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Lia - Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. -

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Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lanturn
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on November 2, 2016 at 5:18:49 PM

Artist: Lia
Title: Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. -
Source: CLANNAD AFTER STORY
Tags: wo Maeda Jun Key Sounds Label TORCH 麻枝准 OP Opening Size クラナド アフターストーリー Yohanes pkhg Doyak yaldo_27
BPM: 140
Filesize: 21048kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Doyak's Nagisa-Insane (3.83 stars, 250 notes)
  2. Kotomi-Hard (2.35 stars, 178 notes)
  3. pkhg's Fuuko-Light Insane (2.97 stars, 192 notes)
  4. Tomoya-Normal (1.75 stars, 141 notes)
  5. Tomoyo-Insane (3.78 stars, 254 notes)
  6. Ushio-Easy (1.54 stars, 82 notes)
  7. Yohanes' Kyou-Insane (3.59 stars, 233 notes)
Download: Lia - Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. -
Download: Lia - Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. - (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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GD's by pkhg, Yohanes, and Doyak

Did you cry?
Last edited by Lanturn , edited 41 times in total.
missa1912
512 posts
Joined July 2015
missa1912
Hi! from #modreq, Lia ♥

General

• Disable countdown, Letterbox and Widescreen Support
• Beside the 2 first timing points the other ones are pretty much useless

• Yohanes' Insane doesnt have video bg

Ultra Beginner

• plz nerf https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5285020

Miracle

00:18:788 (10) - NC and remove NC on 00:19:219 (1) -
00:44:254 (6) - NC on this looks better imo
00:47:708 (6) - ^
00:58:067 (7) - ^
01:01:521 (6) - ^
01:08:427 (6) - ^
01:25:691 - i think here should be a circle (vocal), and after that the spinner
I hope a could help, and gl :D
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lanturn
Fixed the widescreen stuff.

Timing should be correct as is. The 5/4 is important to the end. The other map set does this as well.

Added video

Changed first nc. The others were fine.

The last note is subjective and imo I wanted to leave it in groups of 5 so I used a spinner there instead.


Beginner too hard ;-; I'll nerf later.

Thanks.bupdating shortly.

Sent from my iPhone.
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
miracuru
Lefia
674 posts
Joined August 2014
Lefia
Hey from my queue
mod
[Ultra beginner]

nerf it.

[Normal]

00:20:946 (5) move it into x:148 y:312 (to make triangle)
00:28:284 (1) ctrl + h
00:41:665 (1) ctrl + j
00:59:578 (2) how about you use this slider's shape? ( at 01:00:441 )

[Yohanes' Insane]

00:05:299 (3) ctrl + g
00:47:276 (2) ctrl + g
00:49:866 try smth like this



[Miracle]

AR > 9 ( 8 is too slow i think )

GL~
Otau Oto
10 posts
Joined March 2016
Otau Oto
Very gewd.
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lanturn
Thanks for the mod. Keeping ar8 Because low BPM and SR. Will nerf ultra Beginner someday.

Will reply to normal as soon as I can get online. Ty
Yohanes
1,283 posts
Joined February 2014
Yohanes
@MadaoX : no change sorry, I like my flow better ;; thanks anyway
@Lanturn : I increased the spacing on the last section, so it don't felt as cramped as before

i cri
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: CAS.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40694
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. -
TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Yohanes' Insane
Source:CLANNAD AFTER STORY
Tags:wo Maeda Jun Key Sounds Label TORCH 麻枝准 OP Opening Size クラナド アフターストーリ Yohanes
BeatmapID:986228
BeatmapSetID:438531

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"CAS.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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2299,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
16630,431.654676258993,3,2,1,60,1,0
41665,431.654676258993,4,2,1,70,1,1
68427,-100,3,2,1,40,0,1
69290,431.654676258993,5,2,1,50,1,0
78138,431.654676258993,5,2,1,50,1,0
88283,-100,3,2,1,15,0,0


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Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lanturn

MadaoX wrote:

[Normal]

00:20:946 (5) move it into x:148 y:312 (to make triangle) This ruins the DS of the upcoming notes, and makes it difficult to adjust for. Gonna leave as is, thanks though!
00:28:284 (1) ctrl + h I personally prefer as is.
00:41:665 (1) ctrl + j Changed this, Actually looks good.
00:59:578 (2) how about you use this slider's shape? ( at 01:00:441 ) This whole section (second half of kiai) uses different slider shapes than the upcoming or previous, so they're always alternating.

Thanks MadaoX.

