Sasaki Sayaka - Marine Blue ni Sotte · forum

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-07-07T11:12:12+00:00

~Doormat's Easy~

01:03:587 - I think this could have a hitsound as 01:03:920 (4).

~DavidEd's Normal~

01:15:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hitsounds are missing here.
01:22:920 - Missing finish.
01:31:254 (1) - I think starting the spinner 1/2 earlier will work better. Even the Easy starts there.

~Haru's Hard~

00:04:920 (1,1) - Check your other 1/4 reverse slider usages. This is the only one with a jump, and it feels less appropriate for the beginning of this map.
00:14:754 (1,2) - Starting the new combo from (2) will fit your rhythm better.
00:44:420 (3) - 00:47:087 (1) - The combo setting is inconsistent.
00:49:087 (1,1) - These slider wasn't cool enough, because the entire path of 00:49:754 (1) is just getting overlapped. Even the slider end. I'd like you to think of something else.
01:14:504 (6) - The starting rhythm of this reverse slider is weird. You can hear the actual drum starts at 01:14:587 in the music.

~Serenade~

00:12:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This jump was the weakest part of this difficulty. They are just randomly placed along the screen without having a proper structure behind. I know they would play well, but these aren't high in quality.

Fine map.

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-07-07T15:56:43+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
~Serenade~
00:12:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This jump was the weakest part of this difficulty. They are just randomly placed along the screen without having a proper structure behind. I know they would play well, but these aren't high in quality. ohh that. i wanted to create the intense part based on the song cuz that part is almost into the slow part, and yeah, i have to keep it consistent liek 01:27:087 - (yeah, different by the streams only)
Fine map.

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-07-07T19:53:28+00:00

Feb wrote:
[david normli]

00:05:587 (1) - dunno its bit weird to play this section a bit since you cover drum on 00:06:087 - but not at 00:06:754 - so i suggest not covering the drum at all and focus on that sounds on redticks. im mapping all the important beats and that works cause it plays well. it's not too overwhealming either
00:08:920 (2) - same thing^ ^
00:15:754 (4,5) - how about using the same rhyhtm like doormat here? it's easier to play and the thing you have here is more likely for adv players. i could consider deleting the slider and just have a pause there for the intention of making the player realise that another part is coming up
00:16:254 (6) - delete this note. nothing on here. I guess you follow vocal, but newbs r to dumb to follow vocal and drum at the same time k in case you didnt notice, that entire part follows the vocals...
00:28:087 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - the combo is really fckin long you prolly can make this rhyhtm a bit more simple so newbs don't break here for no reason. like add a breather somewhere in the midst. normal players arent noobs, it's readable for people in this lvl (90k+)
00:30:254 (2) - you usually have those stacks on downbeats for the vocal there, but this is in the middle now, so it might be bad for consistency. thats true
00:34:920 (1,2,3) - r u following the music? uhhhh no idea what you follow here lolz vocals
00:43:587 (2) - strong beat on tail and 00:44:087 - there is the tail almost inaudbile you might just use a single note here. Actually i just realize that 00:43:087 (1) - the whole section here is infected with those sliders where the strong beat is on the tail lol. uhm yeah this kind of stuff where you let the tail end on strong vocal or drum is k on higher diffs (i/e) since those players know how to handle them, but newbs don't. i belive its been done before and it wasnt a problem? i love the rhythm cause it doesnt make this part ''too much'' to handle and not too little to handle in the same time (if you know what i mean. so i think it can stay
01:02:254 (2) - you use them actually only two times in the whole map so they are hard and inconsistently placed. They r really surprising to these players. fixed this up a bit anyways
Everything rehappens after kiai nothing fixed
01:31:170 - shouldn't spinner start here where a actual sound is happening? i belived it needed a small break before the spinner in lower difficulties. fixed anyways
my main problem with this diff is that it's not consistent at all. Which might be a bad point to bns. (im pretty sure it is)

dont swear

Sonnyc wrote:
~DavidEd's Normal~
01:15:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hitsounds are missing here. added
01:22:920 - Missing finish. fixed
01:31:254 (1) - I think starting the spinner 1/2 earlier will work better. Even the Easy starts there. thought there had to be a break before the spinner in lower diffs, fixed though

Ty for the mod Sonny

FIXES

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TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
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ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
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Source:ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
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Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2016-07-08T08:32:12+00:00

Feb wrote:
hi from ur q

[haru hart]

