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Aiobahn & Yunomi - Galaxy of penguins

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Solipse
19 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Solipse
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 9 augusti 2017 at 06:49:20

Artist: Aiobahn & Yunomi
Title: Galaxy of penguins
BPM: 200
Filesize: 6738kb
Play Time: 03:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Canderos' Penki Expert (5,48 stars, 576 notes)
  2. Penki Expert (4,82 stars, 603 notes)
Download: Aiobahn & Yunomi - Galaxy of penguins
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hello! Yes Hello! I am serious about finishing this map as of April 4th! Let's make this real ^^
Last edited by Solipse , edited 79 times in total.
kakashiiii_old
1 post
Joined January 2015
kakashiiii_old
I really like it so far!! :D
Solipse
19 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Solipse
sankyu :Dddd
Soulfy_old
5 posts
Joined February 2016
Soulfy_old
Since it's one my favorites and also i'm early-ish really looking forward to the development of it. Can't really help since i'm a basic scrub.
Soulfy_old
5 posts
Joined February 2016
Soulfy_old
May i ask why the link above [Penki Expert] is giving an .osu file instead of .osz file?
Solipse
19 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Solipse
I checked on another map and if you press there you'll get that, just go to the beatmap listing instead, i dunno why that is
Lotragon
73 posts
Joined February 2015
Lotragon
Mod
Aesthetics:

I recommend making the vocal part quieter than the drop and have the hit volume increase gradually during the build up.

Playing: The jumps are a bit random and hard to read at times, example: 00:49:800 - 00:50:400, to help this, add a new combo to parts where there is a 1/1 or longer pause in the song.

01:12:600 - 01:13:350 weird jumps :o

01:16:650 - spinner to fill the hole maybe?

01:20:250 - 01:21:000 the overlaps kill me everytime

01:22:500 - 01:22:800 unnessecary stream, if you want to keep it, make it less spaced

01:28:950 - 01:29:550 perhaps change the angle of those jumps and maybe dont make 1, 3 and 5 overlap completely

01:33:900 - 01:34:950 random jump spacing, should even it up

01:37:350 - 01:38:100 see 01:20:250

i hope with these tips you can find other parts in your map that are similar and need fixing :)
diino
8 posts
Joined July 2014
diino
I really liked it
Solipse
19 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Solipse
sweet :D will work on it further!
rkgk
50 posts
Joined December 2015
rkgk
Love the song so hope you're going to continue working on it!
Zer0-
177 posts
Joined April 2014
Zer0-

General


  1. You have no preview point? Consider adding one.
  2. The mp3 has a bitrate higher than 192kbps, consider using a program like audacity to lower the bitrate to 192kbps to fit within the rankable limits.

Expert


  1. 00:11:250 - there is a sound here, consider mapping to this too?
  2. 00:09:600 (1,3,1,6,7,9) - all these different shaped sliders? Why not just pick one of them and stick to that for consistency, atleast until the first kiai.
  3. 00:13:800 (9,1) - 00:12:600 (6,7) - these overlaps don't look very good imo, perhaps space out the objects?
  4. 00:17:400 - strong beat here, I'd make it clickable
  5. 00:19:200 (9,1) - back at it again with these overlaps
  6. 00:22:200 (2,3) - overlaps ;_________;
  7. 00:24:000 (5,6,7,8) - why is the spacing between these notes and 00:24:300 (1) - different?
  8. 00:24:300 (1,2) - the spacing between the sliderends of these two sliders should be consistantly repeated in these 00:24:900 (3,4) -
  9. 00:26:850 - 00:27:000 - these two ticks should have a clickable object in my opinion as there are pretty strong beats here
  10. 00:28:200 - would make this clickable instead of being a sliderend as it's such a strong beat, your rhythm is so inconsistant
  11. 00:28:650 (7) - this sliderend should be a clickable object too.
  12. 00:30:300 (1,2,3) - stuff like this should have equal spacing, keep the spacing between 1 and 2 the same as between 2 and 3
  13. 00:30:600 (3,5) - slight overlap that isnt intentional
  14. 00:36:450 - another strong beat that should have an object on it
  15. 00:50:250 - ^
  16. These problems above are recurring throughout the entire map tbh and there is no need for me to point them all out, I'd recommend re-checking the map for similar issues past this point.
  17. 00:57:600 (5,6,7) - spacing seems low
I dont think going through the entire map and pointing out every mistake is needed, just re-check the map and think about the things I mentioned!

I, personally would recommend looking at ranked maps (monstratas are good for this) and studying how they make their maps consistant and flow well, as well as not having silly overlaps and wierd rhythm.

Also you should look up pishifat's video tutorials on flow/rhythm and such things!

Good luck and keep mapping :)
Solipse
19 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Solipse
ありがと FOR THIS MOD HAA, you actually took your time :) thx!
Dubturt
508 posts
Joined March 2015
Dubturt
Hello there~~~
found this map while browsing the forums

[General]
There is no Preview point
Bitrate to high
Map some parts of the ending
Also check the AiMod

Canderos' Penki Insane
00:14:400 (1) - no need for NC
00:25:800 (8,9,10) - stack
00:29:400 (1,1,1) - NC's here is not necessary, but it's your call
00:33:600 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:38:400 (1,1,1,1) - ^
00:43:200 - - 00:44:400 - you get what i mean already i guess
00:59:100 (5,6) - fix the overlap
01:03:900 (5,6) - ^
(im not gonna highlight the NC parts anymore lol)
aaaaand its incomplete lol

all in all nice technical mpa, just make the sliders easier to read or follow

Penki Expert
No problem for me in the note placement
But make some parts more readable to players
also dont put unnecessary stuff like a repeating for example if the song does not have a sound that supports it


well this mapset isnt finish yet huh? well i hope you can continue it because Yunomi and Aiobahn are <3
best of luck
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