Fycho wrote:

[General]

1. 统一所有难度widescreen support; fixed√
2. soft-hitfinish.wav似乎并没有用到;

fixed√

[Insane]

1. 00:11:602 (3,1,1) - 这三个滑条组合起来看起来不是很美观，http://puu.sh/poLfk/d3d07cb5b0.jpg; fixed√
2. 00:34:511 (3) - 换成单折返+一个circle/两个非折返会比现在好点，双折返坑读图; fixed√
3. 01:11:239 (5) - 离前面的太近，建议0.8/0.9x的间距; fixed√
4. 01:25:420 - 滑条头可以加finish，配合着曲子里的cymbal音; fixed√
5. 01:26:148 - 01:26:511 - 01:26:875 - ^;

fixed√

[Tt's Hard]

1. 00:00:330 (1) - 头上加默认的soft finish; fixed√
2. 00:09:057 (1,2) - 这里为什么不用正常间距1.3x？跟周围一比一个1.7x很奇葩; fixed√
3. 01:13:057 (1) - 略丑，建议换种形状比如http://puu.sh/poLGX/bad868c64c.jpg;

fixed√

[Lily Bread's Normal]

1. 00:27:784 (3,4) - 平行下，现在看着很随机很乱;
2. 00:46:511 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 正六边形？看起来位置比较随机，是个大概的位置; 个人还认为Normal连续这么多的1/1circle对Normal来说不是很友好，建议00:46:875 (1,2,3,4) - 合并为两个1/1的滑条;
3. 01:23:784 (5) - 头上clap;
4. 01:25:420 (2,3,4) - 这边所有白线可加finish随曲;
5. 这个难度里有些弯曲比较厉害的滑条看起来不是很美观，比如00:06:875 (3) - 00:28:693 (5) - 建议缩小弯曲程度; 另外00:11:966 (1) - 00:12:693 (3,4) - 另外这些保持相同的弯曲程度看起来会更neat;

[Narcissu's Easy]

1. 01:24:693 (1,2,3,1,1) - 这边KIAI结束，间距可以回到1.1x; fixed√
2. 01:25:420 (2) - 01:26:148 - 可以加finish;

fixed√

我觉的Normal需要在细节美观上下点功夫，先这样吧GL~

Fycho wrote:

Using ogg hitsiounds disobeys current rank criterias. Until we get further comfirmation that the rule is outdated and not applied, your shouldn't use them for rank.

Narcissu wrote:

咋不喊我改图呢= =

静流说的那个NC 也帮我移到白线后面吧

ZZHBOY wrote:

...来看看吧
[Easy]
00:46:875 (1,2,3,4) - 可以包好点 fixed√ 不过感觉改了后好像还是看不出什么区别 思考
[Normal]
00:06:875 (3,4) - 好丑啊
00:11:966 (1,3,4) - 这种地方复制粘贴然后翻转下好看的多
01:15:057 (5,6,7) - 这里几个连续三个1/2 那些红线开始的滑条感觉不太好 可以试试这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5498819
[Hard]
00:10:875 (6) - 弧度弄小点 fixed√
00:30:511 (4) - 也是^ fixed√
00:43:239 (3) - 这里去跟那些1/2的音啊 用1/1的滑条带过去感觉不好 fixed√
00:54:330 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 别放连续的1/4 这里比I都难按了 简化下 fixed√
01:07:057 - 01:09:966 - 还有几个类似的地方我觉得完全没必要空着 放个圈还连续点 fixed√ 01:14:330 - 这个地方我感觉感觉这段节奏 可以当做DIAI的休息段 所以这里没加
01:17:239 - 也是建议加个圈 fixed√
[Insane]
00:11:966 (1,1,2) - 明明1/2的地方有鼓 强行去放3/4跟人声又何必 00:12:148 - 这个音我感觉可以不跟 因为声音很轻 比人声要轻很多 00:12:511 - 这里改了跟鼓声
00:20:511 (8,9) - 节奏换下 那个滑条尾巴的地方有点蛋疼 fixed√
00:25:784 (1) - 也是有1/2音的 别随手就是一个3/4 没什么意思 fixed√
00:32:330 (5) - 类似这种地方我觉得完全可以和前面离远点啊... fixed√
00:37:420 (3,4,5) - 这里flow太蛋疼了 可以考虑改下排列 fixed√
00:41:602 (2,3,4,5) - ^ 这里我感觉没必要改啊 也不卡手 而且00:41:966 (3,4,5,1) - 和00:43:057 (2,3,4,5) - 同一类型的
00:43:602 (4,5,1) - 这种完全可以包好看点啊 其实这个地方开着DS挺难选位置包00:43:784 (5) - 的 考虑了下 我还是把00:43:966 (1) - 移到了右边
01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这么懒的...?=.= 这个地方其实也不算偷懒吧 我只是想在最后摆一个稍微不同的梗 这里正好两段节奏重复的 于是就有了这个单点
01:26:511 (1,2) - 太远了 2和01:26:330 (5) - 叠一下就可以了 fixed√

