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Shmiklak

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Shmiklak 2016-04-02T16:51:47+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 6 мая 2016 г. at 20:31:02

Artist: Mr.Kitty
Title: A New Hour
Tags: Wajinshu Eternity synthpop marathon Collab collaboration
BPM: 120
Filesize: 6303kb
Play Time: 05:08
Difficulties Available:

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Download: Mr.Kitty - A New Hour
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#3
And first approved o3o
Collab with wajinshu

meii18

Last edited by Shmiklak 2024-04-05T07:47:39+00:00, edited 48 times in total.

Chiyuyu

90 posts

Joined May 2014

Chiyuyu 2016-04-06T11:02:47+00:00

драсте, м4м

[Eternity]

00:30:545 (2,3,4) - по-моему, это не идет под музыку
01:00:545 (2) - пропустили клап!
01:24:045 (1) - красный узел x268 y352
01:34:045 (1) - попробуй как-нибудь это по-другому сделать, мне не нравится.
01:46:045 (1) - красный узел x204 y64
01:57:795 (4,1) - между ними расстояние больше, чем было между нотами до этого. если дс не используется, то все в порядке
02:15:045 (3,4) - не нравится их расположение. 02:15:545 (4) - x396 y100
02:28:545 (3) - x168 y320
02:39:545 (4) - этот располагается дальше всех. так и надо?
02:43:545 (4) - x212 y100
02:56:045 (1) - попробуй так: http://puu.sh/o86m5/bb128fe067.jpg левый узел x28 y156, правый x108 y188
03:00:045 (1) - не, это стремно чет слишком
03:15:045 (2) - ^
03:20:045 (1) - не красный верхний самый узел - x372 y36
03:22:045 (1) - конец слайдера - x128 y352
03:56:045 (1) - кривой
04:04:545 (3) - x164 y64
это слайдеры, которые не понравились мне по виду:
04:54:045 (1) -
04:34:045 (1) -
00:08:045 (1) -
00:20:045 (1) -
02:35:045 (3) -
04:11:045 (3) -

соре, если мало
как мне кажется, все уже и так хорошо

чудесная песня
сама хотела сделать на нее карту

удачи вам!

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-04-06T11:16:42+00:00

Chiyuyu wrote:
драсте, м4м

[Eternity]

00:30:545 (2,3,4) - по-моему, это не идет под музыку
01:00:545 (2) - пропустили клап!
01:24:045 (1) - красный узел x268 y352
01:34:045 (1) - попробуй как-нибудь это по-другому сделать, мне не нравится.
01:46:045 (1) - красный узел x204 y64
01:57:795 (4,1) - между ними расстояние больше, чем было между нотами до этого. если дс не используется, то все в порядке
02:15:045 (3,4) - не нравится их расположение. 02:15:545 (4) - x396 y100
02:28:545 (3) - x168 y320
02:39:545 (4) - этот располагается дальше всех. так и надо?
02:43:545 (4) - x212 y100
02:56:045 (1) - попробуй так: http://puu.sh/o86m5/bb128fe067.jpg левый узел x28 y156, правый x108 y188
03:00:045 (1) - не, это стремно чет слишком
03:15:045 (2) - ^
03:20:045 (1) - не красный верхний самый узел - x372 y36
03:22:045 (1) - конец слайдера - x128 y352
03:56:045 (1) - кривой
04:04:545 (3) - x164 y64
это слайдеры, которые не понравились мне по виду:
04:54:045 (1) -
04:34:045 (1) -
00:08:045 (1) -
00:20:045 (1) -
02:35:045 (3) -
04:11:045 (3) -
соре, если мало
как мне кажется, все уже и так хорошо

чудесная песня
сама хотела сделать на нее карту

удачи вам!

