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00:04:544 (3) - double check ur tail snapping
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Alheak

Hobbes2 wrote:

infinte -

00:43:254 (12,1) - this reads like kickslider to circle to me, making the gap a bit more clear would be nice well that's pretty much what it is, the bpm and leniency makes it play just like one, and the downbeat + NC makes it very intuitive to play
00:56:239 (6,1) - fix stack? yes

exh -

00:55:966 (5) - an NC to indicate a shift in patterning / rhythm could be nice here good idea, changed in all my diffs

🤙🤙🤙

edit - ok so read the thread again and im pretty sure whatever conflicts were there before have been dealt with feel free to let me know if im wrong
than kyo u
PoNo

Hobbes2 wrote:

pono -

00:18:673 (1) - no stream jump to this feels inconsistent giving the general movement of this part This is a jumpstream, its less spaced cause of the piano pitch, looks good to me.

fixed everything ! last time I hope :(

uso!
osu file format v14

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Izzywing
EDIT - I'm fucking stupid and could have just qualified it, so uh...ask nao to qualify it tomorrow. Sorry about that lol
Topic Starter
Alheak
stack leniency must be between 0.2 and 0.9
Nao Tomori


I really love GoldenWolf. Like, a lot. Like, a whole lot. You have no idea. I love hiim so much that it is inexplicable, and I'm ninety-nine percent sure that I have an unhealthy obsession. I will never get tired of listening that sweet, angelic voice of his. It is my life goal to meet up with him in real life and just say hello to him. I fall asleep at night dreaming of him holding a personal concert for me, and then he would be so tired that he comes and cuddles up to me while we sleep together. If I could just hold his hand for a brief moment, I could die happy. If given the opportunity, I would lightly nibble on his ear just to hear what kind of sweet moans he would let out. Then, I would hug his while he clings to my body hoping that I would stop, but I only continue as he moans louder and louder. I would give up almost anything just for him to look in my general direction. No matter what I do, I am constantly thinking of him. When I wake up, he is the first thing on my mind. When I go to school, I can only focus on him. When I go come home, I go on the computer so that I can listen to his beautiful voice. When I go to sleep, I dream of him and me living a happy life together. He is my pride, passion, and joy. If he was to call me "Onii-chan," I would probably get diabetes from his sweetness and die. I wish for nothing but his happiness. If it were for him, I would give my life without any second thoughts. Without him, my life would serve no purpose. I really love gOwO.
GoldenWolf
kill me
Kurai
bubbled
Topic Starter
Alheak
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_handholding
This isn't worth a DQ but next time you don't need to add "pono" in the tags if you have "Ponoyoshi"
Lasse
it's actually needed for website search...
_handholding
oh, I see. I wasn't aware of that

Well anyways congrats on the qualify ~
Mir
hey i noticed some uhhhhhh hitsounding errors(?) and im curious about a part in gowo's diff, do consider looking these over?

pono:
00:54:398 - 01:46:761 - blue tick clap? intentional? doesnt sound right to me

gowo:
01:29:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wasn't this map popped for this stream?? p/6355393 care to explain what happened here i didn't see irre give any "ok" to this being still here after you said you removed it p/6362530

01:26:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - kinda not feeling the clap spam here, it doesn't really fit the song since the claps aren't actually in the song to begin with. sounds like it's just there to mask the 19 note jump pattern tbh... :? would reallly work better if this part wasn't so additive imo
01:27:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - and here the finishes sound really weird just in general since there firstly are none in the song that appear that often, and secondly it makes it sound like a buildup section when it really isn't. 01:29:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - as well only to finish it off makes this entire part 01:25:420 - 01:29:784 - feel like you mapped a completely different song/section in the middle of the chorus - it really doesn't fit to me and i would like to hear what your reasoning for this whole part is

also yes i know you had a reason for the stream but i agree with the previous people that pointed it out, it rly doesn't fit. but the whole hitsounding scheme there is what im curious about

there's some missed finishes and whistles in the diff i noticed but im not even half sure what your hitsounding scheme is so maybe check those yourself if you decide to change anything

hope you consider what im saying!
Shiirn
concerns on goldenwolf's:

00:15:963 (8) - might want to nc this to not have extensively long combo
00:18:383 (1) - seems really pointless and weird to new combo this, the accompanying pattern is also kind of weird since it's clearly just a normal 8 roll and there's no particularly strong impact from these last 3 notes, in fact since the piano rolls are resetting on blue ticks (e.g. 00:17:415 - 00:17:802 - 00:18:770 - you might want to re-design these a tad
01:27:193 (8,9,10) - are you sure there's nothing you can do to properly section these out? they're pretty clearly the climax of the melody but they're just filling the end of this pattern
01:32:693 (4,5) - this bit is rather clearly much larger in scale than the other 1/3 things you're doing, and seemingly for no reason

01:51:057 (2,3,4,5) - you'll want to properly NC these two-beat asides like u did in this section: 01:00:875 - . On top of that, decide whether you want a 1,2,3,4 (as in 00:58:693 (1,2,3,4) - , and ) or a 1,2,1,2 (as in 00:49:966 (1,2,1,2) - and 01:42:330 (1,2,1,2) - ) - while they're slightly different, they still obviously represent the same parts of the melody as shown by their stacking nature.

01:57:193 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this is one entire smooth roll of 7, not a sudden 4,3, but oh well, artistic liberties
jeanbernard8865
few concerns with gowos diff that i feel need to be addressed

Waterfall of Nine Heavens
-The timing in the beginning is noticeably wrong. While 165bpm does follow the guitar solo somewhat accurately because of many timing sections, it fails to follow the faint (organ?) sound. Even if you are not mapping the organ sound. I believe 180bpm is the correct speed for this song.

00:21:532 (1) - I believe that everything prior to this point was build up for this drop. In that case there is something wrong here. 00:20:365 (1,2,1,2) - The difficulty change here is significant to 00:19:712 (1,2) . I agree with this sudden difficulty spike because it follows the song intensity. However, the section afterwards fails to followup with the difficulty change. Since everything prior to this point was buildup, this section should have the same, if not higher difficulty than the buildup. An example would be: 00:23:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - I believe this pattern should be more spaced

00:31:031 (3) - The guitar comes in with its wonky melody at THIS point, not 00:30:865 (1) . But the way you put NC and arranged your pattern makes it seem like it's at 00:30:865 (1) . I think you should move NC to 00:31:031 (3) and maybe stack 00:30:865 (1,2,3) to better distinguish the melody change.

00:34:698 (1) - Just because sliders 1 and 2 look similar doesn’t make it okay to inconsistently put NC. I would argue that NC should be here 00:35:032 (2) . There are more inconsistency in your New Combos such as 00:35:865 (1,2,3) and 00:39:031 (5) , but pointing every single one of them out is a pain to do, I will leave that task to you. Generally NC is at the big white tick and whenever there is big difficulty spike.

01:03:698 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - The drums are pretty much consistent, other than the fact that at 01:04:032 (1) the pitch drops. There is no clear reason for this sudden change in DS inconsistency in your stream. If you want to emphasize that the pitch drops at 01:04:032 (1) , try another pattern.