1. drum-hitwhistle.was has a 6ms delay, any delay higher than 5ms is unrankable, so please fix that

1. 00:17:784 - to 00:27:966 - you're using Normal sampleset and it's the only one with audible sliderslide, how about silencing it to be consistent throughout the diff?
2. 00:26:511 (5) - consider adding NC here and remove on 00:27:966 (1) - to match your NC pattern, would also be consistent with 00:49:784 (1,2) -

1. nothing to complain about except for the beginning? All other diffs start at 00:00:330 - , only this one 6 seconds later, which doesn't make any sense to me. :c Why didn't you map them?

1. NCs in the beginning are inconsistent with the rest of the diff, how about adding them at 00:07:420 (4) - and 00:10:693 (5) - ?
   also at 00:33:602 (4) - and 01:02:875 (5) -

1. there are a few similar patterns like 00:04:693 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:16:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:27:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:51:239 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:23:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - but Ncs are different everywhere, how about making them consistent?
2. 00:34:511 (3,4) - should be 4 circles too, imo, cause it's the exact same rhythm as all of the ones mentioned ^
3. 00:39:420 (6) - similar here, sound on the downbeat and the 1/2 afterwards should be circles,no? same for 00:40:330 (3,4) -
4. 00:44:511 (2,1) - hmh, I like the pattern and slowdown is okaaay, but the only way players can tell there is a slowdown on (1) is the slidertick, which is well covered by the previous slider, consider re-arranging this so it's better visible?
5. 01:16:511 (1) - any reason for NC here? remove
6. 01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why exact same placemente? Plays pretty boring, imo. s: Consider changing one of the patterns to make this more interesting to play

ZZHBOY wrote:

...来看看吧
[Easy]
00:46:875 (1,2,3,4) - 可以包好点……fix

Squichu wrote:

hey there! :3
from my queue--

General
Narcissu's Easy

1. 00:17:784 - to 00:27:966 - you're using Normal sampleset and it's the only one with audible sliderslide, how about silencing it to be consistent throughout the diff?……Hitsound not by me Orz …… but i think here should be soft, fix
2. 00:26:511 (5) - consider adding NC here and remove on 00:27:966 (1) - to match your NC pattern, would also be consistent with 00:49:784 (1,2) - ……fix

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Squichu wrote:

hey there! :3
from my queue--

General

1. drum-hitwhistle.was has a 6ms delay, any delay higher than 5ms is unrankable, so please fix that

fix

Narcissu's Easy

1. 00:17:784 - to 00:27:966 - you're using Normal sampleset and it's the only one with audible sliderslide, how about silencing it to be consistent throughout the diff?
2. 00:26:511 (5) - consider adding NC here and remove on 00:27:966 (1) - to match your NC pattern, would also be consistent with 00:49:784 (1,2) -

Lily Bread's Normal

1. nothing to complain about except for the beginning? All other diffs start at 00:00:330 - , only this one 6 seconds later, which doesn't make any sense to me. :c Why didn't you map them?

