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Arata Iiyoshi - Treasure Town

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Happy190
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, June 21, 2016 at 2:42:15 PM

Artist: Arata Iiyoshi
Title: Treasure Town
Source: ポケモン不思議のダンジョン 時の探検隊/闇の探検隊
Tags: Pokémon, Pokemon, Mystery Dungeon Explorer of Time Darkness Nintendo Fushigi no Danjon Toki no Tankentai Yami
BPM: 172
Filesize: 3078kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.38 stars, 128 notes)
  2. Hard (2.36 stars, 187 notes)
  3. Insane (2.69 stars, 221 notes)
  4. Normal (1.72 stars, 156 notes)
Download: Arata Iiyoshi - Treasure Town
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Welcome to Treasure Town! Treasure Town is the central village in Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Explorers of Time, Darkness and Sky and is usually where you would handle all your shopping needs.

Easy: 100% Ready for mods!
Normal: 100% Ready for mods!
Hard: 100% Ready for mods!
Insane: 100% Ready for mods!
Status: Fixing flow for Hard and Insane

Mapping update: Won't be able to map for about a few weeks. Traveling with family.
Izzywing
I think the offset is a bit off. Something right around 528 seems to be more accurate, although this might just be me or something. Try it out and see what you think.

Easy -

00:34:016 (1) - My only comment is that's weird that you have a single slider that lasts 3 beats long in the entire song. Perhaps consider using another in a similar way that you used this one?

Normal -

00:04:343 - Hit circle here?
00:07:133 - Hit circle here?
00:39:226 - Hit circle here?
01:14:110 - Hit circle here?

^These seem like weird and inexplicable gaps to me.

00:44:808 - Hit circle here?
00:46:203 - Hit circle here?

^Those two in particular might just be a preference thing. I can understand nothing having them but it feels way better with those in there.

Good luck! I'll check out your hard version when its done :)
Topic Starter
Happy190

Hobbes2 wrote:

I think the offset is a bit off. Something right around 528 seems to be more accurate, although this might just be me or something. Try it out and see what you think. I noticed that my offset is placed a little early and the offset you mentioned seems to fit the music better so I'll use your offset.

Easy -

00:34:016 (1) - My only comment is that's weird that you have a single slider that lasts 3 beats long in the entire song. Perhaps consider using another in a similar way that you used this one? Changed a few sliders

Normal -

00:04:343 - Hit circle here?
00:07:133 - Hit circle here?
00:39:226 - Hit circle here?
01:14:110 - Hit circle here? Everything here added

^These seem like weird and inexplicable gaps to me.

00:44:808 - Hit circle here? I personally think that this is a odd spot for a hit circle
00:46:203 - Hit circle here? Added

^Those two in particular might just be a preference thing. I can understand nothing having them but it feels way better with those in there.

Good luck! I'll check out your hard version when its done :) I should have Hard done in maybe 1 to 2 weeks and also, Thanks for the mod! :D

Hard Diff finished, looking over my work now
SyraxAxoJaxco
Hmm, i think use this as BG instead of yours. The same, but 1366x768.
Though actually you can search this BG's 1920x1080 on google... :o
Namki
Yo.
[General]
  1. Combo3 does not really fit the BG, I think 3 CCs is enough for this BG.
[Easy]
  1. In Easy diff spacing musn't change, 00:10:295 (5,1) - 0.62x, but here 00:11:690 (1,2) - 0.75x, and here 00:14:830 (5,1) - choose one spacing for the whole diff.
  2. 00:03:318 (1,2,3) - this flow should be done better, something like this.

