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Manoeuvres - Mad World (Station Earth Remix)

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Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Hey! Taking this down as Bakari mentioned some pretty serious issues that need to be considered.

Personally I strongly recommend you to fix the combo color issue and the aggressive curves in Easy.

This song and mapset are pretty nice, btw :3 Good luck!
Mint
1,607 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint

Bakari wrote:

Hello there, I have a few things I'd love to mention as I believe this would improve the map.

[General]
  1. Paired colours (1-2),(3-4),(5-6) are way too similar this is confusing and should be avoided. Try adding red colours or using dimmed colours for the slower part and brighter ones for a faster one? this would work better.
    Just to name a few examples, 00:50:774 (5,6,1) - this on Apple's Insane. :arrow: Regarding this issue, Bearizm did the combo colours on my difficulty, so I'll leave this to him instead.
    01:19:738 (6,1,2,3) - Normal
  2. Normal-hitfinish.wav is 5 seconds long. Isn't that a bit way too long? I would recommend to make it shorter, so that hitsounds wouldn't overlap.
    For example, the problem happens 01:39:393 (1) - here on Normal and the mix of hitsounds creates a noisy feel, that does not belong to the original song.
  3. Why not use Slider Tick Rate 2 for Hard, Insane and Divine? The difficulties use intense 1/2 rhythm and the song perfectly supports Tick Rate as it provides consistent 1/2 background beat. :arrow: I'm fine with either STR1 or 2. Though, you are right - STR2 seems to fit the song better. I'll leave this decision up to Bearizm as well, since I think it's best to have this consistent in all difficulties, regardless my Insane being a guest difficulty.
[apple's Insane]
  1. 00:52:498 (1) - pretty sure that the slider here ignores the double on 00:52:498 - 00:52:582. It feels pretty forced and makes the following doubles and the transition to them feel unnatural. :arrow: This issue has been brought up previously by Asonate. I'm aware that the first double has been skipped and it was done completely intentional. Rather than suddenly introducing doublets, I preferred to have a 3/4 slider + note at the end. This way, the player can immediately pick up the doublet-rhythm and will have no problem switching mindset (immediately being prepared without any confusion possible) and play the rest of the doublets. The slider is so much easier to pick-up and regular 3/4 patterns aren't hard, or uncommon in any type of beatmap these days, at all. Therefore having that to me is much smoother. However, if I were to map the first doublet already, the would be absolutely no time for the player to adjust to the new rhythm. I believe what I have currently is much smoother from a players' perspective, and if I can, I would like to keep it that way. For whether the slider fits here; there's a clear violin sound, and I have skipped <some> sounds to follow the violin before. Also, I think this is also more forgiving after some single-tapping at 00:51:636 (2,3,4,5,6) - .
Hope this helps!
Thanks for the check, but I would like to keep the pattern. I hope I provided a sufficient explanation behind the pattern :3
@Bearizm: Feel free to change the colors for me - also, if you're going to change to Slider Tick Rate 2, please change mine as well to be consistent with your difficulties. If you decide to keep STR1, leave mine as-is.
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
holy fuck u mapped this? blblblblblblblblblbl
HootOwlStar
750 posts
Joined May 2014
HootOwlStar
it might be a mad world indeed and i'm mad too t b h so it's kind of #relatable yee

edit: @Akali it's fine as it is though

edit2: made (7) flat and tick rate to 2, but if tickrate of other diffs remain as 1 then should change it back t o 1

ayy
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Mad World (Station Earth Remix).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54222
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 90600
DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.699999

[Metadata]
Title:Mad World (Station Earth Remix)
TitleUnicode:Mad World (Station Earth Remix)
Artist:Manoeuvres
ArtistUnicode:Manoeuvres
Creator:Bearizm
Version:HOS' Hard
Source:
Tags:Liquid Drum and Bass DnB Liquicity appleeaterx HootOwlStar
BeatmapID:953435
BeatmapSetID:434391

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.8
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Secretpipe
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when are we going to do some dnb together fk

this is one of my fav song actually :(
Bearizm
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I'll check on this soon, i'll make a new post once everything's sorted out.

Thanks Bakari! X)
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Milan- wrote:

;(
allein
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Secretpipe wrote:

Milan- wrote:

;(
Bearizm
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Bakari wrote:

Hello there, I have a few things I'd love to mention as I believe this would improve the map.