00:06:087 (2,3) - how about spacing 2 off of 3 since both are really strong sounds to me. You stack the downbeat as well, but to me they aren't as strong besides 00:08:087 (4,1) - this part here. They are pretty strong too. sure
00:10:254 (3) - to stay consistent i would make it like 00:07:587 (3) -which is basically the same with that piano in the back. changed
00:14:754 (1) - tail on downbeat tried to map the downbeat xd

slower part is actually well mapped imo. a bit to much sv for my taste, but its k i guess.
00:29:587 (5,1) - this kind of stuff is kinda hard to read already for insane+ players and usually people make this kind of stuff more visible to the player with e.g. overlaps. So I highly suggest you to do that here too. unstacked 5 then but didnt do overlap for 1
00:38:754 (4) - ofc there's not really a sound a on blue tick, but the vocal is really strong here, and that electric thing sound here is quite stron ghere too and imo it plays weirdly with a usually stack. okay added
00:44:420 (3) - ncing here makes sense since you do it with 00:45:754 - and 00:47:087 - ya
00:50:420 (1) - the clap doesn't fit lol, just the finish is just fine. its the on tail right? okay then removed
01:04:170 - makes sense to make a triplet here when you did it 01:09:504 (4) - there. added
01:11:754 (3,4,5,6) - the jump pattern comes quite by surprise and is quite unreadable too with the angle being not that often u sed in the map anyway.
hm tried something here by reducing the jumps
01:20:254 (1) - would mention the same stuff i mentioned before on this part so just see for yourself and add the stuff you added from the things on the beginning. didnt understand xd
i usually mod all diffs, but i don't like this song to much sry lol. Well i did about the same drain i guess.

Good Luck on the set!

Sonnyc wrote:
~Haru's Hard~
00:04:920 (1,1) - Check your other 1/4 reverse slider usages. This is the only one with a jump, and it feels less appropriate for the beginning of this map. removed the jump xd
00:14:754 (1,2) - Starting the new combo from (2) will fit your rhythm better. uh, i did some noticable changes here, i mapped the downbeat so i nc'ed there instead
00:44:420 (3) - 00:47:087 (1) - The combo setting is inconsistent. what do you mean o.o?
00:49:087 (1,1) - These slider wasn't cool enough, because the entire path of 00:49:754 (1) is just getting overlapped. Even the slider end. I'd like you to think of something else. hm adjusted the slider then
01:14:504 (6) - The starting rhythm of this reverse slider is weird. You can hear the actual drum starts at 01:14:587 in the music. agree and its start on bluetick which can make it more weird, i moved it to redtick(removed 5) then extend this to red tick before (1)
Fine map.

Thanks Feb and Sonnyc!

Doormat wrote:
holy i almost forgot about this lol

same

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lit120

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Topic Starter

lit120 2016-07-09T11:51:54+00:00

updated David's

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-07-09T14:56:30+00:00

holy i almost forgot about this lol

@Bara-: i applied all suggestions
@Garden: i changed the slider shape to something less stupid
@Sonnyc: i'll leave hitsounds up to lit

Feb wrote:
[türmatte easi]

00:13:754 (1,2) - its easy diff so i'd recommend avoiding edgy slidershapes especially on the ends since they might confuse shitty players. made them less edgy
00:20:254 (2,3) - how about using this kind of rhyhtm where you cover all beats like since you cover the first red tick with the head so i thought you might wanna cover 00:20:587 - and 00:20:920 - too. Also pretty good since you avoid 1/2 rhythm completely like 00:21:587 - this drum here so y. i want to avoid using 1/2 spacing between notes since i think the cymbal on the downbeat should be emphasized more than the drums on the offbeat before it
00:23:754 (4) - I guess you want to cover that background sound? however if you would cover it you should start the slider at 00:23:587 - since its starts there. Lemme suggest a rhyhtm which might be better: Since you have followed vocals on 00:21:754 (1) - and following until (3) i suggest you continue following vocal. So yeah i did a thing
00:26:087 (3,4,5) - how about using drum additions for this sections? fits imo with the drums in the song. i'll leave hitsounds up to lit
00:44:420 (3) - no whistles in this section? like on all downbeat sliders imo all of them fit.
01:01:754 (1) - imo two 1/1 sliders fit here better to the vocals than the 2/1 here. i did a thing
01:13:087 (2) - tbh i think you should neglect here the vocal and go for the downbeat instead i ignored it on stuff like 01:11:087 (3) - where you have 01:11:587 - the end on vocal and this bell w/e sound. Yeah and I thought you'd end it on the downbeat lol, which still sucks abit cuz its easy and so on nnnnn i prefer to follow the vocals here
01:28:420 (1) - I'd follow those bright background sounds and i guess you wanted to lol, but the second slider doesn't really do that it just covers and unimportant white tick and neglects the downbeat where this bright sound starts so i'd extend 01:28:420 (1) - to and reverse and add a note or w/e you want at 01:29:754 - ... I'd prolly use a long slider here or sth to have stream and that bright thingy covered. musically this section is very similar to 00:13:754 (1,2,3) - and i was trying to reflect that in the mapping here. i'm following the piano notes
01:31:170 - shouldn't spinner start here where a actual sound is happening? imo it sounds like this sound starts right after 01:30:920 - i don't think it matters where this spinner starts
Good Luck on the set!