Tt's Hard

1. NCs in the beginning are inconsistent with the rest of the diff, how about adding them at 00:07:420 (4) - and 00:10:693 (5) - ?
   also at 00:33:602 (4) - and 01:02:875 (5) -

Insane

1. there are a few similar patterns like 00:04:693 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:16:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 00:27:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 00:51:239 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:23:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - but Ncs are different everywhere, how about making them consistent? no.I don't think there's a big difference here
2. 00:34:511 (3,4) - should be 4 circles too, imo, cause it's the exact same rhythm as all of the ones mentioned ^ hummm...Are you serious? This is Storyboard Sound
3. 00:39:420 (6) - similar here, sound on the downbeat and the 1/2 afterwards should be circles,no? same for 00:40:330 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:44:511 (2,1) - hmh, I like the pattern and slowdown is okaaay, but the only way players can tell there is a slowdown on (1) is the slidertick, which is well covered by the previous slider, consider re-arranging this so it's better visible? The slowdown is because of the flute
5. 01:16:511 (1) - any reason for NC here? remove fix
6. 01:18:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why exact same placemente? Plays pretty boring, imo. s: Consider changing one of the patterns to make this more interesting to play I think it's interesting .I think we should keep the consistency of the music

hmh, overall the set looks okay to me, but personally I don't agree with all of the SV changes in the highest diff. They don't seem to go well with the music at all times, especially this slowdown 00:44:511 (2,1) -.. the SV changes from 1.25 to 0.75 while the music barely changes.. and stuff like that seems too exaggerated. Maybe these things were addressed before, but I can't read any of the prev mods, so.. yup. s:

I'm not popping the bubble since technically everything (except for the hitsound delay) is fine, but I won't qualify it either because it doesn't meet my personal quality standard. Sorry. x:
And best of luck!

Bara- wrote:

Let's see

[General]

Wave hitsounds with possible delay > 5ms: fix
drum-hitwhistle.wav This one has a complete silence at the start, the others have a really low sound, so consider fixing them. I'll pop the bubble for this sound no
drum-hitwhistle3.wav
drum-hitwhistle4.wav
drum-hitwhistle5.wav
drum-hitwhistle6.wav
drum-hitwhistle8.wav
drum-hitwhistle9.wav
normal-hitclap2.wav This is Storyboard Sound

[Narcissu]
00:26:511 (5) - Why does this not have an NC, while 00:49:784 (1) - does have one?
00:27:966 (1) - Why does this have an NC, while 00:51:239 (2) - doesn't have one?
01:26:148 (3) - Make it 2/1 to follow the vocals better
Nice diff

