No kudosuThe second part of the mod is here
sorry it didn't arrive earlier today, I was playing too much CtB
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GeneralI think that the difference between 5% hitsound volume is a bit too little. Maybe up this to about 12-20%, since I can't really hear the hitsounds, even with a 30:100 music:effects ratio.
EZ00:02:766 (2766|1,5362|2,7958|1) - move them in a different column to the LN before - for example, 00:00:820 (820|1,2766|1) - are in the same column. I don't see why they should be in the same column, as pitches aren't the same
00:00:820 (820|1,2117|3,2766|1) - and 00:06:011 (6011|1,7309|3,7958|1) - have the same pattern. Change for diversity
If the above is rejected for pitch reasons, make 00:03:415 (3415|2) - and 00:08:607 (8607|3) - go in the same column
Maybe I'm being a bit picky, but the following groups do an {x,y,x,y} pattern. I'd change it a bit. Since those are LH,RH,LH,RH patterns, you could probably just move one of the notes to a different finger of the same hand
Stuff00:13:550 (13550|2,13874|0,14198|2,14523|0) -
00:15:171 (15171|1,15496|3,15820|1,16144|3) -
00:17:766 (17766|2,18090|0,18415|2,18739|0) -
There are a few later on but I'm sure you'll be able to find them
00:19:063 (19063|3,20361|2) - it feels slightly more comfortable if the two LNs are in different hands
00:28:468 (28468|2,28792|3,29117|2,29441|3) - {2,3,2,3} is a bit uncomfortable and it's not testing single-handed trill speeds. Put some notes in the left hand
00:33:657 (33657|2,33981|3,34306|2,34630|3) - ^
00:55:387 (55387|0,56036|0) - remove the shield. There's also too many notes in the LH at the moment
01:05:441 (65441|2,66090|2,66738|2) - maybe move one of these out of {2}, since there's a few at the moment
01:45:332 (105332|1) - I think this feels better in {0}. Probably because of the {2+4,1+3,2+4} pattern before it
01:45:981 (105981|1,106630|2,107278|1,107603|2,107927|1) - {1,2,1,2,1}? (being picky again)
01:54:413 (114413|2,115386|3) - like somewhere before, I think that it would feel better if the LN end and the new note were in different columns
01:57:008 (117008|0,117332|1,117657|0,117981|1) - move some notes into the right hand
Between 01:55:711 - and 02:00:575 -, you've used {x,y,x,y} patterns that change every bar. I can't see why you've done that, since the patterns are repetitive and aren't too representative of the music. Change it to something like between 02:00:900 - and 02:05:765 -, since they have pretty much the same sounds.
The same applies to between 02:06:089 - and 02:14:846 -.
02:15:170 (135170|2,136143|3) - put these in different hands
02:16:792 (136792|0) - move this into the "gap" created by the previous three notes - this would be column {2} in the original version of this difficulty. This just prevents jacks/shields
02:17:440 (137440|3,138089|2) - same applies to these two LNs
02:19:711 (139711|2) - move this to {3}, otherwise 02:19:062 (139062|2,139062|0) - and 02:19:711 (139711|0,139711|3) - are in the same column, which kinda feels weird
02:20:359 (140359|1,140359|0) - like the other times where this has happened, I think that this would feel more comfortable if they were in different hands
02:21:981 (141981|1,142630|0) - move these into the "gaps" as well
02:23:278 (143278|1,143927|1) - move one of these into a different column, since there's a shield
02:25:224 (145224|2) - move to {0} to avoid a shield
NM00:09:941 - EZ has two SNs here. add another (also feels a bit lacking with one SN)
00:19:063 (19063|1) - maybe add an SN for the piano. I personally think it's a bit weird to have you mapping the piano and drum roll with that single LN. If you don't, change 00:40:144 (40144|0,40144|1) - for consistency
00:23:279 (23279|0,23441|1,23765|1,23927|0,24090|1) - I'd say this is too many notes in the left hand. Move some over to the RH
00:32:036 (32036|2,32684|2) - move these into different columns to avoid a shield
00:33:657 (33657|0,33981|1) - move to different hands, since it feels more comfortable
00:36:252 (36252|2,36576|0,36900|2,37225|0) - make these have a different pattern. I don't see a reason why they are repeated
00:42:414 (42414|2,42738|3) - move the notes into different hands
00:52:954 (52954|1) - I think this is a ghost
Keep 01:21:657 - consistent with whatever you did with 00:19:063 (19063|1) - and 00:40:144 (40144|0,40144|1) -
01:24:900 (84900|1,85062|0,85386|1,85548|0,85711|1) - some of these could go into the RH