01:05:532 (1,2) - Your slider-heads are on clap sounds and slider-ends are on guitar melody, I don't like this since the players aren't tapping to the melody. I believe clap sounds are secondary, and they can even be neglected (sometimes) to emphasize melody. Don't you feel something missing at 01:05:865 (2) , there is a cool guitar sound and the players aren't tapping on it. Basically, mapping to the rhythm is fine and all, as long as your map emphasizes the melody the most, if that makes sense.

01:06:698 (1,2,3,4) - Same problem that I had with 01:03:698 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) .

01:13:615 (4,1,2,3) and 01:14:615 (4,1,2,3) - follow similar rhythm, and you should move 01:14:615 (4,1) farther away from 01:14:198 (3) . Like how you spaced 01:13:365 (3,4,1) .

Kiai Time: There isn’t a stable flow that my mouse can follow, so gameplay feels a little choppy. It isn’t very visually appealing either. Distance between objects doesn’t really follow the intensity of the song at certain times. I will point out a few of these problems.

01:18:032 (2) - You’ve been using simple slider shapes like straight and curve, and this sudden change here doesn’t really make sense. The long guitar sound isn’t that intense to begin with, and you ended it on the wrong beat.

01:21:032 (3,4,5) - I don’t see how 5 deserves such a big jump, and I don’t understand why 01:21:532 is not mapped. There is a clap sound at 5 yes, but every other 2 bars has one. 01:20:698 (2) has a clap, and 01:20:865 is mapped correct? Same rule applies here then. You can’t just add your own hitsounds to a map and map those hitsounds as if they were part of the song.

01:26:365 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - You ignored the guitar here and focused the drums, but you focused the guitar here 01:24:865 (1,2,3,4) and ignored the drums. Pick which instrument to focus on and stick with it. Also this 01:26:698 (1,2,3,4,1) is too spaced, the drums are dropping in pitch, and is not intensifying, which means that this difficulty spike is contradicting the song.

This next part is just copy pasted so im gonna skip~

For this section 02:53:698 (1,2,3,4,5) can you use 2 combo colors? I know you're trying to make it look cool but it's really hard to play those 02:53:698 (1,2,3,4,5) when they stack. Maybe use white and a shade of grey to compliment the storyboard.

I can't really pass the slider deathstream haha, rhythm kinda hard to follow but that's probably intended so not gonna say anything.

03:28:615 (3) - Please don’t use 5% for any slider ends it’s confusing as fuck

04:10:198 (2,1) - fix the parallel part please

05:08:698 - this timing point is unnecessary. Not all songs end the last note on a big white tick anyways
And that's all! If you have questions about my mods don't hesitate to pm me on forum or in game. Good luck with your map

i actually dont have a clue
Topic Starter
Alheak
Left
good stuff! gratz on qualified~ and i hope you can solve concerns above xd
Len
leave it somethings no need to fix all, but i hope it helps..... oh wait, it already got qualified ;w;


pono

01:34:693 (1) - why it snapped at 1/6 even u use 1/4 both b4 01:34:966 (4,5) -
00:43:254 (3) - others are snapped on 00:43:383 - but this diff only snapped at 00:43:351 - . whos win?
00:52:489 (6) - what do you think about that remove it? since the big beat ends on here, would be beter imo.
00:54:330 (4,5,6,7) - this flow is questionable imo. if u didnt stack 00:54:602 (6,7) - it both, can be mor perfect im sure
01:05:511 - so empty here
GoldenWolf
ogod I almost forgot to check the feedback

Mir wrote:

hey i noticed some uhhhhhh hitsounding errors(?) and im curious about a part in gowo's diff, do consider looking these over?


gowo:
01:29:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - wasn't this map popped for this stream?? p/6355393 care to explain what happened here i didn't see irre give any "ok" to this being still here after you said you removed it p/6362530 Because I didn't even agree with irre's point to begin with. I hated the removal of that stream. Never got an actual mod from irre about it either, from what I understood he didn't even check the map but simply veto'd it because there was an overmapped stream, when I tried discussing it on discord with him he pretty much rejected all my arguments as non-valid because he very strongly disagree with overmapping, so yeah since we can't discuss the matter and I disagree with the removal of it (for various reasons I've stated multiple times but basically because I think it fits, adds something to the song and also the song actually has a faint roll going on there), I don't think I should concede it.

01:26:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - kinda not feeling the clap spam here, it doesn't really fit the song since the claps aren't actually in the song to begin with. sounds like it's just there to mask the 19 note jump pattern tbh... :? would reallly work better if this part wasn't so additive imo
01:27:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - and here the finishes sound really weird just in general since there firstly are none in the song that appear that often, and secondly it makes it sound like a buildup section when it really isn't. 01:29:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - as well only to finish it off makes this entire part 01:25:420 - 01:29:784 - feel like you mapped a completely different song/section in the middle of the chorus - it really doesn't fit to me and i would like to hear what your reasoning for this whole part is Yeah it's additive hitsounding, I don't think it sounds wrong or bad but then again maybe I'm just biased because I listen to a lot of metal? idk ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ In any case it's not like I don't understand how or why people wouldn't like it, and while I often press people to follow a song first and foremost, I also like additive stuff, building around a song with moderation, I do think it isn't a bad addition and it isn't out of place either.
Because it's the climax of the song and that part is especially light on the drums to me (again, maybe I'm biased bcs I listen to a lot of metal yada yada) with only a snare on 2nd and 4th beat and basically can't hear much else, I decided to add more power to it with a 1/1 snare and then cymbals on the 2nd part.
That's about it really. Arguable for the roll, but still I do hear a roll there and I don't I'm imagining it lol, I added the hitsounds to give more feedback to it.


also yes i know you had a reason for the stream but i agree with the previous people that pointed it out, it rly doesn't fit. but the whole hitsounding scheme there is what im curious about I mean it's fine, I totally get why people wouldn't like it and think it doesn't fit, I'm not forcing anyone to accept my views, in the end it's what I feel like fits the song best and how I represent it. That said I'm still honestly surprised the hitsounding and that stream getting so much negative attention lol, I really don't think it's that big of a deal nor even such an issue at all :p

there's some missed finishes and whistles in the diff i noticed but im not even half sure what your hitsounding scheme is so maybe check those yourself if you decide to change anything Please do point them out if you feel like they're missing, I quickly checked and didn't notice anything missing but still would like to hear what you think could/should be added

hope you consider what im saying!


