James2250 wrote:

Revived~

Hellzero wrote:

Hard
02:18:378 - add clap? okay

Awesome map ＼(≧▽≦)／

1. If you add a "Section-pass" then you must add a "Section-fail" too. (add the template one if you don't feel like making a custom one)

1. The playground size is 640x480, so all these files should be resized to 640x480 to save some space.
2. After resizing all you have to do is delete the following lines from the "OSB" file:
   
   SPOILER

   
   (Since the files will be the exact size of the playground there's no need to scale them)

1. HP Drain seems a bit high, I suggest to reduce it 1 tick.
2. 00:15:546 - I don't see why you decreased the volume here, the music didn't change. You should keep using 80% (or 70%) for the whole map. With "Soft Override" on, the standard hits can not be hear, remember than you must hear what you're hitting. This goes for all the sections where your used 40~45~50~60% ( 02:41:664 - Reducing volume for this part seems perfectly fine, but the other parts are not justified)
3. 00:40:406 (1) - This spinner starts too early, the rhythm starts here: 00:40:825 - move it please.
4. 00:59:287 (1,2,3,4,5) - I highly suggest to move this pattern closer to the center, spinners are hard for rookies so try to keep patterns near to the center after a spinner.
5. 01:24:042 (1) - Same for this spinner, the place where it starts it's kinda odd. It should start here: 01:24:462 -
6. 02:26:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Apply the same suggestion about moving the patterns near the center after a spinner.
7. 02:53:413 - I expected some inherited sections here to increase the volume gradually, consider adding them.
8. 03:15:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is way too long, try to keep combos "short" for [Easy]. Use New Combo on (6)

1. OD could be raised 1 tick while HP Drain could be decreased 1 tick, consider it~
2. 00:12:713 (1) - This spinner's beginning seems a bit random, I suggest to start it here: 00:13:972 -
3. 01:24:252 (1) - I think that this should start 1/2 later.
4. 01:28:657 (1) - You should save these repeating sliders (1/4) for [Hard] or [Insane] IMO, I suggest to use this instead.
5. 02:22:364 (1) - You should keep the consistency with the first verse, start this spinner here: 02:23:203 - and end it here:02:25:720 -
6. 02:41:559 ~ 02:54:776 - I highly suggest to use "0.75x" instead of "0.50x", 0.50x is a bit execessive IMO with 0.75x you'll have the same effect but It won't cause any combo-break or stuff like that.

1. 00:22:154 (4,5) - Sorry, this spacing doesn't make sense at all. All the objects are in 1/2 but you suddenly increased spacing for that circle, that's so unintuitive, fix the spacing please.
2. 00:33:692 (4,5,6) - This spacing is so inconsistent and cofusing. This would play, look and flow better if you use something like this instead.
3. 00:35:580 (1) - This circle was so unexpected, it's not following any noticeable rhythm or the vocals, remove it please.
4. 00:42:504 (X) - I feel that something is missing here, consider adding a circle here.
5. 00:47:119 (3,4,1) - Uneven spacing, please fix this. Try to keep spacing consistent and easy to read, place jump only where it's needed.
6. 01:13:343 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is almost like the first pattern I pointed out, this spacing doesn't make sense at all. It's really important to keep spacing consistent, it's even more important if all the objects are in the same combo and placed in the timeline with the same spacing between them (1/1, 1/2, 1/4, etc). Fix spacing between (3) and (4) please.
7. 01:17:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I see the same issue here, try this.
8. 01:24:357 (1) - Hmm this starts too early, it should start here: 01:24:462 - IMO.
9. 01:28:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I highly suggest to move this stream like this. The first time, I missed this stream because it got "kinda" covered by the previous spinner's hitburst so better be sure that it won't cause any problems.
10. 01:49:636 (1,2,3) - Same issue about spacing here, try this.
11. 01:51:315 (1,2,3) - ^
12. 01:56:769 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing between (3)&(4) is not the same used between (1)&(2) or (2)&(3) while all the objects are placed in 1/1, fix the spacing between (3)&(4) please.
13. 02:29:916 (5,6,7,8) - Well this jumps are intuitive enough, I won't complain about this one.
14. 02:41:559 - Same suggestion about using 0.75x instead of 0.50x (Explained in [Normal])
15. 02:53:413 (4) - Use a New Combo here to re-mark the music and spacing change.
16. 02:59:497 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same issue about spacing, fix spacing between (5) and (6) please.
17. 03:11:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ between (2)&(3)
18. 03:18:587 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole pattern has uneven spacing, it's easy to hit because those are in 1/1 so you have to time to "guess" the spacing tho. Just try to make spacing even and everyone will be happy :P.
19. Well, I see many spacing issues here that have to be fixed. (If you refuse to change any of those "no sense" spacing, at least add a New Combo when the spacing changes drastically)