    And then 00:05:411 (4) - ctrl+g and re-place.
  3. 00:05:411 (4) - you should emphasis this by placing a circle or starting a slider 00:06:109 - , because it is quite strong.
    00:13:783 (4) - the same issue.
    00:15:179 (1) - / 00:16:574 (3) - / 00:17:969 (5) - those as well. And others.
  4. 00:15:179 (1) - put it a bit lower.
    And those two a bit right 00:19:714 (7,1) - .
  5. 00:29:481 (2) - and this make vertical straight.
  6. 01:24:248 (1) - this curve looks bad, make only one anchor while making a curve. Like here 01:26:341 (3) - .
    Well, aesthetic is really important thing in lower diffs, you should learn how to make good flow and pretty look patterns. It comes with practice.
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:318 (1,2,3,4) - people make those patterns in 2010, there's no any flow.
    Make this.
  2. 00:06:109 (1) - delete anchor near the tail and place between the two central anchors, slider will look better.
    00:07:504 (3) - place here too.
  3. 00:09:946 (6) - same with big white ticks.
  4. 00:16:574 (4) - only one anchor for curves.
  5. 00:21:807 (4,5) - unstuck those, because they're not the same as 00:21:458 (3) - and you need to emphasis they.
  6. 00:23:900 (2,3,1) - yeye, issue with the spacing, you got it.
  7. How to make a good look wave slider:
  8. 00:37:853 (2,3) - wanna make a good blanket slider, make it that way:
  9. 00:45:179 (1,2) - make blankets more accurate.
  10. 01:13:086 (1,2,3) - ye, bad flow.
[Hard]
  1. 00:04:714 (4) - place it under this double 00:04:278 (2,3) - .
  2. 00:12:388 (2) - same place under the slider 00:11:690 (1) - for better flow.
  3. 00:17:969 (3) - make the copy of 00:17:272 (1) - and press ctrl + H.
  4. 00:36:022 (6,7) - make it spaced for better consistency and because of 00:24:510 (4,5,6,7) - you did the first double stacked and the second spaced.
  5. 00:55:295 (4) - this looks bad, make curve blanket.
    Else looks fine.
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:371 (1,2) - this is in 1/3. The whole map is in 1/3, I hear 1/3 here. It's really weird that you mapped half by 1/4 and half by 1/3.
    You need to replace objects.
  2. 00:06:371 (1,2) - select all objects (ctrl+A) and watch, most of your objects are filled in the center, you should map corners too.
    You shouldn't remap but remember this in the future.
  3. 01:21:341 (7,1) - this spacing doesn't fit the whole map doubles spacing. You used 1x for those, why did change here.
    Flow looks a bit harsh but it's an experience things. You will got it in the future.
good luck!
forgive me if I made mistakes
Topic Starter
Happy190

Namki wrote:

Yo.
[General]
  1. Combo3 does not really fit the BG, I think 3 CCs is enough for this BG.Removed
[Easy]
  1. In Easy diff spacing musn't change, 00:10:295 (5,1) - 0.62x, but here 00:11:690 (1,2) - 0.75x, and here 00:14:830 (5,1) - choose one spacing for the whole diff. ✔️
  2. 00:03:318 (1,2,3) - this flow should be done better, something like this. ✔️

    And then 00:05:411 (4) - ctrl+g and re-place.
  3. 00:05:411 (4) - you should emphasis this by placing a circle or starting a slider 00:06:109 - , because it is quite strong. Placed a circle then a slider
    00:13:783 (4) - the same issue. ^
    00:15:179 (1) - / 00:16:574 (3) - / 00:17:969 (5) - those as well. And others. ✔️✔️✔️✔️✔️
  4. 00:15:179 (1) - put it a bit lower.
    And those two a bit right 00:19:714 (7,1) - . I sort of used a different pattern here while changing some errors you mentioned above
  5. 00:29:481 (2) - and this make vertical straight. ✔️
  6. 01:24:248 (1) - this curve looks bad, make only one anchor while making a curve. Like here 01:26:341 (3) - .
    Well, aesthetic is really important thing in lower diffs, you should learn how to make good flow and pretty look patterns. It comes with practice.
[Normal]
  1. 00:03:318 (1,2,3,4) - people make those patterns in 2010, there's no any flow. "no any flow" lol but I fixed this ✔️
    Make this.
  2. 00:06:109 (1) - delete anchor near the tail and place between the two central anchors, slider will look better. Neat
    00:07:504 (3) - place here too. ✔️
  3. 00:09:946 (6) - same with big white ticks. ✔️
  4. 00:16:574 (4) - only one anchor for curves. ✔️
  5. 00:21:807 (4,5) - unstuck those, because they're not the same as 00:21:458 (3) - and you need to emphasis they. ✔️
  6. 00:23:900 (2,3,1) - yeye, issue with the spacing, you got it. ✔️
  7. How to make a good look wave slider:
  8. 00:37:853 (2,3) - wanna make a good blanket slider, make it that way: ✔️
  9. 00:45:179 (1,2) - make blankets more accurate. ✔️
  10. 01:13:086 (1,2,3) - ye, bad flow. ✔️

