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burstlimit2

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-03-28T08:24:55+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
Hi there for M4M

[General]
Check AiMod for some Unsnapped kiai
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[Revive]
I suggest Slider tick rate is 1 or 2. 3 seems weird esp. in the 1/2 sliders
00:04:088 (4,6) - I would like to swap them for better flow
00:04:922 (4,5) - you can triple here, I can hear some drum things on 00:05:005 -
00:06:088 (4,5,1,2) - the distance is so far imo, you can set this 00:06:588 (5,1,2) - closer to 00:06:088 (4) -
00:07:755 (9) - idk why you set this so near compared to 00:06:921 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - , don't need to hold back now m8, make it further xd
00:09:421 (4,6) - same as my 2nd suggestion, swap them for flow thingy. And if possible make this 00:09:421 (4,5,6) - symmetrical with 00:09:088 (1,2,3) - since it looks a bit strange.
00:11:922 - missing note? I can see that it can be same with 00:06:588 (5,1,2) -
00:15:088 (2) - I would like to CTRL + G this one (I'm not the fan of anti-flows but it looks cool)
00:17:255 - 00:17:338 - yea missing note
00:20:422 (2) - it should be centered with 00:20:088 (1,3) - I mean, it will be same prev. and next distance multiplier
00:20:922 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - this streams should be same distance.
00:24:755 (3) - too near with prev. slider, we can misread this as 1/4 so ye put it further
00:28:422 (1) - remove NC
00:39:088 (2) - too near with prev. slider as well
00:41:255 - 00:41:338 - yea missing note, you can triple here with 00:41:422 (4) - like how 00:42:255 (1,2,3) - was
00:44:755 (5) - unstack here since you stacked on 00:45:088 (6,7) -
00:45:422 (1,3) - they are touching lol, avoid pls
00:47:422 (3) - missing whistle?
00:48:755 (3) - you can just put simple C-slider like 00:49:755 (2) -
00:55:672 (4,5) - oh plz we can't hit this xd
01:03:422 (3) - I will put this on x:392|y:284
01:09:088 (1) - CTRL + G plz too far to kick with 01:08:755 (9) -
01:14:422 (4) - feels nazi, try polish circular pattern ex: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4811902
01:17:755 (2) - I would like to stack this tail on where the 01:16:755 (1,2) - exists
01:18:254 (4,5) - swap them?
01:19:755 (6) - blanket with 01:19:255 (3) - would be nice
01:25:088 (7) - nahhh plz unstack and move it somewhere like above of 01:24:755 (6) -
01:25:588 (2,3,5,7,8) - this one placed too random imo, create some pattern for them (like place them in linear like 01:25:422 (1,4,6) - )
01:28:088 (1) - missing finish
01:31:088 (2) - too near with 01:30:755 (1) -
01:31:755 (5) - I would like to put this where 01:30:422 (6) - is existed (I mean, stack them xd)
01:33:422 (7) - NC
01:34:005 (8,9) - too far with 01:33:422 (7) -
well that's all for me, good luck!

Thanks for modding my map!

6th

616 posts

Joined December 2014

6th 2016-03-28T16:25:47+00:00

Hey !

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2016-03-27 20:49 6th: Yo
2016-03-27 20:50 6th: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/937483 ensou ft. GUMI - COMA [Revive]] -NoFail
2016-03-27 20:52 6th: afk ?
2016-03-27 20:53 mamka322: im here
2016-03-27 20:53 6th: okay.
2016-03-27 20:53 6th: wanna m4m ?
2016-03-27 20:54 mamka322: yes, but ill mod ur map later. im too sleepy now
2016-03-27 20:54 6th: ok
2016-03-27 20:54 6th: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/937483 ensou ft. GUMI - COMA [Revive]]
2016-03-27 20:54 6th: 00:03:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use the same spacing as before
2016-03-27 20:54 6th: 00:04:755 (3,4,5,6) - it needs emphasize
2016-03-27 20:55 6th: 00:06:648 - bad to read
2016-03-27 20:55 6th: and that linear flow can be improved
2016-03-27 20:55 6th: 00:07:755 (9,4,5) - overlap
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:24:255 (2) - stack with previous circle
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:24:755 (3,4,5,6,7) - boring
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:28:088 (1,1) - too much curve
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:28:422 (1) - ctrl+g
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:29:422 (1) - spacing
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:32:255 (2) - stack
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: with previous circle
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: 00:33:422 (1,2,3,4) - boring
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: 00:37:922 (2) - move it to the right
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: 00:39:422 (4,5,6,7) - needs emphasizer
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: emphasize
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: brb
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: in like 10 mins
2016-03-27 20:58 mamka322: dude
2016-03-27 20:58 mamka322: can u explain me some things? xD
2016-03-27 20:59 mamka322: what is emphasizer
2016-03-27 20:59 mamka322: and what do u mean by spacing here? 00:29:422 (1) -
2016-03-27 20:59 mamka322: give me a screenshot maybe?
2016-03-27 21:02 mamka322: and btw i need to go now. can u make a post on my thread with all ur mods?
2016-03-28 11:02 6th: Hey
2016-03-28 11:03 6th: I'm sorry, I needed to go yesterday and I forgot to tell you xd
2016-03-28 11:03 mamka322: i was supposed to go too lol
2016-03-28 11:04 mamka322: and actually now im leaving
2016-03-28 11:04 6th: okay
2016-03-28 11:04 mamka322: can u make post on topic?
2016-03-28 11:04 6th: I'll wait you to come back
2016-03-28 11:04 6th: I prefer IG modding
2016-03-28 11:04 6th: add me as a friend
2016-03-28 11:04 mamka322: i suck at mapping right now and i don`t understand half of what ur saying to me ;_;
2016-03-28 11:05 mamka322: lol
2016-03-28 11:05 mamka322: but ok
2016-03-28 11:05 mamka322: ul be back maybe in like 2 hours
2016-03-28 11:05 mamka322: or in 5 hours
2016-03-28 11:05 mamka322: idk
2016-03-28 11:05 6th: okay, I hope i'll be online
2016-03-28 14:32 mamka322: nice time for u to log in (sarcasm)
2016-03-28 14:32 6th: xD
2016-03-28 14:32 6th: hey
2016-03-28 14:33 mamka322: i will go to swimming pool now. hoping to get back (again) in 2-2.5 hrs
2016-03-28 14:34 mamka322: btw update my map if u have it. i reworked patterns
2016-03-28 14:34 6th: okay
2016-03-28 14:34 6th: cya
2016-03-28 14:34 mamka322: bye
2016-03-28 17:10 mamka322: hi
2016-03-28 17:11 6th: hey
2016-03-28 17:12 mamka322: lets do our thing maybe?
2016-03-28 17:18 6th: sec
2016-03-28 17:18 6th: someone's modding my map
2016-03-28 17:18 6th: lol there's always something
2016-03-28 17:18 mamka322: ok. just tell me when ur ready
2016-03-28 17:31 mamka322: brb in 10 min
2016-03-28 17:39 mamka322: k im here
2016-03-28 17:47 mamka322: so?
2016-03-28 17:51 6th: i'm ready
2016-03-28 17:51 mamka322: finally...
2016-03-28 17:52 6th: k
2016-03-28 17:52 6th: go to the editor
2016-03-28 17:52 6th: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/937483 ensou ft. GUMI - COMA [Revive]]
2016-03-28 17:52 mamka322: yep
2016-03-28 17:53 6th: 00:05:422 (1) - this needs emphasize
2016-03-28 17:54 6th: oh I just noticed
2016-03-28 17:54 mamka322: what is emphasize?
2016-03-28 17:54 6th: I feel like your offset
2016-03-28 17:54 6th: is a bit early
2016-03-28 17:54 6th: 00:02:672 - listen carefully with 25% playback rate
2016-03-28 17:54 mamka322: offset is ok. it was checked by so many people already
2016-03-28 17:55 6th: who ?
2016-03-28 17:55 mamka322: i don`t have a list of people sorry
2016-03-28 17:55 mamka322: at least 8 people
2016-03-28 17:55 mamka322: yep
2016-03-28 17:55 mamka322: i hear that
2016-03-28 17:56 6th: anyway
2016-03-28 17:56 mamka322: offset 87 works fine
2016-03-28 17:56 6th: maybe
2016-03-28 17:56 6th: 00:05:422 (1) - it needs emphasize as I said
2016-03-28 17:56 6th: meaning that
2016-03-28 17:57 6th: you should increase spacing because of the heavy sound
2016-03-28 17:57 mamka322: u mean i should add hitfinish?
2016-03-28 17:57 6th: no
2016-03-28 17:57 6th: increase spacing
2016-03-28 17:57 6th: place it further from previous object
2016-03-28 17:57 mamka322: ah ok
2016-03-28 17:57 mamka322: i got that ty
2016-03-28 17:58 6th: 00:14:255 (4,5,6) - this needs too
2016-03-28 17:58 6th: 00:15:088 (2) - repeat this and make 00:15:588 - clickable
2016-03-28 17:59 6th: 00:17:255 (2) - this isn't loud enough to justify a kickslider
2016-03-28 17:59 6th: just make 00:16:755 (1) - finish on red tick
2016-03-28 18:00 6th: 00:18:589 (10) - increase spacing
2016-03-28 18:01 6th: 00:20:422 (2) - I don't like when flow is regular like that
2016-03-28 18:01 6th: I think you can make something more interesting
2016-03-28 18:01 6th: 00:34:088 (5) - stack with previous
2016-03-28 18:01 6th: 00:33:422 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is exagerated
2016-03-28 18:02 mamka322: 00:18:587 (10) - U mean here i should put it further?
2016-03-28 18:02 6th: yes
2016-03-28 18:02 6th: 00:40:088 - you're overmapping a bit here, I advise
2016-03-28 18:02 6th: using this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4814181
2016-03-28 18:03 6th: 00:46:088 (3) - there's no real reason to change direction of flow here
2016-03-28 18:03 6th: 00:46:672 (5) - seriously
2016-03-28 18:03 6th: that spacing lol
2016-03-28 18:04 6th: 00:52:755 (3) - copy/paste previous slider then CTRL+J/H
2016-03-28 18:05 mamka322: where shall i place that note? it feels good there for me
2016-03-28 18:05 6th: what note ?
2016-03-28 18:05 6th: at 18:587 ?
2016-03-28 18:05 mamka322: oh sorry
2016-03-28 18:05 mamka322: w8
2016-03-28 18:05 mamka322: 00:46:670 (5) -
2016-03-28 18:05 6th: 00:54:922 (2) - stack with previous
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: it's really too far from previous slider
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: can you play it yourself ?
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: without sliderbreaking ?
2016-03-28 18:06 mamka322: yes
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: well
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: now that I played it
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: it seems ok
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: I thought it would be harder
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: sry
2016-03-28 18:07 6th: 00:56:088 (1) - move to (404;313)
2016-03-28 18:08 6th: 00:56:588 (3,4) - you need to move (4) up
2016-03-28 18:08 6th: 00:59:422 (4,5,6,7) - really exagerated
2016-03-28 18:08 6th: 01:03:755 - overlap
2016-03-28 18:09 6th: 01:16:755 (1,2) - I suggest removing them
2016-03-28 18:09 mamka322: ok we go on with stupid questions. what is exagerated and overlap?
2016-03-28 18:10 6th: exagerated, I mean by that
2016-03-28 18:10 6th: Jumps is higher than needed
2016-03-28 18:10 6th: Jump*
2016-03-28 18:10 6th: and overlap is when 2 objects are touching each other
2016-03-28 18:10 mamka322: and what is the problem with that?
2016-03-28 18:11 6th: usually it leads to ugly patterns, also it's sometimes a bit weird to read
2016-03-28 18:11 mamka322: ah
2016-03-28 18:11 mamka322: ok
2016-03-28 18:11 mamka322: i see
2016-03-28 18:11 6th: Here I just advise you to remove it because you actually can
2016-03-28 18:12 mamka322: looks wierd
2016-03-28 18:12 6th: it isn't necessary at all
2016-03-28 18:13 mamka322: anything else?
2016-03-28 18:13 6th: 01:37:818 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4814244
2016-03-28 18:13 6th: besides that, nothing
2016-03-28 18:13 6th: it's fine
2016-03-28 18:13 6th: but tbh your map needs more pattern
2016-03-28 18:14 6th: s
2016-03-28 18:14 mamka322: can u give any suggestions about adding patterns somewhere?
2016-03-28 18:15 6th: sure
2016-03-28 18:15 6th: lemme think a bit
2016-03-28 18:17 6th: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4814266
2016-03-28 18:17 6th: here, for example
2016-03-28 18:17 6th: I decreased AR to 0 to let you see
2016-03-28 18:19 6th: well
2016-03-28 18:19 6th: we made it I think
2016-03-28 18:21 mamka322: ty a lot. Make a post on my tread ill give u ur well earned kudosu
2016-03-28 18:23 6th: can you link me the thread please

Good luck !

