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Topic Starter
swish

lkp wrote:

hi,swish~xD
here is my mod.
Nice song@_@
SPOILER
[quo's Easy]
00:36:717 (3) - 1 grid up?
01:07:070 (x) - would be better if you add note here fixed
*01:07:776 (3) - end of slider in 01:08:129 and add note in 01:08:482,sound would be better fixed
*01:38:129 (3,4) - reverse selection?? (Ctrl+R) fixed
01:46:600 (x) - add note?? fixed
01:42:364 (x) - ^ fixed
01:57:894 (x) - ^ fixed
01:59:306 (x) - ^ fixed

[Normal]
*00:40:776 (1) - odd slider,i suggest you change this sound set,would be better if you spin out this slider? fixed
01:06:365 (2,3) - spacing,too far in this combo. fixed
*01:31:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - only my opinion,could you make it(7,8) regular? sorry, no change ;_;
01:54:365 (2,3) - spacing,too far in this combo fixed
01:57:188 (2,3) - ^ fixed

[Hard]
00:29:659 (1,2) - spacing,too far. fixed
00:31:070 (5,6) - too close. fixed
00:35:129 (x) - add note in here? sorry ;_;
00:40:600 (4,5) - spacing,too close. sorry
00:41:306 (6,7) - ^ sorry
00:42:894 (3,4) - too far. fixed
00:44:129 (6) - 1 grid left? fixed
00:44:129 (6,7) - too far. fixed
00:44:835 (1,2) - ^ fixed
*00:47:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make it same spacing? sorry, no change ;_;
00:49:247 (x) - add note and increase the volume? sorry
*00:54:012 (7,8) - i suggest you add (7) or (8) new combo xD??
*00:54:365 (1) - if you add (7) new combo,add new combo here. fixed
00:58:247 (4,5) - too close sorry
*01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think you should make (8) regular with other notes? fixed
*01:44:835 (7,8) - same to 00:54:012 (7,8).
*01:45:188 (1) - same to 00:54:365 (1). fixed
*01:45:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - odd pattern. fixed

Ya,that's all my little mod>_<
Just little things to fix aha.
And i like your SB and video so much o.O
nicely done on your first map^_^
star~
> lkp
thank you mod and star~ :)
Topic Starter
swish
> regenz
me too >.<
thx star~ :D
val0108
Nice mappp Starr~ 8-)
mooai
star~~~ :)
Topic Starter
swish
> val0108, mooai
star arigato~ 8-) :)
[DBF]
You big baka.

Japan's bakas attack!! Omgomgomg.
Topic Starter
swish
> [DBF]
haha xD i'm baka~ :roll:
star thx ;)
y u c a
ganbare~~ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛
Topic Starter
swish
> y u c a
arigatou~ ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛
Orgol
yeah! :arrow:
AngelHoney
>~</
Topic Starter
swish
> Lunet, AngelHoney
star thx~ >A<
Apriy
:3
Topic Starter
swish
> r1ca
thx star~ :3
soulfear
サイズ大すぎw
ripしてみる?
Topic Starter
swish
> soulfear
video changed~
thx star :)
JoJo
Fight~~~ヾ(≧▽≦*)o
Topic Starter
swish
> Joshua Lost
(*ノ∀ノ)
star thx~ ;)
wmfchris
[Hard]
00:50:659 (s) - finish?
00:51:894 (1) - down 1 grid
01:40:247 (s) - clap or finish?
01:50:482 (3) - right 1 grid
01:56:129 (9,10) - left 1 grid
nice map lol

[Normal]
01:32:482 (2,4,6,8) - remove whistle?
01:40:247 (s) - same as hard

[quo's Easy]
ok.

moe BG, star~
Topic Starter
swish

wmfchris wrote:

SPOILER
[Hard]
00:50:659 (s) - finish?
00:51:894 (1) - down 1 grid
01:40:247 (s) - clap or finish?
01:50:482 (3) - right 1 grid
01:56:129 (9,10) - left 1 grid
nice map lol

[Normal]
01:32:482 (2,4,6,8) - remove whistle?
01:40:247 (s) - same as hard

[quo's Easy]
ok.
All fixed~
moe BG, star~
> wmfchris
thx mod & star~ :)
sitemii
good map!!!!!!!
Topic Starter
swish
> tainaka ritu
arigato~ :oops:
Rorry
:idea:
Topic Starter
swish
> Rorry
star thx~ :idea:
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. disable letterbox during breaks
[Hard]:
  1. 01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing more than x2.0 OTL, too sudden change imo
[Normal]:
  1. AR-1
star for now
Topic Starter
swish

