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Len

2,737 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2016-03-31T15:19:44+00:00

m4m

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preview setting on 00:43:378 - ?

Normal:

00:23:878 - i think it should be emphasized maybe
00:28:819 (3) - its better than before http://puu.sh/o0LnK/7e397977a9.jpg
00:45:584 (1) - , 00:48:407 (1) - , 00:51:231 (1) - , 00:53:878 (1) - , 00:56:878 (1) - 00:59:525 (1) - , 01:02:349 (1) - remove nc? it looks like nc spam
00:59:525 (1) - looks so ugly try this: http://puu.sh/o0LyL/3882ff69df.jpg xd
01:09:584 (1) - what about avoiding that overlap with 01:09:584 (1) -
01:26:613 (1) - end at 01:28:996 - ?

Hard:

i think its NOT hard diff, too hard to play.. maybe have to change the diff name to hyper or light insane, and make hard one for diff gaps.... overall is good, but distance between objects are mostly terrible, so randomly.. thats all
00:10:643 (2) - ctrl+g is better.... for now, its too hard to play

Insane:

00:09:760 (2) - move to x90 y205?
00:43:466 (8) - i think you forgot to add nc on 7 or 8
00:46:819 (6) - stack on 00:46:996 (1) - ?
00:49:466 (5) - move to x506 y171 cuz it hav strong beat so should be emphasized i think
00:54:407 (1) - nazi stacking miss
01:02:349 (3) - nc?

hvick:

ar is too high, 9 or 9.1 is better i think
01:26:172 (7,8,9,10) - try to move like this?: http://puu.sh/o0Nyj/9e3652ed88.jpg

Silky

751 posts

Joined October 2014

Silky 2016-03-31T15:55:25+00:00

god song

hvick225

352 posts

Joined November 2008

hvick225 2016-03-31T18:40:00+00:00

Len wrote:
m4m

hvick:
ar is too high, 9 or 9.1 is better i think AR9
01:26:172 (7,8,9,10) - try to move like this?: http://puu.sh/o0Nyj/9e3652ed88.jpg changed

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407,73,66407,6,0,P|384:205|380:275,1,175.499991966248,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,300,66760,6,0,P|367:310|332:318,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,199,67113,2,0,P|221:209|256:217,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,299,67466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
219,121,67643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
179,312,67819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
29,238,67996,6,0,P|39:193|49:136,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,49,68349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
125,205,68525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,146,68702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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227,220,69055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
417,167,69231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,125,69407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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403,57,70290,1,2,0:0:0:0:
242,189,70466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
427,284,70643,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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41,45,71172,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,124,71349,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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0,136,72055,1,2,0:0:0:0:
219,61,72231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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91,185,72760,2,0,P|77:141|69:97,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,35,73113,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,234,73290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
69,97,73466,1,2,0:0:0:0:
131,312,73643,6,0,P|177:319|231:331,1,90,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,197,73996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,125,74172,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,327,74349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
491,168,74525,2,0,P|444:175|391:187,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,53,74878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
275,224,75055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,224,75143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,224,75231,5,6,0:0:0:0:
462,257,75407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,68,75584,2,0,P|272:97|232:134,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,72,75937,1,6,0:0:0:0:
184,217,76113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
6,170,76290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
6,170,76379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
6,170,76466,6,0,P|13:212|20:263,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,361,76819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,361,76908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,361,76996,1,0,3:0:0:0:
292,198,77172,1,0,3:0:0:0:
112,277,77349,1,0,3:0:0:0:
301,309,77525,1,0,3:0:0:0:
73,371,77702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,148,77878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
237,264,78055,6,0,P|194:268|138:275,1,90,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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335,129,78760,1,2,0:0:0:0:
239,8,78937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
177,195,79113,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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272,211,79819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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272,110,80349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,51,80525,1,2,0:0:0:0:
303,224,80702,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,53,80878,6,0,P|176:99|179:150,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
41,208,81231,1,2,0:0:0:0:
220,268,81407,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,118,81584,1,2,0:0:0:0:
25,334,81760,2,0,P|71:326|124:321,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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73,130,83349,2,0,P|77:85|84:40,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,229,83702,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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70,160,84407,1,6,0:0:0:0:
281,57,84584,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,247,84760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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261,268,85819,2,0,P|305:274|350:278,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
475,182,86172,1,2,0:0:0:0:
371,47,86349,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,47,86437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,47,86525,1,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86613,12,0,89172,0:0:0:0:
256,192,89349,12,0,94996,0:0:0:0:

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,040 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

VINXIS 2016-03-31T18:43:04+00:00

fuj hvik update ur diff so u have the right preview time -__ -

normal

00:31:819 (5,6,7) - u seen rly crampd
01:12:407 (1) - changd it a bit

hard

00:38:878 (2) - ok
rest is enjoys sht

ins

00:26:525 (4,3,4) - its ok no1 wil see it in gam anywa
00:48:055 (5,1) - tried both things and theyr both p weird wen relating 2 the vocalz tb h
01:00:584 (3,4,5) - i mad it less emphasized Xd
01:13:996 (2) - 2 much wor k

nrml

00:59:525 (4) - FUK u

hrd

idk i thikn the hard is perfectly fine for spread ill get more opinions tho

ins

00:09:760 (2) - not perfectt riangl then :/
00:46:819 (6) - tahtd b weird and it wud mak 1 feel underwhelmind so idk

thx for modz updatd

Last edited by VINXIS 2016-03-31T19:11:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Atri-

2,933 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-03-31T19:07:22+00:00

I thought i saw Honey Come

Side

1,036 posts

Joined October 2013

Side 2016-04-01T18:32:49+00:00

Hi for M4M :v

okay I really have to listen to what song I'm modding before offering m4m x_x

[Normal]

00:30:055 (1,2,3) - Hmm...well I see what you're going for though it feels like it'd be a bit tricky to transition into the red ticks this way. I think maybe a pattern like this might be a bit friendlier to play while still following this rhythm.

00:46:113 (3) - Personally I'd delete this note although I can see why its there so :v

01:03:937 (1) - Finish on this would be nice since it's in the music

01:06:760 (1) - Same for the slider head of this.

01:06:407 - Was half expecting this to be mapped primarily because you mapped 00:09:937 (1) - so it'd be a nice throwback

01:12:407 (1) - Slider could look better

01:21:937 (2,3) - So here one thing that would be neat would be having an object at 01:22:996 - to get that sound which is pretty strong in the music. So a note pattern that can easily do that would be something like this.

[Collab Hard]

TBH this isn't so hard to read or too fast to need AR8 I think. AR7 or maybe at most 7.5 would work. OD 6.5 would also be more appropriate otherwise might as well make it OD7.

00:24:055 (5) - The jump to this note and it being a 1/4 repeat makes this pretty tough to play. Players at this level still don't see short slider like these as something you can just click and hold on the slider head cuz of that leniency (and soon we wont too ;A;) so this will likely be tricky to play and if not read since it's so unexpected and still a short hold. I guess the lesser of two evils would be to change this to just a note since the triple sound doesn't really add to much and would play a bit more like 00:21:584 (1,2,3) - .

00:50:172 - That sample switch lol

00:52:819 (2) - Also don't like the clap on the slider end

00:53:349 (3,4,1,2) - And definitely dont like the claps here. The song really only has that kick and finish sound so the whistle/finish are the only hitsounds needed here tbh.

01:00:584 (3) - Well since you started using this other clap hitsound in this section then technically 01:00:760 - would have a clap instead of a whistle

01:01:113 (1) - 01:02:349 (3) - Really that clap takes away from the finish because it's much louder than the finish hitsound itself. Also in general the hitsounds on the slider ends of 1-3 also take away from the finish. it's supposed to be kind of like a bam--bam-BAAAAM kind of feel with the finish and whistles on the slider heads so the other hitsounds kinda remove that feel. Basically leave the whistle/finishes on the slider heads of (1), (2) and (3) and remove all claps here as well as any hitsound samples from the slider ends of these sliders.