Gonzvlo wrote:

The diffs are quite nice, the spread is great, the patterns are great too, but those spacing issues in [Hard] are stopping me from marking this with a "Star", sorry.

James2250 wrote:

I am generally ok with the entire mapset but as Gonzvlo pointed out there are several spacing incosistencies on Hard. It is fine to have some jumps but I would try and limit the places you have them on the map so players do not get confused while playing
Deserves a star~

abalee wrote:

agree with 2250's jumps' comment.

abalee wrote:

and if you are lazy to find a customed normal hitwhistle, it is still fine in current state.

abalee wrote:

bubbled.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Hard]
01:24:252 - I would suggest snapping the timing section here, since it's a spinner, the hitsound will appear snapped to the end of the spinner, so there's no need to have the change in advance. okay
01:29:287 (7) - I'd recommend a finish hitsound here. okay

[Normal]
00:59:287 (1) - Combo bug, set a new combo to this note, so that the spinner displays the proper end of combo hitburst fixed
01:28:657 (1) - I suggest you add a finish at the end of the slider like i recommended on [Hard] up to you tho but.. there already a finish
02:26:559 (1) - Combo bug fixed
02:41:664 (1) - here as well fixed


[Mel's Easy]
01:21:105 (4) - New combo, 8 notes is a combo too long for an Easy. fixed
01:23:622 (8) - It's really hard to hit this note accurately since you lose track of the rythm during the wait. remapped
02:45:021 (4) - New combo yup

Pretty good map, sorry i have to pop it over the combo bugs, but that should be an easy fix, the rest is suggestions, so take care of the bold stuff and should be enough for rebubble Good Luck!~
thx ^^

Sakura Hana wrote:

Alright then Rebubbled~

1. Since this is the full version of the ending of the anime, you should rename the map to "Tatta Ichido no Kiseki (Full Ver.)" for consistency with the other ranked maps and add "ending" (and "ed") to the tags. Might as well ad "world god only knows" since it is the english name of the anime.

1. Having such a huge gap between OD and AR doesn't really make sense imo. The AR itself is high for an Easy anyway, so I'd recommend to lower it to 2.
2. 00:26:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo is rather long. Adding a new combo on (4) would make sense and cut it. I'd just suggest to change it a bit though, as 1/1 rhythms are quite plain, and you've been trying to follow the lyrics so far, so why change ? I'd just focus on the lyrics more than on the claps to stay consistent through the diff, which would lead to a timeline like this:
3. 00:47:958 (2) - Missing clap.
4. 00:51:315 (2,5) - Add claps ? I think it would sound better and it would be more consistent anyway.
5. 00:56:350 (1) - The very end of this spinner becomes abruptly silent, which sounds rather meh. Move the first timing section right on top of the spinner's end to fix that (and if you want to silence it, use the soft sampleset, as it is less loud than the normal one).
6. 01:00:965 (5,4,4) - This is just a suggestion, but remove the timing sections around the end of these sliders and make their ends a clap ? It would sound better imo, and offer a hitsound pattern different from the usual normal-clap-normal-clap, which would break the monotony of this pattern and make the diff more varied.
7. 01:11:874 (4) - I don't think a finish fits here, because the tone goes down (the pitch of the notes goes down, and their volume decreases slightly as well), and this beat is on the end of the sentence in the vocals, so it shouldn't be highlighted.
8. 01:14:392 (4,5) - Same suggestion.
9. 01:19:846 (2,3,5,6) - Add claps (on the end of (3) only, not its beginning) ? It would sound better because the absence of any clap here sounds weird, wouldn't break the clap pattern you were using (it would actually complete it), and add some rhythm to that pattern.
10. 01:22:364 (1) - Add a finish on its end (which higher volume if you want, I think it would sound better) ? You need to make this slider's end somehow different from the three next notes, since it's mapped on the vocals, while the three next notes are just an echo.
11. 01:36:210 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adding a few finishes to that part would sound better and highlight some notes to follow the rhythm in the background. If you want to add them, add them on (1), (4), (1), (3) and (4)'s beginning, and (5).
12. 01:46:280 (3) - Add a new combo to stay consistent with the pattern just before.
13. 01:52:993 (3,2) - For (3)'s end and (2), why didn't you change their sampleset to soft like you did before ?
14. 02:29:916 (1,2,3,4) - Claps are missing here.
15. 02:48:797 (2) - Add a whistle here to keep the whistle on second beat pattern ?
16. 02:56:769 (5,5,3) - Same suggestion as 01:11:874 -
17. 03:10:196 (4) - If you applied ^this suggestion, add a clap on the last beat for consistency.
18. 03:13:552 (4) - Add a clap on its end if you fixed ^
19. 03:23:622 (1) - This spinner becomes abruptly silent... Move the timing section right on top of its end ?

