Shiena Nishizawa - The Asterisk War

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Doyak wrote:

Sorry, but I have to pop this bubble for the time being.

[Lecana's Insane]
* 00:05:858 (4,5) - The sliderhead doesn't have that 'clearer' sound while the slidertail does. So why not use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5681986 instead?
:arrow:fixed
* 00:11:418 (5,6,1) - This rhythm is questionable. There's no strong sound on 00:11:733 - this blue tick and 00:11:837 - is literally the boundary downbeat that discriminates the after and the before part. Leaving it on a mere slidertail gives awkward transition between these parts. So use this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/qcQJQ/27e717a1fe.jpg
:arrow:fixed
* 00:21:855 - I don't hear any sounds, just use 2 circles?
:arrow:fixed
* 00:25:264 (1) - 00:28:621 (1) - I don't see a good reason to represent the blue tick, while ignoring 00:25:684 - this white tick that contains both 'stronger drum', 'vocals', and a sound that keeps repeating http://puu.sh/qcR8c/f31b43578b.png this. The whole section is focused on the vocals anyway.
:arrow:fixed
* 01:07:012 (3,1) - This spacing is rather confusing with 1/4 beats. It looks more like a soft 1/4 flow but it's actually disconnected as 1/2. You'd better put it away and disconnect the flow so that it actually works as a 1/2.
:arrow:fixed
* 01:22:327 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you're following the drums, this kind of beat doesn't work anymore, as the drum pattern is a bit changed and Karia got it very nicely ( notice that 01:22:327 - has 1/3 drums). See how strong 01:23:166 - this drum and 01:22:956 - 01:23:061 - doesn't contain any drums.
:arrow:sorry,better for me.
thanks mod and sorry late.

Satellite wrote:

Lecana's Insane -> 00:08:061 (2) - why snap 1/6 ? i think slider end here 00:08:376 - probably missing snapped.
:arrow:あああああああああやらかし!!!fixed
ありがとナス!
osu file format v14

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Title:The Asterisk War
TitleUnicode:The Asterisk War
Artist:Shiena Nishizawa
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Del05
Version:Lecana's Insane
Source:学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags:the academy city on the water gakusen toshi image-- meg Lecana Karia CelsiusLK tv size opening
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Doyak
Hope this is the final check. I'm sorry for not saying all of them at once, but modding several times instead!

[Easy]
* lel, was the OD and HP was like this before? Lower them to around 2.

[Advanced]
* 00:46:663 (4,8) - Stack properly
* 01:00:089 (8,1) - DS too close.

I've discussed with Bakari for some points, and got some concerns about these:
* 01:13:935 (1,2) - This has some polarity issue as the beat snap changes widely, especially that 3/4 gap. So http://puu.sh/qkTTt/ffd7ebff86.jpg this is the only solution I found.
* 00:02:607 - 00:04:285 - 00:05:963 - Bakari also pointed out that these beats aren't worth to have a note while the blue ticks after it is empty and the bass sound actually disappears in the slider. So he suggested http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/BZYBULCN.jpg this instead.
* 00:47:921 (8) - He suggested http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/g3RLy0Ze.jpg cuz he thinks 00:48:761 - should be clickable, but I think the current rhythm works better, so it's your choice.

[Hyper]
* 01:23:900 (1) - This NC doesn't seem necessary. It looks rather weird and confusing with the previous 1/3s.

[Lecana's Insane]
* 00:11:628 (6) - Swap the hitsounds on the head and the tail?
* 00:11:837 (7,1) - NC should be on 7 instead of 1
* 00:27:362 (3) - Add a clap? It's a same vocal with others.
* 00:32:816 (2) - Sorry for not saying this in the first place. But here doesn't have any significant beat, while 00:32:712 - 00:32:921 - do. So you can use http://puu.sh/qkUD9/633f30bdfe.jpg or whatever.
* 00:36:593 (3,4) - 00:37:851 (3,4) - I wonder what's your purpose of these whistles are. I mean, why they appear only here and not on 00:39:949 (4) - 00:41:208 (5,6) - ?
* 01:17:607 (2) - Umm I don't see a good reason to ignore 01:17:712 - this enormous drum sound and focus on blue ticks. Would be great if you can try http://puu.sh/qkULg/d28e98741e.jpg




