0,P|224:204|128:236,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,72560,2,0,L|296:256,1,167.999994873047
416,92,73245,5,2,3:0:0:0:
300,160,73474,1,4,3:0:0:0:
428,204,73702,2,0,P|436:248|428:292,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,312,73931,2,0,P|376:316|336:308,1,55.9999982910157,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,74445,5,4,3:0:0:0:
192,88,74617,1,4,3:0:0:0:
296,176,74845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
168,224,75074,2,0,P|128:232|84:224,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,248,75302,2,0,P|52:292|60:336,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,60,75988,5,4,3:0:0:0:
244,180,76217,1,4,3:0:0:0:
384,192,76445,2,0,P|392:232|368:272,1,55.9999982910157,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,300,76674,2,0,P|336:304|296:296,1,55.9999982910157,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,76902,2,0,P|208:256|152:276,1,111.999996582031,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,224,77360,6,0,P|44:140|92:44,1,167.999994873047,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,148,78045,2,0,P|256:164|340:136,1,157.500006008148
256,192,78731,12,0,81474,0:0:0:0:
256,136,82160,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,136,82845,1,2,3:0:0:0:
292,288,83188,1,8,3:0:0:0:
152,216,83531,1,4,1:0:0:0:
120,76,84217,5,4,3:0:0:0:
152,216,84445,1,4,3:0:0:0:
260,128,84674,1,4,3:0:0:0:
348,236,84902,1,4,3:0:0:0:
468,160,85131,1,4,3:0:0:0:
388,44,85360,1,4,1:0:0:0:
Kami-senpai
Breezy

Breezy wrote:

Kami's Insane


hi again lol

00:05:017 (2) - This slider shape doesn't really fit in too much with the sharp curve, a simple straight slider that is slightly tilting downwards to the right would play nicely.

00:08:102 (4) - You can stack this similarly to 00:07:931 (3) for consistency.

00:09:474 (4) - Nothing wrong with the slider shape, but it would look cooler if you make a symmetrical one out of this.

00:10:845 (4) - Similar to the stacking suggestion two above ^^

00:11:360 (5,6,1) - Would look nicer if it was blanketed closer in my opinion.

00:12:731 (4) - If you did my previous suggestion above, I would stack this note on the triplet to form a blanket as well. I personally don't how it plays being stacked on the same note afterwards. It plays fine imo. Stacking on the triplet makes a linear jump (which I don't like kek)

00:16:331 (6) - Blanket would look nicer with a slightly greater curve to it.

00:20:617 (5) - Stack looks slightly different compared to (4) and (6) in this combo.

00:22:674 (2) - I think this plays better stacked on (4)'s tail, the spacing is kind of large here.

00:23:702 (2) - Feels too far, try 264/244. Adjust it also if you want to stack it differently. Moved it, but didn't make it as close as you suggested

00:24:217 (4) - Kind of an awkward flow here, maybe try somewhere below the previous slider?

00:24:388 (5) - Curve this a little more to form a more even blanket with (3) in the next combo since it's uneven. It wouldn't be good to adjust the (3) since it would ruin the upcoming pattern you have.

00:28:160 (4) - Plays better stacked on (2) in the previous combo in my opinion.

00:28:845 (2) - Curve to match the pattern more? All the piano noises here are curved sliders. For flow, I'm going to keep it straight

00:33:302 (2) - Doesn't fit in as a kick-slider, I would suggest a triplet instead. I think the slider fits the song more, but I'll keep that in mind

00:47:017 (8) - Move to 328/284 for more of an isosceles triangle appearance.

00:49:417 (2,3,4) - Make this more equilateral, if you look at the approach circle of (3) as an example, you will see that the distance is uneven.

00:51:645 (2) - Uneven triangle because of this note's position.

00:53:531 - With the stream here, have you considered using the tool for converting a slider to a stream? It creates a much neater looking stream, and I think it would work great here. If you don't know where it is, go to the top at "Compose" and click on a slider to convert it to a stream. It should be easy to do once you know how it works.

00:57:817 (7,1) - Uneven blanket.

01:04:331 (3,4) - Possible move these somewhere else? The flow to (1) in the next combo is kind of awkward and adjusting that note would ruin the jump pattern you have.

01:06:560 (2,3,4) - I think the current jump patterns you have here are a better choice than this triplet, but it's your choice. Just doing that as a relieve for all the jumps

01:11:188 (4,5) - Increase the curvature on both of these so that they are symmetrical? The reason why I suggest this is because (5) forms an uneven blanket with (2) in the next combo.

01:17:817 (3) - Maybe try a different position for this? The spacing between this note and then to the stream is really small even though the rhythm of the song uses the same emphasis still.

01:18:045 - Same suggestion with the streams that I made.

01:20:102 (1,2) - Blanket these with (1) in the previous combo? Pretty sure that would go out of screen

Collab Extra


00:02:617 (4) - Would look better if slightly unstacked in my opinion.

00:09:988 (4) - I would adjust this curve slightly where it blankets (3) since it appears to be uneven.

00:13:760 (5,6,1) - Make the spacing with these more even?

00:15:645 (1,2,3) - A triplet does not sound right here at all, I would delete this and change it to a slider similar to (4) in this combo.

00:17:360 (2) - I think a more even distance between (1) and (3) would be better for this note.

00:18:388 - In this section, the NC spam isn't really necessary, even though it's for the sake of the appearance with these jumps. If you accept this suggestion, then adjust the patterns at 00:19:074 since these will look weird afterwards without the NC's. I turned off NC for the second combos in each set of four jumps

00:21:131 - Kicksliders don't really fit in well to me with this current pattern, reverse sliders would match this section of the song more mixed in with streams. I really like it though ;-;

00:23:702 (2) - Plays better stacked on (4) in the previous combo because the large spacing doesn't seem necessary. It's to emphasize the sound

00:33:302 (6,1) - Triplet sounds better to me than a kickslider. eh

00:34:845 - Rhythm is really weird here in this section of the song, I would fix it.

00:38:702 (5) - This should be on the red tick.

00:39:474 (3,5) - Slightly uneven blanket.

00:40:331 - Same thing with the NC spam.Now I really like this one

00:47:360 (2) - I think the spacing is more appropriately stacked on the tail of (4).

00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing on these seem very random, it makes transitions into notes uncomfortable to play, such as with (3) and (4). I would try something different with this section.

00:54:388 (2) - Plays better curved the opposite way because of the flow.

00:58:760 - Why skip the mappable triplet here? The vocals allow it.

01:01:588 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - This pattern would look nicer with more equilateral triangles.

01:05:017 - NC spam not necessary here.

01:07:417 (5) - Kind of awkward ending it on a slider? Try jumps still since it's still emphasized here.

01:07:760 - A note here would also be better.

01:09:817 (1,2) - These note aren't really needed in my opinion, I would delete them.

I think I'll just stop here, many recurring things occur throughout the rest of the map and it's hard to properly mod.

There's quite a few aesthetics throughout some of the difficulties that made it look really messy and unpolished such as blankets, inconsistent slider shapes, etc. Good luck with this, feel free to contact me if you have any questions on anything I posted or if any help is needed.

SnowNino

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M
2diff=2diff since the drain time is almost the same XD

  • [Collab Extra]
  1. 00:11:531 - low the volume to 30% or 20%, 50% is too loud for this calm vocal
  2. 00:31:588 (3,4) - just a suggestion, use a slider instead of 2 note to fit the vocal more
  3. 00:33:645 (2) - change to a 1/2 slider, there is a weak sound at 00:33:817 - so you shouldnt ignore it since is the highest diff
  4. 00:34:845 - imo the 3/4 snap here didnt fit the music, there isnt any sound to support the 3/4 notes here
  5. 00:37:588 (1,2,3) - same here
  6. 00:39:731 - mute
  7. 00:58:845 (5) - move to 359 121 to have a better flow, the original is a linear flow and thats kinda bad lol
  8. 00:59:531 (1,2) - awkward spacing, make the spacing bigger
  9. 01:05:360 (1,1) - NC off, the vocal here is 4 4 not 2 2 2 2 (uh hope you understand XD
  10. 01:21:902 (8,9,10) - hmm why dont make the spacing the same?
  • [Kami's Insane]
  1. 00:06:045 - lower the volume to 40%
  2. 00:11:531 - lower the volume to 30% or 20%, same as Collab Extra
  3. 00:38:617 (4) - stack
  4. 01:04:331 (3,4) - the vocal sound here should be like this It's actual 1/3 snap. Not changing it because too unpredictable
  5. 01:06:560 (2,3,4) - although there was a weak drum spund to support the triplet, but ill still change to 2 notes to make this part jumpy
  6. 01:23:874 (5) - delete, no sound to support this note here It's for consistency
GL~

NanoRIPE

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

[Kami's Insane]
00:07:245 (1) - remove finish
00:10:674 (3) - ^

[Collab extra]
None

GL ~

Pentori

Pentori wrote:

m4m

[Kami's Insane]
you have different combo colours here. this is ok but you should consider making all diffs the same for consistency
hp 7 is higher than the extra (hp 6) Kek. Let me change that
this section here 00:30:731 - 00:41:531 is supposed to be a build up from this section 00:22:502 - 00:30:560 yet it gets wayyy easier. consider addressing this issue I disagree. The part where you said should be harder is much slower and softer.
01:04:331 (3,4) - this is actually a 1/3 snap beat (check other diffs) so this isn't following the music correctly It's for predictability sake. I don't want to put an easy repeating slider here.
01:10:502 (1) - where did kiai time go?

[Collab Extra]
00:15:645 (1,2,3) - triplet should be leading into the big white tick with the note here 00:15:560
00:25:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - honestly this is too much single tapping single tap ftw *^*
00:34:845 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - the sound you are mapping to is being played in the background and when you choose to randomly map to it, it makes it very difficult for the player to realise the rhythm has changed
00:37:588 (1,2,3) - ^
00:51:302 (1) - the downbeat should not be stacked
01:04:331 (3) - should be 1/3 snap
01:11:874 (10) - nc
01:12:560 (1) - remove nc

remember to mod my map ^^
hope this helped. gl with rank !
]

Frontier

- Frontier - wrote:

Hi ~ From TH Modding Group !!