[General]
  1. Paired colours (1-2),(3-4),(5-6) are way too similar this is confusing and should be avoided. Try adding red colours or using dimmed colours for the slower part and brighter ones for a faster one? this would work better. I'll make them easier to differentiate. I'm kinda bad with colors.
    Just to name a few examples, 00:50:774 (5,6,1) - this on Apple's Insane.
    01:19:738 (6,1,2,3) - Normal
  2. Normal-hitfinish.wav is 5 seconds long. Isn't that a bit way too long? I would recommend to make it shorter, so that hitsounds wouldn't overlap.
    For example, the problem happens 01:39:393 (1) - here on Normal and the mix of hitsounds creates a noisy feel, that does not belong to the original song. I think it fits the song really well, and it doesn't feel noisy or anything. I thought it kinda blends in with it. It just feels smooth imo so i'm going to keep the hitsound..
  3. Why not use Slider Tick Rate 2 for Hard, Insane and Divine? The difficulties use intense 1/2 rhythm and the song perfectly supports Tick Rate as it provides consistent 1/2 background beat. ok all difficulties set to 2 except easy.
[Easy]
  1. 01:48:014 (2) - 01:12:152 (2,2) - the sudden and agressive curves do not go well with the nature of the difficulty's rhythm. Please, try to avoid them by softening the curves? Example all sharp curves changed.
    Note: this will also help you to get rid of a sudden and agressive angle, making things feel slightly more enjoyable to the player.
[HOS's Hard]
  1. 00:57:324 (7,8) - is there any reason why the sliders that are so similar is sound and rhythm are shaped completely differently? It's a very minor thing, but I'd prefer to have them curved in the same way. his answer (he said ok)
Hope this helps! it did hehe xd sorry it took so long
thanks Bakari, Desp. Also, thanks for the sad faces emote guys hehe xd
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allein
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pishifat
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call me back !!
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Hey, I was doing just fine before I met you
I drink too much and that's an issue
But I'm OK
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apple

01:38:689 (1,4) - not sure if you intended this or what but... is that a non-stacked object or it is a variation of an overlap from the previous patterns?

you

01:05:930 (4) - could you not stack it with 01:05:413 (2) - so it's consistent along with 01:10:930 (2,4) - ? looks sick without the stack, y'know
01:20:241 (2,3) - this is some sick anti-jump compared to (1,2) and (3,4). in case you wanna keep it, you could try nc'ing the current (4) so it's some cool nc'ing b)
01:36:965 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm is quite vague here, not because of your 1/2 placement of course, but in the bgm. i'd suggest you some sort of slider to follow the vocals or smth similar. to be hoenst, the current pattern is just too poor
01:38:689 (1,2,1,2) - do you remember the doubles at the very beginning of the map? imo, players (yehaaa, this happened to me while playing the map!!!) can misread these as 1/4s, so making them different from the ones on the beginning would be something cool!

call me back !!
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Yes, they were intentional ^^'

Thanks for modding!
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A Wild Yuii Appears!

Yuii- wrote:

you

01:05:930 (4) - could you not stack it with 01:05:413 (2) - so it's consistent along with 01:10:930 (2,4) - ? looks sick without the stack, y'know yes
01:20:241 (2,3) - this is some sick anti-jump compared to (1,2) and (3,4). in case you wanna keep it, you could try nc'ing the current (4) so it's some cool nc'ing b) it doesn't call for it enough imo. it's not a 123 pattern type of deal even if it might seem like it.
01:36:965 (2,3,4,5) - rhythm is quite vague here, not because of your 1/2 placement of course, but in the bgm. i'd suggest you some sort of slider to follow the vocals or smth similar. to be hoenst, the current pattern is just too poor sure
01:38:689 (1,2,1,2) - do you remember the doubles at the very beginning of the map? imo, players (yehaaa, this happened to me while playing the map!!!) can misread these as 1/4s, so making them different from the ones on the beginning would be something cool! ehh i'll just stack em.

call me back !!
thank <3
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Anime in 2016 LUL
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Grats kak🎉
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Grats Bearizm~
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Nice job Bearizm, and gratz :D
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Thank you everyone! esp. pishi & Yuii :) Modded on their own accord hOly

Spork Lover wrote:

Nice job Bearizm, and gratz :D
DENMARK

edit: I see you Milan <3
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Congratz!!
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boosted animal
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Doesn't it matter if this mapset still using background that never related to the song even though it's in qualified section?
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Grats!! ~
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wo congrats !! ♥
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I thought you'd map better than this rofl.
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iWinnie wrote:

I thought you'd map better than this rofl.
sorry I never claimed to be a good mapper.
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Enon wrote:

Doesn't it matter if this mapset still using background that never related to the song even though it's in qualified section?
✓ Inserted random animu background
Bearizm
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my god u guys.. this song has no source whatsoever I believe I have the freedom to choose. The composition and colors in this picture seems perfect for this song. I look at these pictures as artworks, not necessarily anime or whatever u weebs watch lul.