Shiirn wrote:

concerns on goldenwolf's:

00:15:963 (8) - might want to nc this to not have extensively long combo I don't think 16 is that long of a combo but I guess a nc won't hurt
00:18:383 (1) - seems really pointless and weird to new combo this, the accompanying pattern is also kind of weird since it's clearly just a normal 8 roll and there's no particularly strong impact from these last 3 notes, in fact since the piano rolls are resetting on blue ticks (e.g. 00:17:415 - 00:17:802 - 00:18:770 - you might want to re-design these a tad oh shit yeah I missed the blue tick emphasis there my bad, feels so much better now lol
01:27:193 (8,9,10) - are you sure there's nothing you can do to properly section these out? they're pretty clearly the climax of the melody but they're just filling the end of this pattern I can NC it to make it stand out more, that said I don't wanna overdo it too hard on the spacing and such bcs it's quite a long row of 1/2s already
01:32:693 (4,5) - this bit is rather clearly much larger in scale than the other 1/3 things you're doing, and seemingly for no reason What do you mean for no reason? Of course there are reasons lol; it's the climax of the song, loud and high pitched synth, spacing isn't even new as the intro has the same spacing for roughly the same speed (155bpm 1/4 vs 220bpm 1/3)

01:51:057 (2,3,4,5) - you'll want to properly NC these two-beat asides like u did in this section: 01:00:875 - . On top of that, decide whether you want a 1,2,3,4 (as in 00:58:693 (1,2,3,4) - , and ) or a 1,2,1,2 (as in 00:49:966 (1,2,1,2) - and 01:42:330 (1,2,1,2) - ) - while they're slightly different, they still obviously represent the same parts of the melody as shown by their stacking nature. Fixed the inconsistencies

01:57:193 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this is one entire smooth roll of 7, not a sudden 4,3, but oh well, artistic liberties The synth yes but the drums are split in 4 then 3, feels unnatural to me to just ignore it when I hitsound the drums
Thank you both for your mods!
Protastic101
As requested
MaridiuS
I've reset kudosu, you can give it the posts that you've found helpful now.
PoNo

Len wrote:

leave it somethings no need to fix all, but i hope it helps..... oh wait, it already got qualified ;w;


pono

01:34:693 (1) - why it snapped at 1/6 even u use 1/4 both b4 01:34:966 (4,5) - I've managed to do that because of the stream just before in 1/3, there no sound on the sliderend even if I put a 1/4 there.. So I putted a 1/3 slider to stay consistent with the last stream and make a smoother transition than just finishing the stream on a circle. 01:34:966 (4,5) - and both sliders are 1/4 cause the rhythme changed on them.

00:52:489 (6) - what do you think about that remove it? since the big beat ends on here, would be beter imo. I don't like putting just a triple in that pattern, I prefered this cause of kickslider effect, and the playability is not affected that much cause the direction is still quite the same.

01:05:511 - so empty hereCause there no real sound on it. In my opinion this works fine, and putting a sliders is quite the same thing.
Removed fixed issues from mir

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Izzywing
everyone's responded to, so
Mir

AyanokoRin wrote:

few concerns with gowos diff that i feel need to be addressed

Waterfall of Nine Heavens
-The timing in the beginning is noticeably wrong. While 165bpm does follow the guitar solo somewhat accurately because of many timing sections, it fails to follow the faint (organ?) sound. Even if you are not mapping the organ sound. I believe 180bpm is the correct speed for this song.

00:21:532 (1) - I believe that everything prior to this point was build up for this drop. In that case there is something wrong here. 00:20:365 (1,2,1,2) - The difficulty change here is significant to 00:19:712 (1,2) . I agree with this sudden difficulty spike because it follows the song intensity. However, the section afterwards fails to followup with the difficulty change. Since everything prior to this point was buildup, this section should have the same, if not higher difficulty than the buildup. An example would be: 00:23:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - I believe this pattern should be more spaced

00:31:031 (3) - The guitar comes in with its wonky melody at THIS point, not 00:30:865 (1) . But the way you put NC and arranged your pattern makes it seem like it's at 00:30:865 (1) . I think you should move NC to 00:31:031 (3) and maybe stack 00:30:865 (1,2,3) to better distinguish the melody change.

00:34:698 (1) - Just because sliders 1 and 2 look similar doesn’t make it okay to inconsistently put NC. I would argue that NC should be here 00:35:032 (2) . There are more inconsistency in your New Combos such as 00:35:865 (1,2,3) and 00:39:031 (5) , but pointing every single one of them out is a pain to do, I will leave that task to you. Generally NC is at the big white tick and whenever there is big difficulty spike.

01:03:698 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - The drums are pretty much consistent, other than the fact that at 01:04:032 (1) the pitch drops. There is no clear reason for this sudden change in DS inconsistency in your stream. If you want to emphasize that the pitch drops at 01:04:032 (1) , try another pattern.

01:05:532 (1,2) - Your slider-heads are on clap sounds and slider-ends are on guitar melody, I don't like this since the players aren't tapping to the melody. I believe clap sounds are secondary, and they can even be neglected (sometimes) to emphasize melody. Don't you feel something missing at 01:05:865 (2) , there is a cool guitar sound and the players aren't tapping on it. Basically, mapping to the rhythm is fine and all, as long as your map emphasizes the melody the most, if that makes sense.

01:06:698 (1,2,3,4) - Same problem that I had with 01:03:698 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) .

01:13:615 (4,1,2,3) and 01:14:615 (4,1,2,3) - follow similar rhythm, and you should move 01:14:615 (4,1) farther away from 01:14:198 (3) . Like how you spaced 01:13:365 (3,4,1) .

Kiai Time: There isn’t a stable flow that my mouse can follow, so gameplay feels a little choppy. It isn’t very visually appealing either. Distance between objects doesn’t really follow the intensity of the song at certain times. I will point out a few of these problems.

01:18:032 (2) - You’ve been using simple slider shapes like straight and curve, and this sudden change here doesn’t really make sense. The long guitar sound isn’t that intense to begin with, and you ended it on the wrong beat.

01:21:032 (3,4,5) - I don’t see how 5 deserves such a big jump, and I don’t understand why 01:21:532 is not mapped. There is a clap sound at 5 yes, but every other 2 bars has one. 01:20:698 (2) has a clap, and 01:20:865 is mapped correct? Same rule applies here then. You can’t just add your own hitsounds to a map and map those hitsounds as if they were part of the song.

01:26:365 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - You ignored the guitar here and focused the drums, but you focused the guitar here 01:24:865 (1,2,3,4) and ignored the drums. Pick which instrument to focus on and stick with it. Also this 01:26:698 (1,2,3,4,1) is too spaced, the drums are dropping in pitch, and is not intensifying, which means that this difficulty spike is contradicting the song.

This next part is just copy pasted so im gonna skip~

For this section 02:53:698 (1,2,3,4,5) can you use 2 combo colors? I know you're trying to make it look cool but it's really hard to play those 02:53:698 (1,2,3,4,5) when they stack. Maybe use white and a shade of grey to compliment the storyboard.

I can't really pass the slider deathstream haha, rhythm kinda hard to follow but that's probably intended so not gonna say anything.

03:28:615 (3) - Please don’t use 5% for any slider ends it’s confusing as fuck

04:10:198 (2,1) - fix the parallel part please

05:08:698 - this timing point is unnecessary. Not all songs end the last note on a big white tick anyways
And that's all! If you have questions about my mods don't hesitate to pm me on forum or in game. Good luck with your map

i actually dont have a clue
This wasn't responded to?
Izzywing
EDIT - okay mir is fucking stupid and baited me ayanoko you're a legend
Mir
ok so you got memed on that's not even a mod for this map
nextplay

Mir wrote:

ok so you got memed on that's not even a mod for this map
Izzywing
im actually angry that i fell for mir falling for that. fucking kill me
jeanbernard8865
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MBomb
few concerns with gowos diff that i feel need to be addressed

Waterfall of Nine Heavens
-The timing in the beginning is noticeably wrong. While 165bpm does follow the guitar solo somewhat accurately because of many timing sections, it fails to follow the faint (organ?) sound. Even if you are not mapping the organ sound. I believe 180bpm is the correct speed for this song.