Also time for checking hitsounds~

* 01:16:453 - 01:16:768 - 01:17:082 - Using cymbals for all of these is pretty noisy. And because of this you couldn't add it on 01:17:292 - , while it's basically the same sound as 00:08:481 - . So add it here instead, and remove from 01:16:768 - 01:17:082 - and leave it only on 01:16:453 - .
* 00:35:334 - 60% volume here feels too loud, especially these whistles sounds stand out too much compared to other parts. Consider lowering it to 40~50%.
* 00:56:313 - On Normal/Advanced, hitsounds here sound really awkward because they don't contain all the drums that the hitsound pattern supposed to be. You'd better try to adjust them a little, so that they actually can represent the vocal properly.
* 01:03:026 - Same
* @Celsius: 00:55:474 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Are you really going to keep these finishes? Sounds a bit too loud for me, and that's the only part where you 'spammed' finishes, even 00:56:942 - this inside reverse slider. You 'selected' stronger vocals on other parts. Also 01:16:453 - Not adding a finish here kinda ruins the vocal emphasis imo. Also just wondering why 01:27:152 - this line is even here lol


I believe everything else is good to go now.
CelsiusLK
fixed the hitsound there and deleted green line
(delete some finish on the part you mentioned and add finish on 01:16:453 - )

hitsound copier was a mistake

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Lecana
ok.fixed.thanks again :3

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[Metadata]
Title:The Asterisk War
TitleUnicode:The Asterisk War
Artist:Shiena Nishizawa
ArtistUnicode:西沢幸奏
Creator:Del05
Version:Lecana's Insane
Source:学戦都市アスタリスク
Tags:the academy city on the water gakusen toshi image-- meg Lecana Karia CelsiusLK tv size opening
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316,46,54425,2,0,P|307:111|297:132,1,70
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270,259,55474,5,4,0:0:0:0:
270,259,55579,2,0,P|244:205|246:189,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,160,55788,2,0,P|158:126|165:44,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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51,302,56942,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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163,295,69949,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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268,334,73096,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,160,75089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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392,85,76033,1,10,0:0:0:0:
392,85,76243,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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Doyak
I thought about this again, and I decided to mod Lecana's diff more thoroughly before pushing this forward.

@Lecana

00:31:348 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Could you explain what these hitsounds represent? The claps are on weird spots and lacks emphasis too. You were emphasizing the vocals, so 00:30:928 - 00:31:558 - 00:33:026 - 00:33:236 - 00:33:446 - need claps, and 00:33:131 - clap should be removed. Also consider adding something(like whistles) on 00:32:607 (3,4) -
00:38:691 (1) - Maybe it's better to remove this finish, there's nothing to emphasize with that loud cymbal sound.
00:42:047 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - The clap sounds here are questionable, as there isn't anything special on 2/4th beat, but you still put claps on these beats. Like Karia's diff, I think not using additional hitsounds here (except those finishes) is better for this part.
00:43:726 (5,1) - 00:58:621 (6,1) - 01:05:124 (1,3) - 00:51:907 (1,2) - 01:09:740 (4,1) - Swap NC?
00:52:117 - 00:56:313 - add clap
01:06:383 - 01:07:222 - Considering what you did on 00:52:956 - 00:53:795 - , these needs finishes too. Also 00:52:956 (6) - needs NC.
01:08:900 - 00:55:474 - Finish consistency
01:17:607 (2,3) - Please use claps on 3's head, and remove it from 2. That's how you hitsounded the whole part. Also this jump might be too big as a circle-to-something 1/4, so mind reducing the spacing?
01:21:907 - Add clap

@Meg
01:10:369 (3) - 00:56:942 (4) - One minor thing, but finish consistency?
Meg

Doyak wrote:

I thought about this again, and I decided to mod Lecana's diff more thoroughly before pushing this forward.

@Meg
01:10:369 (3) - 00:56:942 (4) - One minor thing, but finish consistency? ok
thanks

to Del05, please add finish on 01:10:369 (3) -
Doyak

IamKwaN wrote:

i found current metadata having no issues, good luck!

http://puu.sh/qAZdK/e679912866.png from http://shiena-nishizawa.com/
http://puu.sh/qAZhj/92e806b27f.png from http://asterisk-war.com/music/
http://puu.sh/pNlk4/373fc310ae.jpg from http://shiena-nishizawa.com
http://puu.sh/pNllE/47c7325419.png from ^

IamKwaN wrote:

yea the official uses the same anime name for second season, only the wording for the opening changes, tv anime 学戦都市アスタリスク new opening 'The Asterisk War' as shown in one of the screenshots included in the previous pm.
Rizia
qualified
Agatsu
wooow

congrats del!
Affirmation
Good job, friend :)
Yuii-
01:04:284 (2) - Not specifically unrankable, but fixing the snap on the Advanced difficulty would be nice.

