Fujiwara Marina - Daydream Syndrome (TV Size)

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Muya
thx :)
wmfchris
[Insane]
00:08:892 (7) - right 1 lv4 grid?

[gow's Hard]
00:38:600 (4) - lol this slider [ Not a problem]
00:53:476 (4,1) - up 1 grid?
01:02:047 (3,4) - right 1 grid

[Normal] and [Easy] - fine.

Very nice map :D

star!
Nakagawa-Kanon
Saymun VS Muya

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Topic Starter
Muya
> wmfchris
thx :)

> dksslqj
saymun is win :cry:
Gonzvlo
General
  1. Disable countdown, because it's not used


Easy
  1. AR, OD +1


Normal
  1. 00:51:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This Combo is particularly long, Use New Combo on (6).
  2. 00:55:348 (X) - I feel that a note is missing here, consider adding it.
  3. 01:28:406 - You should finish this diff here, so add a circle here or change (6) for a slider


gow's Hard
  1. You are using the same AR as Insane, so AR -1
  2. 00:51:416 (2,3) - This jump is too random, reduce spacing please.
  3. 01:16:610 (7,1) - Keep spacing regular, so maybe try this
  4. This diff is definitely Insane-ish, So consider changing the name
  5. I really enjoyed this diff, Good Job.


Insane
  1. 01:04:668 (5) - Move this away to avoid overlaps, like this


No Major Problems, Nice Mapset.
ziin
Your sliders are very pretty.

[easy]
00:07:290 (1,3) image
00:46:901 (5) up 1
00:48:066 (6) snake

[gow's hard]
This is insane
00:06:707 (1...7) overmapped
00:34:086 (1,2) 4.4x jump?
01:04:377 (4,5) overmapped
01:27:605 (1,2) 4.7x jump?

[insane]
00:35:251 0.75 time?
00:53:309 (3,4) overmapped
01:16:610 (5,6) overmapped

very good, star~
Weez
Couldn't find anything wrong with this >.<
star :)
AisamaDX
v( ̄Д ̄)v イエイ
DeadAlready
star~ >w</
kusakabe001
star~ヾ(゚ω゚)ノ゛
MayBe
:)
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i didn't get the video file in the folder. i think a full-submit plz~?

[Easy]
00:09:037 (2) - make it 1 grid right and don't mind the spacing.
00:39:765 (1,2) - maybe use slider instead of the 3/2 note? would be hard for beginners if they can't read the beat
00:40:930 (3,4) - ^, but for 5, since the slidertick is really annoying, i'll prefer circles then...
01:28:261 (6) - finish?

[Normal]
00:02:630 (1,2) - use a slider at the first plz... i hit a 100 there because i don't know the beat = =|||
00:06:125 (4) - try a 5/2 slider, fits better.
nice diff.

[gow's Hard]
00:10:785 (8,9,10,11,1) - this part is ugly because of the note stacking when playing. try to adjust the place of 8 and make it a really "stacked" effect (play this and you'll know what i mean.)
01:19:668 (1,2,3) - just stack them plz?
...suggest remove all the clap at the last part since the notes there follow exactly the drums and no place for claps then.
tough hard huh.

[Insane]
00:35:251 (1) - ... i think this should be a "slow" part, not hitting 1/2 notes all the way. there are even more notes than the other parts, which i think is wrong.
00:44:571 (1) - ^
despite that two soft part, fine.

mod this plz: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/24782
climbb65588
Hello, may I map a taiko for this map?

star!
xierbaliti
-Easy-
00:09:037 (2) - 1 gird right plz.

-gowww-
Insaneより この「Hard」譜面のほうが難しいと思います >_>

00:24:183 (4,5) - change spacing like this? (just a suggestion)
00:49:086 (2) - +finish at start of the slider?
00:50:251 (2) - ^
00:51:416 (2) - ^
00:52:727 (1) - ^
00:53:309 (3) - ^
00:55:639 (1,2) - use soft hitsounds? (1) adds whistle, and (2) adds nothing.
00:57:387 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - the rhythm seems like this:
-Insane-
00:27:678 (5,6,7,8,1) - put these notes like this? will be more beautiful imo.
*star*
Topic Starter
Muya
fixed~ :o
thx
KSHR
すったー :)
Suzully
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namazun
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