00:21:532 (1) - I believe that everything prior to this point was build up for this drop. In that case there is something wrong here. 00:20:365 (1,2,1,2) - The difficulty change here is significant to 00:19:712 (1,2) . I agree with this sudden difficulty spike because it follows the song intensity. However, the section afterwards fails to followup with the difficulty change. Since everything prior to this point was buildup, this section should have the same, if not higher difficulty than the buildup. An example would be: 00:23:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - I believe this pattern should be more spaced

00:31:031 (3) - The guitar comes in with its wonky melody at THIS point, not 00:30:865 (1) . But the way you put NC and arranged your pattern makes it seem like it's at 00:30:865 (1) . I think you should move NC to 00:31:031 (3) and maybe stack 00:30:865 (1,2,3) to better distinguish the melody change.

00:34:698 (1) - Just because sliders 1 and 2 look similar doesn’t make it okay to inconsistently put NC. I would argue that NC should be here 00:35:032 (2) . There are more inconsistency in your New Combos such as 00:35:865 (1,2,3) and 00:39:031 (5) , but pointing every single one of them out is a pain to do, I will leave that task to you. Generally NC is at the big white tick and whenever there is big difficulty spike.

01:03:698 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - The drums are pretty much consistent, other than the fact that at 01:04:032 (1) the pitch drops. There is no clear reason for this sudden change in DS inconsistency in your stream. If you want to emphasize that the pitch drops at 01:04:032 (1) , try another pattern.

01:05:532 (1,2) - Your slider-heads are on clap sounds and slider-ends are on guitar melody, I don't like this since the players aren't tapping to the melody. I believe clap sounds are secondary, and they can even be neglected (sometimes) to emphasize melody. Don't you feel something missing at 01:05:865 (2) , there is a cool guitar sound and the players aren't tapping on it. Basically, mapping to the rhythm is fine and all, as long as your map emphasizes the melody the most, if that makes sense.

01:06:698 (1,2,3,4) - Same problem that I had with 01:03:698 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) .

01:13:615 (4,1,2,3) and 01:14:615 (4,1,2,3) - follow similar rhythm, and you should move 01:14:615 (4,1) farther away from 01:14:198 (3) . Like how you spaced 01:13:365 (3,4,1) .

Kiai Time: There isn’t a stable flow that my mouse can follow, so gameplay feels a little choppy. It isn’t very visually appealing either. Distance between objects doesn’t really follow the intensity of the song at certain times. I will point out a few of these problems.

01:18:032 (2) - You’ve been using simple slider shapes like straight and curve, and this sudden change here doesn’t really make sense. The long guitar sound isn’t that intense to begin with, and you ended it on the wrong beat.

01:21:032 (3,4,5) - I don’t see how 5 deserves such a big jump, and I don’t understand why 01:21:532 is not mapped. There is a clap sound at 5 yes, but every other 2 bars has one. 01:20:698 (2) has a clap, and 01:20:865 is mapped correct? Same rule applies here then. You can’t just add your own hitsounds to a map and map those hitsounds as if they were part of the song.

01:26:365 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - You ignored the guitar here and focused the drums, but you focused the guitar here 01:24:865 (1,2,3,4) and ignored the drums. Pick which instrument to focus on and stick with it. Also this 01:26:698 (1,2,3,4,1) is too spaced, the drums are dropping in pitch, and is not intensifying, which means that this difficulty spike is contradicting the song.

This next part is just copy pasted so im gonna skip~

For this section 02:53:698 (1,2,3,4,5) can you use 2 combo colors? I know you're trying to make it look cool but it's really hard to play those 02:53:698 (1,2,3,4,5) when they stack. Maybe use white and a shade of grey to compliment the storyboard.

I can't really pass the slider deathstream haha, rhythm kinda hard to follow but that's probably intended so not gonna say anything.

03:28:615 (3) - Please don’t use 5% for any slider ends it’s confusing as fuck

04:10:198 (2,1) - fix the parallel part please

05:08:698 - this timing point is unnecessary. Not all songs end the last note on a big white tick anyways
And that's all! If you have questions about my mods don't hesitate to pm me on forum or in game. Good luck with your map

i actually dont have a clue
blobdash
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ꙅᴎɘvɒɘH ɘᴎiͶ Ꮈo ||ɒᎸɿɘƚɒW
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.ɘǫᴎɒʜɔ ʏbo|ɘm ɘʜƚ ʜꙅiuǫᴎiƚꙅib ɿɘƚƚɘd oƚ (,,) 8:0:00 ʞɔɒƚꙅ ɘdʏɒm bᴎɒ () 0::00 oƚ ƆͶ ɘvom b|uoʜꙅ uoʏ ʞᴎiʜƚ I . () 8:0:00 ƚɒ ꙅ'ƚi ɘʞi| mɘɘꙅ ƚi ꙅɘʞɒm ᴎɿɘƚƚɒq ɿuoʏ bɘǫᴎɒɿɿɒ bᴎɒ ƆͶ ƚuq uoʏ ʏɒw ɘʜƚ ƚuᙠ . () 8:0:00 ƚoᴎ ,ƚᴎioq ꙄIHT ƚɒ ʏbo|ɘm ʏʞᴎow ꙅƚi ʜƚiw ᴎi ꙅɘmoɔ ɿɒƚiuǫ ɘʜT - () 0::00

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.ɘꙅᴎɘꙅ ꙅɘʞɒm ƚɒʜƚ Ꮈi ,ƚꙅom ɘʜƚ ʏbo|ɘm ɘʜƚ ꙅɘƹiꙅɒʜqmɘ qɒm ɿuoʏ ꙅɒ ǫᴎo| ꙅɒ ,||ɒ bᴎɒ ɘᴎiᎸ ꙅi mʜƚʏʜɿ ɘʜƚ oƚ ǫᴎiqqɒm ,ʏ||ɒɔiꙅɒᙠ .ƚi ᴎo ǫᴎiqqɒƚ ƚ'ᴎɘɿɒ ꙅɿɘʏɒ|q ɘʜƚ bᴎɒ bᴎuoꙅ ɿɒƚiuǫ |ooɔ ɒ ꙅi ɘɿɘʜƚ , () 8:0:0 ƚɒ ǫᴎiꙅꙅim ǫᴎiʜƚɘmoꙅ |ɘɘᎸ uoʏ ƚ'ᴎoᗡ .ʏbo|ɘm ɘƹiꙅɒʜqmɘ oƚ (ꙅɘmiƚɘmoꙅ) bɘƚɔɘ|ǫɘᴎ ɘd ᴎɘvɘ ᴎɒɔ ʏɘʜƚ bᴎɒ ,ʏɿɒbᴎoɔɘꙅ ɘɿɒ ꙅbᴎuoꙅ qɒ|ɔ ɘvɘi|ɘd I .ʏbo|ɘm ɘʜƚ oƚ ǫᴎiqqɒƚ ƚ'ᴎɘɿɒ ꙅɿɘʏɒ|q ɘʜƚ ɘɔᴎiꙅ ꙅiʜƚ ɘʞi| ƚ'ᴎob I ,ʏbo|ɘm ɿɒƚiuǫ ᴎo ɘɿɒ ꙅbᴎɘ-ɿɘbi|ꙅ bᴎɒ ꙅbᴎuoꙅ qɒ|ɔ ᴎo ɘɿɒ ꙅbɒɘʜ-ɿɘbi|ꙅ ɿuoY - (,) :0:0