1. 00:50:056 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is way too confusing to be put in a Normal. The spacing looks like 1/4 spacing, and I don't think any kind of anti-jump (fits in a Normal) is justified here.
2. 01:01:804 (4,5,6) - Same.
3. 01:11:874 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same.
4. 01:17:748 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Same. Also, I don't think such a heavy stream of 1/2 is a good idea - the song is pretty calm here, so try doing something less heavy ?
5. 01:28:657 (1) - I tend to think that kick sliders like this are unfitting in a Normal. They are confusing, since the number of repeat can't be expected nor guessed, and the cursor hides the repeat arrow, making it impossible to sightread the number of repeats. On top of this, this slider is entirely covered by the hitburst from the spinner. It's possible to hit the slider because it appears before the spinner ends, but it is impossible to see that it repeats.
6. 01:55:511 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:50:056 -
7. 01:58:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same.
8. 02:14:811 (3) - Missing clap on the middle beat.
9. 02:18:168 (4,5) - This souds wrong with the lyrics, because (4) should be the 3/2 slider, not (5). I suggest to make (5) start 1/2 later and add a beat where it started. Also, space the 1/2 regularly.
10. 02:32:434 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:50:056 -
11. 02:41:664 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner. New players need some time to readjust their aim after the spinner. Making the spinner end 1/1 earlier would make sense since there's a note in the song there - while there's nothing at the point the spinner currently ends at.
12. 02:41:664 (1) - I'd like it if you moved this slider away - the hitburst from the spinner hides the tick, and the slowdown is surprising as a result.
13. 03:07:678 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:50:056 -
14. 03:23:622 (1) - This spinner becomes abruptly silent... Move the timing section right on top of its end ?

• This is too hard for a Hard. The difficulty settings themselves are too high, and there are too many 1/4s in streams.

• nice <3

Odaril wrote:

Random bubble check time !

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. Since this is the full version of the ending of the anime, you should rename the map to "Tatta Ichido no Kiseki (Full Ver.)" for consistency with the other ranked maps and add "ending" (and "ed") to the tags. Might as well ad "world god only knows" since it is the english name of the anime.

