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ThePal
91 posts
Joined December 2009
ThePal
Hello there!

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.

[Normal]
Quite good, but I find some things which could be changed.

00:41:204 - 00:43:723, Spinner here?
01:28:608 (1) Make as just a slider? Seems too unnatural.
01:44:638 (4) Make it end at 01:45:555? If you do, remember spacing.
01:47:845 (4) Delete slider, put in circle.
01:57:463 (3) Spacing.
02:09:601 (4) Let it end at 02:10:059 with the return?
02:16:242 (2) Stick to 1?
02:38:227 (3-5) Seems wrong.
02:45:555 (8,9) Let the slider end at 9, and delete 9?
02:49:219 (1,2)Let the slider end at 2, and delete 2?
02:53:112 (4) Stick it to 3.
03:07:540 (4) Stick it to 3.
03:21:280 (1) Put return at 03:21:624 and delete 2.

[Promising]
Way away from Rankage. No offence, I'll only mod this at general, since pointing out every problem would take forever.
This need a remapping if you go intentions to get this ranked.

You need to try to let every hitcircle go with the flow of the song, like you did with [Standard], this is too much randomness everywhere.

[MM's Taiko]
Can't mod Taiko, sorry. :o

Hope I could help. :)
Last edited by ThePal , edited 3 times in total.
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
eldnl
[General]

  1. Tags should be the same on all difficulties
  2. The size of the BG are 830x651, please change it to 1024x768 or 800x600.

[Standard]

  1. HP Drain Rate 3.
  2. Approach Rate 4.
  1. 01:29:982 (1) Remove New Combo.
  2. 01:41:891 (1) ^.
  3. 01:56:318 (2,3) Are far.
  4. 02:15:326 (1) Fix this slider.
  5. 02:25:402 (x) Add a note ? (With new combo)
  6. 02:25:860 (x) ^.
  7. 02:26:318 (1) Remove new combo.
  8. 02:27:234 (x) Add a note.
  9. 02:43:494 (5) Random slider? looks bad, please fix it.
  10. 02:52:883 (3,4,5) Hard to read for new players.
  11. 03:16:700 (1) Remove new combo
  12. 03:24:028 (6) Remove this note.
[Promising]

  1. Overall Difficulty 7.


ThePal wrote:

Way away from Rankage. No offence, I'll only this at general, since pointing out every problem would take forever.
This need a remapping if you go intentions to get this ranked.

You need to try to let every hitcircle go with the flow of the song, like you did with [Standard], this is too much randomness everywhere.

  1. 00:58:379 (1) I thought it would be more creative.
  2. 01:13:952 (1) Remove new combo.
  3. 02:27:234 (x) Add a note.
  4. 02:55:631 (1,2,3,4) Feel a Jump here.
  5. 03:23:570 (8) Remove whistle and add finish?.
I don't like the mapset, because lacks creativity and symmetry.
See this topic to learn to make better sliders. Making Delicious Sliders.

Star.
Backfire
3,204 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
Love the song.

MMzz always makes a good taiko, so as usual, I have no complaints or anything. Star.
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Hushu_old
SPOILER

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Please take '?' as suggestions.

Overall
Please end Kiai at 03:23:570 instead of 03:19:906 Fixed

[Standard]
01:06:395 (2,3) - Don't overlap with the previous slider (not even a bit) Okay
01:13:723 (3,4) - x:212 y:168 (to make (1-4) straight) Fixed
01:39:601 (3) - Remove the 2nd point? Fixed
02:15:326 (1) - Put the 2nd point to somewhere like x:420 y:344 Fixed
02:27:005 - 02:27:463 - Why's there a break time buffer here? If you really want to do it, please start break at 02:27:234, and do it to another diff too. Fixed
02:50:593 (5) - y:120 Fixed
02:53:112 (4) - Snap with (3)? x
03:05:250 (6) - x:120 Fixed
03:24:028 (6) - Remove this? Another modder asked me to add this but,... as this note dosn't suit Promising, I'll remove it.

[Promising]
00:48:875 (5) - 1/4 backwards From that point it is already.
00:48:990 (6) - ^ ^
00:56:776 (3) - Remove this Another modder asked me to add it so I'll see if any other modder will have a problem with it here~ If yes, I'll remove it.
01:21:280 - Start mapping ;w; Don't like the idea and you have not mentioned that for the other difficulty so I won't :?
01:29:066 (3,4) - Change to a reverse slider or 3 notes instead 3 notes ^^
01:32:387 (6) - Put it between (5) and (7) I'll stack it instead~
01:59:753 (5) - Remove? Fixed
02:03:418 (5) - ^ Fixed
02:46:242 (3) - Remove one reverse x
02:54:601 (7,8) - 1/4 backwards Frome the point you said, they already are.

These are not nazi modding coz they really need to be fixed
01:04:334 (9,10,11) - 1 grid upwards (Grid size: 4) Fixed on tiny - 8's Y for 9 and 10.
01:11:891 (8,9) - 1 grid to the left Fixed
02:40:975 (4,5) - 1 grid upwards Fixed
02:58:379 (2) - 1 grid upwards Distant snap says 1 gird down, so I'll do that rather~

Starred~!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Re-mod time!

[Standard]
00:59:982 (2,3,4) - move these closer to (1). Fixed
01:57:463 (3) - This closer to (2) I stacked 'em!

Hmm, when moving the notes I mentioned, remember to use distance snap.
[Promising]
00:49:105 (6) - Delete this 00:58:379 (1) x
- 00:49:677 (7) - same with this x
- 00:48:990 (5) - Now make this a reverse slider ending at 00:49:677.x, I think I fixed it before the mod because it does not work so...

