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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 26 de junio de 2019 at 7:28:22 p. m.

Artist: Indivision & Echo Inada
Title: Around the World
Tags: dnb indivision ATW echo inada
BPM: 174
Filesize: 13770kb
Play Time: 05:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. With You (5,55 stars, 1370 notes)


Download: Indivision & Echo Inada - Around the World
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Around the World



Re download after: 25/04/2019
Reason: .mp3 changed, new background, difficult name changed, added storyboard!


Ready for mods!


Wanna take you far from here, to a place where we believed <3


- ErunamoJAZZ
- Daoski
- Itasha_S13
- Maq
- Wyatt
- Abanes16
- Shishou
- Qapitol
- Fanteer
- Quinten
- Agrrox
- Yezplz
- Shino Inuzuka
- Reihara
- Unknown Guest
- Sicronizadas
- Rin Desu
- HappyRocket88
- The Journey
- Skytech98
posted
Hello~
Here the timing:


1. Offset: 124ms BPM: 174,00




No creo que necesités más timing points, con uno es suficiente, aun así, cuando termines el mapa y busques mods, habrán más opiniones al respecto.

Suerte!
posted
oi ;D
01:00:804 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - combo sequence should be 1-2-3-4 1-2-3-4 for all
01:04:942 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - new combo at first note and starting stream at red tick?? awkward
00:47:011 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - should be the same as 02:59:425 (3,4,5,6,7) - because u have 1 too many circles there lol
01:25:632 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4) - jumps COULD be 1-2 1-2 1-2 1-2 but can also work 1-2-3-4 1-2-3-4
02:56:666 (1) - shrink it to red tick. its a bit too long
03:02:184 (1) - same problem as 02:56:666 (1) -
03:03:562 (3,4,5) - should be 1 long slider? copy and paste carelessness B) mistimed
03:06:838 (6,7,8,9,10) - random tapping much? should be slider
03:17:356 (10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - another stream on a red tick? awkward
03:13:218 (8,9) - feels inconsistent.. should be the same as the note spacing that comes after it
03:30:115 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1) - gradually lower hitsound volume please hurts my ears lol x.x

most of your new combo placements are pretty strange but thatll be for another time ;_;
posted
Heyy Kalvin


Fix DS in the whole map
00:20:977 (5,3) - delete these
00:38:735 (4) - NC
00:41:494 (5) - NC here instead of 00:41:666 (1) -
00:44:252 (17) - wooahh that spacing, fix it
00:44:252 (17) - end this slider @ 00:45:115 -
00:48:218 (4) - the distance between the slider end and this circle its too large
00:53:735 (2,3,1,2) - totally off the beat, change this
00:55:287 (3) - NC
00:54:425 (1) - remove NC
01:02:183 (1) - remove NC
01:04:942 (2) - NC here instead of 01:04:770 (1) -
01:23:218 (5) - NC instead of 01:23:908 (1) -
01:25:632 (6) - NC instead of 01:26:321 (1) -
01:43:735 (1,2,3,4) - why you have clap on every circle except these?
01:56:666 (4) - remove this whistle.. ?
02:05:804 (4) - ^ also, you should change this slider because youre missing a strong beat here 02:05:977 -
02:22:872 (9) - NC?
02:31:839 (4) - fix the end or beginning of this shape to make them the same
02:39:770 (6) - NC
03:00:804 (4,5,6) - why drum on these?
03:01:494 (8) - end the slider at white tick
03:03:562 (3,4) - remove these and move the slider to 03:03:563 -
03:04:942 (1) - remove NC
03:06:148 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I don't know which rythm are you following here.. remove this and map something that actually fits the music
03:09:080 (1,1,1) - No need NC on these
03:13:218 (1,2) - DS pls
03:30:115 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1) - reduce the volume in this whole section


overall.... Use DS, this map has a lot of inconsistency
posted
m4m from modreqs
Asia
00:11:321 (2) - Kind of a strong note on the white tick in this note, maybe consider a circle + shorter slider?
00:14:080 (3) - ^
Happens a few more times through what is mapped so far

America
00:44:252 (17) - NC
00:45:459 (1,2) - Put these two closer together, it's a slower parts so a distance of 2.23 seems a bit much
00:48:218 (4,5,6,7) - Again, it's a slower part, so flow is especially important. I would just make this something like this: http://prntscr.com/bgyy5a (bit sloppy, just as long as DS is equal) More info on flow here: https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941
00:50:632 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:53:735 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try sliders here instead or again just a better flow of notes
01:16:666 (12) - NC
01:18:390 (3) - Kinda picky, but this note should look more like 01:17:701 (1,2) -
01:23:218 (1,2,3,4) - Evenly DS
01:39:424 (20,1) - Getting to the (1) is a bit awkward and kinda ruins the flow you have going. Maybe have 01:39:597 (1,2) - close to the x-axis line on the right side of the area (if that makes sense xd)
01:49:080 (6) - NC (?)
01:54:252 (5) - Kind of an ugly slider, make it less curved and face up a bit more
02:06:494 (8,9) - Circles are too close considering the pattern going on here
02:39:770 (6) - NC
02:57:873 (1,2) - Same as earlier, make these closer
03:02:184 (1,3) - Perhaps blanket these and make 03:03:046 (2,3,4) - like this http://prntscr.com/bgz0xv (again sloppy, make sure DS is even) for the sake of flow
03:04:942 (6) - NC
03:18:045 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - I see what you're trying to do here, but it's kinda done sloppily. Make slight variations of DS between each note so it makes more sense
03:29:080 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - ^
03:35:632 (1) - Move to 03:35:459
03:35:632 (1) - Dont end this with that 'ting' sounds, just a regular hitsound is fine

map for m4m: t/452895

GL with this map! :D
posted
00:07:528 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - You use this stair pattern quite often. It plays well but is over used see (00:13:218 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:19:252 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - , 00:26:494 (5,6,1,2) - , 00:35:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , 00:53:735 (2,3,4,5,6) - , 01:11:149 (5,6,1,2) - , 01:43:046 (4,5,6,7) - , 03:23:563 (5,6,1,2) - )

00:21:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sequence is a little weird to read, if others mentions maybe consider re-timing it.

00:42:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - This stream could probably use a new combo somewhere in the middle.

01:19:080 (6) - This slider has a different shape than the others around it.

01:35:287 (1,2) - This slider leading into this set of jumps is a bit weird, i think angling it towards the jumps even just slightly would make it read better.

03:18:649 (16,17) - The last note in this stream feels really awkward because it jerks to the right. (03:17:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - also probably break this up with a new combo.)

Overall I think this map is really good. The other thing major would be how often you use that one pattern. Also you only seem to use it in the biginning of the song. Good luck getting ranked.
posted

Maq wrote:

m4m from modreqs
Asia
00:11:321 (2) - Kind of a strong note on the white tick in this note, maybe consider a circle + shorter slider?
00:14:080 (3) - ^
Happens a few more times through what is mapped so far

America
00:44:252 (17) - NC / Done
00:45:459 (1,2) - Put these two closer together, it's a slower parts so a distance of 2.23 seems a bit much / Moved the circle closer between the sliders
00:48:218 (4,5,6,7) - Again, it's a slower part, so flow is especially important. I would just make this something like this: http://prntscr.com/bgyy5a (bit sloppy, just as long as DS is equal) More info on flow here: https://osu.ppy.sh/news/61334266941 / More flow has been given
00:50:632 (3,4,5,6) - ^ / Done too
00:53:735 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try sliders here instead or again just a better flow of notes / Moved these circles allowing the flow
01:16:666 (12) - NC / Done
01:18:390 (3) - Kinda picky, but this note should look more like 01:17:701 (1,2) - / Corrected that slider
01:23:218 (1,2,3,4) - Evenly DS / These circles were made closer now
01:39:424 (20,1) - Getting to the (1) is a bit awkward and kinda ruins the flow you have going. Maybe have 01:39:597 (1,2) - close to the x-axis line on the right side of the area (if that makes sense xd) / Moved to right side and fixed some things
01:49:080 (6) - NC (?) / Done
01:54:252 (5) - Kind of an ugly slider, make it less curved and face up a bit more / Deleted and created another better one
02:06:494 (8,9) - Circles are too close considering the pattern going on here / I made a big triangle to solve this
02:39:770 (6) - NC / Done
02:57:873 (1,2) - Same as earlier, make these closer / Also put the circle closer between these sliders
03:02:184 (1,3) - Perhaps blanket these and make 03:03:046 (2,3,4) - like this http://prntscr.com/bgz0xv (again sloppy, make sure DS is even) for the sake of flow / Moved as you suggestion
03:04:942 (6) - NC / Done
03:18:045 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - I see what you're trying to do here, but it's kinda done sloppily. Make slight variations of DS between each note so it makes more sense / Moved circle by circle with DS
03:29:080 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - ^ / Also moved circle by circle with DS
03:35:632 (1) - Move to 03:35:459 / Spinner moved
03:35:632 (1) - Dont end this with that 'ting' sounds, just a regular hitsound is fine / Soft wistle added

map for m4m: t/452895 / I'm working in it

GL with this map! :D/ ← Thank you.
posted

Wyatt wrote:

