1. Extra (5,72 stars, 935 notes)
2. Kasai's Insane (3,86 stars, 244 notes)

iamVill wrote:

<3 Mod:
Note: I know ur not done with your map yet, but i've choosen to put breaks and likely as mods too :p

SPOILER

00:14:818 (1,2,3,4,5) - should be the same as this^^ 00:13:454 (1,2,3,4,5) - Fixed
00:21:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - this should be as the above but not with the edit. Then make a slider starting 00:22:182 - to - 00:22:454 - Fixed
00:21:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could also make note 5 be a 2 tick slider so still can start the new slider at ^ that time xD - Interesting.. Added it
00:25:454 - The break is too early, you need more notes. If you wan't a break it should start here 00:26:545 - but i think u should try to make it without the break at that point :3 - I like it how it is now, I might have it changed in the future
00:33:909 (1,2,3,4) - make the spacing a bit smaller :p - Fixed
Here 00:39:091 - to - 00:41:682 - needs atleast 1 slider. My suggestion would be making a slider of these 00:40:454 (1,2) - (2 tick slider) - Added
00:43:250 - the break is too early, needs more notes/sliders. - This part isn't mapped yet, don't worry
00:43:250 - Don't do a break there, but i guess you'll edit it xD- ^
01:13:113 - Feels like some notes needs. Suggestion = - Added for now but might be changed in the future. Looks a bit hard imo.
01:15:636 (3,1,2,3) - suggestion* make the first 3 a slider until note 2 will appear, then delete the last note (3). Change the slider speed to 0,75 or likely. The speed 1 at that time is too fast^^. - I'll keep it how it is for now
01:26:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - randomly placed (doesn't fit that great to the beatmap :p - I changed it but can't say for sure that it's better
01:31:999 (5,6,7) - Put slider instead :p - Fixed
01:34:181 (12) - Maybe slider too^^ - Think singletap sounds better

Remember that a beatmaps needs loads of sliders
Without sliders it can feel awkward :p
Yup, I'll try to get a few more in there

01:34:712 - Don't break it there :p I'll leave it there for now, might have it changed later
01:41:817 (1) - More circles, less breaks - Not done yet D:
02:37:453 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - k xD - ^
04:01:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Nice end, but I think that all the 04:02:272 (5,6) - and the 04:03:363 (10,11) - and the 04:04:454 (15,16) - should be sliders^^ - This is just some random placements i did in the beginning. Will be removed later on c:

You'll need to set a preview point for this map. - Fixed. Thanks, didn't know how to do this part
how to:


Consider open Aimod (press: Ctrl+Shift+A)
then you'll see all your errors and warnings. - Ooo, thanks.

Remember Kiai! in the timing menu -> Styles -> Kiai mode. - Added

Mod Kasai: (idk if i can but, i'll give it a mod anyways)

SPOILER

00:16:454 (5,6,7,8,9) - Don't note per beat at that point :p U could have a slider or likely to make it feel less awkward.
00:20:000 (1,2,3,4) - Needs some :3
00:25:795 - ^
00:26:750 - Im not fan of that break tho xD U guys decide (it's probaly just me that isn't a fan of it xD)
00:34:182 (5) - end here 00:34:454 - then make some circles that fits the music a little better.
00:35:545 (2,3) - doesn't fit the music :p Suggestion = ... couldn't fit it my self too, but this is my idea
00:36:772 (1,2) - Doesn't fit the music, there should also be a note at the tick before. Like this:
00:37:727 (1,2,3) - the same as above ^
00:38:682 - Recommend putting a slider here, ends here 00:38:954 -
00:39:772 - Same ^
00:40:727 (2,3,4,5,6) - Nuuuu~~ feels a bit random, it fits the music, but random :p I suggest some sliders or something instead xD
00:48:091 (1,2,3) - Too suddenly
00:55:591 (1,2,3) - Nuu~~ Same ^
00:59:409 (1,2,3) - Start at the bick white tick^^
01:06:772 (1,2,3) - idk about this one :p
01:11:545 (4,5,6) - ^
01:13:454 (3) - Ecchi make bring this in, but it can be discussed who is right xD Both you and ecchi's slider is rankable since it fits the music and looks great xD
01:22:454 (2,3,4,5) - Seems like its hard to hit (but idk)
01:26:000 (5) - Start a slider, since that would fit the music. (not a long one, just until near the triple)
01:30:363 (1,2,3) - Delete circle two :p
01:35:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like the start^^ NICE 0 BREAKS

You'll need to put a previewpoint for this map :p Shown at Ecchi's mod.

