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kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年7月11日 at 20:21:30

Artist: Shakira
Title: Try Everything
Source: Zootopia
Tags: Zootropolis Walt Disney Movie Original Motion Picture Soundtrack OST Gazelle Single Kencho
BPM: 115.5
Filesize: 27407kb
Play Time: 02:50
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.18 stars, 152 notes)
  2. Hard (2.83 stars, 403 notes)
  3. Kencho's Zootopia (3.72 stars, 503 notes)
  4. Normal (1.81 stars, 259 notes)
Download: Shakira - Try Everything
Download: Shakira - Try Everything (no video)
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I won't give up no I won't give in

Till I reach the end and then I'll start again

No I won't leave I wanna try everything

I wanna try even though I could fail
#1 Ranked

Z o o t o p i a ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Diffs
Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by me
Kencho's Zootopia by Kencho
Thanks Kencho for the hitsounds and storyboard lyrics！
Thanks ezek for video!
Welcome for Mods!
Hope it can rank <3
Modders
Narcissu
Karen
kulnNO
gorgonzoler
Shad0w1and
Lyric
- Scar -
Lily Bread
GenesisR
Pata-Mon
Vert
[ Abhor ]
ZZHBOY
CrystilonZ
HappyRocket88
Karen
“感谢以上的modder”
“正是你们让我不断re”
If you want to try another thing, plz click :) (https://osu.ppy.sh/s/419869)
Last edited by kanor , edited 56 times in total.
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
送你一个星QWQ
谢谢帮我NM啦，加油哦
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

送你一个星QWQ
谢谢帮我NM啦，加油哦
thanks(๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
有幾個基本設置注意一下……

Tag不需要加逗號這個QQ裏面說過了……

一個是BG你是豎的1366*1980，Osu沒辦法拉成正常大小建議修一下……

然後是音量你是100% 默認S組……這個你可以參考其他Rank 圖修一下，音效也是……不知道怎麼弄的話隨便拉個人問問

一樣的顏色是unrankable，四個不同的顏色或者把同樣的顏色去掉嗯嗯
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Narcissu wrote:

有幾個基本設置注意一下……

Tag不需要加逗號這個QQ裏面說過了……

一個是BG你是豎的1366*1980，Osu沒辦法拉成正常大小建議修一下……

然後是音量你是100% 默認S組……這個你可以參考其他Rank 圖修一下，音效也是……不知道怎麼弄的話隨便拉個人問問

一樣的顏色是unrankable，四個不同的顏色或者把同樣的顏色去掉嗯嗯
嗯嗯，知道啦，音效打算去参考一下已经q了的同名图，如果只有2色nc没问题的话就把另外两个删啦。感谢辅导员(๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)
Karen
2,860 posts
Joined August 2013
Karen
[Nick&Judy]
  1. 首先不要开100%音量作图，否则听不清音乐
  2. Tag用空格隔开不要用逗号
  3. 00:09:674 (2,3) - 太近的样子
  4. 00:13:830 (5,6) - 这两个滑条中间隔1/4拍你用这么大间距，00:14:220 (6,7) - 这两个隔了1/2拍又用这么小的，怎么读嘛
  5. 00:21:232 (2,3) - 太难了吧
  6. 00:26:168 (3,4) - 你看看这距离和 00:25:648 (2,3) - 这个的距离
  7. 01:05:908 (6,1) - 距离太小了
  8. 后面还有很多这样的东西，我就不一一列举了，排列还有很大的提升空间，注意把握好距离的变换，能试一下自己图就多试试
GL~
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Karen wrote:

[Nick&Judy]
  1. 首先不要开100%音量作图，否则听不清音乐
  2. Tag用空格隔开不要用逗号
  3. 00:09:674 (2,3) - 太近的样子
  4. 00:13:830 (5,6) - 这两个滑条中间隔1/4拍你用这么大间距，00:14:220 (6,7) - 这两个隔了1/2拍又用这么小的，怎么读嘛
  5. 00:21:232 (2,3) - 太难了吧
  6. 00:26:168 (3,4) - 你看看这距离和 00:25:648 (2,3) - 这个的距离
  7. 01:05:908 (6,1) - 距离太小了
  8. 后面还有很多这样的东西，我就不一一列举了，排列还有很大的提升空间，注意把握好距离的变换，能试一下自己图就多试试
GL~
猴，间距问题还是得慢慢改……thanks(๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)
回去就送摸送到手软(๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)
kulnNO
16 posts
Joined February 2015
kulnNO
[Nick&Judy]
  1. 说实话不会摸图，这是打了之后的感受（
  2. 00:36:297 (12) - NC
  3. 01:06:168 (1) - 放滑条感觉好一些
  4. 02:41:492 (6) - 被这三连的间距恶心到了
    以上
    顺带求laika摸一下我的NT呗owo
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

kulnNO wrote:

[Nick&Judy]
  1. 说实话不会摸图，这是打了之后的感受（
  2. 00:36:297 (12) - NC 改了
  3. 01:06:168 (1) - 放滑条感觉好一些 本来总共就两组五连，不打算改了
  4. 02:41:492 (6) - 被这三连的间距恶心到了 已改，果然三连的间距还是要保持一致√
    以上
    顺带求laika摸一下我的NT呗owo
马上去
gorgonzoler
104 posts
Joined March 2013
gorgonzoler
Hello! I m gorgonzoler from osu! 新人mapper群
目前为止就一个Diff所以摸的尽量好一点把。
zootopia没有看过呢，因为单身未脱团，所以你懂得
test play
怎么说呢……
感觉有点针对于某些人群的指法，不知道是不是我读图的原因。
直到我把指法换成了强双……好打多了（ruoji）
General
唔……看见有前面吐槽过你的BG我就不说啦OwO。
AIcheck：Warning*5（望自行修改）
最高难度
首先感觉你的NC太别扭了……一般在做NC的时候我都是习惯于1个8拍给一个NC。这样有一小节结束的感觉（当然有例外的例子不过个人感觉并不合适）。我会在本mod结尾列出我认为需要NC和取消NC的地方（只是示例，全部列出来的话那就长懒看了。望自行体会）。
00:44:609 (5,6,7,8) - 感觉这里会很坑……因为音乐中没有任何迹象表明这里会跳
01:25:908 (1,2,3) - 这里的流畅度感觉不是很好。
就这么多，本人还不是很擅长摸图应该这样或那样摆（与其误导不如不做）
没有Hitsound呢。如果能加上的话会为你的图增色不少。另外还不是很清楚你的combo colour为什么只有两种。没有什么特殊原因还是用默认的吧。
以下需要nc：
00:02:271 (5) -
00:06:427 (4) -
00:10:583 (4) -
00:14:739 (7) -
以下需要取消nc：
00:15:518 (1) -
另外一书，如果你愿意让我修改所有的nc。我也可以列出来。you choice!
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

gorgonzoler wrote:

Hello! I m gorgonzoler from osu! 新人mapper群
目前为止就一个Diff所以摸的尽量好一点把。
zootopia没有看过呢，因为单身未脱团，所以你懂得
test play
怎么说呢……
感觉有点针对于某些人群的指法，不知道是不是我读图的原因。
直到我把指法换成了强双……好打多了（ruoji）
General
唔……看见有前面吐槽过你的BG我就不说啦OwO。
AIcheck：Warning*5（望自行修改）
最高难度
首先感觉你的NC太别扭了……一般在做NC的时候我都是习惯于1个8拍给一个NC。这样有一小节结束的感觉（当然有例外的例子不过个人感觉并不合适）。我会在本mod结尾列出我认为需要NC和取消NC的地方（只是示例，全部列出来的话那就长懒看了。望自行体会）。
00:44:609 (5,6,7,8) - 感觉这里会很坑……因为音乐中没有任何迹象表明这里会跳 恩，改了
01:25:908 (1,2,3) - 这里的流畅度感觉不是很好。 把中间那个往下移了点，应该会好点
就这么多，本人还不是很擅长摸图应该这样或那样摆（与其误导不如不做）
没有Hitsound呢。如果能加上的话会为你的图增色不少。另外还不是很清楚你的combo colour为什么只有两种。没有什么特殊原因还是用默认的吧。 因为我打算先确定排列再去下音效，不然到时候改起来会很麻烦，以及NC颜色的话，是zootopia中两位主人公的颜色√
以下需要nc：
00:02:271 (5) - fixed
00:06:427 (4) - ^
00:10:583 (4) - ^
00:14:739 (7) - ^另外这开头的NC我记得我改过啊......迷
以下需要取消nc：
00:15:518 (1) -
另外一书，如果你愿意让我修改所有的nc。我也可以列出来。you choice!
thx~♪(^∇^*)
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
实在没什么能说的，这种风格我不太适应，主要全部都是自定义节奏。
随便说几个吧
00:53:181 (3,4,5) - 这种形状怎么看都不像现代图追求的整洁风
00:55:778 (7,8) - 既然有包的一向就绝对要包好，你这图毕竟没有随意挥洒的那种乱感，那就老实包
01:08:245 (7,8) - 一样的包好。
01:23:700 - 01:24:479 - 这个音明明是拖长音，但是没有滑条往后盖住
这种我会填满
SPOILER
后面类似的不提了
总体感觉有很多梗强行下的，不是很好看。慢慢来吧
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Shad0w1and wrote:

