bmin11 wrote:

[Insane]
00:24:036 (4) - 1 grid to the right. It really does look different from 1,2 <thanks
00:24:575 (6) - 1 grid down. Same reason < thanks
00:33:018 (4) - Move this so it doesn't overlap with 2. You don't have to fix it though < ah no fix it's only a little and can see most of slider
00:59:066 (9) - a bit confusing.... you might want to move that somewhere else <no it's not hard at all for insane lv player
02:35:713 (1) - Place the timing section right on the end of the spinner. < i want end of the spinner volume low a bit that's why
02:38:408 (5) - Change it to Soft Finish or change other Soft finishs into Normal Finish < no

[Normal+]
00:59:426 (1) - Spacing. This could be confusing with the previous note < thanks

[Easy]
00:09:845 (2) - Spacing < thankyou
02:37:150 (1,2) - Change it to Soft Finish or change other Soft finishs into Normal Finish < no
03:00:503 (1) - this could be hard for new players. You may want to fix that < move closer to center

three [I] could be a problem for a map set. I'm not too sure about this issue so ask a MAT or a BAT < judge form feeling while play not star rating i think indyinyou diff is hard but that's must still need MAT or BAT to check Thankyou verymuch

bmin11 wrote:

[Insane]

[vincerio]
00:01:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - with such low AC, it's quite hard to read the pattern. Might want to fix that issue
00:10:204 (1) - This jump feels disconnected with the song. It doesn't follow it. I highly recommend you to fix it
00:50:443 (1) - Spacing. It's confusing and hard to predict -> no need to predict with this low AR...
01:25:294 (1) - Please don't place any timing section right on top a note -> fix
01:39:126 (1,2,3,4) - uh..... ya, nvm. Keep it if you like that pattern

vincerio wrote:

hi hi

bmin11 wrote:

[Insane]

[vincerio]
00:01:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - with such low AC, it's quite hard to read the pattern. Might want to fix that issue
00:10:204 (1) - This jump feels disconnected with the song. It doesn't follow it. I highly recommend you to fix it
00:50:443 (1) - Spacing. It's confusing and hard to predict -> no need to predict with this low AR...
01:25:294 (1) - Please don't place any timing section right on top a note -> fix
01:39:126 (1,2,3,4) - uh..... ya, nvm. Keep it if you like that pattern

thanks~

[attachment=0:f402c]Hashimoto Miyuki - L (regenz) [vincerio's loliloli].osu[/attachment:f402c]

wanhyrzh wrote:

Hi~Here's my mod. Sorry for late...
You may know that these re just my OWN OPINIONs, so feel free to take some or not~
Now let's go!

Easy:
you left too many long-white-lines without any notes, that may make the player feel weird something. Try to consider this but I'll not point them out in the bellow because they are too many;_; < want to reduce a difficult star.
00:09:845(2) maybe a slider from 00:09:485 to 00:09:845 instead of this note? if you do this, also change 00:11:282(5) to a slider from 00:11:282 to 00:11:641 < only first
00:28:168(2) add one more reverse? < no
01:12:360(1) why not make the spinner here: 01:13:797(or 01:13:617)~01:15:952, hten add some notes to fill up the time the spinner used to be? < no
02:00:324(2,3) I strongly suggest you to change these two notes to a slider, for it's very confusing, especially to the beginners. <change position no for slider not fit

Normal+:
00:01:941(1) wow too many reverses, maybe stop this slider at 00:02:839, then add 3 notes at 00:03:018, 00:03:198, 00:03:378? < superb
00:04:545(T) volumn -1 < no
00:06:162(T) volumn -2 < no
00:07:420(T) volumn -5 < no
00:26:372(1) change this note to a slider from here to 00:26:551? < no
00:42:719(x) add a note? < no( it's a bit too hard)
00:46:132(1) why not start at 00:45:952? < too sudden
01:30:144(x) add a note? < no
01:37:330(2) add a reverse? < no
01:38:408(4) change this note to a slider like 01:38:048(3)? < no
02:44:695(x) add a note? < no
02:51:162(1) add one more reverse? < no
02:52:599(4) delete this note and add one more reverse at 02:52:060(3)? < no
02:52:779(x) add a note? < i don't plan to make it's more hard sorry
02:52:958(5) delete then add a note at 02:52:138 < no

Insane:
Good job.
But still the KIAI issue: the end time of the last KIAI are not at the long-thite line. What's more, you are more strongly asked to make the same KIAI as Easy and Normal+ for these 3 are all your own diffs. < this is very helpfull so i forgot make it same as indy and loli now

Good enough for rank compared to some ranked maps imo, so have a star~
Good luck with this! << thank you for mod my map.

tetsutaro wrote:

Sorry for the late mod-for-mod! I think I will focus on the general style of the diffs.

Insane (I failed in 0.3 minute, so I went thru it by Autoplay)
Even with Autoplay, for more than 25% of the play length the Kiai bar is not full enough (filled >80%)
Think about lowering the drain rate, coz this imposes great difficulty to players of even next to perfect skills.
Stacked items is... erm... weird, some have long gaps that is totally strange to have w.r.t. to the quick pace of the diff.

vincerio's loliloli
Nothing wrong that I can see, even though I can't pass it.

31's Taiko
Lower part of the screen is pitch-black. Fix this with perhaps another pic.
< I hope this is ok now

PS 888-combo, nice number~

Normal+
The first 6 hits are awfully close to be seen. Separate them. < newcombo
Better if replace those short, returning sliders with longer but one-way ones. Not beginner-friendly.
(Even if you want it returning, please make it run at most twice the length. This goes for Easy too)

Easy
OK

If this map wasn't the kind that new osu! players should touch, it has nothing wrong with it and you can forget the above suggestions.
Anyhow, Here's the star for the work.
PS Nice to have a different pic for every diff.
PPS Sorry that I suck at playing to give you any more useful suggestions.

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
Neat to play :3

[Normal+]
00:03:378 (3,4,5) - I dunno but anti-jump might not be good on [Normal] :3 < i don't want to anti-jump but it's my mistake thanks.

[Insane]
14.7mil :3... Wonder orz

Good thing :3
Wonder if this modding would work ;_; < it's work

Rukarioman wrote:

Easy:
00:12:000 (1,1) - Having notes so short after a spinner is really bad for an easy map because it's hard to predict for a beginner player.< change spinner to new pattern
02:03:018 (5) - Add a repeat? <ok

Normal+:
01:30:144 - Add a note here to follow the lyrics better? fix <ok
At parts I thought this diff was a Hard diff really. The difficulty jump between Easy and Normal+ is pretty big. Just saying. < can't do much things and i think sliders are easier than pure note tripple.

Insane:
00:10:923 - Add a note here to follow the lyrics better? <no
01:30:144 - ^ <ok
01:41:821 (6) - Add a repeat? <ok

Pretty nice mapset. < thanks

aspara wrote:

Nice diffs!!

Ganbatte kudasai

Lissette wrote:

Insane
00:59:066 (9) - wrong spacing
02:06:252 (1) - plays better if you unstack
02:33:917 (2,3) - move half beat later

indyinyou's Hard
00:16:495 - useless timing section
00:26:551 - same
03:00:234 - same

I'll come back to mod Easy and Normal+ ^^

Star~

EDIT: sorry for the delay, i did forgot D:

Normal+
01:53:318 (3,4) - make them a slider like next 5

Easy
00:48:647 (2,3) - sounds better like this
01:25:294 - useless timing section
02:27:000 - same
02:27:090 (6) - new combo
02:28:527 (1) - remove new combo
02:29:964 - new combo
03:00:503 (1) - too near to the spinner for an easy