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-03-28T16:26:26+00:00

6th wrote:
Hey !

SPOILER
2016-03-27 20:49 6th: Yo
2016-03-27 20:50 6th: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/937483 ensou ft. GUMI - COMA [Revive]] -NoFail
2016-03-27 20:52 6th: afk ?
2016-03-27 20:53 mamka322: im here
2016-03-27 20:53 6th: okay.
2016-03-27 20:53 6th: wanna m4m ?
2016-03-27 20:54 mamka322: yes, but ill mod ur map later. im too sleepy now
2016-03-27 20:54 6th: ok
2016-03-27 20:54 6th: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/937483 ensou ft. GUMI - COMA [Revive]]
2016-03-27 20:54 6th: 00:03:755 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - use the same spacing as before
2016-03-27 20:54 6th: 00:04:755 (3,4,5,6) - it needs emphasize
2016-03-27 20:55 6th: 00:06:648 - bad to read
2016-03-27 20:55 6th: and that linear flow can be improved
2016-03-27 20:55 6th: 00:07:755 (9,4,5) - overlap
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:24:255 (2) - stack with previous circle
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:24:755 (3,4,5,6,7) - boring
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:28:088 (1,1) - too much curve
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:28:422 (1) - ctrl+g
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:29:422 (1) - spacing
2016-03-27 20:56 6th: 00:32:255 (2) - stack
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: with previous circle
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: 00:33:422 (1,2,3,4) - boring
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: 00:37:922 (2) - move it to the right
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: 00:39:422 (4,5,6,7) - needs emphasizer
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: emphasize
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: brb
2016-03-27 20:57 6th: in like 10 mins
2016-03-27 20:58 mamka322: dude
2016-03-27 20:58 mamka322: can u explain me some things? xD
2016-03-27 20:59 mamka322: what is emphasizer
2016-03-27 20:59 mamka322: and what do u mean by spacing here? 00:29:422 (1) -
2016-03-27 20:59 mamka322: give me a screenshot maybe?
2016-03-27 21:02 mamka322: and btw i need to go now. can u make a post on my thread with all ur mods?
2016-03-28 11:02 6th: Hey
2016-03-28 11:03 6th: I'm sorry, I needed to go yesterday and I forgot to tell you xd
2016-03-28 11:03 mamka322: i was supposed to go too lol
2016-03-28 11:04 mamka322: and actually now im leaving
2016-03-28 11:04 6th: okay
2016-03-28 11:04 mamka322: can u make post on topic?
2016-03-28 11:04 6th: I'll wait you to come back
2016-03-28 11:04 6th: I prefer IG modding
2016-03-28 11:04 6th: add me as a friend
2016-03-28 11:04 mamka322: i suck at mapping right now and i don`t understand half of what ur saying to me ;_;
2016-03-28 11:05 mamka322: lol
2016-03-28 11:05 mamka322: but ok
2016-03-28 11:05 mamka322: ul be back maybe in like 2 hours
2016-03-28 11:05 mamka322: or in 5 hours
2016-03-28 11:05 mamka322: idk
2016-03-28 11:05 6th: okay, I hope i'll be online
2016-03-28 14:32 mamka322: nice time for u to log in (sarcasm)
2016-03-28 14:32 6th: xD
2016-03-28 14:32 6th: hey
2016-03-28 14:33 mamka322: i will go to swimming pool now. hoping to get back (again) in 2-2.5 hrs
2016-03-28 14:34 mamka322: btw update my map if u have it. i reworked patterns
2016-03-28 14:34 6th: okay
2016-03-28 14:34 6th: cya
2016-03-28 14:34 mamka322: bye
2016-03-28 17:10 mamka322: hi
2016-03-28 17:11 6th: hey
2016-03-28 17:12 mamka322: lets do our thing maybe?
2016-03-28 17:18 6th: sec
2016-03-28 17:18 6th: someone's modding my map
2016-03-28 17:18 6th: lol there's always something
2016-03-28 17:18 mamka322: ok. just tell me when ur ready
2016-03-28 17:31 mamka322: brb in 10 min
2016-03-28 17:39 mamka322: k im here
2016-03-28 17:47 mamka322: so?
2016-03-28 17:51 6th: i'm ready
2016-03-28 17:51 mamka322: finally...
2016-03-28 17:52 6th: k
2016-03-28 17:52 6th: go to the editor
2016-03-28 17:52 6th: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/937483 ensou ft. GUMI - COMA [Revive]]
2016-03-28 17:52 mamka322: yep
2016-03-28 17:53 6th: 00:05:422 (1) - this needs emphasize
2016-03-28 17:54 6th: oh I just noticed
2016-03-28 17:54 mamka322: what is emphasize?
2016-03-28 17:54 6th: I feel like your offset
2016-03-28 17:54 6th: is a bit early
2016-03-28 17:54 6th: 00:02:672 - listen carefully with 25% playback rate
2016-03-28 17:54 mamka322: offset is ok. it was checked by so many people already
2016-03-28 17:55 6th: who ?
2016-03-28 17:55 mamka322: i don`t have a list of people sorry
2016-03-28 17:55 mamka322: at least 8 people
2016-03-28 17:55 mamka322: yep
2016-03-28 17:55 mamka322: i hear that
2016-03-28 17:56 6th: anyway
2016-03-28 17:56 mamka322: offset 87 works fine
2016-03-28 17:56 6th: maybe
2016-03-28 17:56 6th: 00:05:422 (1) - it needs emphasize as I said
2016-03-28 17:56 6th: meaning that
2016-03-28 17:57 6th: you should increase spacing because of the heavy sound
2016-03-28 17:57 mamka322: u mean i should add hitfinish?
2016-03-28 17:57 6th: no
2016-03-28 17:57 6th: increase spacing
2016-03-28 17:57 6th: place it further from previous object
2016-03-28 17:57 mamka322: ah ok
2016-03-28 17:57 mamka322: i got that ty
2016-03-28 17:58 6th: 00:14:255 (4,5,6) - this needs too
2016-03-28 17:58 6th: 00:15:088 (2) - repeat this and make 00:15:588 - clickable
2016-03-28 17:59 6th: 00:17:255 (2) - this isn't loud enough to justify a kickslider
2016-03-28 17:59 6th: just make 00:16:755 (1) - finish on red tick
2016-03-28 18:00 6th: 00:18:589 (10) - increase spacing
2016-03-28 18:01 6th: 00:20:422 (2) - I don't like when flow is regular like that
2016-03-28 18:01 6th: I think you can make something more interesting
2016-03-28 18:01 6th: 00:34:088 (5) - stack with previous
2016-03-28 18:01 6th: 00:33:422 (1,2,3,4) - spacing is exagerated
2016-03-28 18:02 mamka322: 00:18:587 (10) - U mean here i should put it further?
2016-03-28 18:02 6th: yes
2016-03-28 18:02 6th: 00:40:088 - you're overmapping a bit here, I advise
2016-03-28 18:02 6th: using this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4814181
2016-03-28 18:03 6th: 00:46:088 (3) - there's no real reason to change direction of flow here
2016-03-28 18:03 6th: 00:46:672 (5) - seriously
2016-03-28 18:03 6th: that spacing lol
2016-03-28 18:04 6th: 00:52:755 (3) - copy/paste previous slider then CTRL+J/H
2016-03-28 18:05 mamka322: where shall i place that note? it feels good there for me
2016-03-28 18:05 6th: what note ?
2016-03-28 18:05 6th: at 18:587 ?
2016-03-28 18:05 mamka322: oh sorry
2016-03-28 18:05 mamka322: w8
2016-03-28 18:05 mamka322: 00:46:670 (5) -
2016-03-28 18:05 6th: 00:54:922 (2) - stack with previous
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: it's really too far from previous slider
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: can you play it yourself ?
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: without sliderbreaking ?
2016-03-28 18:06 mamka322: yes
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: well
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: now that I played it
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: it seems ok
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: I thought it would be harder
2016-03-28 18:06 6th: sry
2016-03-28 18:07 6th: 00:56:088 (1) - move to (404;313)
2016-03-28 18:08 6th: 00:56:588 (3,4) - you need to move (4) up
2016-03-28 18:08 6th: 00:59:422 (4,5,6,7) - really exagerated
2016-03-28 18:08 6th: 01:03:755 - overlap
2016-03-28 18:09 6th: 01:16:755 (1,2) - I suggest removing them
2016-03-28 18:09 mamka322: ok we go on with stupid questions. what is exagerated and overlap?
2016-03-28 18:10 6th: exagerated, I mean by that
2016-03-28 18:10 6th: Jumps is higher than needed
2016-03-28 18:10 6th: Jump*
2016-03-28 18:10 6th: and overlap is when 2 objects are touching each other
2016-03-28 18:10 mamka322: and what is the problem with that?
2016-03-28 18:11 6th: usually it leads to ugly patterns, also it's sometimes a bit weird to read
2016-03-28 18:11 mamka322: ah
2016-03-28 18:11 mamka322: ok
2016-03-28 18:11 mamka322: i see
2016-03-28 18:11 6th: Here I just advise you to remove it because you actually can
2016-03-28 18:12 mamka322: looks wierd
2016-03-28 18:12 6th: it isn't necessary at all
2016-03-28 18:13 mamka322: anything else?
2016-03-28 18:13 6th: 01:37:818 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4814244
2016-03-28 18:13 6th: besides that, nothing
2016-03-28 18:13 6th: it's fine
2016-03-28 18:13 6th: but tbh your map needs more pattern
2016-03-28 18:14 6th: s
2016-03-28 18:14 mamka322: can u give any suggestions about adding patterns somewhere?
2016-03-28 18:15 6th: sure
2016-03-28 18:15 6th: lemme think a bit
2016-03-28 18:17 6th: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4814266
2016-03-28 18:17 6th: here, for example
2016-03-28 18:17 6th: I decreased AR to 0 to let you see
2016-03-28 18:19 6th: well
2016-03-28 18:19 6th: we made it I think
2016-03-28 18:21 mamka322: ty a lot. Make a post on my tread ill give u ur well earned kudosu
2016-03-28 18:23 6th: can you link me the thread please

Good luck !

Yeah, thanks again 6th!

Melancholy Haze

Melancholy Haze 2016-03-29T07:31:11+00:00

I didn't forget. My mod will come today.

Summer Solstice

43 posts

Joined September 2013

Summer Solstice 2016-03-29T09:18:58+00:00

Yo! Short mod

General

I don't think the offset is right. 115 sounds a lot better.

Yora's Hard

00:07:920 (5,1) - Why are these notes spaced so closely together?
00:11:420 (3,4) - ^ ^ Same again here,
00:45:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - Notes 4 & 5 in this combo are spaced differently to 1,2,3 with no indication that they should be, perhaps move them closer?
01:22:753 (5) - NC,
01:25:420 (4) - NC,
01:28:086 (4) - NC,
01:33:420 (4) - NC.