[Kami's Insane]
00:01:245 (4) - IMO ctrl+g better flow lmao
00:05:874 (4,5,1) - asymmetry ds D:
00:07:245 (1) - I think it's not compatible with the song 8-) It's mapped to drums
00:10:502 (3) - ^ Cuz there's not a part to the song to map to lmao
00:41:017 (4,6) - I think stack is better :o I think semi-stack is easier to read
01:18:045 (4) - maybe NC here cuz you start stream here ;)

[Collab Extra]
Is this really collab diff? It's like the same style :o Kek. Maybe we're secretly twins 8-)
00:04:502 (1) - IMO ctrl+g better flow lmao
01:07:760 (6) - Break after this note it's a bad idea D:
01:11:874 (10) - NC plz ;w; having non-stream notes with 2-digits looks weird

Good luck !!

naliem

naliem wrote:

Hi from queue :D

[box=m4m]Collab Extra
00:03:988 (4,2) - stack?
00:09:474 (3,4) - try to do same shape, looks weird
00:16:331 (5,6) - could improve this blanket a bit
00:16:331 (5,6) - would try to blanket this
00:41:360 (1,2) - move up 1 to be like this
00:44:960 (3,2) - blanket fix
00:56:960 (3,4) - open angle of slider to get the 4 centered
01:11:017 (6,7,8) - could blanket the triple with 01:10:502 (5) - and the sliderend with 01:11:531 (9) -
01:14:617 (1,2,3,4) - I think they are not stacked
01:14:360 (5,1,2,3,4) - 5 is not in center
01:15:988 (1,2) - fix angle of slider 2
01:18:731 (1) - fix spacing, it's smaller than stream

Kami's Insane
00:01:245 (4,5,1) - blanket? or make slider not curved It's fine
00:06:388 (3,4) - blanket fix Not intended
00:07:245 (1,3) - stack with sliderend Semi-stack intended
00:11:360 (5,6,1,3) - blanket fix
00:41:017 (4,6) - stack Intended
00:48:560 (1,4) - ^ ^
00:51:131 (1,3) - ^ ^
00:59:531 (1,2) - blanket fix
01:14:845 (2,5) - blanket? Nah

Nice map and song! GL

MrSergio

MrSergio wrote:

________________



Collab Extra


  • 00:00:560 - Unrankable: do not place 2 timing points at the same timing with different volumes I'll have op change

    00:10:417 (1) - I would silence the spinner's end since it's a bit too loud and breaks the rhythm for the next part

    00:17:360 (2) - since this object is stacked under the previous slider's tail you create an awkward jump on a red tick on the next slider. Why don't you try stacking this on top of 00:17:531 (3) - instead?

    00:24:388 (3) - just personal preference here: maybe a Ctrl + G to emphasize even more the vocals?

    00:30:388 (4,1) - nazi stuff, but they're a bit too close to each other imo. Can you separate them more?

    00:36:217 (1,2,3) - This spacing is a bit awkward too. Visually, there is the same spacing between these 3 objects, yet they have a different snap on the time line.
    00:38:960 (1,2,3) - same

    00:38:102 (3,4,5) - Since this section is using a lot those 3/4 beats I would rather avoid placing little pieces of 1/2 rhythms

    00:41:531 (2,2) - I don't really like overlaps :/

    00:52:674 (1,2,3,4) - There isn't much telling me this is going to be a 1/3 slider jump section tho. They just appear and go at their own pace.
    I would give some visual sign to recognize the 1/3 parts, like a different combo color just for them or a similar pattern used over and over, and so on

    01:01:245 (2,2) - again, overlap :/

    01:03:131 (4) - this feels too weak, since you have an awfully low spacing between 01:02:960 (3,4) - after having a lot of spacing before.

    01:04:331 (3,4) - Trust me, no one can read this at first sight. You literally have a 1/6 jump on a repeat slider the opposite way of the slider's direction: it's an overkill lol

    01:05:017 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Well, maybe I'm just dumb, but I can't really figure out the idea behind these random jumps tbh. Just because the song goes full burst it doesn't mean you can place objects here and there xD

    01:13:245 (1,2,3,4) - As I mentioned before, it would be cool to put a visual warning for these 1/3 sections

    01:17:360 (1,2,3) - I find this spacing way too low compared to the other patterns around

    01:22:074 (9,10) - another really big jump, this time it is the first seeing another jump after the circle . This jump feels strange because you made the player play 01:19:417 (3,4,5) - this pattern already twice, so once he arrives at this one he will think it is the same and it will miss on the slider

________________



Kami's Insane


  • 00:00:560 - Unrankable: 2 timing sections at the same timing have different volumes

    Your custom drum finish should be used as a finish, and not as a whistle here: 00:06:731 (4,1,4) - there are too many
    Remove finish from 00:07:245 (1) -
    00:10:502 (3) - same

    00:20:102 (3,6) - again, those finishers are too much. Try with a soft whistle instead (the default one)
    00:36:731 (3) - remove finish
    00:39:474 (3) - same
    00:47:702 (3) - same
    00:50:102 (2) - same (from repeat only)

    00:37:760 (2) - it feels a bit forced as it is now. Ctrl + G?

    01:07:760 (1) - Can you maybe improve this shape a little? x) It's a bit sloppy imo
Really nice diff *^*

Battle

Battle wrote:



[K. Insane]
The hitsound you use for D:C1 finish really doesn't fit
00:10:502 (3,4) - Emphasizing 3 really takes away from 4, might as well try to prioritize 4's emphasis since the intensity is rising I got the feeling that 4 was the calm right before the storm, so I slowed it down
00:23:531 (1,2) - Strong drums on both beats, so why is 1 not emphasized? The jump from 1 to 2 is emphasized
00:31:931 (1) - Why not make the fourth node red as well for a nicer shape?
01:04:331 (3,4) - rhythm would be better if you had 3 be a 1/2 slider, place 4 on 01:04:588 - and add a note on 01:04:845 - I don't really like that type of pattern. Plus the vocals only call for 2 sliders


y a

Fixed all parts I didn't respond

Kami's Insane (updated
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11537,30731,41702,54045
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:Kami's Insane
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:962747
BeatmapSetID:440761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"kabane.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
560,342.857142857143,4,3,1,70,1,0
560,-166.666666666667,4,3,1,40,0,0
6045,-125,4,3,1,60,0,0
10845,-166.666666666667,4,3,1,60,0,0
11531,-142.857142857143,4,3,1,50,0,0
11531,-142.857142857143,4,3,1,70,0,0
11874,-142.857142857143,4,3,1,30,0,0
19760,-125,4,3,1,70,0,0
21131,-166.666666666667,4,3,1,50,0,0
21474,-166.666666666667,4,3,1,30,0,0
22160,-166.666666666667,4,3,1,20,0,0
22502,-125,4,3,1,80,0,0
28331,-111.111111111111,4,3,1,80,0,0
29360,-100,4,3,1,80,0,0
30731,-181.818181818181,4,3,1,40,0,0
36217,-153.846153846153,4,3,1,40,0,0
38960,-133.333333333333,4,3,1,50,0,0
40331,-153.846153846153,4,3,1,60,0,0
41702,-133.333333333333,4,3,1,60,0,0
49931,-117.647058823529,4,3,1,70,0,0
52674,-90.9090909090909,4,2,3,80,0,0
53531,-90.9090909090909,4,3,1,80,0,0
54045,-100,4,3,1,70,0,1
58845,-100,4,3,1,60,0,0
59531,-100,4,3,1,70,0,1
64331,-125,4,3,1,60,0,0
64674,-83.3333333333333,4,3,1,60,0,0
65017,-100,4,3,1,70,0,1
67760,-166.666666666667,4,3,1,30,0,0
70160,-100,4,3,1,70,0,0
70502,-100,4,3,1,70,0,1
73245,-83.3333333333333,4,3,1,80,0,0
75988,-83.3333333333333,4,3,1,80,0,1
78731,-166.666666666667,4,3,1,70,0,0
82845,-125,4,3,1,70,0,0
84217,-125,4,3,1,100,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,128,0
Combo2 : 255,255,108
Combo3 : 128,0,0
Combo4 : 95,95,95