01:15:231 (1,2,1,2,3) - like THIS. THIS is where that nice effect is even the default whistles on the slider ends add to the sound. Do more of that yo

01:18:407 (2) - For this I think you can still add the clap to the slider head to keep that 1/1 kick sound going. Same for 01:19:290 (4) -

[Insane]

I suppose since it's a light insane a slightly lower AR could work like 8.5-8.7 or sth but that doesn't really matter much tbh.

00:54:407 (1) - slightly touches HP bar :^) rotate it by like 3 degrees counterclockwise or sth lol

01:16:996 - 01:17:525 - That sample switch lols. Also 01:16:996 (1) - would normally have a whistle (maybe even a finish) and 01:17:525 (4) - would have a soft finish and whistle.

01:26:349 (7) - Maybe move this note up a bit more so the jump to (1) is more impactful as the songs finisher. Around x:400 y:156 seems to be fine imo maybe even a bit more to match the intensity of 01:25:643 (3,4) - or even more.

[that one high rank player]

00:11:525 (1) - 00:13:113 (1) - Missing finishes on slider heads

00:20:878 (3) - Maybe add Drum clap or Drum finish so it has that woosh sound going down to match the song. Would be sick!

00:22:819 (1) - 00:25:643 (6) - 00:28:466 (1) - Whistles on the slider heads would also sound nice.

00:32:525 (4) - Clap would be cool here. Even default clap since that's kinda what you hear in the song

00:36:937 (1) - Whistle on slider head would also make it sound less empty like what vinxis did with his hitsounds or like what you did at 00:42:584 (1) -

00:48:231 (1) - So you COULD also add a whistle to the slider head but if you want to keep that 1/1 whistle pattern you could also change this to a 1/2 slider (with whistle on the slider end) and note and that could look something like this for example. Many other possiblities ofc but this one has the least amount of changes.

00:51:055 (1) - If you made the change to the pattern above it could also be done here but ofc not necesssary. Still at least add the whistle to the slider head in that case.

01:07:819 (5) - I think if you moved this more to the right then the jump to 01:07:996 (1) - could be more impactful. Something like this or similar works. Like at 01:10:643 (5,1) - its nice cuz the jump does feel more impactful there.

01:20:172 (5) - Also missing whistle

[Extra]

Maybe HP7 its a tv size yo :v

00:11:525 (5,1) - Finish should be on (5) lol

00:18:759 (1) - And there should be a finish here :/

00:32:525 (4,5,6,7,1) - Minor as hell but I think if you used the drum kick and finish samples here to do that thing the drums do in the song it'd be sick

00:45:407 (1) - The stack here feels really harsh considering that thing she does with the vocals it's almost an expected jump. Something like this might be cool

00:53:349 (3) - Space this out a bit more so the distance from (3) to (4) is more meaningful I feel.

Hope this helps. Good luck!

Spaghetti

1,118 posts

Joined August 2014

Spaghetti 2016-04-02T17:14:01+00:00

g

[Extra]
00:16:643 (3,1) - holy these curves tho, maybe flatten them out a bit cuz that looks p ugly imo
00:24:055 (6,7,8,9,1) - y are you staking all this i dont get it
00:26:525 (5) - i feel a lack of emphasis on this since lik everything in the same bar is spaced out way more than that, even when that lands on the downbeat
00:27:760 (4) - 2squag imo
00:29:702 (6,7,8,9,1) - y tho this section is so freeflowing
00:45:231 (5,1) - literally the only stack i nthe en ti re kiai
00:48:937 (4,5) - ctrl g wud make more sense with the other spacings
filthy pp mapper

[hvick]
00:31:290 (1) - NICE CURVE but maybe rotate a bit counter clockwise so it isnt so diagonal xd
00:41:702 (2) - ^

