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Rohi - Kodoku Egoism [OsuMania]

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PDJoon-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 Juni 2016 at 17:38:21

Artist: Rohi
Title: Kodoku Egoism
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: Kagamine Rin Rinto Loneliness Egoism Vocaloid niconico
BPM: 184,9
Filesize: 5600kb
Play Time: 03:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. EZ - 4Key (1,41 stars, 567 notes)
  2. HD - 4Key (2,77 stars, 1538 notes)
  3. MX - 4Key (3,68 stars, 2130 notes)
  4. NM - 4Key (1,85 stars, 906 notes)
Download: Rohi - Kodoku Egoism
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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-孤独エゴイズム-
(Kodoku Egoism / Loneliness Egoism)


3rd beatmap - 1st full song beatmap
Hope you can enjoy the map!

READY FOR MODS!

CHANGELOG
26/03/16 Beatmap submitted
30/03/16 Applied hikikuman's mod - Added timing points from BladesofSteel
02/04/16 Applied deadbill's mod, metadata checked, also credit to bLooD raYNe for testing and correcting some parts
03/04/16 Applied Protastic101's mod also IRC
04/04/16 IRC mod from Protastic101, added kiai
13/04/16 Applied doykyoto's mod
14/04/16 Applied DoNotMess' mod
16/04/16 Added new Hitsound credit to LordRaika's set!
07/06/16 Revived and Updated a bit for MX
11/06/16 Deleted Taiko diff cause ugh it was an accident
27/06/16 Added Cipse's and Harukarin's mods, reduced sample sound to 60% for EZ-NM-HD, first BPM changed to 154,9 instead of 155

BladesofSteel
Hello timing check here.



This song has a wonky beat, since they tend to alternate between white ticks. Good luck!
Sies

Mod request dari PM

Column
1 | 2 | 3 | 4


EZ
00:37:225 (37225|0) - pindah ke 3
00:37:550 (37550|2) - ke2
00:39:496 (39496|0,39820|1) - ctrl H
00:42:739 - tambah note di 4
00:53:117 - ^4
01:37:874 (97874|2,98198|1) - ctrl G
01:39:171 (99171|0) - pindah ke 3
02:00:901 (120901|1,121225|2,121550|3,121874|2) - geser 1x ke kiri
02:02:198 (122198|0) - pindah ke 3
02:03:171 (123171|3) - ke2
02:04:469 (124469|1) - ke1
02:05:442 (125442|3,125766|1) - geser 1x ke kiri
02:51:171 (171171|1) - pindah ke 4
02:51:496 (171496|0,171496|3,171820|1,171820|2,172144|3,172144|0,172469|2,172469|1) - ctrl G
02:51:171 (171171|3) - tambah note di 4
02:53:117 (173117|3) - pindah ke 3
02:53:117 (173117|3) - tambah note di 2
dibagian 03:01:874 (181874|0,182198|1,182523|2,182847|3,183171|1) - itu kan sama kaya 02:56:685 (176685|3,176685|1,177009|2,177009|0,177334|3,177334|1,177658|2,177658|0,177982|3) - tapi mereka beda pattern. yg satu double yg satu single. disini terserah lu kalo gw bilang mending double ajaa biar konsisten.
03:07:063 (187063|3,187388|2,187712|1,188036|0) - ^
NM
00:21:982 - double. soalnya di ez double, parah kan di nm masa ngga :'
00:34:307 (34307|0) - pindah ke 3
00:36:901 (36901|2,37225|0) - ctrl H
00:37:550 (37550|3,37550|1,37874|2) - geser 1x ke kiri
00:38:847 (38847|3,39171|2) - ctrl H
00:42:739 - sampe 00:51:171 - jgn di kebanyakan jack disini, mending di geser" aja biar ga jadi jack soalnya ini masih normal. boleh ada jack tapi jgn kebanyakan ughaa.
01:02:523 (62523|0) - pindah ke 4, ln 01:01:874 (61874|0) - sampe 01:02:847 - . lebih enak di dimainin
01:03:171 - tambah note
01:13:063 (73063|1) - pindah ke 4, 01:12:252 (72252|1) - sampe 01:12:252 (72252|1) -
01:36:252 (96252|2,96577|0) - geser 1x ke kanan
01:39:496 (99496|1,99820|3) - ctrl H
01:40:144 (100144|0,100144|2,100469|1) - ^
01:40:793 (100793|2,101117|3) - ^
01:41:442 (101442|1,101766|2) - ^
01:42:090 (102090|1) - pindah ke 4
01:45:334 - sampe 01:53:928 - sama kaya yg tadi gw bilang. kurangin jacknya
hindari jack ini 02:01:225 (121225|2,121550|2,121874|2,122198|2) - , 02:01:874 (121874|2,121874|3,122198|0,122198|2) - ctrl H, terus 02:00:901 (120901|2) - pindah ke 4
02:02:523 (122523|1) - pindah ke 4
02:02:847 (122847|3) - ke2
02:03:171 (123171|3) - ke1
02:03:496 (123496|0) - ke4
02:03:820 (123820|3) - ke2
02:16:469 (136469|1) - pindah ke 1, 02:17:279 (137279|3) - pindah ke 3, terus dari 02:17:766 - sampe 02:25:063 - re arrange, kurangin jacknya
02:52:793 (172793|1) - pindah ke 4
02:52:955 (172955|3) - ke3
02:57:982 - tambah note
03:03:171 - ^
HD
00:10:171 (10171|0,10171|3,10657|2,10657|0,11090|2,11090|1) - sesuain sama garis yg di bawahnya
00:16:955 (16955|3) - pindah ke 1
00:21:982 - tambah note
00:22:225 - sampe 00:30:739 - itu gw ga ngerti ngikut nada yg mana, soalnya ga ngikut instrumen ataupun vokal. jadi kalo gw saranin coba di re arrange, mending ikutin suara instrumennya ajaa
00:39:820 (39820|2,39982|1) - geser 1x ke kanan
00:51:820 (51820|1,51901|2,51982|3,52063|2,52144|1,52225|2,52307|3,52388|2,52469|1,52550|2,52631|3,52712|2,52793|1) - kayanya terlalu susah deh. mending di bikin double ln ajaa gituu, kalo mau pake ini di mx ajaa
00:53:117 - tambah note
01:23:171 (83171|1,83171|2) - geser 1x ke kanan
01:30:009 - sampe 01:33:658 - juga sama kaya tadi yg nadanya masih gw bingung ikutin yg manaa '-'
01:54:415 - sampe 01:55:388 - sama kaya yg di 00:51:820 - tadi jugaa yaa
01:55:712 (115712|1,116036|1,116361|1,116685|1) - whuhu.. mending 01:56:361 (116361|1,116361|0,116685|3,116685|1) - ctrl H ajaa, 01:57:009 (117009|2) - ke 1
01:59:928 (119928|1) - pindah ke 4
02:00:901 - tambah note
02:03:496 (123496|1) - pindah ke 4
02:05:766 (125766|1,125928|0) - ctrl G
02:06:090 (126090|1) - pindah ke 1
02:06:090 - tambah note
02:10:955 (130955|2,130955|0,131117|1,131279|3,131279|2) - ctrl H
02:12:577 (132577|1) - pindah ke 4
02:22:469 (142469|3,142469|1,143117|0,143117|1) - delete. ghost note
02:25:063 (145063|2,145063|3) - ^
02:56:685 (176685|0) - pindah ke 2
03:02:198 (182198|2,182523|3) - ke 2
03:08:361 (188361|1) - delete
Topic Starter
PDJoon-

BladesofSteel wrote:

Hello timing check here.



This song has a wonky beat, since they tend to alternate between white ticks. Good luck!
Thank you for helping! :D

hikikuman wrote:


Mod request dari PM

Column
1 | 2 | 3 | 4


EZ
00:37:225 (37225|0) - pindah ke 3
00:37:550 (37550|2) - ke2
00:39:496 (39496|0,39820|1) - ctrl H
00:42:739 - tambah note di 4 Awalnya takut di EZ w kasi double, tp liat sekitarnya ternyata banyak double, ngapain w takut td :v
00:53:117 - ^4
01:37:874 (97874|2,98198|1) - ctrl G
01:39:171 (99171|0) - pindah ke 3
02:00:901 (120901|1,121225|2,121550|3,121874|2) - geser 1x ke kiri
02:02:198 (122198|0) - pindah ke 3
02:03:171 (123171|3) - ke2
02:04:469 (124469|1) - ke1
02:05:442 (125442|3,125766|1) - geser 1x ke kiri
02:51:171 (171171|1) - pindah ke 4
02:51:496 (171496|0,171496|3,171820|1,171820|2,172144|3,172144|0,172469|2,172469|1) - ctrl G
02:51:171 (171171|3) - tambah note di 4 hah..? masa double?
02:53:117 (173117|3) - pindah ke 3
02:53:117 (173117|3) - tambah note di 2
dibagian 03:01:874 (181874|0,182198|1,182523|2,182847|3,183171|1) - itu kan sama kaya 02:56:685 (176685|3,176685|1,177009|2,177009|0,177334|3,177334|1,177658|2,177658|0,177982|3) - tapi mereka beda pattern. yg satu double yg satu single. disini terserah lu kalo gw bilang mending double ajaa biar konsisten.
03:07:063 (187063|3,187388|2,187712|1,188036|0) - ^
NM
00:21:982 - double. soalnya di ez double, parah kan di nm masa ngga :' Br sadar maap :'
00:34:307 (34307|0) - pindah ke 3
00:36:901 (36901|2,37225|0) - ctrl H
00:37:550 (37550|3,37550|1,37874|2) - geser 1x ke kiri
00:38:847 (38847|3,39171|2) - ctrl H
00:42:739 - sampe 00:51:171 - jgn di kebanyakan jack disini, mending di geser" aja biar ga jadi jack soalnya ini masih normal. boleh ada jack tapi jgn kebanyakan ughaa.
01:02:523 (62523|0) - pindah ke 4, ln 01:01:874 (61874|0) - sampe 01:02:847 - . lebih enak di dimainin
01:03:171 - tambah note
01:13:063 (73063|1) - pindah ke 4, 01:12:252 (72252|1) - sampe 01:12:252 (72252|1) -
01:36:252 (96252|2,96577|0) - geser 1x ke kanan
01:39:496 (99496|1,99820|3) - ctrl H
01:40:144 (100144|0,100144|2,100469|1) - ^
01:40:793 (100793|2,101117|3) - ^
01:41:442 (101442|1,101766|2) - ^
01:42:090 (102090|1) - pindah ke 4 ngejack beb :'
01:45:334 - sampe 01:53:928 - sama kaya yg tadi gw bilang. kurangin jacknya
hindari jack ini 02:01:225 (121225|2,121550|2,121874|2,122198|2) - , 02:01:874 (121874|2,121874|3,122198|0,122198|2) - ctrl H, terus 02:00:901 (120901|2) - pindah ke 4
02:02:523 (122523|1) - pindah ke 4
02:02:847 (122847|3) - ke2
02:03:171 (123171|3) - ke1
02:03:496 (123496|0) - ke4
02:03:820 (123820|3) - ke2
02:16:469 (136469|1) - pindah ke 1, 02:17:279 (137279|3) - pindah ke 3, terus dari 02:17:766 - sampe 02:25:063 - re arrange, kurangin jacknya Jadi double smua, itu banyak ghostnya wkakak
02:52:793 (172793|1) - pindah ke 4
02:52:955 (172955|3) - ke3
02:57:982 - tambah note
03:03:171 - ^
HD
00:10:171 (10171|0,10171|3,10657|2,10657|0,11090|2,11090|1) - sesuain sama garis yg di bawahnya Masih dipikirin beb, ini masih bikin bingung part ini hehe nanti w benerin lagi timingnya
00:16:955 (16955|3) - pindah ke 1
00:21:982 - tambah note
00:22:225 - sampe 00:30:739 - itu gw ga ngerti ngikut nada yg mana, soalnya ga ngikut instrumen ataupun vokal. jadi kalo gw saranin coba di re arrange, mending ikutin suara instrumennya ajaa Ini sih w awalnya mau bikin HS sendiri tp klo memang bingungin w ganti~
00:39:820 (39820|2,39982|1) - geser 1x ke kanan
00:51:820 (51820|1,51901|2,51982|3,52063|2,52144|1,52225|2,52307|3,52388|2,52469|1,52550|2,52631|3,52712|2,52793|1) - kayanya terlalu susah deh. mending di bikin double ln ajaa gituu, kalo mau pake ini di mx ajaa
00:53:117 - tambah note
01:23:171 (83171|1,83171|2) - geser 1x ke kanan
01:30:009 - sampe 01:33:658 - juga sama kaya tadi yg nadanya masih gw bingung ikutin yg manaa '-' Sama beb ^^
01:54:415 - sampe 01:55:388 - sama kaya yg di 00:51:820 - tadi jugaa yaa
01:55:712 (115712|1,116036|1,116361|1,116685|1) - whuhu.. mending 01:56:361 (116361|1,116361|0,116685|3,116685|1) - ctrl H ajaa, 01:57:009 (117009|2) - ke 1
01:59:928 (119928|1) - pindah ke 4
02:00:901 - tambah note
02:03:496 (123496|1) - pindah ke 4
02:05:766 (125766|1,125928|0) - ctrl G
02:06:090 (126090|1) - pindah ke 1
02:06:090 - tambah note
02:10:955 (130955|2,130955|0,131117|1,131279|3,131279|2) - ctrl H
02:12:577 (132577|1) - pindah ke 4
02:22:469 (142469|3,142469|1,143117|0,143117|1) - delete. ghost note
02:25:063 (145063|2,145063|3) - ^
02:56:685 (176685|0) - pindah ke 2
03:02:198 (182198|2,182523|3) - ke 2
03:08:361 (188361|1) - delete
Fixed most of them beb
Maturnuwun beb moddingnyee :) :)
deadbill
hello o/

this is a M4M as i promised :)

Design.
uncheck the wiidescreen support

Metadata.
no problem i guess .-.

i will mod the MX diff

Suggestions.
no kiai time? .-.
00:53:117 - maybe add it here? so it will be at the same time as the preview point

okay tricky part at the intro =.=

add a timing point at 00:09:941 - and set it to 179 bpm
and then stack these notes into 1/3 beat snap divisor.

comparison after fixing the timing point:



^this fix should be applied to the other diffs

01:24:576 - this part you can add more layer using the percussion.

add a note at these parts:
01:24:576 -
01:24:900 -
01:25:224 -
01:25:548 -
01:25:873 -
01:26:197 -
01:26:521 -
01:26:846 -
01:27:170 -
01:27:494 -
01:27:819 -
01:28:143 -
01:28:467 -
01:28:792 -
01:29:116 -

also at 1/2 beat kicks 01:29:440 - 01:29:603 -

01:29:765 -
01:30:089 -
01:30:413 -
01:30:738 -
01:31:062 -
01:31:386 -
01:31:711 -
01:32:035 -
01:32:359 -
01:32:684 -
01:33:008 -

01:33:657 - 01:33:981 - 01:34:305 - why 3 notes when the rest are combination of single notes and LNs ?
you should revise this part, therefore the emphasizing will be balanced.