实在没什么能说的，这种风格我不太适应，主要全部都是自定义节奏。
随便说几个吧
00:53:181 (3,4,5) - 这种形状怎么看都不像现代图追求的整洁风 改了，不过不是很清楚怎样才算整洁，看改完之后有没有谁再帮忙看看√
00:55:778 (7,8) - 既然有包的一向就绝对要包好，你这图毕竟没有随意挥洒的那种乱感，那就老实包 两个等长的滑条我不太会包......8改得更圆一点
01:08:245 (7,8) - 一样的包好。 这里是说7的那个滑条尾对准8凹进去的部分？我是这么改的
01:23:700 - 01:24:479 - 这个音明明是拖长音，但是没有滑条往后盖住 好像有点懂了，不过这么下会不会瞬间提高难度哇......这个难度我最多就塞了5连，突然一下放这么多我有点虚......
这种我会填满
SPOILER
后面类似的不提了
总体感觉有很多梗强行下的，不是很好看。慢慢来吧
感谢虾抖爷爷，摸你的图最舒服了还有kds拿♪(^∇^*)
Lyric
293 posts
Joined September 2013
Lyric
Nick&Judy
  1. 00:00:194 (1,2) - 把circle放在折返箭头下面很容易让人摸不到头脑。
  2. 00:02:012 (4) - 节奏上感觉没必要摆这个circle。
  3. 00:13:830 (5,6) - 个人认为这种Overlap不美观。
  4. 00:15:129 (2,3) - 不要碰到。
  5. 这图给人一种没有多少毛病，但是总体很散乱的感觉。有很多小问题自己用AIMod看一下。NC好像很乱注意一下。good luck。
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Lyric wrote:

Nick&Judy
  1. 00:00:194 (1,2) - 把circle放在折返箭头下面很容易让人摸不到头脑。 果然是！改掉了√
  2. 00:02:012 (4) - 节奏上感觉没必要摆这个circle。 恩，改成直线了
  3. 00:13:830 (5,6) - 个人认为这种Overlap不美观。 改成了和00:15:129 (2,3) - 已经的排列，不美观可能是前后节奏一直间距却不同？0w0
  4. 00:15:129 (2,3) - 不要碰到。 改了√
  5. 这图给人一种没有多少毛病，但是总体很散乱的感觉。有很多小问题自己用AIMod看一下。NC好像很乱注意一下。good luck。
总算从“这图想rank？！”变成“没有明显的硬伤”，喜极而泣（X
散乱的问题可能还是作图经验不够足，等再re几遍应该会再好点√
NC是之前有几个地方重新摆结果没注意到......恩改完应该舒服一点了√
感谢lyric爷爷的摸0w0
- Scar -
- Scar -
[Nick&Judy]
00:15:129 (2,1) - 柑橘这衔接有点丑
01:08:245 (7,8,9) - ^
00:15:518 (1,2,3,4) - 间距不舒服
00:32:921 (1,1) - ^
01:01:752 (3,4,5) - ^
01:59:155 (1,2,3) - ^
01:59:674 (3,4,5) - ^
02:09:804 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:687 (3,4,5) - ^
03:01:752 (6,7,8) - ^
00:41:752 (1) - 丑
00:46:687 (1) - ^
02:39:674 (8) - ^
00:43:830 (3) - 太硬了 最好加点变柔和一点
01:04:610 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星歪了
01:15:778 (1,2,3) - 往下移一点
01:25:908 (1,2,3) - 不在同一直线上
01:47:466 (6,1) - 没包好
02:16:298 (3,4,5) - ^
01:51:882 (5) - 弧度和之前几个一样如何？
01:56:558 (1) -
SPOILER
01:59:674 (3) - ^类似上面的描点会好看很多 可以参考LKS的朧
02:02:272 (7) - ^
02:15:258 (9) - ^
02:56:816 (1) -
SPOILER
03:05:129 (4) - NC
03:05:129 (4,5,6,7) - 改成同样弧度或者试试SV渐减
01:30:323 (2,3,4) - 这个梗在全图普遍使用 但是要斟酌一下 有些地方我柑橘有些生硬了


起飞吧土狗土狗子!Good luck! :)
ReneePrower
90 posts
Joined April 2012
ReneePrower
Hiya! :) The description says you're remapping Nick&Judy diff; would you rather I wait until remap is done before modding?

