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Noboru feat.Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa
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Posting something long cuz it seems you are wanting for it.
[General]
Posting something long cuz it seems you are wanting for it.
[General]
- "31212121.png" lol what's this
- 00:01:678 - I experience audibility issue at the intro for all diffs.
- 00:11:728 - 00:56:728 - Finish. (All diffs I guess)
- 00:25:678 (1,2) - Using a same curve rate would look more organized.
- 00:30:628 (1) - 01:40:228 (1) - Is the whistle intended? It feels quite random.
- 01:19:078 - Add hitsound for all diffs.
- 02:30:328 (3) - Consider placing this note in a way to make a similar feeling with 01:18:628 (1,2,3).
- 02:44:728 (1) - Consider making this slider start from 02:44:878, since that is a stronger beat than the current starting point.
- 03:45:928 (3) - Current rhythm is fine too, but the strong beat of 03:46:078 could've been expressed.
- 03:56:128 (1) - I don't think this rhythm was nice to catch since the vocal actually starts from 03:55:528. Just removing this and completely starting along a new stanza which would be 03:56:878 (2) will make beginners easier to catch the rhythm properly.
- 04:03:928 (4) - Start from 04:04:078 to follow your rhythm better as 04:07:678 (2).
- 00:53:128 (2) - Spacing.
- 01:24:778 - Why does the break start from here?
- Good.
- 01:52:528 (2,3) - Could this be a blanket?
- 00:23:278 (1,2,3,4) - Unlike (1,2,3), (4) was detached from the previous parallel slider pattern. I feel these combo all has a similar feeling in the song, and making a difference at (4) damaged the pattern organization. Rather make (4) also a parallel slider, or if you had a different interpretation of the song, then consider starting the combo from (4) instead 00:24:628 to divide as a different pattern section.
- 00:33:928 (4,1) - Same.
- 00:42:328 (4) - Imo, a ctrl+G would make this pattern more organized along the double slide of 00:41:428 (1,2).
- 01:33:928 (4) - 01:43:528 (4) - Unlike the previous similar patterns that I've pointed out, this worked nice as it is, since the relationship with (1,2,3) and (4) was understandable. Keep it if you decided to make previous pattern all parallel slider, but if you changed the combo, then you'll want to maintain consistency.
- 01:38:878 (1) - This slider wasn't cool enough since a major beat of 01:39:028 is getting ignored. Even a vocal exists there.
- 02:18:628 (1,2,3) - Indeed the beats are strong here, but the jump for this pattern feels exaggerated compared to other part of this difficulty. Reviewing the previous pattern of 01:09:028 (1,2,3) would be helpful. Let's make a consistent difficulty.
- 02:38:878 (1,2,3) - Since (1,2) is 1/2 while (2,3) being 1/2, I strongly recommend starting the combo from (2). Those objects having a same spacing while having a different rhythm could be misleading.
- 02:42:778 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - I believe this pattern could get organized better. 02:42:778 (2,1) is having a different spacing unlike (1,2,3,4) resulting in less organization. Also the overlap of 02:42:778 (2,1,2) kinda damaged in understanding that 02:43:228 (1,2,3,4) was meant to be a parralel pattern visually. Finally, the spacing of 02:44:128 (4,5) needs to get considered. The value is a consistent 2.00x because the spacing calculation is start from the end of the slider. However visually, 02:43:828 (3,4,5) is different in spacing. This can be checked through the spacing of slider heads, where an approach circle falls down. Not giving suggestion, but hope the addressed issue was properly understood.
- 04:14:803 (1) - Try ending this spinner where all other diffs end. Consistency issue.
- 02:09:478 (2) - Overmapped.
- 00:18:778 (2,1) - This jump didn't reflected the song properly in my view. The jump of 00:18:628 (1,2) was pretty cool since the music is strong enough, but unlike those two beats, the song of 00:18:928 (1) is pretty calm. Those three beats having an equally huge spaced jump wasn't enough to catch that difference imo. But you can still use your pattern if you prefer.
- 00:28:678 (1,2) - I see the comboing was done for the pattern afterall, but imo the pattern itself was somewhat detached from the song and arbitrarily made. 00:28:078 (1,2,3,1) - 00:28:828 (2,3,4,5) feels as a pair, but both your patterning and the comboing wasn't reflecting that. Starting an individual pattern with a new combo from 00:28:828 is recommended.
- 00:31:528 (9,1,2) - Similar, but just changing the comboes will be enough here.
- 00:36:478 (7,1) - Start combo from (7).
- 00:55:228 (3,4,5,6) - It was a personal shame that this part of the song wasn't expressed differently but rather just expressed as an ordinary 1/2 rhythm. Considering most of your rhythms were following the drums, there were already full of 1/2. Good job in maintaining consistency of your rhythm concept, but the song here is pretty distinct from other parts. Reflecting such difference would express the song more interestingly instead just continuously clicking 1/2. At least, 02:05:053 (5) was a 1/4 triple.
- 00:56:728 - Finish.
- 01:00:478 (2,1) - This jump is even intense than the previous strong pattern of 00:58:828 (4,1). Is this intended? Perhaps 01:00:628 could be an important part of the song, the beat itself not being strong felt the jump way too exaggerated.
- 02:10:078 (2,1) - Similar.
- 01:01:828 (1) - 02:11:428 (1) - I want you to think more about this pattern. Basically the slider here is an extended form from the gradually scaling and repeating sliders of 01:00:628 (1,1,1,1) and 02:10:228 (1,1,1,1). However unlike those sliders having a similar atmosphere in the song, 01:01:828 (1) - 02:11:428 (1) the song from these sliders felt quite detached with the previous part. Expressing as a different pattern would've reflected that aspect better imo.
- 02:09:478 (2) - Overmapped.
- 02:17:428 (5,1) - Start combo from (5)?
- 03:27:478 (5,6) - Seems the rhythm selection around here was based on vocals. Considering that, this rhythm felt out of your consistency.
- 04:14:728 (1) - (Praise)
- Overall, I believe you could use more creativity for your future mapping. Patterns are well structured. But I've got a personal feeling that some patterns existed just for the sake of that pattern, instead of really reflecting the song. For instance, 01:02:728 (5,6,1) - 02:12:328 (5,6,1) - (5,6) having a bigger jump than (6,1) while (1) having a stronger beat for the sake of patterning could be one. Your patterns have got internal consistency, and you've got your own mapping style. Those are good. However before jumping to consistencies, I believe you could start from selecting patterns that reflects the music nicely first.
Hi for the M4M :v
Hope this helps. Good luck!
SPOILER
[Titanium hwite]
01:02:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - wtf???????? lol plz don't do this thing with the claps here. Just keep your hitsouns like you have them at 01:03:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - an so on. Drums don't change here. Basically remove clap from 2,3,4 and 6.
01:19:078 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - no sound in the music implies a 5s stream (taking a page from that controlled dive mod you gave me btw
) I actually kind of expected this part at 01:18:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - to have some crazy 1/2 jumps as it's the climax of the kiai but nope random 5s that don't follow the music. Now what you COULD do instead is to change the first 5s into a triple and make the next part a 7 note stream because then it kind of better follows the music and makes sense to play with it being the upbeat and stuff.
01:28:228 (1,2,1,2) - This would be so awesome to play as 1/1 sliders instead especially with this distance it'd be awesome as hell trust me. Better suited for this difficulty as well instead of 1/4 sliders into a pause. That just gives players a lot of time to snap to the next and this part to me sounds like it should be harder. You'd still mute the slider ends ofc.
02:11:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again no don't do this, it sounds awful especially with that custom clap which covers up the kick in the song and whistle hitsound and does not follow what the drums really do which, up until those two (likely even future ones) you have been doing. And if for some reason you really REALLY want to make an argument about wanting to keep those claps for god knows what reason then you'd wanna be consistent in the stanzas and have that clap spam here as well 02:21:328 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - etc. btw sorry if this sounds mean I don't mean it personally but hitsound things trigger me :^)
02:28:678 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Same thing about the 5s. Doesn't go with the song and a climax like this calls for either bigger jumps or maybe some triples into 1/4 slider jumps if you don't mind it being somewhat overdone (I suppose it's acceptable for a climax since most animu whatevers do it there)
03:11:428 - The whistle spam here sounds like a bit too much. Would sound a lot nicer for this quiet section if it was every other white tick (2/1)to follow the strong strum of the violin thing. To add to why it sounds bad well the biggest reason is the hitsound is monotone fortunately it is in key (sort of) to the song so it doesn't sound dissonant BUT having that same pitch play all the time WHILE following the vocals makes it sound blegh. This would be more acceptable if you maybe had different pitched bell hitsounds so you could like keysound it to follow the pitch of the vocals and it'd be kind of neat. Now I could help you with this but idk if you wanna do that so if you do feel free to PM me I'll see what I can do.
03:33:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - re-triggered
03:38:428 (1) - Should be a whistle sounds better since there's no indication from the music that there shoul be a clap here. Also this is consistent with the clap whistle clap pattern you usually have for the kiais.
03:50:278 - See HERE there IS something in the music that sort of asks for something like a 5s stream so here it works (sort of...I'd still say for example 03:50:278 (2,3,4,5,6) - a triple into a 1/4 slider jump thing would be cooler and better represent the climax but meh personal preference I guess)
03:52:528 (2,3,4,5,6) - It's a rhythm game after all :v
04:14:728 (1) - This is nice good job!
[Extra]
00:07:378 (4,5,1) - Flow here is pretty linear an then (1) snaps up afterward making it a bit unconfortable to play. Can't really see an easy work-around fix.
00:20:728 (6) - For something like this like the ending of the intro into the first verse an also for a strong guitar chord I think a slightly higher SV slider would be cool here to represent that. Maybe like a fast version of 00:19:678 (1) - for example.
01:00:628 (1,1,1,1,1) - The SV increase isn't very noticeable it' look better if it was
Maybe increasing by .15x or .2x instead of .1x BUT make sure that 01:01:228 (1) - stays the same as 1.2x so for example if you wanted to increase by .2x o like .8x > 1.0x > 1.2x > 1.4x >1.6x etc or how you prefer as long as the middle one stays 1.2x
01:02:128 (1,2,3,4,1) - Also a good opportunity to remind you this sounds annoying and to please not do this thing with the claps Any hitsound suggestions made in the highest diff apply to all other diffs.
01:10:678 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - See THIS is good it sort of better follows what the drums do in the music and makes it clear that the next stanza is starting so its like a good way to close the upbeat but not 5s streams like on snowwhite
01:34:378 (2,3,4,5) - The natsu special :^)
02:04:978 (4) - Remove clap. No other hitsound is ever used to follow the kick in the drums so it'd be easier to delete this than to add a bunch of claps to follow it.
02:11:728 (1,2,3,4) - You know what I do when I get to the beginning of the kiais? I pause the song and scroll past it so I don't hear that clap spam
02:12:628 - 02:16:228 - holy four seconds of slider spam
maaan don't you wanna a some notes in there somewhere? 02:14:128 (2,4) - Maybe replace these with notes or something.
02:30:553 (1) - Feels like a weird place to end the spinner considering it leads into a small pause and then jumps so it just feels empty. What would be cool though would be to end the spinner either at 02:32:728 - and then start mapping the guitar at 02:32:878 - or ending the spinner at 02:32:878 - then start mapping to the drums at 02:33:328 -
02:35:278 (7,1) - Very likely to be misread plus feels kind of empty. Personally I'd say if 02:35:278 (7) - was a 1/1 slider it would better represent the guitar note hold. Idk you can make a 1/1 slider that ends where 02:35:578 (1) - is currently
02:37:078 (3) - Very clear sound at 02:37:378 - don't you wanna map it?
03:04:828 (3) - Again clap now follows the kick in the slider end but it doesn't do it consistently. Easier to remove unless you wanna add all the missing ones :v
03:11:428 - Same thing as snow white don't whistle spam unless its keysounded and keep it 2/1
03:33:328 (1,2,3,4) - X_X
03:38:428 (3) - Same as the other diff remove clap per the music.
04:14:128 - 04:14:578 - Aww there's a muted guitar strum here thats not mapped Two notes there would be cool
[Niño's Insane]
00:42:328 (4) - This would be pretty cool to play if you ctrl+g'd it that way the snap to (1) is emphasized and you can have an up up down down pattern :v
00:58:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - With all the emphasis both the music and the hitsouns give to this part it's a bit anti-climactic that they just move in a small linear fashion. Like even for this difficulty some small jumps woul be nice.
01:01:828 (1,2,3,4) - THANK YOU for not clap spamming like natsu
02:04:828 (3) - The repeat point sounds a bit weird with the clap there. Maybe do it like 00:55:228 (3) - with no hitsouns
02:08:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as the previous suggestion. If you didn't want to change it for whatever reason I'd at least suggest 02:09:628 (1) - to be snapped similar to these though so it looks nice and has a nice pause effect. There wouldn't be any need to worry about a readability concern because the pause is long enough for the previous notes to fade, the AR is high enough that it doesn't appear near the same time as the other notes and the NC already implies a sort of pause.
02:28:678 (2,3) - I think finishes on these slider heads would better suit the music. Forgot to mention it earlier at 01:19:078 (2,3) - but yeah there too
03:20:428 - 03:21:028 - Technically you can start mapping again here. It'd be nice to do that too because a super long break isn't needed and it would start on the beginning of the next stanza which would make sense musically.
03:38:428 (3) - Replace clap with whistle. Sounds nicer and is consistent with how this is hitsounded normally for example 03:42:628 (1,2,3,4) - etc
04:13:078 (3) - I know there's no finish in the music here but a finish WOULD be nice. If not at the very least definitely a soft whistle to compliment the violin chamber.
[Mocha's Hard]
00:09:628 (3) - Blanket for this could be neater while keeping 1.2x spacing consistency.
00:32:278 (6) - Maybe add a whistle on the slider head. Sounds really empty atm.
00:35:128 (7) - Missing normal clap
00:36:478 (4) - Remove clap from slider end. No clap in the music.
00:46:228 (5) - I think you might like a finish here in the slider head like the previous ones 00:43:828 (4) - 00:45:028 (1) - Same for this (add finish) 00:48:628 (4) -
01:02:278 (2,3) - Remove clap from 2 and 3 slider head. I already yelled at natsu for doing this :v
01:08:278 (2) - Remove clap from slider end.
01:19:078 (2,3) - Finishes on the slider heads here would be nice since they add to the buildup
01:20:953 (1) - Maybe end the spinner here 01:23:278 - on the vocals (if you do this also remove clap)
01:52:678 (3) - Whistle on slider head like 01:53:428 (5,6) - Same for 01:55:078 (2) - also add whistle.
02:11:878 (2,3) - Remove claps from 2 and 3 slider head like in the first kiai.
02:20:353 (1,2) - Gonna be tricky to read this 1/4 considering you just stacked 1/2 at 02:19:528 (3,4) - Might wanna snap it normally.
02:27:028 (1) - Add finish on slider head. Also add whistle to 02:27:478 (3) - slider head
02:35:128 (5) - Would be better to slightly offstack this. Reads and plays better because the slider leniency is so low. Just enough so it kinda looks like its not a perfect stack.
02:44:728 (5) - Same for this imo
02:45:928 (4) - Also think this would look better stacked over 02:46:078 (1) - slider head instead
03:33:478 (2,3) - Remove claps from 2 and (3) slider head. Plz don't make me yell at you like I did to natsu
03:49:978 (2) - This is spaced out a lot more than the previous notes have been. Almost looks like it could be 3/4 or 1/1 from how spaced it is. An easy fix could be to stack (1) over (2) since it would be a small jump on the downbeat instead of randomly in between.
04:05:278 (1) - Finish
04:10:828 (3,4) - Could be a neat opportunity to add a 1/4 triple here since its so noticeable in the music.
[Normal]
00:22:678 (4) - Whistle could be cool here. Sounds pretty empty. You can also do it like 000:25:078 (4) - and have a finish on the slider end in this case.
00:53:128 (2) - Spaced out a bit shorter than the other notes since the whole diff seems to use .9x so just stack over this 00:49:828 (1) - You'll likely need to adjust 00:53:428 (3,4) - as well
01:02:278 (2,3) - You already know what I'm gonna say about this
01:32:278 (4) - If you made any changes to the one at :22 apply them here as well
02:11:878 (2,3) - ...
02:18:628 (1,2,3) - Don't like this rhythm option. 02:19:378 (3) - Taps on a weak beat and similarly 02:18:928 (2) - also feels kinda week. Swing rhythm would work a bit better imo so something like this would work better.
02:28:678 (2) - Finish on slider head would go well with the musics
03:06:628 (1) - Wrong custom on the clap in the repeat.
03:48:028 (2,3) - 1mp3rf3ct bl5nk8t :^)
03:50:278 (2) - Same as the other suggestion to add a finish on the slider head
[EZ]
00:30:628 (1) - I think the whistle was meant for just the slider head and not the whole body :v Might wanna double check the other diffs if you also copied the hitsounds over.
01:02:428 (2) - remove that damn clap from the slider head >:V
01:10:828 (4) - Dunno if this was intended but it's a different custom set
01:40:228 (1) - Same thing about the whistle as mentioned at 0:30
02:12:028 (2) - just get rid of it damn it x_x
03:33:628 (2) - AAAAAAAAAAAAA
04:14:728 - Don't you want a clickable object before starting the spinner?
01:02:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - wtf???????? lol plz don't do this thing with the claps here. Just keep your hitsouns like you have them at 01:03:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - an so on. Drums don't change here. Basically remove clap from 2,3,4 and 6.
01:19:078 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - no sound in the music implies a 5s stream (taking a page from that controlled dive mod you gave me btw
) I actually kind of expected this part at 01:18:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - to have some crazy 1/2 jumps as it's the climax of the kiai but nope random 5s that don't follow the music. Now what you COULD do instead is to change the first 5s into a triple and make the next part a 7 note stream because then it kind of better follows the music and makes sense to play with it being the upbeat and stuff. 01:28:228 (1,2,1,2) - This would be so awesome to play as 1/1 sliders instead especially with this distance it'd be awesome as hell trust me. Better suited for this difficulty as well instead of 1/4 sliders into a pause. That just gives players a lot of time to snap to the next and this part to me sounds like it should be harder. You'd still mute the slider ends ofc.
02:11:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Again no don't do this, it sounds awful especially with that custom clap which covers up the kick in the song and whistle hitsound and does not follow what the drums really do which, up until those two (likely even future ones) you have been doing. And if for some reason you really REALLY want to make an argument about wanting to keep those claps for god knows what reason then you'd wanna be consistent in the stanzas and have that clap spam here as well 02:21:328 (4,5,1,2,3,1) - etc. btw sorry if this sounds mean I don't mean it personally but hitsound things trigger me :^)
02:28:678 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Same thing about the 5s. Doesn't go with the song and a climax like this calls for either bigger jumps or maybe some triples into 1/4 slider jumps if you don't mind it being somewhat overdone (I suppose it's acceptable for a climax since most animu whatevers do it there)
03:11:428 - The whistle spam here sounds like a bit too much. Would sound a lot nicer for this quiet section if it was every other white tick (2/1)to follow the strong strum of the violin thing. To add to why it sounds bad well the biggest reason is the hitsound is monotone fortunately it is in key (sort of) to the song so it doesn't sound dissonant BUT having that same pitch play all the time WHILE following the vocals makes it sound blegh. This would be more acceptable if you maybe had different pitched bell hitsounds so you could like keysound it to follow the pitch of the vocals and it'd be kind of neat. Now I could help you with this but idk if you wanna do that so if you do feel free to PM me I'll see what I can do.
03:33:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - re-triggered
03:38:428 (1) - Should be a whistle sounds better since there's no indication from the music that there shoul be a clap here. Also this is consistent with the clap whistle clap pattern you usually have for the kiais.
03:50:278 - See HERE there IS something in the music that sort of asks for something like a 5s stream so here it works (sort of...I'd still say for example 03:50:278 (2,3,4,5,6) - a triple into a 1/4 slider jump thing would be cooler and better represent the climax but meh personal preference I guess)
03:52:528 (2,3,4,5,6) - It's a rhythm game after all :v
04:14:728 (1) - This is nice good job!
[Extra]
00:07:378 (4,5,1) - Flow here is pretty linear an then (1) snaps up afterward making it a bit unconfortable to play. Can't really see an easy work-around fix.
00:20:728 (6) - For something like this like the ending of the intro into the first verse an also for a strong guitar chord I think a slightly higher SV slider would be cool here to represent that. Maybe like a fast version of 00:19:678 (1) - for example.
01:00:628 (1,1,1,1,1) - The SV increase isn't very noticeable it' look better if it was
Maybe increasing by .15x or .2x instead of .1x BUT make sure that 01:01:228 (1) - stays the same as 1.2x so for example if you wanted to increase by .2x o like .8x > 1.0x > 1.2x > 1.4x >1.6x etc or how you prefer as long as the middle one stays 1.2x01:02:128 (1,2,3,4,1) - Also a good opportunity to remind you this sounds annoying and to please not do this thing with the claps
Any hitsound suggestions made in the highest diff apply to all other diffs. 01:10:678 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - See THIS is good it sort of better follows what the drums do in the music and makes it clear that the next stanza is starting so its like a good way to close the upbeat but not 5s streams like on snowwhite
01:34:378 (2,3,4,5) - The natsu special :^)
02:04:978 (4) - Remove clap. No other hitsound is ever used to follow the kick in the drums so it'd be easier to delete this than to add a bunch of claps to follow it.
02:11:728 (1,2,3,4) - You know what I do when I get to the beginning of the kiais? I pause the song and scroll past it so I don't hear that clap spam
02:12:628 - 02:16:228 - holy four seconds of slider spam
maaan don't you wanna a some notes in there somewhere? 02:14:128 (2,4) - Maybe replace these with notes or something.02:30:553 (1) - Feels like a weird place to end the spinner considering it leads into a small pause and then jumps so it just feels empty. What would be cool though would be to end the spinner either at 02:32:728 - and then start mapping the guitar at 02:32:878 - or ending the spinner at 02:32:878 - then start mapping to the drums at 02:33:328 -
02:35:278 (7,1) - Very likely to be misread plus feels kind of empty. Personally I'd say if 02:35:278 (7) - was a 1/1 slider it would better represent the guitar note hold. Idk you can make a 1/1 slider that ends where 02:35:578 (1) - is currently
02:37:078 (3) - Very clear sound at 02:37:378 - don't you wanna map it?
03:04:828 (3) - Again clap now follows the kick in the slider end but it doesn't do it consistently. Easier to remove unless you wanna add all the missing ones :v
03:11:428 - Same thing as snow white don't whistle spam unless its keysounded
and keep it 2/103:33:328 (1,2,3,4) - X_X
03:38:428 (3) - Same as the other diff remove clap per the music.
04:14:128 - 04:14:578 - Aww there's a muted guitar strum here thats not mapped
Two notes there would be cool[Niño's Insane]
00:42:328 (4) - This would be pretty cool to play if you ctrl+g'd it that way the snap to (1) is emphasized and you can have an up up down down pattern :v
00:58:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - With all the emphasis both the music and the hitsouns give to this part it's a bit anti-climactic that they just move in a small linear fashion. Like even for this difficulty some small jumps woul be nice.
01:01:828 (1,2,3,4) - THANK YOU for not clap spamming like natsu
02:04:828 (3) - The repeat point sounds a bit weird with the clap there. Maybe do it like 00:55:228 (3) - with no hitsouns
02:08:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as the previous suggestion. If you didn't want to change it for whatever reason I'd at least suggest 02:09:628 (1) - to be snapped similar to these though so it looks nice and has a nice pause effect. There wouldn't be any need to worry about a readability concern because the pause is long enough for the previous notes to fade, the AR is high enough that it doesn't appear near the same time as the other notes and the NC already implies a sort of pause.
02:28:678 (2,3) - I think finishes on these slider heads would better suit the music. Forgot to mention it earlier at 01:19:078 (2,3) - but yeah there too
03:20:428 - 03:21:028 - Technically you can start mapping again here. It'd be nice to do that too because a super long break isn't needed and it would start on the beginning of the next stanza which would make sense musically.
03:38:428 (3) - Replace clap with whistle. Sounds nicer and is consistent with how this is hitsounded normally for example 03:42:628 (1,2,3,4) - etc
04:13:078 (3) - I know there's no finish in the music here but a finish WOULD be nice. If not at the very least definitely a soft whistle to compliment the violin chamber.
[Mocha's Hard]
00:09:628 (3) - Blanket for this could be neater while keeping 1.2x spacing consistency.
00:32:278 (6) - Maybe add a whistle on the slider head. Sounds really empty atm.
00:35:128 (7) - Missing normal clap
00:36:478 (4) - Remove clap from slider end. No clap in the music.
00:46:228 (5) - I think you might like a finish here in the slider head like the previous ones 00:43:828 (4) - 00:45:028 (1) - Same for this (add finish) 00:48:628 (4) -
01:02:278 (2,3) - Remove clap from 2 and 3 slider head. I already yelled at natsu for doing this :v
01:08:278 (2) - Remove clap from slider end.
01:19:078 (2,3) - Finishes on the slider heads here would be nice since they add to the buildup
01:20:953 (1) - Maybe end the spinner here 01:23:278 - on the vocals (if you do this also remove clap)
01:52:678 (3) - Whistle on slider head like 01:53:428 (5,6) - Same for 01:55:078 (2) - also add whistle.
02:11:878 (2,3) - Remove claps from 2 and 3 slider head like in the first kiai.
02:20:353 (1,2) - Gonna be tricky to read this 1/4 considering you just stacked 1/2 at 02:19:528 (3,4) - Might wanna snap it normally.
02:27:028 (1) - Add finish on slider head. Also add whistle to 02:27:478 (3) - slider head
02:35:128 (5) - Would be better to slightly offstack this. Reads and plays better because the slider leniency is so low. Just enough so it kinda looks like its not a perfect stack.
02:44:728 (5) - Same for this imo
02:45:928 (4) - Also think this would look better stacked over 02:46:078 (1) - slider head instead
03:33:478 (2,3) - Remove claps from 2 and (3) slider head. Plz don't make me yell at you like I did to natsu
03:49:978 (2) - This is spaced out a lot more than the previous notes have been. Almost looks like it could be 3/4 or 1/1 from how spaced it is. An easy fix could be to stack (1) over (2) since it would be a small jump on the downbeat instead of randomly in between.
04:05:278 (1) - Finish
04:10:828 (3,4) - Could be a neat opportunity to add a 1/4 triple here since its so noticeable in the music.
[Normal]
00:22:678 (4) - Whistle could be cool here. Sounds pretty empty. You can also do it like 000:25:078 (4) - and have a finish on the slider end in this case.
00:53:128 (2) - Spaced out a bit shorter than the other notes since the whole diff seems to use .9x so just stack over this 00:49:828 (1) - You'll likely need to adjust 00:53:428 (3,4) - as well
01:02:278 (2,3) - You already know what I'm gonna say about this
01:32:278 (4) - If you made any changes to the one at :22 apply them here as well
02:11:878 (2,3) - ...
02:18:628 (1,2,3) - Don't like this rhythm option. 02:19:378 (3) - Taps on a weak beat and similarly 02:18:928 (2) - also feels kinda week. Swing rhythm would work a bit better imo so something like this would work better.
02:28:678 (2) - Finish on slider head would go well with the musics
03:06:628 (1) - Wrong custom on the clap in the repeat.
03:48:028 (2,3) - 1mp3rf3ct bl5nk8t :^)
03:50:278 (2) - Same as the other suggestion to add a finish on the slider head
[EZ]
00:30:628 (1) - I think the whistle was meant for just the slider head and not the whole body :v Might wanna double check the other diffs if you also copied the hitsounds over.
01:02:428 (2) - remove that damn clap from the slider head >:V
01:10:828 (4) - Dunno if this was intended but it's a different custom set
01:40:228 (1) - Same thing about the whistle as mentioned at 0:30
02:12:028 (2) - just get rid of it damn it x_x
03:33:628 (2) - AAAAAAAAAAAAA
04:14:728 - Don't you want a clickable object before starting the spinner?
Hope this helps. Good luck!
Hi
[General]
Files unused: 31212121.png
[Easy]
01:32:878 (1,2) - Spacing
03:56:128 (1,2) - ^
[Normal]
00:30:628 (1) - On your easy diff you emphasized this with a normal whistle. 01:40:228 (1) - The same is true of this part.
00:52:228 (1,2) - Spacing
[Mochi's Hard]
03:11:503 - ~03:27:853 - Delete the green line. You do not use it.
[NiNo's Insane]
00:13:678 (1,3) - Stack error
00:58:828 (1,2,3,4,5) -02:08:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personal suggestion. You need to increase in the spacing for emphasis.
02:44:128 (4) - Change this note into a stream. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4936542
[Extra]
02:25:678 (6) - NC?
02:49:828 (1,2) - Why do not stream here? Good place to put a bigger stream XD
03:06:928 (2,3,4) - Two notes is better than triple. I felt slightly awkward.
03:47:278 (6) - NC?
[Snow White]
00:02:878 (1,4) - Stack error?
01:20:728 (1,2) - Suddenly distance skyrocketed. Fix it straightly. http://puu.sh/ojgbe/094ab3a14d.PNG
01:52:078 (6) - x:344 y:308 / You can see the following point straightly. http://puu.sh/ojenZ/0596bd025e.PNG
02:44:878 (1,2) - The interval with the slider..02:44:878 (1,1) - I hope like this. If so, It looks more symmetrical. http://puu.sh/ojfg5/3ac6ad9380.PNG
Sorry if this wasn't of much help. But I can't find any more.
Good luck
[General]
Files unused: 31212121.png
[Easy]
01:32:878 (1,2) - Spacing
03:56:128 (1,2) - ^
[Normal]
00:30:628 (1) - On your easy diff you emphasized this with a normal whistle. 01:40:228 (1) - The same is true of this part.
00:52:228 (1,2) - Spacing
[Mochi's Hard]
03:11:503 - ~03:27:853 - Delete the green line. You do not use it.
[NiNo's Insane]
00:13:678 (1,3) - Stack error
00:58:828 (1,2,3,4,5) -02:08:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personal suggestion. You need to increase in the spacing for emphasis.
02:44:128 (4) - Change this note into a stream. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4936542
[Extra]
02:25:678 (6) - NC?
02:49:828 (1,2) - Why do not stream here? Good place to put a bigger stream XD
03:06:928 (2,3,4) - Two notes is better than triple. I felt slightly awkward.
03:47:278 (6) - NC?
[Snow White]
00:02:878 (1,4) - Stack error?
01:20:728 (1,2) - Suddenly distance skyrocketed. Fix it straightly. http://puu.sh/ojgbe/094ab3a14d.PNG
01:52:078 (6) - x:344 y:308 / You can see the following point straightly. http://puu.sh/ojenZ/0596bd025e.PNG
02:44:878 (1,2) - The interval with the slider..02:44:878 (1,1) - I hope like this. If so, It looks more symmetrical. http://puu.sh/ojfg5/3ac6ad9380.PNG
Sorry if this wasn't of much help. But I can't find any more.
Good luck
Topic Starter
Sonnyc
Sonnyc wrote:
k I suck jokes XD
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:01:678 - I experience audibility issue at the intro for all diffs. I don't see why, since even the soft-hitnormal is really noticeable
- 00:25:678 (1,2) - Using a same curve rate would look more organized. I want to make 00:26:428 (2,3) - different
[Snow White]
- 01:24:778 - Why does the break start from here? Because the song melody changes there, I did the same to easy diff now, since I forgot about this before
- Good.
Good map.
- 00:28:678 (1,2) - I see the comboing was done for the pattern afterall, but imo the pattern itself was somewhat detached from the song and arbitrarily made. 00:28:078 (1,2,3,1) - 00:28:828 (2,3,4,5) feels as a pair, but both your patterning and the comboing wasn't reflecting that. Starting an individual pattern with a new combo from 00:28:828 is recommended. nah I'm mostly basing my comboing on vocals, since that bring me more variation for patterns and isn't that monotonous to do
- 00:31:528 (9,1,2) - Similar, but just changing the comboes will be enough here. same as above
- 00:55:228 (3,4,5,6) - It was a personal shame that this part of the song wasn't expressed differently but rather just expressed as an ordinary 1/2 rhythm. Considering most of your rhythms were following the drums, there were already full of 1/2. Good job in maintaining consistency of your rhythm concept, but the song here is pretty distinct from other parts. Reflecting such difference would express the song more interestingly instead just continuously clicking 1/2. At least, 02:05:053 (5) was a 1/4 triple. any suggestion? because actually I think the 1/2s fit this part nicely
- 00:56:728 - Finish. there is already one
- 01:00:478 (2,1) - This jump is even intense than the previous strong pattern of 00:58:828 (4,1). Is this intended? Perhaps 01:00:628 could be an important part of the song, the beat itself not being strong felt the jump way too exaggerated. oh I really feel that 01:00:628 (1) - change the song alot, not only the pitch, but the vocals work like heaven so I wanted to bring full emphasis to them
- 02:10:078 (2,1) - Similar. same as before
- 01:01:828 (1) - 02:11:428 (1) - I want you to think more about this pattern. Basically the slider here is an extended form from the gradually scaling and repeating sliders of 01:00:628 (1,1,1,1) and 02:10:228 (1,1,1,1). However unlike those sliders having a similar atmosphere in the song, 01:01:828 (1) - 02:11:428 (1) the song from these sliders felt quite detached with the previous part. Expressing as a different pattern would've reflected that aspect better imo. yeah you right, but also the patterns are really nice, I need more time to think about this one
- 02:17:428 (5,1) - Start combo from (5)? is because I'm mostly going with vocal combo pattern, than instrument, as I said before this always allow me to have variation and more freedom with patterns
- 03:27:478 (5,6) - Seems the rhythm selection around here was based on vocals. Considering that, this rhythm felt out of your consistency. all the slow section is based on vocals >:
- Overall, I believe you could use more creativity for your future mapping. Patterns are well structured. But I've got a personal feeling that some patterns existed just for the sake of that pattern, instead of really reflecting the song. For instance, 01:02:728 (5,6,1) - 02:12:328 (5,6,1) - (5,6) having a bigger jump than (6,1) while (1) having a stronger beat for the sake of patterning could be one. Your patterns have got internal consistency, and you've got your own mapping style. Those are good. However before jumping to consistencies, I believe you could start from selecting patterns that reflects the music nicely first.fixed both patternsbut overall I disagree, since isn't only the music that you should follow, but the overall sound theme or vocals (which is what I follow in most of my maps) cause I believe vocals bring varition, instead of following the instruments which are usually following the same >:
Side
Side wrote:
Hi for the M4M :v
[Titanium hwite]
01:28:228 (1,2,1,2) - This would be so awesome to play as 1/1 sliders instead especially with this distance it'd be awesome as hell trust me. Better suited for this difficulty as well instead of 1/4 sliders into a pause. That just gives players a lot of time to snap to the next and this part to me sounds like it should be harder. You'd still mute the slider ends ofc. nah the hold sound stop at 1/2
03:11:428 - The whistle spam here sounds like a bit too much. Would sound a lot nicer for this quiet section if it was every other white tick (2/1)to follow the strong strum of the violin thing. To add to why it sounds bad well the biggest reason is the hitsound is monotone fortunately it is in key (sort of) to the song so it doesn't sound dissonant BUT having that same pitch play all the time WHILE following the vocals makes it sound blegh. This would be more acceptable if you maybe had different pitched bell hitsounds so you could like keysound it to follow the pitch of the vocals and it'd be kind of neat. Now I could help you with this but idk if you wanna do that so if you do feel free to PM me I'll see what I can do. this is totally fine and sounds really nice >: and the more important thing it fit the music nicely
03:52:528 (2,3,4,5,6) - It's a rhythm game after all :v remove and listen careful :v
[Extra]
00:07:378 (4,5,1) - Flow here is pretty linear an then (1) snaps up afterward making it a bit unconfortable to play. Can't really see an easy work-around fix. oh for me is really nice to play o.o, tested by myself and asked a few people before getting mods
00:20:728 (6) - For something like this like the ending of the intro into the first verse an also for a strong guitar chord I think a slightly higher SV slider would be cool here to represent that. Maybe like a fast version of 00:19:678 (1) - for example. I don't like too much to do SV changes and considering the previous and next objects are circles it plays somehow different already, so I don't see the needed
01:00:628 (1,1,1,1,1) - The SV increase isn't very noticeable it' look better if it was
01:10:678 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - See THIS is good it sort of better follows what the drums do in the music and makes it clear that the next stanza is starting so its like a good way to close the upbeat but not 5s streams like on snowwhite
02:12:628 - 02:16:228 - holy four seconds of slider spam
02:37:078 (3) - Very clear sound at 02:37:378 - don't you wanna map it?
03:11:428 - Same thing as snow white don't whistle spam unless its keysounded
03:33:328 (1,2,3,4) - X_X is cute pattern
04:14:128 - 04:14:578 - Aww there's a muted guitar strum here thats not mapped
[Normal]
02:18:628 (1,2,3) - Don't like this rhythm option. 02:19:378 (3) - Taps on a weak beat and similarly 02:18:928 (2) - also feels kinda week. Swing rhythm would work a bit better imo so something like this would work better. I think mine offer better playability and sounds okay with the song
03:06:628 (1) - Wrong custom on the clap in the repeat. nop is the intended one, check the other diffs
[EZ]
01:10:828 (4) - Dunno if this was intended but it's a different custom set intended
04:14:728 - Don't you want a clickable object before starting the spinner?
Hope this helps. Good luck!
Down
Down wrote:
Hi
[Extra]
02:25:678 (6) - NC? I think my combo pattern works alot better at this point
02:49:828 (1,2) - Why do not stream here? Good place to put a bigger stream XD because I want to leave big streams for snow white diff
03:06:928 (2,3,4) - Two notes is better than triple. I felt slightly awkward. I can listen a triplet in the music
03:47:278 (6) - NC? same as the before one
Sorry if this wasn't of much help. But I can't find any more.
Good luck
thanks everyone
, Really good mods ~Hai, m4m. this is a really pretty song ;w;
Good luck! Love the set overall
Snow White
• 00:22:678 (4,1) and 01:32:278 (4,1) - Make this into a slider?
• 00:23:578 (2,3,4,5,6) - Might be just me, but this pattern just feel cluttered
• 00:31:678 (1,1) - Just stack these?
• 00:36:778 (2,3,4) - triple is overmapped
• 00:37:828 (1) - start this here? 00:37:678
• 00:42:928 (2,3,4,5) and 01:52:528 (2,3,4,5) - why not make these more angled like the rest of the jumps? feels inconsistent imo; maybe ctrl+g 3,4
• 00:55:228 (3,4,1,3) - move to x168 y224 for a better square
• 01:06:028 (1,1,1) - This pattern is awesomeee
• 01:10:078 (3) - nc here?
• 01:14:878 (7) - maybe you could blanket these 01:15:328 (1,2) on that slider
• 01:34:078 (4,2,4) - Maybe space these like 01:33:178 (2,1,1,3) ? would look nicer imo. same with 02:16:978 (2,4)
• 01:41:878 (5) - Slider here, because the jump spam before this feels most prominent with the vocals, not as much the drums
• 02:04:828 (3,4,5,6,7) - map something to the vocals here, they're more prominent. sounds like 1/3 rhythm or something
• 02:19:378 (1,2) - make into slider maybe?
• 02:29:578 (2,2,2) - spacing these evenly would look nice
• 02:46:528 (1) - move this to x412 y88 to stack with 02:45:478 (2)
• 03:32:428 (1) - put at x237 y246? (I'm recommending some of these stacks because you seem to like using these :p)
• 03:56:278 (4,6,1) - move to x180 y248, its farther from the slider than 3,5,7
• 03:56:878 (1,3) - placement here bothers me
• 04:14:728 (1) - it took me a while to get why this was an apple but then i realized im stupid. Love this creativity
• 00:23:578 (2,3,4,5,6) - Might be just me, but this pattern just feel cluttered
• 00:31:678 (1,1) - Just stack these?
• 00:36:778 (2,3,4) - triple is overmapped
• 00:37:828 (1) - start this here? 00:37:678
• 00:42:928 (2,3,4,5) and 01:52:528 (2,3,4,5) - why not make these more angled like the rest of the jumps? feels inconsistent imo; maybe ctrl+g 3,4
• 00:55:228 (3,4,1,3) - move to x168 y224 for a better square
• 01:06:028 (1,1,1) - This pattern is awesomeee
• 01:10:078 (3) - nc here?
• 01:14:878 (7) - maybe you could blanket these 01:15:328 (1,2) on that slider
• 01:34:078 (4,2,4) - Maybe space these like 01:33:178 (2,1,1,3) ? would look nicer imo. same with 02:16:978 (2,4)
• 01:41:878 (5) - Slider here, because the jump spam before this feels most prominent with the vocals, not as much the drums
• 02:04:828 (3,4,5,6,7) - map something to the vocals here, they're more prominent. sounds like 1/3 rhythm or something
• 02:19:378 (1,2) - make into slider maybe?
• 02:29:578 (2,2,2) - spacing these evenly would look nice
• 02:46:528 (1) - move this to x412 y88 to stack with 02:45:478 (2)
• 03:32:428 (1) - put at x237 y246? (I'm recommending some of these stacks because you seem to like using these :p)
• 03:56:278 (4,6,1) - move to x180 y248, its farther from the slider than 3,5,7
• 03:56:878 (1,3) - placement here bothers me
• 04:14:728 (1) - it took me a while to get why this was an apple but then i realized im stupid. Love this creativity
extra
• 00:14:428 (4,6) - why not stack normally?
• 00:37:828 (1) - start slider here? 00:37:678
• 00:43:228 (3,4,5) - you can space these more
• 01:16:678 - put a note here
• 01:19:828 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I didn't enjoy reading this in my testplay. I would put every other combo a little off to the side so you get the same effect and reading it is less weird
• 01:20:953 (1,1,2,1) - I feel like you could map something here, rather than just just using spinners
• 01:45:328 (2,3,4) - you can space these more
• 01:47:428 (1) - start this slider at 01:47:278
• 02:25:078 (2,4) - this sounds really nazi but put at x96 y184 to space from the slider like 02:24:928 (1,3,5) :p
• 02:26:278 - put something here?
• 02:37:678 (1,2,3,5) and 02:40:678 (1,3,4) - would look nicer spaced more, imo
• 03:06:928 (2,3,4) - dont hear a triple in the song here
• 03:18:628 - I feel like this should be clickable
• 03:19:378 (3,4) - maybe you can blanket this?
• 03:22:078 - circle here?
• 03:56:390 - mot a big fan of the way this is arranged. Playable but it could look nicer
• 04:09:178 (2,3,4,5) - a little bit of clutter here
• 04:10:828 (4,5) - why not make this a stream?
• 00:37:828 (1) - start slider here? 00:37:678
• 00:43:228 (3,4,5) - you can space these more
• 01:16:678 - put a note here
• 01:19:828 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I didn't enjoy reading this in my testplay. I would put every other combo a little off to the side so you get the same effect and reading it is less weird
• 01:20:953 (1,1,2,1) - I feel like you could map something here, rather than just just using spinners
• 01:45:328 (2,3,4) - you can space these more
• 01:47:428 (1) - start this slider at 01:47:278
• 02:25:078 (2,4) - this sounds really nazi but put at x96 y184 to space from the slider like 02:24:928 (1,3,5) :p
• 02:26:278 - put something here?
• 02:37:678 (1,2,3,5) and 02:40:678 (1,3,4) - would look nicer spaced more, imo
• 03:06:928 (2,3,4) - dont hear a triple in the song here
• 03:18:628 - I feel like this should be clickable
• 03:19:378 (3,4) - maybe you can blanket this?
• 03:22:078 - circle here?
• 03:56:390 - mot a big fan of the way this is arranged. Playable but it could look nicer
• 04:09:178 (2,3,4,5) - a little bit of clutter here
• 04:10:828 (4,5) - why not make this a stream?
Nino Insane
• 00:06:028 (3) - stack on slidertail of 1?
• 00:17:728 (2,3,5,6) - rhythm here is hard to read. space 2 and 3?
• 00:42:028 (3) - why not ctrl+g here?
• 00:42:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - flow feels very repetitive. change it up somewhere
• 01:13:228 (3,4) - curve 3 or straighten 4?
• 01:15:928 (4,5) - i feel like flow would be more consistent (continuing from the slider part) if you ctrl+g these
• 01:26:278 (3,5) - move these farther apart from eachother or make a more obvious overlap
• 01:38:353 - sounds like you should make this clickable
• 01:47:278 (5) - start 01:47:428 (1) here? vocals are prominent here
• 02:28:228 (1) - put at x128 y140
• 02:34:828 (4,1) - yes this overlap is small but it feels kinda awkward
• 02:34:828 (4,3) - stack these two?
• 02:42:778 (2) - make this look more like 02:43:528 (2). feels kind of cluttered like this
• 02:47:428 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more repetitive flow. Maybe you could just increase spacing gradually as this part gets more intense so it doesn't feel as static
• 03:40:078 (5,1) - position 5 so that it flows straight into the direction of 1. might be a small suggestion but it looks and plays a little nicer
• 03:45:628 (3,4) - why not make this a slider? to go with vocals
• 04:11:053 (4,5) - i feel like this breaks consistency of the rhytm
• 00:17:728 (2,3,5,6) - rhythm here is hard to read. space 2 and 3?
• 00:42:028 (3) - why not ctrl+g here?
• 00:42:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - flow feels very repetitive. change it up somewhere
• 01:13:228 (3,4) - curve 3 or straighten 4?
• 01:15:928 (4,5) - i feel like flow would be more consistent (continuing from the slider part) if you ctrl+g these
• 01:26:278 (3,5) - move these farther apart from eachother or make a more obvious overlap
• 01:38:353 - sounds like you should make this clickable
• 01:47:278 (5) - start 01:47:428 (1) here? vocals are prominent here
• 02:28:228 (1) - put at x128 y140
• 02:34:828 (4,1) - yes this overlap is small but it feels kinda awkward
• 02:34:828 (4,3) - stack these two?
• 02:42:778 (2) - make this look more like 02:43:528 (2). feels kind of cluttered like this
• 02:47:428 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more repetitive flow. Maybe you could just increase spacing gradually as this part gets more intense so it doesn't feel as static
• 03:40:078 (5,1) - position 5 so that it flows straight into the direction of 1. might be a small suggestion but it looks and plays a little nicer
• 03:45:628 (3,4) - why not make this a slider? to go with vocals
• 04:11:053 (4,5) - i feel like this breaks consistency of the rhytm
Good luck! Love the set overall
M4m4m4m4m4m4m
[General]
Es confuso jugar con ese background D:
Creo que le falta un poco de volumen a los hitsounds, no dan el suficiente feedback, sobretodo las notas que solo tienen el hitnormal.
[Snow white]
00:06:028 (4,1) - Mueve el slider 1 un poco a la izquierda, por el angulo que tiene ahorita es facil hacer slider break ya que el movimiento del slider es hacia abajo/un poco a la izquierda, esto lo haría un poco mas "smooth". Alternativamente puedes rotarlo un poco a la derecha si no quieres mover nada https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4944872.
00:10:528 (3,1) - Este salto no fluye muy bien, tiene un angulo muy abierto. Sugiero colocar este patron 00:10:678 (1,2,3) - aquí https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4944892 . Lo hace más facil de jugar y mantiene el enfasis :^)
00:17:428 (1,6) - Podrias mover estos de manera en que este triple 00:17:578 (2,3,4) - les haga blanket.
00:25:378 (5,6) - Creo que quedaria mejor como un slider, haciendo un jump con el 5. Le da más enfasis al finish. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945061 Yo lo colocaría ahí :^).
01:12:928 (3) - Esto está demasiado abajo, creo que toca la barra de hit window.
01:19:828 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Coloca los saltos viendo para el otro lado, de esta manera: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945136 . Se juega más natural porque venias con un flujo con sentido horario.
01:30:628 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Son muchos saltos para esta parte, lo hace muy pesado. 01:32:278 (4,1,2,3) - Podrias usar un slider que siga a la cantante de esta manera? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945229
01:40:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Reduceles un poco el spaccing, se siente un poco "overdone" (como digo eso en español?) a comparacion de los coros y buildups que es en donde mas se usan saltos mas largos.
01:41:878 (5,1,2,3) - La misma sugerencia de antes, un slider?
02:11:428 (1) - Sugerencia pequeña, podrias cambiar la forma de este slider para diferenciar que la canción ya entro al coro (y kiai).
03:28:078 (7) - Yo quitaría esta nota, creo que no es necesaria :p
Muy buena diff, solo creo que hay mucho spam de 1/2 en donde podria haber algo mas de variedad.
[Extra]
00:06:478 (1) - Se veria mejor 100% simetrico https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945588
01:20:728 (1,2) - Que tal si cambias la dirección de este salto para ponerle más enfasis? Quedaría muy bien solo haciendole ctrl+h de esta manera https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945623 Igual podrias aumentar la longitud del salto.
01:31:828 (1,2,3) - Intenta hacer que este triangulo empieze de manera parecida a los anteriores 01:30:628 (1,1) - , como esta ahora se rompe el flujo que llevabas sin necesidad de hacerlo. Yo le haria ctrl+g a estos: 01:31:828 (1,2) -
02:00:178 (4,5) - Haz un salto mas largo aquí, se siente algo corto cuando juego esta parte.
02:37:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Los antijumps definitivamente no van con esta parte de la canción, estás siguiendo a la guitarra y esta produce notas prolongadas. Deberías usar sliders en vez de antijumps como haces aqui 02:36:028 (4,1,3) -
:^D
[NiNo's Insane]
00:13:678 (1,3) - Imperfect stack
00:18:628 (1) - Use 2 circles instead to emphazise both beats since both are the same
00:19:678 (1) - Instead of the slider put a single circle there since there is nothing here 00:19:828 - for the slider end. Placing it here would be nice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945880
00:45:028 (1,2) - This blanket is way too off. Use the slider ball track thingy to make it perfect https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4946033
00:58:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't make much sense, why suddenly reduce the spacing when this is supposed to be a buildup? :v I'll suggest doing something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945981 a gradual decrease in distance spacing works well with the song and is similar to you idea :p
01:00:028 - Add a circle here, this unmapped space feels weird and adding this circle would avoid that and stick to what you where trying to do here imo. 02:09:628 (1) -You did it here so yeah :p
01:10:528 (1) - Remove the clap from the slider end, it sounds weird :v
01:11:128 (1) - ^ Same ^
01:30:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Wow you repeat these patterns a lot D:
02:08:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing as the other one, a gradual reduction of spacing works better than doing it all at once
02:34:828 (4,1) - This overlap is too noticeable when playing so try to avoid it as it looks messy.
02:39:328 (2,3) - This jump is too much for this diff, i thought there was a 1/2 gap when testing the diff. Move them closer like you did with these ones 02:42:778 (2,1,2,3,4) -
03:00:628 (1,2,3) - The rhythm on the song here is constant 1/2, what you did was a bit underdone. Try doing something that doesn't skip so many beats.
03:09:628 - Add note?
04:14:803 (1) - End spinner here? 04:14:803 (1) -
It's good, but you repeat some patterns way too much and needs a bit more polishing since it can look a bit messy on parts.
[Mochi's Hard]
00:13:528 - This should be clickable imo, try removing the slider 00:13:378 (3) - and placing a circle where the slider end was https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4946126
02:11:878 (2,3) - Remove the claps plz from 2 and 3's slider head.
02:29:878 (2,3,4,5) - I think it would work better if the slider starts where the vocal is, so consider doing something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4946168
03:33:478 (2,3) - Why the clapssss :v
Nice diff!
[Normal]
00:55:228 (2) - Quedaría mejor que este slider siguiera a la cantante, extendiendolo a la linea azul siguiente.
02:04:828 (2) - Lo mesmo
Eeeeh solo eso, buen normal :p
[Easy]
dudenice
GL!
[General]
Es confuso jugar con ese background D:
Creo que le falta un poco de volumen a los hitsounds, no dan el suficiente feedback, sobretodo las notas que solo tienen el hitnormal.
[Snow white]
00:06:028 (4,1) - Mueve el slider 1 un poco a la izquierda, por el angulo que tiene ahorita es facil hacer slider break ya que el movimiento del slider es hacia abajo/un poco a la izquierda, esto lo haría un poco mas "smooth". Alternativamente puedes rotarlo un poco a la derecha si no quieres mover nada https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4944872.
00:10:528 (3,1) - Este salto no fluye muy bien, tiene un angulo muy abierto. Sugiero colocar este patron 00:10:678 (1,2,3) - aquí https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4944892 . Lo hace más facil de jugar y mantiene el enfasis :^)
00:17:428 (1,6) - Podrias mover estos de manera en que este triple 00:17:578 (2,3,4) - les haga blanket.
00:25:378 (5,6) - Creo que quedaria mejor como un slider, haciendo un jump con el 5. Le da más enfasis al finish. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945061 Yo lo colocaría ahí :^).
01:12:928 (3) - Esto está demasiado abajo, creo que toca la barra de hit window.