[Insane]
00:54:407 (1,1) - this rhythm gap is preeeety awkward imo, try makign the circle slider u have there 3/4 and add another 3/4 slider aftr it lik what u did in extra

I modded anothr diff cuz the set is p polished and i didnt hav many points

filthy pp mapper just end urself already

edit: didnt read desc so ill mod othr diff

[Normal]

00:44:878 (1,1) - this kinda suks tbh, try to lik rotate 180 clokwise and ctrl h+j

deetz

1,559 posts

Joined October 2013

deetz 2016-04-03T18:54:23+00:00

shut up omar

My Angel Watame

587 posts

Joined June 2014

My Angel Watame 2016-04-04T07:37:26+00:00

deetz wrote:
shut up omar

-Atri-

2,933 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-04-04T08:23:07+00:00

deetz wrote:
shut up omar

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,204 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 2016-04-05T08:16:09+00:00

your NM mod req

Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General

Tag: '-_e_n_j_u_-','enjoy','enju' idk why need this words? if you forgot remove GD mappers name in tag remove plz
Combo colors are not set.
Only Extra diff need to AudioLeadIn: 1000 around (startline is not same so only extra diff)
00:43:996 - preview point looks better here 00:20:878 - here it's hard to know a song.

Normal

00:09:937 (1) - how do you add clap sound like another diff
00:15:937 (1,2,3,1) - i'll recommend this rhythm because 00:16:290 - take here sound and
00:15:937 (1,2) - here 3/4 rhythm a liitle weird
00:28:819 (3,4,5) - try this rhythm 00:29:525 - for take here vocal sound
00:34:996 (4) - flow;after reverse slide down flow a little werid,you should be fix to upper flow
01:09:584 (1,2) - here is 0.93 DS

Collab Hard

00:10:290 (1) - 00:21:584 (1) - add finish sound
00:14:878 (2,3) - this curve slides looks a little ugly,you can be better like this
00:15:937 (1) - flow ; 00:16:290 - just add note ? stakc on 00:16:643 (2) - this slide head
00:45:055 (2,1) - avoid overlap (slide head and circle)
00:49:466 (4) - care spread with another diff(insane,extra),another diff 00:49:555 - 00:49:731 - didn't take here sound
00:55:466 (1) - a little looks ugly
01:03:760 - remove this note and 01:03:937 - try add here 01:03:760 - here i cant find any correct sound
01:13:643 (1,2,3) - slide curve too much, least avoid overlap slidehead and slidetail
01:26:525 - add not like another diff

Insane

00:12:407 (3,4) - avoid stack
00:15:760 - add note;your hard diff taken sound here ,if you add note i recommend here x248 y368
00:21:584 (1) - add finish sound
00:41:349 (1) - x129 y49 00:42:407 (6) - x345 y257 you can make 3/4 rhythm jump it's insane level
00:49:290 - add circle? 00:49:113 (4,5) - i think a little too far
01:17:172 (2,3) - stack nor 01:17:702 (5,6) - avoid stack i think all circle unstack looks better

hvick225's Insane

00:09:937 (1,1) - i think flow a little weird how do you fix to this pattern?
00:12:760 (3,1) - jump of 00:12:760 (3,1) - this 3.1 DS too far almost use same DS 00:09:937 (1,1) - 00:16:290 (2,3) - like there
00:13:819 (3,1) - blanket you can be better ,look at the pictuere
00:18:760 (1) -suggest like this you can use funny slide, just circle slide a little boring
00:43:113 (2,3) - flow suggest
01:03:937 (1) - how do you like this slide?
01:20:172 (5) - add whistle sound
01:29:349 - ~01:34:996 - add vol variation greenlines like another diff

Extra

Difficult name insane more fit,if you want use 'Extra' i think need some jump and starrate make 5.3 around
nor you can change diff name like Another,Insane
00:17:172 (1,5) - blanket too near,like this looks better
00:55:378 (3,1) - suggest ; make half stack?
00:59:349 (6) - remove whistle sound
01:17:525 (6) - 01:22:113 (1) - add whistle sound

good luck~

Bearizm

1,217 posts

Joined October 2013

Bearizm 2016-04-06T01:31:14+00:00

i'll mod after u apply ^

remind me pls xd

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,040 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

