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Iolite
叶月大法好!这图我是第一个点fav的
想送个摸,不知dalao需要吗?
Jukkii
i decided to come up with a couple solutions to 00:56:411 (2) -


ofc a normal curved slider would work, but might be a bit boring, you can make them go into a different direction too


this would otherwise be a good choice but it overlaps with the followpoints in the jumps (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6757248)


maybe something like this to blanket the slider before? (sorry for bad blanket)

these are my ideas for fixing it
yanlu
sorry I'm late a bit >_<;

I deled 00:02:326 (1) - and re'do the slider00:44:580 (1) -
蟹蟹花花和肥翔:3/
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raririn
都挺好的 只能随便扯扯

我总感觉00:00:214 - 和00:02:749 - 上面不该有finish啊

[Snow]
  1. 00:21:340 (1,2,3) - 我局的这样好看一点
    1的头放在前面13中间 2的尾巴放在142线上这样
  2. 00:51:763 (4) - 是不是可以拉到x:256 y:284附近 2->3和4->5都是2.3* 但是3->4是3.0* 当然其实没什么差


[Hard]
  1. 00:12:890 (1) - 和前面1脑袋差了一格没有叠上 强迫症玩家看着不太舒服
  2. 00:14:791 (4,1,2) - 有点难啊 能不能换成个折返啥的
  3. 我本来还想说00:43:946 (8,1,2,3) - 难 然后看到 01:12:467 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这也太不hard了....


[Normal]
也好久不见啦
  1. 00:02:326 (1) - 这个诡异的whistle是啥...
  2. 00:26:833 (1) - DS好像突然变小了?好像也不是幻觉啊
  3. 00:58:523 (4) - 这个drum whistle也有点怪怪的...我个人觉得可能soft还好一点吧



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Topic Starter
Lan wings

LunaSaika wrote:

叶月大法好!这图我是第一个点fav的
想送个摸,不知dalao需要吗?
可以啊~
Topic Starter
Lan wings

raririn wrote:

都挺好的 只能随便扯扯

我总感觉00:00:214 - 和00:02:749 - 上面不该有finish啊 我觉得没问题;w;

[Snow]
  1. 00:21:340 (1,2,3) - 我局的这样好看一点
    1的头放在前面13中间 2的尾巴放在142线上这样 这样的话也许会好看点,但是flow就不好了 拒绝
  2. 00:51:763 (4) - 是不是可以拉到x:256 y:284附近 2->3和4->5都是2.3* 但是3->4是3.0* 当然其实没什么差 可以




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@-Jukke-
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6779894
try this
Iolite
主要想说说音效,都是些主观建议,不想改也行w
觉得没用的话就no kds

Snow

  1. 00:05:073 (1,2) - 我倾向于把这俩的whistle去了,要不有些刺耳
  2. 00:06:552 (1) - 用drum略违和,soft+whistle就很好,00:49:650 (1) -同理
  3. 00:15:214 (3) - 略吵,只放一个sample-drum就好
  4. 00:18:594 (4) - 这个就别加音效了
  5. 00:23:664 (5) - 同上
  6. 00:27:256 (1) - 放个sample-drum吧,前面音效都比较密集,00:29:791 (1) - 00:32:326 (1) - 00:34:861 (1) - 同理
  7. 00:33:805 (2) - 00:34:228 (2) - 这俩音效去了吧,和00:28:523 (1,2,1,2) - 保持一致
  8. 00:36:552 (5) - 还是soft+whistle合适点
  9. 00:36:974 (1) - 放finish吧
  10. 00:37:397 (1) - 和00:37:819 (1) - 的音效交换下
  11. 如果00:38:875 (1) - 放softwhistle,00:38:664 (3) - 放sample-drum,00:39:087 (2) - 放drum-whistle,会不会感觉更好?
  12. 00:39:932 (1,2,1,2) - 这里几乎听不到1/2,改成两滑条吧
  13. 00:41:199 - drum去了吧,没必要加
  14. 00:42:044 (1) - whistle去了
  15. 00:44:157 (4) - 把whistle改成soft-whistle
  16. 00:44:580 (1) - 滑条头的whistle改成finish
  17. 00:55:988 (1) - 音效要和00:12:890 (1) - 一致
  18. 00:55:988 (1,2) - flow有点难受
  19. 00:57:890 (2) - 加个soft+whistle
  20. 00:57:890 (2,1,2,1,2,3) - 音效要和00:14:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一致
  21. 00:59:791 ~ 01:04:861音效还是和00:16:692 ~ 00:21:763的尽量一致吧,有点随手
  22. 01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 根据音乐,这里的跳改成距离逐渐变小会比较合理
  23. 01:20:495 (1,2,3) - 这三个音量降些?
  24. 01:21:340 (3) - 还是放finish好,体现和前两个的区别