Спасибо за мод поправила некоторые моменты. Кроме 00:30:545 (2,3,4) - мне кажется это нормально

тут

osu file format v14

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Tags:Wajinshu synthpop marathon
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Sky Future

Sky Future 2016-04-07T09:37:46+00:00

hello. ask mod with shmiklak my daling

*00:55:045 (3,4) - i think DS error, this after http://puu.sh/o9hGC/adfa4a6dff.jpg

*01:09:545 (4,1) - blanket

*03:04:045 (1,2) - ^

*03:19:545 (2,1) - does not body blanket

*04:00:045 (1,2) - omg, why so? now see diff the Hard, this note so hard the reading pls change

*04:02:045 (1,2,3) - i want certain DS, 3slider move the after this http://puu.sh/o9iOK/293e774425.jpg

*04:32:045 (1,2) - blanket

owari

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-04-07T10:24:56+00:00

http://puu.sh/o9kO7/532be43735.rar

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-04-07T12:33:55+00:00

Thank for mods! All was fixed

Last edited by Shmiklak 2016-05-02T02:03:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Log Off Now

955 posts

Joined May 2014

Log Off Now 2016-04-12T11:42:25+00:00

shmik's M4M queue

[General]

Looks good

[Eternity]

Sorry if a lot of this is blanket mod, there isn't much else for me to mod imo

00:01:045 (3,4) - nazi blanket (sorry)

00:13:045 (3,4,1) - Maybe make 4 has even distance spacing between these sliders? Just seems a bit odd to me that it's even here 00:14:045 (1,2,3) - and not at this spot

00:22:545 (2) - I would suggest slider + circle here, the repeat is ending on a strong bass kick which is too strong to be ignored imo (this is also inconsistent with the rest of the start of the map)

00:38:045 (1) - aesthetics Ctrl + H?

00:39:795 (6) - I would prefer this if it wasn't perfectly stacked so it gives the player at least a chance to see it (this is still a hard difficulty)

00:47:295 (3,4) - This doesn't flow very well imo, it's a strange change of direction to be honest, I would do maybe something like this. Doing this also adds a bit of emphasis on the cymbal at 00:48:045 (1) -

00:59:545 (4,1) - nazi blanket

01:09:545 (4,1) - ^

01:33:295 (3) - aesthetics I would prefer a less sharp angle on this slider, just my opinion tho

01:45:045 (3) - aesthetics Ctrl + H?

02:21:545 (4) - Even DS here, this just looks weird imo

03:07:045 (2,1) - nazi blanket

03:43:545 (2,1) - ^

04:04:795 (4,5) - Same comment as 00:39:795 (6)

04:49:795 - Noticed you've followed the vocals pretty heavily in this map but this vocal is left out? not sure why

04:57:795 - ^

[]

Hope this helps!

Electoz

1,886 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-04-15T08:31:46+00:00

Okokokokokokok

[Shmiklak]

00:53:795 (3,1) - The flow is kinda uncomfortable imo.
01:17:795 (3) - So if you're really going for vocal then why you mapped this then? Same applies to 04:38:795 (2) .
03:02:045 (1,2) - I think a 2/1 slider+circle here would fit the song better considering that the rhythm hasn't changed yet so it should be mapped the same way as earlier objects.
03:18:045 (1,2) - This should be 2 1/1 sliders with a similar reasoning as above.
04:44:045 (1) - This shouldn't be in the same pattern with 04:44:545 (2,3,4) cuz they're not on the same stanza.
04:54:045 (1) - Pretty much random sliderart to me, if you're insisting on making a sliderart, imo swapping this slider with 05:02:045 (1,2,3,4) would make much more sense.

[Wajinshu]

00:30:545 (2,3,4) - 02:23:045 (2) - I didn't really hear anything on these blue ticks. Does it really necessary to map them?
02:01:045 (3,4) - Not sure what's the reason for this 1.67 spacing here.
02:26:045 (1,2) - 02:34:045 (1,2) - Prefer the same spacing on both of these.
02:36:045 (1,2) - I don't really quite understand this, like if you're going to follow the drum then why you left these snares 02:36:795 - 02:37:795 empty then? Cuz you just mapped those snares on those reverses, and I think following vocals normally is better in this case. Same applies to 04:12:045 (1,2) .

