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Angerfist - Knock Knock

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6th
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6th
Hey !

[Shadren]
01:22:760 (1,2) - I made them closer because of the "break", it's still pretty readable.

[Imakuri]
seems like you didn't link anything when you talked about the grid ): also the pattern, even if it's unusual, is actually playable and harsh, which represents the music.

[collector7]
Thanks!

[NewPlayer]
Why should I use curves ? red points make the sliders harsh, which is basically what I wanted.
00:14:995 (1) - Let's not add blanket for nothing ): the actual pattern uses symmetry so it's pretty enough.
00:19:230 (2,3,1) - Your suggestion would make the flow way more sharp than needed tho. The difference between 00:19:230 (2) - and 00:20:642 (1) - is because of NC
00:31:583 (3) - It gives (1) more impact.

[100bit]
00:48:877 (1,2,3,4) - What does "antiflow" mean ? The actual flow is harsh, which represents the music.
01:28:407 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Thank you !
Shmiklak
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Shmiklak
oops. Pls remove this kd
Zerss
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Zerss

Shmiklak wrote:

oops. Pls remove this kd
ask a qat
for the mod: the pattern seems ok to me
vanucik
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vanucik

Shmiklak wrote:

oops. Pls remove this kd
Когда ранкнешь эту карту?
Shmiklak
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vanucik5656 wrote:

Shmiklak wrote:

oops. Pls remove this kd
When will you rank this map?
Well idk. Will try after ranking my Sergey Lazarev
vanucik
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vanucik

Shmiklak wrote:

vanucik5656 wrote:

When will you rank this map?
Well idk. Will try after ranking my Sergey Lazarev
но она уже почти как готова :(
Shmiklak
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100bit wrote:

Hey, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

  1. В описании поправь "bt 6th" на "by 6th"
  2. Добавь "dance" в Tags ибо хардкор является поджанром Hard Dance
  3. Перенеси превью на тик, т.е. на 00:27:348

Normal

  1. 00:06:877 (2,3) - звучит странно, можно попробовать сделать как на %пикче%, есть ещё пара таких же моментов сложно будет
  2. 00:20:642 (1,2) - флоу поправь, ибо дальше флоу верный все норм с флоу для меня
  3. 00:26:289 - можно ноту добавить, там как раз последний ритм стоит нельзя
  4. 00:43:230 (1) - перенеси последнюю точку на x=416 y=276 для более лучшего бланкета
  5. 00:43:230 (1,2) - тут тоже можно бланкет пофиксить
  6. 00:53:113 (4,5) - и тут
  7. 01:02:995 (1) - чуть левее для более лучшего флоу, а то направо ушло от слайдера или ты налево не ходишь? такая идея

Collab Hard

  1. Про флоу постараюсь ничего не говорить, ибо...

    Namki wrote:

    Флоу, флоу, флоу. Это всё субьективщина — флоу не фиксится, ибо пока для одного оно будет идеальным, для другого же наоборот ужасным.
Shmiklak
  1. 00:42:877 (4,2) - оверлап и выглядит странно а мне каеф
  2. 01:28:054 (4,1) - чуть ближе друг к другу как на 01:30:525 (3,4,1) не вижу нужды
  3. 01:32:642 (1,2) - слайдеры просто сломали всю карту. Можно на что-нибудь заменить или поставить четыре слайдера вместо двух. посмотрим что скажут бн
Chiyuyu
  1. 00:19:583 (3,1) - выглядит немного странно, можно стакнуть... или ещё что-нибудь норм все
  2. 00:26:289 - можно ноту добавить, там как раз последний ритм стоит нельзя
  3. 00:51:701 (5) - можно сделать нью комбо, как раз маппер коллаба сменился и киаи закончился
  4. 00:57:348 (4,1) - стакни, ибо ты стакнул такой же паттерн на 00:59:819 (4,1) где же он такой же. Плюс это можно считать как кастом стак
Namki
  1. 01:14:289 (1,2) - поправь бланкет
  2. 01:20:289 (2,3) - ^ (по желанию маппера)
  3. Вроде всё.
Удачи!
{end of mod}
allein
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allein
mentally bubbled!

good luck
owo
Shmiklak
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ok
vanucik
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vanucik
insane
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Shauma
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Shauma
How the flying f this isn't ranked yet?
Pentori
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Joined November 2015
Pentori
hi

[General]
ununsed files: Angerfist - Knock Knock (M a r v o l o).osb white.png

ur bg is an awkward aspect ratio

storyboard is kinda lame.. im sure you could put some effort in to make it more interesting in kiais like change colour and pulse more or something idk im not a storyboarder

the red combo colour seems really out of place as well. i guess it would make sense to use red in kiai because hes angry so you could do some colourhaxing but when you blend it with the blues it doesn't really make sense

how come u only put claps every 2 beats? i hear them every beat in the section beginning at 00:17:819

