Dynamix wrote:

M4M

Hard
01:39:121 (4,5,6,7) - 这个地方可能不太保险，尽量换成等距的
01:45:761 (5,1) - 距离太远了
01:47:974 (1,2,3) - 这三个距离怎么又不一样 Hard不是normal，没问题啦
02:07:646 (1,1) - 不如就一个转盘吧 就这样吧
Rolling
00:01:744 (1,2,3) - 不是正三角形看着不爽（晚期三角能量癌 keep
00:18:466 (4,2) - 这俩不blanket看着不爽（晚期blanket癌 keep
00:20:187 (4,6) - note真的没有叠上尾部吗。。 fixed
后面真的好看多了。。。
00:56:826 (1,2,3,4) - 这地方不太好打，建议换成1/2滑条 keep，不过改形状了
01:00:269 (5,1) - 同上（其实不改也好
后面还有些不过不用改当我没说
（以上是废话
02:03:220 (7,8,1) - 这个跳不是很舒服 改xinely摸改了这里，不知道你摸的是哪个版本，现在应该ok

_vanity wrote:

Hello!

[Hard]

1. 00:07:646 (1,2,3) - Repeat the rhythm you used at 00:05:679 (1,2,3) - i wanna make some change
2. 00:26:088 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
3. 00:28:056 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:41:088 (1,2) - Ctrl+G 00:41:088 (1,2) - and 00:41:826 (3,4) - This sounds and plays a lot nicer. all keep

[Rolling]

1. 00:56:826 (1,2,3,4) - This is only a suggestion, but I think you should place the hitcircles at the tail of the slider, while still using the appropriate distance snap. ok
2. I really liked this difficulty. It flows very nicely. Nothing too much to say about this one.

[]

Good luck!

- Frontier - wrote:

From ur modding queue

[Hard]
Looks Great !!

[Rolling]
00:02:728 (3) - imo ctrl+g is better keep
01:08:629 (1) - not completely blanket 01:08:138 (5) fixed

Very Good Map !! Good luck !!

sahuang wrote:

M4M

[General]

1. 不用drum-sliderslide? 不用
2. 虽然不是必须的但是感觉这首歌曲结束的时间3个diff最好还是统一一下？建议rizia的最后加上转盘到你的diff结尾时间点

[Hard]

1. 00:13:302 (4,4,4) - 按照前面的下法这边第8拍是没必要下的，可以删掉 太单调
2. 00:45:023 (1,4) - 建议不要overlap 就这样吧
3. 01:21:416 (3,4,5,6) - 不是很美观。。 还好
4. 01:42:318 (2,5) - 叠好吧？ 应该已经叠好了的

[Rolling]

1. 不考虑cs4吗 无所谓吧
2. 00:05:679 (1,2) - 只有这个是叠在滑条尾的？还是出来吧 好
3. 00:24:859 (4,5,1) - 5,1音比4,5还低，照道理应该距离近 这里首先考虑的是重音加ds
4. 00:27:564 (2,3,4) - 这边3,4也应该大 这个确实，但前后各种三角 包 叠，难改，这样吧
5. 00:56:826 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看。。 改
6. 02:03:711 (1,1,2,1) - 这结尾和hard貌似差不多。。不考虑改改？ 一样就对了

等我图好了找你

GL for rank!

Rizia wrote:

00:19:449 (1,2) - i want follw vocal and drum in same time, that feel more good to me

thanks for mod!

@creator: please add my name to tag! Rizia kawaiwkyik

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232,232,115843,6,0,P|272:212|344:220,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,232,116580,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,244,116826,2,0,L|412:124,1,100,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,64,117810,6,0,P|436:44|364:52,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,68,118547,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,104,118793,2,0,L|200:97,1,100,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,128,119777,6,0,P|96:76|96:8,2,100,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,168,121006,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,216,121252,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,316,121744,6,0,L|200:304,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,296,122482,1,6,0:0:0:0:
292,292,122728,2,0,P|342:292|386:314,1,100,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,123711,12,6,125679,0:0:0:0:
208,144,127154,6,0,B|256:128|256:128|304:144,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

Pata-Mon wrote:

Xinely wrote:

m4m

• 
  Hard

1. 00:01:744 (1) - same as normal, same for 00:17:482 (1) - 00:33:220 (1) - 00:48:957 - 00:56:826 (1) - 01:46:006 (1) - (all head tail repeat) 01:06:662 - 02:07:646 - same as 00:01:744 (1) - too (do for your insane too) ill consider about hitsound later i stongly suggest this since drum hitsound feels too light for crash cymbal, also for consistency with rizia
2. 02:02:236 (3,4,5,6) - can do better circular flow and shape https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4913859 我再想想waiting u to consider again

