Here i come.
[Easy]
01:17:228 (77228|1,77978|3) - try make them at the col 3? it will follow PR more correctly, and forms a better difficulty curve with normal, as normal have LN mixed with 1/2 note while this only have 1/1 note.
01:20:228 - Well i understand you want to keep things simple with easy difficulty, but i still think it won't be hurt to try forming the pattern based on PR changes so the player can also get more feeling with the keysound here, something like:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6659516 ? don't forget the keysound if you apply.
01:25:103 (85103|3) - i would move this to column.2 so it would be consistent with the pattern at 01:13:103 - since the beginning of the section you use different pattern there.
01:28:103 (88103|3,88478|0,88478|1,88853|0) - shouldn't you keeping the consistency with the patterning that you did at 01:16:103 - ? at 01:16:103 - you simplify it to only 1 note while at 01:28:103 (88103|3,88478|0,88478|1,88853|0) - there's literally no differences with the pattern that you made at 01:26:228 -
01:39:353 (99353|1,100478|3) - not sure about the crunch-rim HS, not using C instead? it's the only 2 place i find you use that, and you revert it to C immediately, i don't really think it's necessary as it doesn't give much changes in the HS either.
01:59:603 (119603|1,119978|0,119978|2,120353|3,120353|1) - The keysound here sounds awkward for me, it feels like the melody got distorted and out of place suddenly compared with other sounds, maybe you can try find a more suit combination for it?
[Normal]
00:54:728 (54728|1,55103|1,55478|0) - make this at col 1-1-2? i find the stack at col 2 isn't natural when you compared it with other pattern that are being formed here.
01:02:603 (62603|0) - also move this to col 2? the triple stack at col 1 seems unintentional here, and it still forms jack at col.2
01:28:478 - why double? i suggest delete one note here since there isn't secondary piano sound like other double here, and it's similar with 01:16:478 -
01:39:353 (99353|1,100478|2) - Now i see your intention here, i still demand elaboration over why only 2 of these that got exception for HS though.
01:59:603 - While you emptied the keysound here maybe to emphasize the clap sound revolving this section, i find this not suit it you suddenly stop putting it..
02:11:228 (131228|0) - missing B5S_s? since you use one at 02:09:728 (129728|0) -
Simple set and yet beautiful , nothing more to say.
Please recheck the keysound and other things here.
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