01:42:738 - this burst, maybe you can make it like this


or


it's up to you :)

01:45:332 - why u no refer to percussion? .-.

01:56:035 - you can add more layer!
like this



02:15:170 - same burst problem as 01:42:738 -

02:26:521 - add three notes emphasizing the closing sound to make it kool!
and delete the LN

02:26:846 - why u no refer to the piano instead ? .-.
like this


thats all from me o/
goodluck :)
Topic Starter
PDJoon-

deadbill wrote:

hello o/

this is a M4M as i promised :)

Design.
uncheck the wiidescreen support Eh..? I think I've unchecked it before..? Why is it activated again

Metadata.
no problem i guess .-.

i will mod the MX diff

Suggestions.
no kiai time? .-.
00:53:117 - maybe add it here? so it will be at the same time as the preview point Kiai added~ I've never acctually used kiai on my mania maps before XD

okay tricky part at the intro =.=

add a timing point at 00:09:941 - and set it to 179 bpm
and then stack these notes into 1/3 beat snap divisor. Much better now! still some of them are a bit too early..

comparison after fixing the timing point:



^this fix should be applied to the other diffs

01:24:576 - this part you can add more layer using the percussion.

add a note at these parts:
01:24:576 -
01:24:900 -
01:25:224 -
01:25:548 -
01:25:873 -
01:26:197 -
01:26:521 -
01:26:846 -
01:27:170 -
01:27:494 -
01:27:819 -
01:28:143 -
01:28:467 -
01:28:792 -
01:29:116 -

also at 1/2 beat kicks 01:29:440 - 01:29:603 -

01:29:765 -
01:30:089 -
01:30:413 -
01:30:738 -
01:31:062 -
01:31:386 -
01:31:711 -
01:32:035 -
01:32:359 -
01:32:684 -
01:33:008 - Done all of them

01:33:657 - 01:33:981 - 01:34:305 - why 3 notes when the rest are combination of single notes and LNs ?
you should revise this part, therefore the emphasizing will be balanced. Done, focused to the organ sound

01:42:738 - this burst, maybe you can make it like this Done~


or


it's up to you :)

01:45:332 - why u no refer to percussion? .-. I want to emphasize the "special characteristic" of the song which is on this part heheh will be considered though

01:56:035 - you can add more layer! Added
like this



02:15:170 - same burst problem as 01:42:738 - Done~

02:26:521 - add three notes emphasizing the closing sound to make it kool!
and delete the LN

02:26:846 - why u no refer to the piano instead ? .-. Why didn't I think of this before XD thankss
like this


thats all from me o/
goodluck :)
Big thanks for modding, that was absolutely helpful ^^
(M4M done~~)
Protastic101
I should stop neglecting my queue, but this song is <3

Column 1|2|3|4


General
Increase HP of EZ to 6.5. You're being too nice >:)
Increase HP of NM to 7.
HP and OD of HD make 7.5
Increase HP of MX to 8; I might bring OD down to 7.7 or 7.8.
You have some uninherited timing points that don't change tempo or time signature, so remove those. Also, this is barely noticeable, but I'm whiny and nitpicky, but since you switch to 179 bpm during the song, to ensure you don't have the scrolling speed slow down, add an inherited timing point on the same place where the tempo changes to 179. Then, put SV to 1.03. Or, just copy and paste this into the difficulty stuff
[TimingPoints]
820,324.324324324324,4,2,1,5,1,0
9941,335.195530726257,4,2,1,30,1,0
9941,-97.0873786407767,4,2,1,30,0,0
11280,324.324324324324,4,2,1,30,1,0
19063,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
19388,-100,4,2,1,22,0,0
19712,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
21658,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
21982,324.324324324324,4,2,1,30,1,0
84252,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
84576,324.324324324324,4,2,1,30,1,0
Increase the zoom in your editor. Every time I go into it, everything is scrunched together and it's like, on the timeline zoom button (that's just my opinion to make modding this map a little easier for people who testplay it a lot).
Aimod be like,
MX -> 00:11:279 (11279|1) - Not snapped.


HD
00:00:820 to 00:09:941 - Why are these LN's when in MX they're short notes? I mean, I guess you're trying to make the difficulties different, but this is kind of an inconsistent mapping thing.
00:17:361 - I think there's a note here, so add one. Actually, why don't you add doubles on all the beats in this section? I mean, they're like the same sound as the doubles on the 1st and 3rd beat.
00:21:982 to 00:31:063 - Pretty much same as above. Add doubles on every downbeat.
00:26:846 (26846|1,27009|2) - Make doubles to accent drums.
00:31:063 (31063|3,31387|0,31711|2,32036|1) - Add a note where these LN's begin to accent.
00:32:360 to 00:40:144 - I can't really describe what I'm trying to get across here, so have a picture for an explanation. Basically, there's a sound like that in the song (the 3 1/4 snaps, then pause for half a beat, and repeat kind of pattern), so I'm suggesting you try and map it.
00:40:144 (40144|3,40225|2,40306|1,40387|0,40468|1,40549|2,40630|3,40711|2,40792|1,40873|0,40954|1,41036|2,41117|3,41198|2,41279|1,41360|0) - You've already used this pattern, so maybe reverse it with control H or try a stair pattern. Or, you could do something like 12-43.
00:44:684 and 00:44:846 - Add a double here like you've been doing in this section for the heartbeat kind sound in the back.
00:47:279 and 00:47:441 - ^^
00:51:819 - Hmm, maybe add a 1/4 trill here for the drums? Or you could remove one of the LN's and do it that way.
01:02:846 - Add a double for accent.
01:09:657 (69657|3,69657|0,69819|2,69819|1,69981|0,69981|3) - This is me being nitpicky, but I'd make this 23-14 just like the previous pattern since it's the same. Like this is what I'm talking about
01:21:657 (81657|3,81738|2,81819|1,81900|0,81981|1,82063|2,82144|3,82225|2,82306|1,82387|0,82468|1,82549|2,82630|3,82711|2,82792|1,82873|0) - Try control H just to change this up a bit since this exact same pattern's been used once already.
02:10:630 (130630|1) - Move to 1 for aesthetics.
02:15:170 (135170|0,135251|1,135332|2,135413|3,135494|2,135575|1,135657|0,135738|1,135819|2,135900|3,135981|2,136062|1,136143|0,136224|1,136305|2,136386|3) - Try a stair pattern or something different for this.
02:17:440 (137440|3,137521|2,137603|3,137684|2) - Nasty trill but I love it XD Because you have a trill here, for symmetry, I'd recommend turning 02:16:792 (136792|2,136873|1,136954|0,137035|1) into a left handed trill, just like the above, but reversed.
02:23:278 (143278|2) - Move to 1, doesn't really look that nice imo, and it doesn't play too well either.
02:25:792 - Add note here for drum.
02:31:603 (151603|2,151711|3,151819|2) - Suggest moving one of these to the left hand for hand balance.
02:36:251 - Make double for accented drum.
02:57:981 to 03:07:062 - I have nothing against noodles, but these feel really forced, and honestly, I think short notes would have been a better option in this section. This is like the ending of the song, so there's a lot of instruments and sounds coming together, and I feel like these LN's are meant for a softer part like you have from 02:26:846 to 02:30:738.

I'd like to do a full mod, but I think it'd be easier to do an IRC, cause there's a lot of stuff I had questions on when I was modding HD. Sooo, PM me if you wanna do an IRC? If not, I'll probably mod the rest of the difficulties after I clear my mod queue.
deadbill
maap lupa malah pakai bahasa inggriss ;_;

wkwk sama2 gan, btw itu yg bagian intro lebih baik di cek lagi sama yang jago nge-cek BPM..
(kalau ga salah, ada kok mod queue khusus cari BPM)

oh, yang ane maksud "add more layer" itu, menambahkan satu layer notes yang merujuk pada instrumen lain.
Misalkan, ada satu bagian yang notes nya merujuk pada piano, itu dihitung satu layer (secara harfiah dalam istilah ane hehehe ;) )
nah ternyata ada perkusi juga, alhasil di bagian yang sama, di tambahkan lagi beberapa notes yang merujuk pada perkusi.
itu maksudnya menambahkan layer note :)

maaf kalau agak kurang jelas ya gan hehe :D
Topic Starter
PDJoon-

Protastic101 wrote:

I should stop neglecting my queue, but this song is <3 loll :) :) thanks for modding this~

Column 1|2|3|4


General
Increase HP of EZ to 6.5. You're being too nice >:)
Increase HP of NM to 7.
HP and OD of HD make 7.5
Increase HP of MX to 8; I might bring OD down to 7.7 or 7.8.
You have some uninherited timing points that don't change tempo or time signature, so remove those. These are to make it look neater. If I delete the timing points, it would look messy, since the song alternates white ticks twice Also, this is barely noticeable, but I'm whiny and nitpicky, but since you switch to 179 bpm during the song, to ensure you don't have the scrolling speed slow down, add an inherited timing point on the same place where the tempo changes to 179. Then, put SV to 1.03. Or, just copy and paste this into the difficulty stuff Added inherited. SV changed
[TimingPoints]
820,324.324324324324,4,2,1,5,1,0
9941,335.195530726257,4,2,1,30,1,0
9941,-97.0873786407767,4,2,1,30,0,0
11280,324.324324324324,4,2,1,30,1,0
19063,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
19388,-100,4,2,1,22,0,0
19712,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
21658,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
21982,324.324324324324,4,2,1,30,1,0
84252,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0
84576,324.324324324324,4,2,1,30,1,0
Increase the zoom in your editor. Every time I go into it, everything is scrunched together and it's like, on the timeline zoom button (that's just my opinion to make modding this map a little easier for people who testplay it a lot). Okay
Aimod be like,
MX -> 00:11:279 (11279|1) - Not snapped.I missed that one XD


HD
00:00:820 to 00:09:941 - Why are these LN's when in MX they're short notes? I mean, I guess you're trying to make the difficulties different, but this is kind of an inconsistent mapping thing. Changed to singles except the jack, I make em LNs
00:17:361 - I think there's a note here, so add one. Umm.. no..? Actually, why don't you add doubles on all the beats in this section? I mean, they're like the same sound as the doubles on the 1st and 3rd beat. Edited
00:21:982 to 00:31:063 - Pretty much same as above. Add doubles on every downbeat. Every doubles indicate the bass, Maybe I'm wrong to make it doubles.. I should make one of them LN
00:26:846 (26846|1,27009|2) - Make doubles to accent drums. This part emphasizes the harp (?) and bass
00:31:063 (31063|3,31387|0,31711|2,32036|1) - Add a note where these LN's begin to accent.
00:32:360 to 00:40:144 - I can't really describe what I'm trying to get across here, so have a picture for an explanation. Basically, there's a sound like that in the song (the 3 1/4 snaps, then pause for half a beat, and repeat kind of pattern), so I'm suggesting you try and map it. I made them 1/4 every 2 beats
00:40:144 (40144|3,40225|2,40306|1,40387|0,40468|1,40549|2,40630|3,40711|2,40792|1,40873|0,40954|1,41036|2,41117|3,41198|2,41279|1,41360|0) - You've already used this pattern, so maybe reverse it with control H or try a stair pattern. Or, you could do something like 12-43. ctrl H hehe
00:44:684 and 00:44:846 - Add a double here like you've been doing in this section for the heartbeat kind sound in the back.
00:47:279 and 00:47:441 - ^^ 3 persons have said this, so this time imma actually follow the backing sound instead the vocal~
00:51:819 - Hmm, maybe add a 1/4 trill here for the drums? Or you could remove one of the LN's and do it that way. Actually I had 1 LN then 1/4 streams together but my friend said it would be too difficult and use 2 LNs instead XD 1/4 streams is considerable doe
01:02:846 - Add a double for accent.
01:09:657 (69657|3,69657|0,69819|2,69819|1,69981|0,69981|3) - This is me being nitpicky, but I'd make this 23-14 just like the previous pattern since it's the same. Like this is what I'm talking about Pretty makes sense to me, changed
01:21:657 (81657|3,81738|2,81819|1,81900|0,81981|1,82063|2,82144|3,82225|2,82306|1,82387|0,82468|1,82549|2,82630|3,82711|2,82792|1,82873|0) - Try control H just to change this up a bit since this exact same pattern's been used once already. Changed to 1-2-4-3
02:10:630 (130630|1) - Move to 1 for aesthetics.
02:15:170 (135170|0,135251|1,135332|2,135413|3,135494|2,135575|1,135657|0,135738|1,135819|2,135900|3,135981|2,136062|1,136143|0,136224|1,136305|2,136386|3) - Try a stair pattern or something different for this.
02:17:440 (137440|3,137521|2,137603|3,137684|2) - Nasty trill but I love it XD Because you have a trill here, for symmetry, I'd recommend turning 02:16:792 (136792|2,136873|1,136954|0,137035|1) into a left handed trill, just like the above, but reversed.
02:23:278 (143278|2) - Move to 1, doesn't really look that nice imo, and it doesn't play too well either.
02:25:792 - Add note here for drum.
02:31:603 (151603|2,151711|3,151819|2) - Suggest moving one of these to the left hand for hand balance.
02:36:251 - Make double for accented drum.
02:57:981 to 03:07:062 - I have nothing against noodles, but these feel really forced, and honestly, I think short notes would have been a better option in this section. This is like the ending of the song, so there's a lot of instruments and sounds coming together, and I feel like these LN's are meant for a softer part like you have from 02:26:846 to 02:30:738. Right it's anti-climatic ._. Change also for MX or nah?

