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Aleks719

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Aleks719 2012-01-20T09:01:21+00:00

Folder
- default-comma,default-dot,default-percent,default-x are useless. You use digits only.
- approachcircle.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128 (currently 130x130).
- add reversearrow.png to the custom skin. Even it will be look like a default
- you use n:c2 sections, but no n:c2 hitsounds. forgot to add?

General
Normal sv > Hard sv. Okay, just lol'd a bit

Add epilepsy warning for every diff
Turn off letterboxes, since you use SB and no breaks in diff

PoLKmix
Inconsistency in Kiai Time, turn off kiai at 01:25:794 like in other diffs
combo placement sometimes confused me, like nc at last note of triple etc
00:38:340 (4,1) - better stack
00:44:158 (7,1) - too sudden jump, really comes from nothing
01:25:794 (1) - note instead of spinner? 01:25:794 looks good as the end of map

Hard
Stats : HP5, AR7, OD7.
Stats in PoLKmix : HP6, AR8, OD6.
Suggest to reduce OD here. OD6 would be fine.

Easy
01:25:976 (1) - same with spinner, not sure that it's necessary

Axey

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Axey 2012-01-22T08:07:25+00:00

随便来看看w

Easy&Normal

silder都乱拉

Hard

ar+1更好点
我觉得副歌部分的节奏怎么那么奇怪.................
00:59:268(5,1,2,3)-我觉得silder和三连打在时间轴上的位置换一下打起来比较舒服吧-_-
还有后面很多都是把白线作为silder的结束就觉得打起来很怪..
-_-嘛可能是我还停留在比较传统的作图风格上..

PoLKmix

00:35:995(3,4)-还是觉得正着比较好..
00:49:450(2,3)-选一个加个clap吧..感觉只有1个clap略奇怪

骗个kds给你射星

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-01-26T14:46:05+00:00

BakaHuang wrote:
随便来看看w

Easy&Normal

silder都乱拉

Hard

ar+1更好点
我觉得副歌部分的节奏怎么那么奇怪.................
00:59:268(5,1,2,3)-我觉得silder和三连打在时间轴上的位置换一下打起来比较舒服吧-_-
还有后面很多都是把白线作为silder的结束就觉得打起来很怪..
-_-嘛可能是我还停留在比较传统的作图风格上..

PoLKmix

00:35:995(3,4)-还是觉得正着比较好..
00:49:450(2,3)-选一个加个clap吧..感觉只有1个clap略奇怪

骗个kds给你射星

这图hard做的太早~

明天或后天改图~

Aleks719

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Aleks719 2012-01-29T10:50:12+00:00

10th recheck, lol?

Easy
01:21:510 - 0% sound section, set 20%
01:25:995 (1) - remove this spinner, or add similar spinners to Normal and Hard

Normal
00:53:794 (4) - unsnapped note
00:53:976 (1) - unsnapped spinner start
01:22:540 (1) - remove nc

Hard
HP+1.AR+1

fix faster and call me back~

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-01-29T14:39:19+00:00

Aleks719 wrote:
10th recheck, lol?

Easy
01:21:510 - 0% sound section, set 20%
01:25:995 (1) - remove this spinner, or add similar spinners to Normal and Hard

Normal
00:53:794 (4) - unsnapped note
00:53:976 (1) - unsnapped spinner start
01:22:540 (1) - remove nc

Hard
HP+1.AR+1

fix faster and call me back~

Fixed.recheck because you're mat. Nothing to say.

Aleks719

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Aleks719 2012-01-29T17:54:36+00:00

Hum, hum. Looks better... Let's try~

Bubbled!

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-01-30T03:59:51+00:00

Aleks719 wrote:
Hum, hum. Looks better... Let's try~

Bubbled!

OMG Thx you!

Garven

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Garven 2012-01-31T13:53:09+00:00

Wow, I haven't seen this map in .. forever or so.

[General]
Your approach circle has a weird blip on the top and left sides.

SPOILER

Maybe have the last image of the storyboard fade out instead of just flashing to black at the end?
l.png and l-1.png LK's -> LKs'

[Easy]
00:07:268 (1) - I don't recommend having notes stacked under sliders in an Easy difficulty.
00:14:540 (3,4,5) - Might be a difficult rhythm for new players to discern due to low spacing. Might be better to use sliders.
00:37:086 (2,4) - Same as earlier
00:42:177 (3) - ^

[Hard]
01:23:086 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Why is it so quiet here?

[PoLKmix]
01:17:086 (1) - Remove new combo

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-02-02T08:27:52+00:00

Garven wrote:
Wow, I haven't seen this map in .. forever or so.

[General]
Your approach circle has a weird blip on the top and left sides.
SPOILER
Maybe have the last image of the storyboard fade out instead of just flashing to black at the end?
l.png and l-1.png LK's -> LKs'

[Easy]
00:07:268 (1) - I don't recommend having notes stacked under sliders in an Easy difficulty.
00:14:540 (3,4,5) - Might be a difficult rhythm for new players to discern due to low spacing. Might be better to use sliders.
00:37:086 (2,4) - Same as earlier
00:42:177 (3) - ^

[Hard]
01:23:086 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Why is it so quiet here?