Also, I'm interested in doing one of the GD's, assuming you're still looking for mappers! :3 I'll take Normal if no one's claimed it.
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

- Scar - wrote:

[Nick&Judy]
00:15:129 (2,1) - 柑橘这衔接有点丑
01:08:245 (7,8,9) - ^
00:15:518 (1,2,3,4) - 间距不舒服
00:32:921 (1,1) - ^
01:01:752 (3,4,5) - ^
01:59:155 (1,2,3) - ^
01:59:674 (3,4,5) - ^
02:09:804 (1,2,3) - ^
02:26:687 (3,4,5) - ^
03:01:752 (6,7,8) - ^
00:41:752 (1) - 丑
00:46:687 (1) - ^
02:39:674 (8) - ^
00:43:830 (3) - 太硬了 最好加点变柔和一点
01:04:610 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星歪了
01:15:778 (1,2,3) - 往下移一点
01:25:908 (1,2,3) - 不在同一直线上
01:47:466 (6,1) - 没包好
02:16:298 (3,4,5) - ^
01:51:882 (5) - 弧度和之前几个一样如何？
01:56:558 (1) -
SPOILER
01:59:674 (3) - ^类似上面的描点会好看很多 可以参考LKS的朧
02:02:272 (7) - ^
02:15:258 (9) - ^
02:56:816 (1) -
SPOILER
03:05:129 (4) - NC
03:05:129 (4,5,6,7) - 改成同样弧度或者试试SV渐减
01:30:323 (2,3,4) - 这个梗在全图普遍使用 但是要斟酌一下 有些地方我柑橘有些生硬了


起飞吧土狗土狗子!Good luck! :)
thx for mod
Lily Bread
1,228 posts
Joined December 2014
Lily Bread
as request

[Easy]
没什么问题，挺安全的。
以后可以试试把图做的舒展点，不要老是在一个地方打转。当然这个不算什么问题

[Normal]
00:20:649 (6,7,1) - 这种相邻的1/2最好不要这样一个叠了一个不叠吧..要么都叠，要么都不叠看起来会比较舒服点，不过像你这样做成全图的一种style的话好像也挺好的

01:29:740 (4,5) - 不过既然如此，这个diff里就最好不要有1/1的stack了，只要stack就是1/2，这样会比较好读。因为是normal嘛

01:49:480 (2,3) - stack造成的刮蹭，小问题

[Hard]
00:12:857 (1,1) - 下午才有人跟我说hard里转盘接物件要隔1拍或以上，不知道是不是真的

01:31:818 (1,2) - 间隔不太对..hard里的话，3/4滑条接圈一般要求统一一个间隔，你对比一下 - 01:27:662 (1,2) -

01:23:377 -
02:29:740 - 这两个时间附近开关kiai太频繁了，应该是有绿线漏了开kiai吧？

02:09:221 (4,5) - 嗯这个三连怎么没掉了...算了，这种三连我摸不来，就不提了

[Kencho's Zootopia]
nothing

总体没什么问题，除了hard里转盘后接物件（不是转盘前放物件）的间隔要注意一下
GenesisR
57 posts
Joined February 2013
GenesisR
听到锋哥说到就来看了，感谢风格的推荐。normal我实在不太懂啦，只摸了三个难度QAQ，见谅。感觉挺好的，所以摸的大概比较水，抱歉啦。

Kencho's Zootopia
SPOILER
00:00:390 (1,2,3) - 感觉有点听不太清，也许可以把音量大一些？后面一样的地方同
00:12:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也许可以考虑跟一下白线的重音？后面一样的地方同
00:18:312 (4,5) - 后面还有几个，感觉可以考虑把后面的circle和前面的slider放近一些，节奏容易读些
00:55:454 (4,6) - 似乎没包好
02:13:117 (3,1,2) - 感觉1和2稍微分开一点好些

Hard
SPOILER
00:34:675 (3,5) - 似乎没包好
01:10:260 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 感觉这三个滑条稍微分开一点点容易读一些
01:50:519 (1,2) - 感觉稍微分开一些好读一点
01:59:351 (1,2,3) - 1和2稍微再分开一些可能会更好读一些
02:25:325 (3,4) - 似乎没包好
02:34:156 (1,2) - 似乎没包好

Easy
SPOILER
01:06:364 (4,1) - 对于easy会不会太难，后面一样的梗同理
01:58:831 (3,4,1) - 这个也许容易读错？考虑要不要把1的位置提高一点？

感谢M4M，附上我的图的地址 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/447874
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Lily Bread wrote:

as request

[Easy]
没什么问题，挺安全的。
以后可以试试把图做的舒展点，不要老是在一个地方打转。当然这个不算什么问题 第一次做EZ......安全第一； ；

[Normal]
00:20:649 (6,7,1) - 这种相邻的1/2最好不要这样一个叠了一个不叠吧..要么都叠，要么都不叠看起来会比较舒服点，不过像你这样做成全图的一种style的话好像也挺好的 本来是想都不叠的，怕难度爆炸......

