Hard
00:06:956 (2) - Is this note supposed to be here? I don't hear any sound at this point.
00:12:282 (5,7) - If you map this on 1/4. Shouldn't these sliders end a tick earlier? Like, they should end on the red tick, not the blue one. And most of the times you don't end sliders on blue tick. You can reduce the length of the sliders and put a note in between. Whatever you see fit
00:16:630 (1) - same problem
00:22:173 (2) - ehmm. Sorry but this doesn't work here
. Either you make it 2 notes or one sliders start from here 00:22:282 - and end at 00:22:499 -
00:23:043 (5) - ^
00:29:564 - There is no sound for this note here but you can try to convince other modders
00:30:543 (1) - end on red tick
00:35:651 (4) - This (4) should be deleted. As for 00:35:433 (2) - , I think this can be kept... for now.
00:37:499 (1,2,3,4) - Reconsider this, if it's better to end these on red tick.
00:42:717 (1) - no sound
00:42:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Somehow, this doesn't ''sound'' fit
That's probably it for the sound issues. About the flow like here
00:34:456 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1) -
sudden change in speed, is not really recommended to see in Hard. This is more like Light Insane style to me.
Normal
Now this is more like hard. All of these are overlapped. Which can lead your map to the graveyard and are not welcome in Normal diff at all. AR on normal most of the time is 5, not 6.00:36:630 (3,4,5) -
00:05:325 (3,4,5,6) -
00:15:977 (4,5,6,1) -
00:17:499 (3,4,5,6) -
00:20:977 (3,4,5,6) -
00:26:195 (3,4,5,6) -
00:29:673 (3,4,5,6) -
00:31:412 (1,2,3,4) -
00:33:151 (3,4,1) -
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00:16:630 (1) -
00:06:195 (1) -
00:07:934 (1,2,3,4) - Use 1/2
00:12:282 (3,5) -
00:14:891 (1) -
00:14:891 (1) -
00:16:630 (1) -
00:22:173 (2) -
00:20:108 (1) -
00:23:043 (2) -
00:26:195 (3) -
00:27:064 (5) -
00:28:804 (1) -
And many many more. End these on red tick.
You might need to remap this. Sorry
Easy
AR3 please. Wow, you put everything one notch higher xD
00:23:369 (1,2,3,4) - nope, not happenning in Easy
In easy, you have to leave more space for rest. New players definitely can't pass this. 00:32:282 (1,2,3,4) - No tricky patterns in easy.
Insane
What can I say about this... It's quite ok for an Insane, just that, some spacing are too big. No wonder Yoratama couldn't pass this. And the flows, the beats are not very well done as well.