祝早rank~ :)
UndeadCapulet

general


it can be pretty hard to read the circle numbers font against the white combocolour. also, the white colour can blend into the background quite a bit, i think you should change/remove it

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how2mod lan


i think you should separate 00:27:678 (1,2) - from the previous jump pattern in some way, to further express the new high-pitched piano beats

01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - these notes are quieter and lower pitch than before, i think using larger jumps here is really weird, i think you should make 01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the big jumps and 01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - the small jumps

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sharlo


00:30:002 (4) - think you should move this somewhere else so the repeated 00:30:214 (5,6,1) - jump pattern is more obvious

01:06:129 (1) - maybe add one more grey point to smooth out this slider: http://puu.sh/sR2R3/daa4cdc854.png, your current one has a weird kick toward the end

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other diffs are fine, and hard is really pretty o:
Topic Starter
Lan wings

LunaSaika wrote:

主要想说说音效,都是些主观建议,不想改也行w
觉得没用的话就no kds

Snow

  1. 00:05:073 (1,2) - 我倾向于把这俩的whistle去了,要不有些刺耳 只去掉2
  2. 00:06:552 (1) - 用drum略违和,soft+whistle就很好,00:49:650 (1) -同理 这个音效跟的是钢琴 不适合whistle的音色 整曲大部分同样节奏都是采用同样的音效 而且drum hitnormal不算很重 我并不觉得违和啊?
  3. 00:15:214 (3) - 略吵,只放一个sample-drum就好 同上和00:14:791 (1) -
  4. 00:18:594 (4) - 这个就别加音效了^
  5. 00:23:664 (5) - 同上^
  6. 00:27:256 (1) - 放个sample-drum吧,前面音效都比较密集,00:29:791 (1) - 00:32:326 (1) - 00:34:861 (1) - 同理 Fixed
  7. 00:33:805 (2) - 00:34:228 (2) - 这俩音效去了吧,和00:28:523 (1,2,1,2) - 保持一致 同00:06:552 (1) - 至于为什么跟前面不一致,如果你看过我的一些图会发现同样的两段节奏排列跟节奏甚至音效都会有一定的区别
  8. 00:36:552 (5) - 还是soft+whistle合适点同00:06:552 (1) -
  9. 00:36:974 (1) - 放finish吧 这里音色不适合finish
  10. 00:37:397 (1) - 和00:37:819 (1) - 的音效交换下 00:37:819 (1) - 改为drum hitnormal
  11. 如果00:38:875 (1) - 放softwhistle,00:38:664 (3) - 放sample-drum,00:39:087 (2) - 放drum-whistle,会不会感觉更好?00:38:664 (3) - 00:39:932 (1) - 仔细听你会发现这两个只适合下soft whistle
  12. 00:39:932 (1,2,1,2) - 这里几乎听不到1/2,改成两滑条吧 自己脑补有就是了>.<
  13. 00:41:199 - drum去了吧,没必要加 同理00:06:552 (1) - 不过音量的确有点高 我调低点
  14. 00:42:044 (1) - whistle去了Fixed
  15. 00:44:157 (4) - 把whistle改成soft-whistle 同上面的 很多时候drum的音色会比soft更适合钢琴
  16. 00:44:580 (1) - 滑条头的whistle改成finish 这里不太适合finish
  17. 00:55:988 (1) - 音效要和00:12:890 (1) - 一致 同00:33:805 (2) -
  18. 00:55:988 (1,2) - flow有点难受 唔 之前改过形状 忘了ctrl+g回来了 ps:图坠毁看不了
  19. 00:57:890 (2) - 加个soft+whistle 这里不适合softwhistle啦
  20. 00:57:890 (2,1,2,1,2,3) - 音效要和00:14:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一致同00:33:805 (2) -
  21. 00:59:791 ~ 01:04:861音效还是和00:16:692 ~ 00:21:763的尽量一致吧,有点随手同00:33:805 (2) - 我再说一下吧,对于我来说 同样的节奏在不同的时间段会带给我不同的感觉,所以梗是会有变化的,所以这是我不喜欢复制的理由
  22. 01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 根据音乐,这里的跳改成距离逐渐变小会比较合理 根据我的感觉这里应该从小变大 而且对于后面的节奏排列等等会更适合
  23. 01:20:495 (1,2,3) - 这三个音量降些? 调整了一下音量
  24. 01:21:340 (3) - 还是放finish好,体现和前两个的区别 考虑过 但是这里实在不适合finish

