josh1024 wrote:

From the queue:

I don't agree with your aesthetic style, but the rest of the map is ok I guess.
btw gonna mod E and N anyways they look like they need modding.

Easy

1. 00:19:857 (2,1) 1 could've blanketed 2 better. - did
   
2. 00:24:057 (3,6) overlap. - fix
3. 00:33:657 (4,5,1) these are slightly too far apart. - DAMN! Fixex. TY!
4. 01:00:057 (1,2) slightly too close together. - thats why need more mods for maps. I really bliend. ty dude
5. 01:16:857 (1) if this were 1 beat longer it would fit ranking criteria better. - fix here and in normal
6. 01:31:257 (4,1) now 4 is just nah. improve the curve of 4, at least make it blanket 1. - little fix
7. 02:14:457 (1) make this 1/2 beat longer, ending on a white tick. I don't see the point of emphasizing that red tick.

Normal

1. 00:32:457 (4,1) make 4 blanket 1 better. - wont change this slider
2. 01:03:057 (2,4) overlap. - fix
3. 01:09:657 (1,2,3,4) just make them parallel. - nope
4. 01:32:457 (5,6,7) fix the gap size. - fix
5. 02:11:757 (6,1) too far apart. - man i want give you 1 more kudosu =) fix
6. 02:16:257 (4) extend 1 beat or add a circle after. it's best to end a song on a white tick.

fix
Hard
Not gonna mention newcombos cuz you probably haven't read the previous mod yet.

1. 00:10:557 (1,1) - 00:15:657 (3,4) - 00:17:457 (2,3) large gap but 00:13:257 (3,4) no large gap. keep it consistent. - |00:13:257 (3,4) no large gap| fix
2. 01:02:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) you DO know you could just use ctrl+Shift+F right? - yep. Little fix
3. 01:03:807 (10) it's best to change things (ex. directions) on a white tick so make 9 on the corner instead. - change
   
4. 01:04:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) just saying this kind of use of variation is close to unrankable. - i try dont change it
5. 01:21:057 (4,1) map the blank. - fix - FIX
6. 01:37:857 (7,1,2) 2 should be emphasized but 1 has larger gap before it.
7. 02:16:257 (1,2,3) same as in Normal.

fix
Insane
You basicly made this a Hard except higher CS. Similar visuals, similar stream in kiai, etc., these's no point going over once more.
Same things apply: consider improving the aesthetics and check for unintended emphasis (ex. gap size, new combo).- I try change this dif

Amamiya Kanade wrote:

hard
00:22:107 (4,5) - i think is not easy to read if you laid them at the slidsr's end - its fine
00:33:657 (1,2,3) - PLZ lay 1 to the 00:32:457 (5) - slider's end - fix
00:38:457 (1) - ^ fix
00:41:307 (2,3) - i think is not easy to read if you laid them at the slidsr's end its fine
00:43:857 (5) - ^^ - change place
01:02:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too diffiucult - its okay =)
01:09:357 (8,2) - overlap - fix
01:21:642 - why break here? - coz little break - its good
01:33:057 (7,2) - overlap fix

short mod

- Matha - wrote:

This is for Hyper

00:18:507 - if you listen closer there is still a sound played on the blue tick , maybe blank it with this 00:16:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - but with slider at 00:18:657 (1) - wont change it

00:30:957 (1) - instead of placing NC here maybe here 00:31:257 (2) - on the stronger sound - fix

00:35:457 (1) - instead of NC here try 00:36:057 (2) - here , on the stronger beat again - fix

00:57:057 (6) - maybe just a normal slider and then stack the circle after it will be nicer, since the sound right now is played on the slider end
- its fine yep , but i wont change it

01:02:307 - there is still a sound on the blue tick , maybe you could link the streams together - long stream - bad idea

01:03:507 (1) - instead of NC there , maybe on the white tick here 01:03:657 (2) - ( the same as 01:05:907 (1) - ) - i pref use Mashed mod for NC The background seems a bit hard to look at.
00:21:507 (1,2,3,4) - Move this selection a bit so it stacks better with the slider at 00:20:757 (4)
01:00:957 (7) - NC
01:03:507 (8) - NC
01:05:907 (8) - NC
01:08:307 (8) - NC
01:10:707 (8) - NC
01:13:107 (8) - NC
01:15:507 (8) - NC
01:35:457 (1,2,3) - If this isn't intentionally curved, you can make it straight
01:58:707 (8) - NC
02:01:107 (8) - NC
02:03:507 (8) - NC
02:05:907 (8) - NC
02:08:307 (8) - NC
02:10:707 (8) - NC
02:13:107 (8) - NC

01:04:707 - Again there is still a sound on the blue tick ( 01:07:107 - 01:09:507 - 01:11:907 - 01:14:307 - 01:16:707 - here aswell , maybe try to add slider so at least the slider end would blanket [there were also these on the other kiai parts just find them and take a look]) - pref use little jumps

01:25:857 (1) - if you use NC there , you should use it here aswell 00:33:657 (1) - fix. ty

01:33:657 (5) - NC fix

The map itself is OK!
Good luck!!~
I'll mod other diff if I have the time !