00:07:528 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - You use this stair pattern quite often. It plays well but is over used see (00:13:218 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:19:252 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - , 00:26:494 (5,6,1,2) - , 00:35:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , 00:53:735 (2,3,4,5,6) - , 01:11:149 (5,6,1,2) - , 01:43:046 (4,5,6,7) - , 03:23:563 (5,6,1,2) - ) / According with you say is over used, is because is a kind of style. If I'm warned again because of this I'm on duty to change it

00:21:149 (1,2,3,4,5) - This sequence is a little weird to read, if others mentions maybe consider re-timing it. / According with song sounds, sequence of the circles is good positioned and matches with song

00:42:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - This stream could probably use a new combo somewhere in the middle. / Done the NC

01:19:080 (6) - This slider has a different shape than the others around it. / Fixed the slider

01:35:287 (1,2) - This slider leading into this set of jumps is a bit weird, i think angling it towards the jumps even just slightly would make it read better. / Changed position of the slider

03:18:649 (16,17) - The last note in this stream feels really awkward because it jerks to the right. (03:17:442 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - also probably break this up with a new combo.) / Is an spaced stream, and it flow with the next slider

Overall I think this map is really good. The other thing major would be how often you use that one pattern. Also you only seem to use it in the biginning of the song. Good luck getting ranked. / ← Thank you.
posted

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Heyy Kalvin


Fix DS in the whole map / Not especially need it :p
00:20:977 (5,3) - delete these / Deleted to match it with song
00:38:735 (4) - NC / Done
00:41:494 (5) - NC here instead of 00:41:666 (1) - / Done
00:44:252 (17) - wooahh that spacing, fix it / Fixed space
00:44:252 (17) - end this slider @ 00:45:115 - / Moved end slider to 00:45:115 -
00:48:218 (4) - the distance between the slider end and this circle its too large /Fixed, now it have flow
00:53:735 (2,3,1,2) - totally off the beat, change this /Here were made an stair
00:55:287 (3) - NC / Done
00:54:425 (1) - remove NC / Done
01:02:183 (1) - remove NC / Done
01:04:942 (2) - NC here instead of 01:04:770 (1) - / Done
01:23:218 (5) - NC instead of 01:23:908 (1) - / Done
01:25:632 (6) - NC instead of 01:26:321 (1) - / Done
01:43:735 (1,2,3,4) - why you have clap on every circle except these? / Because I can't find the right sound for this, this automatically change
01:56:666 (4) - remove this whistle.. ? / Removed wistle
02:05:804 (4) - ^ also, you should change this slider because youre missing a strong beat here 02:05:977 - / Added some little sliders
02:22:872 (9) - NC? / Done
02:31:839 (4) - fix the end or beginning of this shape to make them the same / Changed slider shape
02:39:770 (6) - NC / Done
03:00:804 (4,5,6) - why drum on these? / Because keep bugged or still can't fine the right sound
03:01:494 (8) - end the slider at white tick / Slider shape were made more long
03:03:562 (3,4) - remove these and move the slider to 03:03:563 - / Deleted and moved the slider to 03:03:563
03:04:942 (1) - remove NC / Removed
03:06:148 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I don't know which rythm are you following here.. remove this and map something that actually fits the music / Here was added some sliders
03:09:080 (1,1,1) - No need NC on these / Removed NC
03:13:218 (1,2) - DS pls / DS tight
03:30:115 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1) - reduce the volume in this whole section / Volume reduced consecutively fom 40% to 5%


overall.... Use DS, this map has a lot of inconsistency / ← I'll try to solve this, according with rules of mapping, the order is to talk to a person in english when he/she speaks it, but I speak in spanish, is a good help for me if you try to do it next time ^^ btw, Thank you.
posted
[asia]
00:11:839 (3,1) - stack

00:13:735 (2,3) - fix overlap or blanket

00:14:080 (3,4) - ^

00:20:115 (4,1) - stack

00:22:701 (2,2) - ^

00:27:701 (3) - move this slider here 00:27:873 (3) - then move this 00:28:218 (5) - here 00:28:390 (5) - then put circle a note here 00:27:701 (3) -

00:35:804 (2,3) - blanket

[America]
00:00:115 (1,4) - stack

00:00:977 (5) - distance this a bit to (6) to fix overlap

00:02:701 (1) - remove nc

00:02:873 (8) - nc

00:07:011 (6) - nc

00:16:494 (1) - fix overlap

00:17:701 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - change pattern?