That was the only overmapping part thst irked me. This plays great on taiko btw, lol.
[MM's Taiko]
Mitten! Add fast and slow spinners to make the intro like taiko time!

Yeah, this is great. Don't worry Mitten, it's perfect. :3

ThePal wrote:

Hello there!

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.

[Normal]
Quite good, but I find some things which could be changed.

00:41:204 - 00:43:723, Spinner here? It is a nice idea but I'd rather keep quite a silent bit without anything there.
01:28:608 (1) Make as just a slider? Seems too unnatural. Mm, okay!
01:44:638 (4) Make it end at 01:45:555? If you do, remember spacing. I'll make it 1/2 longer~
01:47:845 (4) Delete slider, put in circle. x
01:57:463 (3) Spacing. Fixed
02:09:601 (4) Let it end at 02:10:059 with the return? It already does~
02:16:242 (2) Stick to 1? x
02:38:227 (3-5) Seems wrong. Eee... ok.
02:45:555 (8,9) Let the slider end at 9, and delete 9? Fixed
02:49:219 (1,2)Let the slider end at 2, and delete 2? Fixed
02:53:112 (4) Stick it to 3. x
03:07:540 (4) Stick it to 3. Fixed
03:21:280 (1) Put return at 03:21:624 and delete 2. Fixed

[Promising]
Way away from Rankage. No offence, I'll only mod this at general, since pointing out every problem would take forever.
This need a remapping if you go intentions to get this ranked.

You need to try to let every hitcircle go with the flow of the song, like you did with [Standard], this is too much randomness everywhere.

Maybe but I fixed some of them at least so please PM me if it is ok now, needs so more fixes or got worse~ If there are any combos which you are very concerned about don't fix em but just point them out to me~ Thanks!


[MM's Taiko]
Can't mod Taiko, sorry. :o

Hope I could help. :)

eldnl wrote:

[General]

  1. Tags should be the same on all difficulties
  2. The size of the BG are 830x651, please change it to 1024x768 or 800x600.


[Standard][/color]

  1. HP Drain Rate 3.
  2. Approach Rate 4.[/color]
If I do that the velocity seems odd. So no to change.

  1. 01:29:982 (1) Remove New Combo. Okay
  2. 01:41:891 (1) ^. Fixed~
  3. 01:56:318 (2,3) Are far. Fixed
  4. 02:15:326 (1) Fix this slider. Fixed
  5. 02:25:402 (x) Add a note ? (With new combo) x
  6. 02:25:860 (x) ^. x
  7. 02:26:318 (1) Remove new combo. x
  8. 02:27:234 (x) Add a note. Ok
  9. 02:43:494 (5) Random slider? looks bad, please fix it. Fixed
  10. 02:52:883 (3,4,5) Hard to read for new players. I wish to leave as it is~
  11. 03:16:700 (1) Remove new combo x
  12. 03:24:028 (6) Remove this note. Fixed
[Promising]

  1. Overall Difficulty 7.


ThePal wrote:

Way away from Rankage. No offence, I'll only this at general, since pointing out every problem would take forever.
This need a remapping if you go intentions to get this ranked.

You need to try to let every hitcircle go with the flow of the song, like you did with [Standard], this is too much randomness everywhere.

  1. 00:58:379 (1) I thought it would be more creative. Okay, it is 'creative' now :p
  2. 01:13:952 (1) Remove new combo. Fixed
  3. 02:27:234 (x) Add a note. Sure
  4. 02:55:631 (1,2,3,4) Feel a Jump here. Fixed
  5. 03:23:570 (8) Remove whistle and add finish?. Fixed
I don't like the mapset, because lacks creativity and symmetry. I fixed a lot of dodgy slider & given some straight ones a shape so hopefully it is better now!
See this topic to learn to make better sliders. Making Delicious Sliders.

Star.

Thanks to all modders!

@Kurohacker Ehh, sorry! Fixed!
Last edited by Hushu_old , edited 8 times in total.
Kurowolfe
459 posts
Joined June 2010
Kurowolfe
Hi there! Taiko mod, as requested in the TBRT queue~

[MM's Taiko]
Erm, no BG? I only got a black screen XD. If it's not only my laptop acting weird (which I highly suspect), then you need to download the skin made by MMzz and set it as BG, Hushu.

I think SV of 1.5 works better here, rather that 1.4.

The below are just suggestions, and you are free to choose whether to follow them or not.
1'17''960 [134] - D -> K
1'18''647 [136] - K -> D
1'21''280 [151] - D -> K
1'22''311 [154] - K -> D
1'22''654 [155] - ^
1'24''944 [169] - D -> K
These ones will generally follow the high-pitched sounds rather than the echoes, coz I assumed that you're following them, as you did at
1'13''952 [115] - 1'15''326 [119].

Apart from that, nothing else. The map is really nice to play, so one star for you guys~
All the best! :)
ThePal
91 posts
Joined December 2009
ThePal
I'll re-mod the [Promising]. :)

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.

