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MisakaMikoto
鬼畜之剑!
Dustbox
good :)
KanaRin
Taiko diff seem fine for me.

My Rating : 8.5 / 10

Star~
yeahyeahyeahhh
can you change the source to just beatmania IIDX please? you can put iidx15 in the tags, no real point in putting CS anywhere since CS wont show up on a search
Natteke
great stuff! :D Definitely worth a star
lucyfly
Star~ :D
wcx19911123
HI

[General]
kbps 235 → 128~192

[Skin]
I really don't like the sliderscorepoint.png..

[Impossiblexu's Easy]
00:01:183 (1,2) - this 2 note is not on a same arc , feel better to make them on a same arc
00:37:911 (2,3,4,5) - unreadble for an beginner
01:24:820 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:10:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - the sliders can go around the circles better imo
00:58:638 (2,3) - I think slider then circle is better

[Harvisp]
00:23:365 (1,2,3) - try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/92626
01:20:820 (2,4) - ctrl+r ?
01:47:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - confusing

[Insane]
AR-1
00:03:002 (3,5) - overlap better
00:05:002 (4,6) - ^
00:05:547 (8,10) - ^
00:10:274 (1) - hidden circle lol
00:16:820 (4,6) - overlap
00:17:729 (2,3) - ^
there are too many overlap issues that I ignored after this
00:39:365 (1,3) - (1) slow down , but (3) is not , the shapes are same so it's kinda confusing
00:57:365 - add circle
00:58:093 - ^
01:15:002 (3) - hidden by (1) 0.0
01:24:456 (1) - change to 1.0x hold slider is better imo
01:31:002 (3) - newcombo

that's all
Topic Starter
Aria

wcx19911123 wrote:

HI

[General]
kbps 235 → 128~192 okay, i will change it later

[Skin]
I really don't like the sliderscorepoint.png.. i will tell wanh this w

[Impossiblexu's Easy]
00:01:183 (1,2) - this 2 note is not on a same arc , feel better to make them on a same arc
00:37:911 (2,3,4,5) - unreadble for an beginner
01:24:820 (4) - ^

[Normal]
00:10:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - the sliders can go around the circles better imo no
00:58:638 (2,3) - I think slider then circle is better no

[Harvisp]
00:23:365 (1,2,3) - try this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/92626
01:20:820 (2,4) - ctrl+r ?
01:47:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - confusing

[Insane]
AR-1 no
00:03:002 (3,5) - overlap better 这真是直接点在slider尾上然后后撤时间轴的....难道幻觉o.o
00:05:002 (4,6) - ^
00:05:547 (8,10) - ^
00:10:274 (1) - hidden circle lol 这个挺正常吧...而且测试的人都看得到
00:16:820 (4,6) - overlap
00:17:729 (2,3) - ^
there are too many overlap issues that I ignored after this
00:39:365 (1,3) - (1) slow down , but (3) is not , the shapes are same so it's kinda confusing 嗯...这个确实 但是其他过渡方式暂且想不到. 先这样把..
00:57:365 - add circle 我跟了另一条音轨
00:58:093 - ^ ^
01:15:002 (3) - hidden by (1) 0.0 这个我真心会改...貌似很多人看不到
01:24:456 (1) - change to 1.0x hold slider is better imo
01:31:002 (3) - newcombo no

that's all
o.o/ thx 不是我的难度 晚点让他们看w
_Kiva
低阶而已ATTACH[DJ Yoshitaka VS S.S.D. - Claiomh Solais (Aria) [Kiva].osu]
._.

Download: DJ Yoshitaka VS S.S.D. - Claiomh Solais (Aria) [Kiva].osu
LKs
Impossiblexu's Easy

HP BAR宽又粗,slider捅上去没问题吧

Normal

[00:05:965] 歌曲此处弱音,无clap
[00:06:328] 可考虑加
[00:10:328] 这里最好突出一个打击音 不管是什么
[01:07:056] 这个sliderslide音量稍微大了

Harvisp

[01:18:692] 这里的finish们需要加音量渐变
[01:30:328] 这是要干嘛..

