Oodorato2 - Halloween Rocks

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Elirac
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 16 avril 2017 at 23:47:54

Artist: Oodorato2
Title: Halloween Rocks
Source: My Little Pony : Friendship Is Magic
Tags: mlp fim vocal splicing nightmare night twilight sparkle rainbow dash pinkie pie rarity fluttershy applejack
BPM: 100
Filesize: 17541kb
Play Time: 02:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,35 stars, 122 notes)
  2. Hard (2,86 stars, 294 notes)
  3. Insane (3,9 stars, 376 notes)
  4. Normal (2,2 stars, 201 notes)


Download: Oodorato2 - Halloween Rocks
Download: Oodorato2 - Halloween Rocks (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my second beatmap.
check out the song here

Chujitsu
Hobbes2
Yanganof
Len
wajinshu
nice_safaleen
paydayzcool
SherryCherry
lazyboy007
DeRandom Otaku
Neku okazaki
sdafsf
Pentori
S A V E R Y
Euny
Cerulean Veyron
Oread
ColdTooth
Dashyy
propasy
Neoskylove
Pachiru
TwillghtSparkle
_Kise
Rad-
SnivehNDraegonz
04/04/16 : modified hitsound at the begining of the insane diff.
07/04/16 : finished the hitsound on the insane diff + some minor fixes.
11/04/16 : changed hitsound at the begining of the hard diff
02/05/16 : finished the hitsound on the hard diff + some minor changes
14/05/16 : finished the hitsound on the normal diff
27/05/16 : added an easy diff
27/07/16 : reworked most of the insane diff
Chujitsu
I love MLP! :D

try to start it like this
00:05:778 (1) - change reversed slider to normal one 2\4
00:08:778 (7) - don't put it on end of slider on this difficulty and try don't do it in any song which you going to map~
00:08:178 (5) - new combo
~ I see in your map so many places where you should start new combo! Try to not make combo longer that 8-9
00:19:578 (8) - NC
00:24:828 (1) - try to make stream to 00:25:578 (2)
00:35:778 (5,6,7) - move them in one line
00:53:028 (6) - nc
01:14:478 (5) - nc
01:23:178 (3) - change to slider 2\4
01:38:778 (8) - change it to reversed slider 2\4
00:05:778 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g
00:37:428 (4) - try to not start sliders from blue tick, it's almost always might starts from white tick or as alternative red
01:04:278 (3) - its bad idea to finish slider on blue tick ._.
01:14:328 (5) - nc
01:20:478 (7) - nc
02:00:978 (7) - nc
02:03:378 (14) - nc
00:26:178 (4) - ctrl+g
01:06:678 (8) - nc
01:17:178 (8) - put here slider 2\4
01:22:578 (11) - nc
01:20:478 (7) - nc
01:39:978 (10) - nc

Well o,o I guess, you need more practice. Most of objects I can't understand because you trying to map music and then changing to vocal sounds OwO Some of objects placed on strange places on time line as for me >_<...Normal seems to me hard to play for beginers but the most right mapped of all 3 dif~ Hard dif remind me insane cuz of little streams and insane missing any streams ._. Sorry, I didn't wanted to sound rude >_< Good luck with mapping ^ , ^
Topic Starter
Elirac

Chujitsu wrote:

I love MLP! :D

try to start it like this
00:05:778 (1) - change reversed slider to normal one 2\4
00:08:778 (7) - don't put it on end of slider on this difficulty and try don't do it in any song which you going to map~
00:08:178 (5) - new combo
~ I see in your map so many places where you should start new combo! Try to not make combo longer that 8-9
00:19:578 (8) - NC
00:24:828 (1) - try to make stream to 00:25:578 (2)
00:35:778 (5,6,7) - move them in one line
00:53:028 (6) - nc
01:14:478 (5) - nc
01:23:178 (3) - change to slider 2\4
01:38:778 (8) - change it to reversed slider 2\4
00:05:778 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g
00:37:428 (4) - try to not start sliders from blue tick, it's almost always might starts from white tick or as alternative red
01:04:278 (3) - its bad idea to finish slider on blue tick ._.
01:14:328 (5) - nc
01:20:478 (7) - nc
02:00:978 (7) - nc
02:03:378 (14) - nc
00:26:178 (4) - ctrl+g
01:06:678 (8) - nc
01:17:178 (8) - put here slider 2\4
01:22:578 (11) - nc
01:20:478 (7) - nc
01:39:978 (10) - nc