01:29:740 (4,5) - 不过既然如此，这个diff里就最好不要有1/1的stack了，只要stack就是1/2，这样会比较好读。因为是normal嘛 实在觉得这里应该停顿一下，改了之后总觉得不如之前的好，我暂时keep吧

01:49:480 (2,3) - stack造成的刮蹭，小问题 fixed

[Hard]
00:12:857 (1,1) - 下午才有人跟我说hard里转盘接物件要隔1拍或以上，不知道是不是真的 保险起见我改了吧√

01:31:818 (1,2) - 间隔不太对..hard里的话，3/4滑条接圈一般要求统一一个间隔，你对比一下 - 01:27:662 (1,2) - 改了

01:23:377 -
02:29:740 - 这两个时间附近开关kiai太频繁了，应该是有绿线漏了开kiai吧？ 应该是，我去改

02:09:221 (4,5) - 嗯这个三连怎么没掉了...算了，这种三连我摸不来，就不提了 恩.....三连确实是个问题

总体没什么问题，除了hard里转盘后接物件（不是转盘前放物件）的间隔要注意一下
THX FOR MODDING! :)

GenesisR wrote:

听到锋哥说到就来看了，感谢风格的推荐。normal我实在不太懂啦，只摸了三个难度QAQ，见谅。感觉挺好的，所以摸的大概比较水，抱歉啦。 感谢啃球神马破QAQ

Hard
SPOILER
00:34:675 (3,5) - 似乎没包好 这里不是blanket，只是和00:34:156 (2,5) - 的头尾组成一条直线
01:10:260 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 感觉这三个滑条稍微分开一点点容易读一些 这里为了顺flow稍微挨住了一点，可以节省空间，最近我也在学......不过感觉应该不会很难读吧
01:50:519 (1,2) - 感觉稍微分开一些好读一点 刻意stack的，这样图看起来会比较干净
01:59:351 (1,2,3) - 1和2稍微再分开一些可能会更好读一些 同01:10:260 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3) -
02:25:325 (3,4) - 似乎没包好 fixed
02:34:156 (1,2) - 似乎没包好
fixed

Easy
SPOILER
01:06:364 (4,1) - 对于easy会不会太难，后面一样的梗同理 应该不会吧.......orz这个下法应该没什么大问题
01:58:831 (3,4,1) - 这个也许容易读错？考虑要不要把1的位置提高一点？
感觉可改可不改，暂时Keep吧，不然小范围DS改动还要调很久orz

感谢M4M，附上我的图的地址 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/447874
THX FOR MOD，我待会就去送摸 :)
Binguo
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Binguo
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Pata-Mon
1,489 posts
Joined March 2015
Pata-Mon
M4M

blanket就都不挑了，要说的话这方面提升空间很大

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:857 (1,1) - 一般来说ez里要空一小节。尽管你bpm比较低，但毕竟也有100了，最好删掉后面
  2. 00:31:558 (3,1) - 太近
  3. 01:46:364 (1) - 不能理解从这里进。把这个删掉，01:47:922 (2) - 或者01:48:441 (1) - 进都挺舒服的。normal也是，hard倒没问题
  4. 01:48:441 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 连续的直线有点多了 不太好看
[Normal]
  1. 00:37:792 (1,2,3) - 贴的就有点近，上一组00:33:636 (1,2,3) - 就没啥问题，为什么不复制粘贴旋转
  2. 节奏方面，你要多想想这个难度kiai以外的部分，哪些1/2要跟哪些不跟，还有怎么跟，用滑条用note，叠不叠，比如我问你下面几个问题：
    为什么00:22:987 (3) - 有东西00:21:948 - 没东西？
    00:25:065 (8) - 有而00:24:545 - 没有？
    00:31:299 (3) - 有而00:30:260 - 没有？
    像最后一个里，现在有的地方只有琴完全没人声，而你空出来的地方有琴还有比较重的人声，一小节里出现这种情况在我看来是根本不能接受的。
    感觉节奏还是要多想想，不要太随手
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:312 (4) - 这是用折返强行跟"s"吗？那种音一般来说无视掉更好，而且你为了跟这个音还把重音放到了尾巴，而且滑条开头相对是轻，这就更不舒服
  2. 00:22:078 (4) - hard里我的建议是这类全都无视，要跟的话也不建议用note
  3. 00:25:325 (1,2,3) - 重音问题
    SPOILER
  4. 00:48:441 (1) - 在hard里有点太短，而且转盘后1/2其实本来就危险，因为bpm低或许还好，开头也有
    01:54:805 (1) -
  5. 01:03:896 (7) - 不合适的overmap
    02:10:389 (7) -
啃球不会有问题，就到这儿了，GL~
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