I'd like to do a full mod, but I think it'd be easier to do an IRC, cause there's a lot of stuff I had questions on when I was modding HD. Sooo, PM me if you wanna do an IRC? If not, I'll probably mod the rest of the difficulties after I clear my mod queue. YES PLEASE~
UPDATED!

deadbill wrote:

maap lupa malah pakai bahasa inggriss ;_;

wkwk sama2 gan, btw itu yg bagian intro lebih baik di cek lagi sama yang jago nge-cek BPM..
(kalau ga salah, ada kok mod queue khusus cari BPM)

oh, yang ane maksud "add more layer" itu, menambahkan satu layer notes yang merujuk pada instrumen lain.
Misalkan, ada satu bagian yang notes nya merujuk pada piano, itu dihitung satu layer (secara harfiah dalam istilah ane hehehe ;) )
nah ternyata ada perkusi juga, alhasil di bagian yang sama, di tambahkan lagi beberapa notes yang merujuk pada perkusi.
itu maksudnya menambahkan layer note :)

maaf kalau agak kurang jelas ya gan hehe :D
Wkakak gpp mas XD Btw itu udah w masukin ke queue cek BPM itu di atas sendiri BladesofSteel, tapi memang kurang di bagian itu sih, w antriin lagi aja deh wkakkak
Sip ntar w liatin lagi itu yg bagian layer"~ Thankss! :) :) Edit : new layer added
Protastic101
Interrupted EZ mod coming in, choo choo!