Alright then, good luck~

KantanDez

255 posts

Joined February 2015

KantanDez 2016-04-16T13:13:03+00:00

from muh queue

Eternity
00:23:545 (4) - do this instead http://puu.sh/okjFM/6c669f6abf.jpg
00:37:545 (4) - do this instead http://puu.sh/okjZj/3ac2f8abf1.jpg
00:52:045 (1) - curve this to the left http://puu.sh/okk3G/32a3edbcde.jpg
01:35:045 (2) - do this instead http://puu.sh/okl2l/c1e3d7b340.jpg
02:29:545 (6) - do this intead http://puu.sh/oklbz/060db4055f.jpg
03:52:045 (1,2) - make these two symmetrical
03:56:045 (1,2) - make these two symmetrical ctrl+h 1 then put it in 2's position fix ds
05:01:045 (2) - move the last white box to the left a little

sorry for small mod
gud luck

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-04-16T15:37:46+00:00

thx

osu file format v14

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Shmiklak

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Shmiklak 2016-04-17T09:13:26+00:00

Thx for mods. Fixed all

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Ambu5h

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Joined February 2015

Ambu5h 2016-04-17T20:53:52+00:00

МОД ОЧЕНЬ ПЛОХОЙ ТАК ЧТО КУДОСУ НЕ НАДО ПОЖАЛУЙСТА, СПАСИБО!

00:01:045 (3,4) - поправь бланкет (если это бланкет конечно)
00:02:045 (1,2) - и тут
00:52:545 (2,3) - тоже немного подправь
01:13:295 (3,1) - и тут
02:01:545 (4,1) - и этот тоже
02:09:545 (4,1) - и этот
02:21:045 (3,4) - сильно близко, может побольше спейсинг сделать тут?
02:23:045 (2,3) - может быть клэпы сюда поставить?
02:24:045 (8) - нк?
03:07:045 (2,1) - бланкет подравняй, хотя мб необязательно это делать
03:09:545 (2,1) - и тут
03:17:045 (2,1) - мне видится несколько странным переход от 1/1 ритма к 2/1, возможно вообще стоит кое-где замапать 1/2 реверс слайдеров, чисто для разнообразия, но это имхо
и да, весь промежуток между 2 и 3 киаи это просто царство слайдеров какое-то, я думаю кое-где все же стоит сделать джампики или пресловутую дорожку из нот, а то совсем в уныние вгоняет
03:59:045 (3) - тут нет триплы, если все оставите, то хотя бы уберите клэп отсюда 03:59:170 -
04:04:295 (2,3,5) - не оч красивый оверлап
04:16:045 (1,2) - чуть-чуть подравняйте бланкет

как-то так (я очень плохо пишу моды вообще, но особенно к легким дифам и чем-то средним между нормалом и хардом, извини)

ар можно до 7.5 поднять, по-моему, но это не критично

не могу не признаться, что меня смущает ритм (лично я мапал бы вокал), но в целом особых претензий нет, карта выглядит неплохо

и да, shmiklak, убедись, что твой полный дрэйн тайм больше чем у wajinshu, а то неранкабельно((

гуд лак

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-04-18T02:23:16+00:00

I think I can't help anything on this map xD Take my star Shmi goodluck!

DeRandom Otaku

2,136 posts

Joined November 2014

DeRandom Otaku 2016-04-18T09:47:53+00:00

As i said the map is really neat~ the mod might not be helpful but ima try anyway

Eternity :

00:52:545 (2,3) - blanket could be better
00:56:045 (1) - bend the slider a bit more maybe?
00:57:795 (4,1) - fix le blanket
01:00:545 (2) - u forgot to add clap
01:08:545 (2) - nc from this note instead i think
01:19:545 (4) - bend the slider a very little bit
02:13:795 - should be a circle here
02:24:045 (8) - nc
02:49:045 (3,4) - blanket?
04:04:295 (2,5) - stack these please ;_;
04:13:545 (4) - u forgot clap again
04:25:045 (3,4) - blanket?

Thats all , rest is up to u~ Good Luck!~

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-04-18T10:26:46+00:00

Thank u for mods! And special thanks to Janpai for kudosu star, I love u owo
Edited:

freebird42 wrote:
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и да, shmiklak, убедись, что твой полный дрэйн тайм больше чем у wajinshu, а то неранкабельно((

Спросил у монстраты, сказал что ранкабельно так как мой дрейн больше за счет спиннера

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-04-18T17:03:51+00:00

аа

osu file format v14

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KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

KappaPraise 2016-04-19T12:19:19+00:00

Hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

General

• Мне кажется имена должны двигаться с постоянной скоростью попробую что-нибудь с этим сделать к примеру в разных местах, чтобы появлялись

Eternity

• 00:06:795 (2,3) - сильный бит на конце слайдера может ctrl+g?
• 00:09:045 (3,4) - здесь и 00:10:045 (1,2) - здесь слайдеры немного различны по форме, если развернуть их и стакнуть это заметно подправишь?
• 00:27:545 (4,1) - аналогично здесь
• 00:34:045 (4,6) - бланкет?
• 00:38:545 (2,3) - давай сделаем лучше 1/1 слайдер здесь как в этом месте 00:36:545 (2) -
• 00:40:045 (1,2) - та же проблема с формой слайдеров, может быть аналогичная проблема дальше посомтри плиз
• 00:41:045 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g плиз 2 круга затем слайдер лучше будет мне кажется
• 00:46:545 (2,4) - мне кажется стак на начало слайдера будет лучше смотреться

• 00:51:045 (3,4,5,6) - спейсинг
• 00:55:045 (3) - тут начинается вроде как эхо и мне кажется следовать в туже сторону, что и эти слайдеры 00:54:045 (1,2) - не лучшая затея попробуй другой паттерн
• 01:01:545 (4,1) - добавь между ними на красный тик еще один круг, 1/1 круги лучше начинать как раз здесь 01:02:045 (1) - на даунбите мне кажется
• 01:07:545 (2,3,1) - не знаю как сказать, но пауза до и после тут не очень заходят
• 01:10:545 (2,3) - 1/1 реверс слайдер, затем круг на красный тик будет лучше и возможно стакнуть этот круг с этим слайдером 01:12:045 (1) -
• 01:18:045 (1,2,3,4) - сделай так, чтобы четвертый слайдер также следовал паттерну, что и пред три
• 01:20:045 (1) - попробуй сделать круг вместо слайдера и паузу не большую как раз до этого 01:20:545 (2) -
• 01:35:795 (3) - лишнии круг мне как кажется
• 01:40:545 (2,3,4) - попробуй скопировать все слайдеры и просто каждый следующий скажем на 30 градусов влево наклони примерно так https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4964759
• 01:46:795 (2) - ну не знаю сильный бит на конце слайдера должен быть кликабельным мне кажется
• 01:51:545 (2,1) - добавь между ними на красный тик еще 1 круг также с hit-whistle и здесь 01:50:045 (1) - на начало слайдера тоже добавь hit-whistle

• 01:53:545 (4,1) - делать паузу между ними учитывая, что на красном тике слова начинаются немного сбивает по мне так
• 02:05:545 (4,5,1) - не вижу смысла в стаке
• 02:16:045 (1) - может красной точкой выделить слова на красном тике?
• 02:34:045 (1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/au4zxv
• 02:36:045 (1) - на конце слайдера начинаются слова мне кажется кликабельным должно быть
• 02:40:045 (1) - вместо слайдера 1 круг + пауза плиз до этого 02:40:545 (2) -

• 03:18:045 (1) - сделай 1/1 реверс слайдер
• 03:26:045 (1) - ^
• 03:49:545 (2,1) - бланкет и затем 03:49:545 (2,2) - стак
• 03:58:045 (1,2) - может добавить еще круги 03:58:295 - и 03:58:795 - чтобы задать постепенное нарастание ритма?

• 04:49:545 (3,4,1) - не вижу необходимости стакать тут

Наверно это все, удачи!

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Topic Starter

Shmiklak 2016-04-19T12:59:59+00:00

WISPG_G wrote:
Hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

General

• Мне кажется имена должны двигаться с постоянной скоростью попробую что-нибудь с этим сделать к примеру в разных местах, чтобы появлялись

Eternity

• 00:06:795 (2,3) - сильный бит на конце слайдера может ctrl+g?
• 00:09:045 (3,4) - здесь и 00:10:045 (1,2) - здесь слайдеры немного различны по форме, если развернуть их и стакнуть это заметно подправишь?
• 00:27:545 (4,1) - аналогично здесь
• 00:34:045 (4,6) - бланкет?
• 00:38:545 (2,3) - давай сделаем лучше 1/1 слайдер здесь как в этом месте 00:36:545 (2) -
• 00:40:045 (1,2) - та же проблема с формой слайдеров, может быть аналогичная проблема дальше посомтри плиз
• 00:41:045 (3,4,5) - ctrl+g плиз 2 круга затем слайдер лучше будет мне кажется
• 00:46:545 (2,4) - мне кажется стак на начало слайдера будет лучше смотреться