[PoLKmix]
01:17:086 (1) - Remove new combo

Fixed.

Garven

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Garven 2012-02-02T16:42:10+00:00

You.. didn't fix much. The skin still looks weird and the grammatical error in the storyboard is still present.

You also still kept the stacks under slider ends which aren't really new-player friendly at all. And the strange volume change that isn't in any other difficulty in Hard is still there.

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-02-03T03:19:18+00:00

Garven wrote:
You.. didn't fix much. The skin still looks weird and the grammatical error in the storyboard is still present.

You also still kept the stacks under slider ends which aren't really new-player friendly at all. And the strange volume change that isn't in any other difficulty in Hard is still there.

Ok i know

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-02-04T02:23:20+00:00

skin：fixed
easy:remove all the stacks
hard:change some hitsounds
story board:i feel better now

Garven

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Garven 2012-02-05T18:33:35+00:00

http://puu.sh/fOP4

http://puu.sh/fOPa

Haruhi_sama

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Haruhi_sama 2012-02-06T05:48:48+00:00

Garven wrote:
http://puu.sh/fOP4

http://puu.sh/fOPa

sell moe

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-02-09T10:37:38+00:00

Garven wrote:
http://puu.sh/fOP4

http://puu.sh/fOPa

what does that mean?

Garven

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Garven 2012-02-14T09:38:14+00:00

Use those for the correct apostrophe position.

l.png and l-1.png LK's -> LKs'

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-02-18T08:51:04+00:00

Garven wrote:
Use those for the correct apostrophe position.

l.png and l-1.png LK's -> LKs'

OK i will correct this mistake at leisure

Garven

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Garven 2012-02-19T17:01:30+00:00

Crap, sorry - one more thing.

Add

SliderBorder: 255,255,255

to all of your difficulties in the [Colours] section.

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-02-25T03:23:14+00:00

Garven wrote:
Crap, sorry - one more thing.

Add
SliderBorder: 255,255,255
to all of your difficulties in the [Colours] section.

apostrophe have changed to right position

and i add sliderborder code to every diffculty

Garven

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Garven 2012-02-26T13:17:23+00:00

Well that took a lot longer than it should have. >_>

Rebubbled!

SciSSorS_old

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SciSSorS_old 2012-02-26T14:30:40+00:00

yoyoyooo 坐会~

Gonzvlo

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Gonzvlo 2012-03-02T19:07:21+00:00

Hi,

Sometimes the jumps/anti-jumps felt a bit weird but I didn't have much trouble with most of them while playing. Although, there are some spacing issues that you should fix.

[General]

Skin: The files "Spinner-osu", "Spinner-spin" and "Spinner-clear" are missing, make sure to add them and full submit. (If you don't want make custom ones, use the file included in the template skin)

[PoLKmix]

00:27:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern uses 3 different spacing values, that's definitely not a good idea. Try something a bit more consistent, like this.
00:37:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same here, (4) and (1) are way too close. Let me suggest something like this

That's all, let me know when you're ready!

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-03-03T03:13:06+00:00

SPOILER

Gonzvlo wrote:
Hi,

Sometimes the jumps/anti-jumps felt a bit weird but I didn't have much trouble with most of them while playing. Although, there are some spacing issues that you should fix.

[General]
Skin: The files "Spinner-osu", "Spinner-spin" and "Spinner-clear" are missing, make sure to add them and full submit. (If you don't want make custom ones, use the file included in the template skin)
[PoLKmix]
00:27:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern uses 3 different spacing values, that's definitely not a good idea. Try something a bit more consistent, like this.
00:37:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same here, (4) and (1) are way too close. Let me suggest something like this
That's all, let me know when you're ready!

i have added "Spinner-osu", "Spinner-spin" and "Spinner-clear" to the file
and two suggestions about spacing are accepted

Gonzvlo

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Gonzvlo 2012-03-04T06:11:43+00:00

Hey, sorry I missed something important. The Epilepsy Warning is covering the first object of each diff.

In order to fix this you have 2 alternatives:

Increase Audio Lead In to 4000.
Remove Epilepsy Warning. (Epilepsy Warning is meant to be used just for maps with constant flashes, this map is not even flashy so it's alright)

Let me know when you're ready! (again)

TTTTTTTTTTTT

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TTTTTTTTTTTT 2012-03-04T06:31:47+00:00

Gonzvlo wrote:
SPOILER
Hey, sorry I missed something important. The Epilepsy Warning is covering the first object of each diff.

In order to fix this you have 2 alternatives:

Increase Audio Lead In to 4000.
Remove Epilepsy Warning. (Epilepsy Warning is meant to be used just for maps with constant flashes, this map is not even flashy so it's alright)
Let me know when you're ready! (again)

Removed epilepsy warning