[6th's Easy]
ar 3.5 is unecessary, most rhythms are really slow
00:00:878 - conflicting volume on these timing lines
00:02:289 (2,3) - copy paste 00:00:878 (1,2) - and move it to where you want for a straight line cos right now its uneven
00:51:701 (4,1) - swap ncs
00:57:348 (3) - can u move this a bit to the left so it looks like its in the centre
01:26:995 (3,1) - compared to ur other sliders these two seem in no way connected to each other. can u try make one flow into the other

[Normal]
00:02:289 - dont u want this to be clickable? being the downbeat its way more important than 00:01:936
00:04:760 (2) - same for rest
00:56:642 (2) - this isn't 1/3, the sound is on the blue tick 00:56:907 - so it'd be better to use a reverse slider for this rhythm
01:24:877 (3,1) - try avoid overlaps in normal as it isn't really appropriate for the difficulty

[Collab Hard]
00:45:348 (3,4) - better to not use extended sliders when there are beats on red ticks here 00:45:525
00:53:819 (6,7) - ^
01:07:760 - drag the break forward to where it would normally end
01:32:642 (1,2) - these are really confusing imo and i'd only use them in rare situations which this isn't one of them

[Vanucik's Insane]
00:08:466 (4,5,6) - kills flow since you had the back and forth pattern at 00:07:936 (1,2,3,4,5) - but then switch to linear flow. its better to continue that flow pattern
00:23:819 (1) - remove nc
01:25:230 (1) - doesn't need nc since you haven't manipulated sv
01:30:525 (8,9) - i'd try space this out more because it looks like 1/2 spacing

[MKL's Danger]
00:07:407 (5) - dominant beat is on slider's end so it'd play better to have that clicked
00:10:230 (5) - ^ same for rest of these
00:38:642 (5) - you nc'ed group of 4's so why not nc this
00:37:936 (1) - or you could just remove the nc here
00:50:054 (2) - probably is more preferable to have this nc'ed instead of 00:49:936 (1) - since 00:50:054 (2) - is the beat on the 1/3
01:01:583 (1) - any specific reason why you chose 1/12 here? 1/16 does the job better since it's the fastest osu has

good luck
Shmiklak
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rip
vanucik
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Shmiklak wrote:

rip
ha
Makeli
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Makeli

Pentori wrote:

hi - hi
[MKL's Danger]
00:07:407 (5) - dominant beat is on slider's end so it'd play better to have that clicked
00:10:230 (5) - ^ same for rest of these - isn't it quite obvious why i did this? I start to follow the melody or whatever that thing is cause that's the most prominent thing here
00:38:642 (5) - you nc'ed group of 4's so why not nc this - f
00:37:936 (1) - or you could just remove the nc here
00:50:054 (2) - probably is more preferable to have this nc'ed instead of 00:49:936 (1) - since 00:50:054 (2) - is the beat on the 1/3 - hm i don't think so. This is just a basic 1/3, 1/6 pattern. I think it's just confusing for the modder cause of that 1/6. If it was a 1/3 slider it would be a different thing but there are 1/6 sounds so. Also NC on the white tick is more comfortable for me so
01:01:583 (1) - any specific reason why you chose 1/12 here? 1/16 does the job better since it's the fastest osu has - ok w/e
danks

http://puu.sh/rqMX2/fd1806a5d2.osu
Zerss
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Zerss
where's my diff /me runs

anyway, here's a bg with a correct-ratio, since the modder didn't gave you one, dunno why haha
Shmiklak
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im going to remap the set. I'll add new extra and hard/normal will be gds so Pentori's mod cannot be answered, though the diffs which I kept were answered :3
A r M i N
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A r M i N
H A R D B A S S B L Y A T
Shmiklak
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всегда знал что ты русская девочка волшебница а не фашист
vanucik
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A r M i N wrote:

H A R D B A S S B L Y A T
раз раз раз это хардбасс
все в спортивках адидас
и на найках пацаны
слушают хардбасс бассы
Zerss
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Zerss
tru
A r M i N
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A r M i N
Pls
Write
In
English
Language
Yes?
Ty
:(

Map this next https://youtu.be/QiFBgtgUtfw ?
Or boshka bass kobaser
Shmiklak
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Зачем писать на английском если ты русская девочка
A r M i N
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A r M i N

M a r v o l l o wrote:

Зачем писать на английском если ты русская девочка
Am i a cute girl at least?
Shmiklak
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Нет, ты фашистская уродина
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