VINXIS 2016-04-08T16:04:38+00:00

gimiea few hrs ill reply 2 the modz (aside for the extra diff)

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,040 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

VINXIS 2016-04-08T17:59:17+00:00

normal

00:30:055 (1,2,3) - actualu itd b easier that way cuz "polarity switching" to red from white
01:06:407 - thatd sound and play rly bad tho so no :/

coalb hard

changrd ar to 7.5 btu fuk ur od memes >:9
00:24:055 (5) - i ctrl g'd it lo

isnaen

curent ar is comeptly fine :/
01:26:349 (7) - na this feels muhc bettr playing wise and emphasis wise for the circl aftr

insane

00:54:407 (1,1) - not fr me :/ idk im keeping it fr now and will chang latr if i hav 2 or smth

norma

00:44:878 (1,1) - wot is this a timestamp 2 d

general

i collabd with enjoy on the hard and on the soontocome extra
if extra is staying then i will add it lo

norml

00:34:996 (5) - this sud b fnie playrs cud handle moving up and down i thikn

colab hard

g

isnane

00:12:407 (3,4) - plays nic/better this way tho imo
00:49:290 - naaaa its fine Xd

hit lol i cudve jstu edited the othr post

@bearizm: mod the map wen the collb extra is ther

Lami

1,755 posts

Joined June 2011

Lami 2016-04-14T12:35:57+00:00

General

Bg eyes is bigger than mouth. lamo

Normal
00:37:643 (4) - delete note? so small beat ;w;

Collab Hard
00:22:290 (3) - move to below for making parallel with (1) slider

Insane

cool

Hvick225
00:44:172 - increase volume in kiai time? maybe 60%?
40% is silence in kiai
00:47:702 (6,7,8,1) - if make jump here, then become nice :3
reference) 00:58:996 (3,4,5,1) -

Collab extra
00:42:584 (5) - plz consider as vocal
current is kinda empty maybe?

zweib
00:13:466 (2) - (+) 00:14:349 (1) - make it?
00:21:584 - ~ before kiai : consider to reduce volume.
because relax part's volume = kiai time's volume
00:31:290 (1) - remove NC if you want to keep NC. then put NC too 00:30:055 (2,4) -
01:14:702 (4,5,6) - inconsistent DS.
finally : http://puu.sh/ohOf9.png

VINXIS

Featured Artist

3,040 posts

Joined April 2014

Topic Starter

VINXIS 2016-04-14T14:19:28+00:00

Lami wrote:
Bg eyes is bigger than mouth. lamo

changed teh hard normal and extra diffz thx lami

Last edited by VINXIS 2016-04-15T10:10:00+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

zyoi

617 posts

Joined May 2014

zyoi 2016-04-15T09:58:21+00:00

00:53:349 (3,4,1,2) - i keep it

others all fixed
thxx

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: HANZERS EXTREME.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 20878
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 44172
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Come Home! Princess
TitleUnicode:Come Home! Princess
Artist:Chiyoko
ArtistUnicode:ちよこ
Creator:VINXIS
Version:Collab Hard
Source:パニカル・コンフュージョン
Tags:Panical Confusion Panicon パニコン Home Zweib 2b eroge Escu:de taishi IOSYS OP opening -_E_n_j_u_- Enjoy Enju SnowWhite hvick225
BeatmapID:939894
BeatmapSetID:436344

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6.8
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.44
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"HONEY CAMU.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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9937,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,50,0,0
10290,-125,4,2,19,65,0,0
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hvick225

352 posts

Joined November 2008

hvick225 2016-04-15T10:29:20+00:00

Side wrote:
[that one high rank player]