00:22:183 (1,2) - blanket

00:26:839 (1) - remove nc

00:26:321 (1) - nc

00:28:908 (4) - nc

00:34:425 (6) - nc


00:45:459 (2,3) - stack at the end of the slider

00:52:528 (6) - nc

01:02:183 (5) - nc

01:02:701 (1) - remove

01:02:873 (5) - nc

01:10:459 (3,5) - stack it properly

01:14:942 (6) - nc

01:15:459 (1) - remove

01:15:977 (7) - nc

01:55:977 (7,5) - stack?

01:57:011 (5,8) - ^

02:11:149 (7) - lol 1 white tick for this slider will be enough

02:15:287 (5) - nc

02:17:701 (1) - remove

02:18:046 (11) - nc

02:16:149 (1) - remove

02:16:666 (9) - nc

02:18:563 (1) - remove

02:19:425 (9) - nc

02:29:080 (6) - nc

02:35:373 (5) - this slider should end here 02:37:356 (6) -


That's all good luck in ranking your map ^-^
posted
Hello! Nice song. :D

20:52 Qapitol: hello!
20:52 Qapitol: need a mod?
20:52 Seiji: yes
20:52 Qapitol: nice song btw
20:52 Seiji: hi
20:52 Qapitol: both diffs or just 1
20:52 Seiji: Ik :p
20:52 Seiji: 1
20:53 Seiji: America
20:53 Seiji: The other guy gave up
20:53 Qapitol: wowowow
20:53 Qapitol: fkn rip
20:53 Qapitol: mind if i do it in IRC? or should i just post in the thread
20:53 Qapitol: ok
20:56 Qapitol: if i were you
20:58 Qapitol: did you cut the MP3 yourself?
20:58 Seiji: Easy 174 bpm xdx
20:58 Qapitol: xd
20:58 Seiji: No, just yt dl
20:58 Qapitol: ahh ok
20:58 Qapitol: because it ends sorta abruptly
20:58 Qapitol: ill do another testplay
20:58 Qapitol: do you mind if i mod via IRC?
20:59 Qapitol: or should i just do it in the map thread
21:02 Seiji: I got music [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7azOBkAg2rA with this]
21:02 Seiji: thread is a better idea, i don't use so much irc
21:02 Seiji: from this^+*
21:02 Seiji: Stupid pc.. :s
21:02 Seiji: I asked rafis to dt this and he leave me in "seen" xd
21:03 Qapitol: haha
21:03 Qapitol: well its not a bad map
21:03 Qapitol: but just a couple quick notes
21:03 Qapitol: that ill also leave in the mod
21:03 Qapitol: AR is a bit high
21:03 Qapitol: i'd go with 9.3 or 9.4
21:03 Qapitol: and the last 2 streams
21:03 Qapitol: is there a reason they increase in spacing?
21:04 Qapitol: i get that it gets more intense
21:04 Qapitol: but by that logic the other streams should increase as well
21:04 Qapitol: what do you think
21:04 Seiji: Just i added spaced to avoid the streams be bored
21:04 Seiji: I just*
21:04 Seiji: rip english..
21:04 Qapitol: haha
21:05 Qapitol: its fine
21:05 Qapitol: I wouldn't add them to keep it from being boring
21:05 Seiji: So..
21:05 Qapitol: it doesnt make as much sense with the music
21:05 Qapitol: except for the second to last one
21:05 Seiji: I asked some nominators and they told me it's okay xd
21:05 Qapitol: haha well thats good
21:05 Qapitol: you also need more diffs tho
21:05 Qapitol: its only 3:35
21:06 Seiji: Yes ik but.... I'll try to rank 1 diffs.. after I'll make another map with some diffs
21:06 Seiji: Is hard to find good mappers
21:07 Seiji: Will help youç
21:07 Seiji: Most of them just doesn't take care about that..
21:07 Qapitol: yeah i understand
21:07 Qapitol: a lot of them are always busy
21:07 Qapitol: i know the struggle xd
21:08 Qapitol: alright ill do my best to mod
21:08 Qapitol: do you care if I post the IRC?
21:09 Seiji: Irc how, i don't have it and this pc isn't mine, i can't dl programs... Im playing very hide of my mom xd
21:09 Qapitol: oh haha
21:09 Qapitol: this is the IRC
21:09 Qapitol: i'd just do /savelog
21:09 Qapitol: and post what we said
21:09 Seiji: Ah xd
21:09 Seiji: Sure
21:09 Seiji: Its okay :p
21:09 Qapitol: alright cool


America

I'd lower both AR and OD. AR9.3-9.4 would work just fine, and anything between OD8.5-8.7 would be ok as well.