00:30:326 (2,4) Grid 4, move 5 down? Looks nicer imo. :)
00:33:647 (2,4) ^, move 5 up?
00:39:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Nice!!
00:47:960 (2) End slider? Put circle +1/4.
00:48:990 (5) Put whistle sound here instead of (6)? Sounds better.
01:03:647 (6,7,8,9,10,11) Look at picture, this would be better playing imo.
01:03:647
01:11:318 (6) Doesn't really fit in, put in circle instead at +1/4?
01:35:479 (3) End slider here?
01:38:227 (7) repeat one more time?
01:40:402 (4,5,6) Move -1/4, too hard to read.
01:44:181 (4) Spacing.
01:46:242 (3) Rotate 180 so it doesn't hide 4?
01:52:196 (6) Only cymbal here. Other's too annoying.
02:13:494 Insert circle? Gives better flow.
02:16:929 (7,8,9) See pic, better flow I think.
02:16:929
02:20:822 (7) Move to the left so it's spacing's like (5,6).
02:35:479 (5) Rotate -175?
02:39:944 (1) Spacing
02:41:204 (5) -1 repeat?
02:43:494 (7) Add 3 circles with spacing here?
02:46:013 (1,2,3,1,2,1) See pic, plays better?
02:46:013
02:53:456 (3) Delete.

Phew. Hope it'll help!
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Hushu_old
SPOILER

ThePal wrote:

I'll re-mod the [Promising]. :)

Red: Major issue, you should properly change this.
Green: Minor issue.
Gray: Just a suggestion, no need to change here if you think something else.
Black: Other.

00:30:326 (2,4) Grid 4, move 5 down? Looks nicer imo. :) Done something alike!
00:33:647 (2,4) ^, move 5 up?
00:39:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Nice!!
00:47:960 (2) End slider? Put circle +1/4. x
00:48:990 (5) Put whistle sound here instead of (6)? Sounds better. oOkay
01:03:647 (6,7,8,9,10,11) Look at picture, this would be better playing imo. Done~
01:03:647
01:11:318 (6) Doesn't really fit in, put in circle instead at +1/4? Done but to avoide 1/1s I added another thing~
01:35:479 (3) End slider here? Done that + added a circle 1/2 later to be happy about the fix Q.Q
01:38:227 (7) repeat one more time? No sorry, but I chenged for better I think~
01:40:402 (4,5,6) Move -1/4, too hard to read. x, but done something else so should not feel awkward now~
01:44:181 (4) Spacing. Fixed!
01:46:242 (3) Rotate 180 so it doesn't hide 4? (4) Unhidden!
01:52:196 (6) Only cymbal here. Other's too annoying. I'll put no cymbals instead, hopefuly you don't mind ^ ^'
02:13:494 Insert circle? Gives better flow. Done!
02:16:929 (7,8,9) See pic, better flow I think. Indeed it is! Thank you!
02:16:929
02:20:822 (7) Move to the left so it's spacing's like (5,6). Spacing fixed~
02:35:479 (5) Rotate -175? Okay!
02:39:944 (1) Spacing Fixed
02:41:204 (5) -1 repeat?
02:43:494 (7) Add 3 circles with spacing here? x, done something else to avoid 1/1s...
02:46:013 (1,2,3,1,2,1) See pic, plays better? Yes, thanks!
02:46:013
02:53:456 (3) Delete. Fixed :3

Phew. Hope it'll help!

It helped a lot!! Thank you ThePal ^^
nimi
978 posts
Joined April 2010
nimi
[General]
Ehh.. I don't really see a reason for taiko being on tags >_<

[Standard]
00:52:654 (5) - *nazi, sry* this spacing goes a bit larger than the other ones around it.. so, yeah. use distance snap here (even though i think this spacing looks better than the rest >_<)
01:35:021 (6) - this note seems a bit lost in the map, since its sound is really low (i wonder if it's due to the whistle hitsound)..
You probably have a reason for this.. but why isn't there a kiai at 00:59:295? (since there's one when the same rhythm starts at the end of the map) -this would apply to Promising diff if there wasn't a break around this time >_>"

[Promising]
01:21:280 - map this break? >.<~ the other diff doesn't have it, and it's one of the best parts of the song Dx (I guess someone mentioned this already.. *checks* yeah.. someone else did it already. please reconsider this idea
03:02:960 (4) - ehh.. i'm not good at slider art, but this ones looks a bit.. weird. try to make it more symmetrical? (maybe this this http://puu.sh/2vCl - ok, nevermind. you can do it better yourself x-x)

So, yeah. Since I don't mod taiko, I guess that's it. The map has improved a lot since the last time i took a look at it, but you can still make some more little changes to make it flow better. ~
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
Recheck as requested.

[General]

- You don't need "Taiko" in tags, please remove it on every difficulty.
- Add to tags "Ready for the Weekend" it's his second album as wiki says.
- Background size is incorrect. it must be 4:3 with minimum/maximum width 800/1024 and minimum/maximum height 640/768
- Dark BG, dark colors, that's wrong. I suggest to use default colors as custom (Red, Green, etc). As custom to make colors same on every kind skin.
- Standart difficulty is too hard for newbie players, so you need Easy difficulty in this mapset.
- Use same amount of break points please on every difficulty.

[Standart]
OD +1 HP +1, at least.
Well, I think it looks now a bit better, but still not good.
At 1st, if we consider to think that this is normal difficulty, then please avoid every single blue note (1/4)
Examples: 00:49:334 (4), 00:51:395 (2), 00:55:059 (2), 00:56:662 (6) . . . etc.
2nd. Stucky notes even between white~blue~white. Suggestion to use 1.5x distance spacing
My adjustments with such distance spacing, just to show you some examples: one , two , three , 4 , etc. So judge yourself what looks better.
02:56:547 - i kinda don't understand why you add here Kiai.
- More then three unique slider speed are used in this map.
I guess now your need to respace every note in this map, if you deicde to change spacing. Well Good Luck

[Promising]

Overmapped. So overmapped

Bright examples: 01:02:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) , 01:31:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 01:28:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Map according to the song beats, do not try to add something that can not be hear in the song.