thanks all~ http://puu.sh/pVMZc/24d9101eb9.zip

lit120

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lit120 2016-07-09T15:07:42+00:00

updated doormat's including his hitsound stuff so yeha

@Sonnyc didn't hear a drum there on Doormat's so yeha

lit120

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lit120 2016-07-11T07:54:08+00:00

post again for diff update on haru's hard

Chaoslitz

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Chaoslitz 2016-07-19T18:26:40+00:00

M4M

[Doormat's Easy]

00:05:587 (1) - I know you have to start this in red tick, so put this near the center (easier to hit) to resolve the 4 beat recovery rules
00:14:754 (2) - Place this higher, the angle is quite sharp
00:57:754 - Finish here is weird

[DavidEd's Normal]

00:28:254 (1) - You don't need this NC
00:38:920 (4,5) - I don't know what you are following here.. try this

[Haru's Hard]

00:04:754 (1,1) - I don't think it is good to stack a 1/2 pattern at the beginning
00:49:087 (1,1) - It is quite misleading when only this two sliders are stacking together
00:58:254 (2,3) - Oh this jump is too large for a Hard diff, just simply unstack from the slider
01:02:254 (2) - ^ as well, especially there is no drum to emphasize
01:12:087 (4) - Missing clap
01:13:337 (2) - wut shouldn't it placed on red tick? lol, also you can try using two notes instead since you placed finish at the slider end that means it need emphasize
01:14:420 (5) - It is weird to skip the vocal and follow drums, shorten reverse to 01:14:670 and then add a 1/2 slider at 01:14:754
01:22:087 (2) - 01:24:754 (2) - Same as 00:58:254 (2,3)

[wkyik's Insane]

00:16:420 (1,3) - Weird overlap lol, i guess it can be solved by placing 00:16:920 (2) higher so that the whole combo look more tidy
00:34:254 (1) - Unecessary NC
01:08:920 (1) - Weird finish
01:13:754 - ^
01:09:504 (3,1) - Not overlapped properly?
01:30:170 (3,4,5) - These claps are quite noisy and not following the hitsound pattern well
01:30:670 (2) - ^

[ecdonald's Extra]

00:04:920 (3,4) - This is weird to play with, better stack it to 00:05:087 (1)
00:49:087 (1) - 00:50:420 (1) - 00:52:420 (1) - Never expected someone to use a normal finish in this song, this is not fit

I believe some of the diffs are lack of hitsounds, from section 00:16:420 to 00:25:587 and from 00:43:087 to 00:48:420, I know this two part are clam so using soft-whistle will fit.
Good luck

ecdonald

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ecdonald 2016-08-02T12:35:42+00:00

sorry for my late >_<

Chaoslitz wrote:
[ecdonald's Extra]
00:04:920 (3,4) - This is weird to play with, better stack it to 00:05:087 (1)
00:49:087 (1) - 00:50:420 (1) - 00:52:420 (1) - Never expected someone to use a normal finish in this song, this is not fit
All fixed! Thanks!!

Thank you

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TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
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Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-08-02T13:04:19+00:00

Chaoslitz wrote:
[DavidEd's Normal]
00:28:254 (1) - You don't need this NC i dont
00:38:920 (4,5) - I don't know what you are following here.. try this vocal emphasize. but i heard there were a triangle sound here, so yeah sure

thanks for the mod

fixes

osu file format v14

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WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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[Metadata]
Title:Marine Blue ni Sotte
TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:lit120
Version:DavidEd's Normal
Source:ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
Tags:chiikano chiisana kanojo no serenade sayokyoku feng eroge galgame visual novel opening -hakurei- ecdonald davided kawaiwkyik rizia haruto haruto_aizawa doormat
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Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-09-10T17:21:24+00:00

Feb wrote:
[wkyik]

hi sup

00:05:587 (1) - nc here instead? keep nc
00:34:254 (1) - nc doesn't seem necessary to me
00:38:837 - see timestamp on haru's mod i'd make the same suggestion here. cant hear sound on blue tick
00:43:087 (1) - no whistles in this part? I thought at least on the downbeats so at least a bit of hitsounding guides the player trought that part.
00:57:420 (5,6,7,8) - whistlespam dansgame whsitle gopod
01:03:754 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - how about using drumset here instead? sounds better to me imo keep soft clap
k I guess quite cool... UHHHHHH

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
[wkyik's Insane]
00:04:754 (1,2) - spacing is kinda big ...
00:10:920 (1,3) - stack~
00:31:420 (2,3) - blanket can be improved
00:50:254 (2,1,2) - spacing might cause misread here since the 1/2 spacing is similar with 1/4
01:10:254 (3,5) - stack~
lit mod this map thanks : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/476595