祝早rank~ :)

UndeadCapulet wrote:


general


it can be pretty hard to read the circle numbers font against the white combocolour. also, the white colour can blend into the background quite a bit, i think you should change/remove it
actually,have more beatmap same this
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how2mod lan


i think you should separate 00:27:678 (1,2) - from the previous jump pattern in some way, to further express the new high-pitched piano beats sry, i can't understand?(my english is bad)

01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - these notes are quieter and lower pitch than before, i think using larger jumps here is really weird, i think you should make 01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the big jumps and 01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - the small jumps These music give me the feeling should be like this _(:з」∠)_

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other diffs are fine, and hard is really pretty o:
Chaoslitz
我來幫偶像改摸了
Helping Sharlo to fix her mod

Low wrote:

[Sharlo's Insane]
- OD +0.5. OD 7 works best for most insane difficulties sure
- HP drain +1 or +1.5. it's so low.. ok
00:06:129 (1) - make the end of this slider silent or softer. it fits the music much better fixed
00:40:777 (1) - removing the first node from this slider makes it look more aesthetically pleasing: hmm i slightly adjusted it
00:59:791 (1,2) - this arrangement doesn't flow all too well to me. try something like this that flows better, where the end of 01:00:214 (2) overlaps with the start of 01:01:059 (1) The flow seems fine for me, flow of 01:00:636 (3) is in the opposite direction which is good for emphasize

Flower wrote:

[Sharlo's]
00:16:270 (3) - 这里据我看是没有音的,所以建议删掉 我聽到有個鋼琴A音啊...
00:59:368 (3) - ^

UndeadCapulet wrote:

sharlo


00:30:002 (4) - think you should move this somewhere else so the repeated 00:30:214 (5,6,1) - jump pattern is more obvious yup

01:06:129 (1) - maybe add one more grey point to smooth out this slider: http://puu.sh/sR2R3/daa4cdc854.png, your current one has a weird kick toward the end ok

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Thanks!

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Zero__wind
先占个坑 我是鸽王

General
所有diff开 Epilepsy warning
Hard结尾的spinner最好和Easy Normal在同一个地方结束 比较合理 并且逐渐降低音量 不要最后还突然冒出个drum hitnormal

Skin
添加配套的pause-overlay.png 和fail-background.png ?现在暂停界面只有那几个按键变了 没有配背景感觉有点奇怪
Slider组的皮肤元件缺少sliderpoint10.png 和sliderpoint30.png ,虽然我不是100%确定但是这个应该是必需的

Easy
很好

yanlu's Normal
01:06:974 (3) - 这里感觉就用个circle 和01:04:861 (1,2,3) - 形成呼应就挺好 本身也并不是个很需要用短滑条的地方
01:16:692 (2,3,1) - 保持1.4x间距
01:20:073 (1) - 这里头上drum finish听着真的很奇怪 整张图就这一个地方加了似的 而且音乐里又没有鼓 最好换成soft finish或者drum clap也行
音效总感觉听起来没什么规律可言 不太搞得懂是怎么加的 最好自己再仔细过一遍

