forum

senya - Arehateta Chijou no Uta

posted
Total Posts
50
Topic Starter
Satellite
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月1日 at 13:19:32

Artist: senya
Title: Arehateta Chijou no Uta
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Trust Kibbleru Giralda jonathanlfj 霊知の太陽信仰 Nuclear Fusion かませ虎 kamase-tora HiZuMi ikuo Touhou 霊烏 路空 utsuho reiuji okuu お空 eLy yuuhei 幽閉サテライト 15th 東方地霊殿 Subterranean Animism dagger-gazel 名華祭
BPM: 160
Filesize: 8249kb
Play Time: 03:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4.99 stars, 950 notes)
  2. Giralda's Lunatic (4.27 stars, 721 notes)
  3. Kibbleru's Hard (3.27 stars, 486 notes)
  4. Normal (2 stars, 335 notes)
  5. Trust's Easy (1.57 stars, 198 notes)
Download: senya - Arehateta Chijou no Uta
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
🍁osu! needs more senya!🍁

Vocals: senya
Title: 荒れ果てた地上の唄
Arrangement: HiZuMi
Lyrics: Kamase-Tora / かませ虎
Circle: 幽閉サテライト (Yuuhei Satellite)
Album: 荒れ果てた地上の唄
Original Source: 霊知の太陽信仰 Nuclear Fusion / Solar Sect of Mystic Wisdom


------------------------------------------------------------------------
mapset
Easy by Trust
Normal by me
Hard by Kibbleru
Lunatic by Giralda
Collab by jonathanlfj and me
------------------------------------------------------------------------
Guest thanks you
Trust
Kibbleru
Giralda
jonathanlfj
------------------------------------------------------------------------
Thanks Modding / Star support Help
SPOILER

  • jonathanlfj / star
    Trust / star
    Kibbleru / star
    kanor / mod
    Alveryn/ star
    Giralda / star
    Prophecy / mod support / star2
    Naricissu / star
    appleeaterx / star2
    Dailycare / mod / star
    Taeyang / star5
    Momizi / star3
    Abhor / star2
    C u r i / mod
    Arooma / star
    -Mo- / mod / star
    Lily Bread / star
    sodarose / mod / star2
    Natsu
    Rizia
Giralda
♥~
Kibbleru
canada
Topic Starter
Satellite
ca ♥ na ♥ da
kanor
[Normal]
00:03:070 (1,2) - 这种放NM是不是有点太难了......试着整合成一个滑条?
00:05:320 (5) - 建议直接做成一个1/2滑条就可以了,折返太难。
00:08:320 (4,5) - 整合成一个1/2滑条更舒服一点
00:12:070 (1) - 这个滑条压00:12:445 - 这个音不是更好吗?而且滑条也有点丑,直线或者弧线就好。
00:17:882 (6) - NM的话这个音感觉可要可不要
00:30:070 (1,2,1) - 这种下法对NM来说是不是太难了?00:30:070 (1) - 这个滑条感觉在00:30:445 - 这里停住,00:30:820 - 这个地方和下面的2滑条整合成一个折返滑条会不会更简单一点?
00:42:070 (1,2,1) - 这里的2还是尽量不要打节奏吧,听起来怪怪的,压人声感觉更舒服
00:56:132 (2,3) - 这两个整合成一个1/2滑条,从00:56:320 - 这里开始
01:00:070 (1,2,3) - ^00:56:132 (2,3) -
01:07:570 (1,2,3,4) - 这里最好别叠,不同间距的NOTE叠在一起是tagx才会用的做法
01:36:632 (2) - 这个音有些不明所以,01:36:820 - 在这里下比之前那里听起来舒服
01:47:320 (2,3) - 2改成一个1/2滑条,01:47:882 - 改成个单点试试?
01:51:070 (1,2,1) - ^00:42:070 (1,2,1) -
01:54:632 (2,3) - ^00:56:132 (2,3) -
01:59:132 (2,3) - ^00:56:132 (2,3) -
02:13:570 (1,2) - 这里的间距最好拉开点,不然和前面的1/2没什么区别
02:22:570 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^01:07:570 (1,2,3,4) -
02:23:882 (1,2) - 一个滑条感觉就够了
02:24:820 (2) - 滑条尾到02:25:195 - 就够了
02:54:820 (3) - 滑条尾到02:55:195 - 就够了
03:12:070 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^01:07:570 (1,2,3,4) -
03:13:382 (1,2) - 整合成一个滑条
03:24:070 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^01:07:570 (1,2,3,4) -

总体感觉就是作为NM是不是有点难了.....节奏下的有点太密了,感觉像是hard的思路....
不过不错呦,大多数还是很棒的0w0
撒谎爷爷有时间也来摸摸我的图呀♪(^∇^*)
hyouri
collab with lfj :o
DiscoTheBudgie
another one?!wow! you are really great at mapping!
Prophecy
What? mod in chinese???

