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Shiena Nishizawa - The Asterisk War (TV Size) [OsuMania]

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pnx
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 กุมภาพันธ์ 2560 at 0:35:34

Artist: Shiena Nishizawa
Title: The Asterisk War (TV Size)
Source: 学戦都市アスタリスク 2
Tags: Gakusen Toshi Asterisk The Academy City on the Water 2nd second season J-Pop
BPM: 143
Filesize: 15800kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Asterisk - 4Key (4.37 stars, 1119 notes)
  2. Easy - 4Key (1.15 stars, 182 notes)
  3. Hard - 4Key (2.97 stars, 613 notes)
  4. Normal - 4Key (1.94 stars, 397 notes)
Download: Shiena Nishizawa - The Asterisk War (TV Size)
Download: Shiena Nishizawa - The Asterisk War (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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"My star will shine forever..."



Gakusen Toshi Asterisk 2nd Season Opening
4K Mapset




[Information]
Easy by me
(OD : 7 | HP 7 )
Normal by me
(OD : 7.5 | HP 7.5 )
Hard by me
(OD : 8 | HP 8 )
Asterisk by me
(OD : 8.5 | HP 8.5)


NOTECHART 100% | HITSOUND 0% | Ready for Mod

[Special Thanks]
FreeezeForward
RedBall
No_sync
erlinadewi-
xXLuziFerzXx
-Ryuki-
Raveille
Dellvangel
Nivrad00
ArmatoGamesZ

Changelog

  • 4 Apr
  1. Modded by FreeezeForward
  2. Just removed Extra Diff
  3. Fixed some note in Normal
  4. Fixed some timing
  5. Modded by RedBall

    5 Apr
  6. Updated some SVs in Easy and Normal
  7. Modded by No_sync
  8. Modded by erlinadewi-

    6 Apr
  9. Modded by -Ryuki-
  10. Changed background

    7 Apr
  11. Added LuziFerz's Normal+
    ***Gap Purpose

    10 Apr
  12. Modded by Raveille
  13. Modded by Dellvangel

    8 May
  14. Modded by Nivrad00

    12 May
  15. Remapped Asterisk

    23 May
  16. Modded by ArmatoGamesZ

    15 June
  17. Edited all Difficulties and remove LuziFerz's Normal+ Difficulty

    20 June
  18. Edited Asterisk Difficulty, More fun~
Last edited by pnx , edited 72 times in total.
Frizu
131 posts
Joined February 2014
Frizu

F4W's Modding Notice

*From F4W's Mania Modding Queue


These following mods are just suggestions but mostly are recommended. If you reject some (all) of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand.

1|2|3|4

Metadata
  1. Artist: Change "Shiena Nishizawa" to "西沢幸奏" for this is her kanji name.
  2. Source: Change "Gakusen Toshi Asterisk 2nd Season" to "学戦都市アスタリスク 2" for this is the kanji form.
  3. Difficulties: Change "~Asterisk~ Extra" to "Extra" for metadata purposes. It is useless to add "~Asterisk~" and normally this is unrankable.
  4. Overall Difficulty (OD): Easy must be 7 not 8; Insane must be 8 not 8.1 for it is too harsh to Insane players. Even though it is same as Hard it doesn't matter it is still rankable.
  5. HP Drain (HP): Insane must be 8.2 not 8.5; ~Asterisk~ Extra must be 8.5 not 9. Still it's too harsh for players and same as above.
  6. Design: Check the box on Widescreen support on Normal and Hard difficulties, since there is a video provided.
  7. Hitsounds: Add hitsounds, because it's a ranking criteria.

Easy
  1. 00:14:647 (14647|2,14752|1,14857|3,14962|0,15067|2) - Nerf this part (It means try to create much easier patterns), too harsh for Easy players.
  2. 00:22:410 (22410|2,22515|1,22724|3,22829|0) - Nerf or delete this, same as above.
  3. 00:24:088 (24088|3,24193|2,24403|0,24508|3) - Same as above.
  4. 00:25:766 (25766|0,25871|2,26081|3,26186|0) - Same as above.
  5. 00:29:123 (29123|2,29228|3,29438|1,29543|0) - Nerf this part, too hard for Easy players.
  6. 00:30:801 (30801|0,30906|1,31116|3,31221|2) - Same as above.
  7. 00:32:480 (32480|3,32585|1,32794|0,32899|3) - Nerf or delete, too harsh for Easy players.
  8. 01:02:899 (62899|3,63109|2,63319|1,63529|2) - Nerf this part, same as above.
  9. 01:14:543 (74543|1,74752|3,74962|0,75067|2,75277|1) - Same as above.
  10. 01:15:487 (75487|3,75696|2,75906|0,76116|1) - Same as above.
  11. 01:17:794 (77794|1) - Delete, for note consistency.
  12. 01:19:473 (79473|3) - Same as above.
  13. 01:23:039 (83039|1) - Same as above.
  14. 01:23:179 (83179|2) - Change it's slider start to 01:23:039

Normal
  1. 00:08:983 (8983|2,9088|3) - Move to 4 and 1 respectively, for hand balance.
  2. 00:10:976 (10976|3,11081|1,11186|2,11291|0) - Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H) for hand balance.
  3. 00:14:333 (14333|0,14438|2,14543|3,14647|1,14752|2,14857|0,14962|1) - Nerf this part, too harsh for Normal players.
  4. 00:20:941 (20941|2,21046|3,21151|1,21256|2,21361|0,21466|1,21571|3,21675|2) - Same as above.
  5. 00:24:508 (24508|1,24717|3) - Move to 4 and 3 respectively, for hand balance.
  6. 00:56:291 (56291|3,56291|0,56396|2,56501|1,56606|3,56710|0,56815|2,56920|1) - Nerf this part, too harsh for Normal players.
  7. 01:02:899 (62899|2,63004|3,63109|1,63214|2,63319|0,63424|1,63529|3,63634|2) - Same as above.
  8. 01:09:508 (69508|0,69613|1) - Switch columns (Ctrl+G) for hand balance.
  9. 01:12:969 (72969|1,73074|3,73179|2,73284|0,73389|1,73494|2,73599|3,73703|1,73808|0) - Nerf this part, too harsh for Normal players.
  10. 01:19:473 (79473|0) - Move to 2, for hand balance.

Hard
  1. 00:08:983 (8983|3,9088|0) - Flip Horizontally, for hand balance.
  2. 00:54:927 (54927|3) - Move to 3, for hand balance.