Chaoslitz wrote:
[wkyik's Insane]
00:16:420 (1,3) - Weird overlap lol, i guess it can be solved by placing 00:16:920 (2) higher so that the whole combo look more tidy idk but i like it
00:34:254 (1) - Unecessary NC
01:08:920 (1) - Weird finish i dont think so cuz there have finish soun d
01:13:754 - ^ ^
01:09:504 (3,1) - Not overlapped properly? i forgot who said that auto stack will fucked up
01:30:170 (3,4,5) - These claps are quite noisy and not following the hitsound pattern well remove some
01:30:670 (2) - ^

thx
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lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-09-10T17:24:27+00:00

updated rize's, ecdonald's and david's

Doormat

2,049 posts

Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-09-11T06:34:21+00:00

sorry for delay, thanks for mod!

@Chaoslitz:

00:05:587 (1) - changed shape so that slider head is closer to center
i moved 00:14:754 (2) - up a bit
i copied hitsounds from rizia's insane but i agree that finish there is a bit odd so i changed to whistle

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: feng7th.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52170
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Marine Blue ni Sotte
TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:lit120
Version:Doormat's Easy
Source:ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
Tags:chiikano chiisana kanojo no serenade sayokyoku feng eroge galgame visual novel opening -hakurei- ecdonald davided kawaiwkyik rizia haruto haruto_aizawa doormat
BeatmapID:943046
BeatmapSetID:436763

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.899999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"kanojo.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Lasse

Beatmap Nominator

3,596 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-09-11T11:47:15+00:00

[general]
your clap is extremly quiet/barely audible to me
=> http://puu.sh/r7obB/72ca9c0d32.zip (same but a bit louder)

[serenade]
00:47:754 (3) - 1/2 slider + circle for 00:48:087 - so you actually click the strong vocal/start the stream on it
01:15:587 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - really thing the spacing progression could be more interesting here. right now it's pretty consistent up until the last few notes. starting out smaller, but going for a nice gradual increase would make for much more interesting gameplay
01:30:420 (7) - piano roll starts from here, doing the same for the kickslider pattern would be nice

there isn't really anything objectively wrong, but the rhythm feels way too bland/undermapped to me. I know you want to focus on vocals, but so many 1/1 sliders that skip over rather noticeable sounds and end on vocals (= low emphasis on those) isn't really what I personally expect on a map of this difficulty.
pretty sure you can find someone who wants to bubble this, but it's not really my type of map...

[ecdonald]
00:07:587 (3) - really bad usage of extended sliders. the skipped sound is way too strong for it to feel fitting
00:08:920 (3,4) - I know it's slider => slider but spacing still seems a bit much for this section
00:10:254 (3) - this one is kinda fine, though you should silence the end
00:11:754 (1,2,3,4) - why suddenly circles? sound on 2 and 4 are so weak it doesn't make sense to me
00:16:254 (1,2,3) - something about this manual stack looks horribly off
00:30:254 (3) - more spacing for this would make sense with how you usually emphasize vocals http://i.imgur.com/1tmsrkn.jpg keeps the overlap spacing with 00:31:254 (2) - the same and fits a bit better
00:43:087 (1) - no finish? // 01:17:753 (6) -
00:52:420 (1,1,1,1,1) - perfectly vertical/horizontal straight sliders look kinda out of place to me with your visuals for the whole map lol
01:08:754 (3,4,5,1) - autostack aesthetics

some interesting ideas, overlap thing is cute. though quite some extended sliders felt a bit unfitting to me

[rizia]
personally I liked the ar8 and it's totally readable, though I'm sure you know this might get you quite some negative opinions lol
00:16:420 (1,2,3) - just looks extremely messy/clumped, especially with this ar, there are so many other spots to place 3 : /
00:24:920 (2,3,1) - check this with stacking enabled, it looks horribly of ingame, 1 should be manually stacked
01:17:754 (1) - no finish here?
01:20:087 (5) - sound totally changes, but stream is completely same..
guess it's okay..