Well o,o I guess, you need more practice. Most of objects I can't understand because you trying to map music and then changing to vocal sounds OwO Some of objects placed on strange places on time line as for me >_<...Normal seems to me hard to play for beginers but the most right mapped of all 3 dif~ Hard dif remind me insane cuz of little streams and insane missing any streams ._. Sorry, I didn't wanted to sound rude >_< Good luck with mapping ^ , ^
Thanks for the mod. :)
I made all the changes that you suggested.
And don't worry, you didn't sounded rude.
Hobbes2
randomly found this, and im always willing to mod mlp music sooo

[General]

Your background is too big, resize it to 1366 x 768 (or just scale it down so its smaller than that)

You should make an Easy difficulty so that your map can get ranked. You need at least 1 difficulty (normal or easy) under 2 stars.

Consider adding a kiai time when you feel appropriate! you can find this in the timing window

[normal]

You have some distance issues in this, which you can't have in a normal. Check ctrl+shift+a (ai-mod) to see where those are and fix them)

00:10:578 (1,2,3) - Change this pattern, the overlap isn't desirable and the flow is weird (it's not a natural movement, esp, for new players)
00:19:878 - There's a sound here, should map
00:37:578 (2) - not sure why there's a huge slider here instead of just mapping it out. If you do choose to keep the slider reshape it since it's kinda ugly :<
00:53:028 (9) - This slider doesnt need to be squished.
01:14:478 (4,6) - move 6 so its not touching 4

[Hard]

00:06:380 (2) - apparently this wasnt snapped?
00:19:878 - there's a sound here, should map
00:37:278 (9) - New combo
00:37:578 (10,11) - map this instead of having big sliders
01:26:459 - I don't understand this break the song is the same as before but you just randomly have a break? I get giving players a rest but it seems so random

[Insane]

00:24:828 (8) - new combo
00:50:328 (5,6,7,8) - curve the sliders a bit maybe? looks kinda bland as is

Can't really think of much else to say for this one :<

Good luck! Hope my mod helped.
Topic Starter
Elirac

Hobbes2 wrote:

randomly found this, and im always willing to mod mlp music sooo

[General]

Your background is too big, resize it to 1366 x 768 (or just scale it down so its smaller than that) done

You should make an Easy difficulty so that your map can get ranked. You need at least 1 difficulty (normal or easy) under 2 stars.

Consider adding a kiai time when you feel appropriate! you can find this in the timing window
I thought about it, but i haven't seen an apropriate part for a kiai time

[normal]

You have some distance issues in this, which you can't have in a normal. Check ctrl+shift+a (ai-mod) to see where those are and fix them)
fixed all dstance issues

00:10:578 (1,2,3) - Change this pattern, the overlap isn't desirable and the flow is weird (it's not a natural movement, esp, for new players)done
00:19:878 - There's a sound here, should map done
00:37:578 (2) - not sure why there's a huge slider here instead of just mapping it out. If you do choose to keep the slider reshape it since it's kinda ugly :<
I reshaped the slider
00:53:028 (9) - This slider doesnt need to be squished. i think this slider is better like that
01:14:478 (4,6) - move 6 so its not touching 4 done

[Hard]

00:06:380 (2) - apparently this wasnt snapped? fixed
00:19:878 - there's a sound here, should map done
00:37:278 (9) - New combo done
00:37:578 (10,11) - map this instead of having big sliders
01:26:459 - I don't understand this break the song is the same as before but you just randomly have a break? I get giving players a rest but it seems so random

[Insane]

