biemote wrote:

STAR:
paperles*2

paperlens wrote:

biemote wrote:

STAR:
paperles*2

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首先是00:23:971 (23971|0,24087|2) - 这种note的问题 我的意见是用jack
1.这种东西很影响读谱，换成jack可以让人省去一个note的读谱压力
2.这种东西及其影响判定，人耳是很难听清这里的snap的 你这样摆一定会打成1/4的snap导致局部判定崩溃甚至整体读谱崩溃
3.使用jack一方面适应正常人的手速让它可以更轻松押300 另一方面降低读谱难度 何乐而不为
4.jack并不难，而且这里本来也是同音，而且可以让后面的谱面更富有变zuo化you性pai，便于突出00:24:231 - 高音等特征音
5.你连这个jack都没用 还什么玛丽罗斯授权 玛丽罗斯看不起你啦


00:26:515 (26515|2,26572|1,26659|0) - 你说你这让我怎么打判定

00:44:087 - 说真的 滚来滚去很难判定 根本不知道在打什么，00:44:347 - 之后00:44:434 - 把这四个鼓音换成左右拍来与前面区分

00:46:168 - 00:57:266 - 这段全曲最累

01:15:301 - 这种pattern看了真的很气，我十分建议你用pattern的不同来区分1/6和1/4而不是一路滚

01:15:994 - 你问我左右拍和一路滚哪个更垃圾？我选择：都垃圾

01:25:532 - 右手这里是反人类的。而且01:25:879 - 你都双键，这里为什么不能双键？

01:28:480 - 不知道你觉不觉得这里高潮的太早了然后01:29:174 - 这里又早泄了
鼓音建议使用1/2jack

01:29:867 (89867|4,89954|5,90041|3) - 这个我认为应该321滚。这个音有什么必要用这种费力的pattern来强调呢

01:35:416 - 首先全双键就很没道理
其次两边一起321更没道理
01:35:503 (95503|1,95590|0) - Ctrl+J

01:36:110 (96110|5,96717|4,96804|5) - 请使用OD10来一发轻松愉快的300

01:39:925 - 我觉得我在O2jam

01:40:445 (100445|5) - 这啥 那01:40:619 - 为什么没有

01:41:659 - 你主要想让我说这里？仔细打开editor看 就更不明白你现在的pattern是怎么想出来的了……把鼓音和琴音分开然后琴音按pitch不是简单粗暴又好玩……

01:49:983 - 这里会难主要是因为你1/8和1/4根本就没有分开……打个P啊……闭着眼睛滚和睁着眼睛打是一个效果……
你问我我会怎么摆？我仔细考虑了一下我会摆面海+适量jack 我想那不是你想看的

pocket-Gao wrote:

hi
6K

BASIC

00:27:613 (27613|3) - |5| ok
00:59:347 - 这和之后一小段都建议2note, 这后面的有cha音的位置我才会考虑用双键
01:29:174 (89174|5,89520|2) - 总感觉怪怪的( 没哟对鼓点的悲哀(
01:49:983 - 结尾做难一点或者弄LN吧,不然感觉刻意少了什么东西一样

对,刻意压难度,超2星就要出事(...

Hard

00:35:677 (35677|4) - |4| 你说卡手有多好(误
感觉00:35:677 (35677|4,35763|5,35850|3) - 这种排列感觉就是各种切指一样(...切指?
没了

SPECIAL

00:23:711 - 突然1note 感觉有点塞 这里对的主音和....cicici?这里的1note只有主音没有cicic(....
00:34:203 - 感觉有音 这难度可以抓 别太塞了啊OTZ

00:37:064 - |6| OK
00:39:578 (39578|3,39578|5,39578|0,39665|1,39752|2,39752|4,39838|3,39925|5,39925|2,39925|0) - 可以考虑下[img=http://puu.sh/obBzV/f852a10f45.jpg]这样[/img] 这样的话..似乎和下面有冲突啊...

00:43:567 (43567|5) - |5| 打起来会有点奇怪.

00:44:174 (44174|5) - 这可能打起来很怪 换了一下....主要是我也没想到其他排列
00:44:954 (44954|1,44954|4,45301|1,45301|4) - 可以考虑换成3note拍砖 有cha音的我才放3note....

good luck

zwc7086 wrote:

新人水摸
6K B
00:19:636 - 违和感 加了一个

00:21:717 (21717|3) - 和上面其实挺呼应的 噗

00:23:971 (23971|0) - 不太明白 ...一个听起来像"吸溜"的音...?噗

00:34:896 - 和前后都一样的啦 没有pedal音所以没有刻意加

00:40:445 - 同上

6K H
01:29:954 (89954|5) - 感觉前面也抓上更好 ..?