I'll also assume you haven't hitsounded the map completely yet, because the clap is very overused. I'd recommend re-hitsounding if you think it's finished.

00:23:218 - Instead of NC here, I'd suggest at 00:23:563 - .

00:27:701 - NC

00:28:563 - Remove NC

00:29:942 - ^

00:30:459 - NC

00:31:839 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think the music changes enough to warrant the drastic change in spacing, especially considering that the previous one's spacing was entirely the same.

00:33:132 (6,1) - Sorry, but this jump is absolutely ridiculous. I'd rotate the slider -90 degrees around the origin and ctrl+g. Then just move it to the end of the stream :P

00:44:252 (1) - I'd move this slider to 168, 44. I don't see the reason for the jump from the end of the stream. Also, I'd really suggest that the SV is reduced to 0.5. The music isnt intense enough to warrant 0.7.

00:54:597 (7) - Fix slider length.

01:00:804 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This entire section should be distance snapped.

01:16:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why does the stream all of a sudden become jagged?

01:23:218 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Distance snap

01:27:873 (11,12,13) - This turn could be smoothed out a bit

01:28:390 (17) - NC

01:28:735 (1) - Remove NC

01:36:666 (8) - NC

01:37:183 (1) - Remove NC

I'm gonna stop pointing out NC errors in this section because there seem to be a lot. Generally NCs should be placed at the beginning of each 2 or 4 measures, not at the second beat.

01:42:873 (3) - I don't understand why you all of a sudden added these fast sliders. The music doesn't really change enough to support them being added. Unless you were to add triples to the start of the kiai all the way through, there really isn't a reason for this.

02:00:718 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same thing with spacing of the streams here

02:09:080 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - Very large change in spacing considering the music stays generally the same throughout this section. I'd reduce spacing a bit

02:23:562 (9) - NC, and swap the hitsound from 02:23:735 (10) - to there as well.

02:31:839 (4) - Remove the chime hitsound from the end of the slider.

02:48:390 - Why the break here? IMO another slow slider would fit fine right before the spinner.

03:00:632 (5,6,7,8) - Reduce spacing on these.

03:10:459 (9) - NC

03:18:045 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Christ thats a big increase in the spacing. I'd reduce it, just because in the other buildups in the song spacing in the streams did not change at all.

03:28:908 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - ^ This one is especially unnecessary. There is absolutely no reason the spacing should be so large by the end of the stream.

03:29:770 - Honestly from here, I'd just end the map. The music decreases in volume so much that rhythm becomes nearly impossible to track. At the very least I'd move the spinner at 03:35:459 - to 03:32:528 - instead and cut off the rest.


Alright, I know its a bit overwhelming but I think that if you apply all of these suggestions your map has a good shot at getting to qualified. Good luck! :D
posted
hi
M4M


00:00:804 (4,5) - bad flow
00:02:701 (7,2) - overlap
00:03:563 (4,3) - ^
00:04:425 (3,1) - ^
00:05:287 (3,4) - ^
00:05:632 (1,6) - blanket
00:07:356 (3,4,5) - bad flow
00:08:563 (2,3,4,5,6) - remap
00:10:718 (2) - fix spacing
00:14:770 (3,6) - overlap
00:15:459 (6,3) - stack
00:22:011 (5) - here dont have bit
00:22:183 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:23:390 (7,1) - remap
00:24:080 (4,2) - overlap
00:28:046 (10,12,2) - ^
00:30:287 (3) - ^
00:30:977 (7,1) - bad flow
00:30:977 (7,4) - overlap
00:32:959 (14) - fix spacing
00:33:132 (16,1) - wtf
00:34:425 (1,3) - overlap
00:34:770 (2,5) - overlap
00:36:666 (2,4) - ^
00:37:529 (6,9) - ^
01:02:011 (4,5,1,2,3) - rework
01:09:252 (5,2) - overlap
01:10:459 (3,5) - ^
01:11:839 (3,6) - ^
01:11:839 (3,1) - ^
01:13:390 (5,1) - ^
01:18:735 (4,5) - ^
01:19:080 (6,4) - ^
01:28:735 (2,3,4,7) - ^
01:30:115 (7,3) - ^
01:28:735 (2,3,4) - ^
01:32:011 (1,5) - ^
01:41:149 (1,4,7) - ^
01:32:873 (4,8) - stack
01:35:460 (2,3) - bad flow
01:37:356 (5) - in slider have bit
01:31:149 (4,6) - ^
01:19:942 (4,7) - blanket
I think I will stop, because some errors and the same

in all in map have many overlaps. work on it

Good Luck
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Here to mod ♥

00:14:770 (3,5,6) - space these away from each other slightly, it's a little suffocating

