General
- Your background picture is unrankable, find a BG size that is 1366x768 or 1024x768
- Other seems fine
Easy
- OD is too high, make it OD 2
- Why there are unsnapped green lines? and DS is too high, try 1.00x instead might be look compressed but it's much easier to read for new players
- 00:01:927 (2) - Ctrl+J?
- 00:03:056 (1) - Don't use 1/2 beats on easy, suggesting make this a circle only
- 00:00:798 (1,1) - Overlap is noticeable and looks bad
- 00:03:378 (2,3) - Put gap on this, this is not normal for you to put objects on red ticks
- 00:03:862 (3,4) - Put on DS and fix this
- 00:22:088 (2) - Put clap on tail
- 00:22:733 (3) - ^
- 00:23:701 (5) - Put clap
- 00:25:152 (2) - Most of the people don't like this kind of slider shaped, mostly they prefer curvy slider shapes than angled
- 00:27:894 (3) - Just put circle here instead of 1/2. doesn't make a real sensa because this is easy then why making such complex beats, I;m not saying that they can't read this but you need to make things understandable for a new player
- 00:30:475 (3) - ^
- 00:31:765 (1,2,3,4,5) - why sudden switch to vocals?
- 00:44:991 (6) - NC
- 00:48:539 (3,5) - Nearly overlapping
- 01:15:636 (1,2) - Use DS please
- 01:26:927 (2,4) - Overlap loks bad
Normal
- Make OD and HP 4 and also DS is also a must in normals
- Why 1.20x SV o.o? 1.00x is enough
- Looks like you misunderstand the purpose of the normal diff, you put so much complex beats and never used DS constantly, I can't give opinion about beats because it's really complicated, I'm not here to teach mapping but you better look other maps to see how they map normals.
Hard
I guess that's all! You need to work more in your structures and choice of beats, I didn't mod this to pull you down, all of those are just opinion, mapping was never easy all you need is to get some tips from other mappers and learn from yourself. Goodluck!- 00:03:217 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 00:03:378 (2) -
- 00:29:668 (3) - Place on 00:28:539 (7) - Head?
- 00:50:475 (1) - I don't understand why you suddenly put spinner here
- 01:28:217 (7,8) - Stack?