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.ƚɒɘd ǫᴎoɿw ɘʜƚ ᴎo ƚi bɘbᴎɘ uoʏ bᴎɒ ,ʜƚiw ᴎiǫɘd oƚ ɘꙅᴎɘƚᴎi ƚɒʜƚ ƚ’ᴎꙅi bᴎuoꙅ ɿɒƚiuǫ ǫᴎo| ɘʜT .ɘꙅᴎɘꙅ ɘʞɒm ʏ||ɒɘɿ ƚ’ᴎꙅɘob ɘɿɘʜ ɘǫᴎɒʜɔ ᴎɘbbuꙅ ꙅiʜƚ bᴎɒ ,ɘvɿuɔ bᴎɒ ƚʜǫiɒɿƚꙅ ɘʞi| ꙅɘqɒʜꙅ ɿɘbi|ꙅ ɘ|qmiꙅ ǫᴎiꙅu ᴎɘɘd ɘv’uoY - () 0:8:0

.ǫᴎoꙅ ɘʜƚ Ꮈo ƚɿɒq ɘɿɘw ʏɘʜƚ Ꮈi ꙅɒ ꙅbᴎuoꙅƚiʜ ɘꙅoʜƚ qɒm bᴎɒ qɒm ɒ oƚ ꙅbᴎuoꙅƚiʜ ᴎwo ɿuoʏ bbɒ ƚꙅuꞁ ƚ’ᴎɒɔ uoY .ᴎɘʜƚ ɘɿɘʜ ꙅɘi|qqɒ ɘ|uɿ ɘmɒꙄ ⸮ƚɔɘɿɿoɔ bɘqqɒm ꙅi 8:0:0 bᴎɒ ,qɒ|ɔ ɒ ꙅɒʜ () 89:0:0 .ɘᴎo ꙅɒʜ ꙅɿɒd ɿɘʜƚo ʏɿɘvɘ ƚud ,ꙅɘʏ ƚɒ bᴎuoꙅ qɒ|ɔ ɒ ꙅi ɘɿɘʜT .bɘqqɒm ƚoᴎ ꙅi ::0 ʏʜw bᴎɒƚꙅɿɘbᴎu ƚ’ᴎob I bᴎɒ ,qmuꞁ ǫid ɒ ʜɔuꙅ ꙅɘvɿɘꙅɘb woʜ ɘɘꙅ ƚ’ᴎob I - (,,) 0::0

.ǫᴎoꙅ ɘʜƚ ǫᴎiƚɔibɒɿƚᴎoɔ ꙅi ɘʞiqꙅ ʏƚ|uɔiᎸᎸib ꙅiʜƚ ƚɒʜƚ ꙅᴎɒɘm ʜɔiʜw ,ǫᴎiʏᎸiꙅᴎɘƚᴎi ƚoᴎ ꙅi bᴎɒ ,ʜɔƚiq ᴎi ǫᴎiqqoɿb ɘɿɒ ꙅmuɿb ɘʜƚ ,bɘɔɒqꙅ ooƚ ꙅi (,,,,) 89::0 ꙅiʜƚ oꙅ|A .ƚi ʜƚiw ʞɔiƚꙅ bᴎɒ ᴎo ꙅuɔoᎸ oƚ ƚᴎɘmuɿƚꙅᴎi ʜɔiʜw ʞɔiꟼ .ꙅmuɿb ɘʜƚ bɘɿoᴎǫi bᴎɒ (,,,) 8::0 ɘɿɘʜ ɿɒƚiuǫ ɘʜƚ bɘꙅuɔoᎸ uoʏ ƚud ,ꙅmuɿb ɘʜƚ bɘꙅuɔoᎸ bᴎɒ ɘɿɘʜ ɿɒƚiuǫ ɘʜƚ bɘɿoᴎǫi uoY - (,,,,,,) ::0

~qiʞꙅ ɒᴎᴎoǫ mi oꙅ bɘƚꙅɒq ʏqoɔ ƚꙅuꞁ ꙅi ƚɿɒq ƚxɘᴎ ꙅiʜT

.bɿɒodʏɿoƚꙅ ɘʜƚ ƚᴎɘmi|qmoɔ oƚ ʏɘɿǫ Ꮈo ɘbɒʜꙅ ɒ bᴎɒ ɘƚiʜw ɘꙅu ɘdʏɒM .ʞɔɒƚꙅ ʏɘʜƚ ᴎɘʜw (,,,,) 89::0 ɘꙅoʜƚ ʏɒ|q oƚ bɿɒʜ ʏ||ɒɘɿ ꙅ'ƚi ƚud |ooɔ ʞoo| ƚi ɘʞɒm oƚ ǫᴎiʏɿƚ ɘɿ'uoʏ woᴎʞ I ⸮ꙅɿo|oɔ odmoɔ ɘꙅu uoʏ ᴎɒɔ (,,,,) 89::0 ᴎoiƚɔɘꙅ ꙅiʜƚ ɿoꟻ

.ǫᴎiʜƚʏᴎɒ ʏɒꙅ ɒᴎᴎoǫ ƚoᴎ oꙅ bɘbᴎɘƚᴎi ʏ|dɒdoɿq ꙅ'ƚɒʜƚ ƚud wo||oᎸ oƚ bɿɒʜ ɒbᴎiʞ mʜƚʏʜɿ ,ɒʜɒʜ mɒɘɿƚꙅʜƚɒɘb ɿɘbi|ꙅ ɘʜƚ ꙅꙅɒq ʏ||ɒɘɿ ƚ'ᴎɒɔ I

ʞɔuᎸ ꙅɒ ǫᴎiꙅuᎸᴎoɔ ꙅ’ƚi ꙅbᴎɘ ɿɘbi|ꙅ ʏᴎɒ ɿoᎸ % ɘꙅu ƚ’ᴎob ɘꙅɒɘ|ꟼ - () :8:0

ɘꙅɒɘ|q ƚɿɒq |ɘ||ɒɿɒq ɘʜƚ xiᎸ - (,) 89:0:0

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qɒm ɿuoʏ ʜƚiw ʞɔu| booᎮ .ɘmɒǫ ᴎi ɿo muɿoᎸ ᴎo ɘm mq oƚ ɘƚɒƚiꙅɘʜ ƚ'ᴎob ꙅbom ʏm ƚuodɒ ꙅᴎoiƚꙅɘup ɘvɒʜ uoʏ ᎸI !||ɒ ꙅ'ƚɒʜƚ bᴎA

ɘu|ɔ ɒ ɘvɒʜ ƚᴎob ʏ||ɒuƚɔɒ i
jeanbernard8865
all i wanted was to trigger gowo i did not ask for any of this
blobdash

AyanokoRin wrote:

all i wanted was to trigger gowo i did not ask for any of this
b̶͢͠u͢͝҉t̶̴͜͡ ̵̵̢̢͡i̧͞t̶̀͜͠ ̡̢h̸͟͞҉̴a̢̛͢p̕͘p̵̡ȩ̷̸̛҉n̢̕e̸̛d̶́͠
PoNo
:joy:
Nao Tomori
few concerns with gowos diff that i feel need to be addressed
this map is qualified
Topic Starter
Alheak
pls no more concerns thank
ferret irl

Alheak wrote:

pls no more concerns thank
Greetings,

I have some concerns about gowo's diff. Along with a few other things I believe are to be mistakes. I highly advise to re-check on many of the inconsistent hitsounds on the Extra difficulties.