Hard
00:44:750 - 或许和00:43:735 (7) - stack?没必要非要到中间去 感觉Hard里面这种连续单点还是摆得顺一些
然后结尾部分吧 感觉还是问题很大……
01:12:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种梗当然是可以的 但是你立马又跳到辣么老远一个新的梗01:13:735 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - = = 01:13:523 (6,1) - spacing 5.31? 这种间距在Hard里无论如何也是不可能接受的 01:16:059 (6,1) - 这里也是同样太远 而且是连续这么多单点。
我建议你把最后这一段整体重新布置一下 从01:07:397 (1) - 开始比如3个滑条6个圈 3个滑条6个圈 这样 反正一定不要连着12个圈不然我真的会很困扰……

Sharlo's Insane
没什么特别的

Snow
00:21:657 (2,3) - 为什么这里没有stack但是后面00:22:925 (2,3) - 00:24:192 (2,3) - 00:25:460 (2,3) - 都stack了呢 就是觉得有点奇怪 虽然也不是真的什么问题
01:01:059 (1) - 这里感觉跳得有点太大了 和全图其他地方比起来都显得特别大 音乐本身并没有给人这种感觉 考虑调整一下梗
也没啥别的了

call me back?
Beren

Flower wrote:

[SB]
01:07:397 - 这边突然加快很突兀,建议算一下在01:06:974 - 01:07:819 - 做一个渐进加速。雪是一张图的话这样弄也不是很麻烦,所以请务必拜托了
我按照你的建议做了一遍,但是感觉速度的变化就不明显了,我觉得现在这样挺好的就不改了 谢谢 :D
yanlu

raririn wrote:

[Normal]
也好久不见啦 :arrow: 好久不見 :)
  1. 00:02:326 (1) - 这个诡异的whistle是啥... :arrow: 好像上次修刪掉了
  2. 00:26:833 (1) - DS好像突然变小了?好像也不是幻觉啊 :arrow: 是的..我沒注意到請藍翅膀幫我調一下DS..
  3. 00:58:523 (4) - 这个drum whistle也有点怪怪的...我个人觉得可能soft还好一点吧 :arrow: OK
謝謝Mod&原諒我Q_Q
Battle
[General]
inputoverlay-key.png is unused apparently?
Are you able to get a different sound for the drum finish? It sounds heavily distorted lol

[Easy]
00:04:016 (2,3) - Better not to stack these, people can click this early because beginners aren't exactly too good at reading approach circles, given how this is really slow it's easy to click early for them lol
00:24:298 (3) - NC to keep in line with your NCing every two downbeats
01:04:861 (1,2,1) - It'd be nice if these didn't touch each other lol

[Normal]
00:09:087 (1,2,3) - If you make things close like this, it's easier for beginners to get confused, move 3 farther away from 1 so they aren't touching
00:12:890 (3,4,1) - similar to above
00:21:763 (1,2) - Beginners tend to click the closest things, so it isn't good to have 2 where it is rn because people will click the tail instead of the head
00:40:777 (2,3,1) - Could be clearer where it flowed
01:17:537 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You might want to simplify this somewhere, this is a pretty long string of notes and it's hard for beginners to do things consecutively

Overall some parts of the diff can be made clearer, mostly with things similar to the first and second points, but the diff isn't bad so yeah

[Hard]
00:14:580 (3,4,1,2,3) - You can improve visuals here a bit since stacking usually messes up things, it's fine to just slightly have bigger ds to make things not overlap and keep the pattern that you want
00:18:805 (4,1) - I feel this could potentially confuse people since it's very similar in spacing to 00:17:537 (2,3) - except this is a jump and not a pause
00:57:678 (3,4,1,2,3) - Same as the first point, but this one should really improve visuals if you choose to keep the previous one
01:12:467 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This seems a little bit too difficult, if you choose to pull something like this I feel like you should at least make the combo numbers for 01:13:101 (1,2,3) - visible, since this is only a hard difficulty
01:15:002 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
00:08:030 (1,2,3,4) - Emphasis should probably be most prominent on 4 not 3 since there's a piano and strong vocal there
00:15:425 (3) - mm I feel like this should at least have some emphasis since u chose to emphasize 00:16:270 (3) - even tho it's a weak piano beat