[HitObjects]
136,96,560,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,300,731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,312,1074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,204,1245,2,0,P|261:148|232:100,1,113.999996520996,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,240,1760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,244,2102,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,224,2274,2,0,L|332:212,1,56.9999982604981
184,168,2617,2,0,P|123:165|64:124,1,113.999996520996,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,3302,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,3474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,184,3645,2,0,P|268:224|248:240,1,56.9999982604981
228,64,3988,2,0,P|272:12|328:12,1,113.999996520996,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,188,4502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,4845,5,0,0:0:0:0:
145,168,5017,2,0,L|185:216,1,56.9999982604981
140,80,5360,2,0,P|72:120|60:164,1,113.999996520996,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,296,5874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,316,5960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,328,6045,5,8,0:0:0:0:
312,320,6217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,232,6388,2,0,P|152:196|144:160,1,76
308,176,6731,2,0,L|472:188,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,80,7245,6,0,L|100:68,1,152
160,208,7760,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,72,7931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,80,8102,2,0,L|428:92,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,256,8617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,168,8788,5,8,0:0:0:0:
412,176,8960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,176,9131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,172,9474,2,0,B|116:204|76:204|76:204|92:252|72:304,1,152,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,268,9988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,80,10160,5,8,0:0:0:0:
324,96,10331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,10502,2,0,L|20:96,1,76
324,104,10845,2,0,P|384:124|397:190,1,113.999996520996
160,212,11360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,212,11445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,212,11531,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,292,11702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,144,11874,2,0,P|164:112|92:144,2,132.999995941162
228,144,12731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,272,12902,6,0,L|64:328,1,66.4999979705811,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,13245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,196,13417,2,0,P|68:132|80:60,2,132.999995941162
272,200,14274,5,2,0:0:0:0:
208,120,14445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,104,14617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,188,14788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,14960,2,0,B|292:32|292:32|332:32,1,66.4999979705811,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,168,15302,2,0,B|225:188|225:188|185:188,1,66.4999979705811
136,92,15645,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,136,15817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,136,15902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,136,15988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,272,16160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,80,16331,2,0,P|272:44|312:32,1,66.4999979705811,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,92,16674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,16845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,16931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,232,17017,6,0,P|176:264|152:268,1,66.4999979705811,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,168,17360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,284,17531,2,0,P|356:212|344:148,2,132.999995941162
208,324,18388,5,2,0:0:0:0:
92,300,18560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,196,18731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,80,18902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,168,19074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,196,19245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,104,19417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,252,19588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,108,19760,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,44,19931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,104,20102,2,0,P|396:136|412:164,1,76
256,276,20445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,160,20617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,268,20788,2,0,P|192:280|156:264,1,76
104,92,21131,5,2,0:0:0:0:
132,68,21217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
168,56,21302,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,56,21388,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,60,21474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,68,21560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,80,21645,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,96,21731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,116,21817,6,2,L|308:152,1,28.4999991302491
208,268,21988,2,2,L|192:220,1,28.4999991302491
216,140,22160,2,2,L|232:184,1,28.4999991302491
128,292,22331,2,2,L|112:252,1,28.4999991302491
96,156,22502,5,12,0:0:0:0:
300,296,22674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,156,22845,2,0,L|296:72,1,76
276,224,23188,2,0,L|304:308,1,76
420,328,23531,5,8,0:0:0:0:
236,160,23702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,83,23874,2,0,B|399:83,1,76,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,192,24217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,240,24388,2,0,P|104:260|40:228,2,152
228,96,25245,5,10,0:0:0:0:
136,40,25417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,144,25588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,25760,5,2,0:0:0:0:
72,88,25931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,180,26102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,40,26274,5,2,0:0:0:0:
80,180,26445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,140,26617,1,10,0:0:0:0:
56,96,26788,5,2,0:0:0:0:
168,240,26960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,68,27131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,216,27302,6,2,P|80:272|104:304,1,76,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,328,27645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,27817,2,2,L|256:200,1,76,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,28160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,264,28331,6,0,P|380:280|412:304,2,85.4999973907472,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,296,28845,2,0,L|44:368,2,85.4999973907472,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,83,29360,6,0,P|368:43|385:46,2,95,10|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,320,29874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,180,30045,1,10,0:0:0:0:
164,152,30217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,296,30388,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,73,30560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,73,30731,6,0,P|150:54|76:115,1,156.750004783631,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,264,31588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,252,31931,6,0,B|276:208|332:216|332:216|342:168|342:168|411:172|424:104,1,261.250007972718,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,64,33302,2,0,L|168:88,1,26.1250007972718
264,164,33474,6,0,P|248:200|220:216,1,52.2500015945435,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,224,33988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,112,34331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,24,34674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,24,34845,6,0,L|264:24,2,69.6666687927247,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,172,35531,2,0,L|224:172,2,69.6666687927247,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,36217,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,312,36388,2,0,L|196:280,1,61.7499971733095
88,216,36731,2,0,P|76:164|104:96,2,123.499994346619
199,168,37588,5,12,0:0:0:0:
166,48,37760,2,0,P|114:18|55:31,1,123.499994346619
128,216,38274,1,8,0:0:0:0:
167,49,38617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,124,38788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,124,38960,6,0,P|248:156|221:158,1,71.2500027179719,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,168,39302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,52,39474,2,0,P|328:52|376:112,2,142.500005435944
280,284,40331,5,12,0:0:0:0:
292,124,40502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,40674,2,0,P|392:224|388:256,1,61.7499971733095
228,160,41017,2,0,P|218:126|224:96,1,61.7499971733095,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,108,41360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,41531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,56,41702,6,0,P|132:20|201:48,1,142.500005435944,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,42217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,100,42388,2,0,P|172:136|184:168,1,71.2500027179719,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,320,42731,2,0,P|28:284|16:252,1,71.2500027179719
212,264,43074,6,0,L|256:192,1,71.2500027179719,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,96,43417,2,0,L|394:156,1,71.2500027179719
168,68,43760,2,0,L|236:116,1,71.2500027179719,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,328,44102,2,0,L|328:280,1,71.2500027179719,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,304,44360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,304,44445,6,0,L|248:248,1,71.2500027179719,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,168,44788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,176,44960,2,0,B|408:168|408:168|476:140,2,142.500005435944
152,168,45817,5,12,0:0:0:0:
232,92,45988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,200,46160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,88,46331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,136,46502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,252,46674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,56,46845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,284,47017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,176,47188,6,0,L|56:136,1,71.2500027179719,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,139,47531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,132,47702,2,0,L|372:196,2,142.500005435944
372,300,48560,6,0,P|456:252|468:196,2,142.500005435944,12|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,296,49417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,204,49588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,300,49760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,184,49931,5,12,0:0:0:0:
144,184,50102,2,0,P|116:104|180:36,2,161.500003080368
356,120,50960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,120,51131,6,0,L|176:120,1,161.500003080368,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,248,51645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,124,51817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,240,51988,5,8,0:0:0:0:
276,64,52160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,248,52331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,56,52502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,224,52674,6,8,L|343:380,2,156.750004783631
264,56,53360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,176,53531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,214,53616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,256,53702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,294,53788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,324,53873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,341,53959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,340,54045,6,0,L|299:228,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,56,54388,2,0,L|208:152,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,54731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,24,54902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,204,55074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,88,55245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,88,55417,6,0,L|72:88,1,95
240,204,55760,2,0,L|348:204,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,64,56102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,232,56274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,132,56445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,164,56617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,316,56788,5,4,0:0:0:0:
240,204,56960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,232,57131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,272,57302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,57474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,332,57645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,312,57817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,224,57988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,364,58160,6,0,P|320:388|368:380,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,168,58502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,272,58674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,288,58760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,304,58845,2,0,L|60:352,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,168,59188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
60,244,59360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,248,59531,6,0,P|359:242|400:210,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,125,59874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,336,60045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,152,60217,2,0,P|492:84|468:48,1,95
320,124,60560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,48,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,236,60902,6,0,L|288:316,2,95,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,128,61417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,160,61588,2,0,L|108:176,2,95,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,128,62102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,256,62274,5,4,0:0:0:0:
216,88,62445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,156,62617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,144,62788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,0,62960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,156,63131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,68,63302,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,32,63474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,24,63560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,16,63645,6,0,L|440:120,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,336,63988,2,0,L|360:232,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,72,64331,2,0,B|312:20|280:32|280:32|252:68|220:52,1,114
216,36,64674,2,0,P|228:100|228:156,1,113.999996520996
228,284,65017,5,12,0:0:0:0:
316,224,65188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,256,65360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,200,65531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,364,65702,1,12,0:0:0:0:
160,328,65874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,272,66045,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,356,66217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,108,66388,5,12,0:0:0:0:
336,252,66560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,249,66731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,136,66902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,184,67074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,56,67245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,320,67417,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,40,67588,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,176,67760,6,0,B|302:208|286:231|286:231|243:222|207:231|174:280,1,170.999994781494,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,308,68360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,308,68445,2,0,P|120:348|68:344,1,113.999996520996
188,160,69131,2,0,P|256:148|312:172,2,113.999996520996
440,58,70160,2,8,L|378:48,2,63.3333333333333
492,64,70502,6,0,L|420:240,1,190,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,132,71017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,132,71102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,132,71188,2,0,P|232:108|292:144,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,239,71531,2,0,P|380:256|324:232,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,60,71874,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,176,72045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,72,72217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,140,72388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,239,72560,2,0,P|452:192|444:144,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,76,72902,2,0,P|217:135|220:164,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,144,73245,5,12,0:0:0:0:
296,340,73474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,180,73702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,180,73817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,180,73931,2,8,L|308:80,2,151.999995361328
76,232,74502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,232,74617,5,12,0:0:0:0:
320,312,74845,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,172,75074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,172,75188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,172,75302,2,8,P|168:240|196:348,2,151.999995361328
364,236,75988,5,12,0:0:0:0:
124,128,76217,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,4,76445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,308,76674,5,12,0:0:0:0:
72,52,76902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,44,77131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,344,77360,5,12,0:0:0:0:
176,48,77588,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,340,77817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,328,78045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
453,292,78130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
470,247,78216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,198,78302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,171,78387,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,138,78473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
397,90,78559,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,48,78645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,16,78731,6,0,P|392:52|325:53,1,113.999996520996,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,48,79417,2,0,P|140:108|192:156,1,113.999996520996,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,140,80102,5,4,0:0:0:0:
316,140,80445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,216,80788,2,0,L|160:272,2,75.9999976806641,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,44,81474,6,0,P|116:68|100:96,1,75.9999976806641,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,152,81931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,157,82160,2,0,P|273:133|289:105,1,75.9999976806641,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,52,82617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,140,82845,6,0,P|144:208|178:233,1,114,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,248,83188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,83360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,96,83531,2,0,P|236:68|160:52,1,114,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,52,83874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,196,84045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,16,84217,5,10,0:0:0:0:
92,232,84445,1,10,0:0:0:0:
380,304,84674,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,16,84902,5,10,0:0:0:0:
200,336,85131,1,10,0:0:0:0:
488,192,85360,1,14,0:0:0:0:

Collab Extra (updated)
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 645,14613,43688,60402,82136,84402
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.6

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:Collab Extra
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:975175
BeatmapSetID:440761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9.2
SliderMultiplier:1.9
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"kabane.avi"
//Break Periods
2,67960,69247
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
560,342.857142857143,4,2,1,50,1,0
645,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,55,0,0
10502,-125,4,2,1,50,0,0
10845,-83.3333333333333,4,3,0,50,0,0
11188,-83.3333333333333,4,3,0,5,0,0
11360,-83.3333333333333,4,3,0,50,0,0
11445,-76.923076923077,4,1,1,40,0,0
11531,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,30,0,0
11874,-125,4,1,1,30,0,0
17017,-90.9090909090909,4,1,1,50,0,0
17360,-125,4,1,1,50,0,0
19760,-111.111111111111,4,1,1,50,0,0
21131,-111.111111111111,4,1,1,30,0,0
21474,-125,4,1,1,30,0,0
21817,-142.857142857143,4,1,1,30,0,0
22160,-166.666666666667,4,1,1,20,0,0
22502,-125,4,1,1,80,0,0
22845,-125,4,1,1,50,0,0
23531,-125,4,1,1,80,0,0
23874,-125,4,1,1,50,0,0
30560,-166.666666666666,4,2,1,50,0,0
30902,-166.666666666666,4,2,1,50,0,0
32788,-111.111111111111,4,2,3,50,0,0
33217,-166.666666666666,4,2,1,50,0,0
34502,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
38274,-111.111111111111,4,2,3,50,0,0
38702,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
38960,-99.9999999999999,4,2,1,60,0,0
39731,-99.9999999999999,4,2,1,5,0,0
39817,-99.9999999999999,4,2,1,60,0,0
40674,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
41017,-111.111111111111,4,2,1,50,0,0
41702,-100,4,3,1,50,0,0
44445,-76.9230769230769,4,3,1,50,0,0
44788,-100,4,3,1,50,0,0
49931,-100,4,3,1,50,0,0
50788,-166.666666666667,4,3,1,50,0,0
52674,-100,4,3,1,60,0,0
52845,-83.3333333333333,4,3,1,60,0,0
53017,-71.4285714285714,4,3,1,60,0,0
53188,-62.5,4,3,1,60,0,0
53360,-100,4,3,0,60,0,0
54045,-100,4,3,1,60,0,1
56788,-100,4,3,1,60,0,1
58760,-100,4,3,1,60,0,1
63045,-100,4,3,0,60,0,1
63388,-100,4,3,1,60,0,1
67588,-133.333333333333,4,3,1,60,0,0
70160,-100,4,3,1,60,0,1
73245,-100,4,3,1,50,0,1
75988,-83.3333333333333,4,3,1,50,0,1
76902,-76.9230769230769,4,3,1,50,0,1
77360,-71.4285714285714,4,3,1,50,0,1
78045,-71.4285714285714,4,3,1,50,0,1
78731,-100,4,3,1,50,0,1
81474,-100,4,3,1,50,0,1
82760,-100,4,3,1,50,0,1
84217,-100,4,3,1,60,0,1
84445,-90.9090909090909,4,3,1,60,0,1
84674,-83.3333333333333,4,3,1,60,0,1
84902,-76.9230769230769,4,3,1,60,0,1
85131,-71.4285714285714,4,3,1,60,0,1
85360,-66.6666666666667,4,3,1,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 237,233,248
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 55,55,55
Combo6 : 255,128,64