01:40:272 (100272|5,100272|0) - 有些许诡异 ...!

6K(抖)S

01:17:815 (77815|5,77902|4,77989|3) - 3 4 5 因为我觉得音高在下降所以我这么摆的

没什么好说的，很好的谱面 就是比马力罗斯的还鬼畜

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

[6K Hard]
00:34:289 (34289|5,34289|1,34463|0,34463|4) - Ctrl G for more respect to the pitch sound, just same as 00:33:856 -
00:34:723 - http://puu.sh/oEHYM/ffe20eb84d.jpg it feels more fit no change...as i think now this pattern is better....to read?
00:39:578 (39578|5,39578|2,39665|0,39752|3,39838|5,39925|1,39925|4,40012|2,40098|5,40098|0) - seriously, i prefer stair to express this piano roll sound, feels more better than random 1/4 placing it's not random mapping in fact...sorry
00:46:168 - start here, i lost interest for this diff, i think this kind of note 00:46:977 (46977|1,47093|1,47324|0,47440|0) - is not really fit to express piano sound here, prefer to make it different column with easy pattern flows with stairs oh.......but i feel it will be a little awkward to play 1/3-roll in 6K so i choose jack,,,,,
01:16:688 - to 01:18:509 - http://puu.sh/oEIAv/749444eeb6.jpg try it please changed some wwwww
01:55:532 - have an extra piano sound like previous note, add note on it OK~

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

[6K Hard]
00:34:289 (34289|5,34289|1,34463|0,34463|4) - Ctrl G for more respect to the pitch sound, just same as 00:33:856 -
00:34:723 - http://puu.sh/oEHYM/ffe20eb84d.jpg it feels more fit no change...as i think now this pattern is better....to read?
00:39:578 (39578|5,39578|2,39665|0,39752|3,39838|5,39925|1,39925|4,40012|2,40098|5,40098|0) - seriously, i prefer stair to express this piano roll sound, feels more better than random 1/4 placing it's not random mapping in fact...sorry
00:46:168 - start here, i lost interest for this diff, i think this kind of note 00:46:977 (46977|1,47093|1,47324|0,47440|0) - is not really fit to express piano sound here, prefer to make it different column with easy pattern flows with stairs oh.......but i feel it will be a little awkward to play 1/3-roll in 6K so i choose jack,,,,,
01:16:688 - to 01:18:509 - http://puu.sh/oEIAv/749444eeb6.jpg try it please changed some wwwww
01:55:532 - have an extra piano sound like previous note, add note on it OK~

paperlens wrote:

什么 小星居然还会摸图
震惊

Critical_Star wrote:

Halo, mod as requested~

1 2 3 4 5 6

6K SPECIAL
00:47:555 - 00:48:942 - 00:50:330 - 00:51:717 - 00:53:104 - 00:54:492 - here actually can be double note for crash too.. about this part,cuz i want to make a relaxing part,so i give up thess crash sound
01:16:341 (76341|1,76341|5,76399|4,76428|0,76457|3,76515|2,76515|5,76601|3,76601|1) - here should be full 1/6 stream oh....THANK YOU~changed~
01:40:272 (100272|3,100272|2) - feel better to end at 01:40:619 - OK
01:40:619 - would have prefer to add a note here instead 01:40:445 (100445|5) - no change
01:52:671 (112671|2,112714|3,112757|0) - feel much comfortable > http://puu.sh/rfwdC/f27421b334.jpg OK

6K HARD
01:40:272 (100272|5,100272|0) - same like in special OK
01:46:688 (106688|5,106688|0,107035|5,107035|0) - these LN are for 1/8 sound right? then u should make them all into 1/2 long ....sorry.....i like this X_Xno change

6K BASIC
00:40:185 (40185|1,40185|4,40445|3) - both of them should be double here, can't really see any difference sound between them haven't heard a crash sound at 00:40:445 - ,so i just put one note
00:57:266 (57266|5,57266|0,57613|2,57960|1,57960|4) - if u catch crash and clap with double here, why not at 00:58:653 (58653|5,59000|0,59347|3) -
01:04:896 - bere tbe clap sound is louder, i think u can use double note here too the same reason with 00:40:445 -
01:06:977 - 01:07:671 - how about use a LN here , it feels so empty here or at least add a note for these timing no change
01:22:237 (82237|1) - should end at 01:22:671 - no change....
01:40:272 (100272|5,100272|0) - feel better to end at 01:40:619 - the sound stop here OK


好运～

ajeemaniz wrote:

woh some quality stuff here, hope to see this qualified and ranked

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

DJ TOTTO VS TOTTO - Vajra -vajra- [OsuMania modding]

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Bubbled

Congratulations!