01:27:332 (87332|3,87657|3,87981|3,88305|3) - move some notes out of {3}, there's a bit too many at the moment
01:34:630 (94630|2,95278|2) - move these into different columns to avoid shields
01:34:954 (94954|3,95278|2) - again, would prefer if the end of a slider was in a different hand the SN
01:35:603 (95603|1,95927|0) - ^
01:40:792 (100792|1,101116|0,101440|2,101765|3) - ^
02:10:954 (130954|2,131116|1,131278|2,131278|3) - as a personal preference, I'd move all of these into different columns (instead of having a double in {2})
I would change the patterning of the doubles, between 02:11:278 - and 02:14:846 -, to something similar to pattern between 01:55:711 - and 02:05:440 - (note placements of the doubles are randomized instead of the notes always being different to the chord before it)
02:21:657 (141657|0,141981|0) - move one of these notes to remove the shield
02:36:170 (156170|1) - remove this note. There are similar places where you have ignored this vocal/bass - such as 02:46:548 - and 01:02:441 -, 01:12:819 -
02:36:413 (156413|0) - because of the previous pattern, I would think it's better if this went into {3} - to make it easier
02:46:954 (166954|3,167765|3) - I would definitely remove this shield
02:58:954 (178954|3,179116|2) - make these SNs. I think that 1/4 LNs are a bit difficult for the SR
03:01:548 (181548|0,181711|1) - ^
03:04:143 (184143|0,184305|1) - ^
HDThere are a few places where you need triples for cymbals, such as 00:11:280 - (too lazy to find the rest, sorry D:)
00:00:820 - like with the last difficulty, I think this would be better with another SN - SN for the organ and LN for the phrases
00:06:011 - ^
00:20:361 (20361|0,20361|1,20577|3,20577|2,20793|0,20793|1,21009|3,21009|2,21225|1,21225|0,21442|3,21442|2) - for the star rating, this pattern might be a bit easy. I'd diversify it, instead of leaving it as {x+y,a+b,x+y...}
I think the following notes are ghosts. Maybe I just can't hear properly >.>
OccurrencesBasically, these are just the 1/4 snapped notes between 00:32:603 - and 00:39:738 -
00:32:603 (32603|1) -
00:33:252 (33252|2) -
00:33:900 (33900|2) -
00:34:549 (34549|2) -
00:35:198 (35198|1) -
00:35:846 (35846|1) -
00:36:495 (36495|2) -
00:37:144 (37144|1) -
00:37:792 (37792|2) -
00:38:441 (38441|1) -
00:39:090 (39090|2) -
00:39:738 (39738|2) -
00:45:171 - add a note, since it has the same sounds as the other chords around it
00:47:765 - ^
00:50:360 - ^
Keep the note densities between 01:13:873 - and 01:21:495 - the same as between 00:11:280 - and 00:18:901 -. Between 01:13:873 - and 01:21:495 - you only have doubles for the claps (2nd/4th beats) but between 00:11:280 - and 00:18:901 - you've placed doubles on every 1/1 snap
Also add/remove a note from 01:21:657 -/00:19:063 - as appropriate
01:29:440 (89440|1,89603|1) - the pitches aren't the same, move the notes into different columns
I'm pretty sure that every 1/4 snapped note between 01:35:197 - and 01:42:332 - are ghosts
01:45:008 (105008|2,105089|1,105170|0,105251|1,105332|0,105332|2,105494|2,105494|0) - I'd change this pattern into {2,1,0,3,2+1}. At the moment, 01:45:089 (105089|1,105170|0,105251|1,105332|0) - is going to be a tricky one-handed trill to play plus {3} doesn't have any notes in it
As before, add a note to the follow, since the sounds are the same as the other bass sounds around it
Occurrences01:47:765 (107765|0) -
01:50:359 (110359|0) -
01:52:954 (112954|1) -
01:54:413 (114413|0,114494|3,114575|1,114657|2,114738|0,114819|3,114900|1,114981|2,115062|0,115143|3,115224|1,115305|2) - I'd say that patterning is a bit hard (I don't really expect this to change but I'm going to say it anyway)
02:20:359 (140359|3,140359|2,140575|1,140575|0,140792|3,140792|2,141008|1,141008|0,141224|3,141224|2,141440|1,141440|0,141657|3,141657|2) - I'm not sure but maybe diversify this pattern as well
02:23:278 (143278|0,143359|3,143440|2,143521|1,143603|3,143684|2,143765|1,143846|0) - I would keep this as {a,b,c,d,a,b,c,d}. It keeps consistent with 02:18:089 (138089|0,138170|1,138251|2,138332|3,138413|0,138494|1,138575|2,138657|3) -, it looks better and feels nicer to play
02:41:116 (161116|2,161116|3,161332|0,161332|1,161548|3,161548|2,161765|0,161765|1,161981|2,161981|3,162197|0,162197|1,162413|3,162413|2) - I think this has the {0+1,2+3,0+1...} pattern for too long, especially considering that 02:42:738 (162738|1,162738|0,162900|3,162900|2,163062|0,163062|1) - also uses that pattern. I'd "randomize" the chords there to make it more interesting