pls use really quiet hitsounds i was nearly deafened by them (in intro)
like silent sliderslide kind of quiet hitsounds
00:00:156 (1,2,3,4,5) - these felt like they aren't following much in the song. if you wanted, it would make more sense to follow either the super loud piano,(obvs) or the really quiet one that plays syncopated notes. 00:00:798 - 00:04:227 - this sound.
00:20:513 (6) - this was never stack before, why now?
00:34:441 (1,2) - this is too obvs of a nice looking blanket to miss
00:49:655 (5,6) - consider ctrl g on this, puts the slider on the vocal held note
00:57:584 (5) - next time this pattern happened you spaced 5 away from 6 7 8, you should do it here to i m o
01:04:441 (5) - ^
01:25:870 (1,2,3) - with some minimal movement, you can avoid this ugly overlap:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526377301:45:155 (2,3) - this should be a different rhythm - i think ctrl g (circle > slider) works better hre since the strong vocal downbeat is currently under a slider end and the cricle is at the end of the word on a breath or something
01:56:941 (2) - i think you should move 2 to the other side of 1, i would read this as another 1/3 note otherwise
02:03:155 (6,7) - this is like saturos-fangirl tier pattern, nobody will read this right seriously ._. please at least make it going in a different direction
02:15:370 (4) - rotate this thing pls it looks so weird and the movement you need is really awkward, better if you make the player go down to follow the slider first instead of 90 degrees left turn:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5263791but i think you should delete this slider in the first place, since you cover up 2 different guitar notes with it
02:24:799 (2,3) - cmon srsly
03:04:870 (8) - making this into a 3/4 slider ito go into (1) would be cool
03:20:513 (4) -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5263805 pls
03:29:298 (1,2,3,4) - in this pattern 2,3 should be stacked since it's the same note imo. not 4. same w next combo color and the one after that
03:36:155 (1) - if you ctrl h this it looks a lot nicer
03:46:441 (1) - cmon literally move this over a few pixels and you have a nice blanket :
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526381504:00:155 (1) - no comment
other than why the fk is this here and not actual mapping
04:37:013 (2) - this spacing is TINY hoyl i think you should increase it so people dont slider break on (2)
04:59:084 (2) - this sounded weird to me, might be ok cuz its a slider but it isnt in the song
03:56:727 - and 04:51:584 - you made a nice slider for this sound at the end, why not here too?