Pata-Mon wrote:

M4M

blanket就都不挑了，要说的话这方面提升空间很大

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:857 (1,1) - 一般来说ez里要空一小节。尽管你bpm比较低，但毕竟也有100了，最好删掉后面 问过啃球说没问题，就懒得改了
  2. 00:31:558 (3,1) - 太近 改了
  3. 01:46:364 (1) - 不能理解从这里进。把这个删掉，01:47:922 (2) - 或者01:48:441 (1) - 进都挺舒服的。normal也是，hard倒没问题 删掉了
  4. 01:48:441 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - 连续的直线有点多了 不太好看
因为之前里面用了很多弧形有点审美疲劳，就用下直线

[Normal]
  1. 00:37:792 (1,2,3) - 贴的就有点近，上一组00:33:636 (1,2,3) - 就没啥问题，为什么不复制粘贴旋转
  2. 节奏方面，你要多想想这个难度kiai以外的部分，哪些1/2要跟哪些不跟，还有怎么跟，用滑条用note，叠不叠，比如我问你下面几个问题：
    为什么00:22:987 (3) - 有东西00:21:948 - 没东西？
    00:25:065 (8) - 有而00:24:545 - 没有？因为00:17:792 -这里我也没有下东西，我也没有坐NORMAL的经验，统一节奏的话我就这么下了。
    00:31:299 (3) - 有而00:30:260 - 没有？因为00:26:104 - 也没下东西^
    像最后一个里，现在有的地方只有琴完全没人声，而你空出来的地方有琴还有比较重的人声，一小节里出现这种情况在我看来是根本不能接受的。猴，会继续想想的
    感觉节奏还是要多想想，不要太随手
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:312 (4) - 这是用折返强行跟"s"吗？那种音一般来说无视掉更好，而且你为了跟这个音还把重音放到了尾巴，而且滑条开头相对是轻，这就更不舒服
  2. 00:22:078 (4) - hard里我的建议是这类全都无视，要跟的话也不建议用note 还好，打起来没感觉很奇葩，暂时keep
  3. 00:25:325 (1,2,3) - 重音问题
    SPOILER
  4. 00:48:441 (1) - 在hard里有点太短，而且转盘后1/2其实本来就危险，因为bpm低或许还好，开头也有
    01:54:805 (1) - 开头那个往前提了，第二个改成了三个单点，第三个感觉不放转盘好奇怪啊.......重音我下在滑条尾就是为了放转盘orz总觉得不是很舒服qaq
    暂时keep吧，我再想想怎么改比较好
  5. 01:03:896 (7) - 不合适的overmap
    02:10:389 (7) -
这里想不到怎么做比较好，感觉到了这里曲子节奏就变得怪怪的orz，协调节奏暂时就这么下了orz

啃球不会有问题，就到这儿了，GL~
TNX for modding
Vert
424 posts
Joined October 2013
Vert
我记得是m4m来着 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/448818

[kencho]
有sb吗？没有，关掉widescreen support
od=ar 杀人吗
00:50:779 (2,3,4) - 感觉不是很好看
01:39:610 (7,1) - 挨得太近了
也许打起来更舒服了，不过我还是觉得肯爷原来的图风更牛逼
白永 app when

低难度看了一下没啥问题，widescreen support都应该关了，没啥了

gl star
Kencho
952 posts
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Kencho
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GenesisR

GenesisR wrote:

Kencho's Zootopia
00:00:390 (1,2,3) - 感觉有点听不太清，也许可以把音量大一些？后面一样的地方同 Fixed
00:12:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - 也许可以考虑跟一下白线的重音？后面一样的地方同 這裡我跟vocals
00:18:312 (4,5) - 后面还有几个，感觉可以考虑把后面的circle和前面的slider放近一些，节奏容易读些 好
00:55:454 (4,6) - 似乎没包好 Fixed
02:13:117 (3,1,2) - 感觉1和2稍微分开一点好些 破壞了梗

Vert

Vert wrote:

[kencho]
有sb吗？没有，关掉widescreen support 加上了SB
od=ar 杀人吗 打了你就知道不殺人，另外現在AR7.6 OD7.4
00:50:779 (2,3,4) - 感觉不是很好看 我喜歡放這種啊233
01:39:610 (7,1) - 挨得太近了 前面的梗和後面的梗都不好動……
也许打起来更舒服了，不过我还是觉得肯爷原来的图风更牛逼QAQ
白永 app when 等FD一出就去填坑