[HitObjects]
136,88,560,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,304,731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,88,902,2,0,L|192:156,1,71.2500027179719
124,288,1245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,300,1760,5,0,0:0:0:0:
356,212,2102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,176,2274,2,0,L|276:160,1,71.2500027179719
200,192,2617,2,0,P|164:252|88:248,1,142.500005435944
348,104,3302,5,0,0:0:0:0:
348,252,3474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,104,3645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,252,3988,2,0,P|344:296|260:360,1,142.500005435944
248,257,4502,6,0,P|265:189|324:152,1,142.500005435944
420,192,5017,2,0,L|420:104,1,71.2500027179719
256,56,5360,2,0,L|256:200,1,142.500005435944
128,128,6045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,244,6217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,124,6731,6,0,B|112:200|112:200|148:264,1,142.500005435944
196,160,7245,2,0,B|196:84|196:84|160:20,1,142.500005435944
24,160,7760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,108,8102,2,0,P|384:144|413:209,1,142.500005435944
172,328,8788,6,0,L|172:256,1,71.2500027179719
352,260,9131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,260,9474,2,0,B|388:240|396:212|372:180|372:152|392:124,1,142.500005435944
480,36,9988,2,0,B|451:57|451:93|476:112|468:140|455:169,1,142.500005435944
256,192,10417,12,0,11188,0:0:0:0:
160,32,11360,5,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,11445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,32,11531,2,0,L|192:192,1,142.500005435944
145,317,12217,2,0,L|194:148,1,152
181,84,12731,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,208,12902,2,0,P|300:220|340:212,1,76
300,128,13245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,56,13417,2,0,L|428:144,1,76
360,304,13760,2,0,P|404:288|428:256,1,76
324,168,14102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,68,14274,6,0,L|128:68,1,76
60,220,14617,2,0,L|136:220,1,76
276,144,14960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,144,15131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,144,15302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,68,15474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,256,15645,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,256,15817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,15988,2,0,P|384:156|416:160,1,76
285,246,16331,2,0,P|248:257|211:255,1,76
234,113,16674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
383,296,16845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,320,16931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,17017,6,0,L|216:336,1,104.500003189087
136,80,17360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,80,17531,2,0,L|300:128,2,152
96,272,18388,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,176,18560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,18731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,176,18902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,90,19074,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,104,19245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,182,19417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,195,19588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,45,19760,5,0,0:0:0:0:
344,300,19931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,45,20102,2,0,L|254:109,1,85.4999973907472
88,248,20445,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,20617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,248,20788,2,0,L|172:284,1,85.4999973907472
340,276,21131,6,0,L|284:220,1,42.7499986953736
176,104,21302,2,0,L|206:134,1,42.7499986953736
255,308,21474,2,0,L|256:244,1,38
260,71,21645,2,0,L|260:112,1,38
172,272,21817,2,0,L|216:228,1,33.2499989852906
343,107,21988,2,0,L|316:136,1,33.2499989852906
139,187,22160,2,0,L|192:188,1,28.4999991302491
376,192,22331,2,0,L|336:192,1,28.4999991302491
156,88,22502,5,0,0:0:0:0:
348,320,22674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,288,22845,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,220,23017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,320,23188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,288,23360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,256,23531,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,256,23702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,136,23874,6,0,P|212:124|248:128,1,76
396,160,24217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,350,24388,2,0,P|175:275|220:216,2,152
336,80,25245,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,160,25417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,160,25588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,25760,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,244,25931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,64,26102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,116,26274,5,0,0:0:0:0:
292,160,26445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,224,26617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,44,26788,5,0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,26960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,44,27131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,176,27302,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,180,27474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,96,27645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,280,27817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,276,27988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
452,64,28160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,176,28331,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,136,28502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,28674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,64,28845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,176,29017,5,0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,29188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,36,29360,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,168,29531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,300,29702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
149,98,29874,5,0,0:0:0:0:
364,248,30045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
79,220,30217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,69,30388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,328,30560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,90,30731,6,0,P|385:153|383:201,1,113.999996520996
305,167,31245,2,0,L|241:198,1,56.9999982604981
110,224,31588,2,0,B|85:228|85:228|73:236|73:236|67:200,1,56.9999982604981
107,78,31931,2,0,B|163:30|211:30|259:134|311:130|371:70,1,284.999991302491
124,288,33302,2,0,L|160:268,1,28.4999991302491
336,160,33474,5,0,0:0:0:0:
197,345,33645,2,0,L|195:284,1,56.9999982604981
266,81,33988,2,0,P|294:141|346:161,1,113.999996520996
356,68,34502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,144,34674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,220,34845,6,0,P|376:288|308:328,1,128.249996086121
312,244,35188,2,0,P|260:248|216:224,1,85.4999973907472
68,164,35531,2,0,L|84:296,1,128.249996086121
120,212,35874,2,0,L|176:296,1,85.4999973907472
228,32,36217,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,308,36388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,36731,2,0,B|104:188|104:188|156:252,2,170.999994781494
364,100,37588,6,0,P|312:152|240:136,1,128.249996086121
208,88,37931,2,0,P|244:72|296:80,1,85.4999973907472
134,226,38274,6,0,P|111:288|157:345,1,128.249996086121
105,350,38617,2,0,L|18:313,1,85.4999973907472
72,56,38960,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,326,39131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,39474,2,0,P|340:180|312:236,1,142.5
296,248,39817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,156,39988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,172,40160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,320,40331,5,0,0:0:0:0:
216,228,40502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,336,40674,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,180,40845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,296,41017,5,0,0:0:0:0:
76,240,41188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,197,41360,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,180,41531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,339,41702,6,0,L|279:291,1,95
332,154,42045,2,0,L|248:197,1,95
47,91,42388,2,0,L|132:48,1,95
127,163,42731,2,0,L|39:207,1,95
304,232,43074,6,0,P|324:184|312:140,1,95
127,163,43417,2,0,P|107:211|119:255,1,95
344,232,43760,2,0,P|364:184|352:140,1,95
86,164,44102,2,0,P|66:212|78:256,1,95
144,320,44360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,320,44445,6,0,L|268:284,1,123.499994346619
184,132,44788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,128,44960,2,0,P|9:204|118:243,2,190
212,52,45817,5,0,0:0:0:0:
88,164,45988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,56,46160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,208,46331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,60,46502,5,0,0:0:0:0:
148,260,46674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,64,46845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,320,47017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,120,47188,5,0,0:0:0:0:
429,210,47360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,320,47531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,48,47702,2,0,L|431:212,2,190
128,72,48560,6,0,L|128:184,1,95
364,320,48902,2,0,L|364:225,1,95
128,72,49245,2,0,L|240:72,1,95
364,320,49588,2,0,L|269:320,1,95
112,320,49931,5,0,0:0:0:0:
316,112,50102,2,0,L|205:172,1,95
69,241,50445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,244,50788,2,0,L|86:170,1,56.9999982604981
264,72,51131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,84,51302,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,188,51474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
121,98,51645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,180,51817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,320,51988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,44,52160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,309,52331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,57,52502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,52674,6,0,L|392:312,1,47.5
192,236,52845,6,0,L|284:236,1,56.9999982604981
116,140,53017,6,0,L|204:140,1,66.4999979705811
4,64,53188,6,0,L|100:64,1,76
207,60,53360,5,0,0:0:0:0:
234,55,53445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,47,53531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,33,53617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,20,53702,5,0,0:0:0:0:
308,62,53788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,104,53874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,145,53960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,184,54045,6,8,P|385:175|441:134,1,95
231,296,54388,2,8,P|308:331|317:379,1,95
448,352,54731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,192,54902,1,8,0:0:0:0:
318,192,54988,1,8,0:0:0:0:
318,192,55074,2,8,L|239:138,1,95
139,170,55417,6,0,L|77:241,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,32,55760,2,2,L|344:88,1,95
242,218,56102,5,2,0:0:0:0:
87,33,56274,1,2,0:0:0:0:
259,36,56445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
57,169,56617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
91,264,56788,5,8,0:0:0:0:
119,293,56874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,312,56960,2,8,P|190:327|243:313,1,95
220,68,57302,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,192,57645,2,8,P|404:234|368:246,1,95
160,214,57988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
355,36,58160,5,8,0:0:0:0:
355,36,58245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,36,58331,2,8,P|406:51|438:91,1,95
188,141,58674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
359,120,58845,2,2,L|413:206,1,95
301,323,59188,2,2,L|250:240,1,95
207,86,59531,6,8,P|256:102|292:139,1,95
421,210,59874,2,8,P|430:164|464:132,1,95
478,296,60217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,319,60388,1,4,0:0:0:0:
382,319,60474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
382,319,60560,2,8,L|312:252,1,95
155,224,60902,6,8,L|173:161,2,47.5
251,34,61245,2,8,L|285:100,2,47.5
295,233,61588,5,2,0:0:0:0:
251,34,61760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
438,131,61931,1,8,0:0:0:0:
282,227,62102,5,2,0:0:0:0:
265,41,62274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
447,138,62445,1,8,0:0:0:0:
269,221,62617,5,2,0:0:0:0:
277,47,62788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
453,144,62960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,273,63131,2,0,P|418:314|351:301,1,95
252,288,63474,1,8,0:0:0:0:
221,264,63560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
205,233,63645,1,8,0:0:0:0:
122,87,63817,6,0,L|180:168,1,95
118,290,64160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,133,64331,2,0,B|375:83|435:103|459:38,2,142.5
135,344,65017,5,6,0:0:0:0:
158,129,65188,1,2,0:0:0:0:
350,40,65360,1,2,0:0:0:0:
415,351,65531,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,228,65702,1,2,0:0:0:0:
455,220,65874,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,44,66045,5,2,0:0:0:0:
455,220,66217,1,2,0:0:0:0:
270,322,66388,5,2,0:0:0:0:
457,42,66560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
65,206,66731,5,10,0:0:0:0:
344,44,66902,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,281,67074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
113,29,67245,1,2,0:0:0:0:
206,137,67417,2,0,P|256:120|312:148,1,95
254,192,67760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,76,69817,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,172,69988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,60,70160,2,0,L|56:16,3,47.5
125,73,70502,2,0,P|190:97|243:200,1,190
64,204,71017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,204,71102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,204,71188,2,0,L|152:162,1,95
204,80,71531,2,0,P|252:172|252:196,1,95
396,28,71874,6,8,L|444:120,1,95
447,143,72131,1,8,0:0:0:0:
447,143,72217,2,0,P|425:180|376:216,1,95
280,122,72560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,320,72731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,252,72902,1,2,0:0:0:0:
404,196,73074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,122,73245,6,0,B|239:78|272:45|272:45,1,63.3333333333333
118,182,73474,2,8,L|206:209,1,63.3333333333333
457,206,73702,2,8,L|377:284,1,63.3333333333333
252,336,73931,2,8,L|267:239,1,63.3333333333333
260,160,74360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,56,74617,6,8,L|340:92,1,63.3333333333333
260,264,74845,2,8,L|158:230,1,63.3333333333333
168,108,75074,2,8,L|148:176,1,63.3333333333333
344,216,75302,2,8,L|368:144,1,63.3333333333333
183,326,75988,6,2,L|260:340,1,75.9999976806641
372,30,76217,2,2,L|288:14,1,75.9999976806641
413,264,76445,2,2,L|443:190,1,75.9999976806641
141,61,76674,2,2,L|106:132,1,75.9999976806641
250,128,76902,2,2,P|219:51|219:51,1,82.3333295644126
284,232,77131,2,2,L|324:317,1,82.3333295644126
104,279,77360,5,2,0:0:0:0:
319,306,77588,1,2,0:0:0:0:
373,67,77817,2,0,B|264:37,1,88.6666639607748
128,64,78045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
136,95,78131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,123,78217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,150,78302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
199,174,78388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
227,194,78474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
255,214,78560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,236,78645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,252,78731,6,0,P|357:271|427:233,1,95
500,268,79074,2,0,P|493:226|458:179,1,95
316,48,79417,2,0,B|356:86|356:86|360:86,1,47.5
512,104,79588,2,0,L|442:116,1,47.5
308,180,79760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,28,80102,6,0,P|126:68|115:103,1,95
277,253,80445,2,0,P|257:297|205:317,1,95
211,129,80788,2,0,L|164:169,1,47.5
81,294,80960,2,0,L|95:239,1,47.5
75,157,81131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
450,147,81474,2,0,L|392:295,2,142.5
347,150,82160,2,0,P|352:92|413:21,2,142.5
257,147,82845,6,0,L|258:247,2,63.3333333333333
231,51,83188,2,0,L|162:109,2,63.3333333333333
303,298,83531,2,0,P|378:279|404:289,2,63.3333333333333
215,298,83874,2,0,P|182:283|146:281,2,63.3333333333333
304,30,84217,5,2,0:0:0:0:
96,224,84445,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,306,84674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,49,84902,5,2,0:0:0:0:
464,152,85131,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,339,85360,1,2,0:0:0:0:

Sorry it took so long, lol.

P.S. why isn't this thing ranked yet? 59 stars bro... xD
MBmasher
more mods..

Breezy
00:00:560 - Why not map the beginning of the song? All the other difficulties have it mapped, and it's already a short song. Please consider mapping it. If someone else asks, I will map the beginning.

00:12:217 (2) - I would change this slider into a different shape simply because the curve is way too large compared to (3) and (4) in this combo, which makes it look random. Fixed

00:21:131 (6,7) - Make these symmetrical? These go by the same noise in the music. Also, the curve on (7) is way too sharp, so it would look nicer if you did this suggestion. I don't think they go by the same noise in the music, but fixed.

00:22:502 (1,2) - A longer slider would fit in better with the song and rhythm than these two sliders since you have nothing around 00:24:217 fixed

00:33:474 (1,2,3) - Not sure why the spacing is different between these notes. not sure either, fixed

00:34:845 (3,4) - Same slider shapes would look better. fixed

00:44:445 (1) - Awkward slider shape, I would change it. I guess, fixed

00:56:788 (1,2) - Same slider shapes for these? It would go with the vocals more. fixed in a different mod

01:06:388 (5,6) - ^ fixed

-NanoRIPE-
00:34:845 (2) - fix the DS fixed
00:41:702 (1) - finish fixed
01:05:017 (1) - ^ fixed
01:10:502 (1) - ^ fixed
01:13:245 (1) - ^ fixed
01:14:617 (1) - ^ and unsnapped slider fixed except for ds
01:15:045 (2) - unsnapped circle ds is 1.2 in kiai
01:15:817 (1,2,3,4) - unsnapped ds is 1.2 in kiai
01:16:674 (3) - finish fixed

Hokichi
00:30:731 (1,2,3) - Flow break fixed
00:39:988 - Put something here fixed
01:10:160 - Same fixed
00:43:674 - Unnecessary bookmark fixed
00:48:217 (2,3) - DS what about the ds? the ds is 1.00 like normal.

Pentori
fix all spacing errors in AIMod there are none
00:12:217 (2,3,4,1) - hard to understand what you're following here fixed?
00:17:360 - gaps like these aren't really good because it feels like your ignoring a whole bunch of the beats fixed
00:24:560 (5) - players will mistake this for landing on the vocal note here 00:24:388 . i suggest you follow the vocals with your mapping I haven't been following the vocals for most of the song, and I don't think I should. Will fix if someone else points it out
00:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - density of notes suddenly spikes from your slower section beforehand with no clear change in music. you should mix in sliders here to lower the density fixed
00:39:988 - map this gap fixed in previous mod
00:40:331 (4,5) - bad overlap, space it out no overlapping here??
00:48:217 (2,3) - ^ ^

Shiratoi
00:12:217 (2) - maybe less curvy? fixed in previous mod
00:25:245 (1) - dunno if its just me or is this too long for normal? ^
00:34:845 (3,4,1) - wai not similar though its purdy now ^
00:40:331 (3,4) - dont really like the random overlap here ^
00:48:217 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:56:102 (3,2) - blanket I can't find a way to blanket this. So I just created flow
01:13:245 (5) - repeating 3x? I don't know what you're trying to tell me. I think you mean 'delete the repeat'. So I did.
01:25:588 - spinner to finish? xd There is no sound here. A spinner wouldn't fit.
nice map Thanks.

_Stan
00:21:817 (7,1,2) - why different ds? I don't see a change in ds.
00:34:502 (2,3,4) - ds 1.2? most likely fixed in previous mod
00:59:531 (1,2) - ds it's kiai so ds is 1.2

MrSergio
Open AIMod and check all the spacings. There are 5 places where you break DS, please fix them most fixed in previous mods but i fixed some now.

00:57:474 (2,5) - overlap kinda ugly fixed

01:13:245 (5) - It's a bit hard to read even number of repeats for beginners, be careful fixed in previous

Apart from the fact you didn't map the first 10 seconds of the song, I would like to point out that the diff itself is rhythmically correct, but the aethetical side of it is lacking quality. What I mean is mostly "tidiness", "meaning for patterns" and "basic flow".
00:21:131 (6,7,1) - "tidiness". This pattern isn't really tidy imo as well as many other patterns. The reason I say this is because there are curved sliders which are usually meant for blanketing, yet they're used loosely just to move the cursor from a point to another

00:38:960 (1,2,3,4) - "meaning of patterns". What is this pattern supposed to tell the player? How is it good to use it for this part of the song? Are there particular reason as to why the objects are placed as they are? And so on... Try to ask you these questions when placing objects

00:42:388 (2,3) - "basic flow". The slider is curved towards the right side of the screen, but the next circle is on the left side: why? In case you have particular reasons to break a natural flow like this, it's fine, but on Normal/Easy diffs we try to make it so beginners catch the flow and the rhythm at first sight with not many "tricks" or such.

Battle
Start is really inconsistent, there's no rhythm structure that you vary from really, it's just a bunch of random variation tbh
00:14:960 (2,3) - ds
00:17:702 (6,1) - Why is there a gap before and after .-.
00:21:131 (6,7) - There is a pretty prominent string instrument playing, but you continue to go with 1/2 slider which leaves it unemphasized and rather boring
00:23:188 (2,3) - ds
00:23:874 (3,4) - ds
00:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do you really feel like making them all single taps with no clear reason, without anything really increasing intensity in the song makes sense?
00:32:102 (3,4,1) - An extremely curved into a lightly curved slider doesn't look good visually lol
00:33:474 (1,2,3) - ds
00:34:845 (3,4) - ds
00:34:502 (2,3,4,1) - having the directional change on 3 makes the direction change w/ 1 less emphasized, it would be better if you just made it flow up until 1 and broke the flow there since it was the downbeat
00:36:217 (1) - Need to mention how a really urved slider like this plus the adjacent sliders to this make it look really visually unappealing
00:40:331 (3,4) - Should avoid overlaps tbh
00:57:474 (2,5) - these are on the screen at the same time so it looks REALLY bad
01:13:245 (5) - inconsistent w/ 01:14:617 (1,2,3) - shouldn't this have an nc as well? plus two repeats on a normal is very unexpected
01:24:217 (4) - nc maybe

needs a lot of work Fixed most mods.

here is fixed diff
Jami's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 8
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:Jami's Normal
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:960809
BeatmapSetID:440761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.3
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"kabane.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
560,342.857142857143,4,3,0,70,1,0
574,-133.333333333333,4,3,0,70,0,0
10516,-125,4,3,0,70,0,0
10859,-83.3333333333333,4,3,0,70,0,0
11531,-133.333333333333,4,3,0,70,0,0
34502,-133.333333333333,4,3,0,70,0,0
41716,-100,4,3,0,70,0,0
52602,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
54045,-100,4,3,0,70,0,1
67588,-133.333333333333,4,3,0,70,0,1
70160,-100,4,3,0,70,0,1
76002,-83.3333333333333,4,3,0,70,0,1
76916,-76.9230769230769,4,3,0,70,0,1
77374,-71.4285714285714,4,3,0,70,0,1
78745,-100,4,3,0,70,0,1
84388,-90.9090909090909,4,3,0,70,0,1
84688,-83.3333333333333,4,3,0,70,0,1
84916,-76.9230769230769,4,3,0,70,0,1
85145,-71.4285714285714,4,3,0,70,0,1
85374,-66.6666666666667,4,3,0,70,0,1
85588,-133.333333333333,4,3,0,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 55,55,55