[General (All difficulties)] It would be an improvement if the Ending Spinner can either gradually decrease in volume or ended with a ~5% mute. The music fades out and keeping the spinner-end to hit at 70% volume is unsettling.

01:49:420 (1) - Missing Clap if the intent was to clap every 1s and 3s for this kiai. The music does provide a clap for the first beat of both phrases that's why.
01:53:784 (1) - ^

I listed some other hitsounds on the INFINITE difficulty, so if you changed any of those, then it'd apply to the rest of the difficulties.

[Goldenwolf]00:09:770 (11) - This slider should still be on 1/2 to match the rest of the previous sliders. The music doesn't change and there's a drum on red-tick and a clickable blue beat.

00:10:157 (1,2,3,4) - The music raises in pitch but with how you treat this spacing assumes the music is going "low-high-low" when in fact, it can gradually get higher in spacing altogether. The placement of the objects is also a bit dubious because there's no correlation between any of the circles - It's possible to make a square or parallelogram using (1,2) as the first side as a means to compile the sounds into one grouping, or space (4) to be higher than (3) because of how the music is being treated here.

00:11:318 (4,7,10) - While it may seem this was intentional, I'd reconsider NC'ing every 3rd beat. My reasoning is that every group of 3 circles has their own DS but when it goes down to (4) and later (7) and (10), they too have their own grouping of specific and lowered DS.

00:13:157 (1) - This NC is completely unnecessary and only adds complications to reading. The DS's are all equal between these three objects 00:13:060 (1,1,1) - so it doesn't give enough of a reason to NC each circle other than something artificial. It would also be wise to give 00:13:060 (1) - a whistle hitsound since it does belong to the grouping of NC's you had. In my recommendation, due to how the music is presenting itself, I would instead focus on trying to gradually space 00:12:770 (2,3,4,1,1,1) - these out because the music moves up the scale and in volume progressively than how you expressed it so suddenly.

00:14:028 (1) - Would it be possible to reposition this circle elsewhere? Currently there are two former weaker beats stacked on top of this same location and with the Finish sound provided, I think there would be enough reason to give this emphasis in a way that involves the player to engage at this moment. By stacking over the two previous objects, it diminishes any emphasis provided in the music and it falls flat very quickly.

00:14:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Here is where I have some of my bigger concerns - the hitsounds. I want to believe that with all the piano involved, there are a plethora of ways to go about whistling any of this entire section but the way you hitsounded this part is incredibly inconsistent. Firstly, when you hitsound this circle 00:14:802 (5) - and this slider 00:15:576 (6) - it implies that every 1's and 3's would be a whistle but you didn't use a whistle on the first circle 00:14:028 (1) -
Then I have to ask myself, why is only the blue-tick circle having a whistle here 00:15:480 (5) - ? How come the red-tick circle can't have a whistle as well? They are part of the same grouping (4,5,6) but only two of them get the whistle sounds. You show it over here as well 00:16:931 (3,4,5) - it being part of the same grouping.
It might be possible to NC 00:15:576 (6) - because of how you paired (6,7) to be part of the same whistle group. A better solution in my opinion is to NC (6) and remove the whistle from (7) but keep the same whistle pattern as the first measure being 1's and 3's. So essentially 00:16:351 (5) - will have a whistle.
00:17:415 (6,7,8,9) - How come only two circles have whistles but not the rest? The music descends beat-by-beat naturally so I find it strange that only half of the beats get attention. The same can be said about 00:17:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - where (6) is another strong beat, but is the start of the pianos lowering in volume. You separated (6,1) when they actually belong in the same grouping.
00:19:157 (7,8,9,1) - This is a bit off because you group (8,9,1) being the strong whistles but (7) is just hanging around as part of the stream there when it has no attention like the rest.

00:19:447 (1,2,3,4) - How come there are only whistles on 1 and 4 when all four objects are the same strength in piano? If you don't want to hit whistles on all four, then rhythmically, you can whistle on 1 and 3 and that would make more sense than whistling 1 and 4. Also, because there are still beats on reds, I believe these would fit better as sliders (perhaps low SV) just so it can still hit the rhythms. Low SV sliders might help bring good spacing emphasis since they'll be treated more or less as held circles.

00:20:609 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Missing whistles on this half? I get that the volume is decreasing but you can add green lines to change the volumes with the whistles (every circle after 7 can go down in 5% for example). That would be a much stronger approach than ignoring half of the piano hitsounds.

00:23:609 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really know how to explain this but this looks like a reading problem. Either there's a lack of NC'ing somewhere to help distinguish the multiple rhythm snaps, or the stacking itself is placed in a way that is not intuitive to read at all. You do this well in other sections, probably because unlike the one I highlighted, they don't overlap as much on different snaps as part of the same combo.

00:35:705 (1) - Not a too big of a deal, but the rest of the diffs had this hitsounded as a whistle but you were the only one to use finish so... maybe whistle instead?

00:43:447 (1,2,3,4) - I never understood this and why there's so many snaps and rhythms being ignored here. The music is reaching a climax but you let go too early with these 1/8 drums that aren't actually snapped to 1/8 beats, it seems this was placed purely to add some sort of convoluted sense of contrast that is incredibly unfitting to what's happening in the song. It would be far more beneficial to the song to use the snaps the music provided (either 1/3s for piano or 1/4s for drums) and use some sliders or streams to help build the climax with the music instead of falling short with these incorrectly snapped 1/8 sliders.

00:54:875 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not the worst thing here but it's the only inconsistent pattern in this section. It'll be more consistent to have the latter (1,2,3) imitate or copy/flip the former (1,2,3) as being a triangle.

01:01:420 (1) - Missing Finish hitsound on an obvious crash
01:03:602 (3) - ^

01:18:876 (1) - Your pattern/design suggests this circle would follow the previous combo as (7) but the NC makes it awkward to look at. From a rhythmic point of view, (1) doesn't really belong here because you'd be combining two separate measures together when (1) is unique apart from the rest, there's an obvious emphasis to it that it should begin elsewhere or have an increased spacing to accommodate.

01:21:466 (3) - Spacing is extremely low compared to everything else that's happened in this difficulty thus far and it's unnatural and awkward to play this especially when the song is having it's huge build-up moment before the kiai. I'd suggest placing this elsewhere, maybe overlapping on top of 01:20:511 (6) - to keep your structure.

01:26:102 (3) - Hitsound error

01:26:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Clap spamming isn't suggested by the music here... I can understand the pattern as a means to show rising intensity but the music still holds claps on 2s and 4s. I don't know, this seems like a poor decision because it doesn't help follow what the song is suggesting. Continuing on, it might be wise to whistle 01:27:193 (1,2,3) - since there are strong pianos attached to them. You even have them grouped under their own combo so it makes sense to apply whistles here.

01:27:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Clap spamming might be suggested here, since the music is more pronounced and so are the instruments, but Finish spamming is a bit over the top lol (since this just suggests clap spamming as part of the music)

01:32:511 (3,4) - Should be repeat slider for consistency with 01:31:966 (1,2) - or it could be three 1/3 circles for the intonation in the song.