00:24:828 (8) - new combo done
00:50:328 (5,6,7,8) - curve the sliders a bit maybe? looks kinda bland as is they're pretty short slider, so i don't think curving them change a lot

Can't really think of much else to say for this one :<

Good luck! Hope my mod helped.
Thanks for the mod.

edit : I added an easy difficulty
Yanganof
Heyo~
from Queue

I think you should put "My little Pony" into Source field
Aimod says you should lower audiobitrate(?)
You should try to place more objects on the downbeats as they're usual strong beats within the rhythm

Keep watch of your sliderpoints, you got a whole load of unnecessary ones
Pointed them out only in Insane diff though
maybe lower AR to 3
00:20:478 (1,2,3) - this ist to hard for an easy map.
I think it's best if you replace it with one slider
In General, in easy it's best to not have more than two hircircles in a row

00:25:578 (2,3,4) - something like this will be hard too,
but it fits the song perfectly... maybe you can find an easier pattern

01:42:078 (1) - start on downbeat, in easy it would be best to only map 1/4 of the rhythm,
in normal something between 1/4 and 2/4 and hard 2/4

00:04:578 (3) - bit more curved so it points towards the next one

00:21:378 (4) - missing DS Snap

00:54:228 (1) - set the start of the spinner on the downbeat

00:58:578 (1) - remove this hitcircle to get a little break between spinner and following objects,
so that a new player can regain his orientation after spinning

01:13:578 (1) - reverse this one for a better flow

01:48:978 (1) - ^same

01:51:378 (1) - this one seems to be ok, but maybe you should reverse it too

01:54:978 (2) - ^^same

maybe you want to read these guides:
t/86329
https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
these apply mostly to E/N/H maps,
on higher diffs it's getting more complex due to spacing and jumps.

I'll do the other stuff later on, gotta go now :/

EDIT: Here itcomes~.~

00:02:178 (3) - curve bit more to point at the next object
00:08:178 (1) - less curved
00:54:228 (1) - i think you should start this one at the downbeat
00:58:578 (1) - you can include this one, but i think it would
be better if you'd remove it
01:06:078 (7) - rotate this one a bit into direction of following hitcircle
01:42:078 (1) - downbeat
when playing this diff something feels off:/

00:05:778 (1) - bit less curved
00:06:378 (2) - bit more curved
00:13:428 (2) - copy'n'paste the first one here
00:28:278 (3) - rotate/curve more
00:38:478 (3) - looks kinda weird
00:54:228 (1) - downbeat
01:04:278 (3) - curve this one a bit more
01:40:128 (1,2,3) - move these three onto the white tick
01:42:228 (1) - downbeat
01:44:628 (1,2,3) - move these on downbeat and remove third one (?)
00:09:978 (5) - move this one a bit right
00:12:378 (7) - stack this one
00:14:778 (7) - ^same
00:17:178 (7) - ^same
00:24:378 (7) - ^same
00:37:578 (5) - remove unnecessary sliderpoints, you should be able to get this with one
00:39:378 (9) - ^same
00:54:228 (1) - downbeat
01:06:378 (1) - ^^same
01:15:378 (5) - ^same
01:43:578 (4) - ^same
01:54:978 (6) - ^same

gl with your map
Topic Starter
Elirac

Yanganof wrote:

Heyo~
from Queue

I think you should put "My little Pony" into Source field thats only if the song is from the show, not for fan music
Aimod says you should lower audiobitrate(?) should be good now
You should try to place more objects on the downbeats as they're usual strong beats within the rhythm

Keep watch of your sliderpoints, you got a whole load of unnecessary ones
Pointed them out only in Insane diff though
maybe lower AR to 3 done
00:20:478 (1,2,3) - this ist to hard for an easy map.
I think it's best if you replace it with one slider done
In General, in easy it's best to not have more than two hircircles in a row

00:25:578 (2,3,4) - something like this will be hard too,
but it fits the song perfectly... maybe you can find an easier pattern