[Hard]
  1. 00:04:714 (4) - place it under this double 00:04:278 (2,3) - . I did what you said but changed how the slider looked a bit
  2. 00:12:388 (2) - same place under the slider 00:11:690 (1) - ✔️
  3. 00:17:969 (3) - make the copy of 00:17:272 (1) - and press ctrl + H. I didn't even know about this ✔️
  4. 00:36:022 (6,7) - make it spaced for better consistency and because of 00:24:510 (4,5,6,7) - you did the first double stacked and the second spaced. ✔️
  5. 00:55:295 (4) - this looks bad, make curve blanket. Not sure if I made it look better or worse :o
    Else looks fine.
[Insane]
  1. 00:06:371 (1,2) - this is in 1/3. The whole map is in 1/3, I hear 1/3 here. It's really weird that you mapped half by 1/4 and half by 1/3.
    You need to replace objects. I will ✔️ this soon
  2. 00:06:371 (1,2) - select all objects (ctrl+A) and watch, most of your objects are filled in the center, you should map corners too.
    You shouldn't remap but remember this in the future. I shall use this advice for future beatmaps
  3. 01:21:341 (7,1) - this spacing doesn't fit the whole map doubles spacing. You used 1x for those, why did change here. I'm not really trying to change the spacing. Most of the spacing errors I do is on accident ✔️
    Flow looks a bit harsh but it's an experience things. You will got it in the future.
good luck! Thanks!
forgive me if I made mistakes
✔️ = Fixed
DeletedUser_6181859
Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

  1. Artist is "飯吉新", don't change Romanised Artist
  2. More right source is "ポケモン不思議のダンジョン 時の探検隊/闇の探検隊"
  3. Remove ALL tags and paste: "pokemon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Explorer of Time Darkness Nintendo Fushigi no Danjon Toki no Tankentai Yami"
  4. Also move preview point to 00:22:504

Easy

  1. Fix all mistakes with Distance Spacing: Ctrl+Shift+A -> Check distance snap
  2. 00:02:969 (3) - move a bit down for better flow with 00:01:923 (2)
  3. 00:04:365 (2) - ^
  4. 00:06:807 (6,7) - make identical for blanket
  5. 00:23:900 (2) - move a bit left for better flow (suggestion)
  6. 00:25:295 (5) - nc
  7. 00:29:481 (2) - move a bit left for better flow
  8. 00:31:225 (1,2) - strange pattern... really.
  9. 00:37:155 (5) - nc
  10. 01:01:923 (1) - move to x=368 y=84 and create blanket with 01:01:225 (7)
  11. 01:11:690 (1,2) - swap ncs
  12. 01:13:783 (3,4,5) - omg this flow kill me
  13. 01:15:179 (5) - nc
  14. 01:20:062 (3,1) - fix this antiflow too
  15. 01:40:993 (1) - remove and add spinner