Insane
  1. 00:11:606 (11606|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance.
  2. 00:35:207 Add to 1, for note density.
  3. 01:13:389 (73389|1,73494|0) - Switch columns, for hand balance.

~Asterisk~ Extra
  1. All I can say is: This is quite overmapped. Starting at the 00:41:920 onwards beats are not there but there is a note, kindly nerf in these parts. Same as 01:19:263 it has a lot of useless anchor notes, kindly change or repattern if possible. Also there are a lot of changes in snap, I didn't even see clearly the transition of the snaps because of the notes.

Hmm, new anime to watch. Also don't forget to mod my map.
Kindly reply as soon as possible prior to my mod post above. If there are any questions related to this post, just ask. Happy Modding =w=)b
pnx
387 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
pnx

FreeezeForward wrote:

F4W's Modding Notice

*From F4W's Mania Modding Queue


These following mods are just suggestions but mostly are recommended. If you reject some (all) of my mods, kindly explain it so I can understand.

1|2|3|4

Metadata
  1. Artist: Change "Shiena Nishizawa" to "西沢幸奏" for this is her kanji name.
  2. Source: Change "Gakusen Toshi Asterisk 2nd Season" to "学戦都市アスタリスク 2" for this is the kanji form.
  3. Difficulties: Change "~Asterisk~ Extra" to "Extra" for metadata purposes. It is useless to add "~Asterisk~" and normally this is unrankable.
  4. Overall Difficulty (OD): Easy must be 7 not 8; Insane must be 8 not 8.1 for it is too harsh to Insane players. Even though it is same as Hard it doesn't matter it is still rankable.
  5. HP Drain (HP): Insane must be 8.2 not 8.5; ~Asterisk~ Extra must be 8.5 not 9. Still it's too harsh for players and same as above.
  6. Design: Check the box on Widescreen support on Normal and Hard difficulties, since there is a video provided.
  7. Hitsounds: Add hitsounds, because it's a ranking criteria.

Easy
  1. 00:14:647 (14647|2,14752|1,14857|3,14962|0,15067|2) - Nerf this part (It means try to create much easier patterns), too harsh for Easy players.
  2. 00:22:410 (22410|2,22515|1,22724|3,22829|0) - Nerf or delete this, same as above.
  3. 00:24:088 (24088|3,24193|2,24403|0,24508|3) - Same as above.
  4. 00:25:766 (25766|0,25871|2,26081|3,26186|0) - Same as above.
  5. 00:29:123 (29123|2,29228|3,29438|1,29543|0) - Nerf this part, too hard for Easy players.
  6. 00:30:801 (30801|0,30906|1,31116|3,31221|2) - Same as above.
  7. 00:32:480 (32480|3,32585|1,32794|0,32899|3) - Nerf or delete, too harsh for Easy players.
  8. 01:02:899 (62899|3,63109|2,63319|1,63529|2) - Nerf this part, same as above.
  9. 01:14:543 (74543|1,74752|3,74962|0,75067|2,75277|1) - Same as above.
  10. 01:15:487 (75487|3,75696|2,75906|0,76116|1) - Same as above.
  11. 01:17:794 (77794|1) - Delete, for note consistency.
  12. 01:19:473 (79473|3) - Same as above.
  13. 01:23:039 (83039|1) - Same as above.
  14. 01:23:179 (83179|2) - Change it's slider start to 01:23:039
ALL APPLIED

Normal
  1. 00:08:983 (8983|2,9088|3) - Move to 4 and 1 respectively, for hand balance.
  2. 00:10:976 (10976|3,11081|1,11186|2,11291|0) - Flip Horizontally (Ctrl+H) for hand balance.
  3. 00:14:333 (14333|0,14438|2,14543|3,14647|1,14752|2,14857|0,14962|1) - Nerf this part, too harsh for Normal players.
  4. 00:20:941 (20941|2,21046|3,21151|1,21256|2,21361|0,21466|1,21571|3,21675|2) - Same as above.
  5. 00:24:508 (24508|1,24717|3) - Move to 4 and 3 respectively, for hand balance.
  6. 00:56:291 (56291|3,56291|0,56396|2,56501|1,56606|3,56710|0,56815|2,56920|1) - Nerf this part, too harsh for Normal players.
  7. 01:02:899 (62899|2,63004|3,63109|1,63214|2,63319|0,63424|1,63529|3,63634|2) - Same as above.
  8. 01:09:508 (69508|0,69613|1) - Switch columns (Ctrl+G) for hand balance.
  9. 01:12:969 (72969|1,73074|3,73179|2,73284|0,73389|1,73494|2,73599|3,73703|1,73808|0) - Nerf this part, too harsh for Normal players. Hmm... Later
  10. 01:19:473 (79473|0) - Move to 2, for hand balance.

Hard
  1. 00:08:983 (8983|3,9088|0) - Flip Horizontally, for hand balance.
  2. 00:54:927 (54927|3) - Move to 3, for hand balance.
ALL APPLIED

Insane
  1. 00:11:606 (11606|1) - Move to 4, for hand balance.
  2. 00:35:207 Add to 1, for note density. Nope
  3. 01:13:389 (73389|1,73494|0) - Switch columns, for hand balance.

~Asterisk~ Extra
  1. All I can say is: This is quite overmapped. Starting at the 00:41:920 onwards beats are not there but there is a note, kindly nerf in these parts. Same as 01:19:263 it has a lot of useless anchor notes, kindly change or repattern if possible. Also there are a lot of changes in snap, I didn't even see clearly the transition of the snaps because of the notes.
I might remapped this soon...

Hmm, new anime to watch. Also don't forget to mod my map.
Kindly reply as soon as possible prior to my mod post above. If there are any questions related to this post, just ask. Happy Modding =w=)b
Frizu
131 posts
Joined February 2014
Frizu
What can you say about the metadata?
pnx
387 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
pnx

FreeezeForward wrote:

What can you say about the metadata?
Oh! I see I forgot to say about metadata. I applied all of that, I was very satisfy with that cuz It quite great!
Thanks again!
RedBall
132 posts
Joined September 2015
RedBall
Hello~ I'm from your queue!

Here's M4M req~

+I'm a beginner in modding, so it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Easy
01:00:801 (60801|3) - move to column 3? (Isn't it hard for Easy? This pattern also appears later on, but, those ones are fit for the pattern because of the mood or smth else)

That's all to say about this diff. I think it's nice enough!

