Fixed it all, snowball. Danke!
Thank you a lot for your mod!Voyage wrote:
For M4MGeneralAdd trax as it's a Lapfox Trax Production in tags, maybe add hardcore or hardstyle for genre in tags. // I'm honestly not even sure if that's necessary
Maybe change Kantan's HP to 8 as it's too high and change Futsuu's HP to 8 and then you can up Muzukashii's HP to 7 to stay consistent.
I suggest you should tone down the general hitsounds to about 80% or 85%, as 100% is a bit too loud.Kantan00:09:179 (10) - Change this into a k, to emphasize the vocals here. // It never was my intention to go for the vocals
00:12:903 (16) - Change this into a k or a D with a finisher, // I honestly don't see much reason to do that. I would understand doing that at the end of a song's section, but this is basically right the midlde and has no audio to support it
00:15:800 (20) - Change this into a k, to singer's voice here. // see above
00:19:110 (25) - Change this into a d, to emphasize notes at 00:18:696 (24) - and 00:19:524 (26) -
00:20:352 (27) - Change this into a K with a finisher, to emphasize the drums here.// The D sounds absolutely fine to me and I see no benefit in changing it to K
00:22:007 (29) - Change this into a k, to emphasize the vocals. // It already is a k though
00:21:179 (28) - Change this into a k, to stay consistent with the change and vocals above. // I absolutely do not see any consistency problems
00:24:903 (33) - Change this into a k, for the vocals and the lower sounding vocals at 00:25:317 (34) -
00:31:524 (43) - ^ // Didn't go for vocals in Kantan so not sure if that's a change I can considerFutsuu00:05:869 (9) - Change this into a d, like you did with 00:02:145 (3,4,5) - // That actually is a intended variation because of the following transition to a different section
00:07:938 (12) - Change this in to a k, to emphasize the vocals here. // The Futsuu is mainly on the drums aswell, so I don't see much need to emphasise vocals here
00:19:110 (32) - Change this into a d, to emphasize the k's at 00:18:696 (31) - and 00:19:524 (33) -
00:20:352 (34) - Change this into a K with a finisher, as it would emphasize the kiai part as well as the drums here. // It mainly is a D to keep it consistent with 00:26:972 (46) - . Having them be different notes or both K would make things weirder than they need to be imoMuzukashii00:19:800 (34) - Add a k, to consistent with the pattern you had at 00:06:283 (6,7,8) - and 00:02:972 (6,7,8) -OniMaybe change the SV from 1.40 to 1.50 or 1.45 show the gap between Muzukashii and lower difficulties and Zetera's Inner Oni
00:02:972 (7) - - Change this into a k, like what you did with 00:06:283 (17,18,19,20) - and 00:09:593 (28,29,30,31) - // The reason why it's different is that it's like in the middle of the song's intro. I usually like to keep things more simple here.
00:08:765 (25) - Change this into a k, to emphasize the vocals and make this double at 00:09:041 (26,27) - more pronounced. // That's actually a good catch
00:12:076 - ^ // Not going to do that though
00:18:696 (59) - Change this into a k, to emphasize the loud vocals and and the upcoming kiai part. // The 00:19:386 (62,63,64,65,66) - thing is supposed to emphasise the kiai part
00:19:662 (64) - Change this into a d, to stay consistent like you did with this particular pattern like at 00:12:765 (39,40,41,42,43) - // Transition
00:25:317 (2) - Change this into a k, like you did later at 00:31:938 (2) - // The entire thing is inverse on the 2nd timestamp
Best endeavors with this map set.
Thank you!Voyage wrote:
Zetera's Inner Oni00:02:558 (7) - Add a d, as there's drum sounds here and to make it harder. Hm, I don't know which version you are using, but there is a k already, which works a bit better because it differentiates the beats. Also goes for the second timemark.
00:05:869 - ^
00:25:317 (2) - Change this into a k, to emphasize the singer's vocals like you did here 00:21:179 (70) - and here 00:31:938 (2) - Well, a K should serve the same purpose.
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Thank you a lot for your time and the check snowball!snowball112 wrote:
Heya, check time. No kd please.
- Remove "renard" from tags, it's already in the title. // woops
- Add "trax" to tags, because shouldn't the label name be "lapfox trax"?
KantanLooks fine otherwise. //
- Only thing that bothers me is the kdd at 00:12:076. I think kkd would sound better for the clap on 00:12:490 and contrast to low sound on 00:12:903. // Agreed
Futsuu
- 00:19:524 - d and 00:19:938 add k? This is too similar to kantan otherwise. Also looks weird if this not consistent in length with 00:12:076 imo.
- You could try making a bit longer patterns in the kiai, for example 00:25:317 k and add k on 00:25:731. Similar with 00:31:937. // Alright, increased length a bit. I went with k d instead of k k though
Muzukashii
- I think instead of making the part from 00:07:110 until 00:20:352 with pattern pairs (aabb) you could try crossing over patterns (abab). Basically, swap the patterns of 00:07:938 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16) and 00:17:041 (29,30,31,32,33,1). This feels a bit underwhelming otherwise if you have the more complex stuff before and then fall off, if you mix these you can keep variety.
- 00:24:076 (11,12) - ctrl+g for the clap. Or remove both and add k on 00:24:903 which fits way better with the vocal and what you have in other diffs.
- 00:30:696 - ^
- I think you should make the part at 00:22:007 similar to what you have at 00:28:627 and map the vocal. Spread is a bit large otherwise since you throw some fairly long patterns at them in the same part in oni.