01:42:078 (1) - start on downbeat, in easy it would be best to only map 1/4 of the rhythm,
in normal something between 1/4 and 2/4 and hard 2/4 done

00:04:578 (3) - bit more curved so it points towards the next one done

00:21:378 (4) - missing DS Snap done

00:54:228 (1) - set the start of the spinner on the downbeat done

00:58:578 (1) - remove this hitcircle to get a little break between spinner and following objects,
so that a new player can regain his orientation after spinning done

01:13:578 (1) - reverse this one for a better flow

01:48:978 (1) - ^same

01:51:378 (1) - this one seems to be ok, but maybe you should reverse it too

01:54:978 (2) - ^^same

changed all those patern for better flow

maybe you want to read these guides:
t/86329
https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
these apply mostly to E/N/H maps,
on higher diffs it's getting more complex due to spacing and jumps.

I'll do the other stuff later on, gotta go now :/

EDIT: Here itcomes~.~

00:02:178 (3) - curve bit more to point at the next object done
00:08:178 (1) - less curved done
00:54:228 (1) - i think you should start this one at the downbeat i prefer having it start here on difficulty highter than easy
00:58:578 (1) - you can include this one, but i think it would
be better if you'd remove it seems better if i leave it
01:06:078 (7) - rotate this one a bit into direction of following hitcircle done
01:42:078 (1) - downbeat
when playing this diff something feels off:/

00:05:778 (1) - bit less curved done
00:06:378 (2) - bit more curved done
00:13:428 (2) - copy'n'paste the first one here done
00:28:278 (3) - rotate/curve more done
00:38:478 (3) - looks kinda weird changed it slightly
00:54:228 (1) - downbeat
01:04:278 (3) - curve this one a bit more done
01:40:128 (1,2,3) - move these three onto the white tick those seems correct to me
01:42:228 (1) - downbeat
01:44:628 (1,2,3) - move these on downbeat and remove third one (?) moved them, but kept the third one
00:09:978 (5) - move this one a bit right
00:12:378 (7) - stack this one
00:14:778 (7) - ^same
00:17:178 (7) - ^same
00:24:378 (7) - ^same
00:37:578 (5) - remove unnecessary sliderpoints, you should be able to get this with one
00:39:378 (9) - ^same
00:54:228 (1) - downbeat
01:06:378 (1) - ^^same
01:15:378 (5) - ^same
01:43:578 (4) - ^same
01:54:978 (6) - ^same
done all of those

gl with your map
Thanks for the mod.
Len
from q


General:
  1. i think offset should be 978
  2. what do you think about change the diff name easy to normal, normal to advanced or hard and Hard to Insane?
Easy:
  1. 00:25:578 (2,3,4) - a bit hard
  2. 00:26:178 (4,1,2,3,4) - this flow make me cut myself orz
  3. 00:59:178 (1,2,3) - , 01:00:978 (1,2,3) - same as above. 01:04:578 (2,3,4) - and etc
  4. 01:24:378 - ~ 01:36:378 - pls map this section ......
  5. 01:59:778 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - so many notes;w; try to add sliders instead
Normal:
  1. 00:12:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - try to make easier!
  2. 00:26:178 (4) - this flow is just wtf http://puu.sh/plaBc/b0958212a0.jpg i think its better :d
  3. 00:53:028 (9) - THIS SLIDER IS UNRANKABLE I THINK, ISNT IT?
  4. 01:24:978 - same as easy, no need to add breaktime here!

and so on...

gl anyways
Topic Starter
Elirac

Len wrote:

from q


General:
  1. i think offset should be 978 done
  2. what do you think about change the diff name easy to normal, normal to advanced or hard and Hard to Insane?
Easy:
  1. 00:25:578 (2,3,4) - a bit hard
  2. 00:26:178 (4,1,2,3,4) - this flow make me cut myself orz changed the pattern
  3. 00:59:178 (1,2,3) - , 01:00:978 (1,2,3) - same as above. 01:04:578 (2,3,4) - and etc simplified most of them
  4. 01:24:378 - ~ 01:36:378 - pls map this section ...... done for all diff
  5. 01:59:778 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - so many notes;w; try to add sliders instead done
Normal:
  1. 00:12:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - try to make easier! done
  2. 00:26:178 (4) - this flow is just wtf http://puu.sh/plaBc/b0958212a0.jpg i think its better :d done
  3. 00:53:028 (9) - THIS SLIDER IS UNRANKABLE I THINK, ISNT IT? fixed
  4. 01:24:978 - same as easy, no need to add breaktime here!