• 
  Insane

1. 00:26:334 (4) - overlap doesnt look good for me. you can do blanket instead (beware with offscreen) 就因为这个位置包起来有些问题……我再想想吧 strong suggest this because its ugly
2. 00:15:884 (3) - i think you better remove this since the snap of music looks like 1/6 感觉这种几乎听不清的声音……其实可以理解为我想在这里overmap，打起来应该没什么问题吧我觉得=w= strongly suggest to remove.. since its not good overmap for me. also can be a dq reason because wrong snap
3. 01:06:170 (7) - blanket please </3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4913898 那样ds会有点大，我想想 ds doesnt matter. its easy to play
4. 01:22:154 (7) - spacing looks quite low, i would say move to 248,168 因为这个音很轻，我觉得没问题 even norml ds. should use 1,3x for consitency
5. 01:36:539 (3) - overmap, remove pls 确实overmap，不过还是感觉打起来似乎还好。这些地方我再看看更多人的意见吧 but its clearly an overmap
6. 01:37:646 (6) - same as hard
7. 01:40:105 (1) - overlap looks bad, move to 168,232 pls 啊……现在所有滑条后的1/4间隔我全都用的这个ds，强迫症不太想改- - then try improve your slider's flow example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4929001
8. 01:43:793 (7) - looks like stack cant work well for me. i prefer move to 344,20 to keep the flow 这图里这种叠用得不少，都是第二个上的音比较轻，所以不太想动
9. 01:54:244 (3) - 01:56:211 (2) - overmap (( (2) since they are clearly overmaps

find more mods and 12 SP, after that feel free to call me back

Xinely wrote:

recheck

m4m

• 
  Hard

1. 00:01:744 (1) - same as normal, same for 00:17:482 (1) - 00:33:220 (1) - 00:48:957 - 00:56:826 (1) - 01:46:006 (1) - (all head tail repeat) 01:06:662 - 02:07:646 - same as 00:01:744 (1) - too (do for your insane too) ill consider about hitsound later i stongly suggest this since drum hitsound feels too light for crash cymbal, also for consistency with rizia
   //我个人强迫症比较重，原曲没有明显的锣声，然后我觉得soft finish也有点吵，音效还是想保持
2. 02:02:236 (3,4,5,6) - can do better circular flow and shape https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4913859 我再想想waiting u to consider again //改了

• 
  Insane

1. 00:26:334 (4) - overlap doesnt look good for me. you can do blanket instead (beware with offscreen) 就因为这个位置包起来有些问题……我再想想吧 strong suggest this because its ugly //改了
2. 00:15:884 (3) - i think you better remove this since the snap of music looks like 1/6 感觉这种几乎听不清的声音……其实可以理解为我想在这里overmap，打起来应该没什么问题吧我觉得=w= strongly suggest to remove.. since its not good overmap for me. also can be a dq reason because wrong snap //改了
3. 01:06:170 (7) - blanket please </3 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4913898 那样ds会有点大，我想想 ds doesnt matter. its easy to play //改了
4. 01:22:154 (7) - spacing looks quite low, i would say move to 248,168 因为这个音很轻，我觉得没问题 even norml ds. should use 1,3x for consitency //不过这里有一个叠01:20:925 (3,7) - ，这样排列会更好看，这个低ds也不会对玩家造成打图或者读图的困扰，我觉得可以保留
5. 01:36:539 (3) - overmap, remove pls 确实overmap，不过还是感觉打起来似乎还好。这些地方我再看看更多人的意见吧 but its clearly an overmap //改了
6. 01:37:646 (6) - same as hard
7. 01:40:105 (1) - overlap looks bad, move to 168,232 pls 啊……现在所有滑条后的1/4间隔我全都用的这个ds，强迫症不太想改- - then try improve your slider's flow example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4929001 //我确实觉得这些地方的flow都还好0.0
8. 01:43:793 (7) - looks like stack cant work well for me. i prefer move to 344,20 to keep the flow 这图里这种叠用得不少，都是第二个上的音比较轻，所以不太想动
9. 01:54:244 (3) - 01:56:211 (2) - overmap (( (2) since they are clearly overmaps //改了

find more mods and 12 SP, after that feel free to call me back



and please make OD Normal to Hard with better gap.. 2,5 to 6 are faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar away which makes bad gao for me ( suggest Hard OD 5,5 and Normal OD 3) //我会跟他说考虑改高到3-4，hard我不太想动，参考图包括https://osu.ppy.sh/s/208112和https://osu.ppy.sh/s/172055

normal :
00:34:941 (3) - since no reply idk why u keep so i think you still can nerf a bit with remove this only.. its a quite complex rhythm for easiest diff imo



also metadata link please
//找官网对我来说稍有费劲，我主要参考是这个网站，他的准确率应该是相当高的：http://bangumi.tv/subject/123597
动画：http://bangumi.tv/subject/110600

Xinely wrote:

Bubbled ~

2016-04-20 23:49 smallboat: rolling的01:12:564 (1) - 這要不要ctrl+g啊
2016-04-20 23:50 Pata-Mon: 方向是顺着音高的
2016-04-20 23:50 Pata-Mon: 不过似乎确实放远点更好
2016-04-20 23:50 Pata-Mon: 我放远点
2016-04-20 23:51 Pata-Mon: 好了
2016-04-20 23:52 smallboat: 恩可以updat了
2016-04-20 23:52 Pata-Mon: 传完了

smallboat wrote:

IRC mod with mapper, just change a pattern issue. And nothing to say.