Maybe you should use english instead. @kanor



@Satellite: tell me if you want english translate
Topic Starter
Satellite

Prophecy wrote:

What? mod in chinese???

Maybe you should use english instead. @kanor



@Satellite: tell me if you want english translate
uh if you are free please orz
DiscoTheBudgie
if you are reading this,satellite, i suggest filling up the first two breakes in nuclear diff,they just seem the perfect place to put objects
jonathanlfj
🍁CANADA🍁
Prophecy

kanor wrote:

[Normal]
00:03:070 (1,2) - 这种放NM是不是有点太难了......试着整合成一个滑条?these note a little bit hard in normal diff, maybe you can combine it into a slider.
00:05:320 (5) - 建议直接做成一个1/2滑条就可以了,折返太难。suggest to make a 1/2 slider instead, it's too hard to reverse back.
00:08:320 (4,5) - 整合成一个1/2滑条更舒服一点 combine to a 1/2 instead
00:12:070 (1) - 这个滑条压00:12:445 - 这个音不是更好吗?而且滑条也有点丑,直线或者弧线就好。The slider is ugly, maybe try a curve one or stright one.
00:17:882 (6) - NM的话这个音感觉可要可不要 You can remove this in normal diff.
00:30:070 (1,2,1) - 这种下法对NM来说是不是太难了?00:30:070 (1) - 这个滑条感觉在00:30:445 - 这里停住,00:30:820 - 这个地方和下面的2滑条整合成一个折返滑条会不会更简单一点? It's too hard in Normal, I think The slider stop at 00:30:445, and you can combine to a 1/2 reverse slider instead at 00:30:820
00:42:070 (1,2,1) - 这里的2还是尽量不要打节奏吧,听起来怪怪的,压人声感觉更舒服 It's weird
00:56:132 (2,3) - 这两个整合成一个1/2滑条,从00:56:320 - 这里开始 Combine into 1/2 slider instead
01:00:070 (1,2,3) - ^00:56:132 (2,3) - same as above
01:07:570 (1,2,3,4) - 这里最好别叠,不同间距的NOTE叠在一起是tagx才会用的做法 Prevent stack notes here.
01:36:632 (2) - 这个音有些不明所以,01:36:820 - 在这里下比之前那里听起来舒服 a little bit strange
01:47:320 (2,3) - 2改成一个1/2滑条,01:47:882 - 改成个单点试试?Change to a notes instead, not slider.
01:51:070 (1,2,1) - ^00:42:070 (1,2,1) - same as above
01:54:632 (2,3) - ^00:56:132 (2,3) - same as above
01:59:132 (2,3) - ^00:56:132 (2,3) - same as above
02:13:570 (1,2) - 这里的间距最好拉开点,不然和前面的1/2没什么区别 check distance
02:22:570 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^01:07:570 (1,2,3,4) - same as above
02:23:882 (1,2) - 一个滑条感觉就够了 one slider is enough
02:24:820 (2) - 滑条尾到02:25:195 - 就够了end at 02:25:195 is enough
02:54:820 (3) - 滑条尾到02:55:195 - 就够了end at 02:55:195 is enough
03:12:070 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^01:07:570 (1,2,3,4) - same as above
03:13:382 (1,2) - 整合成一个滑条 combine to a slider
03:24:070 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^01:07:570 (1,2,3,4) - same as above

总体感觉就是作为NM是不是有点难了.....节奏下的有点太密了,感觉像是hard的思路.... It's a little bit hard in this normal, the note density is quite high.
不过不错呦,大多数还是很棒的0w0 but it's nice.
撒谎爷爷有时间也来摸摸我的图呀♪(^∇^*)
Topic Starter
Satellite

jonathanlfj wrote:

🍁CANADA🍁
🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁🍁


wa! thank you Prophecy <3
VINXIS
caadna..
Topic Starter
Satellite

VINXIS wrote:

caadna..
hello canada xd
Dailycare
my grandma's sister lives in Canada.. so, yea

[General]
Offset seems a bit wrong imo.. maybe +3?