I cba to requal if it gets dq'd cuz some people moans too much about the bg.
Enon
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the bg is overly colorful compared to the mood of the song in my opinion............
Bearizm
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it's like 85% sky blue - white...
BounceBabe
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General

> BG image is random and completely unrelated to the song. Researched a bit, seems like the BG comes from a digital novel. Idk japanese tho so just leaving this here: http://www.lose.jp/maitetsu/story/ So yes, it does not fit.
> You mapped less than 80% of the song and the intro is really long. You should size down it's length as no difficulty mapped the first 25% of the song and you also have no video or SB that would explain why you started mapping at 00:33:173 - and not 00:11:104 - for example where there also are vocals. Every difficulty starts at 00:33:173 -except the hardest that has a spinner 00:30:414 - which is a weird introduction too.
> The difficulty level gap between Hard and Insane is big due to the Insane having so many spacing variation, changes and partially randomly placed elements to create none fitting jumps. Not to mention the inconsistent spacing in Insane. Compared to the Hard difficulty, the Insane is a lot more vibrant in gameplay, whereas the Hard is really consistent. The Insane makes the Hard look too easy. This should be polished up a bit more before this goes ranked.

Easy

00:39:552 (2,3) - Rhythm is weird here. It's mapped to the violin and guitar. 00:38:690 (1,2,3) - It's difficult to distinguish when to click and when to pause because it doesn't quite match with the violin only. I expected that this is mapped to the violin only. The violin stroke is from 00:38:690 - to 00:39:552 - . This would be a more appropriate rhythm http://puu.sh/rhG5G/ec0c35df7a.jpg as it's more readable for beginners. The guitar in the BG is also very faint in relation to the circle at 00:39:552 (2) - that matches it. I wouldn't recommend mixing them as it's really hard to discern when to click next / what instrument to follow, especially for beginners.. Beats also start at 00:44:207 - which makes it easier to follow the song. Same here 00:33:173 (1,2,3) -
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BounceBabe wrote:

General

> BG image is random and completely unrelated to the song. Researched a bit, seems like the BG comes from a digital novel. Idk japanese tho so just leaving this here: http://www.lose.jp/maitetsu/story/ So yes, it does not fit. Yup, he could try to find a more related one.
> You mapped less than 80% of the song and the intro is really long. You should size down it's length as no difficulty mapped the first 25% of the song and you also have no video or SB that would explain why you started mapping at 00:33:173 - and not 00:11:104 - for example where there also are vocals. Every difficulty starts at 00:33:173 -except the hardest that has a spinner 00:30:414 - which is a weird introduction too. Actually "You should map at least 80% of the mp3" is only about the outro if you're referring to the RC. It's kind of a waste of mp3 to not mapping the first part for that long, but still I think preserving the whole mp3 doesn't hurt much, as some people would like to have the full mp3 even if it is not mapped. About the first spinner thing seems weird to me too, so we can listen what the mapper says about it.
> The difficulty level gap between Hard and Insane is big due to the Insane having so many spacing variation, changes and partially randomly placed elements to create none fitting jumps. Not to mention the inconsistent spacing in Insane. Compared to the Hard difficulty, the Insane is a lot more vibrant in gameplay, whereas the Hard is really consistent. The Insane makes the Hard look too easy. This should be polished up a bit more before this goes ranked. imo it's fine in my eyes. I think the spacing variation is what makes the difference between Hard and Insane. Each difficulty has its own 'dimension' that's noticeably easier/harder than other diffs, and I think this spread is doing that fine. Hard has mostly consistent ds but still has some variations like 01:05:585 (6,7) - 01:11:103 (6,7,1) - 01:38:689 (1,2,1) - etc and I think that's enough introduction as a Hard. Its base ds is pretty high as well. Insane has inconsistent spacing, but it's not like fullscreen jump or anything. Is it hard to read because of that, for players who would play Insane? I don't think so.

Easy

00:39:552 (2,3) - Rhythm is weird here. It's mapped to the violin and guitar. 00:38:690 (1,2,3) - It's difficult to distinguish when to click and when to pause because it doesn't quite match with the violin only. I expected that this is mapped to the violin only. The violin stroke is from 00:38:690 - to 00:39:552 - . This would be a more appropriate rhythm http://puu.sh/rhG5G/ec0c35df7a.jpg as it's more readable for beginners. The guitar in the BG is also very faint in relation to the circle at 00:39:552 (2) - that matches it. I wouldn't recommend mixing them as it's really hard to discern when to click next / what instrument to follow, especially for beginners.. Beats also start at 00:44:207 - which makes it easier to follow the song. Same here 00:33:173 (1,2,3) - I know what you're trying to say but the example you gave is not easily readable for beginners at all. The hardest rhythm that can exist on an Easy diff is 3/2 rhythms, because that's hard to expect and requires rhythmic transition to players. When it comes to a gap, it becomes much much harder. Even maintaining basic 1/1 beats is pretty hard for newbies, and by using 3/2 gaps (and even using a circle for the next note) would really throw their accuracy away. There's no way they can read them properly only using approach circles and spacing.
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