Remilia_CO wrote:
号被 wrote:
啊啊!天生对这种高速滑条图就没抵抗力。而且这图在我看来简直太完美,唯一另外一个给我这种完美感的图还是当年的血玫瑰。来提点建议,希望能帮到你!Notch Hell
- 02:13:977 (3,4,1,2) - 为啥这里要做这么大一个跳啊。。 这里并没有在跟vocal而是在跟电音。
- 02:24:816 (2) - 我觉得这根滑条跟你这图里别的滑条完全不是一个风格啊,而且感觉不太好看。 这图滑条啥风格。。。
- 04:06:235 (2) - 这个滑条最上面那个拐角,个人认为存在感太强烈了但是却没有对应的节奏显得比较突兀。 全图如此。
- 05:11:268 (1) - 这个第一段跟最后一段的弧线是不是改平行一点比较好?我个人认为用第一段迁就一下最后一段 稍微调了一下。
祝早日rank!掀起map界的又一轮腥风血雨XD
PolkaMocha wrote:
This is HW we're talking about.Strato wrote:
Isnt it unrankable? Lolsmall modM O T H E R O F S L I D E R B R E A K
Quick little mod owo
01:58:203 (3,4) - These don't blanket very well. Maybe improve them a bit? for some stuff like that, i prefer locked organizations, so i think those nazi problems can be ignored.
02:07:687 (4,5) - ^ ^
02:13:203 (1,2) - Although I understand the flow, having this circle behind the slider might make it less playable.
02:30:235 (1) - Shouldnt the slider end on 2:33:139 to follow the vocals better? i think electric beats took over the main track than vocal one, so i decide to shfit the track i've followed before to this. most of people mentioned this, but i think i'll always insist it.
03:50:752 (1) - When playing, the start and the end of this one are very unclear. Maybe touch the shape up a bit to make that a little more clear? hmm? this slider has really clear border to judge direction and position.
04:04:687 (1,2) - Again with the whole circle under slider situation. ^
04:38:752 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is not very good for a stream. It looks more like duplets when playing.it worked pretty well.
05:01:977 (1) - Considering the slider velocity, this back and forth shape is nearly impossible. Maybe fix so it doesn't cross over itself as much? i can't see why this is nearly impossible.
05:20:558 (1) - Having this slider cross over itself so lose to the tail of it might make it appear shorter and harder to play. that really make less differences between two ways in playing.
05:29:848 (1) - I would personally like this one better if the spiral didn't touch itself and instead blanketed itself. i did that on purpose.
05:31:106 (3) - This slider isn't fitting the music. If you shortened (2) so (3) could start on the downbeat, it would make more sense. if you missed 02:25:300 (3) - and 04:16:784 (3) - you should not tell this, and actually they do followed the music if you really notice which track i'm tracing.
05:31:881 (2,4) - Same with these ^
05:36:042 (1) - The blanketing at 5:36:332 could be improved. well, did a bit arrangement.
05:53:074 - I feel this spinner is dragged out too far. All audible noise stops way before this. i last that spinner to exact position i can hear that tick piano beats disappeared.
thanks for modding!quaternary wrote:
Originally thought this was a shitmap but I think the storyboard makes it work.
In my opinion the slider section at 03:19:802 - is a little bit too slow. And as a whole, the octagon sliders are a little lopsided (especially 03:18:042 (1) - ) that is a quiet part to other sections, so slower sliders are chosen.
Kind of excited for this to be approved, actually.
addition: fixed some controversial red control points after some staffs' advise.
ps: 惊现一个脑大大0.0