[haru]
would use ar7, it's enough and fits better with the spread
00:04:754 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/WnP09we.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/90trijz.jpg is way nicer since right now the piano starts in the middle of the repeat slider, this makes you click it

00:38:837 (5) - what is this even mapped to? + emphasis due to this makes no sense
00:50:420 (1) - 1/1 reverse would be so much better with how you followed vocals before
01:13:337 (2) - ?? should probably be 1/4 back lol
some of those 4x repeats are kinda weird, mainly the ones where music changes during them
I just hope you know how much harder something like http://i.imgur.com/oZN5EAy.jpg is for most people compared to http://i.imgur.com/kRVmX0C.jpg

[davided]
should extend ending spinner so it's the same as all other diffs
00:28:087 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - such a long chain of objects with now breaks inbetween (yes there are longer sliders but you still have to hold a key on them). should really reduce density a little
00:39:754 - rhythm seems really weird here, why not just something like http://i.imgur.com/GP0vC1D.jpg or similar to follow high pitched sounds
current poliry is just awkward to play
similar for lots of those rhythms: 00:43:587 (2,3) - they don't work for me at all ; / polarity is weird and it's pretty unclear what you intend to follow

00:48:420 (1,2,3,4) - intense buildup is suddenly mapped like an easy?
00:58:920 (1,2,3,4) - pretty sure you could come up with something more interesting here..

[doormat]
I used your update from the post above
00:15:754 (3) - is this really needed? only one in the whole diff
00:26:087 (3,4,5) - longest 1/1 circle pattern is in one of the calmest parts of the song? http://i.imgur.com/07zK3gk.jpg works just fine (or ctrlg on that rhythm, but I'd prefer to have 00:26:754 - clickable as it's the strongest sound here)

good luck with this!

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-09-11T16:41:49+00:00

Lasse wrote:
[general]
your clap is extremly quiet/barely audible to me
=> http://puu.sh/r7obB/72ca9c0d32.zip (same but a bit louder) took it

[serenade]
00:47:754 (3) - 1/2 slider + circle for 00:48:087 - so you actually click the strong vocal/start the stream on it i prefer following a vocal only
01:15:587 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - really thing the spacing progression could be more interesting here. right now it's pretty consistent up until the last few notes. starting out smaller, but going for a nice gradual increase would make for much more interesting gameplay ohh ok, this should do at least
01:30:420 (7) - piano roll starts from here, doing the same for the kickslider pattern would be nice nice idea xd

there isn't really anything objectively wrong, but the rhythm feels way too bland/undermapped to me. I know you want to focus on vocals, but so many 1/1 sliders that skip over rather noticeable sounds and end on vocals (= low emphasis on those) isn't really what I personally expect on a map of this difficulty.
pretty sure you can find someone who wants to bubble this, but it's not really my type of map...

good luck with this!

thx for mod!

will update doormat's later once he's done fixing stuff from his "updated" version that's not updated yet xd

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-09-11T17:08:02+00:00

Lasse wrote:
[general]
your clap is extremly quiet/barely audible to me its fine on my end

[davided]
should extend ending spinner so it's the same as all other diffs fixed
00:28:087 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - such a long chain of objects with now breaks inbetween (yes there are longer sliders but you still have to hold a key on them). should really reduce density a little will fix this now after multiple complaints
00:39:754 - rhythm seems really weird here, why not just something like http://i.imgur.com/GP0vC1D.jpg or similar to follow high pitched sounds didn't actually know what rhythm to follow here. what you suggested works
current poliry is just awkward to play poliry?
similar for lots of those rhythms: 00:43:587 (2,3) - they don't work for me at all ; / polarity is weird and it's pretty unclear what you intend to follow i wont increase note density, so im gonna use this rhythm instead because it's easy to follow and feels nice to play

00:48:420 (1,2,3,4) - intense buildup is suddenly mapped like an easy? only wanted to emphasize the very strong beats in this. wouldnt want the same pattern for 8 seconds right ^^
00:58:920 (1,2,3,4) - pretty sure you could come up with something more interesting here.. dont hear anything else in the music worth emphasizing so this would make the most sense right?

Alright thanks for the mod

FIXES

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
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ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:lit120
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Doormat

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Joined September 2013

Doormat 2016-09-11T18:56:03+00:00

@Lasse changed 00:15:754 (3) - to a 1/1 slider for better polarity and followed your suggestion for 00:26:087 (3,4) -

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osu file format v14

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Title:Marine Blue ni Sotte
TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:lit120
Version:Doormat's Easy
Source:ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
Tags:chiikano chiisana kanojo no serenade sayokyoku feng eroge galgame visual novel opening -hakurei- ecdonald davided kawaiwkyik rizia haruto haruto_aizawa doormat
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ecdonald