Thanks for mod

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SB code : http://puu.sh/ptoBw/bf25ce489a.rar
Lobelia
858 posts
Joined February 2014
Lobelia
帮你看一发吧=W=

[ Easy ]
00:18:052 (2) - 离前一个物件DS偏差过 0.02啦，一般低难度偏差0-0.01比较好
00:31:558 (3,4) - 这里来回还是顺着FLOW来吧，下次注意哦，这次应该没啥0 0
00:55:454 (2,3) - 这里遮挡看着不是很好诶。。。低难度要这种遮挡还是接个稍微长一点的滑条比较好吧？
01:29:740 (1) - 这种类似的NC还是不要了吧 ，低难度保持两根大白线一NC就好，本来都是跟1/1走的也没什么特别大节奏变化
01:33:896 (1) - ↑
01:50:519 (1) - NC取消
02:12:857 (4,1,2) - 然后类似这种低难度最好别显着太拥挤了，看着这里不好改下次注意0 0

[ Normal ]
01:22:727 (2) - 01:06:104 (1) - 为什么一个NC一个不NC？这里节奏变密集了，可以NC
02:29:220 (2) - ↑

[ Hard ]
00:15:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - 怎么说呢。。你这一段开始跟的人声，00:17:013 (1) - 这里又开始跟重音鼓了，这样衔接很不自然啊。。就是说如果要开始跟人声的话00:16:753 (5) - 滑条就应该从这里开始00:17:273 - 到这里结束，或者你开始就从00:15:454 - 这里跟起，所以说了这么多。。00:15:454 - 你这里多加个圈试试？
00:49:480 (1,2,3) - 这里我觉得挺适合的。。但是H里面还是难度系数比较低的，然后前后节奏也并没空出来，我觉得三个单点重叠跟后面滑条接一个小跳可能被挑的几率小一点？你觉得呢？
01:05:584 (1) - 我知道你大概是要配合排列所以这里NC的，但是这里NC不符合音乐感觉- -
01:22:208 (1) - ↑，你再去问问别人这个位置看看0 0因为这里的确不符合音乐，但是这里不NC感觉读图有点难度
01:55:974 (1) - 这里我前面说了的
02:50:519 (1) - 这里NC貌似没什么必要诶0 0？

主要帮你看看0 0啃球神马破，我就不看啦QWQ
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

[ Abhor ] wrote:

帮你看一发吧=W=

[ Easy ]
00:18:052 (2) - 离前一个物件DS偏差过 0.02啦，一般低难度偏差0-0.01比较好 fixed
00:31:558 (3,4) - 这里来回还是顺着FLOW来吧，下次注意哦，这次应该没啥0 0 恩，下次会注意的0 0
00:55:454 (2,3) - 这里遮挡看着不是很好诶。。。低难度要这种遮挡还是接个稍微长一点的滑条比较好吧？ 看了下感觉还好吧....也不是特别遮，懒得改了
01:29:740 (1) - 这种类似的NC还是不要了吧 ，低难度保持两根大白线一NC就好，本来都是跟1/1走的也没什么特别大节奏变化 猴
01:33:896 (1) - ↑ ^
01:50:519 (1) - NC取消 猴
02:12:857 (4,1,2) - 然后类似这种低难度最好别显着太拥挤了，看着这里不好改下次注意0 0 恩好

[ Normal ]
01:22:727 (2) - 01:06:104 (1) - 为什么一个NC一个不NC？这里节奏变密集了，可以NC
02:29:220 (2) - ↑ 恩改了，同样的地方都NC了

[ Hard ]
00:15:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - 怎么说呢。。你这一段开始跟的人声，00:17:013 (1) - 这里又开始跟重音鼓了，这样衔接很不自然啊。。就是说如果要开始跟人声的话00:16:753 (5) - 滑条就应该从这里开始00:17:273 - 到这里结束，或者你开始就从00:15:454 - 这里跟起，所以说了这么多。。00:15:454 - 你这里多加个圈试试？ 改了，但是不知道转盘能不能过.....之前本来这个地方是转盘尾的，不过好像说这么接不容易rank就改了......
00:49:480 (1,2,3) - 这里我觉得挺适合的。。但是H里面还是难度系数比较低的，然后前后节奏也并没空出来，我觉得三个单点重叠跟后面滑条接一个小跳可能被挑的几率小一点？你觉得呢？ 想玩玩梗嘛.......叠在一起就不好玩了233333
01:05:584 (1) - 我知道你大概是要配合排列所以这里NC的，但是这里NC不符合音乐感觉- -
01:22:208 (1) - ↑，你再去问问别人这个位置看看0 0因为这里的确不符合音乐，但是这里不NC感觉读图有点难度
01:55:974 (1) - 这里我前面说了的
恩这里我试着把NC往前面提一个，感觉在重音上可能会好点？
02:50:519 (1) - 这里NC貌似没什么必要诶0 0？ 有点强迫症......习惯性地NC了一下.......感觉也没什么特别别扭的，keep
主要帮你看看0 0啃球神马破，我就不看啦QWQ
THX owo 离原加油 :)
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
[General]
恳求那最后一段 强行跟vocal太蛋疼了 把删了谢谢
[Easy]
00:52:338 (3) - 可以弧度大点简单包下
01:40:130 - 这段break有点违和 因为和前后也没啥差别 放几个1/2补上也许会好点 另外几个难度也是
02:06:104 (2) - 弧度大点把3包好点
[Normal]
02:02:467 (4) - 可以弧度大点包好点
[Hard]
00:33:636 (1) - 这里用1/2就好 00:33:896 - 这里正好也有音的
00:35:714 (1) - 00:37:792 (1) - 00:41:948 (1) - 00:44:026 (1) - 不要用3/4强行跟vocal 而且1/2的地方也有音 3/4的话从00:50:260 (1) - 这里再开始用就没啥问题
不懂跟vocal 懒看了
[Kencho]
00:34:026 (3) - 这里好像没音 把去了
00:42:338 (3) - ^
其实我觉得开头那段也没必要去做 你一定要跟vocal的话就留着吧
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho

ZZHBOY wrote:

[General]
恳求那最后一段 强行跟vocal太蛋疼了 把删了谢谢 Nooooooooooo 跟vocal多好
[Kencho]
00:34:026 (3) - 这里好像没音 把去了 好
00:42:338 (3) - ^ 好
其实我觉得开头那段也没必要去做 你一定要跟vocal的话就留着吧 我要留著
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kanor
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Topic Starter
kanor

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Easy]

ZZHBOY wrote:

[Easy]
00:52:338 (3) - 可以弧度大点简单包下 猴，fixed
01:40:130 - 这段break有点违和 因为和前后也没啥差别 放几个1/2补上也许会好点 另外几个难度也是 嗯把这里都填了
02:06:104 (2) - 弧度大点把3包好点 fixed
[Normal]
02:02:467 (4) - 可以弧度大点包好点 fixed
[Hard]
00:33:636 (1) - 这里用1/2就好 00:33:896 - 这里正好也有音的 可以
00:35:714 (1) - 00:37:792 (1) - 00:41:948 (1) - 00:44:026 (1) - 不要用3/4强行跟vocal 而且1/2的地方也有音 3/4的话从00:50:260 (1) - 这里再开始用就没啥问题 猴，改回1/2了
不懂跟vocal 懒看了
种种花带我飞啊1111111
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
bub.
to next bn: pay attention to the first and the last part of kencho's diff, judge if those notes which followed vocal is proper.
CrystilonZ
1,557 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
omg this map is good XDD
by the way? who did the storyboard. The lyrics are wrong lol

01:43:506 - that cut your breath take a deep breath

and you could have asked me or ezek if you want to use the video orz :( I would have been happy to give you.

Even though I'm not a BN, here are my thoughts: the last part of the Insane is fine, if you leave out it being awfully monotonous.

Good luck! I'm looking forward to this getting ranked XD
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Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho

CrystilonZ wrote:

omg this map is good XDD
by the way? who did the storyboard. The lyrics are wrong lol

01:43:506 - that cut your breath take a deep breath

Thanks for find out this mistake. In the official lyrics indeed it is "take a deep breath".

and you could have asked me or ezek if you want to use the video orz :( I would have been happy to give you.

Sorry about that because I told creator to use your video and I didn't ask you :(

Even though I'm not a BN, here are my thoughts: the last part of the Insane is fine, if you leave out it being awfully monotonous.

Good luck! I'm looking forward to this getting ranked XD
no kds
:) :) :)
kanor
925 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
kanor

CrystilonZ wrote:

omg this map is good XDD
by the way? who did the storyboard. The lyrics are wrong lol

01:43:506 - that cut your breath take a deep breath

and you could have asked me or ezek if you want to use the video orz :( I would have been happy to give you.

Even though I'm not a BN, here are my thoughts: the last part of the Insane is fine, if you leave out it being awfully monotonous.

Good luck! I'm looking forward to this getting ranked XD
thx :) I am sorry about use your video with you application... I would put your name into the edit ！
all thr fix will be fixed after I find the second bn( ｰ̀εｰ́ )
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CrystilonZ
1,557 posts
Joined January 2013
CrystilonZ
Put ezek instead lol. He's the one who gave me the video XD
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