01:53:784 (1) - Obvious Finish is missed


[Pono]00:04:931 (1,2,3,4) - All of these should be whistles for the piano. Currently only (2) is whistle'd and it's an off-beat so... That's really strange.

00:48:330 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - One issue that I'm finding is that the strong sliders don't get the proper emphasis, but the weaker circles do. As in, the current structure is backwards with what is being properly emphasized. If the spacing would be something similar to or like then it would make a lot more sense with differentiating between the strong beats and the weak beats. Currently, the emphasis is really backwards and feels a bit awkward because of it.

00:52:420 (5,6,7) - Overmapped blue-tick circle and unnecessary kickslider. The music doesn't change from it's 1/2 stuff so, I don't understand why this is here.
01:44:783 (5,6,7) - ^

00:54:330 (4,5) - Kickslider is not needed, (5) is implied that it has more emphasis than (4) when it's actually weaker. The problem is that (4) is stacked over (3) and because of that, they are treated equally when (4) could be stronger - such as spaced further. Even if not spaced elsewhere, it's just that (5) is played much more strongly than (4) but (5) is a weaker beat.
01:46:693 (4) - ^

01:17:648 (3) - There's no blue-piano for the kickslider to be used here, seems slightly overmapped.

01:28:966 (3) - Missed emphasis. The stack makes the slider play too easy and flat, this can be positioned in a much better spot to capture the strength in the music here.

01:54:193 (1) - Not a good whistle (music goes 1,2,3 but you go 1,2,3,1 with the whistles). Probably a hitsounding error, could be easily fixed.
01:55:011 (1) - ^

[INFINITE]00:07:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whistle spam is not very good here because there are different volumes of pianos and messing with too many whistles makes everything feel the same strength when musically they're not. Just whistling the strong white beats would be sufficient.

00:19:447 (1,2) - Should be a kick slider for consistency with 00:19:641 (3,4,5) -. It doesn't make sense to have it extend by two extra circles. (compare to Pono)

00:41:899 (1) - Space higher for the finish could be nice.

00:43:447 (1,2,3,4) - Refer to what I mentioned to Goldenwolf on this same exact part. (At least these aren't 1/8 drums but the main idea still stands).

00:54:330 (8) - I don't think using 1/1 is wise here because there's a strong white tick at the slider-end that could be clicked. It becomes inconsistent with how you treated this 00:52:148 (8,9) -

01:02:648 (4) - It seems like you wanted to keep this repeat slider consistent with 01:01:830 (4) - but the main issue with the former slider is that the Finish hitsound (which is really strong btw) get's completely undermined because you can't click it. Maybe there's a better way to rework the rhythm so that you can click for the Finish. I would suggest changing 01:01:830 (4) - as a circle and 1/2 slider on white so that when you can repeat later, the white-tick slider can be emphasized properly for the finish sound.

01:18:057 (8) - NC for different snap. Also because the combo gets a bit too long for this.

01:22:148 (6,7,8,9) - All of these are finishes and it's strong in the music but the spacing is so incredibly low?? This should all be e m p h a s i z e d. It needs to be strong not weak, the music reached it's climax here.[/b]

01:26:784 (2) - Hitsound error with Finish, music suggests there's no finish here. I want to say these finishes were stylistic but it's a bit inaccurate to the music. I want to say they're just claps with a hi-hat but it's kind of hard to hear with all the instruments being drained together.
01:28:966 (2) - ^

01:36:330 (1) - Missing clap to be consistent with 01:37:420 (1) -

01:38:511 (1,2,3,4) - Lots of rhythms missed, it's so sudden too. It almost looks like something was forgotten to be placed while mapping.

01:50:648 (2) - Reverse slider misses the whistle sound which should be clickable. This section is also quite intense so it would make more sense to have things be more dense along with it too.

01:57:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Could have drum hitsounds to them. This feels really empty hitsounding-wise.

01:58:648 (3,4) - 1/6 double.. this might be problematic. I think it's okay in Pono's diff because it's much harder but for an easier Extra diff, deleting (3) and it should be okay to match the rhythm, or use a slider to hit both. The double will be hard to hit properly, it's almost as if you have to double tap to get both 300s.

Please take into consideration these problems before continuing to rank status, as this could potentially harm the mapset altogether.
Linada

Alheak wrote:

pls no more concerns thank
Ideal
few concerns with gowo's diff:

i dont have any i just want to be in the memes
GoldenWolf

fdsfd wrote:

[General (All difficulties)] It would be an improvement if the Ending Spinner can either gradually decrease in volume or ended with a ~5% mute. The music fades out and keeping the spinner-end to hit at 70% volume is unsettling. spinnerspin sound is irrelevant to gameplay and does not add anything meaningful

01:49:420 (1) - Missing Clap if the intent was to clap every 1s and 3s for this kiai. The music does provide a clap for the first beat of both phrases that's why. I think you need to listen more carefully as there is no snare sound there and generally you'll rarely find a snare sound that starts a section in a song

[Goldenwolf]00:09:770 (11) - This slider should still be on 1/2 to match the rest of the previous sliders. The music doesn't change and there's a drum on red-tick and a clickable blue beat. Because this pattern is about progression, and making the blue tick clickable would take away the emphasis from the next pattern

00:10:157 (1,2,3,4) - The music raises in pitch but with how you treat this spacing assumes the music is going "low-high-low" when in fact, it can gradually get higher in spacing altogether. The placement of the objects is also a bit dubious because there's no correlation between any of the circles - It's possible to make a square or parallelogram using (1,2) as the first side as a means to compile the sounds into one grouping, or space (4) to be higher than (3) because of how the music is being treated here. But I don't need to make everything a perfect geometrical shape, also if I wanted to make the pattern feel like low high low high I wouldn't have increased the spacing on the second part so your assumption is incorrect

00:11:318 (4,7,10) - While it may seem this was intentional, I'd reconsider NC'ing every 3rd beat. My reasoning is that every group of 3 circles has their own DS but when it goes down to (4) and later (7) and (10), they too have their own grouping of specific and lowered DS. But I've said numerous times I don't like NC spamming especially when it isn't necessary

00:13:157 (1) - This NC is completely unnecessary and only adds complications to reading. The DS's are all equal between these three objects 00:13:060 (1,1,1) - so it doesn't give enough of a reason to NC each circle other than something artificial. It would also be wise to give 00:13:060 (1) - a whistle hitsound since it does belong to the grouping of NC's you had. In my recommendation, due to how the music is presenting itself, I would instead focus on trying to gradually space 00:12:770 (2,3,4,1,1,1) - these out because the music moves up the scale and in volume progressively than how you expressed it so suddenly. so while I don't like NC spamming, if I do find a reason I like enough I don't really have a problem with it, here it's about how loud that note compared to the ones around, the last one is a chord so it gets its own nc too, spacing reflect all of that too (the first nc is to avoid an awkward lone blue tick nc)

00:14:028 (1) - Would it be possible to reposition this circle elsewhere? Currently there are two former weaker beats stacked on top of this same location and with the Finish sound provided, I think there would be enough reason to give this emphasis in a way that involves the player to engage at this moment. By stacking over the two previous objects, it diminishes any emphasis provided in the music and it falls flat very quickly. no because I find spacing away 1/1 gaps while the previous was a stack to be obnoxious and uncomfortable