Light Insane

Consider moving this note 00:04:420 (3) - so it is centered more between these two 00:03:753 (1,2) -, it will look neater,
00:30:420 (4) - This note should be spaced 0.9x away rather than 1.0x or it will be too close to 00:30:586 (1) - and look messy. Maybe change it to something like this http://puu.sh/nY13N.jpg ,
You've started a NC here 00:25:420 (1) - ( http://puu.sh/nY0S0.jpg ) whereas you've mapped it the same way here 00:30:586 (1,2,3) - and started the NC earlier ( http://puu.sh/nY0TW.jpg ). You should be starting the combos at the same point for this,
00:38:420 (4,1) - These notes are placed too close to each other and look messy,
00:48:753 (3,4,1) - This is very awkward to hit. If you bring the end this slider 00:48:753 (3) - to 49:086 and move this note 00:49:253 (4) - to 49:170 it will flow a lot better and be easier to play,
01:06:753 (6) - This slider is not mapped in time with the song. Move the waypoint so that the slider ends at 1:07:253 ( http://puu.sh/nY1m7.jpg ),
01:12:086 (6) - This slider is also not mapped in time with the song. Move the waypoint so the slider ends at 1:12:586 ( http://puu.sh/nY1rf.jpg ),
01:13:086 (8) - Again, this slider could be extended to end at 1:13:586 so it fits more to the song ( http://puu.sh/nY1tD.jpg ),
01:33:086 (6,7) - These notes are very close to each other and look messy. You could use 1.0x or 1.1x spacing and move it away slightly. You could also start a new combo here 01:33:420 (7) - ,
01:38:086 (7,8,9,10) - Same again. The note that leads into the triple is very close. Try using 1.3x spacing and move the triple away.

Revive

00:06:586 (5) - NC maybe? Or have it on the final note of the triple like you've done here 00:11:920 (6,7,1) - ,
You started a NC on this note 00:40:753 (1) - but not for this one 00:41:420 (4) - when it's basically the same pattern,
01:17:753 (2) - This slider would look neater if it were lowered, like so http://puu.sh/nXZMG.jpg,
01:19:753 (6) - This would also look neater if it were moved to the right a bit, http://puu.sh/nXZOt.jpg,
Adding an extra note before these two notes 01:34:003 (1,2) - to make it a triple would flow better ( http://puu.sh/nXZY4.jpg & http://puu.sh/nXZZd.jpg )

Best of luck!

Last edited by Summer Solstice 2016-03-31T11:52:13+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-03-29T09:38:26+00:00

Summer Solstice wrote:
Yo! Short mod

General
I don't think the offset is right. 115 sounds a lot better.

Revive
00:06:586 (5) - NC maybe? Or have it on the final note of the triple like you've done here 00:11:920 (6,7,1) - ,Yeah, how didn`t I see that
You started a NC on this note 00:40:753 (1) - but not for this one 00:41:420 (4) - when it's basically the same pattern,Yep
01:17:753 (2) - This slider would look neater if it were lowered, like so http://puu.sh/nXZMG.jpg, Not that important imo
01:19:753 (6) - This would also look neater if it were moved to the right a bit, http://puu.sh/nXZOt.jpg.Not that important imo
Adding an extra note before these two notes 01:34:003 (1,2) - to make it a triple would flow better ( http://puu.sh/nXZY4.jpg & http://puu.sh/nXZZd.jpg )That's nearly impossible to hit

Best of luck!

Thanks

Net0

1,238 posts

Joined October 2014

Net0 2016-03-29T18:14:31+00:00

Hello, I really liked this song so here's a few changes I would recommend, feel free to use them the way you like

Light Insane
This slider 00:22:086 - should end on the red beat instead of here 00:22:503 - . Actually if you pay attention to the music your slider is ending on the correct time, but remember that this diff usually we always keep the objects on the white and red beats.
The same idea applies to this 00:28:753 (3) - 00:34:086 (5) - 01:33:420 (1) - , but this one really felt ok 00:45:170 (7) -
The flow of the map is really good, you keep the player moving around on the screen and your maps uses a lot of objects to do so. Having this idea I felt that this slider 00:50:753 (5) - it's just antiflow, I mean, if it's intencional than it's ok, but playing this big slider out of the blue felt strange. The same idea applies to this slider 01:08:170 (2) - , this one could actually start here 01:08:253 - and end here 01:08:753 - .
Also, at the end you can start a new combo here 01:37:920 (6) - , but that's really personal of mine.

I really enjoy your mapping good luck and keep on the hard work
I can't mod extras, sry

Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2016-03-29T18:20:20+00:00

So at first
Add 'Cytus' to Source and remove ensou ft. GUMI
Artist is 'ensou' ( The artist is the creator of the song, not the voice. But idk maybe ensou ft. GUMI is fine too.)
Remove ' shitmap and COMA ' from the tags.
Shitmap makes no sense. GUMI(When you keep her in the title) and COMA is already in the title
Add Vocaloid, TAGALOG, GUMI(When you remove her from the title) Dasu and ダス to the tags.
~

[Light Insane]

00:03:753 (1,2) - Create 2 triples instead of sliders
00:16:753 (1) - Dat slider is weird tho
00:35:753 (4) - Change it like this http://puu.sh/nYrzg.jpg Looks much better
00:45:086 (6) - Its very unpredicted. Maybe change it
00:46:753 (1) - ^
00:48:753 (3,4,1) - no. Try it like this http://puu.sh/nYrLs.jpg
00:55:670 (4,5) - Thats just weird. How 'bout that? http://puu.sh/nYrPF.jpg
01:33:420 (1) - Dat offbeat. Here. Like this http://puu.sh/nYrUg.jpg

[Revive]
00:04:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Get them variations.. that pattern is boring. .w.
00:06:086 (4,1,2,3) - Don't. Do. This. Change the slider and make a close stream or something.. but not this..
00:11:420 (5,6,7) - Here again
00:22:670 (3) - ^ Here's an example how to make it better http://puu.sh/nYs9q.jpg
00:48:753 (3) - Offbeat ~
00:52:003 (4) - Again this pattern.. argh.
00:55:670 (4) - ^
01:08:253 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Something like this is fully okay. Just to say.
01:34:503 (1) - This again

~
Nice map in general. You just need some practice in mapping. :3

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-03-29T18:28:16+00:00

Net0 wrote:
Hello, I really liked this song so here's a few changes I would recommend, feel free to use them the way you like

Light Insane
This slider 00:22:086 - should end on the red beat instead of here 00:22:503 - . Actually if you pay attention to the music your slider is ending on the correct time, but remember that this diff usually we always keep the objects on the white and red beats.
The same idea applies to this 00:28:753 (3) - 00:34:086 (5) - 01:33:420 (1) - , but this one really felt ok 00:45:170 (7) -
The flow of the map is really good, you keep the player moving around on the screen and your maps uses a lot of objects to do so. Having this idea I felt that this slider 00:50:753 (5) - it's just antiflow, I mean, if it's intencional than it's ok, but playing this big slider out of the blue felt strange. The same idea applies to this slider 01:08:170 (2) - , this one could actually start here 01:08:253 - and end here 01:08:753 - .
Also, at the end you can start a new combo here 01:37:920 (6) - , but that's really personal of mine.

I really enjoy your mapping good luck and keep on the hard work
I can't mod extras, sry

Thank u man!

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-03-29T18:54:35+00:00

CookieKivi wrote:
So at first
Add 'Cytus' to Source and remove ensou ft. GUMI
Artist is 'ensou' ( The artist is the creator of the song, not the voice. But idk maybe ensou ft. GUMI is fine too.)
Remove ' shitmap and COMA ' from the tags.
Shitmap makes no sense. GUMI(When you keep her in the title) and COMA is already in the title
Add Vocaloid, TAGALOG, GUMI(When you remove her from the title) Dasu and ダス to the tags.
Uhm..Ok
~

[Light Insane]

00:03:753 (1,2) - Create 2 triples instead of sliders That's will be too hard imo(If u look at the triples I had in Revive. I think sliders are ok
00:16:753 (1) - Dat slider is weird tho Made it less curvy at the end
00:35:753 (4) - Change it like this http://puu.sh/nYrzg.jpg Looks much better Fixed
00:45:086 (6) - Its very unpredicted. Maybe change it Wtf. How did I miss that lol
00:46:753 (1) - ^ Added some spacing
00:48:753 (3,4,1) - no. Try it like this http://puu.sh/nYrLs.jpg Fixed
00:55:670 (4,5) - Thats just weird. How 'bout that? http://puu.sh/nYrPF.jpg Fixed
01:33:420 (1) - Dat offbeat. Here. Like this http://puu.sh/nYrUg.jpg Fixed

[Revive]
00:04:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Get them variations.. that pattern is boring. .w. Updated before ur mod
00:06:086 (4,1,2,3) - Don't. Do. This. Change the slider and make a close stream or something.. but not this.. I have mo idea how to remake that slider
00:11:420 (5,6,7) - Here again
00:22:670 (3) - ^ Here's an example how to make it better http://puu.sh/nYs9q.jpg Fixed
00:48:753 (3) - Offbeat ~
00:52:003 (4) - Again this pattern.. argh.
00:55:670 (4) - ^
01:08:253 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Something like this is fully okay. Just to say.
01:34:503 (1) - This again

~
Nice map in general. You just need some practice in mapping. :3

Yoratama

424 posts

Joined February 2016

Yoratama 2016-03-30T06:01:31+00:00

Here is my Guest Diff, if you have any feedback just PM me

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Cytus - Coma.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 76670
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 46670,98753,154753
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:COMA
TitleUnicode:COMA
Artist:ensou ft. GUMI
ArtistUnicode:ensou ft. GUMI
Creator:mamka322
Version:Yora's Hard
Source:ensou ft. GUMI
Tags:GUMI COMA mamka322 Expert shitmap
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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88086,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
93420,-125,4,1,0,90,0,1
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Combo1 : 122,182,12
Combo2 : 0,164,0
Combo3 : 255,128,0

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I have minor mod for your diff

SPOILER

Change Combo color? that silver color is blend with BG, so it's confusing if not use a BG Dim. and the light green is not matching with BG.
Maybe change Combo colour like my diff?
Change souurce to Cytus?
Light Insane
00:02:753 - 00:45:420 - change to Normal sound maybe? because it's following a drum.
00:15:420 (3) - Slider head clap
00:16:753 (1) - ^
00:18:587 (10) - clap
00:28:753 (3) - Shorter 1 beat earlier
00:34:086 (5) - ^
00:50:420 (4,5) - Blanket?
01:02:086 (3) - slider end clap
01:03:086 (2) - Slider head clap

Hope it Good!

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-03-30T06:24:01+00:00

Yoratama wrote:

Here is my Guest Diff, if you have any feedback just PM me

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Cytus - Coma.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 76670
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 46670,98753,154753
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:COMA
TitleUnicode:COMA
Artist:ensou ft. GUMI
ArtistUnicode:ensou ft. GUMI
Creator:mamka322
Version:Yora's Hard
Source:ensou ft. GUMI
Tags:GUMI COMA mamka322 Expert shitmap
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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88086,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
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Combo2 : 0,164,0
Combo3 : 255,128,0

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352,28,21420,6,4,P|288:40|256:84,2,120
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220,288,24253,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,284,24586,2,0,P|436:276|468:240,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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228,164,25920,6,0,P|168:204|160:232,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,268,26253,2,0,P|276:228|284:200,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,64,26753,2,0,P|260:32|200:24,1,80,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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284,328,28253,2,0,P|368:352|424:296,1,160
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484,136,29586,2,0,P|468:200|368:208,1,160
312,188,30086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,84,30420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,60,30586,2,0,P|96:32|64:16,2,40
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52,196,31920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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420,120,35753,2,0,P|392:240|288:280,1,240
212,284,36420,2,0,P|140:276|108:252,1,80
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80,228,56086,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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364,84,57586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,76,57753,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,76,58086,2,0,P|112:32|68:4,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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188,324,59253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,312,59420,2,0,P|333:267|363:194,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,132,59920,2,0,P|364:112|320:128,1,80
260,108,60253,2,0,P|272:156|296:188,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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408,152,60920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,76,61086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,60,61420,6,0,P|128:116|100:188,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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264,192,63586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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243,59,64753,2,0,P|316:128|404:136,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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376,336,66086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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160,48,67253,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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172,224,68753,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,352,69086,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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432,148,69753,2,0,B|428:124|428:124|384:92,1,75.9999979705811
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256,156,71503,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,180,71586,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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188,48,73086,2,0,P|276:44|336:96,1,151.999995941162,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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460,48,74086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,164,74420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,74753,1,6,0:0:0:0:
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84,204,76253,1,4,0:0:0:0:
84,128,76420,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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324,232,77920,2,0,P|276:236|236:220,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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72,208,79920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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428,256,81920,6,0,P|408:308|368:328,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,336,82253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,336,82420,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,336,82586,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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380,292,84586,5,0,0:0:0:0:
306,331,84753,2,0,P|256:340|216:328,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,248,85920,6,0,P|212:192|240:152,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,104,86253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,264,87753,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,184,87920,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,180,88086,2,0,P|320:104|256:88,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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232,144,89253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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272,244,98753,5,6,0:0:0:0:

I have minor mod for your diff

SPOILER

Change Combo color? that silver color is blend with BG, so it's confusing if not use a BG Dim. and the light green is not matching with BG.
Maybe change Combo colour like my diff?
Change souurce to Cytus?
Light Insane
00:02:753 - 00:45:420 - change to Normal sound maybe? because it's following a drum.
00:15:420 (3) - Slider head clap
00:16:753 (1) - ^
00:18:587 (10) - clap
00:28:753 (3) - Shorter 1 beat earlier
00:34:086 (5) - ^
00:50:420 (4,5) - Blanket?
01:02:086 (3) - slider end clap
01:03:086 (2) - Slider head clap

Hope it Good!

Added ur diff, thanks.
Ill give u a kudosu beacause of ur mod.

Kotori-Chan

496 posts

Joined February 2014

Kotori-Chan 2016-03-30T23:17:27+00:00

m4m here :3

Hard

00:05:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - would split that in 2 combos

stack 00:13:420 (1) - better on 00:14:253 (4) -

same with 00:13:753 (2,5) -

i think you can improve this stuff a bit 00:19:420 (3,4,5,1) - make it blanket better :3

overlaps a little bit,fix ;w; 01:20:086 (4,2) -

same with 01:25:086 (3,1,2,3) -

01:30:420 (3,4,1) - ^^^^

01:05:420 (6) - NC because sv change

01:16:753 (6) - ^^^

01:33:420 (4) - ^^^

well,you probably gotta remap alot in this diff i think,because you have many slider starting on red ticks and ending on white ones like for example 00:14:253 (4,5,1,2) - 00:19:586 (4,5,1,2) - 00:56:586 (2,3,4) - this is bad because the strong beat is actually on the white tick and that is in your case the slider end,but isnt the strong beat supposed to be at the slider start :> ?

pls fix that ;w;

Light Insane

that tripples are kinda overmapped imo ;w; 00:08:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

mrrhh ugly overlap ;w; 00:20:920 (4,2) -

pls stack correctly~ 00:22:086 (2,4) -

01:06:253 (5,7) - ^^

since you´re using ds in this diff pretty much,pls make consistent~ 00:26:420 (6,1,2) -

01:05:920 (2,3,4,5) - ^^^^

you can make those circles better blanket with the slider 00:36:420 (3,4,1) -

why is there no tick between that sliders ? 00:45:170 (6,1) -

00:47:420 (4,2) - better blanket by making 4 curved~

i can still hear that beat here 01:08:920 - you can extend the reverse slider~

can still hear the vocals on 01:33:920 - D:

and that doubles are pretty unnecessary imo,overmapped ;w; 01:34:003 (2,3,4,5) -

and also pls fix the sliders that are starting on red ticks in this diff too D:

Revive diff actually looks fine to me *runs*

hope that mod was helpful :3

good luck with everything >w</ ♥

Yoratama

424 posts

Joined February 2016

Yoratama 2016-03-31T01:08:56+00:00

Kotori-Chan wrote:
m4m here :3

SPOILER
Hard

00:05:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - would split that in 2 combos Fixed

stack 00:13:420 (1) - better on 00:14:253 (4) - Don't really understand this, but it have stacked 1 and 4 amd 2 and 5

same with 00:13:753 (2,5) -

i think you can improve this stuff a bit 00:19:420 (3,4,5,1) - make it blanket better :3 Fixed

overlaps a little bit,fix ;w; 01:20:086 (4,2) - Fixed

same with 01:25:086 (3,1,2,3) - Fixed

01:30:420 (3,4,1) - ^^^^ Fixed

01:05:420 (6) - NC because sv change Fixed

01:16:753 (6) - ^^^ Fixed

01:33:420 (4) - ^^^ Fixed

well,you probably gotta remap alot in this diff i think,because you have many slider starting on red ticks and ending on white ones like for example 00:14:253 (4,5,1,2) - 00:19:586 (4,5,1,2) - 00:56:586 (2,3,4) - this is bad because the strong beat is actually on the white tick and that is in your case the slider end,but isnt the strong beat supposed to be at the slider start :> ? Fixed some slider that can be fixed and fit with the music, some aren't fixed, too hard to find a better place. and im too lazy to remap this :v

pls fix that ;w;
hope that mod was helpful :3

good luck with everything >w</ ♥

Thanks For Modding

Update

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Cytus - Coma.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 76670
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:COMA
TitleUnicode:COMA
Artist:ensou ft. GUMI
ArtistUnicode:ensou ft. GUMI
Creator:mamka322
Version:Yora`s Hard
Source:Cytus
Tags:mamka322 Expert shitmap Vocaloid TAGALOG  Dasu  ダス
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BeatmapSetID:435186

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

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burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-03-31T06:00:13+00:00

Kotori-Chan wrote:
m4m here :3

Hard

00:05:420 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - would split that in 2 combos

stack 00:13:420 (1) - better on 00:14:253 (4) -

same with 00:13:753 (2,5) -

i think you can improve this stuff a bit 00:19:420 (3,4,5,1) - make it blanket better :3

overlaps a little bit,fix ;w; 01:20:086 (4,2) -

same with 01:25:086 (3,1,2,3) -

01:30:420 (3,4,1) - ^^^^

01:05:420 (6) - NC because sv change

01:16:753 (6) - ^^^

01:33:420 (4) - ^^^

well,you probably gotta remap alot in this diff i think,because you have many slider starting on red ticks and ending on white ones like for example 00:14:253 (4,5,1,2) - 00:19:586 (4,5,1,2) - 00:56:586 (2,3,4) - this is bad because the strong beat is actually on the white tick and that is in your case the slider end,but isnt the strong beat supposed to be at the slider start :> ?

pls fix that ;w;

Light Insane

that tripples are kinda overmapped imo ;w; 00:08:086 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

mrrhh ugly overlap ;w; 00:20:920 (4,2) -

pls stack correctly~ 00:22:086 (2,4) -

01:06:253 (5,7) - ^^

since you´re using ds in this diff pretty much,pls make consistent~ 00:26:420 (6,1,2) -

01:05:920 (2,3,4,5) - ^^^^

you can make those circles better blanket with the slider 00:36:420 (3,4,1) -

why is there no tick between that sliders ? 00:45:170 (6,1) -

00:47:420 (4,2) - better blanket by making 4 curved~

i can still hear that beat here 01:08:920 - you can extend the reverse slider~

can still hear the vocals on 01:33:920 - D:

and that doubles are pretty unnecessary imo,overmapped ;w; 01:34:003 (2,3,4,5) -

and also pls fix the sliders that are starting on red ticks in this diff too D:

Revive diff actually looks fine to me *runs*

hope that mod was helpful :3

good luck with everything >w</ ♥

Thanks!

Yoratama

424 posts

Joined February 2016

Yoratama 2016-03-31T13:22:53+00:00

Summer Solstice wrote:
Yo! Short mod

General
I don't think the offset is right. 115 sounds a lot better.

Yora's Hard
00:07:920 (5,1) - Why are these notes spaced so closely together? A mistake, Fixed
00:11:420 (3,4) - ^ ^ Same again here, ^
00:45:586 (1,2,3,4,5) - Notes 4 & 5 in this combo are spaced differently to 1,2,3 with no indication that they should be, perhaps move them closer? Fixed
01:22:753 (5) - NC, Fixed
01:25:420 (4) - NC, Fixed
01:28:086 (4) - NC, Fixed
01:33:420 (4) - NC.
Fixed

Light Insane
Consider moving this note 00:04:420 (3) - so it is centered more between these two 00:03:753 (1,2) -, it will look neater,
00:30:420 (4) - This note should be spaced 0.9x away rather than 1.0x or it will be too close to 00:30:586 (1) - and look messy. Maybe change it to something like this http://puu.sh/nY13N.jpg ,
You've started a NC here 00:25:420 (1) - ( http://puu.sh/nY0S0.jpg ) whereas you've mapped it the same way here 00:30:586 (1,2,3) - and started the NC earlier ( http://puu.sh/nY0TW.jpg ). You should be starting the combos at the same point for this,
00:38:420 (4,1) - These notes are placed too close to each other and look messy,
00:48:753 (3,4,1) - This is very awkward to hit. If you bring the end this slider 00:48:753 (3) - to 49:086 and move this note 00:49:253 (4) - to 49:170 it will flow a lot better and be easier to play,
01:06:753 (6) - This slider is not mapped in time with the song. Move the waypoint so that the slider ends at 1:07:253 ( http://puu.sh/nY1m7.jpg ),
01:12:086 (6) - This slider is also not mapped in time with the song. Move the waypoint so the slider ends at 1:12:586 ( http://puu.sh/nY1rf.jpg ),
01:13:086 (8) - Again, this slider could be extended to end at 1:13:586 so it fits more to the song ( http://puu.sh/nY1tD.jpg ),
01:33:086 (6,7) - These notes are very close to each other and look messy. You could use 1.0x or 1.1x spacing and move it away slightly. You could also start a new combo here 01:33:420 (7) - ,
01:38:086 (7,8,9,10) - Same again. The note that leads into the triple is very close. Try using 1.3x spacing and move the triple away.

Revive
00:06:586 (5) - NC maybe? Or have it on the final note of the triple like you've done here 00:11:920 (6,7,1) - ,
You started a NC on this note 00:40:753 (1) - but not for this one 00:41:420 (4) - when it's basically the same pattern,
01:17:753 (2) - This slider would look neater if it were lowered, like so http://puu.sh/nXZMG.jpg,
01:19:753 (6) - This would also look neater if it were moved to the right a bit, http://puu.sh/nXZOt.jpg,
Adding an extra note before these two notes 01:34:003 (1,2) - to make it a triple would flow better ( http://puu.sh/nXZY4.jpg & http://puu.sh/nXZZd.jpg )

Best of luck!

Thanks For Mod

And about a DT, i will not change a note on my diff, because many people can pass This map with DT HD, and that map have a similiar BPM and note.

update

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Puhehuhe

34 posts

Joined March 2015

Puhehuhe 2016-03-31T18:12:44+00:00

M4M

General

I noticed that timing is A LOT off. Listen it at 50% and it's clearly off. Almost 1/8. Changing offset to 117 sounds good. Note that I still made the time stamps under the 87 offset.

Yora`s Hard

00:40:586 (2) - Remove
00:40:753 (3,4) - Change position of these. From original position (4) starts at (3) and (3) at the end of the (4)
00:55:753 - Slider here that ends to 00:55:920 (8) - Remove the note in the end of the slider ofc
00:57:753 (6) - Change this in to a slider. End it to 00:57:920 -
01:00:586 (6,7) - Remove (7) and extend the (6) slider to the place of (7)
01:12:086 (1) - Stretch this slider to 01:12:586 -
01:13:086 (3) - Same to 01:13:586 -
01:38:753 (1) - This is really unnecessary. Maybe extend that kick slider a bit to 01:38:670 - the song ends here too, not at 01:38:753 (1) -

Light Insane

00:45:170 (6) - I think this is supposed to be here 00:45:086 - If it's intended, change it to this.
00:46:753 (1,2) - ^ Same here. Also maybe you could do something like this?
00:52:003 (8) - Same thing as with the (1) in the previous picture
01:36:670 (2,3) - Change to this?

Revive

00:06:086 (4) - End of the slider to 00:06:420 -
00:11:420 (5) - ^ Same to 00:11:753 -
00:12:670 (3) - Move (3) between end of (2) and (4) to make it smoother
00:16:781 (1) - End of the slider to 00:17:114 -
00:48:753 (3) - ^ Same to 00:49:086 -
00:49:253 - Add note here
01:33:420 (7) - ^ Same to 01:33:753 - and add note to 01:33:920 -
01:34:503 (1) - This between end of (9) and (2). Similar to earlier pictures.
01:34:586 (2) - End of the slider to 01:34:753 -

Good job and good luck!

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-03-31T18:34:21+00:00

Puhehuhe wrote:
M4M

General

I noticed that timing is A LOT off. Listen it at 50% and it's clearly off. Almost 1/8. Changing offset to 117 sounds good. Note that I still made the time stamps under the 87 offset. [/color]

Yora`s Hard
00:40:586 (2) - Remove
00:40:753 (3,4) - Change position of these. From original position (4) starts at (3) and (3) at the end of the (4)
00:55:753 - Slider here that ends to 00:55:920 (8) - Remove the note in the end of the slider ofc
00:57:753 (6) - Change this in to a slider. End it to 00:57:920 -
01:00:586 (6,7) - Remove (7) and extend the (6) slider to the place of (7)
01:12:086 (1) - Stretch this slider to 01:12:586 -
01:13:086 (3) - Same to 01:13:586 -
01:38:753 (1) - This is really unnecessary. Maybe extend that kick slider a bit to 01:38:670 - the song ends here too, not at 01:38:753 (1) -
Light Insane
00:45:170 (6) - I think this is supposed to be here 00:45:086 - If it's intended, change it to this. Fixed
00:46:753 (1,2) - ^ Same here. Also maybe you could do something like this? Fixed
00:52:003 (8) - Same thing as with the (1) in the previous picture Fixed
01:36:670 (2,3) - Change to this?
Its ok

Revive
00:06:086 (4) - End of the slider to 00:06:420 - Its actually fine
00:11:420 (5) - ^ Same to 00:11:753 - Fixed
00:12:670 (3) - Move (3) between end of (2) and (4) to make it smootherIts ok
00:16:781 (1) - End of the slider to 00:17:114 - Fixed
00:48:753 (3) - ^ Same to 00:49:086 - Fixed
00:49:253 - Add note here Fixed
01:33:420 (7) - ^ Same to 01:33:753 - and add note to 01:33:920 - Fixed
01:34:503 (1) - This between end of (10) and (2). Similar to earlier pictures. Fixed
01:34:586 (2) - End of the slider to 01:34:753 -
Good job and good luck!

Yoratama

424 posts

Joined February 2016

Yoratama 2016-03-31T23:08:15+00:00

Puhehuhe wrote:
M4M

General

I noticed that timing is A LOT off. Listen it at 50% and it's clearly off. Almost 1/8. Changing offset to 117 sounds good. Note that I still made the time stamps under the 87 offset.

Yora`s Hard
00:40:586 (2) - Remove Fixed
00:40:753 (3,4) - Change position of these. From original position (4) starts at (3) and (3) at the end of the (4) Don't really understand this place, maybe u can give me a screenshot, or the place (Ex: x:200 y:300)
00:55:753 - Slider here that ends to 00:55:920 (8) - Remove the note in the end of the slider ofc fixed
00:57:753 (6) - Change this in to a slider. End it to 00:57:920 - fixed
01:00:586 (6,7) - Remove (7) and extend the (6) slider to the place of (7) fixed
01:12:086 (1) - Stretch this slider to 01:12:586 - fixed
01:13:086 (3) - Same to 01:13:586 - fixed
01:38:753 (1) - This is really unnecessary. Maybe extend that kick slider a bit to 01:38:670 - the song ends here too, not at 01:38:753 (1) - fixed
Good job and good luck!

Thanks For Modding

Update

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 76670
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.3
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Artist:ensou ft. GUMI
ArtistUnicode:ensou ft. GUMI
Creator:mamka322
Version:Yora`s Hard
Source:Cytus
Tags:mamka322 Expert shitmap Vocaloid TAGALOG  Dasu  ダス
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OverallDifficulty:6
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180,96,88616,2,0,P|136:100|100:128,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,88950,2,0,P|128:200|172:156,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,144,89283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,89450,2,0,P|408:124|432:196,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,248,89950,6,0,P|420:256|392:240,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,176,90283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,90450,2,0,P|256:176|276:228,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,304,90783,2,0,P|196:288|168:232,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,91283,6,0,P|140:148|96:176,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,216,91616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,276,91783,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,276,91950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,324,92116,2,0,P|244:352|340:312,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,268,92616,6,2,P|412:220|400:180,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,116,92950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,68,93116,2,0,L|296:24,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,93450,6,0,P|272:192|140:236,1,192,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,228,94033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,208,94116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,68,94450,2,0,L|96:16,2,32
92,212,94950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,284,95116,2,0,B|12:336|12:336|12:372,2,128,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,96116,6,6,B|328:284|328:284|360:252,1,128,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,212,96616,2,0,L|448:244,2,32,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,136,97116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,56,97450,2,0,P|124:100|128:172,1,128
152,232,97950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,288,98116,2,0,L|244:264,6,32,8|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,272,98700,5,6,0:0:0:0:

-Atri-

3,047 posts

Joined March 2013

-Atri- 2016-04-01T11:27:05+00:00

ahhhhhhhhh the memories that i mapped the full song last year....

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-04-01T12:26:34+00:00

KuranteMelodii wrote:
ahhhhhhhhh the memories that i mapped the full song last year....

U can do it again if u want

BriedisLT

46 posts

Joined August 2013

BriedisLT 2016-04-01T16:19:03+00:00

#modreqs
[General:]

-Your flow isn't there. Try to reach the point, where you can move your mouse in a circular motion while hitting the notes. By all means not a "circle" motion, but no straight things, i.e. you should place notes behind others, that their distance curve would be less than 90 degrees.
+Your slider variety is better than mine

Revive

CTRL + SHIFT + A fix your green points
00:05:033 - 00:12:866 - 00:17:366 - 00:41:283 - 00:41:366 - missed beat
00:02:783 (1,2,3,4) - stuff like this feels disorderly, because 00:02:783 (1,2,3) - has too big of a curve.
00:03:116 (4) - slider's start is on the other side. This can be bad flow.
00:03:783 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe backsliders would fit better, since it's the start of the song and the player is not adjusted fully to the rhythm.
00:03:783 (1,2,3,1) - fix overlap
00:04:283 (6,1) - flow from 6 to 1 isn't really circular. It's awkward for 2 things: 00:04:450 (1) - is overlapping 00:03:866 (2) - and 00:04:616 (2) - is more than 90 degrees in spacing curve.
00:06:116 (4) - this is ugly
either make 00:08:783 (7) - less curvy, move it more to left or make 00:09:116 (1,2,3) - more right.
00:09:200 (2,3,1) - fix overlap
00:12:700 (3,4) - should be a bit higher because 00:12:450 (2) - has a curve that "catapults" up.
00:20:116 (1,2) - straight awkwardness
00:22:700 (3,4) - make DS the same as on streams, just like you did 01:34:116 (10,1,2) -
00:24:783 (3,4,5) - flow is barely good
00:25:450 (1,2) - 00:26:116 (3,4) - you could increase the distance between them
00:27:783 (4,5,6) - rotating this about -13 degrees clockwise will result in a better flow
00:28:450 (2) - raise it up, even CTRLing it on 45 degrees can work out better.
00:30:450 (4) - ^
00:30:616 (1,2,3) - weird slider placement considering the flow, but that's more to the taste.
00:32:783 (3,4,5,6) - this is very ugly, -45 degrees clockwise or something similar.
00:35:283 (2) - inconsistency, why so close?
00:34:116 (5,1) - same objects, different notes
00:36:783 (5,6) - awkward straightness.
00:40:116 (1,2) - slider instead would reduce the circle mother lode.
listening to music, 00:39:450 (4,5,6,7) - are stronger than 00:39:116 (2,3) - but yet they share the same distance and pattern.
00:41:783 (3,4,5) - awkward straightness
00:43:116 (3,5) - might be a tad bit too close
00:44:616 (4,5,6,7) - straightness
00:46:700 (5,1) - this would work nicely if not 00:46:700 (5) - you should put 00:46:700 (5,1) - closer because it's with a blue tick, a very strange thing to do considering the song context.
00:48:450 (2,3) - flow, rotating clockwise 70 degrees would fix the flow here
00:49:283 (4,5,1) - rotate 28 degrees clockwise, unless you changed the previous, then adjust accordingly.
00:52:450 (2,3,4) - bad flow, but calm area can have a pass on this
00:55:450 (3) - 1/4 hats on the music
01:00:783 (4,5) - two 1/4 sliders MIGHT work here.
01:08:116 (3,4) - awkward flow
01:08:450 (6,7) - gangster streamy jump with bad flow, the jump might work but work on the flow for when you play, the mouse automatically goes there, not this 90 degrees different bullshite.\
01:11:450 (1,2,3) - CTRL + G and move it more to the left for better flow, might want to make the triplet less curvy too.
01:14:116 (3,4) - bad flow
Example: 01:16:783 - if you put a green point directly on top of a note, it will still count as it is in it, looks better, doesn't make a difference.
01:17:783 (2) - CTRL + G and adjust to new position
01:19:783 (10) - kinda works but might be awkward for HD players especially
01:24:783 (6,7) - bigger spacing between
01:28:116 (1) - about -49 degrees clockwise rotate
01:28:450 (2,3) - straight awkwardness
01:30:783 (1,2) - ^
01:31:950 (1,4,5) - overlap

If you don't understand something, or want more help, feel free to PM me when I'm online.
Cheers & good luck!

Puhehuhe

34 posts

Joined March 2015

Puhehuhe 2016-04-01T16:46:09+00:00

Yoratama wrote:
Puhehuhe wrote:
00:40:753 (3,4) - Change position of these. From original position (4) starts at (3) and (3) at the end of the (4) Don't really understand this place, maybe u can give me a screenshot, or the place (Ex: x:200 y:300)

I knew this would've been hard to understand, but here's a screenshot

Seems like the numbers were wrong because I deleted the original (2) while modding. So those (3) and (4) should've been (2) and (3) in the first place. My bad.

Yoratama

424 posts

Joined February 2016

Yoratama 2016-04-02T00:35:12+00:00

Puhehuhe wrote:
Puhehuhe wrote:
00:40:753 (3,4) - Change position of these. From original position (4) starts at (3) and (3) at the end of the (4) Don't really understand this place, maybe u can give me a screenshot, or the place (Ex: x:200 y:300)
I knew this would've been hard to understand, but here's a screenshot

Seems like the numbers were wrong because I deleted the original (2) while modding. So those (3) and (4) should've been (2) and (3) in the first place. My bad.

Thanks For SS.
Will send the update with next mod.

Melancholy Haze

Melancholy Haze 2016-04-02T08:35:44+00:00

So I'm here. So for taking it too long but I was busy during the week.

General:
- There are some snapping issues with kiai and objects. Make sure to fix them.

Hard:
- 00:12:783 (2,3,4) - I recommend to stack these three notes together for better gameplay.
- 00:16:116 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:34:783 (1,2) - Map a better blanket here.
- 00:39:450 (5,8) - Stack these two together for better flow.
- 00:44:116 (1,2) - Make these sliders identical.
- 00:45:116 (4,5,1) - I kind of don't like the spacing here. Use bigger DS.
- 00:55:700 (7) - It's hard to catch the slider on a blue note. Start this note at white tick for better emphasis with music.
- 01:11:450 (2,3,4) - Stack them together as mentioned before in the first two suggestions.
- 01:16:283 (4,5) - Unstack these two and put them next to 01:15:783 (2,3) - .
- 01:34:950 (5,6) - Stack maybe?

Light Insane:
- 00:16:116 (8) - Put a NC here.
- 00:16:783 (1) - Remove NC.
- 00:17:450 (3) - NC.
- 00:46:866 (2) - Move this note on a white tick for better emphasis.
- 00:50:783 (5) - NC.
- 00:53:450 (5) - NC.
- 01:28:450 (2,4) - Not stacked properly.

Revive:
- Seems fine to me.

There are also some hitsound issues like the soft pattern is used in a kiai part, where a drum/normal sampleset would fit more. Otherwise looks good.

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-04-02T08:59:26+00:00

Melancholy Haze wrote:
So I'm here. So for taking it too long but I was busy during the week.

General:
- There are some snapping issues with kiai and objects. Make sure to fix them.

Hard:
- 00:12:783 (2,3,4) - I recommend to stack these three notes together for better gameplay.
- 00:16:116 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:34:783 (1,2) - Map a better blanket here.
- 00:39:450 (5,8) - Stack these two together for better flow.
- 00:44:116 (1,2) - Make these sliders identical.
- 00:45:116 (4,5,1) - I kind of don't like the spacing here. Use bigger DS.
- 00:55:700 (7) - It's hard to catch the slider on a blue note. Start this note at white tick for better emphasis with music.
- 01:11:450 (2,3,4) - Stack them together as mentioned before in the first two suggestions.
- 01:16:283 (4,5) - Unstack these two and put them next to 01:15:783 (2,3) - .
- 01:34:950 (5,6) - Stack maybe?

Light Insane:
- 00:16:116 (8) - Put a NC here.
- 00:16:783 (1) - Remove NC.
- 00:17:450 (3) - NC.
- 00:46:866 (2) - Move this note on a white tick for better emphasis.
- 00:50:783 (5) - NC.
- 00:53:450 (5) - NC.
- 01:28:450 (2,4) - Not stacked properly.

Revive:
- Seems fine to me.

There are also some hitsound issues like the soft pattern is used in a kiai part, where a drum/normal sampleset would fit more. Otherwise looks good.

Ill check that. Ty

Namki

1,281 posts

Joined November 2014

Namki 2016-04-02T11:07:30+00:00

привет.

Убери из тегов свой ник, Expert и shitmap. Добавь ник маппера, который делал диффу.
Комбо1 и Комбо3 очень похожи, сделай их разными. Смысл в двух одинаковых цветах?
Вайскрин саппорт убери во вкладке Design, ибо СБ я у тебя не вижу.
Заснапь все зеленые линни во всех диффах, и в харде 01:05:450 (1) - вот тут конец слайдера не на тике.
Мп3 какое-то странное, очень резко обрывается, я бы нашел другое.
А ты знал, что мапсет Хард-Инс-Экстра не ранкабелен? Тебе нужны как минимум еще две диффы: Изик и Нормал.
Размер бгшки должен быть либо 1024x768, либо 1366х768.

Вроде, всё. Удачи~

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-04-02T11:14:54+00:00

Namki wrote:
привет.
Убери из тегов свой ник, Expert и shitmap. Добавь ник маппера, который делал диффу.
Комбо1 и Комбо3 очень похожи, сделай их разными. Смысл в двух одинаковых цветах?
Вайскрин саппорт убери во вкладке Design, ибо СБ я у тебя не вижу.
Заснапь все зеленые линни во всех диффах, и в харде 01:05:450 (1) - вот тут конец слайдера не на тике.
Мп3 какое-то странное, очень резко обрывается, я бы нашел другое.
А ты знал, что мапсет Хард-Инс-Экстра не ранкабелен? Тебе нужны как минимум еще две диффы: Изик и Нормал.
Размер бгшки должен быть либо 1024x768, либо 1366х768.
Вроде, всё. Удачи~

Очень полезный мод

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2016-04-02T11:16:56+00:00

~~Going to mod this after lunch =w=/~~

General

I find the cut a bit drastic. You should have used a slight fade out effect or something, since it is strange to have the song end like that

Remove your name from tags

Remove "shitmap", "Expert" and "TAGALOG" from tags, there is no meaning for them to be there

Add your GD-er's name into tags

Revive

00:12:450 (2,3) - This spacing is too big and it may be confused with 00:12:116 (1,2) -

00:23:450 (5) - in general, when using an SV change for just one slider it is recommended to place a NC, to make it more visible

00:45:116 (6,7) - this is out of rhythm: you should move them by 1/4 earlier (notice that the spacing is still big tho and I'd rather lower it)

00:46:450 (4,5) - I know what pattern you're trying to emulate, but I ensure you it's overdone with this spacing. Make sure to reduce it for all the patterns like this

00:47:116 (2,3) - spacing a bit short here, compared with the rest of the map

00:48:783 (3) - Ctrl + G maybe?

00:50:116 (3) - I would have used a triple made with circles instead, to resemble your other patterns. Like this

00:54:783 (1,2) - this movement is really awkward and feels a bit too forced. Something like this maybe?

00:55:450 (3,4) - Again, spacing way too big imo. Try to reduc it

00:59:950 (7,8,1) - what's with this stack o.O?

01:01:450 (1) - What about moving this to around 122;310? Just for the sake of the blanket

01:06:783 (6) - I feel like there should be a NC here

01:19:783 (10) - Ctrl + G?

01:33:450 (7) - NC missing here too

01:34:533 (1) - Do not start New Combos on red/blue ticks please

Insane

00:16:783 (3) - This shape isn't so nice imo

00:20:950 (4,1) - This spacing is awfully short, try increasing it a bit more

00:23:450 (4) - Remove that waypoint, it isn't really necessary

00:46:700 (1) - Do NOT start New Combos on blue/red ticks

00:49:783 (2,3) - short spacing :/

01:36:616 - Missing note?

As we already discussed in PM, you should increase the spacing overall and try to make more complex patterns here and there, since as it is now it really resembles a Normal, with just a high note density

Yora's Hard

This diff is using the wrong apostrophe: ` --> '

00:00:117 (1) - Use the same length used for the other diffs: 00:00:616 - 00:02:450 -

00:06:116 (5) - Sorry if I'm too nazi, but this slider isn't perfectly symmetrical x)

00:32:116 (1,2) - this blanket can be improved

00:34:783 (1) - there is no need to use 2 waypoints. The blanket is also a bit ugly like this

00:39:450 (5,6,7,8) - better avoiding these overlaps. They just play bad. Stack 00:39:450 (5,8) - and it should be fine

00:55:700 (7) - this object should start 1/4 earlier

01:02:450 (4) - do NOT use an even number of repeats, unless you perfectly know what you're doing/trying to achieve

01:07:950 (4,5) - same sliders in the same combo should have the same number of repeats. remove some repeats from the second one and place a couple of circles

01:38:116 (6,1) - What's with the micro spacing lol. Please make it noticeable that there is a circle under that

Overall the mapset has a good basis, but the patterns and the slider shapes are telling me that you're still new at mapping.
You should try to give more meaning to your patterns (speaking above all for Insane and Hard). Also, take a look at some ranked maps and try to emulate their patterns/styles.
Good luck~

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-04-02T15:08:26+00:00

MrSergio wrote:
~~Going to mod this after lunch =w=/~~

General
I find the cut a bit drastic. You should have used a slight fade out effect or something, since it is strange to have the song end like that

Remove your name from tags

Remove "shitmap", "Expert" and "TAGALOG" from tags, there is no meaning for them to be there

Add your GD-er's name into tags

Revive
00:12:450 (2,3) - This spacing is too big and it may be confused with 00:12:116 (1,2) -

00:23:450 (5) - in general, when using an SV change for just one slider it is recommended to place a NC, to make it more visible

00:45:116 (6,7) - this is out of rhythm: you should move them by 1/4 earlier (notice that the spacing is still big tho and I'd rather lower it)

00:46:450 (4,5) - I know what pattern you're trying to emulate, but I ensure you it's overdone with this spacing. Make sure to reduce it for all the patterns like this

00:47:116 (2,3) - spacing a bit short here, compared with the rest of the map

00:48:783 (3) - Ctrl + G maybe?

00:50:116 (3) - I would have used a triple made with circles instead, to resemble your other patterns. Like this

00:54:783 (1,2) - this movement is really awkward and feels a bit too forced. Something like this maybe?

00:55:450 (3,4) - Again, spacing way too big imo. Try to reduc it

00:59:950 (7,8,1) - what's with this stack o.O?

01:01:450 (1) - What about moving this to around 122;310? Just for the sake of the blanket

01:06:783 (6) - I feel like there should be a NC here

01:19:783 (10) - Ctrl + G?

01:33:450 (7) - NC missing here too

01:34:533 (1) - Do not start New Combos on red/blue ticks please

Insane
00:16:783 (3) - This shape isn't so nice imo

00:20:950 (4,1) - This spacing is awfully short, try increasing it a bit more

00:23:450 (4) - Remove that waypoint, it isn't really necessary

00:46:700 (1) - Do NOT start New Combos on blue/red ticks

00:49:783 (2,3) - short spacing :/

01:36:616 - Missing note?
As we already discussed in PM, you should increase the spacing overall and try to make more complex patterns here and there, since as it is now it really resembles a Normal, with just a high note density

Yora's Hard
This diff is using the wrong apostrophe: ` --> '

00:00:117 (1) - Use the same length used for the other diffs: 00:00:616 - 00:02:450 -

00:06:116 (5) - Sorry if I'm too nazi, but this slider isn't perfectly symmetrical x)

00:32:116 (1,2) - this blanket can be improved

00:34:783 (1) - there is no need to use 2 waypoints. The blanket is also a bit ugly like this

00:39:450 (5,6,7,8) - better avoiding these overlaps. They just play bad. Stack 00:39:450 (5,8) - and it should be fine

00:55:700 (7) - this object should start 1/4 earlier

01:02:450 (4) - do NOT use an even number of repeats, unless you perfectly know what you're doing/trying to achieve

01:07:950 (4,5) - same sliders in the same combo should have the same number of repeats. remove some repeats from the second one and place a couple of circles

01:38:116 (6,1) - What's with the micro spacing lol. Please make it noticeable that there is a circle under that

Overall the mapset has a good basis, but the patterns and the slider shapes are telling me that you're still new at mapping.
You should try to give more meaning to your patterns (speaking above all for Insane and Hard). Also, take a look at some ranked maps and try to emulate their patterns/styles.
Good luck~

Thank you!

Yoratama

424 posts

Joined February 2016

Yoratama 2016-04-02T15:28:29+00:00

Melancholy Haze wrote:
So I'm here. So for taking it too long but I was busy during the week.

General:
- There are some snapping issues with kiai and objects. Make sure to fix them.

Hard:
- 00:12:783 (2,3,4) - I recommend to stack these three notes together for better gameplay.
- 00:16:116 (1,2,3) - ^
- 00:34:783 (1,2) - Map a better blanket here.
- 00:39:450 (5,8) - Stack these two together for better flow.
- 00:44:116 (1,2) - Make these sliders identical.
- 00:45:116 (4,5,1) - I kind of don't like the spacing here. Use bigger DS. Changed To long slider
- 00:55:700 (7) - It's hard to catch the slider on a blue note. Start this note at white tick for better emphasis with music.
- 01:11:450 (2,3,4) - Stack them together as mentioned before in the first two suggestions.
- 01:16:283 (4,5) - Unstack these two and put them next to 01:15:783 (2,3) - .
- 01:34:950 (5,6) - Stack maybe?

[quote="MrSergio"]

Yora's Hard

This diff is using the wrong apostrophe: ` --> '

00:00:117 (1) - Use the same length used for the other diffs: 00:00:616 - 00:02:450 -

00:06:116 (5) - Sorry if I'm too nazi, but this slider isn't perfectly symmetrical x)

00:32:116 (1,2) - this blanket can be improved

00:34:783 (1) - there is no need to use 2 waypoints. The blanket is also a bit ugly like this Mentioned before

00:39:450 (5,6,7,8) - better avoiding these overlaps. They just play bad. Stack 00:39:450 (5,8) - and it should be fine Mentioned before

00:55:700 (7) - this object should start 1/4 earlier Mentioned before

01:02:450 (4) - do NOT use an even number of repeats, unless you perfectly know what you're doing/trying to achieve Changed To slider - slider

01:07:950 (4,5) - same sliders in the same combo should have the same number of repeats. remove some repeats from the second one and place a couple of circles

01:38:116 (6,1) - What's with the micro spacing lol. Please make it noticeable that there is a circle under that

All thinks that aren'nt mentioned above = Fixed
Thanks For Modding

Update

osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Cytus - Coma.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 76670
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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Bookmarks: 46670,98753,154753
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

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Title:COMA
TitleUnicode:COMA
Artist:ensou ft. GUMI
ArtistUnicode:ensou ft. GUMI
Creator:mamka322
Version:Yora's Hard
Source:Cytus
Tags:mamka322 Expert shitmap Vocaloid TAGALOG  Dasu  ダス
BeatmapID:939680
BeatmapSetID:-1

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HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
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SliderTickRate:2

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reanik

51 posts

Joined May 2015

reanik 2016-04-02T18:18:14+00:00

Hi there, M4M!