00:26:149 (3,1) - match the step spacing of the step patterns that follow to smooth cursor flow

00:27:528 (7,8,9,10) - uneven pattern, consider fixing

00:28:218 (11,12) - weird pattern, but not too crazy. I'd normally prefer a simple back and forth pattern instead

00:32:528 (9) - nc

01:09:252 (5) - this circle is to close to the 4 and 3 for the shape, move it to the right

01:15:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - THIS was SO satisfying to play ♥♥♥♥♥

01:27:700 (9) - nc

01:34:770 (6) - awkward spacing between the 5 and 7 caught the eye

01:36:666 (8) - nc

01:38:046 (8) - nc 1 more time

01:53:563 (1,2,3,4) - REALLY weird pattern, not sure what would fix it, but remap this combo

02:00:718 (9) - nc (it's very common to NC streams every 4 or 8 notes now)

02:06:839 (8) - move closer to the slider, it'll help complete the shape as well

02:27:701 (6,7) - spacing of these are different than the spacing of the 2 step patterns before it

03:01:321 (9) - slider does not follow leading up spacing

03:18:045 (9) - nc!

03:28:391 (4) - nc

03:29:080 (12) - nc


Cool and intricate map, hope this helped ♥
posted
Good day!

In general try to use more 1/1 sliders. I think they would play real good.
Also the distance between a lot of objects seems really random. Sometimes it big, then small again. Maybe try using DS when the music is not that intense, so it looks better and it flows better too.

00:01:839 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - These jumps do not really fit the music imo. They're way too big and the music isn't that intense yet.
00:05:459 (4,1,2) - Maybe make this look smoother? The spacing looks really akward and not that nice.
00:19:252 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ , the jumps do not really fit here.
00:20:287 (2,3,4) - Try listning to the sound here, the slider doesn't really fit here. And the rhythm seems different from what you mapped.
00:27:183 (6,7) - Make this a 1/1 slider?
00:27:701 (8) - NC
00:28:563 (1,2,3,4) - These do not look nice, consider making them different?
00:38:563 (1,1) - Why are there two NC there?
00:41:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These jumps look really overkill to me. They don't have to be so big here. The music isn't that different?
00:44:252 (1) - and onwards, try making the sliders look nicer. These look really ugly xD
00:52:528 (1) - Doesn't look good.
01:20:115 (5,6,7) - Akward flow here. To rectangular imo.
01:28:735 (2) - Make this the NC, since new part of the music starts?
01:30:804 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - This flows really bad, try to make if flow nicer, with less straight lines. More flowy movements.
01:39:252 (6) - End the stream here?
01:39:424 (8) - Put slider? Maybe 1/1?
01:50:804 (2) - NC
01:51:494 (6) - Make this a 1/1 slider?
02:10:804 (5,6,7) - Make this but look nicer. Looks akward.
01:59:770 (1) - Put this slider more to the left? When I played it my mouse wanted to go left, but instead the slider was to the right.
posted
hey

general:
-spacing is a bit weird at times and so is flow
-you have really weird comboing >.> i listed those which got my attention the most but didnt include less important later on (just too many ;/)
-in some places you seem to create your own rhythm instead of following song, or you just swap between different sounds in song and map them a bit randomly, i'd suggest keeping to same sounds for longer parts of song (i listed some sliders [for example] that end on stronger sounds and begin on not really important ones, but it goes for whole song too)
-did you change offset after mapping notes? some sliders/timing points are unsnapped and sliders have weird lengths, you could look into AI mod to see some of the errors that map has (file>AI mod | or ctrl+shift+a)

sliders:
00:04:050 (1,2) - end on sound
00:09:050 (4) -
00:15:085 (5) -
00:24:740 (2) -
it keeps going until song ends so i stopped after those