IRC

2016-12-31 17:46 Kuo Kyoka: hi biemote
2016-12-31 17:46 Kuo Kyoka: you want to irc?
2016-12-31 17:46 biemote: ohhh....OK
2016-12-31 17:47 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/948792 DJ TOTTO VS TOTTO - Vajra -vajra- [DJ Emiria VS Biemote's 8K Normal]]
2016-12-31 17:49 Kuo Kyoka: ok hs are fine
2016-12-31 17:50 Kuo Kyoka: 00:00:388 (388|1) - move to 3rd for just like other 00:01:775 (1775|3,2122|1) -  ?
2016-12-31 17:50 biemote: OK
2016-12-31 17:51 Kuo Kyoka: 00:45:301 (45301|5) - how about move to 3rd for pitch
2016-12-31 17:53 biemote: i want to keep this...
2016-12-31 17:53 biemote: so not change...
2016-12-31 17:53 Kuo Kyoka: ok
2016-12-31 17:53 Kuo Kyoka: 00:46:168 - add a note on scratch for cymbal
2016-12-31 17:55 Kuo Kyoka: 01:37:844 (97844|5) - the melody start on 01:37:757 - 
2016-12-31 17:56 biemote: i prefer not to add.as 00:57:266 - ,db didn't place cymbal at 1
2016-12-31 17:56 biemote: 01:37:757 -  OK
2016-12-31 17:56 Kuo Kyoka: yep ok
2016-12-31 17:56 Kuo Kyoka: the rest are fine
2016-12-31 17:56 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/933745 DJ TOTTO VS TOTTO - Vajra -vajra- [6K BASIC]]
2016-12-31 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: 01:18:769 (78769|5) - 
2016-12-31 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: 01:19:463 - how about end on here 01:19:463 - 
2016-12-31 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: on 8k you also did that
2016-12-31 18:01 Kuo Kyoka: 01:27:266 (87266|0) - move to 2 for balance
2016-12-31 18:03 biemote: OK
2016-12-31 18:05 biemote: 01:18:769 (78769|5) - this ln not changed....
2016-12-31 18:05 Kuo Kyoka: well since it's normal it's fine to put it on 1/1
2016-12-31 18:05 Kuo Kyoka: your choice
2016-12-31 18:05 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/948791 DJ TOTTO VS TOTTO - Vajra -vajra- [Emiria's 8K Hyper]]
2016-12-31 18:09 Kuo Kyoka: 00:36:572 (36572|4,36688|4,36746|2) - 
2016-12-31 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: 00:36:688 (36688|4) - move to 1/4 and remove 00:36:746 (36746|2) - 
2016-12-31 18:10 Kuo Kyoka: it's 1/4 not 1/6 actually
2016-12-31 18:11 biemote: OK
2016-12-31 18:11 Kuo Kyoka: 01:07:208 (67208|2,67440|4) - actually same pitch and 01:07:324 (67324|2) - lower than that pitch, not same 
2016-12-31 18:13 biemote: ok,changed.
2016-12-31 18:15 Kuo Kyoka: 01:43:393 - have piano on here too, you might want to add a note
2016-12-31 18:16 biemote: OK
2016-12-31 18:17 Kuo Kyoka: 01:44:781 - same on here
2016-12-31 18:18 Kuo Kyoka: the rest are fine
2016-12-31 18:18 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/932208 DJ TOTTO VS TOTTO - Vajra -vajra- [6K HARD]]
2016-12-31 18:18 biemote: OK
2016-12-31 18:22 Kuo Kyoka: 00:56:688 (56688|2,56804|2) - pitch is not same but going down
2016-12-31 18:23 biemote: ok,i moved it to 4
2016-12-31 18:23 Kuo Kyoka: 01:46:688 (106688|5,106688|0,107035|5,107035|0) - extend these long notes
2016-12-31 18:24 Kuo Kyoka: 01:46:861 - end on here and on 01:47:208 - 
2016-12-31 18:24 Kuo Kyoka: for burst sound
2016-12-31 18:24 biemote: OK
2016-12-31 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: the rest are fine
2016-12-31 18:26 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/946222 DJ TOTTO VS TOTTO - Vajra -vajra- [Emiria's 8K Another]]