[HitObjects]
256,192,11531,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,276,12217,2,0,P|97:243|92:211,1,75.0000028610231
93,143,12902,2,0,P|113:111|146:94,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,70,13588,2,0,P|270:64|299:79,1,75.0000028610231
352,111,14274,5,8,0:0:0:0:
393,255,14960,2,0,L|317:261,1,75.0000028610231
243,261,15645,2,0,P|220:169|242:110,1,150.000005722046,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
274,54,16674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,56,17017,2,0,P|372:86|388:132,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,194,17702,2,0,P|342:181|303:185,1,75.0000028610231
241,217,18388,5,8,0:0:0:0:
141,329,19074,2,0,B|105:315|105:315|74:274,1,75.0000028610231
65,212,19760,1,8,0:0:0:0:
70,137,20102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,67,20445,2,0,B|131:52|178:56,1,75.0000028610231
244,66,21131,2,0,P|288:80|314:111,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,160,21817,2,0,P|385:141|409:107,1,75.0000028610231
463,65,22502,6,0,P|464:191|381:236,1,225.000008583069
313,231,23874,1,8,0:0:0:0:
167,194,24560,2,0,B|158:252|158:252|161:285,1,75.0000028610231
140,341,25245,5,8,0:0:0:0:
208,314,25588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,256,25931,2,0,P|280:204|281:182,1,75.0000028610231
206,179,26617,2,0,P|199:215|180:247,1,75.0000028610231
106,241,27302,2,0,P|127:210|130:173,1,75.0000028610231
164,106,27988,5,8,0:0:0:0:
230,71,28331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,57,28674,2,0,P|340:67|376:91,1,75.0000028610231
398,152,29360,2,0,P|352:170|334:206,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,261,30045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
261,314,30388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,293,30731,6,0,B|167:222|167:222|174:147,1,150.000005722046,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,81,31760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
281,49,32102,2,0,P|342:87|391:163,1,150.000005722046,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,224,33131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,297,33474,6,0,P|312:317|232:289,1,150.000005722046,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,230,34502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,169,34845,2,0,P|229:137|264:108,1,112.500004291535,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,86,35531,2,0,P|307:57|342:26,1,75.0000028610231
411,36,36217,6,8,P|444:54|447:99,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
430,160,36902,2,0,B|385:159|385:159|351:169,1,75.0000028610231
282,184,37588,2,0,P|230:131|229:48,1,150.000005722046,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,17,38617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,59,38960,6,0,P|383:84|396:127,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,188,39645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,253,39988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,297,40331,2,0,B|251:317|251:317|225:314,1,75.0000028610231,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,273,41017,2,0,P|212:225|220:206,1,75.0000028610231
223,149,41702,6,0,P|254:137|303:136,1,75.0000028610231,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,220,42388,2,0,P|298:250|261:285,1,100
191,344,43074,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,363,43417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
19,294,43760,2,0,P|1:246|19:195,1,100
112,160,44445,6,0,B|142:204|210:203,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,231,45131,2,0,P|314:236|270:277,1,100
188,288,45817,2,0,P|206:222|188:188,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,115,46502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,93,46845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
329,71,47188,6,0,P|410:121|395:221,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,288,48217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,291,48560,2,0,B|194:264|196:245|196:245|214:214|214:214|174:141|215:101,1,200,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,40,49588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,49931,12,0,52674,0:0:0:0:
256,191,54045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
333,98,54388,2,0,P|365:110|397:109,1,50
440,110,54731,2,0,B|437:167|437:167|413:214,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,302,55417,5,0,0:0:0:0:
247,320,55760,2,0,P|221:294|207:263,1,50
181,232,56102,2,0,P|170:182|181:130,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,20,56788,6,0,P|266:35|316:9,1,100
349,131,57474,2,0,P|294:146|293:203,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,293,58160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
135,231,58502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,110,58845,2,0,B|186:157|235:112,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,105,59531,6,0,P|323:198|228:249,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,311,60560,2,0,P|153:286|153:255,1,50
160,206,60902,2,0,P|128:154|148:126,1,100
256,79,61588,2,0,P|314:58|352:72,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,173,62274,5,0,0:0:0:0:
356,281,62617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,175,62960,1,8,0:0:0:0:
231,280,63302,2,0,P|219:307|189:317,1,50
142,305,63645,2,0,P|104:265|111:212,1,100
142,108,64331,2,8,P|161:79|176:32,2,75
161,165,65017,5,4,0:0:0:0:
221,268,65360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,268,65702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
403,165,66045,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,50,66388,2,0,P|392:72|350:57,1,100
249,124,67074,2,0,B|285:159|354:139,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,212,67760,6,0,P|352:223|311:219,1,75.0000028610231
326,311,68445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,264,68788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,278,69131,2,0,P|109:326|45:284,1,150.000005722046
53,190,70160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
107,106,70502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,52,70845,2,0,P|222:54|270:107,1,100
310,191,71531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
289,270,71874,2,0,B|258:317|201:317|201:317|195:259|147:230,1,200
350,94,73245,6,0,P|334:138|296:148,2,66.6666666666667,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,14,73931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
197,207,74617,6,0,P|210:179|208:144,1,66.6666666666667,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,68,75074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,1,75302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
235,219,75988,6,0,P|271:186|282:147,1,66.6666666666667,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,93,76445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,5,76674,2,0,B|426:23|426:23|451:59,1,89.9999972534181,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,139,77131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,242,77360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
154,305,78045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78731,12,0,81474,0:0:0:0:
254,192,82845,5,0,0:0:0:0:
133,191,83188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,91,83531,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,244,84217,6,0,P|421:206|425:191,2,66.6666666666667
336,157,84902,2,0,P|328:82|348:65,2,79.9999975585938
Asaiga
Sorry for being late, updated along with a quick mod. No kudosu because you already gave me one accidentally.

opinions

Insane

To be honest, I can't really mod this one. The patterns and flows feel clumsy, this is said base on my current personal level. That's it.

Collab

00:00:560 (1,2,1,2) - An inconsistent feel. Their spacing look almost the same but the later one skipped 1/2 beat
00:56:617 (4,1) - Should the spacing between these bigger? The music shows emphasize from my hearing.
Again on this one, it feels not the nicest but can't find anything to fix lol.

Kami's

I feel weird an uncomfortable use of angles here. Especially from the sliders, some jumps are nice


Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 43688,60402,84402
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:Asaiga's Easy
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:977203
BeatmapSetID:440761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
560,342.857142857143,4,3,0,70,1,0
560,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
10516,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
10859,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
11531,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
34502,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
41716,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0
52602,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,70,0,0
54045,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
67588,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
70160,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
76002,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
76916,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
77374,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
78745,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
84388,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
84688,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
84916,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
85145,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
85374,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,1
85588,-142.857142857143,4,3,0,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 255,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 192,192,192
Combo5 : 55,55,55

[HitObjects]
104,286,560,6,4,L|296:237,1,139.999995727539,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,218,1931,2,0,P|334:285|274:343,1,139.999995727539
194,366,3302,2,0,P|125:371|47:347,1,139.999995727539
6,268,4674,2,0,P|55:203|123:189,1,139.999995727539
206,175,6045,6,8,L|380:152,1,139.999995727539
399,238,7417,2,0,P|438:182|428:109,1,139.999995727539
481,29,8788,2,0,P|396:16|344:58,1,139.999995727539
282,110,10160,2,0,B|241:143|241:143|178:125|130:181,1,139.999995727539
211,237,11531,6,8,P|263:282|290:346,1,139.999995727539
351,269,12902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,188,13588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,91,14274,2,2,P|327:124|305:195,1,139.999995727539
351,269,15645,6,0,L|161:289,1,139.999995727539
218,381,17017,2,0,P|148:358|108:287,1,139.999995727539
69,216,18388,2,0,B|65:56,1,139.999995727539
160,101,19760,2,8,P|238:112|299:87,1,139.999995727539
390,74,21131,2,2,L|375:224,1,139.999995727539
275,210,22502,6,8,P|294:276|354:309,1,139.999995727539
443,348,23874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
495,265,24560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
473,169,25245,2,2,L|334:164,1,139.999995727539,2|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,141,26617,2,2,P|246:231|301:267,1,139.999995727539
256,192,27988,12,0,29360,0:0:0:0:
403,168,30731,6,8,P|371:247|310:273,1,139.999995727539,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,174,32102,2,8,P|324:103|293:42,1,139.999995727539,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,117,33474,6,8,P|165:92|100:115,1,139.999995727539
165,189,34845,2,8,P|229:212|293:187,1,139.999995727539
336,99,36217,6,8,P|391:183|367:252,1,139.999995727539
408,313,37588,2,8,P|338:308|292:259,1,139.999995727539
265,165,38960,6,8,L|100:160,1,139.999995727539
151,66,40331,2,8,L|309:47,1,139.999995727539
387,37,41702,6,8,P|429:102|431:171,1,139.999995727539
379,245,43074,2,8,L|239:230,1,139.999995727539
203,139,44445,6,8,P|151:192|147:261,1,139.999995727539
178,347,45817,2,8,L|343:361,1,139.999995727539
415,367,47188,6,8,B|478:372|478:372|456:250,1,139.999995727539
449,199,48560,2,8,B|438:159|438:159|339:151,1,139.999995727539
358,247,49931,6,8,P|289:240|243:190,1,139.999995727539
177,117,51302,2,8,P|268:93|330:141,1,139.999995727539
384,168,52674,1,8,0:0:0:0:
170,329,54045,6,0,L|156:172,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,98,55417,2,0,P|209:103|252:167,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,233,56788,6,0,L|361:258,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,336,58160,2,2,P|456:275|433:188,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,114,59531,6,0,L|282:151,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,59,60902,2,8,P|199:112|202:181,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,148,62274,2,8,P|292:216|241:261,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,328,63645,6,0,L|118:188,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,112,65017,2,2,L|309:94,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,144,66388,2,0,L|353:298,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67760,12,0,69131,0:0:0:0:
304,80,70502,6,12,P|278:135|171:159,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,67,71874,2,12,P|141:89|107:148,1,139.999995727539,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,246,73245,6,0,L|295:235,1,139.999995727539,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,324,74617,2,0,L|143:353,1,139.999995727539,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,304,75988,6,0,B|144:148|-18:171|91:-6,1,279.999991455078
164,20,78045,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78731,12,0,81474,0:0:0:0:
64,219,82845,6,8,P|155:262|217:236,1,139.999995727539
255,181,84217,2,6,B|308:163|308:163|317:234|317:234|372:195|372:195|375:274|406:256,1,279.999991455078,6|6,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:

I will mod again once you get some better mods
Start

Remilia_CO wrote:

from my queue

Extra
  1. 00:34:845 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't fit any rhythm..
  2. 00:33:302 (5) - there is no reason for using short slider here..