[Snow]
00:21:657 (2,3) - why not stack like 00:22:925 (2,3) - did
00:35:706 (1) - mm why not make it like 00:30:636 (3) - since there isn't vocals in this part while the other ones with NC-ing like 00:32:749 (1,2,1) - has vocals (easier way of phrasing it, make it a 1/2 slider because it's more similar to the 1st timestamp than the second timestamp)
00:59:791 - You have to timing lines here, delete one
01:22:714 - Why not a spinner like all the other diffs lol

w
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Battle wrote:

[General]
inputoverlay-key.png is unused apparently? it's useful~
Are you able to get a different sound for the drum finish? It sounds heavily distorted lol

Low wrote:

- drum-hitfinish3.wav has a lot of extra static noise at the end of the file. i strongly recommend you find a way to remove the static since it makes the file larger than it has to be and sounds bad
yes! i know this, but idk how to fix this static noise! and this is to do Granat honour, so i don't want to change this hitsound!_(:з」∠)_
[Easy]
00:04:016 (2,3) - Better not to stack these, people can click this early because beginners aren't exactly too good at reading approach circles, given how this is really slow it's easy to click early for them lol
1.I think 4 beats is already fully prepared lol
2.If i don't use stack, that 1.5x DS i can't put another place
3.If you worry " it's easy to click early for them ", look at this video! https://puu.sh/tOZDo/0d18724294.flv

00:24:298 (3) - NC to keep in line with your NCing every two downbeats sry, my NC style is pattern>rhythm, so no change
01:04:861 (1,2,1) - It'd be nice if these didn't touch each other lol Fixed


[Snow]
00:21:657 (2,3) - why not stack like 00:22:925 (2,3) - did because the same rhythm, I like to use different pattern to interpret
00:35:706 (1) - mm why not make it like 00:30:636 (3) - since there isn't vocals in this part while the other ones with NC-ing like 00:32:749 (1,2,1) - has vocals (easier way of phrasing it, make it a 1/2 slider because it's more similar to the 1st timestamp than the second timestamp) try this?
00:59:791 - You have to timing lines here, delete one Fixed
01:22:714 - Why not a spinner like all the other diffs lol because the same rhythm, I like to use different pattern to interpret, Even that is not my diff

w
thx wwww
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Battle wrote:

[Normal]
00:09:087 (1,2,3) - If you make things close like this, it's easier for beginners to get confused, move 3 farther away from 1 so they aren't touching Fixed
00:12:890 (3,4,1) - similar to above Fixed
00:21:763 (1,2) - Beginners tend to click the closest things, so it isn't good to have 2 where it is rn because people will click the tail instead of the headFixed
00:40:777 (2,3,1) - Could be clearer where it flowedFixed
01:17:537 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You might want to simplify this somewhere, this is a pretty long string of notes and it's hard for beginners to do things consecutively Fixed

Overall some parts of the diff can be made clearer, mostly with things similar to the first and second points, but the diff isn't bad so yeah

[Hard]
00:14:580 (3,4,1,2,3) - You can improve visuals here a bit since stacking usually messes up things, it's fine to just slightly have bigger ds to make things not overlap and keep the pattern that you want about 1.5x ok?
00:18:805 (4,1) - I feel this could potentially confuse people since it's very similar in spacing to 00:17:537 (2,3) - except this is a jump and not a pause 00:16:692 (1,2) - 00:19:228 (1,2) - i will give this more big jump to balance ._.
00:57:678 (3,4,1,2,3) - Same as the first point, but this one should really improve visuals if you choose to keep the previous one ^
01:12:467 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This seems a little bit too difficult, if you choose to pull something like this I feel like you should at least make the combo numbers for 01:13:101 (1,2,3) - visible, since this is only a hard difficulty try this :D
01:15:002 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^^


w

Battle wrote:

[General]
Are you able to get a different sound for the drum finish? It sounds heavily distorted lol

plz redl that new drum-hitfinish
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Zero__wind wrote:

先占个坑 我是鸽王

General
所有diff开 Epilepsy warning 已经有SB提示,不过我会考虑换个回默认的
Hard结尾的spinner最好和Easy Normal在同一个地方结束 比较合理 并且逐渐降低音量 不要最后还突然冒出个drum hitnormal Fixed

Skin
添加配套的pause-overlay.png 和fail-background.png ?现在暂停界面只有那几个按键变了 没有配背景感觉有点奇怪 晚点加上去
Slider组的皮肤元件缺少sliderpoint10.png 和sliderpoint30.png ,虽然我不是100%确定但是这个应该是必需的 看了下默认皮肤也没这个原件呢

Easy
很好

yanlu's Normal
01:06:974 (3) - 这里感觉就用个circle 和01:04:861 (1,2,3) - 形成呼应就挺好 本身也并不是个很需要用短滑条的地方 Fixed
01:16:692 (2,3,1) - 保持1.4x间距Fixed
01:20:073 (1) - 这里头上drum finish听着真的很奇怪 整张图就这一个地方加了似的 而且音乐里又没有鼓 最好换成soft finish或者drum clap也行换了drum whistle+clap
音效总感觉听起来没什么规律可言 不太搞得懂是怎么加的 最好自己再仔细过一遍最好自己再仔细过一遍

Hard
00:44:750 - 或许和00:43:735 (7) - stack?没必要非要到中间去 感觉Hard里面这种连续单点还是摆得顺一些 我觉得这样太难读了 不改
然后结尾部分吧 感觉还是问题很大……
01:12:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种梗当然是可以的 但是你立马又跳到辣么老远一个新的梗01:13:735 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - = = 01:13:523 (6,1) - spacing 5.31? 这种间距在Hard里无论如何也是不可能接受的 01:16:059 (6,1) - 这里也是同样太远 而且是连续这么多单点。
我建议你把最后这一段整体重新布置一下 从01:07:397 (1) - 开始比如3个滑条6个圈 3个滑条6个圈 这样 反正一定不要连着12个圈不然我真的会很困扰……我又改了一大波

Sharlo's Insane
没什么特别的

Snow
00:21:657 (2,3) - 为什么这里没有stack但是后面00:22:925 (2,3) - 00:24:192 (2,3) - 00:25:460 (2,3) - 都stack了呢 就是觉得有点奇怪 虽然也不是真的什么问题 怎么你们都喜欢吐槽这个_(:з」∠)_ 我喜欢不一样的行不行啊
01:01:059 (1) - 这里感觉跳得有点太大了 和全图其他地方比起来都显得特别大 音乐本身并没有给人这种感觉 考虑调整一下梗
也没啥别的了 越改越不合适,没梗惹

call me back?
Chaoslitz

Battle wrote:

[Insane]
00:08:030 (1,2,3,4) - Emphasis should probably be most prominent on 4 not 3 since there's a piano and strong vocal there ok
00:15:425 (3) - mm I feel like this should at least have some emphasis since u chose to emphasize 00:16:270 (3) - even tho it's a weak piano beat uhh I guess i will move 00:16:270 (3) closer to previous note lol
Thanks!