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. disable letterbox during breaks
[Hard]:
  1. 01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - spacing more than x2.0 OTL, too sudden change imo
[Normal]:
  1. AR-1
All fixed~! disable letterbox during breaks forgot it.. i'm baka..
star for now
> Colin Hou
thx modding and star :)
Topic Starter
swish
sorry, MForever's Insane added
mod plz again :o
KanaRin
Star>@<
Topic Starter
swish
> KanaRin
star thx~ >.<
Kurai
~ quo's Easy ~

Approach rate +1
00:40:247 (1) - Reduce it by 1/2
00:41:306 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier or extend it by 1/2 for follow the vocals
00:51:894 (1) - Stack with 00:50:482 (7) ?
01:10:600 (3) - Stack with 01:08:482 (5) ?
01:26:129 (1) - This slider is too hide by the previous and in easy difficulties it's bad, it would be better if you put it elsewhere
01:59:659 (1,2) - Move them 1 grid right and stack 02:01:423 (3) with 01:59:306 (6)

~ Normal ~

HP drain -1
00:37:776 (1) - Extend by 1/1
01:11:129 (x) - Add a note with new combo mark here ?

~ Hard ~

00:40:335 (x) - Add a circle, I can hear a beat here ;)
01:11:482 (3) - New combo because it's an anti-jump
01:12:012 (1) - Extand this spinner by 1/2 and begin the next spinner 1/4 later http://puu.sh/NtK
02:02:305 (3) - New combo because it's an anti-jump

~ MForever's Insane ~

Silder tick rate 1. Sounds better in the 0.5x section
00:39:894 (1) - Remove new combo ?
01:12:012 (1) - Extand this spinner by 1/2 and begin the next spinner 1/4 later http://puu.sh/Nu0


Nice map, star~
Topic Starter
swish

KuraiPettan wrote:

SPOILER
~ quo's Easy ~

Approach rate +1 fixed
00:40:247 (1) - Reduce it by 1/2 hmm.. sorry no change ;_;
00:41:306 (2) - Move 1/2 earlier or extend it by 1/2 for follow the vocals ^
00:51:894 (1) - Stack with 00:50:482 (7) ? fixed
01:10:600 (3) - Stack with 01:08:482 (5) ? fixed
01:26:129 (1) - This slider is too hide by the previous and in easy difficulties it's bad, it would be better if you put it elsewherefixed
01:59:659 (1,2) - Move them 1 grid right and stack 02:01:423 (3) with 01:59:306 (6) fixed

~ Normal ~

HP drain -1 fixed
00:37:776 (1) - Extend by 1/1 fixed
01:11:129 (x) - Add a note with new combo mark here ? fixed

~ Hard ~

00:40:335 (x) - Add a circle, I can hear a beat here ;) fixed
01:11:482 (3) - New combo because it's an anti-jump fixed
01:12:012 (1) - Extand this spinner by 1/2 and begin the next spinner 1/4 later http://puu.sh/NtK fixed
02:02:305 (3) - New combo because it's an anti-jump fixed

~ MForever's Insane ~

Silder tick rate 1. Sounds better in the 0.5x section fixed
00:39:894 (1) - Remove new combo ? fixed
01:12:012 (1) - Extand this spinner by 1/2 and begin the next spinner 1/4 later http://puu.sh/Nu0 fixed

Nice map, star~
> KuraiPettan
thx modding and star~ :D
hvick225
Star~ :)
Topic Starter
swish
> SnowWhite
thx star~ =w=
kusakabe001
star~ヾ(゚ω゚)ノ゛
Topic Starter
swish
> kusakabe001
atigatou~ ヾ(゚ω゚)ノ゛
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
could feel a gap between [Normal] & [Hard], try to make the Normal harder? (Hard has many jumps, but Normal has a slow slider speed even slower than Easy, also a short spacing...)
maybe offset +3~+5, not really sure.