01:19:828 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Coloca los saltos viendo para el otro lado, de esta manera: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945136 . Se juega más natural porque venias con un flujo con sentido horario.
01:30:628 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Son muchos saltos para esta parte, lo hace muy pesado
. 01:32:278 (4,1,2,3) - Podrias usar un slider que siga a la cantante de esta manera? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/494522901:40:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Reduceles un poco el spaccing, se siente un poco "overdone" (como digo eso en español?) a comparacion de los coros y buildups que es en donde mas se usan saltos mas largos.
01:41:878 (5,1,2,3) - La misma sugerencia de antes, un slider?
02:11:428 (1) - Sugerencia pequeña, podrias cambiar la forma de este slider para diferenciar que la canción ya entro al coro (y kiai).
03:28:078 (7) - Yo quitaría esta nota, creo que no es necesaria :p
Muy buena diff, solo creo que hay mucho spam de 1/2 en donde podria haber algo mas de variedad.
[Extra]
00:06:478 (1) - Se veria mejor 100% simetrico https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945588
01:20:728 (1,2) - Que tal si cambias la dirección de este salto para ponerle más enfasis? Quedaría muy bien solo haciendole ctrl+h de esta manera https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945623 Igual podrias aumentar la longitud del salto.
01:31:828 (1,2,3) - Intenta hacer que este triangulo empieze de manera parecida a los anteriores 01:30:628 (1,1) - , como esta ahora se rompe el flujo que llevabas sin necesidad de hacerlo. Yo le haria ctrl+g a estos: 01:31:828 (1,2) -
02:00:178 (4,5) - Haz un salto mas largo aquí, se siente algo corto cuando juego esta parte.
02:37:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Los antijumps definitivamente no van con esta parte de la canción, estás siguiendo a la guitarra y esta produce notas prolongadas. Deberías usar sliders en vez de antijumps como haces aqui 02:36:028 (4,1,3) -
:^D
[NiNo's Insane]
00:13:678 (1,3) - Imperfect stack
00:18:628 (1) - Use 2 circles instead to emphazise both beats since both are the same
00:19:678 (1) - Instead of the slider put a single circle there since there is nothing here 00:19:828 - for the slider end. Placing it here would be nice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945880
00:45:028 (1,2) - This blanket is way too off. Use the slider ball track thingy to make it perfect https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4946033
00:58:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't make much sense, why suddenly reduce the spacing when this is supposed to be a buildup? :v I'll suggest doing something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945981 a gradual decrease in distance spacing works well with the song and is similar to you idea :p
01:00:028 - Add a circle here, this unmapped space feels weird and adding this circle would avoid that and stick to what you where trying to do here imo. 02:09:628 (1) -You did it here so yeah :p
01:10:528 (1) - Remove the clap from the slider end, it sounds weird :v
01:11:128 (1) - ^ Same ^
01:30:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Wow you repeat these patterns a lot D:
02:08:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing as the other one, a gradual reduction of spacing works better than doing it all at once
02:34:828 (4,1) - This overlap is too noticeable when playing so try to avoid it as it looks messy.
02:39:328 (2,3) - This jump is too much for this diff, i thought there was a 1/2 gap when testing the diff. Move them closer like you did with these ones 02:42:778 (2,1,2,3,4) -
03:00:628 (1,2,3) - The rhythm on the song here is constant 1/2, what you did was a bit underdone. Try doing something that doesn't skip so many beats.
03:09:628 - Add note?
04:14:803 (1) - End spinner here? 04:14:803 (1) -
It's good, but you repeat some patterns way too much and needs a bit more polishing since it can look a bit messy on parts.
[Mochi's Hard]
00:13:528 - This should be clickable imo, try removing the slider 00:13:378 (3) - and placing a circle where the slider end was https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4946126
02:11:878 (2,3) - Remove the claps plz from 2 and 3's slider head.
02:29:878 (2,3,4,5) - I think it would work better if the slider starts where the vocal is, so consider doing something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4946168
03:33:478 (2,3) - Why the clapssss :v
Nice diff!
[Normal]
00:55:228 (2) - Quedaría mejor que este slider siguiera a la cantante, extendiendolo a la linea azul siguiente.
02:04:828 (2) - Lo mesmo
Eeeeh solo eso, buen normal :p
[Easy]
dudenice
GL!
Topic Starter
squirrelpascals
squirrelpascals wrote:
Hai, m4m. this is a really pretty song ;w;
Snow White• 00:22:678 (4,1) and 01:32:278 (4,1) - Make this into a slider? there are drum sounds going on each beat, if this were an easier diff I'd do, but not in this one
• 00:23:578 (2,3,4,5,6) - Might be just me, but this pattern just feel cluttered this pattern have obvious order you can notice at first try o.o
• 00:31:678 (1,1) - Just stack these? why? also you can't notice this in game so is not necessary
• 00:37:828 (1) - start this here? 00:37:678 So you want me to ignore a cymbal 00:37:828 (1) - in the hardest diff?
• 00:42:928 (2,3,4,5) and 01:52:528 (2,3,4,5) - why not make these more angled like the rest of the jumps? feels inconsistent imo; maybe ctrl+g 3,4 stars pattern happen alot of time in the diff, they are consistent and related to the music IMO
• 00:55:228 (3,4,1,3) - move to x168 y224 for a better square oh is on purpose!
• 01:34:078 (4,2,4) - Maybe space these like 01:33:178 (2,1,1,3) ? would look nicer imo. same with 02:16:978 (2,4) I want the white ticks increasing spacing and the red stay the same, that's why
• 01:41:878 (5) - Slider here, because the jump spam before this feels most prominent with the vocals, not as much the drumsas I said before drums are important, since I mapped them during all this diff
• 02:04:828 (3,4,5,6,7) - map something to the vocals here, they're more prominent. sounds like 1/3 rhythm or something I was thinking about this part as well, but vocals are usually off time, so I decide to map the instruments at this partm since keeping the 1/4 and 1/2 patters will be more intuitive for players
• 02:19:378 (1,2) - make into slider maybe? nah there is a tiny drum on 2 and I want to map it
• 03:32:428 (1) - put at x237 y246? (I'm recommending some of these stacks because you seem to like using these :p) this one is fine, since it would break my pattern and blankets if I do that
• 03:56:878 (1,3) - placement here bothers me its fine, is just a blanket
extra
• 00:14:428 (4,6) - why not stack normally? IDK I just think its cool?
• 00:37:828 (1) - start slider here? 00:37:678 no >< I don't want to miss the cymbal
• 00:43:228 (3,4,5) - you can space these more I think the current one fit the song nicely
• 01:16:678 - put a note here I prefer to keep this empty to bring more emphasis to the next vocals
• 01:19:828 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I didn't enjoy reading this in my testplay. I would put every other combo a little off to the side so you get the same effect and reading it is less weird omg sorry, I really love this pattern, probably not going to change this unless something big happens
• 01:20:953 (1,1,2,1) - I feel like you could map something here, rather than just just using spinners I think the spinners are more friendly after jumps, also they follow the vocals really nice
• 01:45:328 (2,3,4) - you can space these more I think the spacing is enough
• 01:47:428 (1) - start this slider at 01:47:278 same, I don't want to miss the cymbal
• 02:26:278 - put something here? same as before part
• 02:37:678 (1,2,3,5) and 02:40:678 (1,3,4) - would look nicer spaced more, imo I think the spacing is fine
• 03:06:928 (2,3,4) - dont hear a triple in the song here I can hear it clearly o.o. but gonna ask more opinions about this
• 03:18:628 - I feel like this should be clickable yeah, but if you notice i'm mapping just 1/1 gaps at this section to make it different from Snow white
• 03:19:378 (3,4) - maybe you can blanket this? is just a different kind of pattern
• 03:22:078 - circle here? Im just mapping 1/1 in extra to make it looks different rhythm as my snow white
• 03:56:390 - mot a big fan of the way this is arranged. Playable but it could look nicer it looks cool imo
• 04:09:178 (2,3,4,5) - a little bit of clutter here again i love this kind of patterns
• 04:10:828 (4,5) - why not make this a stream? for better spread
Good luck! Love the set overall
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sonnyc
[NiNo's Insane]
- 00:23:278 (1,2,3,4) - Unlike (1,2,3), (4) was detached from the previous parallel slider pattern. I feel these combo all has a similar feeling in the song, and making a difference at (4) damaged the pattern organization. Rather make (4) also a parallel slider, or if you had a different interpretation of the song, then consider starting the combo from (4) instead 00:24:628 to divide as a different pattern section. 00:24:328 (4) - got a lower vocal then 00:23:278 (1,2,3) - , so i decide to separate them. NC on 00:24:328 (4) -
- 00:33:928 (4,1) - Same. same above
- 00:42:328 (4) - Imo, a ctrl+G would make this pattern more organized along the double slide of 00:41:428 (1,2). well same as what i mention in 00:23:278 (1,2,3,4) -, the pitch of the vocal got lower at slider 3 and 4 got a higher again, so i decide to map like this
- 01:33:928 (4) - 01:43:528 (4) - Unlike the previous similar patterns that I've pointed out, this worked nice as it is, since the relationship with (1,2,3) and (4) was understandable. Keep it if you decided to make previous pattern all parallel slider, but if you changed the combo, then you'll want to maintain consistency.sure, NC on 01:33:928 (4,4) -
- 01:38:878 (1) - This slider wasn't cool enough since a major beat of 01:39:028 is getting ignored. Even a vocal exists there. fixed
- 02:18:628 (1,2,3) - Indeed the beats are strong here, but the jump for this pattern feels exaggerated compared to other part of this difficulty. Reviewing the previous pattern of 01:09:028 (1,2,3) would be helpful. Let's make a consistent difficulty. make the spacing 2>3 smaller
- 02:38:878 (1,2,3) - Since (1,2) is 1/2 while (2,3) being 1/2, I strongly recommend starting the combo from (2). Those objects having a same spacing while having a different rhythm could be misleading. sure
- 02:42:778 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - I believe this pattern could get organized better. 02:42:778 (2,1) is having a different spacing unlike (1,2,3,4) resulting in less organization. Also the overlap of 02:42:778 (2,1,2) kinda damaged in understanding that 02:43:228 (1,2,3,4) was meant to be a parralel pattern visually. Finally, the spacing of 02:44:128 (4,5) needs to get considered. The value is a consistent 2.00x because the spacing calculation is start from the end of the slider. However visually, 02:43:828 (3,4,5) is different in spacing. This can be checked through the spacing of slider heads, where an approach circle falls down. Not giving suggestion, but hope the addressed issue was properly understood.02:42:778 (2,1) got difference is cause the pitch if the music was changed. DO some fix at this pattern, hope it would get better
- 04:14:803 (1) - Try ending this spinner where all other diffs end. Consistency issue. well this ending is the same with Hard, i dont want to miss the beat 04:14:728 - tho
Down
[NiNo's Insane]
00:13:678 (1,3) - Stack error fixed
00:58:828 (1,2,3,4,5) -02:08:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personal suggestion. You need to increase in the spacing for emphasis. the pitch of the drum sound got lower, so should be smaller spacing imo, so ill just change the HS here
02:44:128 (4) - Change this note into a stream. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4936542 hmmm, why?