336 posts

Joined January 2012

ecdonald 2016-09-14T07:30:27+00:00

sorry for my late>_<

Lasse wrote:
[ecdonald]
00:07:587 (3) - really bad usage of extended sliders. the skipped sound is way too strong for it to feel fitting umm I followed the strings on this timing and the extending strings sound would fit in 3/4 slider for me
00:08:920 (3,4) - I know it's slider => slider but spacing still seems a bit much for this section reduced
00:10:254 (3) - this one is kinda fine, though you should silence the end fixed
00:11:754 (1,2,3,4) - why suddenly circles? sound on 2 and 4 are so weak it doesn't make sense to me umm because note many 1/2 circles makes somehow tiring for me,I think it's okay for that I felt the sounds are sufficient to some extent in 25% playback
00:16:254 (1,2,3) - something about this manual stack looks horribly off fixed
00:30:254 (3) - more spacing for this would make sense with how you usually emphasize vocals http://i.imgur.com/1tmsrkn.jpg keeps the overlap spacing with 00:31:254 (2) - the same and fits a bit better fixed
00:43:087 (1) - no finish? // 01:17:753 (6) - added
00:52:420 (1,1,1,1,1) - perfectly vertical/horizontal straight sliders look kinda out of place to me with your visuals for the whole map lol changed to curve sliders xd
01:08:754 (3,4,5,1) - autostack aesthetics :-)

some interesting ideas, overlap thing is cute. though quite some extended sliders felt a bit unfitting to me

Thank you for modding!

code

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Title:Marine Blue ni Sotte
TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:lit120
Version:ecdonald's Extra
Source:ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
Tags:chiikano chiisana kanojo no serenade sayokyoku feng eroge galgame visual novel opening -hakurei- ecdonald davided kawaiwkyik rizia haruto haruto_aizawa doormat
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lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-09-19T08:59:18+00:00

updated ecdonald's, david's and doormat's

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2016-10-10T07:27:34+00:00

Hello

General :
If you can find the video, Please add it!

Serenade :
00:41:920 (2,3) - This part is unnatural for flow. try to move right this slider 00:42:087 (3) - .
01:12:087 (3,1) - ^ same
01:13:420 (3) - hmm, finish sound is loud for music. remove it or turn down the volume ?
01:30:420 (7,1,2,1) - it's not good for playing ... prefer to make again on this part, like move 01:30:920 (1) - etc ...

ecdonald's Extra :
00:52:754 (1) - You used a normal-whistle on guitar sound on here 00:31:587 - . but this part is not that sound on the slider's head. also it's too loud. Please remove it or turn down the volume.
01:30:254 (3,1) - I feel it's unnatural for flow. use ctrl + h to stream 01:30:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - or make another pattern ?

Haru's Hard :
00:58:754 (3) - Please reduce spacing, it doesn't have strong sound.
01:12:087 (4) - missing a clap
01:13:337 (2) - pls fix the snap lol

that's all, call me back

Dilectus

1,727 posts

Joined April 2014

Dilectus 2016-10-10T14:38:39+00:00

Found the opening on youtube. Unfortunally, I have no knowledge on how to encode, so you're going to ask someone to encode it for you

Although it may seem a bit inapropriate... plis learn how to draw females japan

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BcCapfQFMmE

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-10-10T17:27:31+00:00

alacat wrote:
Hello

General :
If you can find the video, Please add it! pls. i saw that nsfw thingy and i ain't gonna add that orz

Serenade :
00:41:920 (2,3) - This part is unnatural for flow. try to move right this slider 00:42:087 (3) - . rip triangle
01:12:087 (3,1) - ^ same ok
01:13:420 (3) - hmm, finish sound is loud for music. remove it or turn down the volume ? same volume like 01:12:420 (1) - for me here
01:30:420 (7,1,2,1) - it's not good for playing ... prefer to make again on this part, like move 01:30:920 (1) - etc ... triangle will do

that's all, call me back

thx!

i fixed the snap and the hitsound only for haru, but about that spacing one, i ain't touching that, so i'll leave that to him instead

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2016-10-10T17:33:17+00:00

fuk double post xd

ecdonald

336 posts

Joined January 2012

ecdonald 2016-10-11T10:32:08+00:00

alacat wrote:
Hello

ecdonald's Extra :
00:52:754 (1) - You used a normal-whistle on guitar sound on here 00:31:587 - . but this part is not that sound on the slider's head. also it's too loud. Please remove it or turn down the volume. vocalに合わせてsoft-whitleにしてみました!
01:30:254 (3,1) - I feel it's unnatural for flow. use ctrl + h to stream 01:30:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - or make another pattern ? ctrl + hしました

Thank you!!

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lit120

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Topic Starter

lit120 2016-10-11T14:28:18+00:00

updated ecdonald's

Haruto

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Joined December 2013

Haruto 2017-01-01T09:44:20+00:00

Chaoz wrote:
[Haru's Hard]
◾00:04:754 (1,1) - I don't think it is good to stack a 1/2 pattern at the beginning Alright, fixed
◾00:49:087 (1,1) - It is quite misleading when only this two sliders are stacking together Yea moved this too
◾00:58:254 (2,3) - Oh this jump is too large for a Hard diff, just simply unstack from the slider sure
◾01:02:254 (2) - ^ as well, especially there is no drum to emphasize okay
◾01:12:087 (4) - Missing clap
◾01:13:337 (2) - wut shouldn't it placed on red tick? lol, also you can try using two notes instead since you placed finish at the slider end that means it need emphasize eh, I'm following vocal here, I don't really want to map the drums here so I hope you can understand that tho o:
◾01:14:420 (5) - It is weird to skip the vocal and follow drums, shorten reverse to 01:14:670 and then add a 1/2 slider at 01:14:754
◾01:22:087 (2) - 01:24:754 (2) - Same as 00:58:254 (2,3)

Fixed all actually instead of that vocal thingy one, thanks chaoz!