Normal

  1. Fix all mistakes with Distance Spacing: Ctrl+Shift+A -> Check distance snap
  2. 00:00:528 (1,2,3) - flow looks weird
  3. 00:06:109 (1,3) - this sliders isn't right, try to make like in %image%
  4. 00:35:411 (3) - ^
  5. 00:08:900 (5) - nc
  6. 00:10:993 (1,2) - swap ncs
  7. 00:16:574 (4,1,2) - fix this overlap, also fix blanket in 00:15:528 (3,4)
  8. 00:24:597 (3,2) - fix blanket if possible
  9. 00:37:853 (2,3,4) - strange pattern, fix blanket and stack 2 and 4
  10. 00:39:597 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  11. 00:56:341 (5,1) - wow this jump, fix it
  12. 01:13:086 (1,2) - looks strange because flow
  13. 01:34:016 (3,4) - fix blanket
  14. 01:36:807 (3,4) - ^
  15. 01:40:993 (1) - same as in Easy

Other notices

  1. Read this guide for making nice flow. I see you have strange flow in all diffs.
  2. Read this guide for making nice sliders and patterns like blanket.
Good luck!
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Topic Starter
Happy190

100bit wrote:

Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

  1. Artist is "飯吉新", don't change Romanised Artist
  2. More right source is "ポケモン不思議のダンジョン 時の探検隊/闇の探検隊"
  3. Remove ALL tags and paste: "pokemon Pokémon Mystery Dungeon Explorer of Time Darkness Nintendo Fushigi no Danjon Toki no Tankentai Yami"
  4. Also move preview point to 00:22:504✔️ for everything above

Easy

  1. Fix all mistakes with Distance Spacing: Ctrl+Shift+A -> Check distance snap ✔️
  2. 00:02:969 (3) - move a bit down for better flow with 00:01:923 (2) ✔️
  3. 00:04:365 (2) - ^ ✔️
  4. 00:06:807 (6,7) - make identical for blanket ✔️
  5. 00:23:900 (2) - move a bit left for better flow (suggestion) ✔️
  6. 00:25:295 (5) - nc ✔️
  7. 00:29:481 (2) - move a bit left for better flow ✔️
  8. 00:31:225 (1,2) - strange pattern... really. ✔️
  9. 00:37:155 (5) - nc ✔️
  10. 01:01:923 (1) - move to x=368 y=84 and create blanket with 01:01:225 (7) ✔️
  11. 01:11:690 (1,2) - swap ncs ✔️
  12. 01:13:783 (3,4,5) - omg this flow kill me ✔️
  13. 01:15:179 (5) - nc ✔️
  14. 01:20:062 (3,1) - fix this antiflow too ✔️
  15. 01:40:993 (1) - remove and add spinner I prefer not to use any spinners here and having a spinner here seems awkward to me

Normal

  1. Fix all mistakes with Distance Spacing: Ctrl+Shift+A -> Check distance snap
  2. 00:00:528 (1,2,3) - flow looks weird ✔️
  3. 00:06:109 (1,3) - this sliders isn't right, try to make like in %image% ✔️
  4. 00:35:411 (3) - ^ ✔️ decided to readjust everything in this diff so some things might have changed for better flow
  5. 00:08:900 (5) - nc ✔️
  6. 00:10:993 (1,2) - swap ncs ✔️
  7. 00:16:574 (4,1,2) - fix this overlap, also fix blanket in 00:15:528 (3,4) ✔️ Fixed while adjusting
  8. 00:24:597 (3,2) - fix blanket if possible ^
  9. 00:37:853 (2,3,4) - strange pattern, fix blanket and stack 2 and 4 I don't think it's strange or maybe I already fixed it while rearranging
  10. 00:39:597 (1,2,3,4) - ^ I changed the pattern a bit instead
  11. 00:56:341 (5,1) - wow this jump, fix it Again, fixed while rearraganing
  12. 01:13:086 (1,2) - looks strange because flow ✔️
  13. 01:34:016 (3,4) - fix blanket ✔️
  14. 01:36:807 (3,4) - ^ I didn't plan to do a blanket here
  15. 01:40:993 (1) - same as in Easy same reason as in Easy

Other notices

  1. Read this guide for making nice flow. I see you have strange flow in all diffs. I read this before. I was just lazy to update my beatmap to fix the flow
  2. Read this guide for making nice sliders and patterns like blanket.
Good luck!
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