- 00:27:386 - remove, I think larger spacing would be nice here for spacing and consistency.
Oni
- 00:12:352 (37,38) ctrl+g and 00:18:972 (60,61) ctrl+g as well. I guess you're going for mirror patterns here, but there is very strong vocal on the second note here.
- Overall use of d/k for the drums conflicts a bit across the diff, how about 00:25:317 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - k_d_kdddk to just make this consistent with 00:31:938. Also, throughout the map d is used for that kind of drum sound, eg. 00:06:421 or 00:09:731 so k here feels a bit weird imo. I just think the diff would look neater overall this way.
// I basically applied all of the above. No real objections there
You may call me back~
Wo ist die Nachbarschaft vor Ortviptwo wrote:
Where da hood @
21:28 Ntiger: owo
21:28 Ntiger: deine muzu ist zu einfach
21:29 Ntiger: 00:07:110 - ich würde ab hier alle 1/1 noten mappen
21:29 Ntiger: außer dort, wo 1/3 vorgezogen wird
21:29 Ntiger: 00:24:076 - 00:24:490 - die würde ich auch leer lassen
21:30 guro: puh
21:31 guro: Als ich das vorher denser hatte, hab ich auch wieder Mecker bekommen B(
21:31 Ntiger: rofl
21:31 Ntiger: ist halt ein witz für ne muzu
21:34 guro: Waere es zu viel gewollt, wenn ich bei 00:13:455 (25) - noch einen reinmogel?
21:34 Ntiger: wat
21:36 guro: Ich meine, da ist so ein sound, den man halt mitnehmen koennte, wenn die muzu ohnehin bisher zu schwach ist
21:36 guro: Aber das waere vielleicht ein bisschen zu meh
21:37 Ntiger: mach einfach und ich gucks nachm update an
21:42 guro: Hab
21:43 Ntiger: 00:12:765 (23,24,25,26) - ist müll
21:43 Ntiger: :(
21:43 guro: huch
21:43 Ntiger: 00:12:903 (24,26) - mach einfach am besten die weg
21:44 Ntiger: oder solls anders sein? :D
21:46 guro: tbh passt das so
21:46 guro: Nur weiss ich nicht, ob 00:09:593 (15,16) - und 00:16:214 (7,8) - vielleicht auch noch mehr auf 1/3 gehen sollten
21:46 Ntiger: ne finds voll verwirrend
21:46 guro: So pipapo 13 1/1 Noten hintereinander ist imo nicht so der brenner
21:46 Ntiger: bitte mach das anders
21:46 Ntiger: ja das wollte ich auch ansprechen
21:49 guro: An sich reichts ja, wenn ich 00:10:007 (16) - auf den 1/3 davor zieh
21:50 Ntiger: jo
21:50 Ntiger: so wie die anderen teile früher waren
21:50 Ntiger: 00:12:765 (23) - aber das löschst du bitte!
21:51 guro: Oh, ye, das hatte ich eben schon
21:51 Ntiger: k
21:54 guro: Irgendwie machts jetzt auch vom object count mehr Sinn
21:55 Ntiger: ayeee
21:56 guro: Nur muss ich vielleicht noch die hitsounds anpassen. Irgendwie faellt die Muzu was das angeht komplett aus dem Muster von den anderen diffs raus
21:56 guro: wew
21:56 Ntiger: so und noch was
21:56 Ntiger: OD6 auf Inner Oni
21:57 guro: Ob ich da vorher mal Zetera fragen sollte :thinking:
22:00 guro: In der Oni ist die halt auch 6. Sollte ich das auch noch irgendwie anpassen?
22:02 Ntiger: brauchst du nicht
22:02 Ntiger: aber OD5.5 wäre da vielleicht auch netter
22:02 Ntiger: weil nur 145 BPM
22:03 guro: Der Rest passt so aber?
22:03 Ntiger: Futsuu könnte vielleicht 00:27:386 - 00:20:765 - hier noten einfügen
22:04 guro: 00:24:490 (43) - wird das ab hier nicht ein wenig zu lang?
22:04 Ntiger: für ne Futsuu doch nicht
22:05 Ntiger: für ne futsuu ist diese 1/1 länge üblich noch mit 1/2 drin :D
22:06 guro: :thinking:
22:07 guro: Jetzt wo du es sagst
22:08 guro: Kantan und Oni sind sonst so ok?
22:09 guro: Eh, und die Inner, obv
22:09 Ntiger: jo
22:09 guro: Dann ist das alles so submitted B-)
22:10 Ntiger: Muzu HP --> 7 pls
22:11 guro: Oni auch runter?
22:11 Ntiger: nö
22:11 Ntiger: wobei doch
22:12 guro: Denkst du 7.5 ist in Ordnung? Irgendwie will ich nicht unbedingt, dass Muzu, Oni und Inner allesamt HP7 haben
22:12 Ntiger: nein
22:13 Ntiger: ach HP meinst du
22:13 guro: :V(
22:13 Ntiger: ja mach halt
22:15 guro: alrighy
22:15 guro: alrighty
22:16 Ntiger: 00:21:588 (4) - Muzu
22:16 Ntiger: nette unsnapped note
22:17 guro: .
22:17 guro: Wie ist das denn passiert
22:17 Ntiger: schalt einfach auf 1/12 und resnap all notes
22:17 Ntiger: in allen diffs
22:21 guro: SO
Ntiger wrote:
Muzu received note additions to feel more Muzu, not much.
literally layers of shit
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