• 00:51:045 (3,4,5,6) - спейсинг
• 00:55:045 (3) - тут начинается вроде как эхо и мне кажется следовать в туже сторону, что и эти слайдеры 00:54:045 (1,2) - не лучшая затея попробуй другой паттерн
• 01:01:545 (4,1) - добавь между ними на красный тик еще один круг, 1/1 круги лучше начинать как раз здесь 01:02:045 (1) - на даунбите мне кажется
• 01:07:545 (2,3,1) - не знаю как сказать, но пауза до и после тут не очень заходят
• 01:10:545 (2,3) - 1/1 реверс слайдер, затем круг на красный тик будет лучше и возможно стакнуть этот круг с этим слайдером 01:12:045 (1) -
• 01:18:045 (1,2,3,4) - сделай так, чтобы четвертый слайдер также следовал паттерну, что и пред три
• 01:20:045 (1) - попробуй сделать круг вместо слайдера и паузу не большую как раз до этого 01:20:545 (2) -
• 01:35:795 (3) - лишнии круг мне как кажется
• 01:40:545 (2,3,4) - попробуй скопировать все слайдеры и просто каждый следующий скажем на 30 градусов влево наклони примерно так https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4964759
• 01:46:795 (2) - ну не знаю сильный бит на конце слайдера должен быть кликабельным мне кажется
• 01:51:545 (2,1) - добавь между ними на красный тик еще 1 круг также с hit-whistle и здесь 01:50:045 (1) - на начало слайдера тоже добавь hit-whistle

• 01:53:545 (4,1) - делать паузу между ними учитывая, что на красном тике слова начинаются немного сбивает по мне так
• 02:05:545 (4,5,1) - не вижу смысла в стаке
• 02:16:045 (1) - может красной точкой выделить слова на красном тике?
• 02:34:045 (1,2,3,4) - http://prntscr.com/au4zxv
• 02:36:045 (1) - на конце слайдера начинаются слова мне кажется кликабельным должно быть
• 02:40:045 (1) - вместо слайдера 1 круг + пауза плиз до этого 02:40:545 (2) -

• 03:18:045 (1) - сделай 1/1 реверс слайдер
• 03:26:045 (1) - ^
• 03:49:545 (2,1) - бланкет и затем 03:49:545 (2,2) - стак
• 03:58:045 (1,2) - может добавить еще круги 03:58:295 - и 03:58:795 - чтобы задать постепенное нарастание ритма?

• 04:49:545 (3,4,1) - не вижу необходимости стакать тут

Наверно это все, удачи!

Спасибо сделал

Last edited by Shmiklak 2016-05-02T02:08:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-04-19T14:00:04+00:00

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riffy

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riffy 2016-04-19T17:37:13+00:00

Приветствую.

[General]

Сториборда очень тормозит, т.к. выводит 3 кадра в секунду. Я слегка исправил бэкграунд, просто замени код этого слоя.

code

//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
Animation,Background,Centre,"SB\sand_.png",320,240,3,100,LoopForever
 M,0,-954,,316,240
 S,0,-954,,1.001032
 F,0,-954,-79,0,1
 F,0,-79,304045,1
 F,0,304045,308045,1,0
 F,0,308045,328281,0
 F,0,328281,328295,0

В теги можно еще закинуть слова collab и collaboration. Ну, думаю понятно зачем.