00:13:678 (1,3) - Stack error fixed
00:58:828 (1,2,3,4,5) -02:08:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Personal suggestion. You need to increase in the spacing for emphasis. the pitch of the drum sound got lower, so should be smaller spacing imo, so ill just change the HS here
02:44:128 (4) - Change this note into a stream. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4936542 hmmm, why?
squirrelpascals
• 00:06:028 (3) - stack on slidertail of 1? why?
• 00:17:728 (2,3,5,6) - rhythm here is hard to read. space 2 and 3? 00:17:728 (2,3) - got the same drum sound so i decide to stick them together, and it wouldnt be hard to read, since i already FCed with HDHR tho
• 00:42:028 (3) - why not ctrl+g here? if you want a reason go to see what i had mentioned in sonnyc's mod
• 00:42:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - flow feels very repetitive. change it up somewhere well is an insane diff lol, and not necessary
• 01:13:228 (3,4) - curve 3 or straighten 4? curving 4 in order to blanket 2's sliderend...
• 01:15:928 (4,5) - i feel like flow would be more consistent (continuing from the slider part) if you ctrl+g these lets keep it first, cause isnt necessary
• 01:26:278 (3,5) - move these farther apart from eachother or make a more obvious overlap overlap isnt a big issue tho, overlap is fine imo, since it wont matter the player that play the map
• 01:38:353 - sounds like you should make this clickable i cant hear a sound here tho, vocal stop at 01:38:278 - and 01:38:428 (4) - start the vocal
• 01:47:278 (5) - start 01:47:428 (1) here? vocals are prominent here in order to consist the whole part here, so i decide to start the slider 01:47:428 -
• 02:28:228 (1) - put at x128 y140 why?
• 02:34:828 (4,1) - yes this overlap is small but it feels kinda awkward same above
• 02:34:828 (4,3) - stack these two? 02:36:028 (3) - blanket 02:36:478 (1) - sliderend, and if i move 02:34:828 (4) - the spacing 02:34:528 (2,3,4) - will be inconsistent
• 02:42:778 (2) - make this look more like 02:43:528 (2). feels kind of cluttered like this this part is already fixed in sonnyc's mod
• 02:47:428 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more repetitive flow. Maybe you could just increase spacing gradually as this part gets more intense so it doesn't feel as static fixed
• 03:40:078 (5,1) - position 5 so that it flows straight into the direction of 1. might be a small suggestion but it looks and plays a little nicer you mean straight flow? well i dont like linear flow since is hard to play, so no change
• 03:45:628 (3,4) - why not make this a slider? to go with vocals keep this first, if someone else mod it ill change to 1/1 slider
• 04:11:053 (4,5) - i feel like this breaks consistency of the rhytm why? there are a clear drum sound here
• 00:17:728 (2,3,5,6) - rhythm here is hard to read. space 2 and 3? 00:17:728 (2,3) - got the same drum sound so i decide to stick them together, and it wouldnt be hard to read, since i already FCed with HDHR tho
• 00:42:028 (3) - why not ctrl+g here? if you want a reason go to see what i had mentioned in sonnyc's mod
• 00:42:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - flow feels very repetitive. change it up somewhere well is an insane diff lol, and not necessary
• 01:13:228 (3,4) - curve 3 or straighten 4? curving 4 in order to blanket 2's sliderend...
• 01:15:928 (4,5) - i feel like flow would be more consistent (continuing from the slider part) if you ctrl+g these lets keep it first, cause isnt necessary
• 01:26:278 (3,5) - move these farther apart from eachother or make a more obvious overlap overlap isnt a big issue tho, overlap is fine imo, since it wont matter the player that play the map
• 01:38:353 - sounds like you should make this clickable i cant hear a sound here tho, vocal stop at 01:38:278 - and 01:38:428 (4) - start the vocal
• 01:47:278 (5) - start 01:47:428 (1) here? vocals are prominent here in order to consist the whole part here, so i decide to start the slider 01:47:428 -
• 02:28:228 (1) - put at x128 y140 why?
• 02:34:828 (4,1) - yes this overlap is small but it feels kinda awkward same above
• 02:34:828 (4,3) - stack these two? 02:36:028 (3) - blanket 02:36:478 (1) - sliderend, and if i move 02:34:828 (4) - the spacing 02:34:528 (2,3,4) - will be inconsistent
• 02:42:778 (2) - make this look more like 02:43:528 (2). feels kind of cluttered like this this part is already fixed in sonnyc's mod
• 02:47:428 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more repetitive flow. Maybe you could just increase spacing gradually as this part gets more intense so it doesn't feel as static fixed
• 03:40:078 (5,1) - position 5 so that it flows straight into the direction of 1. might be a small suggestion but it looks and plays a little nicer you mean straight flow? well i dont like linear flow since is hard to play, so no change
• 03:45:628 (3,4) - why not make this a slider? to go with vocals keep this first, if someone else mod it ill change to 1/1 slider
• 04:11:053 (4,5) - i feel like this breaks consistency of the rhytm why? there are a clear drum sound here
Atsuro
[NiNo's Insane]
00:13:678 (1,3) - Imperfect stack fixed ar Down's mod
00:18:628 (1) - Use 2 circles instead to emphazise both beats since both are the same yea sure
00:19:678 (1) - Instead of the slider put a single circle there since there is nothing here 00:19:828 - for the slider end. Placing it here would be nice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945880 well i dont think there's no sound at sliderend will be a big issue since a slider, the sound of the sliderhead should be more clear and heavy then the sliderend
00:45:028 (1,2) - This blanket is way too off. Use the slider ball track thingy to make it perfect https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4946033 fixed
00:58:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't make much sense, why suddenly reduce the spacing when this is supposed to be a buildup? :v I'll suggest doing something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945981 a gradual decrease in distance spacing works well with the song and is similar to you idea :p well i mention this in squirrelpascals's mod, every mapper got different opinion tho, i think if more modder mention this part then ill use yours suggestion
01:00:028 - Add a circle here, this unmapped space feels weird and adding this circle would avoid that and stick to what you where trying to do here imo. 02:09:628 (1) -You did it here so yeah :p oh fk me lol, sure add it
01:10:528 (1) - Remove the clap from the slider end, it sounds weird :v well i copy the hs from natsu and do some fix, but here sound fine to me
01:11:128 (1) - ^ Same ^
01:30:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Wow you repeat these patterns a lot D: isnt repeat :\, is consist! if i change the structure here it would feel weird since this part is absoultly same as 00:21:028 -
02:08:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing as the other one, a gradual reduction of spacing works better than doing it all at once
02:34:828 (4,1) - This overlap is too noticeable when playing so try to avoid it as it looks messy. well you and squirrelpascals both mention this, so lets fix this overlap
02:39:328 (2,3) - This jump is too much for this diff, i thought there was a 1/2 gap when testing the diff. Move them closer like you did with these ones 02:42:778 (2,1,2,3,4) - sure
03:00:628 (1,2,3) - The rhythm on the song here is constant 1/2, what you did was a bit underdone. Try doing something that doesn't skip so many beats. since this is almost can called a light insane, i only want to emphasize the stronger drum sound here
03:09:628 - Add note? yap, sound good
04:14:803 (1) - End spinner here? 04:14:803 (1) - IS THE SAME PLACE LOL, well i want to mention the beat 04:14:728 - , just like the hard diff's done
00:13:678 (1,3) - Imperfect stack fixed ar Down's mod
00:18:628 (1) - Use 2 circles instead to emphazise both beats since both are the same yea sure
00:19:678 (1) - Instead of the slider put a single circle there since there is nothing here 00:19:828 - for the slider end. Placing it here would be nice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945880 well i dont think there's no sound at sliderend will be a big issue since a slider, the sound of the sliderhead should be more clear and heavy then the sliderend
00:45:028 (1,2) - This blanket is way too off. Use the slider ball track thingy to make it perfect https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4946033 fixed
00:58:828 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't make much sense, why suddenly reduce the spacing when this is supposed to be a buildup? :v I'll suggest doing something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945981 a gradual decrease in distance spacing works well with the song and is similar to you idea :p well i mention this in squirrelpascals's mod, every mapper got different opinion tho, i think if more modder mention this part then ill use yours suggestion
01:00:028 - Add a circle here, this unmapped space feels weird and adding this circle would avoid that and stick to what you where trying to do here imo. 02:09:628 (1) -You did it here so yeah :p oh fk me lol, sure add it
01:10:528 (1) - Remove the clap from the slider end, it sounds weird :v well i copy the hs from natsu and do some fix, but here sound fine to me
01:11:128 (1) - ^ Same ^
01:30:628 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Wow you repeat these patterns a lot D: isnt repeat :\, is consist! if i change the structure here it would feel weird since this part is absoultly same as 00:21:028 -
02:08:428 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing as the other one, a gradual reduction of spacing works better than doing it all at once
02:34:828 (4,1) - This overlap is too noticeable when playing so try to avoid it as it looks messy. well you and squirrelpascals both mention this, so lets fix this overlap
02:39:328 (2,3) - This jump is too much for this diff, i thought there was a 1/2 gap when testing the diff. Move them closer like you did with these ones 02:42:778 (2,1,2,3,4) - sure
03:00:628 (1,2,3) - The rhythm on the song here is constant 1/2, what you did was a bit underdone. Try doing something that doesn't skip so many beats. since this is almost can called a light insane, i only want to emphasize the stronger drum sound here
03:09:628 - Add note?
yap, sound good04:14:803 (1) - End spinner here? 04:14:803 (1) - IS THE SAME PLACE LOL, well i want to mention the beat 04:14:728 - , just like the hard diff's done
thanks you guys for the mod XD
love you (/me runs
http://puu.sh/oliHe/16473967f2.rar
Topic Starter
Atsuro"
Atsuro wrote:
M4m4m4m4m4m4m
[General]
Es confuso jugar con ese background D: con la mayoria lo es, pero se distingue bastante con el skin default asi que no creo que sea mucho problema
Creo que le falta un poco de volumen a los hitsounds, no dan el suficiente feedback, sobretodo las notas que solo tienen el hitnormal. podrias decirme que partes, porque la verdad yo escucho bien todo o.o
[Snow white]
00:10:528 (3,1) - Este salto no fluye muy bien, tiene un angulo muy abierto. Sugiero colocar este patron 00:10:678 (1,2,3) - aquí https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4944892 . Lo hace más facil de jugar y mantiene el enfasis :^) tu patron es basicamente lo mismo, asi que prefiero conservar el mio que se ve mejor
00:17:428 (1,6) - Podrias mover estos de manera en que este triple 00:17:578 (2,3,4) - les haga blanket. es mas a flow pattern que a blanket la verdad, si hago el blanket quedara como no muy bien la jugabilidad
00:25:378 (5,6) - Creo que quedaria mejor como un slider, haciendo un jump con el 5. Le da más enfasis al finish. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945061 Yo lo colocaría ahí :^). nah, el drum en 00:25:528 (6) - es bastante importante y tiene que ser mapeado como circulo, tene en cuenta tambien que he hecho esto en todo el mapa
01:19:828 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Coloca los saltos viendo para el otro lado, de esta manera: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945136 . Se juega más natural porque venias con un flujo con sentido horario. la verdad no importa mucho porque los jugadores haran una pequeña pausa en el triple 01:19:678 (7,8,1) - que causa un reset en el flow digamos
01:30:628 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Son muchos saltos para esta parte, lo hace muy pesado
01:40:228 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Reduceles un poco el spaccing, se siente un poco "overdone" (como digo eso en español?) a comparacion de los coros y buildups que es en donde mas se usan saltos mas largos. si escuchas la musica no se siente overdone, la energia que tiene las vocales hacen que los saltos tengan ¨fit¨
01:41:878 (5,1,2,3) - La misma sugerencia de antes, un slider?