IRC For those who want to read it lol
2016-04-03 10:08 Protastic101: Hey, just got your pm lol
2016-04-03 10:08 Protastic101: I have to go to work in about half an hour, and you'll probably be asleep by the time I get home, so when would be a good time for you?
2016-04-03 10:09 lejel: hi~
2016-04-03 10:09 lejel: tomorrow?
2016-04-03 10:09 Protastic101: Hello~ :D
2016-04-03 10:09 Protastic101: What's your timezone?
2016-04-03 10:09 lejel: GMT+7
2016-04-03 10:10 Protastic101: ok, so is it 10pm where you're at then?
2016-04-03 10:10 lejel: you're GMT-7?
2016-04-03 10:10 lejel: yes it is
2016-04-03 10:10 Protastic101: Yeah.
2016-04-03 10:10 Protastic101: Ok, well I have like, ten - fifteen minutes if you wanna start some right now.
2016-04-03 10:10 lejel: well I usually haven't fell asleep until 1-2 AM
2016-04-03 10:10 lejel: soo
2016-04-03 10:11 lejel: you can do you job now, I'm afraid you're busy heheh
2016-04-03 10:11 Protastic101: Oh, I haven't left for work yet XD
2016-04-03 10:11 Protastic101: I'm waiting for my aunt to take me.
2016-04-03 10:11 lejel: ohh XD
2016-04-03 10:11 Protastic101: Yeah lol.
2016-04-03 10:11 lejel: are you free at night?
2016-04-03 10:12 Protastic101: Yeah, but I sleep around 10am your time.
2016-04-03 10:12 Protastic101: Ok, can I first go through some stuff with MX?
2016-04-03 10:13 Protastic101: 00:00:982 (982|1) - Actually wait, I don't understand this LN in HD
2016-04-03 10:13 lejel: I'll try to wake up before that time
2016-04-03 10:13 lejel: it's supposed to be a jack
2016-04-03 10:13 lejel: is it okay to jack that in HD?
2016-04-03 10:13 Protastic101: Yeah. I mean, it's just a 1/2 snap right?
2016-04-03 10:14 Protastic101: That's not bad at all since the bpm's only 185
2016-04-03 10:14 lejel: hmm good point
2016-04-03 10:14 lejel: alrighty then
2016-04-03 10:14 Protastic101: Yay lol
2016-04-03 10:15 lejel: donee XD
2016-04-03 10:15 Protastic101: 00:03:576 (3576|3,3738|2,3901|3) - Still in HD, I would move these to lane 3
2016-04-03 10:15 Protastic101: It's the same sound as that LN you changed
2016-04-03 10:15 Protastic101: 00:04:063 (4063|2) - Then move this to 4 if you wanna follow pitch relevancy
2016-04-03 10:15 lejel: so jack them too?
2016-04-03 10:15 Protastic101: Yeah
2016-04-03 10:15 Protastic101: Apply it to MX too
2016-04-03 10:16 lejel: kk
2016-04-03 10:16 Protastic101: Also, move this to 1 to make it a jack
2016-04-03 10:16 Protastic101: Same pitch as the previous sound
2016-04-03 10:17 lejel: which one?
2016-04-03 10:17 Protastic101: 00:04:711 (4711|3) Oops
2016-04-03 10:17 Protastic101: Lol, forgot to control v
2016-04-03 10:17 Protastic101: 00:06:171 (6171|1) - Also, the same stuff I said about the first LN should be applied here
2016-04-03 10:17 lejel: lol np
2016-04-03 10:17 lejel: so I jack these00:03:738 (3738|3,3901|3,4063|3) -
2016-04-03 10:18 Protastic101: Yeah.
2016-04-03 10:18 Protastic101: Wait, not 00:04:063 (4063|2)
2016-04-03 10:19 Protastic101: instead, jack it with this 00:03:576 (3576|3)
2016-04-03 10:19 lejel: alright done to both part
2016-04-03 10:19 Protastic101: Ok
2016-04-03 10:19 Protastic101: Also, you jack this one too? 00:06:171 (6171|1)
2016-04-03 10:20 lejel: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4856355
2016-04-03 10:20 lejel: yess~
2016-04-03 10:20 Protastic101: Beautiful XD
2016-04-03 10:20 Protastic101: 00:08:603 - At this part, there's like a whoosh sound, so if you wanna add an LN here, that might be an idea
2016-04-03 10:20 Protastic101: You'd have to shuffle some notes around to make it fit though
2016-04-03 10:21 lejel: ahh that one I've thought about that one
2016-04-03 10:21 lejel: but there would be only 2 columns available for the singles ._.
2016-04-03 10:21 Protastic101: True. I'd probably keep it out in HD, but maybe add it to MX. There are lots of songs that use two LN's at once and leave only 2 columns.
2016-04-03 10:22 lejel: alrighty I'll add in MX~
2016-04-03 10:23 Protastic101: Also, question, 00:10:164 (10164|0,10164|3,10387|3,10387|2,10611|2,10611|0,10834|1,10834|3,11058|1,11058|2,11280|3,11280|0) - is any of that snapped?
2016-04-03 10:23 Protastic101: It's in the measure where the bpm becomes 179
2016-04-03 10:24 lejel: 1/3 snapping..
2016-04-03 10:24 lejel: ?
2016-04-03 10:24 Protastic101: Psh, I totally knew that
2016-04-03 10:24 Protastic101: XD
2016-04-03 10:24 lejel: haha XD
2016-04-03 10:25 Protastic101: 00:26:846 (26846|1,27009|2) - Hm, right here, I think you could either make these jumps or jack them
2016-04-03 10:26 Protastic101: they're the same sound (that bass drum sound thing lol)
2016-04-03 10:26 lejel: ohh that follow the harp thingy
2016-04-03 10:26 Protastic101: Oh yeah, you said that in your response
2016-04-03 10:27 lejel: but making them jacks looks better soo jacksss~~
2016-04-03 10:27 Protastic101: Lol.
2016-04-03 10:27 Protastic101: Jack galore XD
2016-04-03 10:28 lejel: I feel not persistent about 01:24:252 (84252|1,84576|3,84576|0,84738|2,84900|1,85062|0,85224|1,85386|2,85548|0,85711|2,85873|3,86035|2,86197|1,86359|0,86521|2,86684|1,86846|3,87008|1,87170|0,87332|1,87494|2,87657|3,87819|2,87981|1,88143|0,88305|3,88467|1,88630|3,88792|2,88954|0,89116|3,89278|2,89440|1,89603|0,89765|2,89927|1,90089|0,90251|3,90413|0,90576|3,90738|2,90900|1,91062|3,91224|2,91386|1,91548|0,91711|2,91873|1,92035|0,92197|1,92359|3,925... (message truncated)
2016-04-03 10:28 lejel: oh why did I copy all of them -_-
2016-04-03 10:28 Protastic101: XD lol
2016-04-03 10:28 lejel: I'll make them the same as the first part ._.
2016-04-03 10:29 Protastic101: No, I think they're fine as is
2016-04-03 10:29 Protastic101: when you say first part, do you mean make some of the notes jacks?
2016-04-03 10:29 lejel: noo
2016-04-03 10:29 lejel: remove the LNs and change with doubles
2016-04-03 10:30 Protastic101: Well, each LN should only last one beat if that helps
2016-04-03 10:30 Protastic101: I think that's more your decision on how you want to map this section.
2016-04-03 10:30 lejel: yep like MX
2016-04-03 10:30 Protastic101: Alright, I have to go to work now.
2016-04-03 10:30 lejel: the bass also only last for 1 beat
2016-04-03 10:30 Protastic101: I'll hopefully be on around 9 - 10.
2016-04-03 10:30 lejel: ohh okayy
2016-04-03 10:31 lejel: thanks a lot ^^
2016-04-03 10:31 lejel: mutual?
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: Yeah, that's what i meant about the LN's lasting 1 beat
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: Yeah sure'
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: I have friends now XD
2016-04-03 10:31 lejel: arigatouuu
2016-04-03 10:31 lejel: and goodluck on you job~
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: I'm a waitress lol
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: But thanks
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: Bye!
2016-04-03 10:31 lejel: byee~
2016-04-03 21:27 Protastic101: *pokes* Do you want to moddddddd
2016-04-03 21:27 lejel: yesss XD
2016-04-03 21:27 Protastic101: Lol :D
2016-04-03 21:27 lejel: i saw you were playing soo i didn't want to disturb heheh
2016-04-03 21:28 Protastic101: I saw you were playing something too, so I was like, nahhh, better wait XD
2016-04-03 21:28 Protastic101: I literally just finished a rant mod so
2016-04-03 21:28 lejel: rant??
2016-04-03 21:28 Protastic101: Yeahhh, there was this map on my queue and it made me want to shoot myself because of how against beginners it was
2016-04-03 21:29 Protastic101: Like, no love for them :(
2016-04-03 21:29 Protastic101: Hey, question on HD, why are 01:33:981 (93981|0,94305|2) overlapping?
2016-04-03 21:29 lejel: beginner maps?? ._.
2016-04-03 21:30 Protastic101: The map's lowest difficulty was 2.5* and has 1/4 streams and 1/8 bursts
2016-04-03 21:30 lejel: oopss i dragged it way too long XD
2016-04-03 21:30 lejel: really?
2016-04-03 21:30 Protastic101: I was like, "Noooo, you can't make that your easiest diff!"
2016-04-03 21:30 lejel: man that's.. extreme XD
2016-04-03 21:30 Protastic101: Ik, and it was a tame song too.
2016-04-03 21:31 lejel: so it didn't fit the song too?
2016-04-03 21:31 Protastic101: Hey, so from 01:34:954 to 01:42:738 - It's a little different from the beginning part because it doesn't have any of the 1/4 snaps before the doubles, and I think that's kind of a consistency thing
2016-04-03 21:32 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/433276 This map
2016-04-03 21:33 Protastic101: 01:45:008 (105008|1) - Also, why don't you use a 1/4 burst here instead of an LN?
2016-04-03 21:33 lejel: oh yeah you told me about the first part and i forgot to change the second one, my bad ._.
2016-04-03 21:33 Protastic101: It's cool
2016-04-03 21:34 lejel: about that LN, once again I was afraid to XD
2016-04-03 21:34 lejel: maybe I should be more fearless in mapping..
2016-04-03 21:34 Protastic101: YES, BECOME THE BRAVEST MAPPER THERE EVER IS
2016-04-03 21:34 Protastic101: BECOME THE NEXT IJINJIN
2016-04-03 21:34 Protastic101: XD
2016-04-03 21:35 Protastic101: People who use 1/16 bursts in their maps. Those are the true heroes lol
2016-04-03 21:35 lejel: OOO
2016-04-03 21:35 lejel: ALRIGHT NO MERCY ON THE NEXT MAP
2016-04-03 21:35 You: *releases next map*
2016-04-03 21:35 Me: *looks at it*
2016-04-03 21:35 Protastic101: "Oh, look, 1/16 streams on 400 bpm. Let's DT it.
2016-04-03 21:36 Protastic101: XD
2016-04-03 21:36 Protastic101: I would totally mod that.
2016-04-03 21:36 Protastic101: 01:52:467 (112467|1,112792|3) - Right here, I'm like eh on this, but why'd you stop the doubles here?
2016-04-03 21:36 lejel: *then uses NC + HD*
2016-04-03 21:36 Protastic101: If you make 01:52:467 (112467|1) this an LN, then make 01:52:792 (112792|3) an LN too because the sound is also sustained
2016-04-03 21:37 Protastic101: NC + HD is nothing.
2016-04-03 21:37 lejel: oh that part is also changed already, but not updated
2016-04-03 21:37 Protastic101: NC + HR + Flashlight is where it's at.
2016-04-03 21:37 Protastic101: Ohhhh, ok.
2016-04-03 21:37 Protastic101: 01:54:413 (114413|0,114413|1) - Did I mention anything about a 1/4 burst here?
2016-04-03 21:38 lejel: FL.. I've never ever been success using that mod
2016-04-03 21:38 lejel: yess
2016-04-03 21:38 lejel: in the forum
2016-04-03 21:38 Protastic101: I tried FL on Tsukiyo or whatever the map's called on the NM diff and I got a B on it lol. Flashlight's too difficult for me :(
2016-04-03 21:40 lejel: tsukizukiyo? XD
2016-04-03 21:40 Protastic101: Yeah, that one lol
2016-04-03 21:40 Protastic101: RIP my ability to remember japanese names/words
2016-04-03 21:40 Protastic101: Ok, so HD's chill imo
2016-04-03 21:40 Protastic101: I'm gonna look at MX now
2016-04-03 21:40 lejel: yeah since you're in USA XD
2016-04-03 21:41 Protastic101: #AmericanDream
2016-04-03 21:41 Protastic101: XD
2016-04-03 21:41 Protastic101: I'm not even white though lol
2016-04-03 21:41 Protastic101: I'm still Asian since my Mom's Chinese.
2016-04-03 21:41 lejel: #californiadream
2016-04-03 21:41 lejel: ohh still half asian :3
2016-04-03 21:41 Protastic101: Oh no, I live in Kansas where the weather is bipolar year round XD
2016-04-03 21:42 lejel: canada's weather is still worse doe XD
2016-04-03 21:43 Protastic101: Poor Canada lol.
2016-04-03 21:43 lejel: ohhh in HD
2016-04-03 21:44 Protastic101: 00:11:280 to 00:19:063 - So, there's 2 1/4 notes before each double; I think you should add them.
2016-04-03 21:44 lejel: 00:59:279 (59279|2) until 00:59:279 (59279|2,60900|3) - should be the same? the lyrics's the same doe in HD
2016-04-03 21:44 Protastic101: Nah, I like it the way it is now
2016-04-03 21:45 lejel: alrightyy
2016-04-03 21:45 lejel: oh in MX
2016-04-03 21:45 lejel: the 1/4 notes follows the melody
2016-04-03 21:45 Protastic101: Wait what
2016-04-03 21:45 Protastic101: Oh ok
2016-04-03 21:45 lejel: but imma try adding them
2016-04-03 21:46 Protastic101: 01:08:684 to 01:09:009 - This is a consistency thing, but you've got an LN here in HD, but the LN is 01:09:009 (69009|3) in MX
2016-04-03 21:47 lejel: how do you even remember the HD part, I've already forgotten myself T_T
2016-04-03 21:47 Protastic101: 01:52:467 (112467|2,112467|0) - Remove one of these LN's and make 01:52:792 (112792|1) - an LN, last one beat
2016-04-03 21:48 Protastic101: I remember the HD part because I've test played it so much lol
2016-04-03 21:48 Protastic101: Also, reference toollll
2016-04-03 21:48 lejel: so the LN there is only to make variation XD 01:09:009
2016-04-03 21:48 lejel: *I'm done with copying the time*
2016-04-03 21:49 Protastic101: Lol
2016-04-03 21:49 Protastic101: I hate copying only time cause then I have to click around my screen to make sure I don't copy some random note and have a confused mapper be like, "What are you talking about, why add another note, this is perfect."
2016-04-03 21:49 lejel: why is it so hard to copy the time..
2016-04-03 21:50 Protastic101: Life is such a struggle in the editor lol
2016-04-03 21:50 lejel: #pray4editor
2016-04-03 21:50 Protastic101: 01:55:386 to 02:15:170 - Add 2 1/4 snaps before each triple.
2016-04-03 21:50 Protastic101: Pray for editor and the Osu Standard god answers you instead lol
2016-04-03 21:51 lejel: ehh why 1/4 snaps??
2016-04-03 21:52 Protastic101: 02:18:089 to 02:18:738 - It's a bit strange to play imo
2016-04-03 21:52 lejel: lol XD
2016-04-03 21:52 Protastic101: Cause there's that shakey sound in the background. I don't know how to describe it, but it's like the same sound in the beginning
2016-04-03 21:52 Protastic101: Like, a hihat kind of thing I guess?
2016-04-03 21:52 Protastic101: But it plays in 1/4 2 notes before each beat.
2016-04-03 21:53 lejel: ohh hihat
2016-04-03 21:53 Protastic101: Yeah, I knew I should have stayed in middle school percussion lol
2016-04-03 21:53 Protastic101: My mom was like, "Nooo, orchestra is better, you don't need to know drums!" 3 years later and I'm like, "Add a note here for that weird bass kicky thing."
2016-04-03 21:53 lejel: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4860429
2016-04-03 21:54 lejel: ahahah XD
2016-04-03 21:54 Protastic101: http://puu.sh/o5k14.jpg I did something like these
2016-04-03 21:54 Protastic101: this*
2016-04-03 21:54 Protastic101: Let me try yours though
2016-04-03 21:54 lejel: I love music but jeez it's expensive to take a music course
2016-04-03 21:54 Protastic101: You don't have them for free in school?
2016-04-03 21:55 lejel: I had in the primary school, but there aren't music extracullicular since junior high school..
2016-04-03 21:55 Protastic101: Yeah, I liked the way you arranged it more.
2016-04-03 21:56 Protastic101: Man, that sucks.
2016-04-03 21:56 Protastic101: I love playing music.
2016-04-03 21:56 lejel: there were singing doe.. but i sound like a dying frog
2016-04-03 21:56 Protastic101: Lol, oh god, I did Choir in elementary and it was horrid
2016-04-03 21:57 Protastic101: I was like, the only tenor singer in my grade, and everyone else was a soprano, so I was all alone lol
2016-04-03 21:57 Protastic101: 02:26:846 to 02:30:738 - You could add some LN's here
2016-04-03 21:58 lejel: whoa tenor? that's fantastic XD
2016-04-03 21:58 Protastic101: It sounds like the first LN's are two beats each, the third is a full measure
2016-04-03 21:58 Protastic101: Then the next two LN's after that third one are two beats
2016-04-03 21:59 Protastic101: I know, I was like, super proud of myself XD
2016-04-03 22:00 lejel: alrighty LNs added~
2016-04-03 22:00 lejel: I can't even sing properly -,-
2016-04-03 22:00 Protastic101: Inb4 you're like some super famous Indonesian pop/rock star famous only in Asia XD
2016-04-03 22:01 Protastic101: and I'm some dumb American like, "I'm so culturally diverse, I know an Indonesian guy."
2016-04-03 22:01 Protastic101: XD Jk
2016-04-03 22:01 Protastic101: 02:56:684 - You should add a 1/4 burst here and end where the first LN begins
2016-04-03 22:02 lejel: inb4??
2016-04-03 22:02 Protastic101: "inb4 refers to a user posting a reply to a message/topic "before" another user posts an obvious response."
2016-04-03 22:02 lejel: that story doe omg XD
2016-04-03 22:03 Protastic101: I like to think I've accidentally met someone famous before XD
2016-04-03 22:04 Protastic101: 02:57:981 (177981|3,177981|2,178305|1,178630|0,178954|1,179116|0,179278|1,179603|0,179927|3,180251|0,180575|3,180900|1,181224|0,181548|1) - Ok, so all these LN's are covering up the drum stuff in the background
2016-04-03 22:04 Protastic101: My suggestion would to be slightly nerf them (Like, have two lanes available) and add some doubles where the drum is accented.
2016-04-03 22:04 lejel: me eitherrr XD
2016-04-03 22:04 lejel: burst added
2016-04-03 22:04 Protastic101: But I'm bad at LN's, so I don't know how you would go about doing that.
2016-04-03 22:05 Protastic101: Sooo, that's like all I have to say about MX.
2016-04-03 22:05 Protastic101: I'm gonna testplay NM, so give me a minute or so
2016-04-03 22:06 lejel: let's give it a shot doe about the LNs
2016-04-03 22:06 lejel: okay
2016-04-03 22:06 Protastic101: Yeah, just my thoughts on the LN's. Someone's probably going to mod your map and be like, "Why'd you change it?" and you'll be like, "Some idiot told me to XD"
2016-04-03 22:07 Protastic101: 00:02:117 - So, I think you should add an LN here since the pitch changes. It'd end at 00:03:414.
2016-04-03 22:07 Protastic101: 00:03:414
2016-04-03 22:07 Protastic101: 00:03:414 -
2016-04-03 22:07 lejel: oh Lord.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4860462
2016-04-03 22:07 Protastic101: Oh my god, I hate times
2016-04-03 22:08 Protastic101: Oh dear, abort, abort!
2016-04-03 22:08 Protastic101: XD
2016-04-03 22:08 lejel: but it sounds better doe XD
2016-04-03 22:08 Protastic101: Up to you in the end
2016-04-03 22:08 lejel: le me try and see if someone's gonna complain the jacks
2016-04-03 22:09 Protastic101: 00:00:820 (820|2) - Also, if you add that LN I mentioned in NM, I'd shorten this to end at 00:02:117 -
2016-04-03 22:09 Protastic101: There's someone who will complain about at least one thing in every map :D
2016-04-03 22:09 lejel: LN changed~
2016-04-03 22:09 Protastic101: Me, I always complain about people's OD and HP values cause people are either too nice or too harsh
2016-04-03 22:10 Protastic101: Like, "You're OD and HP values for EZ are 10 for both, wtffffff."
2016-04-03 22:10 Protastic101: Then the response is always like, "YOU'RE BLOCKING MY CREATIVITY!"
2016-04-03 22:10 Protastic101: 00:07:306 - Oh, did you add an LN here too? It's the same stuff I mentioned above
2016-04-03 22:11 lejel: Truee a lot people usually complain jacks and bursts.. I mean have you seen bang riot XD
2016-04-03 22:11 Protastic101: bangin' burst?
2016-04-03 22:11 lejel: I usually just obey the mods about OD and HP cause.. I don't really know bout that stuffs
2016-04-03 22:11 lejel: yepp
2016-04-03 22:11 Protastic101: Oh dear, first time I ever played that map, I was like, "What is thisssss"
2016-04-03 22:11 lejel: RIP my ability in remembering english names
2016-04-03 22:12 Protastic101: Lol.
2016-04-03 22:12 Protastic101: I have found your weakness!
2016-04-03 22:12 lejel: yes add in 00:07:306
2016-04-03 22:12 lejel: yeahh cause I usually play japanese ones XD
2016-04-03 22:12 lejel: *added
2016-04-03 22:13 Protastic101: There's so many japanese songs, and the names are normally like, 20 letters long XD
2016-04-03 22:13 lejel: yeah my new map is :|
2016-04-03 22:13 lejel: upcoming map doe
2016-04-03 22:13 lejel: still WIP
2016-04-03 22:13 Protastic101: 00:26:846 (26846|3,27009|2,27171|0) - Hm, make these three jacks?
2016-04-03 22:13 Protastic101: Same drum sound
2016-04-03 22:14 Protastic101: What are you mapping now?
2016-04-03 22:14 lejel: that parts doesn't follow drum :3
2016-04-03 22:14 lejel: that "harp" thingy again
2016-04-03 22:14 lejel: i forgot the title.. it's too long
2016-04-03 22:14 Protastic101: Lol
2016-04-03 22:15 Protastic101: 00:40:144 - Add 1/2 notes throughout the duration of the LN?
2016-04-03 22:15 lejel: hitotsu no chikai yo, eien no uta to nare
2016-04-03 22:15 Protastic101: It's to represent the burst
2016-04-03 22:15 lejel: that's the title
2016-04-03 22:15 Protastic101: Long name O.O
2016-04-03 22:16 Protastic101: 00:47:927 - Add a double for the finish sound?
2016-04-03 22:16 Protastic101: 00:51:819 - Add for same reason as above
2016-04-03 22:16 lejel: yep that's why I can't remember it till now --
2016-04-03 22:17 Protastic101: Lol
2016-04-03 22:17 lejel: done~
2016-04-03 22:17 Protastic101: 01:42:738 (102738|0) - Same as a few lines above, add 1/2 notes for the duration of the LN.
2016-04-03 22:18 lejel: okay
2016-04-03 22:19 Protastic101: Okay, done with NM
2016-04-03 22:19 Protastic101: Time for EZ!
2016-04-03 22:20 Protastic101: 00:07:955 (7955|2) - I notice that in the other two instances, this note was above where the LN ended, so I'd move this to 2.
2016-04-03 22:21 lejel: oh yeahh misplaced that one
2016-04-03 22:21 lejel: how could you notice that ><
2016-04-03 22:21 Protastic101: The power of being nitpickyyy
2016-04-03 22:21 Protastic101: I am every mappers worst nightmare...
2016-04-03 22:21 Protastic101: The modder who tears the whole map apart XD
2016-04-03 22:22 Protastic101: But I'm still not as good as Abraxos
2016-04-03 22:22 lejel: nah your mod is fun XD
2016-04-03 22:22 Protastic101: Lol, I think my first good mod was on your Ignis Fatuus one lol
2016-04-03 22:22 Protastic101: Ok, I have to go now
2016-04-03 22:23 Protastic101: I'll probably finish the rest of EZ in a modpost tomorrow or Wednesday
2016-04-03 22:23 lejel: oh abraxos.. he's real good but he asked my mod i was like wtf my mod would be trash
2016-04-03 22:23 lejel: ohh okayy
2016-04-03 22:23 lejel: it's late there
2016-04-03 22:23 Protastic101: There's not going to be a lot though cause EZ's pretty good
2016-04-03 22:23 lejel: byee "3
2016-04-03 22:23 Protastic101: Nah, it's 10:30, but it's a school night.
2016-04-03 22:23 Protastic101: Bai
2016-04-03 22:23 lejel: alrightyy