You get a lot of work again. Sorry, still not star from me. You don't need to feed me kudosu now.
Hyguys
1,272 posts
Joined May 2010
Hyguys
Yay for unrelated bg.

Standard
00:37:311 (1) - No one will see that repeat , make something like :
SPOILER
01:10:288 (3) - Spacing

Promising
00:38:685 (5) - 4 Grids down
01:10:288 (3) - Confused me
01:31:357 (2) - Ctrl + H

Nice map ;.;
Starr'd
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Hushu_old
SPOILER

Wiinter wrote:

[General]
Ehh.. I don't really see a reason for taiko being on tags >_< Okay, removed

[Standard]
00:52:654 (5) - *nazi, sry* this spacing goes a bit larger than the other ones around it.. so, yeah. use distance snap here (even though i think this spacing looks better than the rest >_<) Fixed
01:35:021 (6) - this note seems a bit lost in the map, since its sound is really low (i wonder if it's due to the whistle hitsound)..
You probably have a reason for this.. but why isn't there a kiai at 00:59:295? (since there's one when the same rhythm starts at the end of the map) -this would apply to Promising diff if there wasn't a break around this time >_>" Okay, not random anymore.

[Promising]
01:21:280 - map this break? >.<~ the other diff doesn't have it, and it's one of the best parts of the song Dx (I guess someone mentioned this already.. *checks* yeah.. someone else did it already. please reconsider this idea Sorry, I wont unless I'll mod the whole break, and I don't really want to do that because this part of the song is quite random to be at the beginning, but I liked it at the end so that is why I've made beats to it :| In Progress!
03:02:960 (4) - ehh.. i'm not good at slider art, but this ones looks a bit.. weird. try to make it more symmetrical? (maybe this this http://puu.sh/2vCl - ok, nevermind. you can do it better yourself x-x) Fixed :p

So, yeah. Since I don't mod taiko, I guess that's it. The map has improved a lot since the last time i took a look at it, but you can still make some more little changes to make it flow better. ~

Okay, than you for modding Wiinter!

EDIT; Note: I am right now making Easy difficulty and mapping breaks so I may take some time to do them... If I asked you for a mod, please hold it for a while. Thank you!

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

- More then three unique slider speed are used in this map.
Well, it's not a problem actually..
The Slider Speed Change should follow the music though
Okk!

SPOILER

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Recheck as requested.

[General]

- You don't need "Taiko" in tags, please remove it on every difficulty. ✓
- Add to tags "Ready for the Weekend" it's his second album as wiki says. ✓
- Background size is incorrect. it must be 4:3 with minimum/maximum width 800/1024 and minimum/maximum height 640/768 ✓
- Dark BG, dark colors, that's wrong. I suggest to use default colors as custom (Red, Green, etc). As custom to make colors same on every kind skin. I'll think about it
- Standart difficulty is too hard for newbie players, so you need Easy difficulty in this mapset. In Progress
- Use same amount of break points please on every difficulty. All are quite the same for the main osu mode, Taiko will be different. The easy does not have the starting break, but thats about it...

[Standart]
OD +1 HP +1, at least. I think it is fine but for consideration
Well, I think it looks now a bit better, but still not good.
At 1st, if we consider to think that this is normal difficulty, then please avoid every single blue note (1/4)
Examples: 00:49:334 (4), 00:51:395 (2), 00:55:059 (2), 00:56:662 (6) . . . etc. -
2nd. Stucky notes even between white~blue~white. Suggestion to use 1.5x distance spacing I have done 1.5 for blues, I hope it will make a better gameplay...
My adjustments with such distance spacing, just to show you some examples: one , two , three , 4 , etc. So judge yourself what looks better.
02:56:547 - i kinda don't understand why you add here Kiai.I'd like it to be like that
- More then three unique slider speed are used in this map.
I guess now your need to respace every note in this map, if you deicde to change spacing. Well Good Luck

[Promising]

Overmapped. So overmapped

Bright examples: 01:02:044 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) , 01:31:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 01:28:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Map according to the song beats, do not try to add something that can not be hear in the song.

You get a lot of work again. Sorry, still not star from me. You don't need to feed me kudosu now.

Thanks again!

@Hyguys Thank you, mostly done :)
Last edited by Hushu_old , edited 6 times in total.
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
- More then three unique slider speed are used in this map.
Well, it's not a problem actually..
The Slider Speed Change should follow the music though
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[Easy]
00:37:311 (5,6) - Bad Spacing ( Use Higher AR and NC on 6 if you don't wnat to leave this )
00:56:089 (3,1) - make them like http://puu.sh/2YE3
00:58:379 (2,3) - confusive for our noob player.. make like http://puu.sh/2YE8
01:06:624 (2) - Badly Stacked, Stack under (1) end with using 0.0x Distance Snap while pressing Shift

[Standard]
00:31:357 (2) - Seems off (like some other notes like thisì)
01:14:181 (2) - Seems 1/4 after (in 01:14:295)

[Promising]
00:37:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make sure five is the centre .-. http://puu.sh/2YF9
03:19:906 (5,6,7) - Unrankable Pattern, you should see if a slider have a repeat or no

Somewhat better now
will recheck when you end the Easy
Kamure
735 posts
Joined August 2009
Kamure
Ugh, a month hiatus, and I wonder if this guy is still going on osu!?

Regardless, I'm putting this mod.