[lily bread]
Consider adding a spinner at the start, like easy
Nice diff

[Tt]
00:01:420 (2,1) - Why are these 2 stacked, while the others all seem to go down? I don't think there's any problem here .Because they have a lot of space
00:04:693 (2) - Add an NC, as it's a large change in music fix
00:04:693 (2,3,4,5) - These sliders look very cramped, please make them less cramped by reducing their curve no
00:06:875 (3,4) - Blanket is off (a bit)
00:10:693 (5,6,7) - Blanket is off (quite a lot)
00:14:875 (1,2,3) - Pretty bad blanket, please fix
00:17:784 - What's the point of the SV change? Please turn off the sound to listen to music
00:25:693 (4) - This is a triplet, which doesn't appear in Insane. Remove this, Hard shouldn't be more complex than Insane I don't think Insane needs to repeat here .Because everyone's style
00:43:602 (4,1) - What's the point of this? It's a rather wonky overlap, and actually only makes it look worse... Why not blanket (1) arouns (4)'s tail? Why is it wonky ? This is the hard difficulty. Don't you even allow this slip?
00:45:420 - This SV change is really not noticable at all, since it's so sudden, and there are no sliderticks which allow for reading them Because the flute .I don't feel so suddenly
00:54:693 (3,4,5) - This pattern is such an overkill. The fact that there is a 1/4 right before this makes it even harder. Please make it a 1/4 slider no
00:57:057 (1,2,3,4) - Similar issue. You you have to deal with a jump from a circle (which, as opposed to sliders, is not lenient at all) no
00:57:420 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern looks rather weird, due to strange back and forth movement. Why not try something as a triangle? I think it's good
00:59:966 (1,2,3,4) - Similar issue as 2 above no
01:15:966 (1,3) - Well rip blanket
01:17:420 (5) - Nc please, so it indicates a jump fix. Because voice
01:20:330 (5) - Why does this not have increased spacing, while 01:17:420 (5) does? fix

Uhh, this diff needs a lot more work. The polishing is really low; the blankets are off, overlaps etc.
The NCing feels weird, and some spacing makes no sense. You also need to make sure no parts are harder than Insane, since Insane>Hard>Normal>easy

About Blanket .Not all Mapper like it .Players will not feel the subtle Blanket .Sorry, we don't accept it

[Insane]
00:11:966 (1) - What's the point of this slowdown + extended slider? I think just a circle would work better no
00:15:239 (2) - Why is this stacked with 00:15:420 (3,4) - ? Don't they have different sounds? (2) follows vocals, (3,4) follow the drums, so they should be seperated from eachother. Having (3,4) stacked is fine though, just not on (2) Because the drum
00:17:602 (8,1) - This stack really makes it lose emphasis, please space them no
00:18:148 (2,3) - Blanket please no
00:19:602 (5,7) - Please make them symmetrical no
00:19:602 (5,8) - Please fix this overlap no
00:22:875 (1) - Why does this get a NC? It feels rather weird to have a random 3 combo, while the NCs used to follow the vocals I'm not going to change this, but I added a NC in 00:19:966 -
00:27:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It increases in pitch, so why does the spacing get lower? 00:04:693 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - At least made sense in this matter no
00:32:693 (1,1) - The stack/overlap is pretty bad. Please align them properly no
00:34:511 (3,4,1) - The stack makes this pattern play really weird. Move (4) to 487:192 please no
00:43:966 (1,2) - Why not Make (2) a perfect symmetrical slider, based on (1) (Ctrl HJ) no more symmetrical pls
00:45:420 (1) - This slowdown is really awkward, it doesn;t even make sense based on the music I don't think so, because it's music
01:01:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part plays and looks rather awkward. Especially the jump from 01:01:057 (7) - makes it play really awkward no
01:16:511 (1) - What's the point of this NC? Remove it, since it's not a significant sound or downbeat fix
01:21:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sorry to tell you, but this plays absolutely terrible. The music has a solid rhythm which you seem to ignore, by having a full singletap pattern with a few random stacks. Please listen carfully to the music and redo this part. If you stack (1,2) and (5,6) of both parts, it seems to follow the music much better! Are you sure, but I think I did it well .Everyone has different views
01:27:602 (5) - Nc, since this sound stands on itself, and has nothing to do with the rest of this combo no

Uh yeah, this diff also needs quite the work. It lacks polishing, and quite some stacks really feel awkward

Even though I popped, don't call me back. I popped over an unrankable issue (the hitsound delay), not over anything quality related

Anyways, good luck!!