EZ
00:08:603 (8603|1) - Move to 1 or 4 because so far, all your LN's have been in lane 2 or 3.
00:09:941 to 00:11:281 - Recommend doing the same thing in NM in this measure, which is add the notes on the 1/3 snaps to represent the drums.
00:31:063 (31063|1,31387|2,31711|3) - Suggest making these notes doubles to accent the vocals.
00:31:063 - Also, there's a whoosh sound throughout this whole measure, so you could add an LN in 1 and move this LN 00:32:036 (32036|2) to 3. If accepted, just move 00:32:360 (32360|1,32360|0) to 34.
00:52:792 (52792|2) - Something I didn't catch over IRC, in EZ, this is an LN, but in NM it's just a short note, so consistency issue? I'd probably keep the LN cause it looks nice though.
02:22:954 to 02:24:251 - Kind of an unneeded silence. Try adding notes on each beat?
02:57:981 to 03:01:873 and 03:03:170 to 03:07:062 - These LN's break the flow, so I would stick with what you were already doing before which was following the basic drum line.
03:08:197 - Add note here for accent (also a drum sound).

Why do I only get 1 kudosu for modding all difficultiessss *cries*
No kudosu.
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Protastic101 wrote:

Interrupted EZ mod coming in, choo choo!

IRC For those who want to read it lol
2016-04-03 10:08 Protastic101: Hey, just got your pm lol
2016-04-03 10:08 Protastic101: I have to go to work in about half an hour, and you'll probably be asleep by the time I get home, so when would be a good time for you?
2016-04-03 10:09 lejel: hi~
2016-04-03 10:09 lejel: tomorrow?
2016-04-03 10:09 Protastic101: Hello~ :D
2016-04-03 10:09 Protastic101: What's your timezone?
2016-04-03 10:09 lejel: GMT+7
2016-04-03 10:10 Protastic101: ok, so is it 10pm where you're at then?
2016-04-03 10:10 lejel: you're GMT-7?
2016-04-03 10:10 lejel: yes it is
2016-04-03 10:10 Protastic101: Yeah.
2016-04-03 10:10 Protastic101: Ok, well I have like, ten - fifteen minutes if you wanna start some right now.
2016-04-03 10:10 lejel: well I usually haven't fell asleep until 1-2 AM
2016-04-03 10:10 lejel: soo
2016-04-03 10:11 lejel: you can do you job now, I'm afraid you're busy heheh
2016-04-03 10:11 Protastic101: Oh, I haven't left for work yet XD
2016-04-03 10:11 Protastic101: I'm waiting for my aunt to take me.
2016-04-03 10:11 lejel: ohh XD
2016-04-03 10:11 Protastic101: Yeah lol.
2016-04-03 10:11 lejel: are you free at night?
2016-04-03 10:12 Protastic101: Yeah, but I sleep around 10am your time.
2016-04-03 10:12 Protastic101: Ok, can I first go through some stuff with MX?
2016-04-03 10:13 Protastic101: 00:00:982 (982|1) - Actually wait, I don't understand this LN in HD
2016-04-03 10:13 lejel: I'll try to wake up before that time
2016-04-03 10:13 lejel: it's supposed to be a jack
2016-04-03 10:13 lejel: is it okay to jack that in HD?
2016-04-03 10:13 Protastic101: Yeah. I mean, it's just a 1/2 snap right?
2016-04-03 10:14 Protastic101: That's not bad at all since the bpm's only 185
2016-04-03 10:14 lejel: hmm good point
2016-04-03 10:14 lejel: alrighty then
2016-04-03 10:14 Protastic101: Yay lol
2016-04-03 10:15 lejel: donee XD
2016-04-03 10:15 Protastic101: 00:03:576 (3576|3,3738|2,3901|3) - Still in HD, I would move these to lane 3
2016-04-03 10:15 Protastic101: It's the same sound as that LN you changed
2016-04-03 10:15 Protastic101: 00:04:063 (4063|2) - Then move this to 4 if you wanna follow pitch relevancy
2016-04-03 10:15 lejel: so jack them too?
2016-04-03 10:15 Protastic101: Yeah
2016-04-03 10:15 Protastic101: Apply it to MX too
2016-04-03 10:16 lejel: kk
2016-04-03 10:16 Protastic101: Also, move this to 1 to make it a jack
2016-04-03 10:16 Protastic101: Same pitch as the previous sound
2016-04-03 10:17 lejel: which one?
2016-04-03 10:17 Protastic101: 00:04:711 (4711|3) Oops
2016-04-03 10:17 Protastic101: Lol, forgot to control v
2016-04-03 10:17 Protastic101: 00:06:171 (6171|1) - Also, the same stuff I said about the first LN should be applied here
2016-04-03 10:17 lejel: lol np
2016-04-03 10:17 lejel: so I jack these00:03:738 (3738|3,3901|3,4063|3) -
2016-04-03 10:18 Protastic101: Yeah.
2016-04-03 10:18 Protastic101: Wait, not 00:04:063 (4063|2)
2016-04-03 10:19 Protastic101: instead, jack it with this 00:03:576 (3576|3)
2016-04-03 10:19 lejel: alright done to both part
2016-04-03 10:19 Protastic101: Ok
2016-04-03 10:19 Protastic101: Also, you jack this one too? 00:06:171 (6171|1)
2016-04-03 10:20 lejel: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4856355
2016-04-03 10:20 lejel: yess~
2016-04-03 10:20 Protastic101: Beautiful XD
2016-04-03 10:20 Protastic101: 00:08:603 - At this part, there's like a whoosh sound, so if you wanna add an LN here, that might be an idea
2016-04-03 10:20 Protastic101: You'd have to shuffle some notes around to make it fit though
2016-04-03 10:21 lejel: ahh that one I've thought about that one
2016-04-03 10:21 lejel: but there would be only 2 columns available for the singles ._.
2016-04-03 10:21 Protastic101: True. I'd probably keep it out in HD, but maybe add it to MX. There are lots of songs that use two LN's at once and leave only 2 columns.
2016-04-03 10:22 lejel: alrighty I'll add in MX~
2016-04-03 10:23 Protastic101: Also, question, 00:10:164 (10164|0,10164|3,10387|3,10387|2,10611|2,10611|0,10834|1,10834|3,11058|1,11058|2,11280|3,11280|0) - is any of that snapped?
2016-04-03 10:23 Protastic101: It's in the measure where the bpm becomes 179
2016-04-03 10:24 lejel: 1/3 snapping..
2016-04-03 10:24 lejel: ?
2016-04-03 10:24 Protastic101: Psh, I totally knew that
2016-04-03 10:24 Protastic101: XD
2016-04-03 10:24 lejel: haha XD
2016-04-03 10:25 Protastic101: 00:26:846 (26846|1,27009|2) - Hm, right here, I think you could either make these jumps or jack them
2016-04-03 10:26 Protastic101: they're the same sound (that bass drum sound thing lol)
2016-04-03 10:26 lejel: ohh that follow the harp thingy
2016-04-03 10:26 Protastic101: Oh yeah, you said that in your response
2016-04-03 10:27 lejel: but making them jacks looks better soo jacksss~~
2016-04-03 10:27 Protastic101: Lol.
2016-04-03 10:27 Protastic101: Jack galore XD
2016-04-03 10:28 lejel: I feel not persistent about 01:24:252 (84252|1,84576|3,84576|0,84738|2,84900|1,85062|0,85224|1,85386|2,85548|0,85711|2,85873|3,86035|2,86197|1,86359|0,86521|2,86684|1,86846|3,87008|1,87170|0,87332|1,87494|2,87657|3,87819|2,87981|1,88143|0,88305|3,88467|1,88630|3,88792|2,88954|0,89116|3,89278|2,89440|1,89603|0,89765|2,89927|1,90089|0,90251|3,90413|0,90576|3,90738|2,90900|1,91062|3,91224|2,91386|1,91548|0,91711|2,91873|1,92035|0,92197|1,92359|3,925... (message truncated)
2016-04-03 10:28 lejel: oh why did I copy all of them -_-
2016-04-03 10:28 Protastic101: XD lol
2016-04-03 10:28 lejel: I'll make them the same as the first part ._.
2016-04-03 10:29 Protastic101: No, I think they're fine as is
2016-04-03 10:29 Protastic101: when you say first part, do you mean make some of the notes jacks?
2016-04-03 10:29 lejel: noo
2016-04-03 10:29 lejel: remove the LNs and change with doubles
2016-04-03 10:30 Protastic101: Well, each LN should only last one beat if that helps
2016-04-03 10:30 Protastic101: I think that's more your decision on how you want to map this section.
2016-04-03 10:30 lejel: yep like MX
2016-04-03 10:30 Protastic101: Alright, I have to go to work now.
2016-04-03 10:30 lejel: the bass also only last for 1 beat
2016-04-03 10:30 Protastic101: I'll hopefully be on around 9 - 10.
2016-04-03 10:30 lejel: ohh okayy
2016-04-03 10:31 lejel: thanks a lot ^^
2016-04-03 10:31 lejel: mutual?
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: Yeah, that's what i meant about the LN's lasting 1 beat
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: Yeah sure'
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: I have friends now XD
2016-04-03 10:31 lejel: arigatouuu
2016-04-03 10:31 lejel: and goodluck on you job~
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: I'm a waitress lol
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: But thanks
2016-04-03 10:31 Protastic101: Bye!
2016-04-03 10:31 lejel: byee~
2016-04-03 21:27 Protastic101: *pokes* Do you want to moddddddd
2016-04-03 21:27 lejel: yesss XD
2016-04-03 21:27 Protastic101: Lol :D
2016-04-03 21:27 lejel: i saw you were playing soo i didn't want to disturb heheh
2016-04-03 21:28 Protastic101: I saw you were playing something too, so I was like, nahhh, better wait XD
2016-04-03 21:28 Protastic101: I literally just finished a rant mod so
2016-04-03 21:28 lejel: rant??
2016-04-03 21:28 Protastic101: Yeahhh, there was this map on my queue and it made me want to shoot myself because of how against beginners it was
2016-04-03 21:29 Protastic101: Like, no love for them :(
2016-04-03 21:29 Protastic101: Hey, question on HD, why are 01:33:981 (93981|0,94305|2) overlapping?
2016-04-03 21:29 lejel: beginner maps?? ._.
2016-04-03 21:30 Protastic101: The map's lowest difficulty was 2.5* and has 1/4 streams and 1/8 bursts
2016-04-03 21:30 lejel: oopss i dragged it way too long XD
2016-04-03 21:30 lejel: really?
2016-04-03 21:30 Protastic101: I was like, "Noooo, you can't make that your easiest diff!"
2016-04-03 21:30 lejel: man that's.. extreme XD
2016-04-03 21:30 Protastic101: Ik, and it was a tame song too.
2016-04-03 21:31 lejel: so it didn't fit the song too?
2016-04-03 21:31 Protastic101: Hey, so from 01:34:954 to 01:42:738 - It's a little different from the beginning part because it doesn't have any of the 1/4 snaps before the doubles, and I think that's kind of a consistency thing
2016-04-03 21:32 Protastic101: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/433276 This map
2016-04-03 21:33 Protastic101: 01:45:008 (105008|1) - Also, why don't you use a 1/4 burst here instead of an LN?
2016-04-03 21:33 lejel: oh yeah you told me about the first part and i forgot to change the second one, my bad ._.
2016-04-03 21:33 Protastic101: It's cool
2016-04-03 21:34 lejel: about that LN, once again I was afraid to XD
2016-04-03 21:34 lejel: maybe I should be more fearless in mapping..
2016-04-03 21:34 Protastic101: YES, BECOME THE BRAVEST MAPPER THERE EVER IS
2016-04-03 21:34 Protastic101: BECOME THE NEXT IJINJIN
2016-04-03 21:34 Protastic101: XD
2016-04-03 21:35 Protastic101: People who use 1/16 bursts in their maps. Those are the true heroes lol
2016-04-03 21:35 lejel: OOO
2016-04-03 21:35 lejel: ALRIGHT NO MERCY ON THE NEXT MAP
2016-04-03 21:35 You: *releases next map*
2016-04-03 21:35 Me: *looks at it*
2016-04-03 21:35 Protastic101: "Oh, look, 1/16 streams on 400 bpm. Let's DT it.
2016-04-03 21:36 Protastic101: XD
2016-04-03 21:36 Protastic101: I would totally mod that.
2016-04-03 21:36 Protastic101: 01:52:467 (112467|1,112792|3) - Right here, I'm like eh on this, but why'd you stop the doubles here?
2016-04-03 21:36 lejel: *then uses NC + HD*
2016-04-03 21:36 Protastic101: If you make 01:52:467 (112467|1) this an LN, then make 01:52:792 (112792|3) an LN too because the sound is also sustained
2016-04-03 21:37 Protastic101: NC + HD is nothing.
2016-04-03 21:37 lejel: oh that part is also changed already, but not updated
2016-04-03 21:37 Protastic101: NC + HR + Flashlight is where it's at.
2016-04-03 21:37 Protastic101: Ohhhh, ok.
2016-04-03 21:37 Protastic101: 01:54:413 (114413|0,114413|1) - Did I mention anything about a 1/4 burst here?
2016-04-03 21:38 lejel: FL.. I've never ever been success using that mod
2016-04-03 21:38 lejel: yess
2016-04-03 21:38 lejel: in the forum
2016-04-03 21:38 Protastic101: I tried FL on Tsukiyo or whatever the map's called on the NM diff and I got a B on it lol. Flashlight's too difficult for me :(