N系列音效用的是不是太大了 没感觉强烈反而感觉笨拙

Insane

[00:05:419] 重叠
[01:04:328] 这个sliderslide音量稍微大了

这歌本身够充实了 音效加上去未必非常增色 但我能看到你的想法
Topic Starter
Aria

LKs wrote:

Impossiblexu's Easy

HP BAR宽又粗,slider捅上去没问题吧

Normal

[00:05:965] 歌曲此处弱音,无clap K
[00:06:328] 可考虑加 K
[00:10:328] 这里最好突出一个打击音 不管是什么 K
[01:07:056] 这个sliderslide音量稍微大了 K

Harvisp

[01:18:692] 这里的finish们需要加音量渐变
[01:30:328] 这是要干嘛..

N系列音效用的是不是太大了 没感觉强烈反而感觉笨拙

Insane

[00:05:419] 重叠 fixed
[01:04:328] 这个sliderslide音量稍微大了 fixed

这歌本身够充实了 音效加上去未必非常增色 但我能看到你的想法
多谢
AoiX
I like the beat~

路人随手吐槽
!看看你spinner-background.png这个文件有多大。转成jpg格式啊~
[insane]
00:03:056 (3,5) - stack
00:23:965 (2,4) - ^
00:27:783 (1,2) - ^
00:28:510 (3,1) - ^
00:31:238 (2,4) - ^
00:35:601 (2,3) - ^
00:48:510 (4) - 点被你的皮肤挡住了
01:20:147 (1,1) - stack

[Harvisp]
01:20:147 (1,2,3,4) - make smoothly

[Normal]
00:30:692 (1,2,3) - 不对齐么?
01:49:237 (1) - 为什么这段有kiai?

[easy]
00:55:056 (2) - 好吧我只能说你皮肤里这块做太高了,又有些挡点
//木有kiai的设定耶
Topic Starter
Aria

xykbear wrote:

I like the beat~

路人随手吐槽
!看看你spinner-background.png这个文件有多大。转成jpg格式啊~
[insane]
00:03:056 (3,5) - stack
00:23:965 (2,4) - ^
00:27:783 (1,2) - ^
00:28:510 (3,1) - ^
00:31:238 (2,4) - ^
00:35:601 (2,3) - ^
00:48:510 (4) - 点被你的皮肤挡住了
01:20:147 (1,1) - stack

[Harvisp]
01:20:147 (1,2,3,4) - make smoothly

[Normal]
00:30:692 (1,2,3) - 不对齐么?
01:49:237 (1) - 为什么这段有kiai?

[easy]
00:55:056 (2) - 好吧我只能说你皮肤里这块做太高了,又有些挡点
//木有kiai的设定耶
thankyou
Axey
搞毛啊 没问题叫我挑个屎啊

还有没给lks kds啊
Topic Starter
Aria

BakaHuang wrote:

搞毛啊 没问题叫我挑个屎啊

还有没给lks kds啊

昨天一直在找搞毛大爷...结果就忘了
P.S. 哦射 是LKs
Kensei Akio
star :)
wmfchris
Topic Starter
Aria

wmfchris wrote:

之前太小聲了
多谢. 我等下和搞毛老板的一起更新
Gomo Psivarh
Download: DJ Yoshitaka VS S.S.D. - Claiomh Solais (Clickz) [Harvisp].osu
↑creator和tag应该不对...我忘记改了...

changes:

kiai volume decreased to 75%.
[01:18:692] SE rearranged


关于finish的...明天再弄...我都忘记当时为什么要放这么多finish了... :(

LKs wrote:

Harvisp
[01:30:328] 这是要干嘛..
这里怎么了...什么也没有啊 :(
Topic Starter
Aria

Gomo Psivarh wrote:

[attachment=0:a4454]DJ Yoshitaka VS S.S.D. - Claiomh Solais (Clickz) [Harvisp].osu[/attachment:a4454]
↑creator和tag应该不对...我忘记改了...

changes:

kiai volume decreased to 75%.
[01:18:692] SE rearranged


关于finish的...明天再弄...我都忘记当时为什么要放这么多finish了... :(

LKs wrote:

Harvisp
[01:30:328] 这是要干嘛..
这里怎么了...什么也没有啊 :(
LKs是说那里一堆fin
和问题巨多的那个版本基本没变啊....别跟着MOD改了.,.赶紧重新下音效吧,.,
还有,.,,敢不敢重新下载 更新?>
Gomo Psivarh
kioukiou
+5 ms to all offset.