1. 00:10:148 - 这里nc 00:10:511 (1) - 这里去掉
2. 00:29:420 (1) - ctrl+g
3. 00:33:602 (1,2,3) - flow有点卡手 1和2之间没有必要这么大间距 可以选择把1 ctrl+g
4. 00:37:966 (7,1) - 这两个对换位置
5. 00:44:511 (3) - 稍微左移 和00:43:784 (7) - 有点太近 排版不太好看
6. 00:51:966 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以间距比前面大一点点 个人意见可以无视*
7. 01:15:966 (1) - 嗯..没必要红锚点 这样也不错https://puu.sh/tFzmA/1ae02958e2.png
8. 01:22:511 (4,5,6,7) - 这里没有明显的需要降低间距..打着很怪

Kashima wrote:

[wkyik's Insane]

1. 00:10:148 - 这里nc 00:10:511 (1) - 这里去掉 00:10:511 (1,2,3,4) - 用一組NC較好
2. 00:29:420 (1) - ctrl+g
3. 00:33:602 (1,2,3) - flow有点卡手 1和2之间没有必要这么大间距 可以选择把1 ctrl+g
4. 00:37:966 (7,1) - 这两个对换位置
5. 00:44:511 (3) - 稍微左移 和00:43:784 (7) - 有点太近 排版不太好看
6. 00:51:966 (1,2,3,4) - 感觉可以间距比前面大一点点 个人意见可以无视*
7. 01:15:966 (1) - 嗯..没必要红锚点 这样也不错https://puu.sh/tFzmA/1ae02958e2.png 個人較喜歡這種滑條
8. 01:22:511 (4,5,6,7) - 这里没有明显的需要降低间距..打着很怪

水摸完

祝好运~

Adol Christin wrote:

受邀而来摸新难度

wkyik's Insane

1. 为啥不od8呢，更加pp
2. 00:05:420 (5,1) - 建议把nc提前一个。这样改了两种颜色各4个，有种互相包裹的效果。
3. 01:10:693 (2,3,4) - 要不把3移到4的位置，4上移一点，搞成这样。感觉三圈一线一般用于3个音都很重或者3个音都很轻吧，这里完全没必要。
   UNTITLED BOX

   
4. 01:27:966 (1,2) - 这个怎么样？两个finish的音，来个短滑爽啊 藍線上的音會很多餘 雖然沒有圖

Crystal wrote:

[rizia]
00:49:784 (5) - nc? 不用
01:02:876 (1,2,3,4) - 12和34交换是不是感觉好点 會很卡手吧
01:14:511 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/tJrDe/33069fc3e0.jpg 感觉好点
01:28:148 (2) - 尾巴hitnormal有点响 可以降点儿音量或者换个轻一点的?

没啥好摸的貌似
good luck

Kencho wrote:

[General]

1. Tags沒統一

fix

[Narcissu's Easy]

1. 01:11:602 (3) - DS fix
2. 01:12:693 (4) - ^ fix
3. 01:23:966 (3) - ^ fix

[Lily Bread's Normal]

1. 00:57:057 (3) - DS fix
2. 00:59:239 (2) - ^ fix
3. 01:05:784 (4) - ^fix

[Tt's Hard]

1. 00:01:420 (2,3,1,2,1) - ？？看不懂NC的套路，不如不要NC fix
2. 00:33:602 (4) - NC fix
3. 00:41:057 (1,3) - 包 fix
4. 01:02:875 (5) - NC fix
5. 01:26:148 (4) - ^ fix

[Insane]

1. 00:32:693 (1) - ctrl+G比較好 fix

[wkyik's Insane]

1. 00:05:239 (4,1) - 沒疊好 fix
2. 00:29:420 (1,2) - ^ fix

smallboat wrote:

[Tt's Hard]

00:02:875 (4) - 怎麼這個note不跟前面的2做漸層pattern? fix
01:10:693 (3) - 跟著234照弧度? fix

[Insane]

00:36:330 (3) - 這Pattern距離幾乎一樣感覺會誤讀 fix

[wkyik's Insane]

00:34:511 (4) - 如果要這大跳建議NC一下，因為聽音樂感覺不太出來。 fix
01:28:148 (2) - 尾端的音效太響建議可以remove。 fix