and so on...

gl anyways
Thanks for the mod.
PinkayPinkPink
I really love this map, but the spinner near the end of the song throws off the overall flow a little. It could be replaced by an equally long slider. :D
wajinshu
Q
Easy:
  1. 00:02:178 (3) - Ctrl + H and like this http://puu.sh/pmGkK/929ab4334f.png
  2. 00:03:978 (2,3) - Maybe blanket?
  3. 00:17:778 (3,4) - Bad flow maybe this? http://puu.sh/pmGtt/90a20e03a0.png
  4. 00:34:578 (1,2) - this blanket can be better
  5. 00:37:578 (2) - remove and http://puu.sh/pmIU7/8fe7893247.png
  6. 00:52:578 (2,3) - CTR + G imo rhytm better must be
  7. 01:04:878 (3) - 01:15:078 (3) - Its easy remove this and other... pls
Normal:
  1. 00:24:828 (1) - in white tick pls
  2. 00:32:478 (2) - http://puu.sh/pmJcU/ffb09010a8.png
  3. 00:37:578 (2) - Same as easy but rhytm another
  4. 01:41:178 (4) - It can be more beautiful
  5. 01:45:378 (3) - http://puu.sh/pmJtb/9f66810c49.png
gl~
Topic Starter
Elirac

wajinshu wrote:

Q
Easy:
  1. 00:02:178 (3) - Ctrl + H and like this http://puu.sh/pmGkK/929ab4334f.png done
  2. 00:03:978 (2,3) - Maybe blanket?
  3. 00:17:778 (3,4) - Bad flow maybe this? http://puu.sh/pmGtt/90a20e03a0.png done
  4. 00:34:578 (1,2) - this blanket can be better changed it a little bit
  5. 00:37:578 (2) - remove and http://puu.sh/pmIU7/8fe7893247.png i prefer it like that
  6. 00:52:578 (2,3) - CTR + G imo rhytm better must be done
  7. 01:04:878 (3) - 01:15:078 (3) - Its easy remove this and other... pls done
Easy:
  1. 00:24:828 (1) - in white tick pls done
  2. 00:32:478 (2) - http://puu.sh/pmJcU/ffb09010a8.png done
  3. 00:37:578 (2) - Same as easy but rhytm another i prefer it like that
  4. 01:41:178 (4) - It can be more beautiful i like it like that
  5. 01:45:378 (3) - http://puu.sh/pmJtb/9f66810c49.png done
gl~
Thanks for the mod.
My Angel Rize
from my modding queue
- i think you should insert "My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" in source field
- Video file must be .avi file with no sound (not .mp4 file)
00:24:978 (1) - NC
01:57:678 (6,7) - I think you should change position like this http://puu.sh/posjC/2b66f0f57e.jpg
02:00:978 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/postr/53bbb57655.jpg
01:09:978 (6,7) - blanket pls
01:20:478 (1,2,3,4) - double tap is too hard for beginner I think change to slider
01:27:378 (1,2) - blanket pls
01:47:928 (4,5) - change to slider
01:50:328 (4,5) - ^
01:52:728 (4,5) - ^
00:02:178 (7,8) - blanket pls
01:08:928 (2,3) - be parallel
I'm noob English pls forgive me
Topic Starter
Elirac

nice_safaleen wrote:

from my modding queue
- i think you should insert "My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic" in source field done
- Video file must be .avi file with no sound (not .mp4 file) fixed
00:24:978 (1) - NC
01:57:678 (6,7) - I think you should change position like this http://puu.sh/posjC/2b66f0f57e.jpg done
02:00:978 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/postr/53bbb57655.jpg done
01:09:978 (6,7) - blanket pls i prefer it like that
01:20:478 (1,2,3,4) - double tap is too hard for beginner I think change to slider I'm going to keep the double tap, i don't think it's too much for a hard difficulty
01:27:378 (1,2) - blanket pls done
01:47:928 (4,5) - change to slider
01:50:328 (4,5) - ^
01:52:728 (4,5) - ^
00:02:178 (7,8) - blanket pls done
01:08:928 (2,3) - be parallel done

