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MY FIRST STORY - Black Rail

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Feb
das gleiche tbh
Bonsai
sehr wahnsinnig um ehrlich zu sein
Dailycare
[General]
W,why all diff you made has SV 1.0 ahhhah pretty cool xd

[Extreme]
*03:35:423 (3) - What about adding NC?

[Very Insane]
*02:02:482 (3) - add NC?
*02:12:188 (5,6,1) - I think those anti-jumps are little excessive even though it's just a harder diff. It might confuse players. So I suggest making (6) half-stacked on (4), and adjusting notes' position slightly
*03:12:482 (1) - consider making slider's end quiet

[Insane]
*01:57:776 (4) - It would be better to change it to two circles and 1/2 slider
*03:21:820 (5) - What about removing this note even though you heard drum sound? because you didn't put a note here in the highest diff. I just suggest putting a circle at Very Insane diff rather than this diff

[Normal]
*01:32:482 (1,2,3) - Um, it's just a suggestion, what about making them similar as 00:26:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - ?
*02:54:247 (5) - blanket

[Easy]
*01:44:247 - why didn't you set a breaktime here?


diffs which i didn't mentioned = there're no problems imo
sorry for short mod, but it's just fukcing awesome
Feb
very hard to map hard :(
Lully
Froм мy мoddιɴɢ qυeυe


easy
00:33:654 (1) - make this a nice sliderart like 00:28:948 (1) -
00:36:007 (3,4) - try not to overlap thoose
00:53:360 (2,3) - how about something like this? http://puu.sh/pFDem.jpg
02:12:477 - instert break time here


hard colla
00:17:183 (1,2,1,2) - maybe patterns like this? http://puu.sh/pFDNy.jpg
00:32:918 (2) - this slider feels just weird. try another shape pls
01:15:271 (3) - maybe stack with end of 01:14:242 (3) -
01:59:242 (1) - the first curve looks a bit ugly. could be just my eye tho
02:12:477 - circle here?
02:32:036 (4) - same shape as 02:31:595 (2) -


insane
00:39:389 (3,4) - more distance pls
00:49:536 (3,4,5) - all same distance pls
01:43:360 (2) - put this a little bit under 1
02:12:477 - circle here pls

i hope this was helpful ~
/waves

poke me ingame when you need mods for some other maps. c:
Yoges
Heyyy... M4M from my kyuu. I figured I should mod this first because looking at the mappers there might not be anything for me to check by the time you get around to modding my map.

[Easy]
  1. Just two nit picky aesthetic complaints for this diff. 00:24:242 (1,2) - The end of the (1) and the head of the (2) aren't lined up perfectly which just bugs me a little. It doesn't seem to be done on purpose to get any sort of effect either so it just looks a little off.
  2. 03:25:271 (5,6) - These two objects as well could be lined up better, (328,134) for the (6) looks more correct. But yeah other than that the diff looks fine to me.

[Normal]
  1. 00:36:595 (2,3) - That's a bit weird because you haven't switched polarity to prepare the player for the (3) which is on a half. If you ignored the drums and extended the (2) out so that it was a beat long and overlapped it onto the (3) it would play better.
  2. 00:51:301 - You're ignoring a really prominent vocal line which should be clickable. Because it isn't what you're playing disagrees with what you're hearing. Same for 00:51:742 - and 00:52:036 - . Try this?
  3. 01:26:007 (2,3) - Similar to the first suggestion but for different reasons. Like you had rhythms for this in the beginning of the song that worked. 00:20:418 - I don't see much logic behind changing the rhythm. This is a normal, the people playing this will still be relatively new to the game so rhythm consistency would be a better idea opposed to changing it up just for the sake of changing it up when there's no actual change in the song. It might seem to get boring for you but you're overlooking the people who are actually going to be playing this diff. This occurs a couple of times in this section if you do decide to change it.
  4. 01:44:095 (1) - I think just a single note at 01:44:242 - instead of a slider would fit the music better here.
  5. 03:04:168 - I think this was accidental. Did you mean to end the break at 03:04:242 - ?

[Collab Hard]
  1. Increase the stack latency a little? While I have no problem reading the diff for less skilled players, parts like 01:27:477 (6,1) - might appear as if both objects are 1 slider.
  2. 00:51:301 - Ignoring a prominent vocal line. 00:51:154 (1) - The end of that also sounds like it should be clickable. I know you're following the guitar from before but the vocals kind of take over here.
  3. 00:54:830 (1) - End of this feels like it should be clickable, same reasoning as above.
  4. 00:56:791 (3) - Same again
  5. 01:11:301 (1) - Pull the end of this back to 01:11:595 - and add a note at 01:11:742 - . Follows the music better. For the most part you seem to be following the instruments but like near the ends of the chorus the vocals start getting really really prominent and it feels weird to not follow them fully over the rest of the music.

[Insane]
  1. 00:38:360 (1,2) - I can see you're trying to put emphasis on the vocals but the spacing here is just misleading.
  2. 02:03:065 - I don't think that the patterns in this section capture the building up sensation in the music.

[Very Insane]
  1. 00:18:801 (1,2,3) - Spacing is misleading because they're the same as the 1/2 notes. Bunch them up closer maybe? Dehhhh rest of the diff looks fine.

[apple's Expert]
  1. 00:39:536 (1) - I don't think that fits well with the patterns you have. It just kills the motion really which I don't think is appropriate here. Continuing the same short slider pattern would be better imo.