00:11:525 (1) - 00:13:113 (1) - Missing finishes on slider heads added

00:20:878 (3) - Maybe add Drum clap or Drum finish so it has that woosh sound going down to match the song. Would be sick! added

00:22:819 (1) - 00:25:643 (6) - 00:28:466 (1) - Whistles on the slider heads would also sound nice. added

00:32:525 (4) - Clap would be cool here. Even default clap since that's kinda what you hear in the song added

00:36:937 (1) - Whistle on slider head would also make it sound less empty like what vinxis did with his hitsounds or like what you did at 00:42:584 (1) - added

00:48:231 (1) - So you COULD also add a whistle to the slider head but if you want to keep that 1/1 whistle pattern you could also change this to a 1/2 slider (with whistle on the slider end) and note and that could look something like this for example. Many other possiblities ofc but this one has the least amount of changes. no changed

00:51:055 (1) - If you made the change to the pattern above it could also be done here but ofc not necesssary. Still at least add the whistle to the slider head in that case. no changed

01:07:819 (5) - I think if you moved this more to the right then the jump to 01:07:996 (1) - could be more impactful. Something like this or similar works. Like at 01:10:643 (5,1) - its nice cuz the jump does feel more impactful there. changed

01:20:172 (5) - Also missing whistle added

Hope this helps. Good luck!

Spaghetti wrote:
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[hvick]
00:31:290 (1) - NICE CURVE but maybe rotate a bit counter clockwise so it isnt so diagonal xd ok
00:41:702 (2) - ^ ^

Taeyang wrote:
hvick225's Insane
00:09:937 (1,1) - i think flow a little weird how do you fix to this pattern? fixed
00:12:760 (3,1) - jump of 00:12:760 (3,1) - this 3.1 DS too far almost use same DS 00:09:937 (1,1) - 00:16:290 (2,3) - like there changed
00:13:819 (3,1) - blanket you can be better ,look at the pictuere fixed
00:18:760 (1) -suggest like this you can use funny slide, just circle slide a little boring changed, thanks for suggest
00:43:113 (2,3) - flow suggest changed
01:03:937 (1) - how do you like this slide? changed, thanks for suggest
01:20:172 (5) - add whistle sound added
01:29:349 - ~01:34:996 - add vol variation greenlines like another diff ok
good luck~

Lami wrote:
General

Bg eyes is bigger than mouth. lamo

Hvick225
Lami

00:44:172 - increase volume in kiai time? maybe 60%?
40% is silence in kiai okk
00:47:702 (6,7,8,1) - if make jump here, then become nice :3
reference) 00:58:996 (3,4,5,1) - no changed, i think it's fine :3

thx for mod!

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Bearizm

1,217 posts

Joined October 2013

Bearizm 2016-04-15T11:38:15+00:00

zweib

00:20:084 - silence pls
00:29:702 (1) - this is way too extreme of a distance imo... I know what you're basing with this but this spacing doesn't quite justify the intensity of this object in particular.
00:31:290 (1,1) - NC mistake? I can't really give a suggestion because you don't seem to follow the regular 1 measure NC.
00:36:936 (6) - this should be a bigger jump than 00:37:113 (1,2) - tbh
00:52:643 (1) - this looks really off.. not sure if intentional or not.
01:00:407 (1,2,3) - this jump is really big imo... u can tone it down a bit to something slightly bigger than 00:59:702 (1,2,3,4) - just slightly.
01:01:113 (1) - this jump at 01:00:584 (2,3) - is bigger than this one.. I'm really confused with the emphasis tbh.
01:14:349 (3) - since there's literally nothing in the slider end, you can just make this a 1/2. It's better as a 1/2 because you won't be skipping the constant 1/1 drum sound.
01:19:291 (1) - slider end missing a drum sound. (or whistle, but i'll call it drum)
01:19:644 (2) - same

collab extra

00:31:113 (2) - shouldn't you just change this from a slider to a circle then a slider? you get the strong vocal emphasis that way. it's kind of akward to skip the strong vocal even if it's on the red tick.
00:34:996 (1,2) - ithese 2 circles should be spaced way bigger than 00:34:643 (1,2) - not smaller.
00:41:349 (1) - missing drum sound on head
00:58:202 (3,1) - manually stack these?

