1. Avalon's Hard - 4Key (2.87 stars, 1568 notes)
2. Insane - 4Key (3.97 stars, 2046 notes)
3. Normal - 4Key (1.97 stars, 806 notes)

Degeneracy wrote:

好爽！

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1. 关Widescreen support
2. 00:14:984 - 对点用的很好不过在这段 （00:16:584 - 到00:18:184 - ）我还是建议打乱成楼梯之类的Pattern， 这样剩下 （00:14:984 - 到00:16:584 - ）的对点能用1/2的音来体现1/4的主音。 同理00:19:784 - 还有 00:22:984 -
3. 00:21:184 - 这个建议删，因为主音的停顿制造点小小的暂停感会不错
4. 01:01:984 (61984|0) - 如果跟的是Vocal的话timing是对的， 但是是笛子的话应该开始在01:02:084 - ， 因为我看到你00:59:284 - 有在跟笛
5. 01:18:184 - 我觉的手感会好些 img
6. 01:21:384 (81384|3,81384|0,81584|3,81584|0,81784|0,81784|3) - jack的话可以但是和前面的音不同建议不要用同样的Pattern 1 4，01:24:584 (84584|3,84584|0,84784|2,84784|1,84984|3,84984|0) - 像这个就不错啊
7. 01:26:984 - 这里同理我之前的小建议
8. 01:53:184 (113184|0) - 同之前
9. 02:03:284 (123284|1,123284|3,123784|0,123784|2) - CTRL+H 吧，和之前的01:11:784 - 做对比
10. 02:29:684 - 02:29:784 - 漏这两个有点奇怪
    [Avalon's Hard]
11. turn off Widescreen support
12. 02:29:584 (149584|0) - why sacrifice the 1/4 main sound for this LN
    

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SanadaYukimura wrote:

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  [Avalon's Hard]

1. turn off Widescreen support OK
2. 02:29:584 (149584|0) - why sacrifice the 1/4 main sound for this LN that feels like long violin in 100% speed so better to express like that imo 02:32:784 - like here too

-[Apple]- wrote:

[Avalon's Hard]
00:15:084 ._. did you miss sound here? Or intentional yea, i mainly focus to other violin sound 00:15:184 (15184|1,15284|0,15384|2,15484|1,15584|2,15684|3,15784|1) - in here
00:15:884 ^
00:18:284 ^
00:19:084 ^
01:22:284 ^
01:23:084 ^ same as i explained above
02:35:184 (155184|2) - There better with double notes but sound in here was not really loud D: prefer to focus violin
02:45:664 add one more note here :3
02:56:958 ^, for a finish sound actually almost all part have finish sound, sou i made it only 2 notes of all since spamming 3 notes are not really good in this diff level

biemote wrote:

hd
00:05:184 (5184|3,8384|0,11584|0) - different from emiria's insane....? o.o actually that LN is clearly end at red lines, but well i'll consider this later
01:02:184 (62184|1) - should start at 01:01:984 - done

hokin1995 wrote:

[Avalon's Hard]

● 00:17:784 - stong sound here, maybe double note will be better like this : 00:24:184 (24184|2,24184|1) added

● 01:15:284 (75284|1,75384|3,75384|2,75584|0,75684|2) - I think these patterns not comfortable for the hands,
I think you need to change other patterns. In my opinion, I recommend you
01:15:384 (75384|2,75584|0) - ctrl+g and 01:15:684 (75684|2) move to 4 applied

● 02:15:384 (135384|2) - add one more note? like this: 02:14:984 (134984|3,134984|2)

● 02:15:784 (135784|0) - ^ same but maybe better not for this calm part, focus to violin only is fine like 02:14:384 (134384|2,134484|3,134584|2,134684|1,134784|0,134884|1) - skipping 2 notes part too

● 02:38:605 (158605|0,158605|1) - I think you can add one more note in 4, like Insane. okay

SanadaYukimura wrote:

1l2l3l4
预览时间不同自己查一下

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1. 关Widescreen support
2. 00:14:984 - 对点用的很好不过在这段 （00:16:584 - 到00:18:184 - ）我还是建议打乱成楼梯之类的Pattern， 这样剩下 （00:14:984 - 到00:16:584 - ）的对点能用1/2的音来体现1/4的主音。 同理00:19:784 - 还有 00:22:984 -
3. 00:21:184 - 这个建议删，因为主音的停顿制造点小小的暂停感会不错
4. 01:01:984 (61984|0) - 如果跟的是Vocal的话timing是对的， 但是是笛子的话应该开始在01:02:084 - ， 因为我看到你00:59:284 - 有在跟笛
5. 01:18:184 - 我觉的手感会好些 img
6. 01:21:384 (81384|3,81384|0,81584|3,81584|0,81784|0,81784|3) - jack的话可以但是和前面的音不同建议不要用同样的Pattern 1 4，01:24:584 (84584|3,84584|0,84784|2,84784|1,84984|3,84984|0) - 像这个就不错啊
7. 01:26:984 - 这里同理我之前的小建议
8. 01:53:184 (113184|0) - 同之前
9. 02:03:284 (123284|1,123284|3,123784|0,123784|2) - CTRL+H 吧，和之前的01:11:784 - 做对比
10. 02:29:684 - 02:29:784 - 漏这两个有点奇怪
    [Avalon's Hard]
11. turn off Widescreen support
12. 02:29:584 (149584|0) - why sacrifice the 1/4 main sound for this LN