Updated.
Chalwa
1,105 posts
Joined August 2014
Chalwa
Hello! o/
M4M from your queue!
Beginner
00:43:391 (2) - I think Ctrl + J looks better!
00:46:844 (2) - ^
00:48:571 (1) - Move red point to x:173 y:316 and make bigger curve
00:50:298 (2) - ^ (Red point to x:339 y:299)
Easy
00:17:924 (2) - Move this a bit down, cause it looks old
00:19:219 (3,4) - Blanket this?
00:20:514 (5,6) - ^ and move a bit to left/right (what do you want)
00:25:263 (5) - NC
00:27:853 (8) - ^
00:28:284 (1) - Remove NC
00:43:391 (2,3) - Improve blanket
00:45:118 (1,2) - In my opinion 1/2 clicks are too hard to Easy diff
00:58:931 (1,2) - ^
Normal
00:08:299 (6) - Ctrl + J?
00:26:558 (5) - Move to x:37 y:135
00:28:284 (1) - Ctrl + H looks much better
00:38:428 (4) - Overmapped
00:56:125 (2) - Ctrl + J looks better imo
01:01:521 (6,1) - R.I.P Blanket
Hard
00:11:299 (6,7) - Blanket this
00:24:399 (6) - Ctrl + J
00:38:428 (5) - The same as Normal
00:52:024 (1,2,3) - Imo you can blanket it
00:54:614 (6) - NC?
00:56:772 (3,4) - Blanket?
01:03:679 (3,4) - Improve blanket

END!
Nice map, but I saw you have got little blankets ;).
GOOD LUCK!
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lanturn
Thank you, will reply after I'm done modding the other stuff today. Yours is next. :)
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lanturn

Chalwa wrote:

Hello! o/
M4M from your queue!
Beginner
00:43:391 (2) - I think Ctrl + J looks better! Prefer with current curve.
00:46:844 (2) - ^
00:48:571 (1) - Move red point to x:173 y:316 and make bigger curve I want it to bounce off the vocals.
00:50:298 (2) - ^ (Red point to x:339 y:299) Symmetry off the last one, even if it doesn't follow any vocals.
Easy
00:17:924 (2) - Move this a bit down, cause it looks old I changed this around to match the whistles. not sure what you mean by old though.
00:19:219 (3,4) - Blanket this? Nothing to blanket? X_X
00:20:514 (5,6) - ^ and move a bit to left/right (what do you want) prefer as is.
00:25:263 (5) - NC
00:27:853 (8) - ^
00:28:284 (1) - Remove NC Keeping my NCs as is. thanks though.
00:43:391 (2,3) - Improve blanket Done, and the other one at halfway in the kiai as well.
00:45:118 (1,2) - In my opinion 1/2 clicks are too hard to Easy diff Not at this bpm. Plus there are easier difficulties if it's too hard for some.
00:58:931 (1,2) - ^
Normal
00:08:299 (6) - Ctrl + J? prefer to keep as is.
00:26:558 (5) - Move to x:37 y:135 Breaks DS.
00:28:284 (1) - Ctrl + H looks much better prefer as is.
00:38:428 (4) - Overmapped Mapped to the ru vocals.
00:56:125 (2) - Ctrl + J looks better imo Prefer current way.
01:01:521 (6,1) - R.I.P Blanket Fixed
Hard
00:11:299 (6,7) - Blanket thisDoesn't need to imo.
00:24:399 (6) - Ctrl + J Keeping as is.
00:38:428 (5) - The same as Normal Hits a vocal.
00:52:024 (1,2,3) - Imo you can blanket it Fine as symmetry.
00:54:614 (6) - NC? These combos are all long.
00:56:772 (3,4) - Blanket? No need to.
01:03:679 (3,4) - Improve blanket It's fine as is.

END!
Nice map, but I saw you have got little blankets ;).
GOOD LUCK!
Thanks for the mod!
Doyak
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Doyak
I'm finally done! Please copy the hitsound from your diff, and rename the diff as you want.

Doyak's Insane
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TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
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Creator:Lanturn
Version:Doyak's Insane
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Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
normal mod from queue.

[Ultra Beginner]
ultra? not light? 0 0

[Normal]
01:17:275 (4) - suggest to change it in another way, because the music has obviously changed.
for example,
http://puu.sh/pJKgA/64c0b51f43.jpg

[Hard]
00:54:075 - what about mapping this drum? because you mapped - 00:54:938 (8) - .

good luck
Lanturn
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3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lanturn

Lily Bread wrote:

normal mod from queue.

[Ultra Beginner]
ultra? not light? 0 0 Either or would work. Just going to leave as Ultra for now.