naisu

iNsAnE

00:11:525 (4) - finish hitsound pls
00:13:113 (1) - finish hitsound pls
00:19:819 - silence this?
00:38:525 (1) - finish hitsound pls
00:46:643 (5,6) - can just change this to a slider since it kinda makes more sense towards the vocals. There's nothing on 6 which makes it not worth clicking.
00:59:525 (1) - give it more distance boi
01:12:407 (1) - finish hitsound pls
01:07:996 (1) - finish hitsound pls
01:19:290 (1) - finish hitsound pls
01:20:878 (1) - finish hitsound pls
finish hitsound pls
i love top notch hitsound mods thx

hvick225's iNsAnE

00:12:760 (3) - missing a drum hitsound here. drum aka whistle.
00:18:760 (1) - ^drum and finish.
00:18:760 (1) - silence the end?
01:03:937 (1) - super kawaii slider lo >:O
00:35:702 (6) - NC
i can't mod this except for the hitsounds so i'll do it. Taiwan's Laurier pretty much, nice rhythm and flow etc. HERE GOES THE SOFT FINISH HITSOUND TRAIN.
00:21:584 (1) -
00:24:407 (1) -
00:27:231 (4) -
00:30:055 (4) -
00:38:525 (1) -
00:45:407 (1) -
00:46:996 (4) -
00:48:231 (1) -
00:56:702 (1) -
00:58:290 (1) -
01:07:996 (1) -
01:12:407 (1) -
01:19:290 (1) -
01:20:878 (1) -
I'm sorry LOL.
I think the NCs are a bit weird but someone else should point it out, I think i've provided enough (bad) suggestions for the day and these are just minor suggestions. without the finish and NC problems, cool map lo C:

Not gonna mod lower diffs and i am not too familiar with how hard diff is mapped. normal seems fine, but i think it's not a difficulty that can sufficiently cover as the lower difficulty since it contains a lot of 1/2 rhythms in it. A suggestion would be to buff normal and make an easy. That is all, friend. good luck weeb.

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2016-04-15T17:27:44+00:00

Lami wrote:
zweib
00:13:466 (2) - (+) 00:14:349 (1) - make it? it's so far lol
00:21:584 - ~ before kiai : consider to reduce volume.
because relax part's volume = kiai time's volume ok
00:31:290 (1) - remove NC if you want to keep NC. then put NC too 00:30:055 (2,4) - fixed
01:14:702 (4,5,6) - inconsistent DS. fixed
finally : http://puu.sh/ohOf9.png

Bearizm wrote:
zweib
00:20:084 - silence pls ok
00:29:702 (1) - this is way too extreme of a distance imo... I know what you're basing with this but this spacing doesn't quite justify the intensity of this object in particular. no fix
00:31:290 (1,1) - NC mistake? I can't really give a suggestion because you don't seem to follow the regular 1 measure NC. fixed
00:36:936 (6) - this should be a bigger jump than 00:37:113 (1,2) - tbh no fix
00:52:643 (1) - this looks really off.. not sure if intentional or not. no fix
01:00:407 (1,2,3) - this jump is really big imo... u can tone it down a bit to something slightly bigger than 00:59:702 (1,2,3,4) - just slightly. fixed by little
01:01:113 (1) - this jump at 01:00:584 (2,3) - is bigger than this one.. I'm really confused with the emphasis tbh.no fix
01:14:349 (3) - since there's literally nothing in the slider end, you can just make this a 1/2. It's better as a 1/2 because you won't be skipping the constant 1/1 drum sound.no fix
01:19:291 (1) - slider end missing a drum sound. (or whistle, but i'll call it drum) fixed
01:19:644 (2) - same fixed

thx for mod !

osu file format v14

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