Good luck db

MeowPaz wrote:

摸呼摸呼。又是一部福利很多，看到一半弃掉的番
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[insane]
00:24:084 (24084|0) - 听起来是1/6，snap？
00:43:184 (43184|2) - 向右移到4吧。因为在这里会变成4连按
01:04:584 (64584|0) - 换成一条到红线的面条吧，01:04:784 (64784|1) - 延长到白线。这样表达更好，手感也好些。
01:08:184 - 这里也有一段1/4的音吧
01:09:784 (69784|2) - 换成点
01:10:584 (70584|3,70684|2) - 可jack
01:13:384 - 这里又不用面表示了吗
01:21:284 - 可加
01:42:784 - 说实话不太好，第一次打有点懵。01:42:984 (102984|1) - 要说的话我感觉这个没必要，跟人声比较好。w这音跟闷声屁一样（
02:00:884 - 漏音吗
02:01:484 (121484|2) - 没音哦，db大概已经意识模糊了。这里不和前面你做的统一一下吗
02:01:784 (121784|1) - （
02:15:284 - 大概是漏了

[normal]
00:38:984 (38984|3,38984|0,39384|1,39384|3,39784|1,39784|2,40184|0,40184|2) - 我的话我会弄成14 14 23 14更加好读
02:55:546 (175546|2) - 这个就不要了吧，这里已经很难了
03:01:194 - 换成LN会好点

-[Apple]- wrote:

Ni-Sokkususu - Shukusai no Elementalia
Requested via qq

[General]
OK!

[Normal]
00:40:584 (40584|0) - 这里感觉也有一个音
01:04:984 其实我觉得 01:05:184 (65184|0) - 这个可以移到2 01:05:284 (65284|3) - 这个可以移到3 会更好一点

[Avalon's Hard]
00:15:084 ._. did you miss sound here? Or intentional
00:15:884 ^
00:18:284 ^
00:19:084 ^
01:22:284 ^
01:23:084 ^
02:35:184 (155184|2) - There better with double notes
02:45:664 add one more note here :3
02:56:958 ^, for a finish sound
[Insane]
01:01:284 这里有个音

这张图太触了 摸不动

biemote wrote:

nm

01:29:984 - 漏了?
01:06:184 - 01:57:384 - 02:40:017 - 加一个
02:26:184 - 去掉一个吧,明明前后没有对这里突然就双押

01:46:184 (106184|3,106184|2,106584|1,106584|0,106984|2,106984|3,107384|1,107384|0) - 这个排列太单调了吧

hd

00:05:184 (5184|3,8384|0,11584|0) - different from emiria's insane....?
01:02:184 (62184|1) - should start at 01:01:984 -

insane

00:13:384 (13384|0,13434|1,13484|2,13534|3,13584|0,13634|1,13684|2,13734|3,13784|2,13834|1,13884|0,13934|3,13984|2,14034|1,14084|0,14134|3,14184|2,14234|1,14284|0) - 感觉会和imprinting那次差不多...?真的没问题吗?大概会坠机

01:42:984 (102984|1) - 没听到音改了

hokin1995 wrote:

水摸
Noob mod

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[Normal]
OD比hard 還要高 微調一下吧
沒什麼太大的問題 可以

[Avalon's Hard]

● 00:17:784 - stong sound here, maybe double note will be better like this : 00:24:184 (24184|2,24184|1)

● 01:15:284 (75284|1,75384|3,75384|2,75584|0,75684|2) - I think these patterns not comfortable for the hands,
I think you need to change other patterns. In my opinion, I recommend you
01:15:384 (75384|2,75584|0) - ctrl+g and 01:15:684 (75684|2) move to 4

● 02:15:384 (135384|2) - add one more note? like this: 02:14:984 (134984|3,134984|2)

● 02:15:784 (135784|0) - ^ same

● 02:38:605 (158605|0,158605|1) - I think you can add one more note in 4, like Insane.

[Insane]

● 00:05:584 (5584|2) - 換到2吧 這樣很別扭, 像這個 00:08:784 (8784|1) - 不是挺好嗎 233

● 00:19:384 (19384|0) - 這裡應該是雙鍵吧 像這 00:16:184 (16184|3,16184|0)

● 00:20:184 (20184|3,20184|0,20184|1,20584|1,20584|3,20584|0,20984|3,20984|0,20984|1) - 為什麼突然就變3鍵 我看不透

● 00:32:184 - 漏了一個嗎?

