CelsiusLK wrote:
[normal]
- 00:25:139 (1) - feel pretty to just switch to vocal only for this beat here the others rhythm all follow instrument consistently , i think this make the rhythm play awkward , maybe try this rhythm instead ?
- 00:30:472 (1) - same Fixed both
- 01:05:139 (1) - slider shape here can be a bit tricky for player at this level imo , would be better to try to make the sliderpath a bit more clear Reshaped
- 01:21:971 (2) - use same shape as 01:21:305 (1) - for better aesthetic consistency ? Did something similiar
Fixed all, also nerf some 1/2 beat into something easier and change CS into 3.5Sonnyc wrote:
Normal.
-- The combo cycle was really short imo. Since the cycle was only 1 full measure, it contains only 3 or 2, even 1 object in one combo and that felt too less. Every end of the combo gives an extra hp gain for the player, and having such short combo isn't normally recommended. Consider increasing the combo cycle to 2 full measures. Fixed
00:15:805 - 01:15:805 - 01:26:472 - There is a strong sound here. Since you are oftenly using 1/2 rhythms, I think you could've consider expressing it. Tried to be more consistent lol
00:55:139 (2,3) - Uh the placement being vertical didn't seemed to be fitting along this mapping and the flow imo. Ok
SPOILER
Thanks mod osu file format v14
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