Collab Extra and Extreme seem fine to me.
Dailycare

CookieKivi wrote:

hard colla
01:59:242 (1) - the first curve looks a bit ugly. could be just my eye tho
02:12:477 - circle here? // i'll add it if saut want
02:32:036 (4) - same shape as 02:31:595 (2) -
Thanks for mod >w<

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Feb
hallo

meine q


[so sachen]

finde den rappart immernoch dumm
finde immernoch das du mein bg nehmen solltest
easy endet 03:54:536 (7) - rest auf 03:54:683 - diff übergreifend sollte man es wenn möglich am selben punkt enden lassen. Kannst hier reintheoretisch nen slider platzieren, sodass das kein problem mehr darstellt. Ist zwar nur ne Richtlinie aber meh
würde easy in normal umbenennen und normal in adv hast in normal ziemlich viele stacks benutzt in der kiai was eig eher ausschlaggebend in ner advanced ist. easy würde durchgehen, aber vom namentlichen wäre es dann ne gute idee die easy dann auch in normal umzubenennen. Und die BPM ist ziemlich hoch, also wär das auch ok vom Schwierigkeitsgrad.

sonst alles k

[einfach]

00:41:742 (1) - tbh würde den slider einfach löschen und nen break hier hinhauen, schaut ziemlich random aus und den bereich den du damit auffängst ist nicht zwingend interessant für den spieler.
00:47:771 - hitsound thingy würde das volume bisschen leiser drehen hier oder nen leiseres finish benutzen. Die Finishes sind ziemlich laut im Vergleich zum Song.
00:51:154 (4) - ich hab zwar so ne ahnung was du folgst, finde aber das man den rhythmus noch vereinfachen könnte wie z.B. http://puu.sh/pHVVF/5f09ae9813.jpg
01:12:624 - müsste der slider nicht hier beginnen lel, weil aufm white is doch nur vocal und drum> vocal in ez aber das lied is hier dum deshalb hört sich hier irgendwie alles kacka an
02:12:477 - uhm wie wärs mitn päuschen mb?
02:17:183 (1,2) - dadurch das du mit 1 und 2 die drums fokussierst hört sich der rest bisschen schlecht and weil du da teilweise vocal und dann wieder drums mappst. wie wärs wenn du hier 1x 1/1 reverseslider setzt und nur die drums fokussierst? weil einfacher und so
02:19:536 - ^same und halt beim rest
02:22:183 (2) - 02:24:977 - 02:27:771 - 02:29:683 - 02:31:595 (2) - würd die whistles vom tail nehmen cuz sounds dumm zu den zeitpunkten

dieser rappart ist so dumm >:

sollte ich vorher was gesagt haben das im rest ähnlich passiert, so trifft das da auch zu

[normal]

hallo normal, ja finde die finishes hier auch zu laut, in anderen diffs gehts eig, weil da nicht nur hitnormal vorkommt und dann erstmal 5 sekunden nichts. kp wie ichs erklären soll. IST ZU LAUT !!!!

00:36:742 - hi whistle suckt
00:38:360 - hier break easy aber nicht k >:
00:50:124 (1,2) - finde den rhythmus bisschen schwer zu spielen für nen newb, vllt macht das die dinge bissl einfacher? du coverst ziemlich alles was vorkommt damit also uhhhh ja http://puu.sh/pHXri/f890f0b4ab.jpg
00:56:007 (4) - ein langer reverse slider bis zum nächsten downbeat? also von 00:56:007 - 00:57:183 - würde zum vocal passen und den part bissl einfacher gestalten
01:26:007 (2) - single note? 01:27:330 - machst es hier auch nicht, wobei das ziemlich das gleiche ist und halt dann auch bei den folgenden pattern, die ja im grunde copy paste sind
02:12:624 - würde hier auchn break adden wie halt in easy
02:44:242 (1,2) - whistlespam >:
03:17:183 (1) - wäre ctrl+h nicht besser? ich mein der slider zeigt ja mit dem unteren körper eher nach links also in die entgegengesetzte richtung. Könnte paar anfänger verwirren.
03:21:007 (4,1) - könntest die beiden parallel machen oder so für aesthetics :>
03:50:125 (1,2) - die "kanten" sind ziemlich am rand was den slider edgy macht und möglicherweise hart zu readen für anfänger, da der sliderbody auch ziemlich klein ist.

[hart]

no idea which parts is yours and which ones are dailys so uhhhhh i will do this one in englando

00:56:791 (3) - abit hard to play this one since you have the drumroll on this and the start of the start of the 1/3 snapping, which are different things. maybe use a slider instead of the note?
01:20:124 (3) - they are not quite parallel i thinkkdkdkdkd y i suck
01:20:713 (1) - edgy wave slider >:
01:25:418 (1) - any reason why you start using nc's in the section differently for all every 2 downbeats or so? you use them consistently tho, but im just curious lol
01:53:654 - 1/1 slider fits here better to the vocal imo and later on too.
02:03:065 (1) - the sv change might be too surprising to lower tier players. It's a bit confusing also because of the fact that 02:02:771 (5,1) - almost look a like but the first is 1/2 and the second 1/1 so it makes sense to have less sv change here? or
02:12:477 - no note?
02:38:654 (2) - maybe you could make this more visible to the player? due to the really low slider leniency this is really hard to see imo at this level.
02:44:389 (3) - would extend this one to the blue tick since you kinda represent the vocal in the drum or w/e since the triplet before the downbeat would work too, so extending makes sense to affect the whole vocal too. o ye and delete the whistle from tail.
03:25:271 (1) - you maybe could space this a little bit more of since visually it doesn't look a like the spacings you used between 03:24:536 (2,3) - these objects for example ppl might see this as 1/4 dunno.
03:35:418 (4,5) - would rather see the triplet thing here you did earlier since you never use reverse sliders in the map - like at all - so it makes sense to stick with the stuff you did before.
03:45:124 (3) - i actually think its fine here since its just one reverseslider, but i still think it might be better to use the slider+1/4+slider thing here too.
03:51:301 (1) - you could avoid a bit the overlap i think?
03:53:507 - i think you should add a note here since its quite a strong beat and it's an intense part of the music (even tho its the end).