Kami's Insane
  1. 00:25:245 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - slightly adjust the shape of those triangles might be better.
  2. 00:45:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it seems not following any rhythm of the music..
  3. 00:59:874 (2,5) - hmmm..looks not as good as you thought imo.
  4. 01:04:331 (3) - the shape is kinda weird..
  5. 00:58:674 (3,4,5) - overmapped
  6. 01:04:331 (3,4) - second slider should start here 01:04:588 - and you need a short slider here imo 01:04:845 -
  7. Jumps in kiai part shows kinda random.

Insane
  1. 00:00:560 (1,2) - too close.
  2. I didn't quite understand why you nake some of 1/2 so close while others are so far away. I didn't feel it related to any of the music, this kind of unreasoning spacing was not seen in recent mapping style for long time and usually appeared only in very old maps.. Or if you just didn't considered about it orz. If so, I think you got to fix those distance problems.
  3. There are some example of what I said: 00:36:045 (5,1,2) - 00:37:588 (2,3,4,5) - 01:19:074 (2,3,4) -
  4. 00:12:902 (7) - there is sound here 00:13:160
  5. And still, patterns seems random and arbitrary. There is still large room for improvement.

Hard
  1. 00:06:217 (2,3) - I think here is still an DS problem eventhought it is a Hard
  2. 00:40:160 (1) - The SV makes no sense here orz, it's too sudden and without implication of music. And it plays awkward
  3. 00:51:131 (1) - same
  4. 00:59:360 (2,3) - make it totally overlapped like your other patterns
  5. 00:52:674 (1,2,3) - same distance might be better
  6. There are some blanket problems I didn't mention, I think you need to check it.
  7. 01:10:160 (2,3,4,5,1) - this doesn't really fit the rhythm or vocal and is not suggested in a Hard diff.
  8. 01:13:931 (4) - unsnapped object
  9. 01:16:902 (5) - make it reverse might fit the rhythm more imo.
  10. Still need more work in patterns, lots of patterns for now looks too random and arbitrary.

Normal
  1. 00:25:931 (3,4,5) - the slightly overlapping looks odd.
  2. 00:34:845 (3,4) - Why do you suddenly use an 1/2 beat here, feels awkward and not consistent with your other parts.
  3. I do not suggest any SV changing in a Normal diff.
  4. Patterns need more work, now it shows a lot unorganized.

EASY
  1. 00:03:302 (3,4) - the overlapping is not good
  2. 00:10:160 (4) - why whistle here.. And it's better to follow the DS
  3. 00:14:274 (4) - no any sense for a whistle here. and many following sliders same.
  4. 00:36:217 (1,2) - bad overlapping
  5. 00:41:702 (1,2) - this one is ok compare with the one above
  6. 01:24:217 (2) - ?????
  7. needs more work in patterns

Good luck XD
B r o k e n
idk if this mapset is still alive but...

Remilia_CO wrote:

Remilia_CO wrote:

from my queue

Hard
  1. 00:06:217 (2,3) - I think here is still an DS problem eventhought it is a Hard did some adjustments, relizsed some notes dont have same distance
  2. 00:40:160 (1) - The SV makes no sense here orz, it's too sudden and without implication of music. And it plays awkward well it is for the vocal, I do agree on it playing awkward, I'll try out a few things
  3. 00:51:131 (1) - same naw I think this one is fine
  4. 00:59:360 (2,3) - make it totally overlapped like your other patterns it's stack like this due to stack Leniency, so it looks stacked right to me
  5. 00:52:674 (1,2,3) - same distance might be better I was pretty sure I fixed this already...wth xD
  6. There are some blanket problems I didn't mention, I think you need to check it. will do in time
  7. 01:10:160 (2,3,4,5,1) - this doesn't really fit the rhythm or vocal and is not suggested in a Hard diff. did an adjustment, seems to fit pretty well to me
  8. 01:13:931 (4) - unsnapped object looks sanped to me
  9. 01:16:902 (5) - make it reverse might fit the rhythm more imo. hmm yah your right, but i want the sound @ 01:17:360 (1) - clickable
  10. Still need more work in patterns, lots of patterns for now looks too random and arbitrary.

Good luck XD
Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54045
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 43688,60402,84402
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:KABANERI OF THE IRON FORTRESS (TV Edit)
Artist:EGOIST
ArtistUnicode:EGOIST
Creator:PlasticMemor
Version:B r o k e n's Hard
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri TV size op Broken Asaiga jamimc2 Kami-senpai opening
BeatmapID:962746
BeatmapSetID:440761

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"kabane.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
560,342.857142857143,4,2,0,60,1,0
560,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
6045,-100,4,2,0,40,0,0
11360,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,0
19760,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,70,0,0
40160,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
41702,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
51131,-200,4,2,0,60,0,0
52674,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
54045,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,1
67760,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
70502,-83.3333333333333,4,2,0,80,0,1
78045,-133.333333333333,4,2,0,60,0,0
84217,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 55,55,55
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,0,0
Combo4 : 192,192,192

[HitObjects]
144,64,560,6,0,P|248:96|352:60,1,210,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,76,1931,2,0,P|448:172|416:292,1,210
340,280,3302,2,0,P|316:160|348:76,1,210
264,64,4674,2,0,P|164:88|60:64,1,210
56,232,6045,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,364,6217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,328,6388,2,0,P|212:336|252:324,1,70
312,280,6731,2,0,P|336:216|304:136,1,140
232,132,7245,6,0,P|196:140|152:128,1,70
104,76,7588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,12,7760,2,0,P|192:8|240:20,1,70
292,64,8102,2,0,P|368:80|436:64,1,140
428,236,8788,6,0,L|468:304,1,70
388,336,9131,2,0,L|344:264,1,70
300,212,9474,2,0,P|232:188|156:224,1,140
92,240,9988,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,292,10160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
28,292,10331,2,0,P|20:328|28:368,1,70
104,328,10674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,284,10845,2,0,P|240:268|328:304,1,140
388,296,11360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,296,11445,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,296,11531,6,0,L|416:244,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,172,11874,2,0,L|400:124,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,68,12217,1,0,3:0:0:0:
288,116,12388,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,12560,2,0,P|192:164|168:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,116,12902,5,2,3:0:0:0:
52,172,13074,2,0,L|52:228,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
112,264,13417,2,0,P|140:268|180:256,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,13760,2,0,L|272:280,2,52.5000020027161,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,156,14274,2,0,L|316:216,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,156,14617,2,0,L|324:100,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,14960,2,0,P|428:84|440:128,1,105.000004005432,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
472,276,15645,6,0,L|408:232,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,276,15988,2,0,P|324:280|284:268,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,16331,2,0,P|212:228|172:236,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,264,16674,1,0,3:0:0:0:
84,192,16845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,16931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,192,17017,6,0,L|112:144,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,92,17360,2,0,P|196:88|232:96,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,112,17702,2,0,P|300:140|292:172,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,212,18045,2,0,L|180:252,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,284,18388,2,0,L|300:336,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,352,18731,6,0,L|180:308,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,344,19074,2,0,L|72:288,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,248,19417,1,4,0:0:0:0:
216,96,19760,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,152,19931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,172,20102,2,0,L|296:192,1,52.5000020027161
376,212,20445,2,0,L|360:272,2,52.5000020027161
420,116,20959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,64,21131,6,0,L|360:36,3,26.2500010013581
324,56,21474,2,0,L|312:32,3,26.2500010013581
288,64,21817,2,0,L|256:52,3,26.2500010013581
256,96,22160,2,0,L|228:100,2,26.2500010013581
280,172,22502,5,2,3:0:0:0:
200,180,22674,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,112,22845,1,0,3:0:0:0:
84,148,23017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,23188,1,0,3:0:0:0:
164,248,23360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,248,23531,2,0,P|196:252|236:240,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,216,23874,5,2,3:0:0:0:
288,216,24045,2,0,P|292:184|284:148,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,24388,2,0,P|224:92|192:96,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,24731,2,0,P|196:168|232:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,25074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,25245,1,2,3:0:0:0:
276,244,25417,6,0,P|244:240|208:248,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
148,264,25760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,264,25931,1,0,3:0:0:0:
80,224,26102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,304,26274,2,0,P|96:328|124:340,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,344,26617,5,2,3:0:0:0:
272,332,26788,2,0,L|312:280,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
356,228,27131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,176,27302,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,176,27474,2,0,P|392:156|352:152,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
292,156,27817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,104,27988,5,2,3:0:0:0:
172,152,28160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,204,28331,2,0,P|224:232|240:272,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,300,28674,1,0,3:0:0:0:
228,344,28845,2,0,P|192:348|168:340,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
120,288,29188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,208,29360,5,2,3:0:0:0:
120,208,29531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,156,29702,1,0,3:0:0:0:
212,228,29874,2,0,P|240:232|280:220,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
284,152,30217,2,0,P|312:148|352:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
400,196,30560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,76,30731,6,0,P|384:60|320:76,1,105.000004005432,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,84,31245,2,0,P|228:88|188:76,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
136,52,31588,2,0,P|108:48|76:56,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
28,108,31931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,232,32102,6,0,L|124:312,1,105.000004005432,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
184,364,32617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,352,32788,2,0,P|292:356|328:344,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,284,33131,1,0,3:0:0:0:
356,284,33302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,172,33474,6,0,P|240:160|192:180,1,105.000004005432,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
232,248,33988,2,0,P|260:252|292:244,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
356,216,34331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,148,34502,2,0,P|407:121|396:88,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,80,34845,6,0,L|228:188,1,105.000004005432,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
156,200,35360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,144,35531,2,0,P|100:112|112:76,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,28,35874,2,0,P|180:24|216:32,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,96,36217,5,2,3:0:0:0:
312,96,36388,2,0,L|348:160,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
292,208,36731,2,0,L|260:156,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
208,220,37074,2,0,P|180:224|152:220,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
88,184,37417,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,300,37588,6,0,L|240:352,1,105.000004005432,2|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
308,356,38102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,316,38274,2,0,L|404:244,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,192,38617,2,0,L|380:141,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,228,38960,6,0,P|260:232|235:228,1,52.5000020027161,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,184,39302,1,0,3:0:0:0:
236,140,39474,2,0,P|264:144|300:136,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
316,68,39817,2,0,P|288:64|256:68,1,52.5000020027161,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
188,68,40160,6,0,B|144:112|128:176|160:236|256:212|176:200|124:216|164:280,1,245
264,144,41702,6,0,L|312:232,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,280,42045,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,280,42217,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,348,42388,2,0,P|344:356|384:344,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,268,42731,2,0,P|436:260|488:280,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,184,43074,6,0,L|436:100,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,184,43417,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,184,43588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,236,43760,2,0,P|260:216|188:240,1,140,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,200,44445,6,0,L|156:112,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,76,44788,2,0,P|240:68|280:80,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,96,45130,1,0,3:0:0:0:
352,96,45302,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,45474,2,0,P|352:220|344:248,1,70,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,45817,6,0,P|256:232|276:184,1,70,2|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,152,46160,1,0,3:0:0:0:
196,152,46331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,216,46502,2,0,L|188:300,2,70,0|0|0,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
88,280,47017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,344,47188,5,2,3:0:0:0:
220,356,47360,2,0,P|256:360|300:352,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
324,280,47702,2,0,L|268:212,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
328,156,48045,2,0,L|272:88,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
364,76,48388,6,0,P|400:68|440:84,1,70,0|2,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,48731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,156,48902,2,0,P|436:220|472:296,1,140,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
392,316,49417,2,0,P|352:308|316:320,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,260,49760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,204,49931,6,0,L|356:120,2,70,2|0|0,3:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
260,148,50445,2,0,P|220:140|184:148,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
116,176,50788,2,0,P|108:208|128:264,1,70,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
200,260,51131,6,0,P|116:332|28:252,1,245,8|4,3:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
191,145,52674,5,4,0:0:0:0:
280,252,52902,1,4,0:0:0:0:
412,300,53131,1,4,0:0:0:0:
368,168,53360,2,0,P|340:88|376:32,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,252,54045,6,0,L|332:340,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,316,54388,2,0,P|196:276|196:228,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,164,54731,2,0,P|336:192|416:156,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,55245,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,52,55417,6,0,P|192:44|148:56,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,116,55760,2,0,L|36:188,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,180,56102,2,0,P|196:216|204:308,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,276,56617,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,368,56788,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,360,56960,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,57131,2,0,P|360:268|408:292,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,192,57474,2,0,P|432:100|364:64,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,57988,5,0,0:0:0:0:
352,164,58160,2,0,P|328:200|264:220,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,58502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58674,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58760,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,168,58845,2,0,P|140:132|176:116,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,132,59188,5,2,0:0:0:0:
336,48,59360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,48,59531,2,0,P|380:40|428:56,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,132,59874,2,0,P|320:140|276:132,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,56,60217,2,0,P|180:120|232:220,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,260,60731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,296,60902,6,0,P|408:340|392:388,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,344,61245,2,0,P|260:352|220:344,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,296,61588,2,0,L|64:208,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,136,61931,2,0,L|188:216,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,100,62274,6,0,L|148:32,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,8,62617,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,100,62788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,62960,2,0,P|276:280|212:360,1,167.999994873047,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63474,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,268,63645,6,0,L|288:268,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,176,63988,2,0,L|292:176,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,64331,2,0,P|148:108|172:52,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,48,64588,2,0,P|244:40|304:60,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,72,64845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
268,196,65017,6,0,P|312:208|352:196,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,84,65360,1,6,3:0:0:0:
420,84,65531,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,216,65702,2,0,P|444:260|428:308,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66045,2,0,P|296:304|316:252,1,83.9999974365235,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,148,66388,5,6,0:0:0:0:
312,348,66731,1,4,0:0:0:0:
240,160,67074,1,4,0:0:0:0:
184,352,67417,1,6,0:0:0:0:
340,224,67760,6,0,P|392:212|444:232,1,105.000004005432
392,292,68274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,292,68445,2,0,L|445:348,1,52.5000020027161
360,368,68788,2,0,L|304:304,1,78.7500030040742
272,296,69131,6,0,P|172:328|64:292,1,210.000008010865
112,144,70160,2,0,L|72:168,3,26.2500010013581
148,132,70502,6,0,P|236:116|324:148,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,212,71017,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,148,71188,2,0,P|468:104|452:52,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,28,71531,2,0,P|320:16|284:24,1,83.9999974365235,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,71874,6,0,P|224:204|128:236,1,167.999994873047,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,136,72560,2,0,L|296:256,1,167.999994873047
416,92,73245,5,2,3:0:0:0:
300,160,73474,1,4,3:0:0:0:
428,204,73702,2,0,P|436:248|428:292,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,312,73931,2,0,P|376:316|336:308,1,55.9999982910157,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,84,74445,5,4,3:0:0:0:
192,88,74617,1,4,3:0:0:0:
296,176,74845,1,4,3:0:0:0:
168,224,75074,2,0,P|128:232|84:224,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,248,75302,2,0,P|52:292|60:336,1,83.9999974365235,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,60,75988,5,4,3:0:0:0:
244,180,76217,1,4,3:0:0:0:
384,192,76445,2,0,P|392:232|368:272,1,55.9999982910157,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,300,76674,2,0,P|336:304|296:296,1,55.9999982910157,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,272,76902,2,0,P|208:256|152:276,1,111.999996582031,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,224,77360,6,0,P|44:140|92:44,1,167.999994873047,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,148,78045,2,0,P|256:164|340:136,1,157.500006008148
256,192,78731,12,0,81474,0:0:0:0:
256,136,82160,5,0,3:0:0:0:
256,136,82845,1,2,3:0:0:0:
292,288,83188,1,8,3:0:0:0:
152,216,83531,1,4,1:0:0:0:
120,76,84217,5,4,3:0:0:0:
152,216,84445,1,4,3:0:0:0:
260,128,84674,1,4,3:0:0:0:
348,236,84902,1,4,3:0:0:0:
468,160,85131,1,4,3:0:0:0:
388,44,85360,1,4,1:0:0:0:
micchi_chi
Is this alive?
Anyway, mod from my modding Q
A very late one