Lasse wrote:
[haru]
would use ar7, it's enough and fits better with the spread hmm, changed to 7.2 instead
00:04:754 (1) - http://i.imgur.com/WnP09we.jpg or http://i.imgur.com/90trijz.jpg is way nicer since right now the piano starts in the middle of the repeat slider, this makes you click it kinda fixed this.

00:38:837 (5) - what is this even mapped to? + emphasis due to this makes no sense vocal
00:50:420 (1) - 1/1 reverse would be so much better with how you followed vocals before sure, changed
01:13:337 (2) - ?? should probably be 1/4 back lol idk what do you mean here
some of those 4x repeats are kinda weird, mainly the ones where music changes during them
I just hope you know how much harder something like http://i.imgur.com/oZN5EAy.jpg is for most people compared to http://i.imgur.com/kRVmX0C.jpg

Thanks lasse!!

alacat wrote:
Haru's Hard :
00:58:754 (3) - Please reduce spacing, it doesn't have strong sound.
01:12:087 (4) - missing a clap
01:13:337 (2) - pls fix the snap lol

Fixed them already except the snap issue, Thanks alacat san!!.

Lol I don't understand what people mean and what lasse means by 1/4 here. Do you guys think that I should place a 1/4 here?? or what lol

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lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

Topic Starter

lit120 2017-01-01T09:48:06+00:00

updated haru's and revived

alacat

osu! Alumni

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Joined May 2011

alacat 2017-01-11T10:58:32+00:00

ok Good luck

Doyak

osu! Alumni

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Joined November 2012

Doyak 2017-03-21T19:26:00+00:00

Oh I almost forgot about this

[DavidEd's Normal]
*I feel this diff is a lot unstructured. What I see in general in this diff are snake trains rather than actual patterns that makes the basic structure of the map. In other words, it has some flows and that's all. Maybe there are some blankets/parallel or symmetric sliders, but I don't see more than that. Map is not only about having beats and flows, but it also needs to have patterns and structures that can identify the entire map.

*I also don't see a difference between calm parts and intense parts. Just look how intense 00:16:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 00:22:920 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 00:27:087 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - are compared to the whole kiai. Even though it's a Normal diff, you still should care about the relative intensity between musical parts. Try to calm down the calmer parts a lot.

*01:15:087 (1,2,3,4,5) - It's better to follow 3/2 piano beats here. The drums are not specifically stronger on white ticks, but there are good piano sounds on 01:15:087 - 01:15:587 - 01:16:087 - 01:16:587 - 01:17:087 - so sticking your notes to these makes the rhythm more music-following. Look how Easy handled this part.

These are the most critical issues I find. There are other minor things I would point out but well, I think we need to handle these issues first before we go on to minor things.

[Haruto's Hard]
* Increase AR a bit, at least 7.5. As the bpm is quite high, stacked triplets are harder to read with low AR.
* Also try lowering Slider Leniency a bit, so that you can avoid stack RIP like 00:40:920 (2,1,3) - .
* 00:14:754 (3,1) - Rather than this, try to use 1/1 slider + circle, as the 3/2 rhythm things keeps until 00:15:087 - and then you have a strong sound on 00:15:254 - .
* 00:16:087 (4) - There's no distinct beat on the sliderhead. Just use a circle on 00:16:254 - , why not.
* 00:23:754 (3,4) - Why not use circle - slider - circle? Both 00:23:920 - and 00:24:254 - are stronger than 00:24:087 - . It'll be consistent with 00:18:587 (2,3) - as well.
* 00:48:420 (1,1,1,1) - This is quite a strange sv change... Why only 00:49:087 (1) - is accelerated? It's not a build up or anything.
* One sad thing I feel about the kiai is that you used too much 1/1 sliders for the vocals while spamming 1/2s on the piano sounds. Even though you're following the vocals, many vocals are actually on the sliderends so they feel really under-emphasized compared to the piano sounds/other parts. You could have divided some of them into 1/2 slider + circle when there is a clear drumbeat like 00:55:254 - 00:55:754 - 00:57:920 - 00:58:420 - and so on. Well, please consider about it.