Consider open Aimod Ctrl + Shift + A

Else nice map. I like most of the triples (most likely they fits the music :3)
The map area ussage is good (y) (Both Ecchi and Kasai) -

Thats all for now ;3

PM me again if you need help with the maps*^^ - Will do, thanks a bunch c:

iamVill wrote:

Mod Kasai: (idk if i can but, i'll give it a mod anyways)

SPOILER

00:16:454 (5,6,7,8,9) - Don't note per beat at that point :p U could have a slider or likely to make it feel less awkward. Fixed!
00:20:000 (1,2,3,4) - Needs some :3 I actually like this spacing, I added a triple and some taps at the end though.
00:25:795 - ^ I like that break, it fits the music.
00:26:750 - Im not fan of that break tho xD U guys decide (it's probaly just me that isn't a fan of it xD) I'll leave it like this.
00:34:182 (5) - end here 00:34:454 - then make some circles that fits the music a little better. Done. It's much better now.
00:35:545 (2,3) - doesn't fit the music :p Suggestion = ... couldn't fit it my self too, but this is my idea I took your slider and flipped it vertically.
00:36:772 (1,2) - Doesn't fit the music, there should also be a note at the tick before. Like this: Fixed!
00:37:727 (1,2,3) - the same as above ^ Fixed!
00:38:682 - Recommend putting a slider here, ends here 00:38:954 - I dislike this one. I put a circle at the white tick instead.
00:39:772 - Same ^ Fixed! Sounds much better.
00:40:727 (2,3,4,5,6) - Nuuuu~~ feels a bit random, it fits the music, but random :p I suggest some sliders or something instead xD Fixed!
00:48:091 (1,2,3) - Too suddenly I added a slider here, hope it's fine now.
00:55:591 (1,2,3) - Nuu~~ Same ^ ^
00:59:409 (1,2,3) - Start at the bick white tick^^ Fixed!
01:06:772 (1,2,3) - idk about this one :p I also added a slider here.
01:11:545 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:13:454 (3) - Ecchi make bring this in, but it can be discussed who is right xD Both you and ecchi's slider is rankable since it fits the music and looks great xD The slider is fine just the way it is.
01:22:454 (2,3,4,5) - Seems like its hard to hit (but idk) I reduced the space between the circles. I guess it should work now.
01:26:000 (5) - Start a slider, since that would fit the music. (not a long one, just until near the triple) Fixed! I used a shorter slider though.
01:30:363 (1,2,3) - Delete circle two :p Fixed!
01:35:272 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Like the start^^ NICE 0 BREAKS

You'll need to put a previewpoint for this map :p Shown at Ecchi's mod. We'll fix that.

Consider open Aimod Ctrl + Shift + A Ah, I didn't know something like this exists. Thanks!

Else nice map. I like most of the triples (most likely they fits the music :3)
The map area ussage is good (y) (Both Ecchi and Kasai)

Thats all for now ;3

PM me again if you need help with the maps*^^

Ayyri wrote:

Nice song. - Oh yes c:

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General:

This map repeats quite a bit. The patterns are effective, yes. But highly creative? Not necessarily. -True, I can't really say that I'm very creative T-T
Also this map feels really jumpy for how calming the song is. Interesting means of mapping here. - I like interesting stuff. Unless it's bad. Then i'll change it of course.
You forewarned me that you were new to mapping, and I can see that. But at least it wasn't as bad as some other maps I've seen. With some polishing, this could actually be pretty nice. - Woo!
If you want an actual hard mod besides this, I'd be happy to give one in game. So I could ask about some rhythms you have going on here, which are quite questionable. - Thank you, i'll write u ~

<3 :