[Collab]
Sat
*01:44:882 (7) - I think there's no sound you should emphasize.. So how about removing finish?
*02:11:507 (2,3) - Could you increase the distance from 02:11:320 (1) - ? I think it's more better to stack (2,3) on next slider's head even though this makes players confused
*02:16:382 (5) - That clap is really necessary?

lfj
*02:03:820 (3) - What about adding NC?
*02:30:820 (3) - ^

can't find any problems

[Giralda's Lunatic]
*00:15:070 (1) - Could you improve this?
*01:26:132 (2,3) - increasing the DS will be better
*01:44:695 (4) - Same as Collab, consider removing finish
*02:03:257 (2,3) - Why did you use DS 1.6?
*02:06:070 (1) - Consider removing NC here
*02:12:445 (2,3,4,5) - it seems little dangerous and confusing.. um but i guess it's not a big issue
*02:27:913 - I think adding a circle here would be better rather than 02:28:101 -
*02:40:945 - I hope you don't ignore this sound TwT
*02:54:820 (5) - NC?
*03:19:570 (5) - yea NC

[kibbleru's Hard]
*01:03:820 ~ 01:04:570 - seems a bit empty, what do you think adding notes?
*01:16:663 (1) - um.. did you need to put spinner here lol
*01:44:695 (3) - consider removing finsih ..
*03:07:570 - Remove this greenline
*03:34:195 (2,1) - It may confuse me x.x

[Normal]
*01:08:320 (3,4,1) - 02:23:320 (3,4,1) - 03:12:820 (3,4,1) - 03:24:820 (3,4,1) - hmmm, is it acceptable..?

[Trust's Easy]
*00:39:820 (2) - Did you forget adding clap at slider's end?
*02:06:070 - Adding a circle is also good imo


keep farming mandatory mods like this to rank it
gl
Giralda
02:12:445 (2,3,4,5) - Would prefer to see more opinions on this. First time trying it :P

Applied everything else, thanks Dailycare!

Update: http://puu.sh/pJYeo/537f81309b.zip
Reillia
[General]
add combo color!!

Trust's Easy]
00:49:570 (5) - touch hp bar.
01:57:820 (2) - how about this slider shape? 02:10:195 (4) - move (259,208)?
02:50:695 (2,1) - stack?

[Normal]
00:17:320 (5) - touch hp bar?
02:14:132 - maybe forgot finish?
03:20:320 (1) - delete new combo?

[Kibbleru's Hard]
00:03:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this rhythm should be like this? 00:39:445 (2,4) - stack?
02:16:195 (5,2) - ^

[Giralda's Insane]
00:31:570 (2) - new combo?

[Collab]
i'll mod this diff tomorrow :3
-Mo-


General
- Slider tick rate is inconsistent with the higher and lower diffs, I don't know if that's what you wanted ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
- 00:51:070 - This part of the music is just godly.

Trust's Easy
- 00:28:195 (2) - Looks like you missed a clap? Having not hitsounding on this sounds really out of place in my opinion.
- 00:40:195 - Same thing here.
- 01:04:570 (1,2) - Having these at 3/2 feels like it throws off the rhythm you had going for the rest of the map, which was sticking to the white ticks. It feels like the rhythmic flow of the map has slowed significantly, which isn't appropriate for the start of the chorus. I would just stick with 1/1 repeats like you did at 02:07:570 (1,2,3,4) and 03:09:070 (1,2,3,4).
- 02:45:820 (3,1) - Minor: It would be nice if these were the same shape.

Normal
- 00:13:570 (1) - Minor: I would try making the first curve more circle-like so that it's a little neater. - 01:56:320 (3) - I think a drum-whistle on the head here suits nicely.
- 01:57:820 (3) - Same thing here.
- 02:11:882 (1) - Reducing this to stop on 02:12:445 would be better in my opinion so that the white tick is mapped better instead of using slider tick hitsounding. The vocals also start to drop off at this point so there's no need to extend the slider to map it.

Kibbleru's Hard
- 00:03:632 (4,5) - Similar to what [C u r i] said; I don't think these offbeat sliders fit, since 00:03:820 has a more significant synth sound that would be better mapped with an active note.
- 00:34:195 (5,1) - You could slightly increase the spacing between these if you wanted since there is a significant beat on 00:34:570.
- 00:37:195 - This would be better mapped with an active note to match the vocals.
- 00:51:070 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Personally I don't agree with this rhythm, since it doesn't really follow the main beats in the music as I expected, and the change in the rhythmic flow threw me off quite a bit. It's up to you, but I'm just saying that I don't really like it.
- 01:16:195 - You could put a soft-finish here if you wanted and willing to sacrifice the drum-whistle (or just add an extra hitsound file somewhere).
- 01:28:570 - Unnecessary green lines here.
- 01:54:070 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Same as before, but as I said it's just an opinion.
- 02:00:070 (1,2,3) - Minor: Might aswell keep these the same spacing.
- 02:31:195 - Similar as before about adding a soft-finish.

Giralda's Lunatic
- 00:15:820 (3,4,5) - Minor: The stack is uneven.
- 03:09:070 - It would be much better if this was mapped with an active note since this is the start of kiai time.

Collab
- 01:27:820 (9) - Splitting this up into two sliders might be more appropriate so that the finish on 01:28:195 is mapped better.

Not much to say about the higher diffs, sorry >.<
Good luck!
Giralda
Applied everything, thanks for the mods!

Update: http://puu.sh/pSmX8/305f90afcc.zip
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply