Ultra 00:04:661 (7,8) - Why the different spacing compared to 00:03:835 (3,4) - ? Try this please; http://puu.sh/sM1P1/04827f22c2.jpg 00:14:800 (3,4) - Such a sharp turn! Reason being? If you wanna fix, I'd ctrl+g. 00:16:145 (2,3) - Although this is personal, maybe you can compliment 2 by making 3 a curved slider? AR seems a bit fast on this diff. Try 9.5 or 9.6? If no change in AR, why is it like this then?
Extra 00:37:765 (1,2,1,2) - Why the sharp turn for such a tight pattern? Could you ctrl+g the second pair so it plays better? 01:17:696 (6,1) - The only time you give the player a sharp movement. This part doesn't seem any different from the rest of the Kiai, so I suggest changing this part a bit. What you could do is make 01:17:489 (5,6) - horizontal sliders, and then ctrl+g the second one and move it so it shares similar distance, but plays better into the upcoming stream. I'll be honest, I tried finding options myself, but I couldn't think of anything better because of how compact in the corner this pattern was. So this could just be me. You decide. 01:22:869 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Considering the distance, these look a lot like the 1/8 streams. Could these streams have more spacing?
Insane 01:12:421 - Useless line?
Hyper 00:25:558 (4,5,6,7,8) - Seems a little intense for such a weak part of the song. Could you use 2 1/4 circles then a 1/2 slider?