Standard
  1. 00:55:631 (4) - move the red sliderpoint 1 grid down
  2. 00:58:379 (1) - I think it's better if the slider ends are all claps
  3. 01:06:624 (3) - closer to (2)
  4. 01:10:288 (3) - ^
  5. 01:21:967 (4,5) - it sounds better when the end of (4) has the whistle while the (5) has the clap
  6. 01:25:173 (2,3) - 2 grids left
  7. 01:25:860 (4) - make more symmetrical
Promising
  1. 00:48:990 (5,6) - 1 blue tick back (timeline) (if possible, can you do that on the other patterns?)
I really like the patterns and the streams, but sometimes the hitsounds get out of hand in both diffs.... Just saying.

Star!!
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Hushu_old
SPOILER

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Easy]
00:37:311 (5,6) - Bad Spacing ( Use Higher AR and NC on 6 if you don't wnat to leave this ) ✓
00:56:089 (3,1) - make them like http://puu.sh/2YE3 Couldn't see the link, but changed it so should be better
00:58:379 (2,3) - confusive for our noob player.. make like http://puu.sh/2YE8 ^
01:06:624 (2) - Badly Stacked, Stack under (1) end with using 0.0x Distance Snap while pressing Shift ✓

[Standard]
00:31:357 (2) - Seems off (like some other notes like thisì) -
01:14:181 (2) - Seems 1/4 after (in 01:14:295) -

[Promising]
00:37:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make sure five is the centre .-. http://puu.sh/2YF9 ✓
03:19:906 (5,6,7) - Unrankable Pattern, you should see if a slider have a repeat or no ✓

Somewhat better now
will recheck when you end the Easy
Thank you for modding HakuNoKaemi!

SPOILER

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Ugh, a month hiatus, and I wonder if this guy is still going on osu!?

Regardless, I'm putting this mod.

Standard
  1. 00:55:631 (4) - move the red sliderpoint 1 grid down ✓
  2. 00:58:379 (1) - I think it's better if the slider ends are all claps ✓
  3. 01:06:624 (3) - closer to (2) ✓
  4. 01:10:288 (3) - ^ ✓
  5. 01:21:967 (4,5) - it sounds better when the end of (4) has the whistle while the (5) has the clap Too true! ✓
  6. 01:25:173 (2,3) - 2 grids left ✓
  7. 01:25:860 (4) - make more symmetrical ✓


Promising
  1. 00:48:990 (5,6) - 1 blue tick back (timeline) (if possible, can you do that on the other patterns?)
I don't think it applies anymore... things previously changed

I really like the patterns and the streams, but sometimes the hitsounds get out of hand in both diffs.... Just saying.

Star!!

...Thank you chamelepeace710!
Aeonnen
21 posts
Joined March 2012
Aeonnen
Modding request from my queue ^^

Easy:
00:48:761 (2) - Don't put under 1, might be hard to see for new players
00:57:005 (4) - Align with 2,3
01:22:654 (4) - ^ under 3
I think you should continue mapping. Ends awkwardly

Standard:
01:13:723 (3) - Spacing

Promising:
Nothing I noticed.

Great map, and I do like the song~ (Btw, these are all suggestions. throw them in the trash if you see fit :3)
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Hushu_old

Aeonnen wrote:

Modding request from my queue ^^

Easy:
00:48:761 (2) - Don't put under 1, might be hard to see for new players ✓
00:57:005 (4) - Align with 2,3 ✓
01:22:654 (4) - ^ under 3 ✓
I think you should continue mapping. Ends awkwardly Yes, it is not finished yet sry :p

Standard:
01:13:723 (3) - Spacing ✓

Promising:
Nothing I noticed.

Great map, and I do like the song~ (Btw, these are all suggestions. throw them in the trash if you see fit :3)
Thank you, good suggestions :)
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
Tags inconsistency in your Easy difficulty.

Nice map! No kudosu for this post. :D
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
Ok, Taiko Mod from ~ Fenya & mancusojuanmattos's Queue ~

[MM's Taiko:]

- Tags: Add MittenMasterzz (Previous name as MMzz) since you can find his name in Ranked maps (Add it on all Difficulties)
- Audio Lead-In: Disable this Option since you don't map since the Intro (and you have 44:639 sec on Lead-In)

Little Guide to Hushu

Mod Info:
d= don (Normal Hitsound)
k= kat/katsu (Clap/Whistle Hitsound)
D= Big Don (Finish Hitsound)
K= Big Kat/Katsu (Clap/Whistle + Finish Hitsound)

00:51:967 (1): Following this section of this kind of patterns, Is more consistent and sounds better if this note is a Big Katsu
01:32:960 (x): Try to add a kat to make a 2-plet, fit with drums perfectly
01:33:532 (x): And in This case a suggest you a don
01:43:036: I really don't like how to play this 1/6 pattern and also is the only 1/6 in all the map. I think that it has a better flow if you make a 3-plet (ddd, i guess that it's the better) in 1/4
01:53:7999 (328,329,330,331,1): Sounds better if you add some kats in this pattern, following the drums I guess that kdddk is the best option

And That's All. Great Taiko as always Mitten :P.
Good Luck and Fen will mod the other diff. as soon as possible ;)
YunBora
YunBora
Easy
00:40:059 (6) - DS
00:40:975 (8) - slow slider in easy not good
01:02:960 (5,7) - perfectly stack it
01:17:616 (6) - arkward
01:27:692 (1) - ^
01:36:853 (2) - ^
01:39:601 (4) - overlap with HP bar ! fix it
01:42:807 (7,3) - stack they ends
02:08:914 (2,3) - perfectly stack it
02:26:318 (1,2) - ^
02:51:967 (6) - add note
03:10:288 (1,2) - overlap

