double check timing, some of the notes are off for whatever reason and idk why
00:01:724 (6) - the strong piano notes like this would be better off nc'd imo (this goes for 00:04:724 (6) - 00:07:724 (3) - 00:13:724 (8) - stuff like that)
fix00:07:349 (1) - sure the nc is there for the pattern but you literally never did this in the other patterns so why now lol (it's still perfectly readable without the nc btw)
fix00:09:974 (3,4) - you go from this DS to 00:11:474 (3,4) - in the next pattern what why??
moved closer00:12:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - there actually should be more notes here if you slow it down lo (some parts are 1/16 but honestly the way you have it right now is fine)
00:21:974 (3,4) - again with the DS changes just keep them consistent holy
elaborate nurd : ^ ) no seriously tho, elaborate to me man.00:23:474 (3,4) - these notes should probably be given more emphasis since it's the start of the vocal track
fixed, i like it better00:26:474 (5,6) - oh god why stack these please
theres literally no movement in the song (for me atleast) in this spot00:27:224 (1,2) - pLEASe stacks don't work well here and they look ugly :[
^00:29:849 - did you like miss a note here or something because the piano plays here and the vocals also cover this, makes no sense to leave it out
fix00:31:349 - same thing here
I fail to hear a note here, or a note thats emphasized enough to need its own note.basically the entire section here until the next timing point should have a couple more notes added for vocals, you started following the vocals in the intro and then kind of just strayed off of that
No part was intended to follow vocals, it should almost all be following the piano which is in line with vocals then strays away from it significantly. 00:46:724 (1) - silence spinner end or just the entire spinner in general tbh
I know for all spinners, I never really was going for mods at any time so blegh00:54:860 (2,3) - starting from the slider end to 3 -- this should be 1/12 with 4 notes including slider end
i rather would try putting stack here for now. 00:56:454 (6) - is this supposed to be stacked with 00:55:329 (4) - or nah
was never intended im pretty sure, but I stacked it anyway.00:59:266 (6,7,8) - another 1/12 thing
01:01:329 (3,4,5) - this is also 1/12 and this pattern feels weird because you blanket a triple and it's like no why don't
01:06:204 (7) - downbeat = nc tbh
NC is sort of unnecessary because of the spinner01:06:766 (1) - you could map this section here instead of adding a spinner or at least a slider here instead
i like spinner01:09:204 (5) - slider here instead of a single circle fits better for the guitar
slider plays weird01:09:766 (1,2,3) - 1/12 again xd
stop using xd u feg xd xd xdlelmysidesnot going to list the 1/12 things because basically every "triple" in this is 1/12 from what i can hear
01:14:266 (4,5) - you don't stack this but you stacked the note/slider before this??
emphasizes the music01:15:016 (6,1) - and then this too and you stack 01:16:516 (3,4) - immediately after what?????????????? keep these stacks consistent man this is all over the place in terms of that
^01:30:016 (6,1) - if you don't fix the stacks then 6 needs to be closer to 1 because that's how every other pattern was prior
yea01:33:016 (7,8,1) - this is actually 1/8 so don't change this one
no shit u dum fur fur : ^ ) <3 i love u fiery01:51:204 (1,2) - this blanket cuts way too short and looks ugly because it overlaps with the sliderhead of 1 partially, fix pls
better maybe?01:55:891 (4) - if you're following the guitar riff
this note comes a bit too early idk what's the proper snapping for it though and it probably doesn't matter cuz od 8 but X D
um...you're retarded, it doesnt come early. <301:59:454 (3) - nc this since you're not doing repeat sliders like before
s a m etbh the chorus could use a bit more mapping since vocals and whatnot, following the guitar and drums only here makes it really undervalued compared to the rest of the map
I like the way its mapped currently, because most of it is supposed to be calm, the only part that is supposed to give the most energy is the solo.02:09:204 (3) - nc
yeah02:11:454 (3) - nc
02:42:204 (1) -