00:36:397 (3) - Move to 00:36:261 - and add a circle at 00:36:670 - Fixed. Also added it to 00:38:170 (1,2,3,4) -
00:59:579 (2,3) - This sounds awkward, and plays awkwardly. Please shorten 00:59:579 (2) - to end at 00:59:716 - Got it!
01:10:216 (1,2,3) - This section is lacking in what the song is giving you. Farther than have it be a jump, maybe consider making it a section of sliders, or even one slider. Even a stream would work here. - Fixed.
Considering the difficulty level of this map, adding a stream from 02:09:670 - to 02:09:943 - would be a good lead into the kiai. - I'm bad at doing streams but I added it.
Leaving 02:10:829 - and 02:10:897 - empty when it's the start of the chorus, feels rather odd when playing. Consider adding two notes there. (Making it a triplet.) - Alright. Added it.
Same thing as above applies at 02:14:647 - and 02:14:716 - Consider making it another triplet. - Fixed.
Make 02:17:306 (4) - a slider ending at the next red tick. Since it's the same rhythm as at 02:16:761 (1) - Added.
Add a stream between 02:17:852 (2,1) - Added. Also added circle to 02:17:716 (2) - because it sounded weird otherwise.
Remove 02:24:670 (1) - There's no sound here. - Oh that's right, removed it!
Make a stream from 03:00:943 (2) - to 03:01:352 - It doesn't really fit the background part without it. The part that you seem to be following here. - Added it.
From 03:08:306 (1) - to 03:08:988 - I have no idea what you're following here. Either follow the lyrics or the guitar. It feels empty using random jumps. -Might be fixed~ ill pm u on this
Same thing as above applies here 03:09:397 (1,2,3) - Not sure what to do here D:
Add a note at 03:38:170 - remapped this a bit
Add a note at 03:38:716 - ^
Add notes at 03:40:829 - and 03:40:897 - Uhm.. I think I fixed it.
Stream between 03:42:943 (1,1) - Still unsure about this part. Remapped a bit and now there's a stream there, still not sure if this will work.
Add a note at 04:09:943 - No, i cant hear it.

The above adding of notes was because it felt lacking, or empty without them there. - Alright.


Also end the kiai at 04:09:943 - rather than letting it go on forever. - Fixed.

I shot a star at it. :3
thanks a ton :3

HaloMaster96 wrote:

From my mod queue

<3

First off I would recommend changing the diff name for ranking reasons - Alrighty~
NC= New Combo
00:12:943 (6,1) - Why NC here? - Fixed it. This is just me screwing up. I'm quite bad when it comes to combos
00:20:852 (5,1) - Fixed
00:23:306 (1,1,2,3,1) - Fixed
00:26:579 Why a break here? - Because i think it fits there really T-T
00:33:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - No beat there being emphasized as a stream - Removed stream
00:37:488 (1,1,2,1,2) - NC there as well, should be 1,2,3,1,2 not 1,1,2,1,2 - Fixed
00:44:034 (1,1) - non-needed NC there - Got it.
Im not gonna mod NC, since there are so much more NC issues, I'll let you or other modders figure it out :p - Alright Thanks for everything else!
Really the flow is not bad, but really repetitive, you'll learn as you map more to add more variation!
I'll try ;-;

Good map overall, pretty straight forward, I'm sorry my mod wasn't that huge, but I mostly point out these technical issues, anyways sorry if I sounded a little harsh, and good luck and the rank!

Thank you. Everything counts

Ayyri wrote:

I'm back.

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General:

Fix timing points to match the timing.
Fix preview point to match the timing.
Fix kiai to to match the timing.
I could literally fix all these and send you the .osz if you want.

Kasai's Insane:

Important sounds are being missed at 00:07:625 - and 00:07:897 - Consider changing 00:07:216 (2) - to a regular slider and making jumps from 00:07:488 - to 00:08:034 - I edited this part a bit but if I made it like you tell me, it wouldn't be playable in any way.
00:11:716 - Add circle. Fixed!
00:26:306 - Add circle. Fixed!
00:39:670 (3,4) - Sounds weird and plays weird. Move to 00:39:943 - and make it end at the red tick. Fixed!
00:43:079 - to 00:43:761 - could be jumps. Fixed!
01:08:579 (2) - NC. Fixed!
01:09:125 (3) - NC. Fixed!
01:09:670 (4) - NC. Fixed!
01:10:216 (1) - NC. Fixed!
01:13:488 (3) - NC. Fixed!
01:22:761 (5) - NC. Fixed!
01:30:466 - Add note. (Stack it.) I had this circle there before another mod told me to remove it. I think both is fine but I prefer this part without this note.