● 00:56:384 (56384|3,56384|1) - 這裡一個鍵就夠吧!?

● 01:01:084 (61084|2,61084|0,61184|3,61184|1) - ^同上

● 01:01:284 - 漏了一個 加一個吧

● 01:21:284 - 這裡沒放 打起來感覺怪怪的 所以補上吧

● 01:53:784 (113784|0) - 重音 加一個吧

[Emiria] wrote:

这歌 好爽

Critical_Star wrote:

Avalon's Hard
01:06:484 (66484|0) - the sound are not really clear, remove? i feel it's still really clear like 01:12:884 - owo
01:24:184 (84184|1,84284|2) - CTRL+H? okay
02:21:184 - try http://puu.sh/qx9NZ/97f6dc4815.jpg ? the crash variation should be different here alright, re-arranged here
03:02:429 (182429|1,182429|0,182429|2) - here double and 03:02:605 (182605|3,182605|2) - here triple looks better hmm but this part 03:02:429 - have same cymbal with 03:01:899 - too, also maybe more harder when you press 1/4 stream after imapct with 3 notes imo, due to bpm changes

Critical_Star wrote:

[Emiria] wrote:

这歌 好爽

halo
1234

Normal
00:13:384 (13384|2) - actually the LN end at 00:14:284 - i think is better to snap till here
01:06:184 (66184|0) - i think is fine to have double note for crash here
01:21:384 (81384|3,81384|0,81584|0,81584|3,81784|3,81784|0) - make 12-34-12-34? something like 01:24:584 (84584|0,84584|3,84784|2,84784|1,84984|3,84984|0) -
01:57:384 - like before u can use double here

Avalon's Hard
01:06:484 (66484|0) - the sound are not really clear, remove?
01:24:184 (84184|1,84284|2) - CTRL+H?
02:21:184 - try http://puu.sh/qx9NZ/97f6dc4815.jpg ? the crash variation should be different here
03:02:429 (182429|1,182429|0,182429|2) - here double and 03:02:605 (182605|3,182605|2) - here triple looks better


Insane
00:40:584 - triple?
02:03:584 (123584|3) - move to 3?

好运~

1. 00:21:184 (21184|3) - 去掉好一点
2. 02:03:284 (123284|2,123284|0) - 换到34
3. 02:29:484 - 加一个note

1. 好像还好

1. 00:40:584 - 加一个note
2. 01:24:984 - 加一个note
3. 02:03:784 (123784|2) - 挪到3
4. 02:13:084 (133084|1,133184|2,133284|3) - 反一下
5. 02:33:384 - 3连点把

ZZHBOY wrote:

我来翻页

[NM]

1. 00:21:184 (21184|3) - 去掉好一点
2. 02:03:284 (123284|2,123284|0) - 换到34
3. 02:29:484 - 加一个note

[HARD]
好像还好
[INSANE]

1. 00:40:584 - 加一个note
2. 01:24:984 - 加一个note
3. 02:03:784 (123784|2) - 挪到3
4. 02:13:084 (133084|1,133184|2,133284|3) - 反一下
5. 02:33:384 - 3连点把

diao a

DE-CADE wrote:

[Normal]

00:33:584 (33584|1) - Move to 4, different vocal style mapping 00:30:184

00:40:584 (40584|1) - Double at 1 and 4

00:54:984 (54984|3,55784|0) - Make it into 1 LN only http://puu.sh/redmd/ed17bd2785.png

01:01:784 (61784|2,61984|1,62084|0,62184|2) - play kinda not cool for normla player, pls rearrange http://puu.sh/redsx/5b696463eb.png 01:53:184 - like this oneits fine BPM is not very high

01:31:784 - Add to as cymbal

02:25:984 - add to 1

[Insane]

00:04:584 (4584|0,4917|1) - it's 1/6 check again pls also 00:05:184 (5184|2) - End at 00:05:584 because it's actually end at 1/6 line, but you can make it longer until the single note
00:07:784 (7784|0,7784|3,8084|1,8184|3,8384|2,8584|3,8584|0,8784|1) - ^
00:10:984 (10984|1,10984|3,10984|0,11284|2,11384|0,11584|3,11784|2,11784|1,11784|0) - ^
Same case for avalon diffi think mine is right

00:12:784 - try to make it like this http://puu.sh/rlVmx/7f8329cc33.png playability is what ppl fukin care about

00:33:184 - pls rearrange because of 00:33:184 (33184|3,33384|3,33584|3,33784|3) anything but not 4 jack http://puu.sh/rlVDC/9e25bc153b.png

00:42:984 - Rearrange for your vocal triple is not necessary http://puu.sh/rlVJW/987bc2dd7d.png

01:01:184 (61184|3) - Move to 1 01:01:284 - add to 4

01:15:384 - Rearrange pls http://puu.sh/rlVWT/50e6e7f81b.png

02:01:784 (121784|1) - End 02:02:084