Normal
01:08:878 (68878|2) - delete (Is there drum sound?)
01:18:319 - add one note (missing note. Reference - 01:19:787 (79787|1,79787|0,79892|2,79997|0,80102|3,80102|1) )
01:21:361 - add one note? (If it is intended, it's ok)

Hard
00:14:962 (14962|0) - Double? (sound is similar as 00:14:857 (14857|2,14857|3) this one. But, if it's intended, it's ok)
00:21:046 (21046|2,21046|3) - Single? (sound is smaller than 00:20:836 (20836|2,20836|3) this one. But, if it's intended, it's ok)
00:58:494 (58494|0) - Is it intended? There's no drum sound (If you followed mood, how about add one note on 01:01:727 ?)
01:09:508 (69508|0,69508|2) - change it to single and 01:09:717 change it to double (I think 01:09:717 is stronger)
01:23:039 (83039|1,83039|2,83179|3,83319|2,83459|1,83459|0,83599|2,83599|3,83738|0,83738|1) - I think this part is 1/4

Asterisk
00:51:046 - Double (If you check Hard diff, this part is double following bigger drum sound)
00:53:773 (53773|3) - Double (Same as 00:52:095 (52095|0,52095|1) ?)
01:04:053 - add one note on column 4 (missing note. If you check hard diff, there's a note following drum sound)
01:06:571 - add one note (^)
01:08:039 (68039|1) - change it to double AND 01:08:039 (68039|1) - change it to single (following drum sound)

I love your mapset :D Song is also nice~ take my star!

Also, thank you for modding my mapset!
pnx
387 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
pnx

RedBall wrote:

Hello~ I'm from your queue!

Here's M4M req~

+I'm a beginner in modding, so it may not be helpful to you. Then, feel free to reject and don't give me kudosu!

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

Easy
01:00:801 (60801|3) - move to column 3? (Isn't it hard for Easy? This pattern also appears later on, but, those ones are fit for the pattern because of the mood or smth else) Fixed

That's all to say about this diff. I think it's nice enough!

Normal
01:08:878 (68878|2) - delete (Is there drum sound?)
01:18:319 - add one note (missing note. Reference - 01:19:787 (79787|1,79787|0,79892|2,79997|0,80102|3,80102|1) )
01:21:361 - add one note? (If it is intended, it's ok)
All Applied!

Hard
00:14:962 (14962|0) - Double? (sound is similar as 00:14:857 (14857|2,14857|3) this one. But, if it's intended, it's ok) Fixed
00:21:046 (21046|2,21046|3) - Single? (sound is smaller than 00:20:836 (20836|2,20836|3) this one. But, if it's intended, it's ok)Fixed
00:58:494 (58494|0) - Is it intended? There's no drum sound (If you followed mood, how about add one note on 01:01:727 ?)
01:09:508 (69508|0,69508|2) - change it to single and 01:09:717 change it to double (I think 01:09:717 is stronger)
01:23:039 (83039|1,83039|2,83179|3,83319|2,83459|1,83459|0,83599|2,83599|3,83738|0,83738|1) - I think this part is 1/4
All Applied!

Asterisk
00:51:046 - Double (If you check Hard diff, this part is double following bigger drum sound)
00:53:773 (53773|3) - Double (Same as 00:52:095 (52095|0,52095|1) ?)
01:04:053 - add one note on column 4 (missing note. If you check hard diff, there's a note following drum sound)
01:06:571 - add one note (^)
01:08:039 (68039|1) - change it to double AND 01:08:039 (68039|1) - change it to single (following drum sound) You might write wrong timing. So, I'm confused with this part of mod
All Applied!

I love your mapset :D Song is also nice~ take my star!
Thanks >,<

Also, thank you for modding my mapset!
No_sync
380 posts
Joined November 2014
No_sync
Hi from your M4M Queue

0|1|2|3


General
test-Play:
Easy: http://i.imgur.com/rrOgLqg.jpg
Normal: http://i.imgur.com/fimqRSC.jpg
Hard: http://i.imgur.com/Wjm1Vcn.jpg
Asterisk: http://i.imgur.com/6PcknpG.jpg
^^ My keyboard/PC or the game needs a hard format (or one-punchs) (no seriously i get 100 disk usage every "x" time T_T is like windows 95 and i get 10 -.-)
leaving that behind, the SV before starts the kiai ... is tricky.

Offset: 1651.
yeah, just try it.

About the Background... there are 4 girls, right? ...Put them! is an order!! (+Fit with diffs /runs)
(many) Suggestions:

Easy: http://i.imgur.com/3ILaaKI.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/WRiSN0F.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/0xkl8pG.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/iRNzlFD.jpg
Normal: http://i.imgur.com/HjYUikv.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/YdEWzMU.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/OTb0oNZ.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/UJ66YtI.jpg
Hard: http://i.imgur.com/5kSThiF.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/8bf8VM6.jpg ._. | http://i.imgur.com/lonYwAk.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/EBlUjoJ.jpg oh...
Asterisk: http://i.imgur.com/NEUYmVe.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/bmE4rJU.jpg | or the current one! (nice BG)

Easy
About the three first noteS they are ok. But you can do something with LNs too:
00:01:625 (1625|1) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:02:464 Or 00:02:044 ...
00:03:303 (3303|0) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:142 Or 00:03:722 ...
00:04:142 (4142|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:981 Or 00:04:562 ...

This the 4th note here have a sound "very long"
00:04:981 (4981|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:06:659.

00:07:079 (7079|0) - Sound effect here. Put a LongNote in |1| to 00:07:499.

00:07:499 (7499|3,7918|2) - These two: if you follow the LongNoteS above mentioned,
00:07:499 (7499|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:07:918.
00:07:918 (7918|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:08:338.

00:08:338 (8338|0) - Because here changes the calm rhythm of the song (and even SV change!)
idk because the diff level but you can Add in |1| a Note.

00:14:631 (14631|3) - Here is a "irritated" sound-effect but starts in 00:14:422 and ends in 00:14:841 (or extend to your current
end of LN), your choice.

00:21:135 (21135|1) - ^^ the "irritated" sound-effect again here... starts here and finish in 00:21:555 or 00:21:764.
and about the noteS here: 00:21:345 (21345|3,21555|2) - Erase them.