Normal
00:47:731 (2,3) - overlap
01:09:715 (2,3) - perfectly stack it
01:16:700 (1,2) - small overlap
01:27:692 (7,1) - ^
01:46:471 (2,3) - Try this http://puu.sh/rbWA
02:22:654 (1) - Arkward
01:21:967 (4) - DS

Hard
there are ssoooo much arkward sliders everything else was fine
Hitomi May
362 posts
Joined September 2009
Hitomi May
Hello ^^

Oh you have 40 stars O.O
I think you don't need myne :)

[Easy]

00:37:311 (5) - new combo
00:40:975 (8) - maybe make it not linear? :)
00:55:631 (2,3,4) - move it in the center
01:03:418 (6) - nc
01:06:624 (2) - unstack (Sorry, I don't know it's correctly write in English)
01:17:616 (6) - hm, it's not realy good Idea, move to another place
01:19:448 (8) - please do all of the slides smoother!
SPOILER
01:29:066 (2) - nc
02:09:601 (3) - unstack
02:15:326 (1,2) - ;(
SPOILER
02:34:563 (1) - maybe delete?

[Standard]

00:40:059 (1) - place it righter
01:24:028 (1) - curve slide
01:43:952 (2,3) - raise on the 1 gird
02:45:555 (8) - unstack

[Promising]

00:39:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make symmetrical about the axis Y
00:49:105 (6) - make shorter. End this in 00:49:334
01:00:211 (3) - add circle
01:10:288 (3) - 1 more repite
01:13:494 (4) - add circle
01:15:097 (2) - ^
01:40:059 (3) - hey, you must place it closer to the previous object
02:07:998 (1) - haha
SPOILER
02:13:150 (6) - move to 02:13:265
02:37:540 (3,5) - place it here
SPOILER
02:53:341 (2) - delete and vove to this plase next slider
03:09:830 (3) - circle?
03:13:265 (2) - ^

Nice song and map :3
Good luck)
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Welcome to the old map crew.

THE HARDEST DIFF:
00:38:685 (5) - I know spacing and stuff, but this might be more moe if this is just in the center of the box .3.
01:05:708 (1) - Add clap at end of slider
01:09:372 (1) - ^
01:14:181 (1) - Not a very moe slider D:! Also, I'm generally against having that many sliderpoints.
01:19:448 (2) - Add clap at end of slider
01:29:066 (3) - Add clap
01:29:295 (4) - Remove Clap
01:33:647 (9) - Add clap
01:40:059 (3) - Add clap at beginning of slider
01:41:662 (1) - Add clap on repeat
01:49:219 (1) - Add clap
01:57:921 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider
01:57:921 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
02:08:456 (2) - Add clap
02:22:654 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
02:23:570 (4) - ^
02:52:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds awkward, like it's overmapped
02:56:547 (1) - The slightest of unsymmetricals. Move the bottom sliderpoint more towards the center
03:02:960 (4) - ^ I'm assuming you copy-pasted the slider, so just fix the first one, and then CP it into this :>
03:10:746 (6) - Add clap

THE MIDDLE DIFF:
00:37:311 (1) - This is one of those instances where I'm ok with having a bunch of repeats, but if you're going to do something different for the first two, then do it for this one too, or vise versa.
00:57:692 - Snap this timing point :>
00:59:295 (1) - Add finish on beginning
01:20:364 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
01:32:273 (4) - ^
01:35:937 (1) - ^
01:36:624 (2) - Remove Clap
01:38:914 (2) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvdf5n-zI14
01:39:601 (3) - Add clap on end of slider
01:51:051 (3) - Add clap
01:51:280 (4) - Remove Clap
02:53:112 - N-N-Nou! The 0.75 section isn't really fitting~. At the very least, if you absolutely want to keep it, at least snap the timing section :>

THE EASIEST MODE:
What might be beneficial for this diff since there's a lot of sliders in silence is to get a silent sliderslide.wav.
00:29:982 - 00:38:685 - The timing sections for this first part are unneccesary~
00:57:692 - I'm not sure if this is neccesary but if it is, snap it
01:02:960 (5) - NC
01:17:616 (6) - ^
01:27:692 (1) - N-N-Not moe! D:
01:33:647 (6) - Add clap on beginning of slider
01:41:891 (6) - ^
01:42:807 (7) - ^
01:49:219 (8) - ^
01:54:257 (5) - Think of a more interesting pattern then this :>
02:41:891 (1) - Remove NC
02:56:547 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
02:59:753 (2) - Add clap
03:00:211 (3) - Remove clap
03:05:250 (5) - Add clap on full slider
03:07:082 (2) - Add clap
03:08:456 (4) - Add clap
03:16:242 (3) - Add clap on full slider
03:19:906 (3) - Add clap on beginning and end of slider

Overall, the main issue is that the claps are inconsistent ;~~;. I'm generally not as anal as I was in this mod, but that's because the claps are actually in the music, so I'm naturally annoyed by the fact that the claps are not consistent with what's going on in the music. My ear automatically hears when a clap is missing or when a clap is off because I can hear the consistent beat given by the music :>
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Hi~

General:
Missing work.
Remove the "," of tags
The color black at times confused with the background.