Qualified

2016-04-20 23:49 smallboat: rolling的01:12:564 (1) - 這要不要ctrl+g啊
2016-04-20 23:50 Pata-Mon: 方向是顺着音高的
2016-04-20 23:50 Pata-Mon: 不过似乎确实放远点更好
2016-04-20 23:50 Pata-Mon: 我放远点
2016-04-20 23:51 Pata-Mon: 好了
2016-04-20 23:52 smallboat: 恩可以updat了
2016-04-20 23:52 Pata-Mon: 传完了

Xinely wrote:

Wtf so fast. Congrats

1. 01:51:908(1)- This slider feels so sloopy here and also it plays kinda bad in my point of view.Try to make something not really sloopy but to play good enough
2. 01:57:318(6)- Same goes to this slider too.It feels sloopy and it plays bad too.As I said above, try to make something which result a good play.You can try a curved slider too but not in a sloopy way
3. 02:00:515(3)- This note is overlapping with 01:59:777(1)- which it does not look so good in my opinion.Try to move a bit up to like 244|16 to avoid the unpleasant overlapping plus placed there, the note will still emphasize the vocals by the jump between this note and the previous one
4. 02:03:220(7,8)- At (8)- appears a sound which is a bit stronger but still needs some emphasis and I'm quite dissapointed because you used an antijump while there is a stronger sound (sounds more like a high pitch) at (8)-.Moreover, it plays pretty bad in my opinion.You can do a jump here just to emphasize the high pitch from (8)- so it will make more sense rather than an antijump

1. 01:39:613(6,1)- I think you can avoid this overlap moving (1)- a bit up because this overlap looks kinda unpleasant in my opinion
2. 01:40:843(3,5)- This note (3)- can be stacked properly with (5)-'s tail I suppose
3. 01:42:318(2,5)- Same goes here.This note (2)- can be stacked properly with (5)-'s tail

1. 00:50:433(3,1)- These notes are touching the HP bar as you can see in this picture http://puu.sh/opsrZ/5d27659787.jpg with default skin.You can move them a bit down so you will avoid touching the HP bar

ByBy13 wrote:

Greetings! Congratulations on qualify but I have something to say about your beatmap:

Rolling:

1. 01:51:908(1)- This slider feels so sloopy here and also it plays kinda bad in my point of view.Try to make something not really sloopy but to play good enough I think it's ok
2. 01:57:318(6)- Same goes to this slider too.It feels sloopy and it plays bad too.As I said above, try to make something which result a good play.You can try a curved slider too but not in a sloopy way
3. 02:00:515(3)- This note is overlapping with 01:59:777(1)- which it does not look so good in my opinion.Try to move a bit up to like 244|16 to avoid the unpleasant overlapping plus placed there, the note will still emphasize the vocals by the jump between this note and the previous one now 01:59:777 (1,2,3) - is symmetry, i overlaped on purpose
4. 02:03:220(7,8)- At (8)- appears a sound which is a bit stronger but still needs some emphasis and I'm quite dissapointed because you used an antijump while there is a stronger sound (sounds more like a high pitch) at (8)-.Moreover, it plays pretty bad in my opinion.You can do a jump here just to emphasize the high pitch from (8)- so it will make more sense rather than an antijump but I really think 8 is soft

Hard:

1. 01:39:613(6,1)- I think you can avoid this overlap moving (1)- a bit up because this overlap looks kinda unpleasant in my opinion then ds would be to large
2. 01:40:843(3,5)- This note (3)- can be stacked properly with (5)-'s tail I suppose
3. 01:42:318(2,5)- Same goes here.This note (2)- can be stacked properly with (5)-'s tail I think they already did

Good luck nonetheless.

Sonnyc wrote:

Was gonna leave some extra input but seems you've already replied but whatever. Take this as a feedback for your map. :3

Hard.
00:22:400 (3,4) - 01:47:974 (1,2) - These upbeat jumps felt quite inconsistent considering the overall jump usage in this diff. Most were downbeat jumps, and these weren't something special in music to break your consistency imo.
00:47:974 (3,4) - 01:37:154 (3,4) - Another consistency issue. Maybe you wanted some emphasis at the later 3/4 sliders, but since the music is basically similar, using different rhythms wasn't cool enough.

thanks, I'll remember ur word though i think there are no problem with these jumps and rhythms

Nothing directly unrankable spotted. gl

ZZHBOY wrote:

刁

ByBy13 wrote:

Well, congratulations on getting it ranked! xD