2016-04-03 21:40 lejel: tsukizukiyo? XD
2016-04-03 21:40 Protastic101: Yeah, that one lol
2016-04-03 21:40 Protastic101: RIP my ability to remember japanese names/words
2016-04-03 21:40 Protastic101: Ok, so HD's chill imo
2016-04-03 21:40 Protastic101: I'm gonna look at MX now
2016-04-03 21:40 lejel: yeah since you're in USA XD
2016-04-03 21:41 Protastic101: #AmericanDream
2016-04-03 21:41 Protastic101: XD
2016-04-03 21:41 Protastic101: I'm not even white though lol
2016-04-03 21:41 Protastic101: I'm still Asian since my Mom's Chinese.
2016-04-03 21:41 lejel: #californiadream
2016-04-03 21:41 lejel: ohh still half asian :3
2016-04-03 21:41 Protastic101: Oh no, I live in Kansas where the weather is bipolar year round XD
2016-04-03 21:42 lejel: canada's weather is still worse doe XD
2016-04-03 21:43 Protastic101: Poor Canada lol.
2016-04-03 21:43 lejel: ohhh in HD
2016-04-03 21:44 Protastic101: 00:11:280 to 00:19:063 - So, there's 2 1/4 notes before each double; I think you should add them.
2016-04-03 21:44 lejel: 00:59:279 (59279|2) until 00:59:279 (59279|2,60900|3) - should be the same? the lyrics's the same doe in HD
2016-04-03 21:44 Protastic101: Nah, I like it the way it is now
2016-04-03 21:45 lejel: alrightyy
2016-04-03 21:45 lejel: oh in MX
2016-04-03 21:45 lejel: the 1/4 notes follows the melody
2016-04-03 21:45 Protastic101: Wait what
2016-04-03 21:45 Protastic101: Oh ok
2016-04-03 21:45 lejel: but imma try adding them
2016-04-03 21:46 Protastic101: 01:08:684 to 01:09:009 - This is a consistency thing, but you've got an LN here in HD, but the LN is 01:09:009 (69009|3) in MX
2016-04-03 21:47 lejel: how do you even remember the HD part, I've already forgotten myself T_T
2016-04-03 21:47 Protastic101: 01:52:467 (112467|2,112467|0) - Remove one of these LN's and make 01:52:792 (112792|1) - an LN, last one beat
2016-04-03 21:48 Protastic101: I remember the HD part because I've test played it so much lol
2016-04-03 21:48 Protastic101: Also, reference toollll
2016-04-03 21:48 lejel: so the LN there is only to make variation XD 01:09:009
2016-04-03 21:48 lejel: *I'm done with copying the time*
2016-04-03 21:49 Protastic101: Lol
2016-04-03 21:49 Protastic101: I hate copying only time cause then I have to click around my screen to make sure I don't copy some random note and have a confused mapper be like, "What are you talking about, why add another note, this is perfect."
2016-04-03 21:49 lejel: why is it so hard to copy the time..
2016-04-03 21:50 Protastic101: Life is such a struggle in the editor lol
2016-04-03 21:50 lejel: #pray4editor
2016-04-03 21:50 Protastic101: 01:55:386 to 02:15:170 - Add 2 1/4 snaps before each triple.
2016-04-03 21:50 Protastic101: Pray for editor and the Osu Standard god answers you instead lol
2016-04-03 21:51 lejel: ehh why 1/4 snaps??
2016-04-03 21:52 Protastic101: 02:18:089 to 02:18:738 - It's a bit strange to play imo
2016-04-03 21:52 lejel: lol XD
2016-04-03 21:52 Protastic101: Cause there's that shakey sound in the background. I don't know how to describe it, but it's like the same sound in the beginning
2016-04-03 21:52 Protastic101: Like, a hihat kind of thing I guess?
2016-04-03 21:52 Protastic101: But it plays in 1/4 2 notes before each beat.
2016-04-03 21:53 lejel: ohh hihat
2016-04-03 21:53 Protastic101: Yeah, I knew I should have stayed in middle school percussion lol
2016-04-03 21:53 Protastic101: My mom was like, "Nooo, orchestra is better, you don't need to know drums!" 3 years later and I'm like, "Add a note here for that weird bass kicky thing."
2016-04-03 21:53 lejel: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4860429
2016-04-03 21:54 lejel: ahahah XD
2016-04-03 21:54 Protastic101: http://puu.sh/o5k14.jpg I did something like these
2016-04-03 21:54 Protastic101: this*
2016-04-03 21:54 Protastic101: Let me try yours though
2016-04-03 21:54 lejel: I love music but jeez it's expensive to take a music course
2016-04-03 21:54 Protastic101: You don't have them for free in school?
2016-04-03 21:55 lejel: I had in the primary school, but there aren't music extracullicular since junior high school..
2016-04-03 21:55 Protastic101: Yeah, I liked the way you arranged it more.
2016-04-03 21:56 Protastic101: Man, that sucks.
2016-04-03 21:56 Protastic101: I love playing music.
2016-04-03 21:56 lejel: there were singing doe.. but i sound like a dying frog
2016-04-03 21:56 Protastic101: Lol, oh god, I did Choir in elementary and it was horrid
2016-04-03 21:57 Protastic101: I was like, the only tenor singer in my grade, and everyone else was a soprano, so I was all alone lol
2016-04-03 21:57 Protastic101: 02:26:846 to 02:30:738 - You could add some LN's here
2016-04-03 21:58 lejel: whoa tenor? that's fantastic XD
2016-04-03 21:58 Protastic101: It sounds like the first LN's are two beats each, the third is a full measure
2016-04-03 21:58 Protastic101: Then the next two LN's after that third one are two beats
2016-04-03 21:59 Protastic101: I know, I was like, super proud of myself XD
2016-04-03 22:00 lejel: alrighty LNs added~
2016-04-03 22:00 lejel: I can't even sing properly -,-
2016-04-03 22:00 Protastic101: Inb4 you're like some super famous Indonesian pop/rock star famous only in Asia XD
2016-04-03 22:01 Protastic101: and I'm some dumb American like, "I'm so culturally diverse, I know an Indonesian guy."
2016-04-03 22:01 Protastic101: XD Jk
2016-04-03 22:01 Protastic101: 02:56:684 - You should add a 1/4 burst here and end where the first LN begins
2016-04-03 22:02 lejel: inb4??
2016-04-03 22:02 Protastic101: "inb4 refers to a user posting a reply to a message/topic "before" another user posts an obvious response."
2016-04-03 22:02 lejel: that story doe omg XD
2016-04-03 22:03 Protastic101: I like to think I've accidentally met someone famous before XD
2016-04-03 22:04 Protastic101: 02:57:981 (177981|3,177981|2,178305|1,178630|0,178954|1,179116|0,179278|1,179603|0,179927|3,180251|0,180575|3,180900|1,181224|0,181548|1) - Ok, so all these LN's are covering up the drum stuff in the background
2016-04-03 22:04 Protastic101: My suggestion would to be slightly nerf them (Like, have two lanes available) and add some doubles where the drum is accented.
2016-04-03 22:04 lejel: me eitherrr XD
2016-04-03 22:04 lejel: burst added
2016-04-03 22:04 Protastic101: But I'm bad at LN's, so I don't know how you would go about doing that.
2016-04-03 22:05 Protastic101: Sooo, that's like all I have to say about MX.
2016-04-03 22:05 Protastic101: I'm gonna testplay NM, so give me a minute or so
2016-04-03 22:06 lejel: let's give it a shot doe about the LNs
2016-04-03 22:06 lejel: okay
2016-04-03 22:06 Protastic101: Yeah, just my thoughts on the LN's. Someone's probably going to mod your map and be like, "Why'd you change it?" and you'll be like, "Some idiot told me to XD"
2016-04-03 22:07 Protastic101: 00:02:117 - So, I think you should add an LN here since the pitch changes. It'd end at 00:03:414.
2016-04-03 22:07 Protastic101: 00:03:414
2016-04-03 22:07 Protastic101: 00:03:414 -
2016-04-03 22:07 lejel: oh Lord.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4860462
2016-04-03 22:07 Protastic101: Oh my god, I hate times
2016-04-03 22:08 Protastic101: Oh dear, abort, abort!
2016-04-03 22:08 Protastic101: XD
2016-04-03 22:08 lejel: but it sounds better doe XD
2016-04-03 22:08 Protastic101: Up to you in the end
2016-04-03 22:08 lejel: le me try and see if someone's gonna complain the jacks
2016-04-03 22:09 Protastic101: 00:00:820 (820|2) - Also, if you add that LN I mentioned in NM, I'd shorten this to end at 00:02:117 -
2016-04-03 22:09 Protastic101: There's someone who will complain about at least one thing in every map :D
2016-04-03 22:09 lejel: LN changed~
2016-04-03 22:09 Protastic101: Me, I always complain about people's OD and HP values cause people are either too nice or too harsh
2016-04-03 22:10 Protastic101: Like, "You're OD and HP values for EZ are 10 for both, wtffffff."
2016-04-03 22:10 Protastic101: Then the response is always like, "YOU'RE BLOCKING MY CREATIVITY!"
2016-04-03 22:10 Protastic101: 00:07:306 - Oh, did you add an LN here too? It's the same stuff I mentioned above
2016-04-03 22:11 lejel: Truee a lot people usually complain jacks and bursts.. I mean have you seen bang riot XD
2016-04-03 22:11 Protastic101: bangin' burst?
2016-04-03 22:11 lejel: I usually just obey the mods about OD and HP cause.. I don't really know bout that stuffs
2016-04-03 22:11 lejel: yepp
2016-04-03 22:11 Protastic101: Oh dear, first time I ever played that map, I was like, "What is thisssss"
2016-04-03 22:11 lejel: RIP my ability in remembering english names
2016-04-03 22:12 Protastic101: Lol.
2016-04-03 22:12 Protastic101: I have found your weakness!
2016-04-03 22:12 lejel: yes add in 00:07:306
2016-04-03 22:12 lejel: yeahh cause I usually play japanese ones XD
2016-04-03 22:12 lejel: *added
2016-04-03 22:13 Protastic101: There's so many japanese songs, and the names are normally like, 20 letters long XD
2016-04-03 22:13 lejel: yeah my new map is :|
2016-04-03 22:13 lejel: upcoming map doe
2016-04-03 22:13 lejel: still WIP
2016-04-03 22:13 Protastic101: 00:26:846 (26846|3,27009|2,27171|0) - Hm, make these three jacks?
2016-04-03 22:13 Protastic101: Same drum sound
2016-04-03 22:14 Protastic101: What are you mapping now?
2016-04-03 22:14 lejel: that parts doesn't follow drum :3
2016-04-03 22:14 lejel: that "harp" thingy again
2016-04-03 22:14 lejel: i forgot the title.. it's too long
2016-04-03 22:14 Protastic101: Lol
2016-04-03 22:15 Protastic101: 00:40:144 - Add 1/2 notes throughout the duration of the LN?
2016-04-03 22:15 lejel: hitotsu no chikai yo, eien no uta to nare
2016-04-03 22:15 Protastic101: It's to represent the burst
2016-04-03 22:15 lejel: that's the title
2016-04-03 22:15 Protastic101: Long name O.O
2016-04-03 22:16 Protastic101: 00:47:927 - Add a double for the finish sound?
2016-04-03 22:16 Protastic101: 00:51:819 - Add for same reason as above
2016-04-03 22:16 lejel: yep that's why I can't remember it till now --
2016-04-03 22:17 Protastic101: Lol
2016-04-03 22:17 lejel: done~
2016-04-03 22:17 Protastic101: 01:42:738 (102738|0) - Same as a few lines above, add 1/2 notes for the duration of the LN.
2016-04-03 22:18 lejel: okay
2016-04-03 22:19 Protastic101: Okay, done with NM
2016-04-03 22:19 Protastic101: Time for EZ!
2016-04-03 22:20 Protastic101: 00:07:955 (7955|2) - I notice that in the other two instances, this note was above where the LN ended, so I'd move this to 2.
2016-04-03 22:21 lejel: oh yeahh misplaced that one
2016-04-03 22:21 lejel: how could you notice that ><
2016-04-03 22:21 Protastic101: The power of being nitpickyyy
2016-04-03 22:21 Protastic101: I am every mappers worst nightmare...
2016-04-03 22:21 Protastic101: The modder who tears the whole map apart XD
2016-04-03 22:22 Protastic101: But I'm still not as good as Abraxos
2016-04-03 22:22 lejel: nah your mod is fun XD
2016-04-03 22:22 Protastic101: Lol, I think my first good mod was on your Ignis Fatuus one lol
2016-04-03 22:22 Protastic101: Ok, I have to go now
2016-04-03 22:23 Protastic101: I'll probably finish the rest of EZ in a modpost tomorrow or Wednesday
2016-04-03 22:23 lejel: oh abraxos.. he's real good but he asked my mod i was like wtf my mod would be trash
2016-04-03 22:23 lejel: ohh okayy
2016-04-03 22:23 lejel: it's late there
2016-04-03 22:23 Protastic101: There's not going to be a lot though cause EZ's pretty good
2016-04-03 22:23 lejel: byee "3
2016-04-03 22:23 Protastic101: Nah, it's 10:30, but it's a school night.
2016-04-03 22:23 Protastic101: Bai
2016-04-03 22:23 lejel: alrightyy