Red : unrankable (or might be unrankable) issue
Blue : highly suggested to fix
Black : normal suggestion
Green : random comment
Bold : slightly more important than others

[General]
  1. I think it will be more appropriate to end the kiai here 01:21:474 since the instrument afterwards is just like outro.

[Asaiga's Easy]
  1. 00:11:531 (1,2) - Lol why are they placed like this, don't look really good, very close to each other, almost overlapped, terrible flow >.< You can try some position like this http://puu.sh/pK2Rt/7b55b7f981.jpg or anything else.
  2. 00:25:245 (4,5) - DS please, and blanket is slightly off.
  3. 00:30:731 (1,2) - They don't go along together .-. (2)'s body is almost touching with (1)'s head and the flow is very pointy. Select this entire thing 00:32:102 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - and press ctrl+shift+R and rotate for a few degrees counter clockwise. You could DS the rest afterwards. http://puu.sh/pK335/46c7798c44.jpg like that should be better.
  4. 00:47:188 (1) - Don't use acute angle slider like this since the flow would be ruined, use 90° or obtuse angle if you want to use slider like this.
  5. 00:48:560 (2,1) - what do you think about something like this http://puu.sh/pK3d6/dd71e99dad.jpg looks better for me owo
  6. 00:52:674 (3) - I think you should use some slider here to support the noisy sounds afterwards. You can use 2/1 or 3/1 slider. It's just feel so empty with a single circle.
  7. 01:15:988 (1) - 2/1 reverse slider would be more fitting here imo to support the very big sound here 01:16:674 since slider tick alone won't be enough.
  8. Your map is like 90% 2/1 sliders.... I think you should use more variation like you did here 00:23:874 (2,3) - and maybe using some reverse slider, adding stuff at 2nd and 4th beat is still pretty normal for Easy, but yeah the current still play good tho just getting pretty boring after a while >~< And a lot of your blanket is slightly (but noticeably) off, try to fix them~

[Jami's Normal]
  1. Title conflict, unicode title conflict, check these. It seems like it comes from your diff.
  2. You really better start from the very start since the other diffs does so. This is just a TV size map, you shouldn't be that lazy o-o
  3. 00:17:017 (5,6) - They are touching, not even overlapping, and it's not good .-. You can fix this by simply select these two 00:17:702 (6,1) - and then press ctrl+shift+R and then rotate it counter clockwise a few degrees. http://puu.sh/pK3GD/19cd644b76.jpg something like that should do better.
  4. 00:21:817 (7,1) - You could do it like this http://puu.sh/pK3MH/bad6654fa7.jpg P.S : I moved (7), and yeah, have fun DS-ing.... anyway, this should be moved so it'll looks neater.
  5. 00:24:560 (3,2) - Nope, move (2)
  6. 00:25:931 (3,4,5) - Nope pattern, use something less touchy. http://puu.sh/pK3Ti/ed0bee8f15.jpg
  7. 00:28:674 (3,4) - Nope, you can rotate this one to like I suggest on 00:17:017 (5,6) -
  8. 00:34:502 (2,3) - No touchy! Even something like this should do better http://puu.sh/pK3WO/290ee6900e.jpg and is the 1/2 pattern really necessary? there's no really sound at red tick so I think you better keep your pattern on 1/1, well okay, that way my suggestion won't work anymore, use something like this instead http://puu.sh/pK41a/3f7603995a.jpg
  9. 00:40:331 (4,5,1) - No touchy~! http://puu.sh/pK436/058c54c2e0.jpg
  10. 00:41:702 snap the green line here. The unsnapped green line cause these two 00:41:702 (1,2) - have different SV while they should have the same SV.
  11. 00:44:445 (1,2) - No jumpy at Normal! DS these.
  12. 00:44:445 (1,3) - If you gonna do it like this, just stack their tails and make (3) less curvy. http://puu.sh/pK48S/4bed11ff6e.jpg
  13. 00:48:560 (3) - I think the first white anchor is unnecessary, just delete it, the slider should looks better. And also arrange the last anchor a bit. http://puu.sh/pK4bo/5953c36333.jpg
  14. 00:57:474 (2) - Don't look that good and almost touching with 00:57:474 (2,5) - make (2) less curvy http://puu.sh/pK4eG/141863cb83.jpg
  15. 01:06:388 (5,6,1) - Try to do something like this http://puu.sh/pK4jA/04d1e40ae8.jpg it would looks neater.
  16. 01:13:245 (1,2) - This is actually pretty hard to hit because of 1/3 pattern... try to use something simpler for Normal like 1/1 reverse slider or single 2/1 slider. 01:14:617 (1,2,3) - this too, even harder.
  17. 01:14:617 (1,1) - Nope, move 01:15:988 (1) - somewhere not touching.
  18. 01:15:988 (1,2,3,4,5) - uuhhh, nope.
  19. 01:24:217 (1,2) - Why different SV? just keep them the same.
  20. Kinda need grinding in positioning, there's a lot of overlap here, remember, better no touchy
    no touchy fishy
    http://i.imgur.com/ZigXHzX.gif

whoa
good luck~!!!

edit
BanchoBot
This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.
Please sign in to reply.

New reply