00:21:764 (21764|0) - ? what is the sound here?, You can Replace with another DoubleNote for the change in the rhythm again (00:08:338) in |0|1|
Or Replace the LongNote with a Note.
Wait now i see- you put those LN for the Drum sound in the end? Oh nvm these things then :) B u t . . .

00:23:443 (23443|0) - ^^ mentioned above... *but* these will do difficult the song, Replace with a Note.

00:25:121 (25121|3) - ^^ same.

00:26:799 (26799|1) - ^^ same.

00:27:638 (27638|2,28058|0) - Thumbs up. lol

00:28:478 (28478|3) - ^^ mentioned above, increase the difficulty of the song...

00:30:156 (30156|3) - ^^ same.

00:31:834 (31834|0) - ^^ same.

00:33:513 (33513|2) - ^^ This will be the same of above or maybe follows the vocal (not all but almost all) ... hmmm. you decide.

00:34:352 (34352|3,34771|0) - ;D

00:35:191 (35191|2) - That is finish hitsound i think, you can leave it, or Replace with a LongNote to 00:35:820 ...

00:35:820 (35820|0) - Calm "piano?" sound, Replace with a LongNote to 00:36:240.

00:36:869 (36869|3) - ^^ same calm sound, Replace with a LongNote to 00:37:289.

00:37:499 (37499|1) - You can leave this like that, but there are a sound effect here... Replace with a LongNote to 00:38:548.

00:38:548 (38548|0) - ^^ same calm sound, Replace with a LongNote to 00:38:967.

00:40:226 (40226|1) - i hear a "rururu" thing sound very low... Leave it, or Replace with a LongNote to 00:40:645 orrr 00:40:855...Because

00:40:855 (40855|3) - ^^ follows here, Replace with a LongNote to 00:41:694 (because the change of rhythm again)

00:48:198 - Here the sound-effect before the SV, you can put 2 LongNoteS in |1|2| to 00:48:618.

00:50:296 to 01:13:792 - This part is a bit (with the LongNoteS) calm? because i need hear the drums right? xD
Yeah is true there are a ton of sounds in the background and fill with noteS increase the diff but... my suggestion:
Erase all those LongNoteS and put this SingleNoteS (and Evade put "jack" things with this):
00:50:296 - DoubleNote here, Replace the LongNote.
00:51:135 - Note in |0| or |2|
00:51:974 - Note in |2| or |3|
00:52:813 - Note |1| or |2|
00:53:652 - Note |0| or |1|
00:54:492 - Note |1| or |3|
00:55:331 - Note |2| or |3|
00:56:170 - Note |1| or |3|
00:57:009 - Note |0| or |1| <- Maybe DoubleNote too...
00:57:848 - Note |0| or |1|
00:58:687 - Note |0| or |2|
00:59:527 - Note |2| or |3|
01:00:366 - Note |1| or |3|
01:01:205 - Note |0| or |3|
01:02:044 - Note |0| or |2|
01:03:722 - DoubleNote here |2|3|
01:04:562 - Note |1| or |2|
01:05:401 - Note |1| or |2|
01:06:240 - Note |2| or |3|
01:07:079 - Note |0| or |2|
01:07:918 - Note |0| or |2|
01:08:757 - Note |0| or |3|
01:09:597 - Note |1| or |3|
01:10:436 - Note |1| or |2| <- Maybe DoubleNote too...
01:11:275 - Note |1| or |2|
01:12:114 - Note |2| or |3|
01:12:953 - Note |0| or |2|

01:16:310 (76310|2,76729|3) - Leave it or Replace with 01:16:310 (76310|2) - a Note and Move to |0|, 01:16:729 (76729|3) - a Note.

01:17:149 to 01:22:184 - This part is like the 00:08:338 to 00:21:764, but more short and with LongNoteS
if you erase the LongNoteS in 00:50:296 to 01:13:792, erase here too:
01:17:149 (77149|0) - Replace with a Note.
01:18:827 (78827|2) - Move to |0|, Replace with a Note.
01:19:247 (79247|1) - Move to |2|.
01:19:562 (79562|0) - Move to |1|.
01:20:086 (80086|1) - Move to |0|.
01:20:506 (80506|1) - Move to |2|, Replace with a Note.
01:20:925 (80925|0) - Move to |1|.
01:22:184 (82184|2) - Move to |1|.
01:22:604 (82604|1) - Move to |2|.
01:23:023 (83023|2) - Move to |0| and Add a Note in |1|.
01:23:443 (83443|0,83652|3) - Ctrl+H
01:23:862 (83862|2,83862|1) - 2 DoubleNoteS |1|2| here to 01:24:282?? <-end.

I like the distance between the noteS, for a Easy was good to see that.

Normal
00:00:785 (785|2) - Sound Effect. Put a LongNote to 00:01:625

Like Easy but...:
About the three first noteS they are ok. But you can do something with LNs too:
00:01:625 (1625|1) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:02:464 Or 00:02:044 ... Move to |3|
00:03:303 (3303|0) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:142 Or 00:03:722 ... Move to |1|
00:04:142 (4142|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:981 Or 00:04:562 ... Move to |2|

This the 4th note here have a sound "very long"
00:04:981 (4981|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:06:659. Move to |3|

00:07:079 (7079|0) - Sound effect here. Put a LongNote in |3| to 00:07:499.

00:07:499 (7499|3,7918|2) - These two: if you follow the LongNoteS above mentioned,
00:07:499 (7499|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:07:918. Move to |2|
00:07:918 (7918|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:08:338. Move to |1|

00:14:631 (14631|3) - The "irritated" sound continues to 00:15:051... Erase the SingleNoteS and put a LongNote there and only stay: 2 LongNoteS there with a Note in the end...

00:16:310 (16310|3) - LongNote in Easy but not here... and hear a sound there, Move to |2|, Replace with a LongNote to 00:16:729.

00:18:198 - Put a Note in |2|

00:21:345 (21345|0) - The "irritated" sound continues to 00:21:764...Erase the SingleNoteS and put a LongNote there and only stay: 3 LongNoteS there with a Note in the end...

00:21:764 (21764|0) - ^^ 3 LongNoteS? more like 2 ... Replace this with a SingleNote.

00:34:142 - In Easy diff there are a Note here... why not in Normal?

01:23:862 - See Easy in the final...