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505,208,12890,6,0,P|430:187|364:228,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,227,14157,5,8,0:3:0:0:
284,172,14368,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,320,14580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,188,14791,1,2,0:3:0:0:
276,268,15002,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,164,15214,1,2,0:3:0:0:
180,260,15425,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,172,15636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,268,15847,5,0,3:0:0:0:
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344,92,17326,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,202,17537,2,0,P|223:203|184:196,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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184,196,18171,1,2,0:3:0:0:
240,36,18383,1,2,0:3:0:0:
112,253,18594,1,2,0:3:0:0:
263,202,18805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,180,20495,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,352,23664,1,2,0:3:0:0:
232,188,23875,2,0,P|272:184|320:200,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,188,25988,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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336,360,30636,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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252,316,31059,1,2,0:3:0:0:
212,185,31270,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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124,136,32537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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383,188,34439,5,8,0:0:0:0:
247,96,34650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,268,34861,1,0,0:0:0:0:
422,99,35073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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422,99,35495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
167,284,35706,6,0,P|163:323|172:362,2,80,6|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
269,88,36340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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252,80,37714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,72,37819,2,0,P|160:60|88:104,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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272,256,38664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,284,38875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,148,39087,2,0,P|368:140|412:152,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,316,39509,5,8,0:0:0:0:
368,236,39721,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,256,39932,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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325,88,40777,6,0,B|313:103|292:108|292:108|341:159|401:147,1,160,2|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,24,41411,1,2,0:3:0:0:
220,52,41622,2,0,P|204:80|204:132,1,80,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
278,314,42044,6,0,P|314:245|287:172,1,160,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,236,42678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,314,42890,2,0,P|320:320|358:314,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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124,48,43946,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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176,324,44580,5,2,0:0:0:0:
308,228,44791,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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308,228,45214,1,2,3:0:0:0:
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308,228,45636,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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364,308,46059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,235,46904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,88,47115,1,4,0:2:0:0:
104,88,49650,6,0,P|96:176|108:252,1,160,0|2,3:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
164,360,50284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
287,323,50495,2,0,P|328:316|368:320,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,212,50918,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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106,246,51340,1,2,0:3:0:0:
288,324,51552,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,252,51763,2,0,L|372:164,1,80,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,48,52185,6,0,P|328:88|244:64,1,160,8|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
136,12,52819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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162,263,53453,5,2,0:3:0:0:
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228,212,53875,1,2,0:0:0:0:
29,171,54087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
249,68,54298,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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359,131,55143,1,2,0:3:0:0:
248,323,55354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
359,259,55566,1,2,0:3:0:0:
138,259,55777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,323,55988,6,0,P|320:328|360:256,1,160,2|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,128,56622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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138,259,57467,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,57678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,128,57890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,320,58101,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,192,58312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,252,58523,5,2,0:3:0:0:
252,320,58735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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360,252,59368,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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452,80,60214,2,0,P|444:40|445:0,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,204,60636,1,2,3:3:0:0:
328,52,60847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,152,61059,6,0,L|156:144,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
56,274,61481,2,0,L|136:268,1,80,2|2,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
292,308,61904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,152,62115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,61,62326,6,0,P|109:101|120:140,1,80,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,244,62749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,204,62960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
462,342,63171,2,0,P|422:343|384:332,1,80,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,244,63594,5,2,3:3:0:0:
260,368,63805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,64016,2,0,P|176:156|132:212,1,160,2|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,340,64650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,276,64861,5,14,0:0:0:0:
224,244,65073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,184,65284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,368,65495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,224,65706,2,0,L|63:145,1,80,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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198,90,67608,1,2,0:0:0:0:
157,247,67819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,132,68030,1,2,0:0:0:0:
313,289,68242,1,0,0:0:0:0:
217,191,68453,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,190,68664,5,6,0:0:0:0:
222,171,68875,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,304,69087,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,74,69298,1,2,0:0:0:0:
289,210,69509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
142,190,69721,1,2,0:0:0:0:
275,224,69932,5,14,0:0:0:0:
315,90,70143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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200,289,70777,1,2,0:3:0:0:
237,157,70988,1,2,0:0:0:0:
313,289,71199,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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356,132,71833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,230,72044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,90,72256,1,2,0:0:0:0:
237,225,72467,5,14,0:0:0:0:
372,190,72678,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,74,72890,1,2,0:3:0:0:
256,304,73101,1,2,0:0:0:0:
142,190,73312,1,2,0:3:0:0:
276,158,73523,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,289,73735,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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357,248,74368,1,2,0:0:0:0:
223,211,74580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,90,74791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,192,75002,5,14,0:0:0:0:
313,289,75214,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,132,75425,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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198,90,75847,1,2,0:3:0:0:
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Mafumafu
As requested~
[Easy]
00:31:904 (1) - The sharp curve does not match up with the music well.
01:04:861 (1,1) - This slight overlap looks not good.