Bukkake Blast wrote:

IRC Mod

2016-04-05 01:07 Bukkake Blast: yo can i just do IRC mod
2016-04-05 01:07 Ecchi: o
2016-04-05 01:07 Bukkake Blast: I cant get editor links to work on the forum lol
2016-04-05 01:07 Ecchi: sure
2016-04-05 01:07 Bukkake Blast: aight
2016-04-05 01:07 Bukkake Blast: did anyone tell you that it was really repetitive
2016-04-05 01:08 Ecchi: Oh yes, everyone did so far. I guess that'll have to be fixed
2016-04-05 01:08 Bukkake Blast: yea
2016-04-05 01:08 Ecchi: I realized that I'm not very creative lol
2016-04-05 01:08 Bukkake Blast: it flows fine
2016-04-05 01:08 Bukkake Blast: but i think you should mix it up a bit
2016-04-05 01:08 Bukkake Blast: 00:23:579 (2,3,4) -
2016-04-05 01:09 Bukkake Blast: like maybe for those things use repeaters - Made 2 fitting sliders
2016-04-05 01:09 Bukkake Blast: or vary the pattern
2016-04-05 01:09 Bukkake Blast: like make it a stack or something
2016-04-05 01:10 Bukkake Blast: 00:33:125 (1,2,3) - I'll keep it the way it is now because i cant seem to get it done nicely.
2016-04-05 01:10 Bukkake Blast: maybe use a slider here instead
2016-04-05 01:10 Bukkake Blast: you do it a second later and it sounds pretty good to me
2016-04-05 01:11 Bukkake Blast: 00:42:670 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) -
2016-04-05 01:11 Bukkake Blast: maybe consider mapping to the piano here - I think i fixed it, might be overmapped. Not sure
2016-04-05 01:11 Bukkake Blast: cause i think its stronger than whatever you mapped to before
2016-04-05 01:13 Ecchi: Alright, ill see what i can do here
2016-04-05 01:13 Bukkake Blast: 01:42:125 (2) - Same as before, cant get it to sound nicely.
2016-04-05 01:13 Bukkake Blast: maybe take this out and make it a slider
2016-04-05 01:14 Bukkake Blast: 01:51:943 (1,2,3) -
2016-04-05 01:14 Bukkake Blast: same thing with the piano from earlier - Gotcha
2016-04-05 01:15 Ecchi: oooo
2016-04-05 01:15 Ecchi: yes.
2016-04-05 01:15 Ecchi: unsure about the sliderparts though
2016-04-05 01:17 Bukkake Blast: 02:09:670 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2016-04-05 01:17 Bukkake Blast: try extending this and see if you think it sounds better
2016-04-05 01:18 Ecchi: Struggled with this one yesterday
2016-04-05 01:18 Ecchi: Extending it doesnt sound that great to me
2016-04-05 01:19 Bukkake Blast: yea
2016-04-05 01:19 Bukkake Blast: im second guessing myself now lol
2016-04-05 01:19 Ecchi: o
2016-04-05 01:19 Bukkake Blast: maybe its a buzzslider
2016-04-05 01:20 Bukkake Blast: but im not gonna comment on that cause im not sure
2016-04-05 01:20 Ecchi: Alright.
2016-04-05 01:21 Bukkake Blast: 03:51:670 (1) -
2016-04-05 01:21 Bukkake Blast: triple starting on the red tick - added
2016-04-05 01:22 Bukkake Blast: 03:11:306 (2,3,4,5) - Added it
2016-04-05 01:22 Bukkake Blast: sounds like there should be a stream here
2016-04-05 01:23 Ecchi: oh yes it does. thanks.
2016-04-05 01:23 Ecchi: btw, about that triple. what do u mean? T-T
2016-04-05 01:23 Bukkake Blast: um
2016-04-05 01:23 Bukkake Blast: the slider ends on the white tick
2016-04-05 01:23 Ecchi: yup~
2016-04-05 01:23 Bukkake Blast: but theres a drum triple starting on the red tick if you want to map to that
2016-04-05 01:24 Bukkake Blast: 01:16:761 (5) - Added
2016-04-05 01:24 Bukkake Blast: its the same here
2016-04-05 01:25 Bukkake Blast: there was one more thing
2016-04-05 01:25 Bukkake Blast: but i cant find it anymore
2016-04-05 01:26 Ecchi: o
2016-04-05 01:26 Ecchi: still unsure on how to make these triples. could u take a ss example of what u mean?
2016-04-05 01:28 Bukkake Blast: http://puu.sh/o6FMY/9c2464b2d5.jpg
2016-04-05 01:29 Bukkake Blast: I cant find that last thing
2016-04-05 01:29 Ecchi: oo
2016-04-05 01:29 Ecchi: okay, thanks.
2016-04-05 01:29 Bukkake Blast: Overall i just say put some varity in the patterns
2016-04-05 01:29 Bukkake Blast: seems fine otherwise
2016-04-05 01:30 Ecchi: Alright, ill give it a shot later
2016-04-05 01:30 Ecchi: Ill also do this mod after school today
2016-04-05 01:30 Bukkake Blast: Cool,hope it was useful
2016-04-05 01:30 Ecchi: Yea it surely was.