00:14:996 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Here is where I have some of my bigger concerns - the hitsounds. I want to believe that with all the piano involved, there are a plethora of ways to go about whistling any of this entire section but the way you hitsounded this part is incredibly inconsistent. Firstly, when you hitsound this circle 00:14:802 (5) - and this slider 00:15:576 (6) - it implies that every 1's and 3's would be a whistle but you didn't use a whistle on the first circle 00:14:028 (1) -
Then I have to ask myself, why is only the blue-tick circle having a whistle here 00:15:480 (5) - ? How come the red-tick circle can't have a whistle as well? They are part of the same grouping (4,5,6) but only two of them get the whistle sounds. You show it over here as well 00:16:931 (3,4,5) - it being part of the same grouping.
It might be possible to NC 00:15:576 (6) - because of how you paired (6,7) to be part of the same whistle group. A better solution in my opinion is to NC (6) and remove the whistle from (7) but keep the same whistle pattern as the first measure being 1's and 3's. So essentially 00:16:351 (5) - will have a whistle.
00:17:415 (6,7,8,9) - How come only two circles have whistles but not the rest? The music descends beat-by-beat naturally so I find it strange that only half of the beats get attention. The same can be said about 00:17:802 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - where (6) is another strong beat, but is the start of the pianos lowering in volume. You separated (6,1) when they actually belong in the same grouping.
00:19:157 (7,8,9,1) - This is a bit off because you group (8,9,1) being the strong whistles but (7) is just hanging around as part of the stream there when it has no attention like the rest. I feel like you're trying to make it way more complex than it is, really the whistle logic here is much simpler than that; emphasizing the high notes in each of the 3 groups, first one starting here 00:14:996 (1) - second starting here 00:16:738 (1) - and third starting here 00:19:447 (1) - , really the only one I'd understand arguing about would be 00:19:447 (1) - this one because in the third group it's quite a lower ptiches one,
but that's because rhythmically hitsounding as high low low high has a nice feedback, and since those are 1/2s it's preferable, while in the streams it has less importance so the emphasizing prime


00:19:447 (1,2,3,4) - How come there are only whistles on 1 and 4 when all four objects are the same strength in piano? If you don't want to hit whistles on all four, then rhythmically, you can whistle on 1 and 3 and that would make more sense than whistling 1 and 4. Also, because there are still beats on reds, I believe these would fit better as sliders (perhaps low SV) just so it can still hit the rhythms. Low SV sliders might help bring good spacing emphasis since they'll be treated more or less as held circles. ^see just above

00:20:609 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Missing whistles on this half? I get that the volume is decreasing but you can add green lines to change the volumes with the whistles (every circle after 7 can go down in 5% for example). That would be a much stronger approach than ignoring half of the piano hitsounds. Not missing any nope, also reducing the volume to reduce hitsounds additions is really obnoxious while playing especially when feedback is needed like here

00:23:609 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't really know how to explain this but this looks like a reading problem. Either there's a lack of NC'ing somewhere to help distinguish the multiple rhythm snaps, or the stacking itself is placed in a way that is not intuitive to read at all. You do this well in other sections, probably because unlike the one I highlighted, they don't overlap as much on different snaps as part of the same combo. The whole thing is intentionnal as you probably noticed, this part is meant to be hard to read

00:35:705 (1) - Not a too big of a deal, but the rest of the diffs had this hitsounded as a whistle but you were the only one to use finish so... maybe whistle instead? Nein sir, this feels like a finish to me

00:43:447 (1,2,3,4) - I never understood this and why there's so many snaps and rhythms being ignored here. The music is reaching a climax but you let go too early with these 1/8 drums that aren't actually snapped to 1/8 beats, it seems this was placed purely to add some sort of convoluted sense of contrast that is incredibly unfitting to what's happening in the song. It would be far more beneficial to the song to use the snaps the music provided (either 1/3s for piano or 1/4s for drums) and use some sliders or streams to help build the climax with the music instead of falling short with these incorrectly snapped 1/8 sliders. Because it's already hard enough to read/interpret as it is, I don't need to map every single sound you can hear to make sense of what is happening. If you want to call it some fancy words I guess we can go for Selective Emphasis, as it matters more to map what represents that section rather than mapping everything you hear, there is a fine line to not be crossed here in fear of falling into the realm of absurdity.

00:54:875 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not the worst thing here but it's the only inconsistent pattern in this section. It'll be more consistent to have the latter (1,2,3) imitate or copy/flip the former (1,2,3) as being a triangle. Yes it is a variation that breaks the consistency, it isn't random either as it happens on the last bit of that section, also when the song breask its pattern too

01:01:420 (1) - Missing Finish hitsound on an obvious crash it is a cymbal but they both feel too weak to warrant a finish especially when the patterning doesn't support it (and it doesn't bcs it's following the melody, not the drums)
01:03:602 (3) - ^

01:18:876 (1) - Your pattern/design suggests this circle would follow the previous combo as (7) but the NC makes it awkward to look at. From a rhythmic point of view, (1) doesn't really belong here because you'd be combining two separate measures together when (1) is unique apart from the rest, there's an obvious emphasis to it that it should begin elsewhere or have an increased spacing to accommodate. To me it makes perfect sense as it is well separated from the previous grouping, also it shouldn't be expected to go back on itself as the notes aren't repeating (which was the reason it did previously)

01:21:466 (3) - Spacing is extremely low compared to everything else that's happened in this difficulty thus far and it's unnatural and awkward to play this especially when the song is having it's huge build-up moment before the kiai. I'd suggest placing this elsewhere, maybe overlapping on top of 01:20:511 (6) - to keep your structure. dropoff + half stop, then builds back up is the logic here, which I find to be fitting

01:26:102 (3) - Hitsound error Additive hitsounding

01:26:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Clap spamming isn't suggested by the music here... I can understand the pattern as a means to show rising intensity but the music still holds claps on 2s and 4s. I don't know, this seems like a poor decision because it doesn't help follow what the song is suggesting. Continuing on, it might be wise to whistle 01:27:193 (1,2,3) - since there are strong pianos attached to them. You even have them grouped under their own combo so it makes sense to apply whistles here. I think I've discussed this part more than enough already, if you haven't read about it yet I'd encourage you to do so. Tl;dr though; additive hitsounding

01:27:602 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Clap spamming might be suggested here, since the music is more pronounced and so are the instruments, but Finish spamming is a bit over the top lol (since this just suggests clap spamming as part of the music) see above ^

01:32:511 (3,4) - Should be repeat slider for consistency with 01:31:966 (1,2) - or it could be three 1/3 circles for the intonation in the song. Neither, it should be a slider leading into a circle then another repeat according to the song here, as the first 2 notes don't warrant circles, plus it helps spacing out and emphasizing the next repeat too

01:53:784 (1) - Obvious Finish is missed same reason as before, not following the drums but the melody and patterning (which follows the melody) doesn't support a finish here
overall I feel like you're both looking into things too hard and pressure your own interpretation too much, or missing the point and the intent behind it, not a bad mod per-se, but either missing the point and/or going against/not going towards the direction I want to go to

hope this cleared your concerns!
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