Stairs ftw! if my pc dont be so bad right now... but i enjoy it!
Hard
For hard too: (Put 2 LongNoteS) 00:00:785 (785|2) - Sound Effect. Put a LongNote to 00:01:625
For hard too: (like Easy and Normal just change the LongNoteS for |0|1| lanes only or |2|3| increase the diff.)

About the three first noteS they are ok. But you can do something with LNs too:
00:01:625 (1625|1) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:02:464 Or 00:02:044 ...
00:03:303 (3303|0) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:142 Or 00:03:722 ...
00:04:142 (4142|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:981 Or 00:04:562 ...

This the 4th note here have a sound "very long"
00:04:981 (4981|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:06:659.

00:07:079 (7079|0) - Sound effect here. Put a LongNote in |1| to 00:07:499.

00:07:499 (7499|3,7918|2) - These two: if you follow the LongNoteS above mentioned,
00:07:499 (7499|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:07:918.
00:07:918 (7918|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:08:338.

00:08:338 (8338|0) - Because here changes the calm rhythm of the song (and even SV change!)
idk because the diff level but you can Add in |1| a Note.

01:23:757 (83757|1,83757|0) - Replace with LongNoteS to 01:24:282 ...

Crazy i like it

Asterisk
00:01:625 (1625|1,1625|2) - One of those for a LongNote, Follow the start things like Easy/Normal/Hard about LongNoteS...

00:06:659 (6659|1) - Good.
00:07:499 (7499|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:07:918.
00:07:918 (7918|0) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:08:338.
00:08:338 (8338|0) - ^^ Erase this Note.

00:42:532 (42532|3,42951|2,43371|1,43791|0,44210|3,44630|1,45049|0,45469|1,45889|0,46308|2,46728|0,47147|2,47567|3) -
Silly but Replace all this for 1/4 LongNoteS... (im crazy and my computer too.)

01:23:757 (83757|2,83757|3) - Extends to 01:24:072. yeah the red line.

More crazy than Hard.
The SVs are the only unexpected thing for me but good job.
Hope this help you! Bye! (+Fav im poor in kudosu T_T)
pnx
387 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
pnx

No_sync wrote:

Hi from your M4M Queue

0|1|2|3


General
test-Play:
Easy: http://i.imgur.com/rrOgLqg.jpg
Normal: http://i.imgur.com/fimqRSC.jpg
Hard: http://i.imgur.com/Wjm1Vcn.jpg
Asterisk: http://i.imgur.com/6PcknpG.jpg
^^ My keyboard/PC or the game needs a hard format (or one-punchs) (no seriously i get 100 disk usage every "x" time T_T is like windows 95 and i get 10 -.-)
leaving that behind, the SV before starts the kiai ... is tricky. Just Like, umm... some challenging lol

Offset: 1651.
yeah, just try it.

About the Background... there are 4 girls, right? ...Put them! is an order!! (+Fit with diffs /runs) I thinks that I wanna use only this background. But, thanks for suggestion.
(many) Suggestions:

Easy: http://i.imgur.com/3ILaaKI.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/WRiSN0F.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/0xkl8pG.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/iRNzlFD.jpg
Normal: http://i.imgur.com/HjYUikv.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/YdEWzMU.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/OTb0oNZ.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/UJ66YtI.jpg
Hard: http://i.imgur.com/5kSThiF.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/8bf8VM6.jpg ._. | http://i.imgur.com/lonYwAk.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/EBlUjoJ.jpg oh...
Asterisk: http://i.imgur.com/NEUYmVe.jpg | http://i.imgur.com/bmE4rJU.jpg | or the current one! (nice BG)

Easy
About the three first noteS they are ok. But you can do something with LNs too:
00:01:625 (1625|1) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:02:464 Or 00:02:044 ...
00:03:303 (3303|0) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:142 Or 00:03:722 ...
00:04:142 (4142|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:981 Or 00:04:562 ...

This the 4th note here have a sound "very long"
00:04:981 (4981|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:06:659.
^^ I will change it in upper difficulties.

00:07:079 (7079|0) - Sound effect here. Put a LongNote in |1| to 00:07:499.

00:07:499 (7499|3,7918|2) - These two: if you follow the LongNoteS above mentioned,
00:07:499 (7499|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:07:918.
00:07:918 (7918|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:08:338.

00:08:338 (8338|0) - Because here changes the calm rhythm of the song (and even SV change!)
idk because the diff level but you can Add in |1| a Note. Applied!

00:14:631 (14631|3) - Here is a "irritated" sound-effect but starts in 00:14:422 and ends in 00:14:841 (or extend to your current
end of LN), your choice. Applied!

00:21:135 (21135|1) - ^^ the "irritated" sound-effect again here... starts here and finish in 00:21:555 or 00:21:764.
and about the noteS here: 00:21:345 (21345|3,21555|2) - Erase them. Appiled

00:21:764 (21764|0) - ? what is the sound here? It sound like bass there., You can Replace with another DoubleNote for the change in the rhythm again (00:08:338) in |0|1|
Or Replace the LongNote with a Note.
Wait now i see- you put those LN for the Drum sound in the end? Oh nvm these things then :) B u t . . .

00:23:443 (23443|0) - ^^ mentioned above... *but* these will do difficult the song, Replace with a Note.

00:25:121 (25121|3) - ^^ same.

00:26:799 (26799|1) - ^^ same.

00:27:638 (27638|2,28058|0) - Thumbs up. lol

00:28:478 (28478|3) - ^^ mentioned above, increase the difficulty of the song...

00:30:156 (30156|3) - ^^ same.

00:31:834 (31834|0) - ^^ same.

00:33:513 (33513|2) - ^^ This will be the same of above or maybe follows the vocal (not all but almost all) ... hmmm. you decide.

00:34:352 (34352|3,34771|0) - ;D

00:35:191 (35191|2) - That is finish hitsound i think, you can leave it, or Replace with a LongNote to 00:35:820 ...

00:35:820 (35820|0) - Calm "piano?" sound, Replace with a LongNote to 00:36:240.

00:36:869 (36869|3) - ^^ same calm sound, Replace with a LongNote to 00:37:289.

00:37:499 (37499|1) - You can leave this like that, but there are a sound effect here... Replace with a LongNote to 00:38:548.

00:38:548 (38548|0) - ^^ same calm sound, Replace with a LongNote to 00:38:967.