02:11:428 (1) - Sugerencia pequeña, podrias cambiar la forma de este slider para diferenciar que la canción ya entro al coro (y kiai). XD no se la verdad me encantan estos patterns el flash del kiai es suficiente anuncio creo la verdad
03:28:078 (7) - Yo quitaría esta nota, creo que no es necesaria :p pero la musica suena claramente ahi
Muy buena diff, solo creo que hay mucho spam de 1/2 en donde podria haber algo mas de variedad.
[Extra]
01:20:728 (1,2) - Que tal si cambias la dirección de este salto para ponerle más enfasis? Quedaría muy bien solo haciendole ctrl+h de esta manera https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4945623 Igual podrias aumentar la longitud del salto. soy un mapper que se preocupa bastante del diseño, haciendo esto arruinaria mi pattern XD
01:31:828 (1,2,3) - Intenta hacer que este triangulo empieze de manera parecida a los anteriores 01:30:628 (1,1) - , como esta ahora se rompe el flujo que llevabas sin necesidad de hacerlo. Yo le haria ctrl+g a estos: 01:31:828 (1,2) - No veo como esto rompe el flujo
02:00:178 (4,5) - Haz un salto mas largo aquí, se siente algo corto cuando juego esta parte. creo que el espacio que actualmente tiene es bastante bueno, por el momento no le quiero agregar mas
02:37:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Los antijumps definitivamente no van con esta parte de la canción, estás siguiendo a la guitarra y esta produce notas prolongadas. Deberías usar sliders en vez de antijumps como haces aqui 02:36:028 (4,1,3) - creo que las pausas representan bien la guitarra y la musica cuando no hacen nada en 1/2
[Normal]
00:55:228 (2) - Quedaría mejor que este slider siguiera a la cantante, extendiendolo a la linea azul siguiente. creo que es mejor seguir el ritmo que las vocals, sinceramente la vocal es bien off supongo
02:04:828 (2) - Lo mesmo ^
Eeeeh solo eso, buen normal :p
[Easy]
dudenice
GL!
thanks
Side wrote:
Hi for the M4M :vSPOILER[Mocha's Hard]
00:09:628 (3) - Blanket for this could be neater while keeping 1.2x spacing consistency.
00:32:278 (6) - Maybe add a whistle on the slider head. Sounds really empty atm.
00:35:128 (7) - Missing normal clap
00:36:478 (4) - Remove clap from slider end. No clap in the music. it feels fit for me
00:46:228 (5) - I think you might like a finish here in the slider head like the previous ones 00:43:828 (4) - 00:45:028 (1) - Same for this (add finish) 00:48:628 (4) - nope
01:02:278 (2,3) - Remove clap from 2 and 3 slider head. I already yelled at natsu for doing this :v haha done
01:08:278 (2) - Remove clap from slider end.
01:19:078 (2,3) - Finishes on the slider heads here would be nice since they add to the buildup
01:20:953 (1) - Maybe end the spinner here 01:23:278 - on the vocals (if you do this also remove clap)
01:52:678 (3) - Whistle on slider head like 01:53:428 (5,6) - Same for 01:55:078 (2) - also add whistle. added
02:11:878 (2,3) - Remove claps from 2 and 3 slider head like in the first kiai. ok
02:20:353 (1,2) - Gonna be tricky to read this 1/4 considering you just stacked 1/2 at 02:19:528 (3,4) - Might wanna snap it normally. hmm smth similiar
02:27:028 (1) - Add finish on slider head. Also add whistle to 02:27:478 (3) - slider head
02:35:128 (5) - Would be better to slightly offstack this. Reads and plays better because the slider leniency is so low. Just enough so it kinda looks like its not a perfect stack. yaa
02:44:728 (5) - Same for this imo
02:45:928 (4) - Also think this would look better stacked over 02:46:078 (1) - slider head instead
03:33:478 (2,3) - Remove claps from 2 and (3) slider head. Plz don't make me yell at you like I did to natsu
03:49:978 (2) - This is spaced out a lot more than the previous notes have been. Almost looks like it could be 3/4 or 1/1 from how spaced it is. An easy fix could be to stack (1) over (2) since it would be a small jump on the downbeat instead of randomly in between. i really like this pattern :<
04:05:278 (1) - Finish
04:10:828 (3,4) - Could be a neat opportunity to add a 1/4 triple here since its so noticeable in the music. yeahh added :3
Hope this helps. Good luck!
Also fixed blanket from Sonnyc's mod and deleted greenlines on the breaktimeAtsuro wrote:
M4m4m4m4m4m4m
[Mochi's Hard]
00:13:528 - This should be clickable imo, try removing the slider 00:13:378 (3) - and placing a circle where the slider end was https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4946126 hmm nope, its fine imo
02:11:878 (2,3) - Remove the claps plz from 2 and 3's slider head. yes
02:29:878 (2,3,4,5) - I think it would work better if the slider starts where the vocal is, so consider doing something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4946168 well, player would focus on the drum and wouldn't really care at vocal here
03:33:478 (2,3) - Why the clapssss :v RIP
GL!
thanks guys :3
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text wall so scared
Onegai kissu de jk lol
This is a good song, good luck for ranking
This is a good song, good luck for ranking
Hello~
Changes/Fixes
~ Bubbled ~
Changes/Fixes
- Added some whistles and finishers in all difficulties.
- Fixed some patterns to increase the aesthetics
- We have improved some rhythms.
- Added New Combos in the last difficulty.
Log (Spanish)
19:19 Gero: maje hacemos IRC mod?
19:20 Natsu: simon
19:20 Gero: cual mapa es?
19:20 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/439609
19:20 Natsu: ese mae
19:21 Gero: descargando
19:22 Natsu: demole irc ya
19:23 Natsu: veamoslo
19:23 Gero: okay
19:23 Gero: estoy descargando
19:26 Gero: ufff.. cuando hitsounds, ninguno tiene delay?
19:27 Natsu: ninguno
19:27 Natsu: y la mayoria son default
19:27 Natsu: solo los agregue para que no se jodan con la gente q usa skin en el juego
19:27 Gero: okay esta bien entonces
19:28 Natsu: orale
19:28 Gero: okay empezamos
19:28 *Gero is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/946082 Noboru feat.Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa [Snow White]]
19:28 *Natsu is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/946082 Noboru feat.Mitani Nana - Shiroi Yuki no Princess wa [Snow White]]
19:28 Gero: 00:06:478 (1) - Se te olvido añadir un Finish al inicio del slider
19:29 Gero: 00:11:278 (4) - NC?
19:29 Natsu: hue
19:29 Natsu: yap
19:29 Gero: 00:14:128 (3,5,7) - Se ven muy desordenados, que te parece apilarlos abajo del slider para hacer un bonito patron?
19:30 Natsu: okay lo hare mas cute
19:30 Gero: 00:51:028 (1,2,3,4) - Siento que podrias añadir un jump ya que la musica es bastante densa en esta parte
19:31 Natsu: les agregare mas distancia gorda
19:31 Gero: 00:55:453 - Maje porque no añades un circulo aqui? hay sonido en el tick azul
19:33 Gero: 02:10:228 (1,1,1,1,1) - Que bonito :D
19:33 Natsu: gracias mi gorda flacida
19:34 Gero: 03:05:053 (5) - mira aqui si lo añadiste
19:34 Natsu: si lo hice
19:34 Natsu: tya lo arregle
19:35 Gero: 03:26:428 (5) - NC?
19:36 Gero: 04:11:278 (1) - Se te olvido un finish al inicio
19:36 Natsu: se
19:36 Gero: Seria todo, ya puedes actualizar
19:36 Natsu: okie
Topic Starter
thanks gero, I think SukiNathan will check this
omg too fast xd
I'm late. It was only 1diff, but performed mod ;_;
Good luck on Qualified <3
I'm late. It was only 1diff, but performed mod ;_;
SPOILER
[Snow White]
- 01:51:628 (3,4,5,6,1) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. I feel in particular a flow of 01:52:078 (6,1) - here to be suddenly. so You should do mapping similar to the pattern that you used before about 00:41:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this.
- 02:25:828 (3) - I like flows using ctrl+h
- 03:27:478 (5) - Try move x127 y122 ?
- 03:28:228 (1) - I think that a terminal of this slider is here 03:28:678 -
- 03:51:703 (2,3,4,5) - The Stream is a little strange. and add note 03:51:253 - this ?
Good luck on Qualified <3
Wtf so fast
Topic Starter
fixed all, but in first suggestion I prefer my current way and the last one I prefer my stream shape :c
Good luck, Natsu ! It reminds me about the first days I knew Osu, played the same song ))
))qualified
what's that blanca nieves in tags
why not EVERY LANGUAGE EVER :^)
why not EVERY LANGUAGE EVER :^)
lol
Topic Starter
thankssukiNathan wrote:
qualified
what about teaching me every one_Gezo_ wrote:
what's that blanca nieves in tags
why not EVERY LANGUAGE EVER :^)
felicidades
greatz bro!
get rekt snow white
and congratulation Natsu
and congratulation Natsu
gratz
Topic Starter
gorda!Gero wrote:
thankssukiNathan wrote:
qualified
graciasUnderforest wrote:
felicidades
Enon wrote:
greatz bro!
고마워
XD tyKuo Kyoka wrote:
get rekt snow white
and congratulation Natsu
caren!! ty o/caren_sk wrote:
congratz!
thanks~alacat wrote:
gratz
♥
Topic Starter
<3Euny wrote:
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