Easy:
There are many slidertick/sliders unsnapped, please Check it.
There are several patterns that can be confusing for new players.
00:32:273 (2) - Cover to (4)... It can be confusing for beginners.
00:40:059 (6,7) - You should leave it at the same spacing that 00:32:273 (2,3), can be confusing.
00:46:013 (3) - Slidertick unsnapped http://puu.sh/tgIJ
00:48:761 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/tgJj
00:49:677 (3) - ^
01:03:418 (6) - End slidertick unnecessary http://puu.sh/tgKM
01:27:692 (1) - What? Fix it and try to put it like this: http://puu.sh/tgM8
01:41:891 (6,7) - is a Easy >A<
01:54:257 (5) - I think you could do something more cute.
03:02:960 (1,2,3) - I think it's very difficult...

Standard:
AR -1
There are many slidertick/sliders unsnapped, please Check it.
00:29:982 (1) - Slidertick unsnapped and not sounds good, try doing this: http://puu.sh/tgSs or http://puu.sh/tgT6
00:33:647 (1,2) - ^
00:40:059 (1) - It may be too abrupt a change in x1,0 to x0,5 in a normal... Imo.
01:56:318 (2) - Spacing
02:18:990 (1) - I don't understand that you put slidertick unnecessary when the sliders are straight Dx
02:38:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Very complicated to be a normal, you should put it another way.

Promising:
Working in the sliders.

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
I hope you serve something.
Sorry for my bad English, good luck~
Hushu_old
207 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Hushu_old

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Ok, Taiko Mod from ~ Fenya & mancusojuanmattos's Queue ~

[MM's Taiko:]

- Tags: Add MittenMasterzz (Previous name as MMzz) since you can find his name in Ranked maps (Add it on all Difficulties)
- Audio Lead-In: Disable this Option since you don't map since the Intro (and you have 44:639 sec on Lead-In)

Good Luck and Fen will mod the other diff. as soon as possible ;)
Thank you, was applied :)

-lalalala- wrote:

SPOILER
Easy
00:40:059 (6) - DS I wan't to keep it that was so its symmetrical to the previous notes.
00:40:975 (8) - slow slider in easy not good Okay, I've changed it
01:02:960 (5,7) - perfectly stack it ✓
01:17:616 (6) - arkward Done different spacing, if that's what you meant
01:27:692 (1) - ^ You mean unsymmetrical, not awkward :idea:
01:36:853 (2) - ^ It's the same as (1) so I wonder why you though 2 was awkward but not 1. No fix, its fine I think.
01:39:601 (4) - overlap with HP bar ! fix it ✓
01:42:807 (7,3) - stack they ends ?
02:08:914 (2,3) - perfectly stack it ✓
02:26:318 (1,2) - ^ ✓
02:51:967 (6) - add note x
03:10:288 (1,2) - overlap ✓

Normal
00:47:731 (2,3) - overlap overlap ✓
01:09:715 (2,3) - perfectly stack it ✓
01:16:700 (1,2) - small overlap ✓
01:27:692 (7,1) - ^ ✓
01:46:471 (2,3) - Try this http://puu.sh/rbWA The link doesnt work :/
02:22:654 (1) - Arkward ✓
01:21:967 (4) - DS I wan't to keep it that way

Hard
there are ssoooo much arkward sliders everything else was fine Okay

Thank you for the mod :)

Hitomi May wrote:

SPOILER
Hello ^^ Hi :)

Oh you have 40 stars O.O
I think you don't need myne :)

[Easy]

00:37:311 (5) - new combo Aaa, rite! ✓
00:40:975 (8) - maybe make it not linear? :) ✓
00:55:631 (2,3,4) - move it in the center ✓
01:03:418 (6) - nc ✓, but I placed it on a note just before as its a tall white tick!
01:06:624 (2) - unstack (Sorry, I don't know it's correctly write in English) I'll keep it as otherwise they will overlap :\
01:17:616 (6) - hm, it's not realy good Idea, move to another place ✓
01:19:448 (8) - please do all of the slides smoother! ✓

01:29:066 (2) - nc ✓
02:09:601 (3) - unstack x
02:15:326 (1,2) - ;( ✓ :roll:

02:34:563 (1) - maybe delete? Can't, as I've started there for the other diffs, so I have to start same place on all of the diffs and spinner works alright here in my opinion.

[Standard]

00:40:059 (1) - place it righter ✓
01:24:028 (1) - curve slide It's curved already..? :?
01:43:952 (2,3) - raise on the 1 girdI changed this bit, Its on the same y as the (1) now, if that's what u meant
02:45:555 (8) - unstack ✓

[Promising]

00:39:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make symmetrical about the axis Y Didn't understand this bit
00:49:105 (6) - make shorter. End this in 00:49:334 Was like that originaly, but then modded for the change, n I think its better now so.
01:00:211 (3) - add circle x
01:10:288 (3) - 1 more repite ✓
01:13:494 (4) - add circle x
01:15:097 (2) - ^ x
01:40:059 (3) - hey, you must place it closer to the previous object I don't have to do anything 8-)
02:07:998 (1) - haha My bad :(

02:13:150 (6) - move to 02:13:265 ✓
02:37:540 (3,5) - place it here ✓

02:53:341 (2) - delete and vove to this plase next slider ✓
03:09:830 (3) - circle? Bon idee! ✓
03:13:265 (2) - ^ ✓

Nice song and map :3 Thank you :)
Good luck)
Thanks for the mod! :)

CDFA wrote:

SPOILER
Welcome to the old map crew.