00:40:226 (40226|1) - i hear a "rururu" thing sound very low... Leave it, or Replace with a LongNote to 00:40:645 orrr 00:40:855...Because

00:40:855 (40855|3) - ^^ follows here, Replace with a LongNote to 00:41:694 (because the change of rhythm again)

00:48:198 - Here the sound-effect before the SV, you can put 2 LongNoteS in |1|2| to 00:48:618. I add LN in 1 instead of double SV
00:50:296 to 01:13:792 - This part is a bit (with the LongNoteS) calm? because i need hear the drums right? xD
Yeah is true there are a ton of sounds in the background and fill with noteS increase the diff but... my suggestion:
Erase all those LongNoteS and put this SingleNoteS (and Evade put "jack" things with this):
00:50:296 - DoubleNote here, Replace the LongNote.
00:51:135 - Note in |0| or |2|
00:51:974 - Note in |2| or |3|
00:52:813 - Note |1| or |2|
00:53:652 - Note |0| or |1|
00:54:492 - Note |1| or |3|
00:55:331 - Note |2| or |3|
00:56:170 - Note |1| or |3|
00:57:009 - Note |0| or |1| <- Maybe DoubleNote too...
00:57:848 - Note |0| or |1|
00:58:687 - Note |0| or |2|
00:59:527 - Note |2| or |3|
01:00:366 - Note |1| or |3|
01:01:205 - Note |0| or |3|
01:02:044 - Note |0| or |2|
01:03:722 - DoubleNote here |2|3|
01:04:562 - Note |1| or |2|
01:05:401 - Note |1| or |2|
01:06:240 - Note |2| or |3|
01:07:079 - Note |0| or |2|
01:07:918 - Note |0| or |2|
01:08:757 - Note |0| or |3|
01:09:597 - Note |1| or |3|
01:10:436 - Note |1| or |2| <- Maybe DoubleNote too...
01:11:275 - Note |1| or |2|
01:12:114 - Note |2| or |3|
01:12:953 - Note |0| or |2|

01:16:310 (76310|2,76729|3) - Leave it or Replace with 01:16:310 (76310|2) - a Note and Move to |0|, 01:16:729 (76729|3) - a Note.

01:17:149 to 01:22:184 - This part is like the 00:08:338 to 00:21:764, but more short and with LongNoteS
if you erase the LongNoteS in 00:50:296 to 01:13:792, erase here too:
01:17:149 (77149|0) - Replace with a Note.
01:18:827 (78827|2) - Move to |0|, Replace with a Note.
01:19:247 (79247|1) - Move to |2|.
01:19:562 (79562|0) - Move to |1|.
01:20:086 (80086|1) - Move to |0|.
01:20:506 (80506|1) - Move to |2|, Replace with a Note.
01:20:925 (80925|0) - Move to |1|.
01:22:184 (82184|2) - Move to |1|.
01:22:604 (82604|1) - Move to |2|.
01:23:023 (83023|2) - Move to |0| and Add a Note in |1|.
01:23:443 (83443|0,83652|3) - Ctrl+H Nope
01:23:862 (83862|2,83862|1) - 2 DoubleNoteS |1|2| here to 01:24:282?? <-end.

I like the distance between the noteS, for a Easy was good to see that.
I may add another diff instead of making more note in Easy cuz I want this diff to become so Easy that everyone can play it.

Normal
00:00:785 (785|2) - Sound Effect. Put a LongNote to 00:01:625

Like Easy but...:
About the three first noteS they are ok. But you can do something with LNs too:
00:01:625 (1625|1) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:02:464 Or 00:02:044 ... Move to |3|
00:03:303 (3303|0) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:142 Or 00:03:722 ... Move to |1|
00:04:142 (4142|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:981 Or 00:04:562 ... Move to |2|

This the 4th note here have a sound "very long"
00:04:981 (4981|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:06:659. Move to |3|
All Done!
00:07:079 (7079|0) - Sound effect here. Put a LongNote in |3| to 00:07:499.
I gonna start with 00:06:685
00:07:499 (7499|3,7918|2) - These two: if you follow the LongNoteS above mentioned,
00:07:499 (7499|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:07:918. Move to |2|
00:07:918 (7918|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:08:338. Move to |1|

00:14:631 (14631|3) - The "irritated" sound continues to 00:15:051... Erase the SingleNoteS and put a LongNote there and only stay: 2 LongNoteS there with a Note in the end... Fixed!

00:16:310 (16310|3) - LongNote in Easy but not here... and hear a sound there, Move to |2|, Replace with a LongNote to 00:16:729. In Easy, I use two sound to create a note -- Drum and Bass (I use easiest sound in each position). So, In Normal, I decide to use all Drum in this part.

00:18:198 - Put a Note in |2|

00:21:345 (21345|0) - The "irritated" sound continues to 00:21:764...Erase the SingleNoteS and put a LongNote there and only stay: 3 LongNoteS there with a Note in the end... It is finale of this part. So, I want this part to be end with drumstep.

00:21:764 (21764|0) - ^^ 3 LongNoteS? more like 2 ... Replace this with a SingleNote. I wanna make it accords to 00:23:469

00:34:142 - In Easy diff there are a Note here... why not in Normal? Nice caught. Thanks.

01:23:862 - See Easy in the final... This one quite good in Normal.

Stairs ftw! if my pc dont be so bad right now... but i enjoy it!
Hard
For hard too: (Put 2 LongNoteS) 00:00:785 (785|2) - Sound Effect. Put a LongNote to 00:01:625
For hard too: (like Easy and Normal just change the LongNoteS for |0|1| lanes only or |2|3| increase the diff.)

About the three first noteS they are ok. But you can do something with LNs too:
00:01:625 (1625|1) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:02:464 Or 00:02:044 ...
00:03:303 (3303|0) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:142 Or 00:03:722 ...
00:04:142 (4142|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:04:981 Or 00:04:562 ...

This the 4th note here have a sound "very long"
00:04:981 (4981|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:06:659.
Cuz this is first diff that I put double note there. So, I decide to change it in upper diff.
00:07:079 (7079|0) - Sound effect here. Put a LongNote in |1| to 00:07:499.

00:07:499 (7499|3,7918|2) - These two: if you follow the LongNoteS above mentioned,
00:07:499 (7499|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:07:918.
00:07:918 (7918|2) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:08:338.

00:08:338 (8338|0) - Because here changes the calm rhythm of the song (and even SV change!)
idk because the diff level but you can Add in |1| a Note.

01:23:757 (83757|1,83757|0) - Replace with LongNoteS to 01:24:282 ... It might be too hard in Hard. (Or maybe not) -- So, I decide to add in Asterisk Diff.