[wahnsinnig]

00:56:791 (4) - no idea how i feel about this since the drumroll starts at 00:56:889 - not at 00:56:791 - unless im deaf, so ctrl+g this pattern makes more sense to me?
01:30:713 (2) - hoppla vergessen wieder auf deutsch umzusteigen rip - egal, hat mir hier irgendwie geholfen, den stop hier besser zu sehen, wenn ich das hier ctrl+g'd hab.
02:12:477 - hier auch keine note? >:
02:44:757 - würde hier das gleiche machen wie in hard, wahrscheinlich wärs hier sogar angebrachter nen triplet darauszumachen?
03:42:771 (5) - nur um das spacing irgendwie gleich zu halten würde ich das obj hier ctrl+g und imo flowt das auch besser :/
03:46:889 (2,4) - makes sense to unstack them like you did like 03:37:478 (2,4) - here
03:51:742 (2) - 1/1 würde hier besser zum vocal passen, klar würdest hier nen paar jumps verhauen, aber imo lässt sich das in ner light insane besser spielen also jumps die jetzt naja nicht gerade klein sind.

[sehr wahnsinnig]

00:36:742 (4) - du hast die whistle in keiner anderen map, macht sinn die hier auch nicht zu verwenden lol
00:56:693 - also hier ist ja kein sound, wozu man mappen könnte, wodurch der reverse slider auch keinen sinn macht, da ja das ende auf nichts liegt.
01:42:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - die diff wird hier pötzlich verdammt schwerer durch die plötzlichen jump pattern wär vllt gut wenn du 01:42:477 (1,2,3,4) - genauso mappst wie 01:41:889 (1,2) - da es ja im endeffekt das gleiche ist
01:55:713 (1) - was is das fürn nc :oooooo hipster nc
02:12:183 (5,6) - schaut nicht wie 1/4 aus oder so :( rip reading rip me fcing this wär vllt ganz i.O wenn du das nicht nach 2 minuten plötzlich nutzt sondern auch schon vorher oder so xd
02:28:948 (1,2) - keine ahnung ob du die parallel machen wolltest, aber das sind sie nicht :/
02:34:242 (3,4) - hört sich komisch an da du 02:33:654 (1,2) - hier der vocal hier stärker ist und das gleiche auch an der markierten stelle der fall ist, dass heißt du überspringst halt den starken part in der sektion.
02:49:830 (3,4,1) - hier find ich das manual stacken sogar k, weil der part hier viel ruhiger ist und man nicht von einer sekunde auf die andere ein ganz anderes pattern spielen muss, mit viel weniger spacing uhhhhh yyyyy
03:36:007 (1) - wegen sv change hast du hier eig weniger spacing zwischen den noten, wär also angebracht das wenigstens visuell genauso zu spacen wie vorher.

k

[Apfelextra]

hello apple how r u doin
i personally think ar9.2 is enough on your diff aswell, but i guess both r fine.

00:22:330 (2) - you emphasized the vocal before, but this doesn't quite fit imo with the vocal. I tried to use a reverse here and it worked quite well. OR you just do it like 00:31:742 (2) - here for consistency :>
00:36:742 (2) - normal whistle doesn't quite fit with the rest of this section imo and it appears no where else, but in the rappart. You could use a different one or sth like that. duhh
01:43:065 (1) - would help reading this part a bit better, if you nc it like http://puu.sh/pI6DL/9c8ef4b2fc.jpg this one. Well yours works too tho. I mainly suck at reading sooo uhh y
01:53:654 (1,2) - following the jump pattern you did it makes a bit more sense to me to have the slider more to the left? like http://puu.sh/pI6Q9/58f4d94668.jpg this one shows? found the flow here not to be that nice to aim. also i think you could have followed the vocal here a bit better since you have 01:53:801 (2) - this one with the strong vocal 01:54:095 - on slidertail. which makes mit sad i would just make this a bit shorter and ad a note here? But this part is bongo anyway.
02:23:654 (4) - saut mapped this differently therefore the whistle doesn't make much sense to me on the tail here since you don't focus on the vocal here too much anyway i think.
02:30:124 (1) - I think you should emphasize this guitar string here more than 02:31:301 (1,2,3) - this one. I think both are strong, but comparable the guitar thing is much stronger imo than just the rap of the dud
02:36:889 (5,1) - jump is quite huge compared to really strong stuff like 02:35:860 (4,1) - which has quite similar spacing so I'd reduce that a bit.
03:51:742 (2) - like at the start where i suggested you to use reverse here instead, but you did 1/1 there later on so makes snese to use that i guess.

[Fischige Extra]

no idea which part is phisis and which is sauts so i just do both in english
i personally think the ar is to high on this one due to the low cs size which makes the map automatically less dense. Even with AR9 the jumps are easy to read imo.