I'm noob English pls forgive me
Thanks for the mod.
paydayzcool
Hi there Elirac,

This is a modding post from my queue.

00:04:578 (3) - Blanket error with 00:03:978 (2).
00:10:578 (1) - Blanket error with 00:11:778 (2).
00:27:378 (1) - Blanket error with 00:26:178 (3).
00:30:978 (3) - Very slight but noticeable blanket error with 00:30:378 (2).
00:37:578 (2) - Instead, maybe end this slider at 00:39:378?
01:13:578 (1) - Slight but noticeable blanket error with 01:14:778 (2).
01:32:178 - This break here doesn't seem to fit with the song or the map.
02:00:378 (3) - Slight but noticeable blanket error with 02:00:978 (1).
CS 4 is a bit small for Normal diffs. Try 3 or 3.3 instead.
00:04:278 (4,5,6) - It is ok to have the triple before these notes, but changing these notes into a single slider seems like a better idea.
00:11:478 (2) - Slight but noticeable blanket error with 00:10:578 (1). This slider also shouldn't start on a red tick as it doesn't fit with the music.
00:27:078 (1,2,3,4) - Try not to let these sliders overlap.
00:37:578 (2) - As mentioned before in Easy diff, shorten this slider so that it ends on 00:39:378.
00:48:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ouch, off timed area. Please remap, and don't use blue ticks.
00:59:478 (3,4) - In normal diffs, newer players will not be used to hitting the 4 straight after the 3.
01:18:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Apologies, but it would better for you if you remapped this section. Use more longer sliders than circles and short sliders.
01:32:178 - This break here doesn't seem to fit with the song or the map.
01:36:678 (1) - Remove this note as it jeopardizes newer players.
01:47:478 (3,4) - In normal diffs, newer players will not be used to hitting the 4 straight after the 3.
Whoah, calm down with ur circle size. Use CS 4 instead.
In short, have a look at this tutorial: t/55282

Have a look at a few more new maps, and I'm sure you'll someday get the gist of mapping.

-paydayz
Topic Starter
Elirac

paydayzcool wrote:

Hi there Elirac,

This is a modding post from my queue.

00:04:578 (3) - Blanket error with 00:03:978 (2).
00:10:578 (1) - Blanket error with 00:11:778 (2).
00:27:378 (1) - Blanket error with 00:26:178 (3). none of these three are trying to be blanket sliders
00:30:978 (3) - Very slight but noticeable blanket error with 00:30:378 (2). fixed
00:37:578 (2) - Instead, maybe end this slider at 00:39:378? I prefer to have the slider last until the end of the vocals
01:13:578 (1) - Slight but noticeable blanket error with 01:14:778 (2). fixed
01:32:178 - This break here doesn't seem to fit with the song or the map. i think it fit
02:00:378 (3) - Slight but noticeable blanket error with 02:00:978 (1). fixed
CS 4 is a bit small for Normal diffs. Try 3 or 3.3 instead. i prefer to keep those CS
00:04:278 (4,5,6) - It is ok to have the triple before these notes, but changing these notes into a single slider seems like a better idea.i prefer to keep the circles
00:11:478 (2) - Slight but noticeable blanket error with 00:10:578 (1). This slider also shouldn't start on a red tick as it doesn't fit with the music. fixed
00:27:078 (1,2,3,4) - Try not to let these sliders overlap. fixed
00:37:578 (2) - As mentioned before in Easy diff, shorten this slider so that it ends on 00:39:378.
00:48:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Ouch, off timed area. Please remap, and don't use blue ticks. doesn't seems off timed to me, but i made a few change
00:59:478 (3,4) - In normal diffs, newer players will not be used to hitting the 4 straight after the 3. fixed
01:18:078 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Apologies, but it would better for you if you remapped this section. Use more longer sliders than circles and short sliders. made a few change on that section
01:32:178 - This break here doesn't seem to fit with the song or the map.
01:36:678 (1) - Remove this note as it jeopardizes newer players. i realy dont see how
01:47:478 (3,4) - In normal diffs, newer players will not be used to hitting the 4 straight after the 3. fixed
Whoah, calm down with ur circle size. Use CS 4 instead.
In short, have a look at this tutorial: t/55282
thanks for showing me this tutorial, i made a few change in the hard diff based on it.