combo: (change this last, it might make other things confusing cause notes numbers will change)
00:04:912 (1) - rc
00:10:085 (5) - nc
00:10:171 (1) - rc
00:10:429 (4) - nc
00:16:464 (1) - rc
00:16:636 (2) - nc
00:10:602 (1) - rc
00:18:016 (1) - rc and nc on 7 or 2 here 00:17:843 (7,2):
00:32:498 (9) - nc
01:24:567 (1) - rc
01:25:602 (4) - nc
01:22:843 (4) - nc
01:23:188 (1) - rc
01:59:740 (1) - rc
02:00:085 (2) - nc
03:57:326 (4) - nc
03:58:016 (1) - rc

other:
00:11:464 (1,2,3,4) - doesnt really follow rhythm
00:20:774 (5,1,2,3,4) - spacing might be a bit confusing here, easiest way out of it is to stack 1+2 and 3+4 or 1+4 and 2+3, also you could make distance between 5 and 1 more different than distance between 5 and previous note
00:27:153 (6) - long slider doesnt really make sense here as song didnt even change, you could put one here: 00:27:326: though or here: 00:27:671 (1):
00:44:241 - unsnapped timing points around here, theres few more later on
00:46:981 (6) - snap slider end to white tick
00:54:567 (7) - ^
01:03:533 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - so many 1/2 notes (+ those earlier) gets really repetitive and feels bit weird to play, you could change those into 1/4 sliders to change things up a bit and introducing something between 1/2 taps and stream that comes after (03:15:947 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - here too)
01:06:291 (9) - i'd suggest changing this one into slider to avoid awkward break and keep the flow going instead of forcing break here
01:17:326 (9) - ^ (and some more im not sure if i got them here)
01:49:050 (6) - snap slider end
02:02:843 (7) - movement here is a bit awkward, you could move this slider around or change 02:02:671 (6) - into repeat slider
02:49:740 (1) - what is this mapped to? it starts on vocal but rest doesnt really fit anything, you could make it reverse on here 02:51:119: , i'd recommend mapping something else instead between previous slider and spinner
03:04:912 (1) - this might play better if you end slider on white tick 03:04:912 (1):
03:06:981 (6,7,8) - those arent really mapped to any sound (except for sound on slider end...), song is slow too so those jump dont really fit, you should change this part to something following music bit more4
03:29:740 (11) - to slider like said earlier
03:57:498 (5) - this note is not necessary here as 1/1 notes pattern starts here 03:57:326 (4):, i think removing it would fit better

hope this help, good luck with map
if something's wrong or you want some more info let me know in game ^^
posted
05:17 Seiji: Will you mod my map?

00:21:119 (2,3) - Stack note 3 on note 2 so cursor stops and add jumpy feeling to that pattern.
00:27:326 - missing beat https://puu.sh/tmMeI.png
01:25:774 - missing snares
01:51:464 - whistle, should be a kick
02:01:464 - what about adding here a whistle instead ?
02:06:981 - same
02:14:567 - unnecessary claps
02:49:740 - mapping vocals, listen where this starts
02:51:291 - listen to instrument in this section
03:30:085 - this triangle patterns with sliders made me hard to read
04:09:912 - these 2 sliders on exact same position, reverse the second slider, like this: https://puu.sh/tmNnX.png
posted
Press g in editor to change the grid size. Then use grid snap. And use distance snap for jumps. This will fix a lot of the problems I'm going to point out.