EZ
00:08:603 (8603|1) - Move to 1 or 4 because so far, all your LN's have been in lane 2 or 3. Right.. fixed
00:09:941 to 00:11:281 - Recommend doing the same thing in NM in this measure, which is add the notes on the 1/3 snaps to represent the drums. Done
00:31:063 (31063|1,31387|2,31711|3) - Suggest making these notes doubles to accent the vocals. changed to LNs, added 1 LN for the whoosh
00:31:063 - Also, there's a whoosh sound throughout this whole measure, so you could add an LN in 1 and move this LN 00:32:036 (32036|2) to 3. If accepted, just move 00:32:360 (32360|1,32360|0) to 34. ^^
00:52:792 (52792|2) - Something I didn't catch over IRC, in EZ, this is an LN, but in NM it's just a short note, so consistency issue? I'd probably keep the LN cause it looks nice though. Really? I even forget bout that XD
02:22:954 to 02:24:251 - Kind of an unneeded silence. Try adding notes on each beat? Yep, added LNs to represent 1/4 drum
02:57:981 to 03:01:873 and 03:03:170 to 03:07:062 - These LN's break the flow, so I would stick with what you were already doing before which was following the basic drum line. Done
03:08:197 - Add note here for accent (also a drum sound). Yepp

Why do I only get 1 kudosu for modding all difficultiessss *cries* I'm sorry i can't control how many kudos given XD
No kudosu.
Thank you! :D :D

P.S for upcoming mods : Please wait until I write UPDATED to mod, so the mods won't overlap one another, thanks!

UPDATED!
Adot
doykyoto's Modding Queue


NM Request


langsung ke diff aja . sori gapake headset jadi gabisa banyak2 soalnya sulit gapake headset

|0|1|2|3|

EZ
00:31:063 (31063|2,31387|1,31711|0,32036|2) ini kalo aku si dihapus aja, menurutku agak sulit tuh buat EZ diff
00:55:063 (55063|2) ini ln nya ngikutin ke mana? diganti aja kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4915285 . itu ngikutin vokalnya ln nya jadi kalo aku si feelnya lebih dapet
01:05:441 ini juga sama kek diatas. diganti aja kek diatas. kalo ada pattern kek gni dipertimbangkan buat diganti semua aja

NM
00:21:658 (21658|1) nih ln ngikut ke siapa.. gaada soundnya bro. mending dipindah di sini soalnya sound yg nonjol tuh di sini 00:21:820 . atau dihapus aja gausa pake ln tp dikasi single not di 00:21:820 (berlaku buat diff HD juga)
01:24:252 sama kek atas. kalo ada kek gini lagi dipertimbangin aja.
then tbh notnya lebih ngikut ke vokal drpd instrumen lagunya.. but gamasalah si.. selama masi bisa dimainkan dan rapi
02:36:089 (156089|0,156251|1,156413|2,156575|3) nah dari sini hapus aja.. feelnya lebih kerasa kalo ngikutin drumnya.. coba kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4915381 gapake headset pasti ada yg sala lol

HD
00:40:144 (40144|0,40225|1,40306|2,40387|3) nih stair feelnya gak kerasa suwer.. pertimbangin buat hapus aja lalu diganti ama double note aja di 00:40:144
00:40:468 ini juga kasih double note. suara drum
02:36:900 seharusnya ini double note. yang triple note ini 02:37:224 di sesuaiin sama ref awal. dan loud cymbalnya di situ

yha overall dah bagus
nih lagu gak jauh beda dr kakuzetsu thanatos.. bedanya apa ya :v
tbh notmu hampir kebanyakan ngikutin vokal.. dan aku gak melarang kamu buat kek gitu. cuman kalo aku si gausa terlalu banyak aja.. jadi kesanya banyak not yang simpang siur gitu. kesanya tuh ada instrumen di sini kok not nya di sini ini.
yha just saran aja lah.. lebih baik diganti ngikutin instumenya aja drpd vokal. gaapa vokal tp ddibagian tertentu dan usahakan snap juga.
k. thanks for req. wait for your next req. kalo mau

btw no kudosu kalo gaada yg di apply/gk bermanfaat
Topic Starter
PDJoon-

doykyoto wrote:

doykyoto's Modding Queue


NM Request


langsung ke diff aja . sori gapake headset jadi gabisa banyak2 soalnya sulit gapake headset

|0|1|2|3|

EZ
00:31:063 (31063|2,31387|1,31711|0,32036|2) ini kalo aku si dihapus aja, menurutku agak sulit tuh buat EZ diff Oke aku ganti jadi single buat kick nya
00:55:063 (55063|2) ini ln nya ngikutin ke mana? diganti aja kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4915285 . itu ngikutin vokalnya ln nya jadi kalo aku si feelnya lebih dapet Aslinya ngikutin vokal tapi memang sih agak aneh jadinya, aku ganti dah
01:05:441 ini juga sama kek diatas. diganti aja kek diatas. kalo ada pattern kek gni dipertimbangkan buat diganti semua aja Sip mas

NM
00:21:658 (21658|1) nih ln ngikut ke siapa.. gaada soundnya bro. mending dipindah di sini soalnya sound yg nonjol tuh di sini 00:21:820 . atau dihapus aja gausa pake ln tp dikasi single not di 00:21:820 (berlaku buat diff HD juga) Loh ada kok suaranya? :3
01:24:252 sama kek atas. kalo ada kek gini lagi dipertimbangin aja.
then tbh notnya lebih ngikut ke vokal drpd instrumen lagunya.. but gamasalah si.. selama masi bisa dimainkan dan rapi
02:36:089 (156089|0,156251|1,156413|2,156575|3) nah dari sini hapus aja.. feelnya lebih kerasa kalo ngikutin drumnya.. coba kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4915381 Umm jadi agak aneh sih, klo aku ikutin drum sih jadinya gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4923281 tapi apa gpp buat NM beginian?gapake headset pasti ada yg sala lol Gpp mas :3

HD
00:40:144 (40144|0,40225|1,40306|2,40387|3) nih stair feelnya gak kerasa suwer.. pertimbangin buat hapus aja lalu diganti ama double note aja di 00:40:144 Ga kerasa piye mas XD
00:40:468 ini juga kasih double note. suara drum
02:36:900 seharusnya ini double note. yang triple note ini 02:37:224 di sesuaiin sama ref awal. dan loud cymbalnya di situ Oiya.. aku sering lupa pattern lama jadi kadang ga konsisten.. ugh maap

yha overall dah bagus
nih lagu gak jauh beda dr kakuzetsu thanatos.. bedanya apa ya :v Ini malah sblm kakuzetsu thanatos, ini 2012 kakuzetsu 2013, yang buat sama yang nyanyi sama sih ._.
tbh notmu hampir kebanyakan ngikutin vokal.. dan aku gak melarang kamu buat kek gitu. cuman kalo aku si gausa terlalu banyak aja.. jadi kesanya banyak not yang simpang siur gitu. kesanya tuh ada instrumen di sini kok not nya di sini ini. Sebenernya mau dominan instrumen sih, cuma aku juga mau sevokalnya juga tapi ga smua.. cuma kebanyakan ya..? ntar aku kurangin~ Soalnya ada bbrp part khas yang susah aku lepas ato ubah jadi instrumen misal 00:58:630 dll
yha just saran aja lah.. lebih baik diganti ngikutin instumenya aja drpd vokal. gaapa vokal tp ddibagian tertentu dan usahakan snap juga.
k. thanks for req. wait for your next req. kalo mau Mau laahh, ntar ya klo ada map baru :3

btw no kudosu kalo gaada yg di apply/gk bermanfaat Manfaat kok~
Thanks uda ngemod~~ ^^
UPDATED!
DoNotMess
request mod :3
1|2|3|4

MX
00:12:171 - missing note here :)
00:13:469 (13469|2) - buat apa?
00:16:469 - bkin 3 aja
00:17:361 - missing note
00:17:685 (17685|1) - buat apa
00:19:063 - ilangin nih timing point
00:31:063 (31063|3) - ampe 00:32:360 - harusnya kalo suara cymbal
00:32:360 - kalo bsa dari sini sih saran gw kek gni http://puu.sh/ohVa0/2d181fee3a.jpg soalnya ada suara hi hat nya
01:04:387 (64387|2) - kalo map dri vocal, ini buat apa
01:13:225 - jadiin 3
02:17:278 - missing note
02:18:900 - tambah 23
02:24:089 - tambahin jg
03:07:711 - disini ada drum

moga" ngebantu :3
Topic Starter
PDJoon-

DoNotMess wrote:

request mod :3
1|2|3|4

MX
00:12:171 - missing note here :) Oh iya see
00:13:469 (13469|2) - buat apa? Ini ngikutin melodi
00:16:469 - bkin 3 aja kk
00:17:361 - missing note
00:17:685 (17685|1) - buat apa
00:19:063 - ilangin nih timing point Itu buat volume, ada yang salah point di 00:19:163 itu yang w ilangin
00:31:063 (31063|3) - ampe 00:32:360 - harusnya kalo suara cymbal Itu ngikutin kunci sih aslinya, tapi w ilangin aja drpd bingung trs w add singles di tiap kick
00:32:360 - kalo bsa dari sini sih saran gw kek gni http://puu.sh/ohVa0/2d181fee3a.jpg soalnya ada suara hi hat nya
01:04:387 (64387|2) - kalo map dri vocal, ini buat apa
01:13:225 - jadiin 3
02:17:278 - missing note
02:18:900 - tambah 23
02:24:089 - tambahin jg ^smua oke~
03:07:711 - disini ada drum Itu w ubah sih jadi 1/4 trs di double pas ada yang accent

moga" ngebantu :3
Ngebantu banget kok, makasih~ ^^
UPDATED!
Cipse
Here's a small timing check. I guess you could say that it's because I owe Protastic a mod. The rest of it will come in the weekends, when I have more time.

There's two BpM changes, which happen for the first and second inherited timing points, so there will be a bit of unsnapped notes.
When you change the last three timing points, use this method
Method (please use this)
Select the option "Move already placed notes when changing the offset/BpM". It should already be selected but I'll stay on the safe side


Change the offset. Again, I'm using a screenshot to be on the safe side (sorry if this seems a bit is stupid)


Do not use the Timing Setup Panel. I did this to see if it would work and it doesn't.
I selected all the correct options to stop unsnapped notes...


... but this happened anyway


So, just use the first method to prevent getting a heap of unsnapped notes :)

By the way, I used this beatmap to get an idea of what the BpM but I've slightly different timings. I think mine is better but I've linked the source beatmap in case you like their timings

Timing Check


BpM/Offset:

184.925/813
175.000/9897
185.000/11268
185.000/21970
185.000/84564
To be honest, I'm not sure if the offset for the first timing is 184.925 or 184.920. I swear 184.925 is a bit fast and 184.920 is a bit slow. Maybe I'm completely wrong for both of them :lol:

__

Like I said, I'll come finish the mod sometime in the weekends. Test out the timings yourself to make sure I'm not bullshitting you, because 184.925 is a pretty weird BpM :P

Don't forget to the preview point and uninherited timing points to the new correct timings when you've finished
Also remove the un-used uninherited timing points. EZ has two of those; one at 9941 and the other at 84577. None of them change the slider velocity, enable/disable Kiai or change the samples used.
- [HarukaRin] -
Hi~ from modding queue p/5255879#p5255879 :)

Overall
Artist correction : Rohi → Rohi-P
Source : Vocaloid
Tags add : vocaloid niconico

|1|2|3|4|

EZ
01:54:413 (114413|2,115711|1,115711|0) - change to ↓


02:15:170 (135170|3,136467|0,136467|1) - ↓

NM
01:01:873 - add a note at 4

02:15:170 (135170|2,136467|1,136467|0) - make it same with EZ pattern ↑

02:18:413 - add a note at 3
02:23:603 - add a note at 2

03:07:062 (187062|2,188359|0,188359|1) - add some notes like ↓

HD - Nothing to mod! I liked the pattern so much :)

MX
Check AI Mod!
If you test play the map(press TAB as soon as you start test play for auto play),
you might notice that auto play misses at
00:50:036 (50036|0,50036|0) - two of these are stacked. Remove one of them :)



01:21:171 ~ 01:22:954 - this part I think the notes are too concentrated to the left hand middle finger.



give a slight change or just leave them :P

01:40:467 ~ 01:42:738 - too concentrated to left hand index finger.