Have a look at a few more new maps, and I'm sure you'll someday get the gist of mapping.

-paydayz
Thanks for the mod.
tatemae
hi

insane
00:07:278 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow
00:26:178 (8,9,10) - can you reduce distance?
00:26:778 (11) - a 1/2 slider instead since it fits the vocals and instruments a lot better
00:29:178 (4) - ^
01:00:228 (6,7,8) - This looks too uneven too
01:50:028 (4,5,6,7) - it’s not a good idea to ignore snare sounds
02:05:778 (5) - nc?

Good luck dude~
Topic Starter
Elirac

SherryCherry wrote:

hi

insane
00:07:278 (4) - ctrl+g for better flow done
00:26:178 (8,9,10) - can you reduce distance? done
00:26:778 (11) - a 1/2 slider instead since it fits the vocals and instruments a lot better done
00:29:178 (4) - ^ i prefer to leave it like that
01:00:228 (6,7,8) - This looks too uneven too i like it like that
01:50:028 (4,5,6,7) - it’s not a good idea to ignore snare sounds added a note
02:05:778 (5) - nc? don't think it's necessary

Good luck dude~
Thanks for the mod.
lazyboy007
Bonjour de ma queue de mod.

Général:

Le blanket sur tes maps n'est pas bon. Ca fait tjr plus beau quand les sliders ont des formes bien rondes qui s'allignent parfaitement autour d'autres sliders ou cercles. Un bon exemple de map qui fait ca super bien si tu veux une référence serait xi - Ascension to Heaven. Dans l'intro tu le vois très bien.

Aussi, à mon avis renomme la "Hard" "Advanced" et la "Insane" "Hard". La dernière diff est trop simple pour être qualifiée d'insane.

Easy:

00:37:578 (2) - remplace par un spinner
00:51:378 (4,1) - NC sur le 4 pas le 1
00:59:178 (1) - je mettrais une note sur le tick d'avant
01:31:578 (2) - aucune raison de faire une pause ici, la musique ne se calme pas par rapport à avant
01:41:178 (3) - forme du slider un peu étrange

Le flow est correct, on sent bien que la map fait bouger le curseur dans une direction spécifique. Les sliders ont des formes un peu ennuyante et peu de blanket, ca pourrait être amélioré ^^

Normal:

00:09:078 (2,3) - meilleur alignement serait plus beau
00:37:578 (2) - spinner
01:31:578 (4) - break sans raison
01:36:978 (2) - tu pourrais NC ici, c'est la que le beat commence, et deux NC d'affilés n'est pas un gros problème
01:39:378 (9) - ca ca doit NC par contre, le suivant n'a pas de raison d'être un début de combo
01:41:178 (4) - forme pas trop bonne

Hard:

L'espacement des streams et des triplets (donc de toutes les notes en 1/4) est trop haut pour la diff ^^

00:38:478 (3) - spinner, en plus ce slider n'est pas clean :p
01:31:578 (4) - pas de pause
01:52:728 (4,5) - BEAUCOUP trop de spacing, le reste ca allait mais ca c'est dur a lire et a jouer
01:54:678 (3,4,5,6) - ce pattern aussi est très violent pour la diff