Yora's Hard

00:18:116 (2,3) - Fix Blanket

00:39:450 (5,6,7,8) - Is it supposed to be a weird shaped Triangle? I just think it'd look better as a more regular Triangle

01:02:450 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - 4,5,6: Flow is weird, 1,2,3: feels a little too linear

01:30:783 (4,1) - Fix Blanket

Besides what I've said here, check AIMod in case it's noticed anything I haven't looked at ALSO have a look at all the blankets in this map as some of them are a little off. It's not a lot usually they're out by but it is noticeable!

Fun map though for playing! Quite enjoyed this

Insane

AR 9 would probably be better, map is quite fast, and 8.5 is quite hard to read.

00:20:950 (4) - Feels like it could be a stream, very strong drum fill.

00:55:450 (3,4,5) - Looks messy

Just keep your eye on this one, there are some bits that could be looked at just for tidying up! Other than that, good map, good luck getting it ranked!

I don't usually mod Extra/Custom diffs as I can't really play them to know what I'm looking for xD

Bluekrait

202 posts

Joined March 2014

Bluekrait 2016-04-03T08:00:25+00:00

mamka322's M4M request

[Yora's Hard]

For difficulties hard and below, blankets tend to be more of a focus than mapper creativity. Try to focus on your blankets and spacing.

00:12:116 (4,1) - Fix Blanket
00:13:450 (1,2,4,5) - I think you can make it so that these 4 sliders blanket 00:14:116 (3) better.
00:17:616 (1) - Rotate ~-82 degrees on center
00:19:116 (2,5) - So these are the same slider mirrored, but the spacing is very different.
00:23:450 (1) - Currently ends on a strong beat. Generally you want to start notes off on these like you did here 00:26:783 (4)
00:28:283 (4,5) - Fix Blanket
00:34:783 (1) - Blanket (only need one white grip to make it perfect semi-circle.
00:37:450 (1,2) - Blanket
00:39:450 (5,6,7,8,1) - This can be a tough pattern for hard because of the overlap and spacing of 8.
00:42:783 (1,2) - Blanket
00:45:450 (1,2,3,4) vs 00:48:450 (1,2,3) - Watch the spacing.
00:56:449 (1) - Spacing increase here is fine because the music picks up.
01:01:450 (1,2,3) - Turn all these into 1/2 sliders and keep the starting position.
Aside from some blanket issues that I think you can spot with a closer look, the kiai part is very well done compared to the rest of the map.

[Insane]

00:02:783 (1,2) - Blanket these around 3.
00:03:783 (1,2) - ^
00:45:450 (1,2,3) - Blanket these around their respective sliders.
01:08:283 (2) - I don't think this reverse slider should be so long.

[Revive]

The pointing of having a map spread is to have evenly distributed difficulties for the song. Your Revive difficulty is dramatically harder than your Insane. Consider nerfing some of the jumps and lowering hp to 6.
00:02:783 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - What's going on with the combos here?
00:06:783 (3,4,5,6) - This spacing is HUGE compared to preceding notes that represent the same sounds in the music.
00:16:116 (8) - NC
00:17:283 (2,3) - These should be a triple.
00:17:450 (3) - NC
00:24:116 (2) - Watch your spacing.
01:08:116 (5) - NC
01:09:116 (1) - Move this closer to 01:08:783 (11) and don't make it NC
01:29:283 (1) - Make this blanket 01:29:950 (3) better
01:34:616 (6) - NC
Drum hitsounds at the end sound tacky because that's the only spot you used them and they don't really fit the song. It would be safer to stick with what you were using before.

I didn't cover all the blankets, see if you can spot the ones I didn't mention; there are quite a few. Working on spacing and blankets is what I think you should focus on.

Yoratama

424 posts

Joined February 2016

Yoratama 2016-04-04T09:37:15+00:00

reanik wrote:
Hi there, M4M!

Yora's Hard
00:18:116 (2,3) - Fix Blanket

00:39:450 (5,6,7,8) - Is it supposed to be a weird shaped Triangle? I just think it'd look better as a more regular Triangle I Like the triangle shape, if i change to other than trangle i must remap the other note too, so i keep it.

01:02:450 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - 4,5,6: Flow is weird, 1,2,3: feels a little too linear I intentional to make that linear

01:30:783 (4,1) - Fix Blanket

Besides what I've said here, check AIMod in case it's noticed anything I haven't looked at ALSO have a look at all the blankets in this map as some of them are a little off. It's not a lot usually they're out by but it is noticeable!

Fun map though for playing! Quite enjoyed this Thanks

I don't usually mod Extra/Custom diffs as I can't really play them to know what I'm looking for xD

Bluekrait wrote:
mamka322's M4M request

[Yora's Hard]

For difficulties hard and below, blankets tend to be more of a focus than mapper creativity. Try to focus on your blankets and spacing.
00:12:116 (4,1) - Fix Blanket
00:13:450 (1,2,4,5) - I think you can make it so that these 4 sliders blanket 00:14:116 (3) better.
00:17:616 (1) - Rotate ~-82 degrees on center
00:19:116 (2,5) - So these are the same slider mirrored, but the spacing is very different.
00:23:450 (1) - Currently ends on a strong beat. Generally you want to start notes off on these like you did here 00:26:783 (4) Cant Do anything about this
00:28:283 (4,5) - Fix Blanket
00:34:783 (1) - Blanket (only need one white grip to make it perfect semi-circle. Still with 3 anchor
00:37:450 (1,2) - Blanket
00:39:450 (5,6,7,8,1) - This can be a tough pattern for hard because of the overlap and spacing of 8. I can play that easily, so i keep that, note that i can't pass insane yet
00:42:783 (1,2) - Blanket
00:45:450 (1,2,3,4) vs 00:48:450 (1,2,3) - Watch the spacing. Oh my mistake, Fixed
00:56:449 (1) - Spacing increase here is fine because the music picks up.
01:01:450 (1,2,3) - Turn all these into 1/2 sliders and keep the starting position. I Keep this, too monotonous.
Aside from some blanket issues that I think you can spot with a closer look, the kiai part is very well done compared to the rest of the map. Thanks
I didn't cover all the blankets, see if you can spot the ones I didn't mention; there are quite a few. Working on spacing and blankets is what I think you should focus on.

Thanks For Modding

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196,300,46116,2,0,P|132:280|92:228,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,188,46616,2,0,P|52:124|80:68,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,44,47116,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,44,47450,2,0,L|384:44,2,120.000004577637,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,56,48450,6,0,L|160:120,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,160,48783,2,0,P|252:180|296:152,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,100,49283,2,0,P|376:60|440:84,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,188,49950,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,188,50116,2,2,P|484:248|420:280,1,120.000004577637
340,196,50783,1,6,0:0:0:0:
248,284,51116,6,0,P|184:240|180:192,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,68,51783,2,0,P|232:20|284:24,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,60,52283,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,152,52616,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,152,52783,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,280,53116,5,2,0:0:0:0:
436,280,53283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,280,53450,2,0,B|368:272|368:272|360:160|256:148,1,240.000009155274,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,144,54450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,148,54783,2,0,B|26:178|26:178|48:216,1,60.0000022888184,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,276,55283,1,2,0:0:0:0:
87,167,55616,2,0,P|63:179|31:223,1,60.0000022888184
40,364,56116,1,6,0:0:0:0:
208,348,56449,6,0,P|252:348|296:332,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,308,56783,2,0,P|412:280|440:236,1,80
460,176,57116,2,0,P|456:128|420:100,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,60,57449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,57616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,104,57783,2,0,P|165:122|116:116,1,80
60,64,58116,2,0,P|40:20|-4:-8,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,184,58783,6,0,P|40:248|120:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,324,59283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,312,59450,2,0,P|333:267|363:194,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,132,59950,2,0,P|364:112|320:128,1,80
260,108,60283,2,0,P|272:156|296:188,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,268,60616,2,0,P|340:256|368:140,1,160
368,76,61116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,60,61450,6,0,P|128:116|100:188,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,236,61950,2,0,P|80:280|112:328,1,80
164,352,62283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,348,62450,2,0,P|304:347|340:320,1,80
272,276,62783,2,0,P|312:260|364:272,1,80
428,268,63116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,188,63283,6,0,L|308:188,1,80
260,188,63616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,188,63783,2,8,L|100:188,1,80
104,112,64116,2,0,P|208:96|256:32,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
243,59,64783,2,0,P|316:128|404:136,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,139,65450,6,0,P|320:200|352:312,1,192
376,336,66116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
466,332,66283,6,2,B|450:292|450:292|458:276|458:276|446:260|446:260|454:240|454:240|442:224|442:224|450:208|450:208|438:192|438:192|446:172|446:172|346:128,1,264.000008056641,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,88,67033,5,4,0:0:0:0:
160,48,67283,1,4,0:0:0:0:
160,48,67450,2,0,B|76:52|76:52|32:124,1,151.999995941162,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,148,67950,2,0,L|144:148,2,37.9999989852906
96,224,68283,2,0,L|36:224,2,37.9999989852906
168,224,68616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,224,68783,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,372,69116,1,4,0:0:0:0:
388,276,69450,6,0,B|432:248|432:248|432:192,1,75.9999979705811
432,148,69783,2,0,B|428:124|428:124|384:92,1,75.9999979705811
312,92,70116,2,0,B|232:96|232:96|152:64,1,151.999995941162,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,56,70616,2,0,L|56:8,2,37.9999989852906
72,132,70950,2,0,L|16:132,2,37.9999989852906
156,140,71283,5,0,0:0:0:0:
264,168,71450,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,168,71533,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,168,71616,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,228,71783,2,8,P|372:260|356:308,1,75.9999979705811
296,344,72116,6,0,P|184:336|96:248,1,227.999993911743,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,176,72783,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,48,73116,2,0,P|272:36|384:144,1,227.999993911743,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,196,73783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,48,74116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,164,74450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,268,74783,1,6,0:0:0:0:
336,344,75116,6,0,B|256:344|256:344|192:312,1,151.999995941162,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,208,75783,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,132,75950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,128,76283,1,4,0:0:0:0:
84,204,76450,1,4,0:0:0:0:
84,316,76783,6,0,P|128:344|200:316,1,120.000004577637
388,308,77450,6,0,B|456:228|368:152,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,232,77950,2,0,P|276:236|236:220,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,78283,2,0,P|168:172|152:208,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,288,78616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,368,78783,2,0,P|268:356|292:272,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,216,79283,6,0,P|296:204|252:220,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,280,79616,2,0,P|152:288|120:272,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,208,79950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,160,80116,2,0,P|76:124|148:180,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,216,80616,6,0,P|252:260|276:268,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,81116,2,0,P|228:84|268:68,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,64,81450,2,0,P|424:108|436:192,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,248,81950,6,0,P|408:300|368:320,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,336,82283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,336,82450,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,336,82616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,336,82783,6,0,P|64:288|80:200,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,256,83283,2,0,L|232:224,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,144,83616,2,0,L|152:180,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,120,84116,2,0,P|404:144|412:232,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,292,84616,5,0,0:0:0:0:
306,331,84783,2,0,P|256:340|216:328,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,292,85116,2,0,L|104:256,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,333,85450,6,2,P|284:296|288:188,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,248,85950,2,0,P|212:192|240:152,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,104,86283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,88,86450,2,2,B|380:164|380:164|464:192|464:192|396:252|396:252|408:320,1,320,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,344,87450,6,8,L|248:344,2,40
296,264,87783,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,184,87950,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,180,88116,6,0,P|320:104|256:88,1,160,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,96,88616,2,0,P|136:100|100:128,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,204,88950,2,0,P|128:200|172:156,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,144,89283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,104,89450,2,0,P|408:124|432:196,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,248,89950,6,0,P|420:256|392:240,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,176,90283,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,90450,2,0,P|256:176|276:228,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,304,90783,2,0,P|196:288|168:232,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,156,91283,6,0,P|144:156|104:184,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,224,91616,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,296,91783,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,296,91950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,328,92116,2,0,P|244:352|340:312,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,268,92616,6,2,P|412:220|400:180,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,116,92950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,68,93116,2,0,L|296:24,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,140,93450,6,0,P|272:192|140:236,1,192,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,228,94033,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,208,94116,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,68,94450,2,0,L|96:16,2,32
92,208,94950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,208,95116,2,0,B|12:260|12:260|12:296,2,128,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,276,96116,6,6,B|312:276|312:276|344:244,1,128,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,208,96616,2,0,L|436:240,2,32,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,128,97116,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,60,97450,2,0,P|108:104|112:176,1,128
148,228,97950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,280,98116,2,0,L|244:252,6,32,8|0|0|0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,296,98700,5,6,0:0:0:0:

Mercusheigan

281 posts

Joined December 2012

Mercusheigan 2016-04-04T13:09:04+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue

Mapset

SPOILER

> Insert generic speech about missing normal difficulty

The mp3 cut is kinda weird IMO lol it's not bad its just weird how it ends

Obviously, remove shitmap from your tags

Preview time should be 01:16:783 - IMO

I'm also kinda triggered by the fact that hard has CS 4,3; Insane 4 and Revive 4,5

Revive

SPOILER

Feel like OD should be increased a bit

00:06:116 (4) - Shape suggestion:

00:06:616 (1,2,3,6,7,8) - I understand what you want to map but this shape for triples isn't good and don't play well. If you want to keep this kind of pattern, I suggest you to change from triple to reverse
00:16:783 (1) - Shape suggestion:

00:26:116 (3,4,1) - I see what sound you want to map, but soon after we have these two little fellas 00:28:783 (3,1) - with a gap between them;. So, my suggestion is something like this:

Scrapped slider 4, moved slider 3 upwards and to the right, stacked hitcircle 4 with 00:26:950 (2) - and moved 00:26:783 (1) - elsewhere

00:37:450 (1) - consider the same shape as in 00:16:783 (1) - or something along these lines

00:46:450 (4) - copy and paste 3, rotate by 180º and place in the same place as 4 is now

00:47:116 (2) - stack with 00:46:450 (4) -

01:16:783 (1) - increase by 1/4 of a beat and stack 01:17:116 (2) - with slider 1 end.

01:17:116 (2) - stack end with 01:17:783 (2) - start

01:21:700 - add note

01:38:783 -I feel like there's a note here, but because of the mp3 cut it's hard for me to tell correctly

Insane

SPOILER

00:02:783 (1,2,1,2) - Make this til they are all properly spaced from 00:03:450 (3) -

00:11:450 (5) - other shape suggestion

00:23:450 (4) - shape suggestion

01:07:450 (7) - shape suggestion

01:16:783 (1) - suggest to increase by 1/4th in this diff as well

01:26:283 (6) - add slider here and here 01:26:783 (8) - this section has too many hit circles, using sliders will help alleviate the pressure

01:38:783 - Same as revive

this diff needs some more polishment, dear mapper! curved sliders are kinda weirdly shaped all around and not very balanced

Yora's Hard

SPOILER

HP down to 5 or 5.5 (*5 is better IMO) and maybe AR down to 7,7

00:00:616 (1) - gotta snap 'em all, snapémon

00:11:450 (3) - mid point to 262, 155 end point to 191, 245

00:12:116 (4) - move to 113,254 (not perfect DS but you get the idea)

00:23:450 - snap inherits

00:28:283 (4) - end point to 423, 293

00:28:783 (5) - start 345, 276; mid point to 316, 203; end to 368, 151

00:29:450 (1) - move to 496, 57

00:32:116 (1) - start at 54, 108; mid point to 81, 38; and ending at 172, 31

00:37:450 (1) - mid point to 130, 80; end at 146, 171 -- you might also want to move next note a bit to match DS properly (remember the point is to make is as well centered as possible. 00:37:950 (2) - to 74, 140 (suggestion)

00:42:783 (1) - mid point to 319, 80; end at 274, 165

00:43:283 (2) - move to 353, 154

00:45:450 - snap inherit

00:56:116 - snap inherit

01:05:450 - snap inherit

01:06:283 - snap inherit

01:06:783 - snap inherit

01:16:783 - snap inherit

01:17:450 - snap inherit

01:17:450 (1) - ending to 377, 145

01:18:283 (3) - move to 204, 140

01:19:283 (1) - end to 250, 219

01:23:616 (3) - copy and paste previous slider, reverse select it, place it by the same spot is currently is (both 2 and 3 will have the same angle now)

01:27:450 - snap inherit

01:28:116 - snap inherit

01:33:450 - snap inherit

01:38:783 - snap inherit

Needs some polishment in the mapset overall, but the flow is decent, at least.

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-04-04T16:25:22+00:00

Mercusheigan wrote:
Hi, from my modding queue

Mapset

SPOILER
> Insert generic speech about missing normal difficulty Soon...

The mp3 cut is kinda weird IMO lol it's not bad its just weird how it ends My cutting skills OP

Obviously, remove shitmap from your tags Maybe

Preview time should be 01:16:783 - IMO That will be during the vocal already. Will sound wierd

I'm also kinda triggered by the fact that hard has CS 4,3; Insane 4 and Revive 4,5
Why not?

Revive

SPOILER
Feel like OD should be increased a bit

00:06:116 (4) - Shape suggestion: Oh thank god someone will help me with patterns
00:06:616 (1,2,3,6,7,8) - I understand what you want to map but this shape for triples isn't good and don't play well. If you want to keep this kind of pattern, I suggest you to change from triple to reverse Fk, forgot to delete this
00:16:783 (1) - Shape suggestion: Fixed
00:26:116 (3,4,1) - I see what sound you want to map, but soon after we have these two little fellas 00:28:783 (3,1) - with a gap between them;. So, my suggestion is something like this: U can clearly here a beat at 00:26:616 -

Scrapped slider 4, moved slider 3 upwards and to the right, stacked hitcircle 4 with 00:26:950 (2) - and moved 00:26:783 (1) - elsewhere

00:37:450 (1) - consider the same shape as in 00:16:783 (1) - or something along these lines Almost fixed

00:46:450 (4) - copy and paste 3, rotate by 180º and place in the same place as 4 is now Didn`t get it

00:47:116 (2) - stack with 00:46:450 (4) - It was already stacked

01:16:783 (1) - increase by 1/4 of a beat and stack 01:17:116 (2) - with slider 1 end. Nah

01:17:116 (2) - stack end with 01:17:783 (2) - start

01:21:700 - add note Where do u hear beat there lol

01:38:783 -I feel like there's a note here, but because of the mp3 cut it's hard for me to tell correctly

Insane

SPOILER
00:02:783 (1,2,1,2) - Make this til they are all properly spaced from 00:03:450 (3) -

00:11:450 (5) - other shape suggestion

00:23:450 (4) - shape suggestion

01:07:450 (7) - shape suggestion

01:16:783 (1) - suggest to increase by 1/4th in this diff as well

01:26:283 (6) - add slider here and here 01:26:783 (8) - this section has too many hit circles, using sliders will help alleviate the pressure

01:38:783 - Same as revive
Checked that all^ too lazy to write my comments

this diff needs some more polishment, dear mapper! curved sliders are kinda weirdly shaped all around and not very balanced

Yora's Hard
Yoratama will check that

SPOILER
HP down to 5 or 5.5 (*5 is better IMO) and maybe AR down to 7,7

00:00:616 (1) - gotta snap 'em all, snapémon

00:11:450 (3) - mid point to 262, 155 end point to 191, 245

00:12:116 (4) - move to 113,254 (not perfect DS but you get the idea)

00:23:450 - snap inherits

00:28:283 (4) - end point to 423, 293

00:28:783 (5) - start 345, 276; mid point to 316, 203; end to 368, 151

00:29:450 (1) - move to 496, 57

00:32:116 (1) - start at 54, 108; mid point to 81, 38; and ending at 172, 31

00:37:450 (1) - mid point to 130, 80; end at 146, 171 -- you might also want to move next note a bit to match DS properly (remember the point is to make is as well centered as possible. 00:37:950 (2) - to 74, 140 (suggestion)

00:42:783 (1) - mid point to 319, 80; end at 274, 165

00:43:283 (2) - move to 353, 154

00:45:450 - snap inherit

00:56:116 - snap inherit

01:05:450 - snap inherit

01:06:283 - snap inherit

01:06:783 - snap inherit

01:16:783 - snap inherit

01:17:450 - snap inherit

01:17:450 (1) - ending to 377, 145

01:18:283 (3) - move to 204, 140

01:19:283 (1) - end to 250, 219

01:23:616 (3) - copy and paste previous slider, reverse select it, place it by the same spot is currently is (both 2 and 3 will have the same angle now)

01:27:450 - snap inherit

01:28:116 - snap inherit

01:33:450 - snap inherit

01:38:783 - snap inherit

Needs some polishment in the mapset overall, but the flow is decent, at least.

Chiyuyu

90 posts

Joined May 2014

Chiyuyu 2016-04-04T17:18:57+00:00

хеллоу

ай хоуп ю лайк зис

http://puu.sh/o5Xse/489c56ef17.rar

енджои

burstlimit2

75 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

burstlimit2 2016-04-04T17:28:43+00:00

Chiyuyu wrote:
хеллоу

ай хоуп ю лайк зис

http://puu.sh/o5Xse/489c56ef17.rar

енджои

^

SnowNiNo_

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

2,106 posts

Joined April 2013

SnowNiNo_ 2016-04-04T18:25:47+00:00

From my queue
you mod 1 diff so ill mod i diff lol

[Revive]

00:04:283 (6,1) - if you are making the spacing 6>1 big then you should add a hs on 00:04:450 (1) - since this need to be more emphasized
00:19:116 (2,3,4) - avoid linear flow, is boring and hard to play
00:23:450 - x0.5 sv will be nicer
00:24:116 (2) - NC
00:24:283 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing with 00:24:783 (4,5,6) -
00:26:116 (3,4) - make the spacing bigger if you are keeping the spacing 2>3
00:26:450 (4,1) - this is bad flow imo
00:33:283 (6,1,2) - same 00:19:116 (2,3,4) -
00:36:616 (4,5) - inconsistent spacing with 00:36:116 (1,2,3,4) -
00:37:450 (7) - NC
00:43:116 (3,4) - the spacing 3>4 should be same as 1>2 since the drum sound the same, so the spacing shouldnt be changed
00:45:116 (7) - overmapped, delete and 00:45:200 (8) - move to 00:45:116 -
00:46:700 (5) - i cant hear a sound here lol, delete?
00:50:783 (1) - is that red node necessary?
00:57:116 (5,6) - same as 00:36:616 (4,5) -
01:22:283 (5,6,7) - triplet here arent fit to the music imo
01:25:616 (2,3) - awkward spacing lol, make the spacing more consistent

GL~

burstlimit2

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burstlimit2 2016-04-04T18:47:45+00:00

SnowNiNo_ wrote:
From my queue
you mod 1 diff so ill mod i diff lol
[Revive]
00:04:283 (6,1) - if you are making the spacing 6>1 big then you should add a hs on 00:04:450 (1) - since this need to be more emphasized
00:19:116 (2,3,4) - avoid linear flow, is boring and hard to play
00:23:450 - x0.5 sv will be nicer
00:24:116 (2) - NC
00:24:283 (3,4) - inconsistent spacing with 00:24:783 (4,5,6) -
00:26:116 (3,4) - make the spacing bigger if you are keeping the spacing 2>3
00:26:450 (4,1) - this is bad flow imo
00:33:283 (6,1,2) - same 00:19:116 (2,3,4) -
00:36:616 (4,5) - inconsistent spacing with 00:36:116 (1,2,3,4) -
00:37:450 (7) - NC
00:43:116 (3,4) - the spacing 3>4 should be same as 1>2 since the drum sound the same, so the spacing shouldnt be changed
00:45:116 (7) - overmapped, delete and 00:45:200 (8) - move to 00:45:116 -
00:46:700 (5) - i cant hear a sound here lol, delete?
00:50:783 (1) - is that red node necessary?
00:57:116 (5,6) - same as 00:36:616 (4,5) -
01:22:283 (5,6,7) - triplet here arent fit to the music imo
01:25:616 (2,3) - awkward spacing lol, make the spacing more consistent
GL~

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