Milar001 wrote:

Hi, from my queue

[Keller(Easy)]
00:33:657 (4) - Nc - fix
00:49:257 (2) - Can be confiusing, rotate it or move closer to corner - its fine
00:50:457 (1) - Strong sounds here are on white ticks so you should change it to 1/1 slider and add a circle - i really love my reverse slider
01:43:257 (1) - Too much circles in a row - fix
02:04:857 (1) - Change its shape - never
Really good diff imo
[Keller(Easy)]

[Blazer(Hard)]
00:10:557 (1,1) - Remove Nc - fix
00:11:757 (6) - Add a finish hitsound here - fix
00:13:257 (3,4) - Snap it as everything nope
00:13:557 (4) - Remove hitsound and add one on the end of 00:13:857 (5) (add a finish on the end of every combo, you can also add whistle on 2 before the last one as you did here 00:11:157 (4,5) ) - i anyway want rework HS later
00:15:057 (2) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8742367 - really good. fix
00:15:657 (3) - Snap it more from 2 - nope
00:19:257 (5) - Nc - fix
00:20:457 (1) - Rewmove nc - fix
00:21:357 (1) - Remove nc and add 00:21:657 (3) - fix
00:22:857 (7) - Rotete it - did
00:23:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This whole pattern should be changed - its my slyle
00:23:757 (1) - Remove nc and add 00:24:057 (2) - fix -
00:28:857 (7) - Nc - fix
00:32:457 (5) - Too symetrical - Bleep bloop, I am a robot. Eh, just kidding.
00:42:657 (1) - Remove nc and add 00:43:257 (2) - fix
00:47:457 (1) - ^ and add 00:48:057 (3) - fix
00:51:957 (1) - ^ and add 00:52:857 (8) - fix
00:53:757 (1) - Just remove this nc - fix
01:03:507 (1) - Move nc to white tick (here and on other like this) - read last mod
01:14:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Also very unplayable - its fine
01:04:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This pattern is very hard to read - i really want did it for me

I'm gonna stop here cause in the rest there are same mistakes. I did not write much about estethics but it also needs improvement
[Blazer(Hard)]

Good luck with your map

Yugu wrote:

hi from my q

Machpella (Hyper)

00:15:357 (3,3) - fix the stack - fix
00:36:657 (2,3) - blanket - little fix?
01:02:307 - miss sound - i did it special (for all miss sounds)
01:04:707 - ^
01:07:107 - ^
01:07:257 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - make them(slider's starting point) same ds , cuz player will not drag all slider to the end , the important thing is the starting point - why not? I like how i did, but ty, mb i change it later
01:09:507 - miss sound
01:09:657 (11) - NC - fix
01:09:657 (11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - the sound same as ^^ but they almost stay in place not like ^^ - nut sure what you want, but i want rework all HS anyway.
01:11:907 - ^^^
01:12:057 (18) - NC - fix
01:14:457 (25) - NC - fix
01:14:307 - ^^^
01:16:707 - ^
01:59:907 - ^
02:00:057 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think you can use ctrl+shift+d or ctrl+shift+f to make a Circle - fix
02:02:307 - ^^
02:04:707 - ^
02:07:107 - ^
02:09:507 - ^
02:11:907 - ^
02:14:307 - ^

Blazer (Hard)pls fix the miss sound

why 00:13:557 (4,5) - 's ds is different from 00:13:257 (3,4) - , they are same rhythm
00:17:457 (2,3,4) - ^
00:16:557 (6,1) - 's ds same as 00:19:257 (1,2) - but 00:19:257 (1,2) - is 1/1
00:20:757 (5,1) - bad overlap - fix all first 21 sek on map
00:27:957 (5,6) - blanket - fix little
00:28:257 (6,2) - nazi overlap - fix =)
00:30:957 (5,2,4) - you can try to make them become a equilateral triangle - good idea, i like it, fix
00:40:857 (1,4) - nazi overlap - fix
01:02:457 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the long 100bpm's circle is not good in hard diff , cuz new player hard to hold it - i try dont change it
01:04:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - pls , it s not suitable for new player . new player will hard to distinguish it - i will fight for this part
01:07:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ i try dont change it
01:35:457 (5,2,3) - nazi overlap - fix
01:36:657 (3,4) - fix the blanket - fix
01:55:557 (3,4,5,6) - make them like a rhombus fix

overall your map have so much meaningless overlap if you change them or make them meaningful and if your flow softer, your map will become very bueatiful

gl

Sharkie wrote:

[Terron]
Well, the first thing I see is that the map is really all mushed together. You really don't use a whole lot of the play field and that really make the structure and visuals really weird. - or great GachiGasm

1. 00:10:857 (4,5) - In my opinion, it would look better if these two were parallel. - and again, i dont like parallel
2. 00:16:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Stuff like this... It's kinda hard to read for beginner players and makes for poor structure. - fix
3. 00:52:857 (6) - This could be really confusing for players. I would use this rhythm instead. - wont change it
   01:50:457 (7) - Here as well. - ty
4. 01:15:657 (5,6,7,8) - Because the AR is so low, which it should be because its a Normal, this is really confusing to read.

- i love add 1-2 hard part, in everydiff


[Blazer]

1. 00:40:857 (1,4) - This overlap doesn't look good. I would move it down more. - fix in last mod
2. 00:50:157 (8,1) - This is great emphasis on the downbeat, however, it plays really weird. I would move 00:50:457 (1) - to x:81 y:196. I think that plays better while keeping the same idea you had. - yes, its really good, ty. Fix
3. 01:04:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This rhythm is super confusing, especially when you have the slider tail on snare hits 01:05:457 - like here. i will fight for this part
4. 01:21:657 - I don't think a break should be here, it doesn't really sound like there should be a break here. In addition, because this is a Hard diff, players don't really need a break for a relatively short song. - After a difficult battle, the pilot deserved little break ;-)
5. 01:57:057 (8) - I would use this rhythm because of the percussion part. - hmm... hmm,,, yep i like it, i did it

Arphimigon wrote:

Results given in [x, y] formats

[Blazer (Hard)]
Object at 00:16:557 - should be placed at: [188, 145] currently at: [189, 144] to move in line with slider at time 00:16:857 - fix
Object at 00:41:307 - should be placed at: [152, 290] currently at: [153, 291] to move in line with slider at time 00:40:857 - fix
Object at 00:41:457 - should be placed at: [152, 290] currently at: [153, 291] to move in line with slider at time 00:40:857 - fix
Object at 00:46:257 - should be placed at: [326, 155] currently at: [327, 156] to move in line with slider at time 00:46:857 - fix
Object at 01:56:157 - should be placed at: [99, 130] currently at: [96, 127] to blanket slider body at time 01:56:457 - fix

[Keller (Easy)]
Object at 00:57:657 - should be placed at: [114, 96] currently at: [115, 95] to move in line with slider at time 00:58:857 - fix
Object at 01:38:457 - should be placed at: [362, 138] currently at: [363, 139] to move in line with slider at time 01:37:257 - fix
Object at 01:54:657 - should be placed at: [361, 303] currently at: [360, 302] to move in line with slider at time 01:55:257 - fix

[Machpella (Hyper)]
Object at 00:29:457 - should be placed at: [281, 138] currently at: [280, 137] to move in line with slider at time 00:30:057 - fix
Object at 01:15:357 - should be placed at: [176, 115] currently at: [177, 116] to move in line with slider at time 01:14:757 - fix
Object at 01:15:657 - should be placed at: [126, 213] currently at: [127, 214] to move in line with slider at time 01:15:957 - fix
Object at 02:11:157 - should be placed at: [227, 95] currently at: [226, 94] to move in line with slider at time 02:10:857 - fix

[Terron (Normal)]
Object at 00:10:257 - should be placed at: [198, 99] currently at: [199, 98] to move in line with slider at time 00:09:657 - fix
Object at 00:12:057 - should be placed at: [241, 159] currently at: [240, 160] to move in line with slider at time 00:11:457 - fix
Object at 00:43:257 - should be placed at: [385, 161] currently at: [382, 161] to blanket slider body at time 00:42:357 - fix
Object at 01:40:557 - should be placed at: [453, 199] currently at: [455, 202] to blanket slider body at time 01:39:957 - fix
Object at 01:48:057 - should be placed at: [303, 173] currently at: [304, 174] to move in line with slider at time 01:48:357 - fix
Object at 02:10:557 - should be placed at: [120, 228] currently at: [121, 229] to move in line with slider at time 02:10:857 - fix

I hope I didn't malfunction!

- titan wrote:

hi, nm from my queue

easy
00:14:457 (1,2) - make the curve on these stronger for better blanket - fix
00:24:057 (1) - move this more to the right. the slider body is really close to the circle and compared to the rest of the map it's out of place - fix
00:25:257 (2,1) - imperfect blanket - fix
01:10:857 (3,1) - bad blanket - little fix
01:46:257 (2,3) - slightly off - little fix
02:07:257 (1,2) - same thing as at the start - idk why, but wont change it
normal
00:10:857 (4,5) - these aren't parallel - wont parallel
00:39:057 (2,3) - blanket - i try change it, but after 5m, i back 2 first version
00:51:657 (4,5) - ^ - fix
01:39:957 (4,1) - ^ - fix

cool map. good luck!