Crazy i like it

Asterisk
00:01:625 (1625|1,1625|2) - One of those for a LongNote, Follow the start things like Easy/Normal/Hard about LongNoteS...

00:06:659 (6659|1) - Good.
00:07:499 (7499|3) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:07:918.
00:07:918 (7918|0) - Replace with a LongNote to 00:08:338.
00:08:338 (8338|0) - ^^ Erase this Note.

00:42:532 (42532|3,42951|2,43371|1,43791|0,44210|3,44630|1,45049|0,45469|1,45889|0,46308|2,46728|0,47147|2,47567|3) -
Silly but Replace all this for 1/4 LongNoteS... (im crazy and my computer too.) Nice suggestion, I gonna do it. (But I dunno that It mightn't be ranked.) -- Still, I like your idea here.

01:23:757 (83757|2,83757|3) - Extends to 01:24:072. yeah the red line. Fixed!

More crazy than Hard.
The SVs are the only unexpected thing for me but good job.
Hope this help you! Bye! (+Fav im poor in kudosu T_T)
Thanks, I gonna do you mod in this day.
erlinadewi-
1,074 posts
Joined November 2013
erlinadewi-
Hi PnX o/ Mod req via pm

4K coloum 1|2|3|4

[Easy]
00:11:720 (11720|1) - how about move to coloum 3?
00:28:504 - add note for cymbal sound
00:55:776 (55776|0) - coloum 3
00:56:616 (56616|2) - ^ 2
01:12:560 (72560|1,73399|3) - ctrl j

[Normal]
00:27:245 (27245|3) - coloum 3
00:32:595 (32595|1) - ^
00:32:909 (32909|3) - ^
00:34:168 (34168|2,34273|1) - ctrl j for better flow?
01:17:175 - until 01:22:630 - here, why you cover snare sound with double note? but previously you cover with single note. keep the consistency dude.

[Hard]
00:10:147 - why not double note?
00:21:790 - cymbal sound. make it triple or double
00:33:539 (33539|3) - coloum 3
01:15:287 (75287|1,75392|2) - ctrl j

[Asterisk]
00:42:560 (42560|3) - 00:42:979 - 00:43:399 - 00:43:818 - etc.. you can change this LN to single note. more comfortable to play it
01:14:028 (74028|0,74028|1) - how about move to coloum 2 and 3

Free to reject~ i like the Background btw, it's cute >w<

Goodluck. owo)/
pnx
387 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
pnx

erlinadewi- wrote:

Hi PnX o/ Mod req via pm

4K coloum 1|2|3|4

[Easy]
00:11:720 (11720|1) - how about move to coloum 3?
00:28:504 - add note for cymbal sound
00:55:776 (55776|0) - coloum 3
00:56:616 (56616|2) - ^ 2
01:12:560 (72560|1,73399|3) - ctrl j

[Normal]
00:27:245 (27245|3) - coloum 3
00:32:595 (32595|1) - ^
00:32:909 (32909|3) - ^
00:34:168 (34168|2,34273|1) - ctrl j for better flow?
01:17:175 - until 01:22:630 - here, why you cover snare sound with double note? but previously you cover with single note. keep the consistency dude. I change some pattern in that phase. So, It might be okay!

[Hard]
00:10:147 - why not double note?
00:21:790 - cymbal sound. make it triple or double
00:33:539 (33539|3) - coloum 3
01:15:287 (75287|1,75392|2) - ctrl j

[Asterisk]
00:42:560 (42560|3) - 00:42:979 - 00:43:399 - 00:43:818 - etc.. you can change this LN to single note. more comfortable to play it
01:14:028 (74028|0,74028|1) - how about move to coloum 2 and 3

Free to reject~ i like the Background btw, it's cute >w<
All Applied!

Goodluck. owo)/
Thanks!
Rachel
136 posts
Joined May 2015
Rachel
Hello~
from your m4m queue

4k column 1|2|3|4

[Hard]
00:07:525 (7525|0,7525|2,7944|3,7944|1) - ctrl j cos pitch
00:49:063 - LN here for vocal
00:49:483 (49483|0,49902|3,50322|0,50322|2,50427|1) - ctrl h for pitch?

[Asterisk]
00:17:490 - this beat is actually rather strong, double?
00:20:112 - not as strong as 00:20:217 -, maybe reduce it to 1 note
00:20:846 - quite strong here, maybe add at 3
00:49:063 - maybe reduce the SV change and add LN at 3 4 for the vocal part
00:55:671 (55671|1,55671|0,55776|2) - ctrl j
00:58:609 - i hear a drum beat, maybe add at 4
01:09:727 - same as ^
01:15:077 (75077|0,75182|0) - i actually find this hard to execute, maybe try doing something like this?

feel free to reject anything, hope this helps!
this mapset seems fun, good luck!
pnx
387 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
pnx

[ -Ryuki- ] wrote:

Hello~
from your m4m queue

4k column 1|2|3|4

[Hard]
00:07:525 (7525|0,7525|2,7944|3,7944|1) - ctrl j cos pitch applied
00:49:063 - LN here for vocal I don't follow vocal
00:49:483 (49483|0,49902|3,50322|0,50322|2,50427|1) - ctrl h for pitch? Nope

[Asterisk]
00:17:490 - this beat is actually rather strong, double? Nope
00:20:112 - not as strong as 00:20:217 -, maybe reduce it to 1 note Applied
00:20:846 - quite strong here, maybe add at 3 Applied
00:49:063 - maybe reduce the SV change and add LN at 3 4 for the vocal part I'm not follow vocal
00:55:671 (55671|1,55671|0,55776|2) - ctrl j Applied
00:55:671 (55671|0,55671|1,55776|2) - i hear a drum beat, maybe add at 4 Hmm... ???
00:58:609 - i hear a drum beat, maybe add at 4 Applied
01:09:727 - same as ^ Applied
01:15:077 (75077|0,75182|0) - i actually find this hard to execute, maybe try doing something like this? Applied

feel free to reject anything, hope this helps!
this mapset seems fun, good luck!
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Rachel
136 posts
Joined May 2015
Rachel

PnX wrote:

00:55:671 (55671|0,55671|1,55776|2) - i hear a drum beat, maybe add at 4 Hmm... ???
this was an error on my part, ignore this
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Depths
please change your bg, I directly said not use this. changing the color makes no difference
pnx
387 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
pnx