00:36:742 (4) - that whistle again, prolly copied some old hitsound from saut. yy
01:53:654 (1,2) - i personally think that a reverse represents the vocal a bit better, but thats just a suggestion from my side.
03:18:948 (3) - http://puu.sh/pI9gm/9741834a28.jpg this ncing makes abit more sense to me for reading purposes? its not needed but uuuu y
03:35:712 (1,2,1) - isn't the difference between those kicksliders really low compared to the downbeatslider? i mean its quite far.

k no idea don't find that much here. symphathy for cs5 i guess

[extreme extra]

sehr extrem

01:54:095 (1) - wär vllt gut das zu ncn um die pause zu signalisieren? weil niemals vorher so ne pause gab bisher wäre SCHÖN!! 01:56:448 (3) - selbige
02:02:698 - skippst hier nen teil des drumrolls denke bei so einer hohen diff kannst du da schon alles mappen oder nicht?
03:21:815 - finds nich so toll, dass du hier das triplet skippst für nen recht hohen jump. imo kanns tja den jump behalten, aber wär cool wenn du das triplet hier mappst.

finde die diff halt immer noch recht gut - keine Ahnung was du hast >:

k war ja jetzt ziemlich lang am modden. sorry für lange mod und so

viel glück!
Strategas
Imodpishdiff

[collab ex]

00:18:801 (1,2,3) - holy flow of break

00:35:860 (2) - having to click this feels dumb, like there's no sound there, only continuous sound from 00:35:713 (1) - to 00:35:933 - which a slider would fit better

00:39:830 (3,4) - I don't like them touching :(

00:56:815 (2) - snapping, pretty sure it's 1/3 like the slider

01:08:801 (3,1) - even if you try to emphasize this flow is just too awful lol

01:26:301 (3,1) - stack like 01:26:007 (2,4) - ? or the opposite because I noticed how you stack 01:31:007 (1,1) -

01:43:360 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - kinda baby spacing for such intense stuff, also finish on the slider end wot

01:57:771 (4) - I think it's suppose to end at 01:57:918 - I'm assuming you followed the drums so having additional tick on the vocal end is weird because you didn't start the slider at the vocals themselves

03:09:830 - end slider here? it's a much stronger sound you ignore than the current slider end

03:23:359 (1,2,3) - these don't flow that well tbh

03:53:801 (2,2,2) - uneven :(
Dailycare

Feb wrote:

[hart]
no idea which parts is yours and which ones are dailys so uhhhhh i will do this one in englando

01:53:654 - 1/1 slider fits here better to the vocal imo and later on too. // actually this rhythm followed insane diff, and i think it just followed drum sounds so.. so, yea lol i'll discuss it with Saut
02:03:065 (1) - the sv change might be too surprising to lower tier players. It's a bit confusing also because of the fact that 02:02:771 (5,1) - almost look a like but the first is 1/2 and the second 1/1 so it makes sense to have less sv change here? or // but still idk how i can improve this part ;w;
02:12:477 - no note? // added a circle
02:38:654 (2) - maybe you could make this more visible to the player? due to the really low slider leniency this is really hard to see imo at this level. // um fixed it. but idk whether it would work or not..
02:44:389 (3) - would extend this one to the blue tick since you kinda represent the vocal in the drum or w/e since the triplet before the downbeat would work too, so extending makes sense to affect the whole vocal too. o ye and delete the whistle from tail.
03:25:271 (1) - you maybe could space this a little bit more of since visually it doesn't look a like the spacings you used between 03:24:536 (2,3) - these objects for example ppl might see this as 1/4 dunno.
03:35:418 (4,5) - would rather see the triplet thing here you did earlier since you never use reverse sliders in the map - like at all - so it makes sense to stick with the stuff you did before. // uhh, but i think it's not a big issue TwT many players who have an ability to play hard diffs can distinguish between reverse sliders and normal 1/2 slider
03:45:124 (3) - i actually think its fine here since its just one reverseslider, but i still think it might be better to use the slider+1/4+slider thing here too. // also consider it too ;w; but perhaps i won't fix it..
03:51:301 (1) - you could avoid a bit the overlap i think?
03:53:507 - i think you should add a note here since its quite a strong beat and it's an intense part of the music (even tho its the end).
wo thanks plz feb me

only my part
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Topic Starter
Saut
dailycare

Dailycare wrote:

[General]
W,why all diff you made has SV 1.0 ahhhah pretty cool xd

[Extreme]
*03:35:423 (3) - What about adding NC? yes

[Very Insane]
*02:02:482 (3) - add NC? yes
*02:12:188 (5,6,1) - I think those anti-jumps are little excessive even though it's just a harder diff. It might confuse players. So I suggest making (6) half-stacked on (4), and adjusting notes' position slightly removed the antijumps, tried to make it less ew
*03:12:482 (1) - consider making slider's end quiet but the slider end is quiet :( just like the whole body

[Insane]
*01:57:776 (4) - It would be better to change it to two circles and 1/2 slider tried to follow the drum sound thing he
*03:21:820 (5) - What about removing this note even though you heard drum sound? because you didn't put a note here in the highest diff. I just suggest putting a circle at Very Insane diff rather than this diff yea

[Normal]
*01:32:482 (1,2,3) - Um, it's just a suggestion, what about making them similar as 00:26:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - ? less drums, so no
*02:54:247 (5) - blanket gets me everytimeee

[Easy]
*01:44:247 - why didn't you set a breaktime here? oh


diffs which i didn't mentioned = there're no problems imo
sorry for short mod, but it's just fukcing awesome

cookiekivi

CookieKivi wrote:

Froм мy мoddιɴɢ qυeυe


easy
00:33:654 (1) - make this a nice sliderart like 00:28:948 (1) - well ok yes
00:36:007 (3,4) - try not to overlap thoose i think its not too hard to read tho
00:53:360 (2,3) - how about something like this? http://puu.sh/pFDem.jpg i dont really see why, bc right now it is following the vocal
02:12:477 - instert break time here oh


hard
00:17:183 (1,2,1,2) - maybe patterns like this? http://puu.sh/pFDNy.jpg definitly possible, but i prefere the 1/2 slider things just for the sake of seperating this from the other diffs
00:32:918 (2) - this slider feels just weird. try another shape pls true, tried smth else
01:15:271 (3) - maybe stack with end of 01:14:242 (3) - you are one of the cool kids if you dont stack things
01:59:242 (1) - the first curve looks a bit ugly. could be just my eye tho
02:12:477 - circle here?
02:32:036 (4) - same shape as 02:31:595 (2)


insane
00:39:389 (3,4) - more distance pls i think this fits quite well to the guitars tho
00:49:536 (3,4,5) - all same distance pls yea
01:43:360 (2) - put this a little bit under 1 yea
02:12:477 - circle here pls simply made a kickbackslider, should work

i hope this was helpful ~
/waves

poke me ingame when you need mods for some other maps. c:

yoges

Yoges wrote:

Heyyy... M4M from my kyuu. I figured I should mod this first because looking at the mappers there might not be anything for me to check by the time you get around to modding my map.

[Easy]
  1. Just two nit picky aesthetic complaints for this diff. 00:24:242 (1,2) - The end of the (1) and the head of the (2) aren't lined up perfectly which just bugs me a little. It doesn't seem to be done on purpose to get any sort of effect either so it just looks a little off. because of my retardness i am not able to make all three objects fit in the corner, thats why it is slightly off which shouldnt be a big deal as you already mentioned
  2. 03:25:271 (5,6) - These two objects as well could be lined up better, (328,134) for the (6) looks more correct. But yeah other than that the diff looks fine to me. true, i moved (5) and (6) slightly

[Normal]
  1. 00:36:595 (2,3) - That's a bit weird because you haven't switched polarity to prepare the player for the (3) which is on a half. If you ignored the drums and extended the (2) out so that it was a beat long and overlapped it onto the (3) it would play better. true
  2. 00:51:301 - You're ignoring a really prominent vocal line which should be clickable. Because it isn't what you're playing disagrees with what you're hearing. Same for 00:51:742 - and 00:52:036 - . Try this? this section is kinda tricky, the example you deliver would ignore the strong beat here 00:51:154 - and the following few claps. I agree with the first vocal since its really outstanding but i will ignore the ensuing vocals
  3. 01:26:007 (2,3) - Similar to the first suggestion but for different reasons. Like you had rhythms for this in the beginning of the song that worked. 00:20:418 - I don't see much logic behind changing the rhythm. This is a normal, the people playing this will still be relatively new to the game so rhythm consistency would be a better idea opposed to changing it up just for the sake of changing it up when there's no actual change in the song. It might seem to get boring for you but you're overlooking the people who are actually going to be playing this diff. This occurs a couple of times in this section if you do decide to change it. but there is an actual change in the song. there are way fewer drums and claps. it even sounds weird if i go for the same rhythm :( but 00:19:536 - = 03:36:007 - thats why i picked the exact same rhythm
  4. 01:44:095 (1) - I think just a single note at 01:44:242 - instead of a slider would fit the music better here. i think so too
  5. 03:04:168 - I think this was accidental. Did you mean to end the break at 03:04:242 - ?whoops

[Collab Hard]
  1. Increase the stack latency a little? While I have no problem reading the diff for less skilled players, parts like 01:27:477 (6,1) - might appear as if both objects are 1 slider. makes sense, increased to 5
  2. 00:51:301 - Ignoring a prominent vocal line. 00:51:154 (1) - The end of that also sounds like it should be clickable. I know you're following the guitar from before but the vocals kind of take over here. tried to do something else here
  3. 00:54:830 (1) - End of this feels like it should be clickable, same reasoning as above.
  4. 00:56:791 (3) - Same again
  5. 01:11:301 (1) - Pull the end of this back to 01:11:595 - and add a note at 01:11:742 - . Follows the music better. For the most part you seem to be following the instruments but like near the ends of the chorus the vocals start getting really really prominent and it feels weird to not follow them fully over the rest of the music.

[Insane]
  1. 00:38:360 (1,2) - I can see you're trying to put emphasis on the vocals but the spacing here is just misleading. im actually following the guitar sounds, and i think the low ds fits quite well here
  2. 02:03:065 - I don't think that the patterns in this section capture the building up sensation in the music. so true

[Very Insane]
  1. 00:18:801 (1,2,3) - Spacing is misleading because they're the same as the 1/2 notes. Bunch them up closer maybe? Dehhhh rest of the diff looks fine. i increased the spacing of the first few objects instead

[apple's Expert]
  1. 00:39:536 (1) - I don't think that fits well with the patterns you have. It just kills the motion really which I don't think is appropriate here. Continuing the same short slider pattern would be better imo.

Collab Extra and Extreme seem fine to me.

feb

Feb wrote:

hallo

meine q


[so sachen]

finde den rappart immernoch dumm hey, ich auch
finde immernoch das du mein bg nehmen solltest hey, ich nicht
easy endet 03:54:536 (7) - rest auf 03:54:683 - diff übergreifend sollte man es wenn möglich am selben punkt enden lassen. Kannst hier reintheoretisch nen slider platzieren, sodass das kein problem mehr darstellt. Ist zwar nur ne Richtlinie aber meh stimmt, habe aus dem letzten circle einen slider gemacht
würde easy in normal umbenennen und normal in adv hast in normal ziemlich viele stacks benutzt in der kiai was eig eher ausschlaggebend in ner advanced ist. easy würde durchgehen, aber vom namentlichen wäre es dann ne gute idee die easy dann auch in normal umzubenennen. Und die BPM ist ziemlich hoch, also wär das auch ok vom Schwierigkeitsgrad. da der rhythmus aber so simple ist, denke ich dass es noch locker als normal durchgeht. Die überlappungen sind auch immer so gewählt, dass es einfach ist den slidern zu folgen.

sonst alles k

[einfach]

00:41:742 (1) - tbh würde den slider einfach löschen und nen break hier hinhauen, schaut ziemlich random aus und den bereich den du damit auffängst ist nicht zwingend interessant für den spieler. stimmt
00:47:771 - hitsound thingy würde das volume bisschen leiser drehen hier oder nen leiseres finish benutzen. Die Finishes sind ziemlich laut im Vergleich zum Song. macht schon sinn
00:51:154 (4) - ich hab zwar so ne ahnung was du folgst, finde aber das man den rhythmus noch vereinfachen könnte wie z.B. http://puu.sh/pHVVF/5f09ae9813.jpg joa
01:12:624 - müsste der slider nicht hier beginnen lel, weil aufm white is doch nur vocal und drum> vocal in ez aber das lied is hier dum deshalb hört sich hier irgendwie alles kacka an beides hört sich bescheuert an, finde aber dass es leichter ist den vocals hier zu folgen
02:12:477 - uhm wie wärs mitn päuschen mb? eee
02:17:183 (1,2) - dadurch das du mit 1 und 2 die drums fokussierst hört sich der rest bisschen schlecht and weil du da teilweise vocal und dann wieder drums mappst. wie wärs wenn du hier 1x 1/1 reverseslider setzt und nur die drums fokussierst? weil einfacher und so bin leicht verwirrt, weil ich nicht ganz verstehe was du meinst. In dem part hab ich nämlich keine drums übersprungen D: Folge hier den instrumentals und nicht wirklich den vocals
02:19:536 - ^same und halt beim rest
02:22:183 (2) - 02:24:977 - 02:27:771 - 02:29:683 - 02:31:595 (2) - würd die whistles vom tail nehmen cuz sounds dumm zu den zeitpunkten

dieser rappart ist so dumm >:

sollte ich vorher was gesagt haben das im rest ähnlich passiert, so trifft das da auch zu

[normal]

hallo normal, ja finde die finishes hier auch zu laut, in anderen diffs gehts eig, weil da nicht nur hitnormal vorkommt und dann erstmal 5 sekunden nichts. kp wie ichs erklären soll. IST ZU LAUT !!!! sind hier inordnung, da du zumindest durchgehend hitsounds hast und nicht alle 2 take

00:36:742 - hi whistle suckt höre hier keine lol
00:38:360 - hier break easy aber nicht k >: ez hat jetzt ne pause
00:50:124 (1,2) - finde den rhythmus bisschen schwer zu spielen für nen newb, vllt macht das die dinge bissl einfacher? du coverst ziemlich alles was vorkommt damit also uhhhh ja http://puu.sh/pHXri/f890f0b4ab.jpg schon geändert wegen yoges
00:56:007 (4) - ein langer reverse slider bis zum nächsten downbeat? also von 00:56:007 - 00:57:183 - würde zum vocal passen und den part bissl einfacher gestalten würde eigentlich sagen dass es die intensität rausnimmt, aber verdammt das passt so gut zu dem lang gestreckten vocal -> reverse jetzt
01:26:007 (2) - single note? 01:27:330 - machst es hier auch nicht, wobei das ziemlich das gleiche ist und halt dann auch bei den folgenden pattern, die ja im grunde copy paste sind hört sich aber so daneben an, behalte die 1/2 dinger lieber
02:12:624 - würde hier auchn break adden wie halt in easy
02:44:242 (1,2) - whistlespam >:
03:17:183 (1) - wäre ctrl+h nicht besser? ich mein der slider zeigt ja mit dem unteren körper eher nach links also in die entgegengesetzte richtung. Könnte paar anfänger verwirren. passt aber so gut zum anfang der kiaiii
03:21:007 (4,1) - könntest die beiden parallel machen oder so für aesthetics :> so wie es eigentlich geplant war haha
03:50:125 (1,2) - die "kanten" sind ziemlich am rand was den slider edgy macht und möglicherweise hart zu readen für anfänger, da der sliderbody auch ziemlich klein ist. weniger edgy nun

[hart]

no idea which parts is yours and which ones are dailys so uhhhhh i will do this one in englando

00:56:791 (3) - abit hard to play this one since you have the drumroll on this and the start of the start of the 1/3 snapping, which are different things. maybe use a slider instead of the note? circle (2) ist wie gewohnt auf nem white tick und da darauf ein slider folgt sollten hier auch keine random 100er enstehen
01:20:124 (3) - they are not quite parallel i thinkkdkdkdkd y i suck sind sie. u suck
01:20:713 (1) - edgy wave slider >: wer definiert schöne slider

[wahnsinnig]

00:56:791 (4) - no idea how i feel about this since the drumroll starts at 00:56:889 - not at 00:56:791 - unless im deaf, so ctrl+g this pattern makes more sense to me? u r deaf, da ist noch ein clap 1/3 davor
01:30:713 (2) - hoppla vergessen wieder auf deutsch umzusteigen rip - egal, hat mir hier irgendwie geholfen, den stop hier besser zu sehen, wenn ich das hier ctrl+g'd hab. würde aber meine selbst aufgestellten regeln für den part brechen
02:12:477 - hier auch keine note? >: eeeee doch nun
02:44:757 - würde hier das gleiche machen wie in hard, wahrscheinlich wärs hier sogar angebrachter nen triplet darauszumachen? beides ist k, finde den jump hier etwas cooler
03:42:771 (5) - nur um das spacing irgendwie gleich zu halten würde ich das obj hier ctrl+g und imo flowt das auch besser :/ (5) -> (1) wird eww
03:46:889 (2,4) - makes sense to unstack them like you did like 03:37:478 (2,4) - here true
03:51:742 (2) - 1/1 würde hier besser zum vocal passen, klar würdest hier nen paar jumps verhauen, aber imo lässt sich das in ner light insane besser spielen also jumps die jetzt naja nicht gerade klein sind.

[sehr wahnsinnig]

00:36:742 (4) - du hast die whistle in keiner anderen map, macht sinn die hier auch nicht zu verwenden lol oh
00:56:693 - also hier ist ja kein sound, wozu man mappen könnte, wodurch der reverse slider auch keinen sinn macht, da ja das ende auf nichts liegt. oh
01:42:477 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - die diff wird hier pötzlich verdammt schwerer durch die plötzlichen jump pattern wär vllt gut wenn du 01:42:477 (1,2,3,4) - genauso mappst wie 01:41:889 (1,2) - da es ja im endeffekt das gleiche ist aeja ja
01:55:713 (1) - was is das fürn nc :oooooo hipster nc hoppala der sollte hier hin 01:55:565 -
02:12:183 (5,6) - schaut nicht wie 1/4 aus oder so :( rip reading rip me fcing this wär vllt ganz i.O wenn du das nicht nach 2 minuten plötzlich nutzt sondern auch schon vorher oder so xd hab mich schon 2x selbst verarscht hier. mache das weg
02:28:948 (1,2) - keine ahnung ob du die parallel machen wolltest, aber das sind sie nicht :/ sie sind es, wtf
02:34:242 (3,4) - hört sich komisch an da du 02:33:654 (1,2) - hier der vocal hier stärker ist und das gleiche auch an der markierten stelle der fall ist, dass heißt du überspringst halt den starken part in der sektion. den punkt müsstest du mir nochmal erklären
02:49:830 (3,4,1) - hier find ich das manual stacken sogar k, weil der part hier viel ruhiger ist und man nicht von einer sekunde auf die andere ein ganz anderes pattern spielen muss, mit viel weniger spacing uhhhhh yyyyy
03:36:007 (1) - wegen sv change hast du hier eig weniger spacing zwischen den noten, wär also angebracht das wenigstens visuell genauso zu spacen wie vorher. oh

k

[Apfelextra]

hello apple how r u doin
i personally think ar9.2 is enough on your diff aswell, but i guess both r fine.

00:22:330 (2) - you emphasized the vocal before, but this doesn't quite fit imo with the vocal. I tried to use a reverse here and it worked quite well. OR you just do it like 00:31:742 (2) - here for consistency :>
00:36:742 (2) - normal whistle doesn't quite fit with the rest of this section imo and it appears no where else, but in the rappart. You could use a different one or sth like that. duhh
01:43:065 (1) - would help reading this part a bit better, if you nc it like http://puu.sh/pI6DL/9c8ef4b2fc.jpg this one. Well yours works too tho. I mainly suck at reading sooo uhh y
01:53:654 (1,2) - following the jump pattern you did it makes a bit more sense to me to have the slider more to the left? like http://puu.sh/pI6Q9/58f4d94668.jpg this one shows? found the flow here not to be that nice to aim. also i think you could have followed the vocal here a bit better since you have 01:53:801 (2) - this one with the strong vocal 01:54:095 - on slidertail. which makes mit sad i would just make this a bit shorter and ad a note here? But this part is bongo anyway.
02:23:654 (4) - saut mapped this differently therefore the whistle doesn't make much sense to me on the tail here since you don't focus on the vocal here too much anyway i think.
02:30:124 (1) - I think you should emphasize this guitar string here more than 02:31:301 (1,2,3) - this one. I think both are strong, but comparable the guitar thing is much stronger imo than just the rap of the dud
02:36:889 (5,1) - jump is quite huge compared to really strong stuff like 02:35:860 (4,1) - which has quite similar spacing so I'd reduce that a bit.
03:51:742 (2) - like at the start where i suggested you to use reverse here instead, but you did 1/1 there later on so makes snese to use that i guess.

[Fischige Extra]

no idea which part is phisis and which is sauts so i just do both in english
i personally think the ar is to high on this one due to the low cs size which makes the map automatically less dense. Even with AR9 the jumps are easy to read imo.

00:36:742 (4) - that whistle again, prolly copied some old hitsound from saut. yy das war ich heehe
01:53:654 (1,2) - i personally think that a reverse represents the vocal a bit better, but thats just a suggestion from my side. stimmt wirklich, wat
03:18:948 (3) - http://puu.sh/pI9gm/9741834a28.jpg this ncing makes abit more sense to me for reading purposes? its not neede d but uuuu y beides ok, lasse es so weil consistency
03:35:712 (1,2,1) - isn't the difference between those kicksliders really low compared to the downbeatslider? i mean its quite far. sieht viel schlimmer aus als es ingame ist

k no idea don't find that much here. symphathy for cs5 i guess

[extreme extra]

sehr extrem

01:54:095 (1) - wär vllt gut das zu ncn um die pause zu signalisieren? weil niemals vorher so ne pause gab bisher wäre SCHÖN!! 01:56:448 (3) - selbige joa
02:02:698 - skippst hier nen teil des drumrolls denke bei so einer hohen diff kannst du da schon alles mappen oder nicht? habe es versucht zu mappen, war aber blöd also hab ich es weggelassen. Habs erneut versucht, hoffentlich ist es jetzt ok
03:21:815 - finds nich so toll, dass du hier das triplet skippst für nen recht hohen jump. imo kanns tja den jump behalten, aber wär cool wenn du das triplet hier mappst. hab da was versucht

finde die diff halt immer noch recht gut - keine Ahnung was du hast >: ich ja eig auch B-)

k war ja jetzt ziemlich lang am modden. sorry für lange mod und so

viel glück!

thankss
Milan-
bubbling

Topic Starter
Saut
bn where
Squichu
Sorry for the delay.. >o< I was busy chasing eevees.. XD

General - is xy.png used anywhere?

Easy - perfectly fine, just some small suggestions--
01:07:477 (3,4,5) - consider different shape for (4) to smoothen movement a bit? http://puu.sh/q0Khu.jpg
02:33:654 (4) - and 02:38:360 (5) - consider adding NCs here so combos won't get too long? (if changed, change 02:43:065 (5) - too for consistency?)
03:21:889 (1,2,3) - I like this, but could be very confusing for beginners, because (2,3) are visible at the same time.. consider re-arranging this. ( http://puu.sh/q0KE1.jpg and http://puu.sh/q0KHV.jpg )

Normal - 01:32:477 (1) - try to avoid overlap with default HP bar? otherwise neat diff! uvu

Collab Hard / Insane / Very Insane / apple's Expert- clear!
well I could make some super small nitpicky suggestions cause of personal preferances, but honestly, these diffs look perfectly fine to me.

I'm kinda tired, so I'll check the rest tomorrow. Sorry for taking so long. >-<
why are there two extremes now? xD
Dailycare
where's mini mod???????? plz give me kds

00:25:860 (3,4) - what about this?
00:26:301 (5) - move it to (219, 145)
00:28:213 (1,2) - hope you decrease the spacing between them as 03:44:684 (1,2) -
01:44:095 (1) - stretch it slightly
01:55:271 (1,2,3,4) - that linear flow looks awesome, but i felt a bit awkward when i played. what about something like zigzag?
02:30:565 (4) - it sounds little strange.. well, i think 1/2 is more better. but i guess it's not a big issue
02:31:889 (3) - move it to (212, 41). it would be nice :p
02:39:977 (4,5) - it's more nice stacking them rather than manual stacking
02:44:242 (1) - can you increase the spacing?
03:13:360 (1) - um, seems little ugly lol. i think you can improve the slider's shape (also it's up to you whether you fix it or not)
Topic Starter
Saut
yes to everything except

02:30:565 (4) - it sounds little strange.. well, i think 1/2 is more better. but i guess it's not a big issue i think it sounds ok tho
03:13:360 (1) - um, seems little ugly lol. i think you can improve the slider's shape (also it's up to you whether you fix it or not) my slider is beautiful B-(

!!thanks!!
Squichu
yay!
Topic Starter
Saut
!!
Meyrink
o already bubbled ! im so late, was afk from the game
u can ask me for mod in other map o/
Nozhomi
If you care about greenlines you can remove some on lower diffs.

Easy :
02:36:297 - Feels too weird to skip this one, and you already did this kind of rhythm before (00:26:590 (3,4) - ) so why not now to fit more the song ?
Also consider putting more NCs, like every 2 white tics. Right now you have bigger combo than in Normal and that's quite weird.

Normal :
00:52:473 (1,2) - Wrong spacing.
01:12:179 (3,4) - You could eventually blanket these, but as you wish.
02:27:179 (1,2) - Check stacks, some are...yeah really on the edge ^^
02:37:767 (4) - Could it be less curved ? Would look better and do a better transition to 02:38:356 (1) - .

Collab Hard :
00:38:356 (2) - Could you use the same spacing than before the SV change ? It feels weird to suddenly have a lower one, or stack it with 00:37:767 (1) - .
00:56:787 (3) - Please no there is no way for player to know it's an 1/3 rhythm here, and 00:56:738 - this beat feels better to start the slider.

Insane :
03:06:297 (2,2) - Could you avoid to cover reverse arrow here with sliders and score ?

Very Insane :
00:49:238 (2,3,4) - I would use same spacing for them (just move 00:49:385 (3) - at 128:312).

Mukyu~
Topic Starter
Saut

Nozhomi wrote:

If you care about greenlines you can remove some on lower diffs. psst i dont
Easy :
02:36:297 - Feels too weird to skip this one, and you already did this kind of rhythm before (00:26:590 (3,4) - ) so why not now to fit more the song ?
Also consider putting more NCs, like every 2 white tics. Right now you have bigger combo than in Normal and that's quite weird. wouldnt this also apply to 02:37:473 - 02:36:885 - 02:38:650 - ..? i think the most important vocals in a conistent way is fine tho. Also im not a fan of 2combo pattern he
everything else
yes

thank you
HabiHolic
Gooooooooooooooo
Nozhomi
Go my way~
HabiHolic
Congratz!!!!!
Agatsu
Congrats!
Topic Starter
Saut
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