THE HARDEST DIFF:
00:38:685 (5) - I know spacing and stuff, but this might be more moe if this is just in the center of the box .3. Fair enough
01:05:708 (1) - Add clap at end of slider ✓
01:09:372 (1) - ^ ✓
01:14:181 (1) - Not a very moe slider D:! Also, I'm generally against having that many sliderpoints.✓
01:19:448 (2) - Add clap at end of slider ✓
01:29:066 (3) - Add clap ✓
01:29:295 (4) - Remove Clap ✓
01:33:647 (9) - Add clap x
01:40:059 (3) - Add clap at beginning of slider ✓
01:41:662 (1) - Add clap on repeat ✓
01:49:219 (1) - Add clap ✓
01:57:921 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider ✓, removed the one before as its a bit too much then.
01:57:921 (1) - Add clap on end of slider ✓
02:08:456 (2) - Add clap ✓
02:22:654 (1) - Add clap on end of slider ✓
02:23:570 (4) - ^ ✓
02:52:883 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sounds awkward, like it's overmapped ✓
02:56:547 (1) - The slightest of unsymmetricals. Move the bottom sliderpoint more towards the center ✓
03:02:960 (4) - ^ I'm assuming you copy-pasted the slider, so just fix the first one, and then CP it into this :> True ✓
03:10:746 (6) - Add clap ✓

THE MIDDLE DIFF:
00:37:311 (1) - This is one of those instances where I'm ok with having a bunch of repeats, but if you're going to do something different for the first two, then do it for this one too, or vise versa. :p ✓
00:57:692 - Snap this timing point :> ✓
00:59:295 (1) - Add finish on beginning x
01:20:364 (1) - Add clap on end of slider ✓
01:32:273 (4) - ^ ✓
01:35:937 (1) - ^ ✓
01:36:624 (2) - Remove Clap ✓
01:38:914 (2) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvdf5n-zI14 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VHCPEmdph8c
01:39:601 (3) - Add clap on end of slider
01:51:051 (3) - Add clap ✓
01:51:280 (4) - Remove Clap ✓
02:53:112 - N-N-Nou! The 0.75 section isn't really fitting~. At the very least, if you absolutely want to keep it, at least snap the timing section :>

THE EASIEST MODE:
What might be beneficial for this diff since there's a lot of sliders in silence is to get a silent sliderslide.wav. Can't find it e.e
00:29:982 - 00:38:685 - The timing sections for this first part are unneccesary~ They nice, I keep 'em, D:<
00:57:692 - I'm not sure if this is neccesary but if it is, snap it Very neccesary e-e
01:02:960 (5) - NC Yep, already fixed.
01:17:616 (6) - ^ ✓
01:27:692 (1) - N-N-Not moe! D: e.e?
01:33:647 (6) - Add clap on beginning of slider✓
01:41:891 (6) - ^ ✓
01:42:807 (7) - ^ ✓
01:49:219 (8) - ^ ✓
01:54:257 (5) - Think of a more interesting pattern then this :> But it's very interesting.
02:41:891 (1) - Remove NC x, I'll see if anyone else says that thou
02:56:547 (1) - Add clap on end of slider ✓
02:59:753 (2) - Add clap ✓
03:00:211 (3) - Remove clap ✓
03:05:250 (5) - Add clap on full slider ✓
03:07:082 (2) - Add clap ✓
03:08:456 (4) - Add clap ✓
03:16:242 (3) - Add clap on full slider ✓
03:19:906 (3) - Add clap on beginning and end of slider ✓

Overall, the main issue is that the claps are inconsistent ;~~;. I'm generally not as anal as I was in this mod, but that's because the claps are actually in the music, so I'm naturally annoyed by the fact that the claps are not consistent with what's going on in the music. My ear automatically hears when a clap is missing or when a clap is off because I can hear the consistent beat given by the music :>

Thanks for the mod (with hitsound fixes, I am really bad at these)! :)

Fenya wrote:

SPOILER
Hi~

General:
Missing work. What do you mean?
Remove the "," of tags Oh okk
The color black at times confused with the background. I'll consider

Easy:
There are many slidertick/sliders unsnapped, please Check it. Fixed
There are several patterns that can be confusing for new players.
00:32:273 (2) - Cover to (4)... It can be confusing for beginners.Won't change it ><
00:40:059 (6,7) - You should leave it at the same spacing that 00:32:273 (2,3), can be confusing. Fixed spacing
00:46:013 (3) - Slidertick unsnapped http://puu.sh/tgIJ Fixed
00:48:761 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/tgJj Fixed
00:49:677 (3) - ^ Fixed
01:03:418 (6) - End slidertick unnecessary http://puu.sh/tgKM Fixed
01:27:692 (1) - What? Fix it and try to put it like this: http://puu.sh/tgM8 Fixed
01:41:891 (6,7) - is a Easy >A< That isn't even hard to get ._.
01:54:257 (5) - I think you could do something more cute. Its a curveeee
03:02:960 (1,2,3) - I think it's very difficult... Fixed

Standard:
AR -1 Ok
There are many slidertick/sliders unsnapped, please Check it. They are just simply snapped to Grid: Tiny
00:29:982 (1) - Slidertick unsnapped and not sounds good, try doing this: http://puu.sh/tgSs or http://puu.sh/tgT6 Link didn't work
00:33:647 (1,2) - ^
00:40:059 (1) - It may be too abrupt a change in x1,0 to x0,5 in a normal... Imo. Ok
01:56:318 (2) - Spacing Fixed
02:18:990 (1) - I don't understand that you put slidertick unnecessary when the sliders are straight Dx Fixed
02:38:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Very complicated to be a normal, you should put it another way. Just because its standard (not normal) doesn't mean it has to be boring! Standard is a cross with some easy and some hard.

Promising:
Working in the sliders.

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
I hope you serve something.
Sorry for my bad English, good luck~ Thank you

Thank you!
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