[Eternity]

Попробуйте тик рейт 2. Слайдеры должны тикать чаще из-за синтезатора, который постоянно на фоне играет.
wajinshu
1. x1.4 спейсинг, который ты используешь ля выделения даунбитов можно увеличить. Скорость невысокая, серклы большие, это даже не ощущается как джамп. Попробуем?
2. 00:15:545 (4,1) - а вот тут можно и побольше, ударные очень резко врываются, можно выделить спейсингом.
3. 00:18:045 (1,2) - а зачем тут джамп? Давай-ка мы его уберем, он совсем рандомно смотрится.
4. 00:32:045 (1) - а вот тут я бы стал следовать вокалам, два слова - два слайдера. example
  Note: 00:34:045 (5) - аналогично.
5. 00:37:795 - такой классный бит синтезатора звучит, я бы точно его отдельным кружочком выделил. Аналогично к последующим.
6. 00:40:795 - 1/1 слайдер не звучит из-за вокалов, которые вмешиваются посередине слайдера и сбивают с толку. Попробуй 1/2 слайдер и серкл.
7. 00:45:045 (3,4) - зря ты куда-то влево ужимаешь, спейсинг визуально неровный, из-за этого выглядит неаккуратно. Попробуй переставить как-нибудь?
8. 00:46:545 (2,3,4) - потести, пожалуйста. Флоу идущий туда-обратно как-то совсем не вписывается. Я бы обычный треугольник сделал.
9. 02:16:045 (1) - очень рандомный изгиб, который никак не коррелирует с музыкой. Пожалуйста, не делай так, если у тебя нет причины для этого.
10. 02:30:045 (1) - давай на два серкла разобьем. Я так понимаю, что тут ты хочешь выделить вокалы, серлы справятся с этим лучше.
11. 02:49:795 (4,1) - стак посреди карты не работает, если ты их используешь, на это нужна причина. И они должны быть логичны, а не одиночный стак просто во имя стака.
  Note: 03:23:545 (2,1) - аналогично
12. 02:52:045 (1,2) - флоу как-то не совсем заходит. После почти линейных паттернов это не сыграется так, как надо. example
Shmiklak
1. 00:47:545 (4,1) - ударные очень сильно звучат, выдели джампом, передвинь (1)
  Note: 00:55:545 (4,1) - аналогично. Если уж делаешь джампы, то на подобных битах они обязаны быть, там такие ударные!
2. 01:03:545 (5,6,7,8,1) - субъективно, но все же, ритм ломается из-за необычного вступления 1/4 ритма. Я бы попробовал как-то погнуть стрим, чтобы это выделить.
  Note: 03:59:545 (6,7,8,9,1) - аналогично
3. 01:12:545 - вот для таких треков выделять вокалы это критично, т.к. на них завязан смысл трека. Поставь сюда серкл, пожалуйста.
  Note: 01:13:545 - и 01:15:295 (3) - итак далее - тут тоже надо было или слайдер начать или серкл. Вот тут можно почитать про то, почему на сильных объектах нужно что-то кликабельное Я не буду сейчас зацикливаться на этом, сам почитай и попробуй потестить карту. Ты почувствуешь, о чем я.
4. 01:43:545 (5,1) - cтаки хороши тогда, когда они умело используются, а не когда ты ставишь один где-то в середине части. Попробуй определиться, если ты их хочешь - ставь равномерно под определенные инструменты или вокалы.
Неплохо, но можно лучше!

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Best of luck!

6th

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6th 2016-04-19T18:24:21+00:00

00:07:045 (3,4) - This could be improved, try moving (4) a bit up
00:10:795 - That spacing might be confusing. Remove that jump or don't make it linear
00:23:045 - How about making it clickable ? It would fit with previous pattern
00:36:045 (1) - Don't make it follow previous flow like that, it's an important new combo
00:41:295 (3,4,5) - Could be more circular http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4966856
00:43:045 (3) - CTRL+H ?
00:45:545 (4) - Make spacing look like before
00:55:045 (3,4) - Don't make them parallel, but as you did here 00:54:045 (1,2) -
01:06:545 - I'd make it clickable
01:12:545 - ^. Vocals + strong beat
01:14:795 (2) - Blanket could be better
01:29:545 - make it clickable again, etc
01:43:045 (3,4,5) - ctrl+G
02:29:045 (5) - Make it follow cursor movement
03:28:045 (1) - Move to (x;279)
04:08:952 - Could look better
04:15:170 - Make spacing look like before or make a real jump
04:50:545 (2) - Please space (1) and (2) more
05:02:045 (1,2,3,4) - It doesn't have any structure, make a pattern (square or whatever you want)

Good luck. Nice map !

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