[quo's Easy]
i think you could increase the Stack Leniency a bit... 0.3 is a little weird in Easy and may cause confusing to newbies.
00:45:894 (4) - add finish at the end?
00:55:776 (5) - miss a whistle here
01:38:129 (3,4) - i'd prefer to switch the place of the two notes (maybe also 7&8, but it's related to the next notes), since we don't need tricks for newbies ..? :P
01:59:306 (6) - whistle?
02:02:835 (1) - finish

[Normal]
increase the Stack Leniency... same as Easy
as i said in General... i strongly suggest you to make this diff harder to fill the gap.
00:43:070 (1) - end 1/2 earlier
00:47:659 (1) - remove new combo
00:59:835 (5) - whstle
01:20:482 (1,2,3) - all end 1/2 later, (also 01:26:129 (1,2,3) - then add reverse to 3), it fits the piano much better

[Hard]
00:47:835 (2,4,6) - remove whistle
01:02:394 (4) - it's at a very strange place... reduce one reverse, and move it 1/4 later. you can add a circle at current place instead of that reverse.
01:11:129 (2,1,2) - i'll say no to this spacing...orz. maybe sth like this

01:20:482 (1,2,3) - same slider suggestions as Normal
01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the jump starts a little suddenly... and yeah... hard. 1.5x spacing is enough?
01:53:217 (4) - same as 01:02:394 (4)
01:54:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - not fit.. imo
02:01:423 (1,2,1,2) - same as 01:11:129 (2,1,2)

[MForever's Insane]
finish is a bit overused, triangle placement is a bit overused... well seems you really like them = =
suggestion for the 2 kiai parts: if you want to use "clap at every 2nd/4th white line" technique, then just use it all the way, the change of clap pace won't make people feel better.
01:03:188 (1) - exception here, remove clap, since the whole structure is a xox ooxox
Topic Starter
swish

NatsumeRin wrote:

SPOILER
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
could feel a gap between [Normal] & [Hard], try to make the Normal harder? (Hard has many jumps, but Normal has a slow slider speed even slower than Easy, also a short spacing...) Normal diff remake spacing x0.8→x1.2 ._.
maybe offset +3~+5, not really sure. hmm.. sorry no change ;_;

[quo's Easy]
i think you could increase the Stack Leniency a bit... 0.3 is a little weird in Easy and may cause confusing to newbies.fixed
00:45:894 (4) - add finish at the end? fixed
00:55:776 (5) - miss a whistle here fixed
01:38:129 (3,4) - i'd prefer to switch the place of the two notes (maybe also 7&8, but it's related to the next notes), since we don't need tricks for newbies ..? :P fixed~
01:59:306 (6) - whistle? fixed
02:02:835 (1) - finish fixed

[Normal]
increase the Stack Leniency... same as Easy fixed
as i said in General... i strongly suggest you to make this diff harder to fill the gap.
00:43:070 (1) - end 1/2 earlier fixed
00:47:659 (1) - remove new combo fixed
00:59:835 (5) - whstle fixed
01:20:482 (1,2,3) - all end 1/2 later, (also 01:26:129 (1,2,3) - then add reverse to 3), it fits the piano much better
fixed
[Hard]
00:47:835 (2,4,6) - remove whistle fixed
01:02:394 (4) - it's at a very strange place... reduce one reverse, and move it 1/4 later. you can add a circle at current place instead of that reverse. sorry, nochange ;_;
01:11:129 (2,1,2) - i'll say no to this spacing...orz. maybe sth like this
[attachment=0:d7d0e]44.png[/attachment:d7d0e] fixed
01:20:482 (1,2,3) - same slider suggestions as Normal fixed
01:37:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the jump starts a little suddenly... and yeah... hard. 1.5x spacing is enough? x1.5spacing fixed
01:53:217 (4) - same as 01:02:394 (4) sorry, no change ;__;
01:54:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - not fit.. imo ^
02:01:423 (1,2,1,2) - same as 01:11:129 (2,1,2) fixed

[MForever's Insane]
finish is a bit overused, triangle placement is a bit overused... well seems you really like them = = sorry, no change
suggestion for the 2 kiai parts: if you want to use "clap at every 2nd/4th white line" technique, then just use it all the way, the change of clap pace won't make people feel better. fixed
01:03:188 (1) - exception here, remove clap, since the whole structure is a xox ooxox fixed

> NatsumeRin
thx mod and star~ :oops:
Cuuuuri
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Topic Starter
swish
> Qrool
arigato~ desu >.<
nimi
Hey hey ^_^

Easy
01:23:306 (1) - hmm I don't see a reason for this new combo D:
01:26:129 (1) - ^
01:28:953 (1) - ^ (For this and the two other ones, feel free to ignore, it's not a big problem, just my opinion about it XD)

Normal
Nothing to say here, everything seems ok ^-^

Hard
-1 tick approach rate? ._.
01:45:188 (1) - remove new combo

Cool jumps here <3

Mforever's Insane
01:36:717 (8) - new combo

That's all. And oh, don't make sad faces in map description/asking for mod as if your map was terrible or something like >_< It's really really good, specially for you first map :) Good luck, hope you get this map ranked soon ^_^
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