[yanlu's Normal]
I suggest enhancing the overall spacing a bit to avoid the slight overlap between notes.
00:03:594 (2) - Split this into a 1/2 slider and a note would be better, in order to keep consistent with 00:01:059 (2) - .
00:05:073 (3) - 1/4 slider may not be appropriate here.
00:10:354 (3,4) - Spacing issue?
00:35:706 (4) - It's pointless to use such slider-shape. Just use simple three-anchor sliders.
00:42:044 (1,2) - Blanket needs an improvement.

[Hard]
00:07:819 (4,1,2) - Weird spacing arrangement here, 00:07:819 (4,1) - seems too large for a Hard diff while 00:08:664 (1,2) - is quite small. It needs to be kept consistent with 00:17:960 (3,4,1) - .
00:26:833 (1,2) - There needs to be some sort of consistency, since 00:26:833 (1,2) - and 00:31:904 (1,2) - own the same melody yet they are different in spacing.
00:34:439 (1,2) - Same here
00:43:312 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This is extremely hard with so many singletap quares.
01:12:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I doubt the eligibility of such pattern in Hard. Due to the relatively low AR, players may be confused by the stack and misread the sequence of the notes. Briefly, this is too challenging to appear in Hard.
01:22:608 (4) - NC?

[Sharlo's Insane]
00:11:199 (1,1) - This extended slider seems abrupt, there are scarcely similar rhythms in other sections.

The top diff seems too jumpy for me xD
Topic Starter
Lan wings

Regraz wrote:

As requested~
[Easy]
00:31:904 (1) - The sharp curve does not match up with the music well. Fixed
01:04:861 (1,1) - This slight overlap looks not good.Fixed

[yanlu's Normal]
I suggest enhancing the overall spacing a bit to avoid the slight overlap between notes.Fixed
00:03:594 (2) - Split this into a 1/2 slider and a note would be better, in order to keep consistent with 00:01:059 (2) - . 我觉得不一定要复制才是好的
00:05:073 (3) - 1/4 slider may not be appropriate here. 我觉得没啥问题;w; 要说照顾新手,新手是看圈点的,不管节奏咋样都没关系,再说这是个slider点快或点慢都不会影响判定;w;
00:10:354 (3,4) - Spacing issue?Fixed
00:35:706 (4) - It's pointless to use such slider-shape. Just use simple three-anchor sliders.Fixed
00:42:044 (1,2) - Blanket needs an improvement.Fixed

[Hard]
00:07:819 (4,1,2) - Weird spacing arrangement here, 00:07:819 (4,1) - seems too large for a Hard diff while 00:08:664 (1,2) - is quite small. It needs to be kept consistent with 00:17:960 (3,4,1) - .Fixed
00:26:833 (1,2) - There needs to be some sort of consistency, since 00:26:833 (1,2) - and 00:31:904 (1,2) - own the same melody yet they are different in spacing.Fixed
00:34:439 (1,2) - Same hereFixed
00:43:312 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This is extremely hard with so many singletap quares.
01:12:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I doubt the eligibility of such pattern in Hard. Due to the relatively low AR, players may be confused by the stack and misread the sequence of the notes. Briefly, this is too challenging to appear in Hard. 事实上我觉得这个并没有什么问题,而且像这种就算再怎么坑顶多就坑一次,并没觉得有超出hard的范围=w=
01:22:608 (4) - NC?Fixed

[Sharlo's Insane]
00:11:199 (1,1) - This extended slider seems abrupt, there are scarcely similar rhythms in other sections.00:05:284 (1,1,1) - 我认为前面这里已经做了足够的提示;w;

The top diff seems too jumpy for me xD
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