Insane:

Pas trop fan du CS 5, je préfère 4, voire max 4,5, mais c'est ton choix

00:17:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - pour faire ce genre de pattern faudrait mettre l'ar à 9, la on voit difficilement ce qui se passe, d'ailleurs toute la map passe mieux en ar 9 ^^
00:54:228 (1) - vu la difficulté vaudrait mieux mapper qqch de plus intéressant ici
00:59:478 (3,4,5) - mal aligné
01:31:578 (4) - la pause sans raison

Bon globalement il y a encore bcp d'erreurs, mais étant donné que c'est seulement ta deuxième map, c'est vraiment pas si mal. (personnellement ce que j'ai fait en deuxième map c'était l'horreur donc bref). Enfin voilà, je te souhaite beaucoup de chance dans ton mapping futur ;)
Topic Starter
Elirac

lazyboy007 wrote:

Bonjour de ma queue de mod.

Général:

Le blanket sur tes maps n'est pas bon. Ca fait tjr plus beau quand les sliders ont des formes bien rondes qui s'allignent parfaitement autour d'autres sliders ou cercles. Un bon exemple de map qui fait ca super bien si tu veux une référence serait xi - Ascension to Heaven. Dans l'intro tu le vois très bien.

Aussi, à mon avis renomme la "Hard" "Advanced" et la "Insane" "Hard". La dernière diff est trop simple pour être qualifiée d'insane.

Easy:

00:37:578 (2) - remplace par un spinner je trouve que le slidder va mieux
00:51:378 (4,1) - NC sur le 4 pas le 1 fait
00:59:178 (1) - je mettrais une note sur le tick d'avant trop près du spinner pour les joueur débutant
01:31:578 (2) - aucune raison de faire une pause ici, la musique ne se calme pas par rapport à avant
01:41:178 (3) - forme du slider un peu étrange modifié

Le flow est correct, on sent bien que la map fait bouger le curseur dans une direction spécifique. Les sliders ont des formes un peu ennuyante et peu de blanket, ca pourrait être amélioré ^^

Normal:

00:09:078 (2,3) - meilleur alignement serait plus beau fait
00:37:578 (2) - spinner
01:31:578 (4) - break sans raison
01:36:978 (2) - tu pourrais NC ici, c'est la que le beat commence, et deux NC d'affilés n'est pas un gros problème
01:39:378 (9) - ca ca doit NC par contre, le suivant n'a pas de raison d'être un début de combo fait
01:41:178 (4) - forme pas trop bonne

Hard:

L'espacement des streams et des triplets (donc de toutes les notes en 1/4) est trop haut pour la diff ^^ reduit l'espacement des 1/4

00:38:478 (3) - spinner, en plus ce slider n'est pas clean :p
01:31:578 (4) - pas de pause
01:52:728 (4,5) - BEAUCOUP trop de spacing, le reste ca allait mais ca c'est dur a lire et a jouer Corrigé
01:54:678 (3,4,5,6) - ce pattern aussi est très violent pour la diff Corrigé

Insane:

Pas trop fan du CS 5, je préfère 4, voire max 4,5, mais c'est ton choix

00:17:778 (1,2,3,4,5) - pour faire ce genre de pattern faudrait mettre l'ar à 9, la on voit difficilement ce qui se passe, d'ailleurs toute la map passe mieux en ar 9 ^^ la map est trop lente pour ar9 et je trouve ce pattern lisibleavec ar7.5
00:54:228 (1) - vu la difficulté vaudrait mieux mapper qqch de plus intéressant ici fait
00:59:478 (3,4,5) - mal aligné
01:31:578 (4) - la pause sans raison

Bon globalement il y a encore bcp d'erreurs, mais étant donné que c'est seulement ta deuxième map, c'est vraiment pas si mal. (personnellement ce que j'ai fait en deuxième map c'était l'horreur donc bref). Enfin voilà, je te souhaite beaucoup de chance dans ton mapping futur ;)
Merci pour le mod.
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