Good luck! :D
Topic Starter
PDJoon-

- [HarukaRin] - wrote:

Hi~ from modding queue p/5255879#p5255879 :) Hi~~

Overall
Artist correction : Rohi → Rohi-P Ummm... I kinda disagree sorry, imma stick with the ranked std version, Rohi :3
Source : Vocaloid
Tags add : vocaloid niconico Sure

|1|2|3|4|

EZ
01:54:413 (114413|2,115711|1,115711|0) - change to ↓
[img]http://blogfiles.naver.net/20160623_124/gda04127_1466652199387bjt0H_PNG/1.PNG[/img

02:15:170 (135170|3,136467|0,136467|1) - ↓

NM
01:01:873 - add a note at 4 I don't really get it why ._.

02:15:170 (135170|2,136467|1,136467|0) - make it same with EZ pattern ↑

02:18:413 - add a note at 3
02:23:603 - add a note at 2

03:07:062 (187062|2,188359|0,188359|1) - add some notes like ↓

HD - Nothing to mod! I liked the pattern so much :) Aweeee *blush*

MX
Check AI Mod!
If you test play the map(press TAB as soon as you start test play for auto play),
you might notice that auto play misses at
00:50:036 (50036|0,50036|0) - two of these are stacked. Remove one of them :) Me is stupida. sorry



01:21:171 ~ 01:22:954 - this part I think the notes are too concentrated to the left hand middle finger.



give a slight change or just leave them :P

01:40:467 ~ 01:42:738 - too concentrated to left hand index finger.

Good luck! :D
Thanks! No comments also means added :3

Cipse wrote:

Here's a small timing check. I guess you could say that it's because I owe Protastic a mod. The rest of it will come in the weekends, when I have more time.

There's two BpM changes, which happen for the first and second inherited timing points, so there will be a bit of unsnapped notes.
When you change the last three timing points, use this method
Method (please use this)
Select the option "Move already placed notes when changing the offset/BpM". It should already be selected but I'll stay on the safe side


Change the offset. Again, I'm using a screenshot to be on the safe side (sorry if this seems a bit is stupid)


Do not use the Timing Setup Panel. I did this to see if it would work and it doesn't.
I selected all the correct options to stop unsnapped notes...


... but this happened anyway


So, just use the first method to prevent getting a heap of unsnapped notes :)

By the way, I used this beatmap to get an idea of what the BpM but I've slightly different timings. I think mine is better but I've linked the source beatmap in case you like their timings

Timing Check


BpM/Offset:

184.925/813
175.000/9897
185.000/11268
185.000/21970
185.000/84564
To be honest, I'm not sure if the offset for the first timing is 184.925 or 184.920. I swear 184.925 is a bit fast and 184.920 is a bit slow. Maybe I'm completely wrong for both of them :lol:

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Like I said, I'll come finish the mod sometime in the weekends. Test out the timings yourself to make sure I'm not bullshitting you, because 184.925 is a pretty weird BpM :P

Don't forget to the preview point and uninherited timing points to the new correct timings when you've finished
Also remove the un-used uninherited timing points. EZ has two of those; one at 9941 and the other at 84577. None of them change the slider velocity, enable/disable Kiai or change the samples used.
Soooooo, I've tried your timing and i greatly appreciate your effort finding those number like how did you do that xD anyway i must say sorry cause even though the beginning's real good, starting from the first verse of the song, it gets kinda messy and not accurate D:
Anndd about those useless timing points, ofc i'd still delete them hehe thanks for reminding me :3

EDIT : forgot to mention, thanks for the first BPM you told me that i've changed it to 184,9 xD
Protastic101
lejel, apply your modssssss XD
*proceeds to rush you*
Cipse
legel, apply your mods /o/

I'm actually busy until this weekend, so don't worry about it :lol:

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Damn, I swear I got the timings right.
Oh well, expect a (proper) mod sometime this weekend :)
Cipse
No kudosu

The second part of the mod is here
sorry it didn't arrive earlier today, I was playing too much CtB :lol:
0 1 2 3

General

I think that the difference between 5% hitsound volume is a bit too little. Maybe up this to about 12-20%, since I can't really hear the hitsounds, even with a 30:100 music:effects ratio.

EZ

00:02:766 (2766|1,5362|2,7958|1) - move them in a different column to the LN before - for example, 00:00:820 (820|1,2766|1) - are in the same column. I don't see why they should be in the same column, as pitches aren't the same

00:00:820 (820|1,2117|3,2766|1) - and 00:06:011 (6011|1,7309|3,7958|1) - have the same pattern. Change for diversity
If the above is rejected for pitch reasons, make 00:03:415 (3415|2) - and 00:08:607 (8607|3) - go in the same column

Maybe I'm being a bit picky, but the following groups do an {x,y,x,y} pattern. I'd change it a bit. Since those are LH,RH,LH,RH patterns, you could probably just move one of the notes to a different finger of the same hand
Stuff
00:13:550 (13550|2,13874|0,14198|2,14523|0) -
00:15:171 (15171|1,15496|3,15820|1,16144|3) -
00:17:766 (17766|2,18090|0,18415|2,18739|0) -

There are a few later on but I'm sure you'll be able to find them

00:19:063 (19063|3,20361|2) - it feels slightly more comfortable if the two LNs are in different hands

00:28:468 (28468|2,28792|3,29117|2,29441|3) - {2,3,2,3} is a bit uncomfortable and it's not testing single-handed trill speeds. Put some notes in the left hand
00:33:657 (33657|2,33981|3,34306|2,34630|3) - ^

00:55:387 (55387|0,56036|0) - remove the shield. There's also too many notes in the LH at the moment

01:05:441 (65441|2,66090|2,66738|2) - maybe move one of these out of {2}, since there's a few at the moment

01:45:332 (105332|1) - I think this feels better in {0}. Probably because of the {2+4,1+3,2+4} pattern before it

01:45:981 (105981|1,106630|2,107278|1,107603|2,107927|1) - {1,2,1,2,1}? (being picky again)

01:54:413 (114413|2,115386|3) - like somewhere before, I think that it would feel better if the LN end and the new note were in different columns

01:57:008 (117008|0,117332|1,117657|0,117981|1) - move some notes into the right hand

Between 01:55:711 - and 02:00:575 -, you've used {x,y,x,y} patterns that change every bar. I can't see why you've done that, since the patterns are repetitive and aren't too representative of the music. Change it to something like between 02:00:900 - and 02:05:765 -, since they have pretty much the same sounds.
The same applies to between 02:06:089 - and 02:14:846 -.

02:15:170 (135170|2,136143|3) - put these in different hands

02:16:792 (136792|0) - move this into the "gap" created by the previous three notes - this would be column {2} in the original version of this difficulty. This just prevents jacks/shields
02:17:440 (137440|3,138089|2) - same applies to these two LNs

02:19:711 (139711|2) - move this to {3}, otherwise 02:19:062 (139062|2,139062|0) - and 02:19:711 (139711|0,139711|3) - are in the same column, which kinda feels weird

02:20:359 (140359|1,140359|0) - like the other times where this has happened, I think that this would feel more comfortable if they were in different hands

02:21:981 (141981|1,142630|0) - move these into the "gaps" as well

02:23:278 (143278|1,143927|1) - move one of these into a different column, since there's a shield

02:25:224 (145224|2) - move to {0} to avoid a shield

NM

00:09:941 - EZ has two SNs here. add another (also feels a bit lacking with one SN)

00:19:063 (19063|1) - maybe add an SN for the piano. I personally think it's a bit weird to have you mapping the piano and drum roll with that single LN. If you don't, change 00:40:144 (40144|0,40144|1) - for consistency

00:23:279 (23279|0,23441|1,23765|1,23927|0,24090|1) - I'd say this is too many notes in the left hand. Move some over to the RH

00:32:036 (32036|2,32684|2) - move these into different columns to avoid a shield

00:33:657 (33657|0,33981|1) - move to different hands, since it feels more comfortable

00:36:252 (36252|2,36576|0,36900|2,37225|0) - make these have a different pattern. I don't see a reason why they are repeated

00:42:414 (42414|2,42738|3) - move the notes into different hands

00:52:954 (52954|1) - I think this is a ghost

Keep 01:21:657 - consistent with whatever you did with 00:19:063 (19063|1) - and 00:40:144 (40144|0,40144|1) -

01:24:900 (84900|1,85062|0,85386|1,85548|0,85711|1) - some of these could go into the RH

01:27:332 (87332|3,87657|3,87981|3,88305|3) - move some notes out of {3}, there's a bit too many at the moment

01:34:630 (94630|2,95278|2) - move these into different columns to avoid shields

01:34:954 (94954|3,95278|2) - again, would prefer if the end of a slider was in a different hand the SN
01:35:603 (95603|1,95927|0) - ^
01:40:792 (100792|1,101116|0,101440|2,101765|3) - ^

02:10:954 (130954|2,131116|1,131278|2,131278|3) - as a personal preference, I'd move all of these into different columns (instead of having a double in {2})

I would change the patterning of the doubles, between 02:11:278 - and 02:14:846 -, to something similar to pattern between 01:55:711 - and 02:05:440 - (note placements of the doubles are randomized instead of the notes always being different to the chord before it)

02:21:657 (141657|0,141981|0) - move one of these notes to remove the shield

02:36:170 (156170|1) - remove this note. There are similar places where you have ignored this vocal/bass - such as 02:46:548 - and 01:02:441 -, 01:12:819 -
02:36:413 (156413|0) - because of the previous pattern, I would think it's better if this went into {3} - to make it easier

02:46:954 (166954|3,167765|3) - I would definitely remove this shield

02:58:954 (178954|3,179116|2) - make these SNs. I think that 1/4 LNs are a bit difficult for the SR
03:01:548 (181548|0,181711|1) - ^
03:04:143 (184143|0,184305|1) - ^

HD

There are a few places where you need triples for cymbals, such as 00:11:280 - (too lazy to find the rest, sorry D:)

00:00:820 - like with the last difficulty, I think this would be better with another SN - SN for the organ and LN for the phrases
00:06:011 - ^

00:20:361 (20361|0,20361|1,20577|3,20577|2,20793|0,20793|1,21009|3,21009|2,21225|1,21225|0,21442|3,21442|2) - for the star rating, this pattern might be a bit easy. I'd diversify it, instead of leaving it as {x+y,a+b,x+y...}

I think the following notes are ghosts. Maybe I just can't hear properly >.>
Occurrences
Basically, these are just the 1/4 snapped notes between 00:32:603 - and 00:39:738 -

00:32:603 (32603|1) -
00:33:252 (33252|2) -
00:33:900 (33900|2) -
00:34:549 (34549|2) -
00:35:198 (35198|1) -
00:35:846 (35846|1) -
00:36:495 (36495|2) -
00:37:144 (37144|1) -
00:37:792 (37792|2) -
00:38:441 (38441|1) -
00:39:090 (39090|2) -
00:39:738 (39738|2) -

00:45:171 - add a note, since it has the same sounds as the other chords around it
00:47:765 - ^
00:50:360 - ^

Keep the note densities between 01:13:873 - and 01:21:495 - the same as between 00:11:280 - and 00:18:901 -. Between 01:13:873 - and 01:21:495 - you only have doubles for the claps (2nd/4th beats) but between 00:11:280 - and 00:18:901 - you've placed doubles on every 1/1 snap
Also add/remove a note from 01:21:657 -/00:19:063 - as appropriate

01:29:440 (89440|1,89603|1) - the pitches aren't the same, move the notes into different columns

I'm pretty sure that every 1/4 snapped note between 01:35:197 - and 01:42:332 - are ghosts

01:45:008 (105008|2,105089|1,105170|0,105251|1,105332|0,105332|2,105494|2,105494|0) - I'd change this pattern into {2,1,0,3,2+1}. At the moment, 01:45:089 (105089|1,105170|0,105251|1,105332|0) - is going to be a tricky one-handed trill to play plus {3} doesn't have any notes in it

As before, add a note to the follow, since the sounds are the same as the other bass sounds around it
Occurrences
01:47:765 (107765|0) -
01:50:359 (110359|0) -
01:52:954 (112954|1) -

01:54:413 (114413|0,114494|3,114575|1,114657|2,114738|0,114819|3,114900|1,114981|2,115062|0,115143|3,115224|1,115305|2) - I'd say that patterning is a bit hard (I don't really expect this to change but I'm going to say it anyway)

02:20:359 (140359|3,140359|2,140575|1,140575|0,140792|3,140792|2,141008|1,141008|0,141224|3,141224|2,141440|1,141440|0,141657|3,141657|2) - I'm not sure but maybe diversify this pattern as well

02:23:278 (143278|0,143359|3,143440|2,143521|1,143603|3,143684|2,143765|1,143846|0) - I would keep this as {a,b,c,d,a,b,c,d}. It keeps consistent with 02:18:089 (138089|0,138170|1,138251|2,138332|3,138413|0,138494|1,138575|2,138657|3) -, it looks better and feels nicer to play

02:41:116 (161116|2,161116|3,161332|0,161332|1,161548|3,161548|2,161765|0,161765|1,161981|2,161981|3,162197|0,162197|1,162413|3,162413|2) - I think this has the {0+1,2+3,0+1...} pattern for too long, especially considering that 02:42:738 (162738|1,162738|0,162900|3,162900|2,163062|0,163062|1) - also uses that pattern. I'd "randomize" the chords there to make it more interesting
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