added tags no changes at title

Mel's Easy

1. Having such a huge gap between OD and AR doesn't really make sense imo. The AR itself is high for an Easy anyway, so I'd recommend to lower it to 2. no
2. 00:26:559 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This combo is rather long. Adding a new combo on (4) would make sense and cut it. I'd just suggest to change it a bit though, as 1/1 rhythms are quite plain, and you've been trying to follow the lyrics so far, so why change ? I'd just focus on the lyrics more than on the claps to stay consistent through the diff, which would lead to a timeline like this: added nc at (4)
3. 00:47:958 (2) - Missing clap. its not
4. 00:51:315 (2,5) - Add claps ? I think it would sound better and it would be more consistent anyway. okay
5. 00:56:350 (1) - The very end of this spinner becomes abruptly silent, which sounds rather meh. Move the first timing section right on top of the spinner's end to fix that (and if you want to silence it, use the soft sampleset, as it is less loud than the normal one). ok
6. 01:00:965 (5,4,4) - This is just a suggestion, but remove the timing sections around the end of these sliders and make their ends a clap ? It would sound better imo, and offer a hitsound pattern different from the usual normal-clap-normal-clap, which would break the monotony of this pattern and make the diff more varied. no
7. 01:11:874 (4) - I don't think a finish fits here, because the tone goes down (the pitch of the notes goes down, and their volume decreases slightly as well), and this beat is on the end of the sentence in the vocals, so it shouldn't be highlighted. deleted
8. 01:14:392 (4,5) - Same suggestion. no
9. 01:19:846 (2,3,5,6) - Add claps (on the end of (3) only, not its beginning) ? It would sound better because the absence of any clap here sounds weird, wouldn't break the clap pattern you were using (it would actually complete it), and add some rhythm to that pattern. okay
10. 01:22:364 (1) - Add a finish on its end (which higher volume if you want, I think it would sound better) ? You need to make this slider's end somehow different from the three next notes, since it's mapped on the vocals, while the three next notes are just an echo. added clap instead
11. 01:36:210 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Adding a few finishes to that part would sound better and highlight some notes to follow the rhythm in the background. If you want to add them, add them on (1), (4), (1), (3) and (4)'s beginning, and (5). added some of the rest of part
12. 01:46:280 (3) - Add a new combo to stay consistent with the pattern just before. ok
13. 01:52:993 (3,2) - For (3)'s end and (2), why didn't you change their sampleset to soft like you did before ? no
14. 02:29:916 (1,2,3,4) - Claps are missing here. its not
15. 02:48:797 (2) - Add a whistle here to keep the whistle on second beat pattern ? okay
16. 02:56:769 (5,5,3) - Same suggestion as 01:11:874 - no
17. 03:10:196 (4) - If you applied ^this suggestion, add a clap on the last beat for consistency. no
18. 03:13:552 (4) - Add a clap on its end if you fixed ^ no
19. 03:23:622 (1) - This spinner becomes abruptly silent... Move the timing section right on top of its end ? fixed

Normal

1. 00:50:056 (1,2,3,4,1) - This is way too confusing to be put in a Normal. The spacing looks like 1/4 spacing, and I don't think any kind of anti-jump (fits in a Normal) is justified here. discussed in irc, i didnt changed anything coz its not antijumps (spacing stay the same during all diff) and i think its not confusing, even all "newbie" players will know how to hit it right after first pattern
2. 01:01:804 (4,5,6) - Same.
3. 01:11:874 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same.
4. 01:17:748 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Same. Also, I don't think such a heavy stream of 1/2 is a good idea - the song is pretty calm here, so try doing something less heavy ?
5. 01:28:657 (1) - I tend to think that kick sliders like this are unfitting in a Normal. They are confusing, since the number of repeat can't be expected nor guessed, and the cursor hides the repeat arrow, making it impossible to sightread the number of repeats. On top of this, this slider is entirely covered by the hitburst from the spinner. It's possible to hit the slider because it appears before the spinner ends, but it is impossible to see that it repeats. fixed
6. 01:55:511 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:50:056 -
7. 01:58:867 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same.
8. 02:14:811 (3) - Missing clap on the middle beat. its not
9. 02:18:168 (4,5) - This souds wrong with the lyrics, because (4) should be the 3/2 slider, not (5). I suggest to make (5) start 1/2 later and add a beat where it started. Also, space the 1/2 regularly. sorry but no
10. 02:32:434 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:50:056 -
11. 02:41:664 (1) - This note comes too soon after the spinner. New players need some time to readjust their aim after the spinner. Making the spinner end 1/1 earlier would make sense since there's a note in the song there - while there's nothing at the point the spinner currently ends at. its ok for me
12. 02:41:664 (1) - I'd like it if you moved this slider away - the hitburst from the spinner hides the tick, and the slowdown is surprising as a result. moved a bit
13. 03:07:678 (1,2,3,4,1) - Same as 00:50:056 -
14. 03:23:622 (1) - This spinner becomes abruptly silent... Move the timing section right on top of its end ? okay

Hard

• This is too hard for a Hard. The difficulty settings themselves are too high, and there are too many 1/4s in streams.

aabc's Taiko

• nice <3

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