[Normal]
01:17:275 (4) - suggest to change it in another way, because the music has obviously changed. This actually follows the chimes quite nicely and maintains some consistency. I personally prefer it how it is.
for example,
http://puu.sh/pJKgA/64c0b51f43.jpg

[Hard]
00:54:075 - what about mapping this drum? because you mapped - 00:54:938 (8) - . 00:54:938 (8) - is actually a pretty powerful drum if you listen without the note, while the one you suggested isn't that strong. I would have to map a lot more triples in this section if I used this, which in a Hard, I don't want to.

good luck
Thanks for the mod.
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
ProfessionalBox
Hello Lanturn! M4M from my que


Doyak's Insane

  1. 00:02:299 (1,2) - This is my personal opinion but I'd make this a curved slider for variety and it would fit here in my opinion
    Picture
  2. 00:14:299 - 00:16:441 - A spinner here would be really fitting, highly recommend you add one
  3. 00:45:765 (3,4) - This blanket can be improved for sure
  4. 00:45:765 (3,1) - Stack properly
  5. 01:07:995 (1) - Unnecessary NC


Insane

  1. 00:03:156 (3) - The blanket here is a bit off
  2. 00:05:727 (1) - I think adding more curve on this would make the 00:06:370 (2,3) - placements look better since they get some of that blanket action ;)
  3. 00:13:227 (2,4) - Now I don't intend for this to be a blanket mod but I think this would work nicely
    Example
  4. 00:46:629 (4,5) - Maybe add more distance between these 2 since it would make them look better imo :p
  5. 00:46:629 (4,6) - I personally don't like this overlap that much but I could see why it'd be hard to avoid
  6. 01:07:132 (3,4,5) - Maybe try this? It would look a bit better
    Example
  7. 01:17:707 (5) - Perhaps make this a slider that ends at 01:18:030 - ? It would capture the vocals better unless you are going for a small breather for the players here
  8. 01:25:691 - This should be a clickable beat imo. You could make the spinner start right after it
  9. 01:25:691 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:28:389 - imo. If you agree then make sure it is changed for all diffs that have this spinner on them, I didn't point them out specifically since you are in charge of this decision imo.


Yohanes' insane

  1. 00:05:299 (3,1) - This blanket is off by quite a bit,consider making it look better
  2. 00:16:656 (1) - Unsnapped slider!
  3. 00:20:514 (2,3) - This blanket can be improved aswell :p
  4. 00:40:802 (1,2) - This spacing is inconsistent with 00:41:234 (2,3) - and is therefore confusing
  5. 00:42:528 (7,2) - These aren't properly stacked
  6. 01:02:384 (1,2) - Same here! Make sure these are stacked properly aswell after the fix 01:03:031 (2,2) -


Fuuko's Light Insane

  1. 00:08:299 (5,1) - This overlap is a bit confusing for the players of this difficulty to read. I suggest you come up with something else for this
  2. 00:18:356 (5,8) - Stack properly
  3. 00:45:765 (2,4) - Same here
  4. 01:01:952 (4,1) - ^
  5. 01:02:168 (5,2,4) - ^
  6. 01:04:974 (7,1) - I like the idea of this overlap aswell but it is a bit too confusing for most people to read.
  7. 01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I think you should do these in pairs since now it gets really repeatitive

That's it for the mod, hope it helped. Good luck with the set!
Lanturn
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Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lanturn
Thank you. Going to reply after work tomorrow. night!
Lanturn
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Joined March 2012
Topic Starter
Lanturn

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Hello Lanturn! M4M from my que


Insane

  1. 00:03:156 (3) - The blanket here is a bit off fixed.
  2. 00:05:727 (1) - I think adding more curve on this would make the 00:06:370 (2,3) - placements look better since they get some of that blanket action ;) I am very terrible at these for some reason. Tried to fix >_>
  3. 00:13:227 (2,4) - Now I don't intend for this to be a blanket mod but I think this would work nicely I cut my internet before looking at this picture (stupid me,it doesn't load the picture until you open the spoiler box) but I can guess what it is. Fixed it.. I hope XD
    Example
  4. 00:46:629 (4,5) - Maybe add more distance between these 2 since it would make them look better imo :p Moved (5) and the stream thing after down a bit.
  5. 00:46:629 (4,6) - I personally don't like this overlap that much but I could see why it'd be hard to avoid yeah.... dumb stacked notes, even if I manually stacked them. SHAME ON ME!
  6. 01:07:132 (3,4,5) - Maybe try this? It would look a bit better F me and not having internet to load this picture. I'll look at it next time. Actually to be honest, I do remember this one kinda before I replied to this. If I remember correctly I didn't want (4,5) to be too close to each other.
    Example
  7. 01:17:707 (5) - Perhaps make this a slider that ends at 01:18:030 - ? It would capture the vocals better unless you are going for a small breather for the players here I could go either route, but I decided that they definitely needed this breather. Gonna leave as a circle for now.
  8. 01:25:691 - This should be a clickable beat imo. You could make the spinner start right after it This is just me and my preferences. I know it's probably in the minority about now, but I personally don't really like having a circle on a held vocal and have a spinner start immediately after it when it's still part of that same held vocal.
  9. 01:25:691 (1) - This spinner should end at 01:28:389 - imo. If you agree then make sure it is changed for all diffs that have this spinner on them, I didn't point them out specifically since you are in charge of this decision imo. I believe where I currently have it the fade out drops faster here, so it kind of blends in nicely. For now I think I want to keep it here but if my ears are terrible and others point this out, I'll make the change. Thanks!
Thanks a bunch for the mod!
Doyak
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Joined November 2012
Doyak