[wkyik's Insane]
Increase AR to at least 8.5... this song is not slow lol

[ecdonald's Extra]
* Could you lower Slider Velocity a bit? Because 00:12:420 (1,3,1) - RIP stack
* This map overuses extended sliders. Thankfully I can quote SRC to explain this easily.

Standard Ranking Criteria/Guidelines wrote:
Avoid extended sliders which pass through important sounds. If an extended slider tail lands on silence and passes through a loud sound, players may have trouble interpreting rhythm. In these cases, it is better to place the slider tail on an audible beat.

So there are a lot of extended 3/4 sliders while it has a very clear drum beat inside, like 00:10:420 - 00:12:587 - 00:13:254 - 00:30:587 - 00:32:587 - 00:33:420 - 00:35:254 - 00:35:754 - 01:03:254 - 01:05:920 - 01:08:587 - 01:22:420 - 01:25:087 - 01:27:254 - 01:27:920 - 01:27:920 - .
I only pointed out the most clear ones that are audible with 100%. It's not bad to occasionally use them to emphasize certain sounds, but if they pass through a lot of important beats, that means they're missing a lot of rhythm elements and abusing sliderends as a non-beat. Sliderends are still supposed to represent a beat. So extended sliders should only be used when the sound it is representing dominates over sounds that are tiny enough to be ignored.
* 00:51:087 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Well the jump size already reached at max on 00:51:587 (4) - , while the drum sound gets gradually louder. I think making them gradually grow is better to make this build up section.
* 00:56:754 (2,3,4,5) - Random jumps... Why not use some slider and tone them down?
* 00:59:587 (3) - Though it's not an 'extended slider', it still passes through a very clear piano sound 00:59:754 - . Why not just do https://puu.sh/uTp18/1ab08c36a3.jpg

Won't get to too minor things right now, but I believe some rhythms can be improved.

[Serenade]
* 00:12:420 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Aside from that I don't agree with constant 1/2 jumps for 1/1-strong sounds, starting a full jump pattern from here weakens the emphasis of the actual 1/2s of 00:13:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - . It's like players are playing a single huge jump section over 2 different parts. And yes, why do you use constant 1/2 jumps when the red ticks are not strong at all? This is a rhythm game, not an intensity simulator.
Also I don't really see a reason to use a triplet 00:15:004 - only. That's not a distinct sound, nor is at the exact 1/4 beat.
* Another big issue is that, your spacing on regular drumbeats are generally too big, so you lose emphasis on what you actually want to focus on. This gets even worse because you're actually ignoring them sometimes for the sake of vocals. So basically the map is like this: you hear same drums; when there is a vocal passing through it, ignore that; when there is no vocal, use a half-screen jump. Let's take some examples. 00:54:254 (3,4,5) - 00:57:254 (3) - 01:01:587 (5) - 01:03:254 (2) - 01:05:254 (3) - 01:07:920 (3) - 01:09:087 (3) - 01:13:254 (2) - Are these beats any stronger than 00:55:254 - 00:59:754 - 01:00:420 - 01:01:254 - 01:01:920 - 01:02:587 - 01:05:920 - 01:08:587 - 01:11:254 - 01:11:754 - 01:12:587 - 01:13:754 - ? Though some of them are straight ignored while the others are half-screen jumps, yet they're not even smaller compared to other stronger sounds.
So you should either try to not ignore audible drumbeats, or at least reduce the spacing of unimportant drum sounds. Right now, the whole kiai is full of jumps that lacks differentiation between strong and weak sounds. Again, osu is a rhythm game, not an intensity simulator.
* 01:15:587 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This jump section has started with already too big spacing, and barely increased, while the drums actually grow a lot. I mean, it only increased from 3.0x to 3.6x until the very last note lol, while 01:15:587 (2,1,2,1,2) - these are actually quite quiet. Put some more differentiation, please. Also, why not divide the combos with 3, it's same as 00:13:754 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2) - .

Well that's all from me. Will veto this until the bold text issues are solved. Sorry about that.

lit120

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Topic Starter

lit120 2017-03-21T20:10:38+00:00

ignoring all those mods above for my own diff, cuz i decided to do a remap, based on what we discussed in irc .-.

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2017-03-23T13:23:31+00:00

overall i think the map is readable in ar8 so i keep it, also i changed some pattern base on ar

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: feng7th.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52170
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 86420
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.4

[Metadata]
Title:Marine Blue ni Sotte
TitleUnicode:マリンブルーに沿って
Artist:Sasaki Sayaka
ArtistUnicode:佐咲紗花
Creator:lit120
Version:wkyik's Insane
Source:ちいさな彼女の小夜曲
Tags:chiikano chiisana kanojo no serenade sayokyoku feng eroge galgame visual novel opening -hakurei- ecdonald davided kawaiwkyik rizia haruto haruto_aizawa doormat
BeatmapID:941282
BeatmapSetID:436763

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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