00:01:809 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these jumps look more even like this
00:04:050 (1,2,3) - Don't let the 1 overlap with the 4 before it. Also make it more even - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7177428
00:04:912 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a diamond shape or something instead of just having it be... random jumps - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7177445
00:13:878 (7,8) - Move these a little closer to the 5 and 6
00:14:567 (2,3,4) - Make this also more even into a triangle (move the 4 more in between the 3 and 2)
00:19:740 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Make all of these the same distance from eachother
00:20:602 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - Uh... can't really describe it. just make it look like an actual pattern - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7177496
00:28:188 (4,5) - Put these directly under the 1 and 2
00:37:153 (4) - Put this a little lower so that it makes a square jump
00:54:567 (7) - Make this end on the red tick
01:09:567 (7) - Move this a little lower and closer to the 5 so it and the 6 are parallel with the other two jumps
01:22:843 (4) - Put this farther from the 2 so that the 2,3, and 4 would make an isosceles triangle or something
01:23:188 (1,2,3,4) - Make these the same distance from eachother
01:43:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move the 5 up and the 1 and 4 farther apart
01:51:981 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make 1-4 into a box jump then put 5 in the middle
01:53:533 (2,3,4,5) - Make this into a box jump
02:06:809 (8) - Move this to the right a little
02:08:533 (7) - ^
02:11:119 (6) - Make this end on the red tick
02:14:567 (1) - Move this down a little and to the right a little so it and the 2 are parallel with the 3 and 4
02:20:774 (6) - Move this to the right a little
02:23:878 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a square jump and the following two notes as bigger jumps next to the 3 and 4, then put the 7 in between - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7178048
02:25:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do something similar to ^that - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7178057
02:35:257 (6) - Make this start on the white tick
02:49:826 (1) - Make this start on the white tick and end on the white tick
03:21:809 (6) - Move this a little closer to the 5
03:29:740 (11) - Move this a little closer to the 10
03:47:671 (5,6) - Move the 5 a little closer to the 3 and put the 6 in between the 5 and 4
04:14:222 (1,2,3,4) - Fix these blankets - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7178085
04:15:602 (5) - Put this directly under the end of the first slider in that combo
04:19:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make these all the same distance apart
04:27:671 (4,5,6,7) - Put these directly under the 1, 2, and 3
04:31:291 (3) - Move this to the right a little
04:40:085 (7) - ^
04:46:981 - Don't put kiai time here. That should only be used for the chorus
05:06:119 (2) - This slider is literally impossible for anyone to read. Change the velocity lower and make it readable instead of just having a long unreadable one.
posted
nice song!!!! (´。• ᵕ •。`) just a few general style things:

from 4:46:981 onwards, there's a lot of triplets and quintuplets, but there's nothing in the music aside from the hihat that reflects it ;~; it feels like a bit of an overmap, it'd be okay if that was the overall style of the map, but it's only in this one section of the song x-x

this is subjective but at 01:17:326 the kiai time stops even though the momentum of the song hasn't really dropped yet *^* this happens with pretty much all the kiai designated spots except between 04:03:188 - 04:19:395 but this is up to your discretion~ whatever you think worksss

another thought/tip, you can emphasize strong parts of the beat in a few different ways such as changing the direction of the flow following the beat or making the distance between notes further owo

a few slightly technical stuffs:
01:04:740 - the (4) - (1) jump is kinda awkwardly long ;~; you can choose to change where the slider begins or move the (4) closer!
01:36:464 - (7) distance to (1) feels really awkward because of the momentum from the previous notes x-x
03:00:429 - if you remove the (2) and extend the slider to that spot it sounds nice~ n-n
04:52:843 - this stream sounds super weird plus how close it is to the (5) slider ;~;

mostly just personal opinion~~
good luck and happy mapping!!!!

posted
Hiyo! You called me for M4M :)

00:21:119 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing is very weird. Try to move 00:21:809 (4) - to overlap with 00:22:153 (1) - because it gives more emphasis. Also, I would 00:21:636 (3) - NC this
00:42:671 (8) - Move this to x:344 y:240. I like it more distance.
01:04:998 (2) - Add clap please lol xD
01:16:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think the spacing for these streams fit correctly for this part... and maybe this whole part 01:15:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Try to intensify the stream by making this part 01:15:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a short distance stream and 01:16:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part into a longer distance stream.
02:00:085 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Stream here looks kind of boring imo. 02:00:774 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Maybe try to make this part more spacing and ">" shaped stream (just pretend its a backwards C shaped stream lol).
02:23:533 (9) - I kind of want this to become a slider
03:57:326 (4,5,6) - the slow rhythm starts at 03:57:326 (4) - so i would recommend deleting 03:57:498 (5) -
04:25:947 (1,2,3,4) - More distance? because at 04:27:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - spacing seems kind of large there
04:57:240 - Consider adding a note here. It seems like it is missing.
04:57:326 (1) - NC?
04:58:016 (9) - NC here also

Very interesting map overall! :)
posted
Hola :)
*01:19:395 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Cambia eso dificulta en cierta parte a la hora de apuntar en mi caso
*01:22:498 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Cambia la posición de los jumps
*01:26:981 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Parece que intentas hacer un spaced stream se ve extraño
*01:29:740 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Organiza un poco las notas
*03:24:567 (4,5,6) - Pone un square en ves del triangulo
*03:38:705 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Esta un poco confusa como esta alienados los sliders con las notas
*04:06:636 (4,5,6,7,1) - Esta tambien confusa por el tema de los sliders
*04:37:843 (3,4,5,6) - Intenta hacer un poco mas largo el jump

Suerte con tu mapa ameoh :D:)
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