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Doyak's Insane

  1. 00:02:299 (1,2) - This is my personal opinion but I'd make this a curved slider for variety and it would fit here in my opinion ok
    Picture
  2. 00:14:299 - 00:16:441 - A spinner here would be really fitting, highly recommend you add one Where to end it is a problem. It doesn't end on 00:16:441 - either. And I want to start with notes on the next section, and don't want them to be too close to the spinner.
  3. 00:45:765 (3,4) - This blanket can be improved for sure yes
  4. 00:45:765 (3,1) - Stack properly dem yes
  5. 01:07:995 (1) - Unnecessary NC 01:07:995 (1,2) - These two have more obvious drums unlike 01:07:564 (1,2) - , so I'm discriminating them. This is also why they have jumps.
Thanks~

Doyak's Insane
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Yohanes
1,283 posts
Joined February 2014
Yohanes

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Yohanes' insane
  1. 00:05:299 (3,1) - This blanket is off by quite a bit,consider making it look better
  2. 00:16:656 (1) - Unsnapped slider!
  3. 00:20:514 (2,3) - This blanket can be improved aswell :p
  4. 00:40:802 (1,2) - This spacing is inconsistent with 00:41:234 (2,3) - and is therefore confusing
  5. 00:42:528 (7,2) - These aren't properly stacked It's stacked on the slidertail :P
  6. 01:02:384 (1,2) - Same here! Make sure these are stacked properly aswell after the fix 01:03:031 (2,2) - Uh, it stacked properly already (?)
Other are fixed, thank you ProBox!

hoya
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: CAS.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 40694
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.2

[Metadata]
Title:Toki o Kizamu Uta - TV animation Ver. -
TitleUnicode:時を刻む唄　- TV animation Ver. -
Artist:Lia
ArtistUnicode:Lia
Creator:Lanturn
Version:Yohanes' Insane
Source:CLANNAD AFTER STORY
Tags:wo Maeda Jun Key Sounds Label TORCH 麻枝准 OP Opening Size クラナド アフターストーリ Yohanes
BeatmapID:986228
BeatmapSetID:438531

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.2
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"CAS.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg

ProfessionalBox wrote:

Fuuko's Light Insane

  1. 00:08:299 (5,1) - This overlap is a bit confusing for the players of this difficulty to read. I suggest you come up with something else for this retry
  2. 00:18:356 (5,8) - Stack properly peppy fix ur damn game
  3. 00:45:765 (2,4) - Same here me2
  4. 01:01:952 (4,1) - ^
  5. 01:02:168 (5,2,4) - ^ yehaj
  6. 01:04:974 (7,1) - I like the idea of this overlap aswell but it is a bit too confusing for most people to read. same
  7. 01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I think you should do these in pairs since now it gets really repeatitive it isnt repetitive im just being consistent xd

That's it for the mod, hope it helped. Good luck with the set!
thanks
Underforest
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Joined July 2015
Underforest
requested by pkhg
[Fuuko's Light Insane]
00:08:299 (5,1) - Este overlap luce raro D:
00:24:831 (8) - ¿Esto debería terminar en blue tick?
01:04:974 (7,1) - ¿Soy yo o los bordes de los sliders se inclinan unos 1-2 pixeles? xd
01:08:427 (6) - Intenta este ritmo en su lugar:
01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - parecen escaleras xd

gl!
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg

Underforest wrote:

requested by pkhg
[Fuuko's Light Insane]
00:08:299 (5,1) - Este overlap luce raro D: xd
00:24:831 (8) - ¿Esto debería terminar en blue tick? no veo porque no. si me reclaman mas lo cambio xd
01:04:974 (7,1) - ¿Soy yo o los bordes de los sliders se inclinan unos 1-2 pixeles? xd es culpa de peppy xd
01:08:427 (6) - Intenta este ritmo en su lugar: no quiero hacer nada complicado :p
01:18:138 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - parecen escaleras xd stairway to heaven

gl!
!
Underforest
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Underforest

pkhg wrote:

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