And don't forget resnap all notes and green lines.

[Wmf's Taiko]

01:19:237 (68,69) - snap failed. o.O


star for now.
hez
:) star
Topic Starter
Aria

kioukiou wrote:

+5 ms to all offset.

And don't forget resnap all notes and green lines. fixed

[Wmf's Taiko]

01:19:237 (68,69) - snap failed. o.O 这问题略猎奇....


star for now.
kioukiou
Bubbled.
Topic Starter
Aria

kioukiou wrote:

Bubbled.
QQ姐终于出现了Q.Q
tsuka
well
it's not correct that actually the background image is from onoken's Vijore
why it be used again....
Topic Starter
Aria

tsuka wrote:

well
it's not correct that actually the background image is from onoken's Vijore
why it be used again....
我直接从基死那里要的...压力大啊...o.o 求BG
Scorpiour
Pretty COOOL~
mekadon_old
:)
rimokonkunn2
:)
ryuu
<3
Faust
Why hasn't anyone pointed this out..

"DJ YOSHITAKA"
Sakura

Faust wrote:

Why hasn't anyone pointed this out..

"DJ YOSHITAKA"
^

This.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/11965 <-- correct artist should be DJ YOSHITAKA vs S.S.D
[Skin]
I'd suggest not using different shades of the same color on hitbursts, it gets confusing to see the difference between 100s and 300s in midplay.
Also that spinner bg http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/116760 My eyes X_X
Spinner circle IS TOO TRANSLUCENT, and it also doesnt have a dot at the center to spin at
[Nazi] Is the sliderball supposed to be going off one side off the sldier track? http://puu.sh/3wDP ?

[wmf's Taiko]
Hitsound volume is too low i'd recommend using Normal sampleset and adjust the volume from there.
01:01:333 (1) - I'd suggest making this spinner longer, otherwise i dont even see any point for the spinner to be there

[Another]
00:17:788 (2,3) - Unrankable! Can't tell which one's the slider unless the player has sneaking sliders
00:40:152 - Music hasnt changed why did slider speed go back up?
00:48:515 (4) - Note touching the hp bar, it's an ugly overlap.
01:03:788 (7) - Slider body cant be seen clearly due to hitburst

[Harvisp]
00:14:697 (1) - Note's approach circle is almost invisible because of the spinner background not having finished fading out
00:37:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I cant even hear the hitnormals of these notes, same for repeated part at the end.
01:30:333 (1) - Sliderbody cant be seen due to both hitbursts!

[Normal]
Kiai is unsnapped!
01:05:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - I cant hear these notes at all but: 01:08:515 (1,2,3,4,5,etc) These ones are fine, music hasnt changed at all, why?
End the last kiai?

[impossiblexu's Easy]
01:36:151 (3) - Might be too much for new players since these sliders feel slower.
01:49:242 (1) - Silence this spinner? or do a decrescendo?

I wonder how did this get bubbled in the first place, but i do know this map needs more mods =/
Edit: Fixing to bubble pop icon
ztrot
Get back to either sakura or myself for a repair for this bubble do not ask kioukiou for a rebubble.
Muya
yeahyeahyeahhh
Quick random mod while not bubbled?

General:
- Put these in your tags TROOPERS, iidx15

Another:
- I think AR8 is better for this game... OTL... AR9 fits really fast songs like 190 BPM+... with AR9 on low BPM song it makes the players feel rushed in the song.. uncomfortably... OTL

Harvisp:
- 01:46:333 (1,2,3) - I don't think this part sounds good soft.. This part of the song is very strong and i think normal would sound better!
- 01:47:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think this rhytmn is that good.. when I play the song I don't feel this at all, mainly the 2nd notes like 01:47:970 (2), 01:48:515 (4), 01:49:061 (6). I think it sounds better if you do it like the screen shot below. It's also this way in Another and makes sense >w<.


- 01:47:788 (1,2,3,4) - If you do the above, take off finished on 1,2,3. Keep finish on 4.
Natteke
aw, such good map got graved
Ibuki Suika

Natteke wrote:

aw, such good map got graved
. :(
Dustbox
need ranked ~_~
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