Thanks a ton for the mod c:

Ayyri wrote:

I'm back.
ey, welcome back!

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General:

Fix timing points to match the timing.
Fix preview point to match the timing.
Fix kiai to to match the timing.
I could literally fix all these and send you the .osz if you want. - I fixed all of them I think, thanks for reminding me though.

Kasai's Insane:

Important sounds are being missed at 00:07:625 - and 00:07:897 - Consider changing 00:07:216 (2) - to a regular slider and making jumps from 00:07:488 - to 00:08:034 -
00:11:716 - Add circle.
00:26:306 - Add circle.
00:39:670 (3,4) - Sounds weird and plays weird. Move to 00:39:943 - and make it end at the red tick.
00:43:079 - to 00:43:761 - could be jumps.
01:08:579 (2) - NC.
01:09:125 (3) - NC.
01:09:670 (4) - NC.
01:10:216 (1) - NC.
01:13:488 (3) - NC.
01:22:761 (5) - NC.
01:30:466 - Add note. (Stack it.)

Extra:

00:22:897 (3) - Remove, change 00:22:625 (2) - to a reverse slider and move 00:23:034 (4) - to the other side of 00:22:625 (2) - - Fixed.
00:26:306 - and 00:26:579 - Add circles here. Then break. - It looks quite bad imo. I'll add it for now though.
Remove 00:33:397 (2) - no sound here. Consider a different pattern once removed. - Removed it and added a triple
00:40:284 - and 00:40:352 - add notes. (Add them under 00:40:352 - ) - Got it
Remove 00:43:216 (1) - and 00:43:488 (2) - they don't follow the rhythm. Consider changing to two sliders and a circle. - Had this part remapped in the previous mod so skipping this one
There's a held note at 00:50:852 (1) - Consider adding notes at 00:50:988 - 00:51:261 - and 00:51:534 - so you don't really need to remove 00:51:670 (4) - Fixed
Shorten 00:51:670 (4) - to end at 00:51:670 (4) - and add notes at 00:52:079 - 00:52:216 - and 00:52:352 - to follow the piano. - Fixed.
Add notes at 00:57:193 - and 00:57:261 - (Stack under 00:57:125 (2) - ) - Fixed
Add notes at 01:03:738 - and 01:03:806 - (Stack under 01:03:806 - ) Because there's a held note, and it feels empty. - Fixed
Add a note at 01:35:306 - then break. - Looks so bad with just a single circle there but have no clue what else to do so i added it.
Remove 01:42:125 (2) - no sound here. - It's removed.
01:43:216 (1) - Isn't really following anything. Consider removing and changing it to a circle at either 01:43:216 - or 01:43:352 - Got it
Move 01:47:034 (4) - to 01:47:170 - and add a circle at 01:47:034 - Done.
Add notes at 02:01:556 - and 02:01:625 - (Stack under 02:01:488 (3) - ) - Added
Remove 02:09:397 (6) - there's not sound here. - It's gone
02:38:034 (2) - NC. - Fixed
02:41:852 (3) - NC. - ^
Consider adding at note at 02:44:034 - then breaking. - Yup
Stream from 03:09:125 (9) - to 03:10:079 - would fit nicely. - Added it but really unsure about it. Looks really hard, intense singletap straight into long stream >.>
03:11:647 - add note. - Yes
03:32:034 (1) - What is this following? Consider changing to a slider starting at 03:32:034 - and ending at 03:32:306 - with a triplet at 03:32:443 - 03:32:511 - 03:32:579 - - Fixed
03:44:579 (6) - NC. - Fixed
Spinner doesn't really feel needed at 03:49:556 (1) - It might fit better to remove it, and leave the silence there.(But add a note at 03:50:306 - if you remove the spinner.) - Removed spinner and added circle c:
03:50:852 (3) - isn't necessary. (No sound.) - Fixed
03:51:397 (5) - isn't necessary. (No sound.) - ^

(I had to upload the images at a different time than I wrote the mod, so I'm sorry if I put one in the wrong place.)

I saw some of the changes you made. It looks better. - c:


Thanks a lot for the second mod!