@Del: Your hitsounds are literally inaudible, except for the clap. Everything else seems non-existent.
@Lecana: I love your difficulty, it is really well done, in my opinion. Although the hitsounds are barely audible, there must be at least a 20% difference between music-effects to make them noticeable. Sections like 00:57:572 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - lack of hitsounding as a whole.
@Karia: 01:10:369 (5,1,2) - Plays quite poorly, this transition feels weird. It does not look bad in the editor, though. Would you mind stacking (1,2) please?
@Meg: Most of your finishes throughout the Kiai seem randomly placed. Especially the ones on 01:08:900 - they do not even go along with the music itself. You could definitely improve that. Also, 01:02:397 (2,3) - is a pain to play, that spacing and the flow to the left is so hard to catch up :( Could you consider something like this or even changing the whole pattern? (Personal opinion).

Personally, I do like the set, but the hitsounding could be heavily improved. Not only in terms of volume, but some hitsounds seem randomly placed and without a certain patterning.
Good luck and play Lecana's difficulty, you will not be disappointed 8-) !

(And yes, Shadow has a point.) Nonetheless, sometimes hearing to more opinions can be good ^^
Shad0w1and
Don't get depressed by the hate votes.
"Don't make a piece that 90% people satisfied with, but make a piece that 70% people hates and 30% love."
Nice job, Nice song.
We need more hard maps that do not offer PP.
-[ AmiShici ]-
Senengnya masi bisa ngerank map. Aku mah apa. Udah sirna harapan. wkwkwk

Gratz btw
Lami
Lecana's Insane

00:09:949 (8,2) - hiding reverse arrow is rankable nowadays?
Kibbleru

Lami wrote:

Lecana's Insane

00:09:949 (8,2) - hiding reverse arrow is rankable nowadays?
hitburst doesn't actually last long enough to cover.


Yuii- wrote:

01:04:284 (2) - Not specifically unrankable, but fixing the snap on the Advanced difficulty would be nice. I don't get it. what's wrong with this one?

@Del: Your hitsounds are literally inaudible, except for the clap. Everything else seems non-existent. agree, kiai could at least be 70-80%
@Lecana: I love your difficulty, it is really well done, in my opinion. Although the hitsounds are barely audible, there must be at least a 20% difference between music-effects to make them noticeable. Sections like 00:57:572 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - lack of hitsounding as a whole. agree here
@Karia: 01:10:369 (5,1,2) - Plays quite poorly, this transition feels weird. It does not look bad in the editor, though. Would you mind stacking (1,2) please? i think he was trying to be consistent with the previous non-stacked parts
@Meg: Most of your finishes throughout the Kiai seem randomly placed. Especially the ones on 01:08:900 - they do not even go along with the music itself. You could definitely improve that. Also, 01:02:397 (2,3) - is a pain to play, that spacing and the flow to the left is so hard to catch up :( Could you consider something like this or even changing the whole pattern? (Personal opinion).

Personally, I do like the set, but the hitsounding could be heavily improved. Not only in terms of volume, but some hitsounds seem randomly placed and without a certain patterning.
Good luck and play Lecana's difficulty, you will not be disappointed 8-) !

(And yes, Shadow has a point.) Nonetheless, sometimes hearing to more opinions can be good ^^
-NanoRIPE-
Grats kak!! ~
Meg
oh gratz
Akitoshi
Congrats guys!
lolia

Yuii- wrote:

@Karia: 01:10:369 (5,1,2) - Plays quite poorly, this transition feels weird. It does not look bad in the editor, though. Would you mind stacking (1,2) please?As kib said, I wanted to keep prev speed. Plus, I'd played my diff many times but never felt it's weird.
chainpullz

Shad0w1and wrote:

Don't get depressed by the hate votes.
"Don't make a piece that 90% people satisfied with, but make a piece that 70% people hates and 30% love."
Nice job, Nice song.
We need more interesting maps.
^This (though difficulty & pp are 100% irrelevant in the end)

Low bpm doesn't get enough attention imo. In general the lower the bpm the more expressive/technical a song tends to be which really opens up all sorts of possibilities for creativity when it comes to mapping. It's just sad that people fixate so much numbers be it pp or star difficulty.

People fixate on things like "I can play most X.X* maps but I can't play this one it must be bad and/or I don't like it because of that."

Similarly they hate patterns that replace spacing with harsh flow because "I can play large jumps but I cant even hit these tiny ones this mapping sucks" failing to realize that such patterns are meant to replace large spacing, not to be easier than it.

It honestly feels like people are starting to forget that osu is more than just an aim game these days tbh. In mania people don't hesitate to do things like map 1/2, 1/3, 1/4, 1/6, 1/8, 1/12 all in the same chart if it's in the music even if it makes the chart less playable. Harder to read isn't always a bad thing like everyone tends to make it out to be these days. In the end most music has structure and it's not really up to the mapper to hold the player's hands if they can't hear it.

(tbh idk why I'm posting this and this isn't really related to the map but if it inspires even 1 more interesting map mission accomplished I guess?)
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