Depths wrote:

please change your bg, I directly said not use this. changing the color makes no difference
okay, I will use normal one instead. Thanks for suggests that.
It's my fault TT
Last edited by pnx , edited 1 time in total.
Depths
681 posts
Joined January 2014
Depths
no, I mean do not use the regular one either, a friend of mine made this bg for me. so pls use a different bg
Yunomi
292 posts
Joined May 2014
Yunomi
I don't give you permission to use my artwork. Please use a different BG.
pnx
387 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
pnx

Adore wrote:

I don't give you permission to use my artwork. Please use a different BG.
oh! I see, sorry about that benighted.
xXLuziFerzXx
xXLuziFerzXx
Finished :D
LuziFerz's Normal+
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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:8
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
Video,-20,"op.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Raveille
787 posts
Joined February 2012
Raveille


Long time no mod. Time to derust and die :D

|1|2|3|4

Easy
01:03:748 - could add another note in 2 or 3 cause of the cymbal
01:23:469 (83469|0,83678|3) - could be doubles for drums
Hard to mod easy maps XD Would say...maybe increase the histound vol a bit since it's the easy diff and the player can follow the hs? Just a suggestion.

Normal
01:03:748 - 1 and 4 double here
01:03:853 - move to 2
01:23:469 - suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4902156

Normal+
01:15:916 - should be a double cause of drum?
01:23:469 - double here too

Hard
01:15:497 (75497|0,75497|3,75602|1,75602|2,75706|0,75706|3) - I hear only guitar sounds in 01:15:497 - and 01:15:602 - , so maybe 01:15:706 (75706|3,75706|0) - should only be 1 note instead of double.

Asterisk
00:14:972 (14972|2,14972|3,15077|2,15182|3) - dead trap here >_> I suggest remove 00:15:077 (15077|2) -
00:35:007 (35007|2,35007|3,35112|2,35112|0,35217|1,35217|3) - this can be avoided too
there were a lot of trills for the left hand too...maybe you wanna take a look at those?

Happy ranking, and good luck :D
pnx
387 posts
Joined July 2013
Topic Starter
pnx

Raveille wrote:



Long time no mod. Time to derust and die :D

|1|2|3|4

Easy
01:03:748 - could add another note in 2 or 3 cause of the cymbal Applied
01:23:469 (83469|0,83678|3) - could be doubles for drums Appiled
Hard to mod easy maps XD Would say...maybe increase the histound vol a bit since it's the easy diff and the player can follow the hs? Just a suggestion.
OK!

Normal
01:03:748 - 1 and 4 double here Appiled
01:03:853 - move to 2 Appiled
01:23:469 - suggestion: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4902156 I wanna use bass there.

Hard
01:15:497 (75497|0,75497|3,75602|1,75602|2,75706|0,75706|3) - I hear only guitar sounds in 01:15:497 - and 01:15:602 - , so maybe 01:15:706 (75706|3,75706|0) - should only be 1 note instead of double. Right, but it's strong sound too. So, I use double note to explicit a strong sound.

Asterisk
00:14:972 (14972|2,14972|3,15077|2,15182|3) - dead trap here >_> I suggest remove 00:15:077 (15077|2) - Just a little trills. It still playable. However, I will think about it later.
00:35:007 (35007|2,35007|3,35112|2,35112|0,35217|1,35217|3) - this can be avoided too
there were a lot of trills for the left hand too...maybe you wanna take a look at those?I move some trills to right for more balance instead.

Happy ranking, and good luck :D Thanks!
Dellvangel
1,269 posts
Joined November 2014
Dellvangel
Interesting song, i'll do random mod for you for the easier diff and the hardest diff.

1|2|3|4
[Easy]
00:11:301 (11301|3,11720|2,12140|3) - i kinda don't like a pattern like this, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4902762 seems better for me.
00:21:790 (21790|0,23469|0) - feels weird when i testplay it, because same col but different pitch, try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4902779 start from 00:23:469 - .
00:28:504 (28504|3,30182|3) - same here, may be try to change it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4902815 start from 00:26:825 - .
00:41:930 - start here, 2 notes? i see 'Asterisk' and 'Normal' diff only use 1 LNs for this part, i doubt the easier diff is harder than the hardest diff.
01:23:888 - add note col 2? feels better when i testplay it.

[Asterisk]
00:01:651 - what a waste, the hardest diff but you only follow piano sound, try to follow the bass pls, for example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4902916 , do it till 00:07:105 - .
00:07:105 - add a LN here, for the 'whoosh' sound.
00:08:364 - tbh, from here i feel the flow is weird, for example 00:08:678 (8678|0) - this pitch is higher than 00:08:574 (8574|1) - ,so swap this 00:08:574 (8574|1,8678|0) - 1 to 2, 2 to 1.
... etc i think you can find it by yourself which part that have weird stream.
00:13:818 (13818|2,13818|3) - 3 notes? like 00:13:504 (13504|0,13504|3,13504|1) - , etc.
00:15:182 (15182|3,15182|1) - 2 notes? hmm, i think this part is same with 00:08:469 (8469|2) - , so remove 1, then 00:15:077 (15077|2) - to col 2, and rearrange 00:15:287 (15287|0,15392|2) - .
00:17:175 (17175|1,17175|3) - 3 notes, same sound with 00:16:336 (16336|2,16336|0,16336|3) - , also, i think 00:16:860 (16860|2,16860|1,16860|3) - isn't that loud for 3 notes, idk.
... etc untill 00:21:790 - , you should check the consistency during the steam part x.x
00:25:776 - add note? the drum sound is pretty loud, even louder than 00:26:825 (26825|3,26825|2) - .
00:27:664 (27664|2,27664|3,28084|1,28084|0) - i know what you mean with this LN, but i think, yeah, this is the hardest diff, what a waste if you ignore the drum sound, pretty sure this one can be mapped into chordthrill.
00:43:609 - add one note here? 00:45:287 - 00:46:965 - here too, like you did at 'Hard' diff.
01:03:748 (63748|2,64588|1) - should be only 1 LN like 00:50:322 (50322|0) - .

Not bad overall, just please check your consistency, i just feel the pattern isn't consistent, sometimes you use 2 notes, but sometimes you use 3 notes for the very similar sound, may be because you also think about the playability, but i think you still can add notes in some part to make it looks more consistent. good luck! :)

EDIT: fixed some typo x.x
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