this slider ends too early for the snare its fine to me??02:59:454 (3,4) - stacking this kind of seems dumb compared to the other patterns before where you never did this
theres no major 'movement' in the instruments intensity imo, thats why this is stacked03:00:954 (2,3,4) - stacking 2 and 3 here is also pretty dumb
fix03:02:454 (8) -
this should hit earlier everything here should, so they all hit earlier, and NC03:06:204 (1) - don't need to silence this sliderend since there's a guitar riff there
yeah03:09:204 (1) - these kiai flashes are so unnecessary pleaS
theyre fine03:13:985 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - i agree with the spacing change, but it shouldn't be this drastic of a change compared to 03:13:141 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
These are quite subjective, where I like it and you may not, someone else will like it and someone else wont. Depending on which one is weighted more towards, changes may or may not be made03:15:204 (1,2,3,4) - these would be better off as single notes to fit the music better
sliders fit here perfectly fine.03:21:204 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this stream plays like aids because of 03:21:672 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - like why do zigzags here plse
elaborate in what kind of change could be made.03:23:079 (4,5,1,2) - this section would be better off playing as one whole section but more spaced compared to the rest
ive been thinking that as well03:25:704 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is disorienting because of the 1/6 drums in the background, drums are more apparent than the guitar so follow those
That is VERY disorienting for a first time playing, or just any time. Why follow the guitar and suddenly switch to the drums? It seems like a rather unfitting idea. I like it following the guitar better.03:30:766 (3,4,5) - no need to stack these
I dont feel very much movement for these notes03:41:922 (1,2,3) - reduce spacing here like what you did on 03:40:329 (1,2,3,4)
did it03:43:704 (5,6,7) - 1/6 drums would be better here again
no, same reason as last. Its not a good idea.03:52:704 (1) - silence the slidertick too
s a m e f a m03:55:329 (2,3) - why stack these this looks ugly :[
Highly object, refrain from using "It looks ugly :[" and use actual logic and reasoning.04:01:329 (2) - stacking this on the sliderhead just looks bleh and doesnt play well either idk about this (similar situation 04:03:766 (2) - here)
same reason as before, refrain from using your own opinion like "it looks (blank)"04:01:610 (4) -
this note doesn't exist in the music wat?04:07:329 (2,3) - this is just misleading as fuck lo (also there should be like two notes on the red and blue tick after this note??)
no? u stoopid?04:10:891 (4,5,6) - by following the piano here you like completely butchered the rhythm pattern of following the guitar you've done previously pls dont
theres nothing wrong.04:12:204 (1,2) - this and the next one, stack doesn't work as well here and also the stack isn't even aligned properly man
^04:19:516 (3) - whAt is this slider even FOLLOWINGmg
I heard that if you listen closely, a guitar is heard. and the faint cries of me calling you an idiot on teamspeak04:21:204 (1,2) - stack doesnt work as well here either
you know very well what im gonna sayok for like this entire last chorus why is everything stacked when nothing was stacked for a majority of the map, doesn't make sense
04:30:016 (3) -
note doesn't exist in song same04:30:204 (1,2) - the first slider is p. good but then the second slider comes and it's like wow look at this fuckin 130 degree angle shift what why??? just keep the flow and put it on the same side as the sliderend, or ctrl+g as it is now
Sliders like this are fine considering how slow the song is, if I did this in higher BPM, now thats retarded.04:51:204 (1,2) - "I got lazy so I put sliders here instead of what I've done previously"
"But its actually a slow ending to a pretty much slow song, in which calls for a slow ending. W 0 W04:57:214 (1,1) - ^ seriously cmon man
^04:59:754 (3,4) - these two notes aren't snapped properly and idk what the proper snapping for them is so have funn
fix05:00:564 (1) - SILENCE THIS SPINNER FJBGN M
kill self plz thx <3