2016-12-31 18:27 Kuo Kyoka: 00:38:624 (38624|3) - remove hihat
2016-12-31 18:27 Kuo Kyoka: 00:38:364 (38364|4,38711|5) - add hithat for them
2016-12-31 18:28 Kuo Kyoka: 00:42:093 (42093|5) - should be on 1/3
2016-12-31 18:28 biemote: all ok.
2016-12-31 18:30 Kuo Kyoka: rip i just realize have snap
2016-12-31 18:30 Kuo Kyoka: back to this diff
2016-12-31 18:30 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/948791 DJ TOTTO VS TOTTO - Vajra -vajra- [Emiria's 8K Hyper]]
2016-12-31 18:30 Kuo Kyoka: 01:16:081 (76081|6,76428|6,76601|5) - should be 1/6
2016-12-31 18:33 biemote: OK,,,and other snaps here is fixed,too
2016-12-31 18:34 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/946222 DJ TOTTO VS TOTTO - Vajra -vajra- [Emiria's 8K Another]]
2016-12-31 18:34 Kuo Kyoka: 01:16:081 (76081|3,76601|3) - on here is same
2016-12-31 18:34 biemote: fixed
2016-12-31 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: ok the rest are fine
2016-12-31 18:35 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/931661 DJ TOTTO VS TOTTO - Vajra -vajra- [6K SPECIAL]]
2016-12-31 18:38 Kuo Kyoka: 00:26:515 (26515|4) - actually this is 1/4
2016-12-31 18:39 biemote: ok
2016-12-31 18:41 Kuo Kyoka: 00:28:942 (28942|5) - 1/4 too
2016-12-31 18:41 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:717 (31717|2) - 
2016-12-31 18:41 Kuo Kyoka: 00:33:451 (33451|3) - 
2016-12-31 18:42 Kuo Kyoka: 00:40:041 (40041|4) - 
2016-12-31 18:42 biemote: all fixed
2016-12-31 18:43 Kuo Kyoka: orz
2016-12-31 18:43 Kuo Kyoka: 01:15:301 -  this part with 1/6 
2016-12-31 18:43 Kuo Kyoka: can you fix it on 
2016-12-31 18:43 Kuo Kyoka: 8k hyper and 8k another?
2016-12-31 18:44 biemote: OK(
2016-12-31 18:44 Kuo Kyoka: the rest are fine
2016-12-31 18:44 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/933883 DJ TOTTO VS TOTTO - Vajra -vajra- [Emiria's 8K Leggendaria]]
2016-12-31 18:50 Kuo Kyoka: 00:28:942 (28942|4,28942|6) - on 1.4
2016-12-31 18:50 Kuo Kyoka: 00:31:717 (31717|6,31717|4) - 
2016-12-31 18:51 Kuo Kyoka: 00:28:249 (28249|4,28249|6) - 1/4 too
2016-12-31 18:53 biemote: 00:28:249 (28249|4,28249|6) - ,1/6,i think..
2016-12-31 18:53 Kuo Kyoka: wait 00:28:249 (28249|6,28249|4,28307|2,28307|5) - is fine
2016-12-31 18:54 Kuo Kyoka: 00:32:382 (32382|1,32382|4) - on 1/3
2016-12-31 18:56 biemote: OK
2016-12-31 18:57 Kuo Kyoka: 00:40:041 (40041|4,40041|6) - 1/4
2016-12-31 18:58 biemote: ok
2016-12-31 18:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:16:341 (76341|1,76399|3,76457|2) - maybe db mean 1/4 music?
2016-12-31 18:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:16:341 (76341|7,76399|6,76457|7,76515|6,76572|5,76630|6) - for kick sound
2016-12-31 18:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:16:341 (76341|1,76399|3,76457|2,76515|3,76601|2) - for music
2016-12-31 19:01 biemote: i changed the part here to that in 6K Special
2016-12-31 19:03 Kuo Kyoka: 01:31:833 (91833|3,91890|2) - no 1.6 sound here
2016-12-31 19:03 biemote: http://puu.sh/t6Ivg/591a1dc0ef.png
2016-12-31 19:04 biemote: ok
2016-12-31 19:08 Kuo Kyoka: the rest are fine
2016-12-31 19:08 Kuo Kyoka: can update now
2016-12-31 19:09 biemote: updated.....Thank you for irc ~ OTZ
2016-12-31 19:10 Kuo Kyoka: np
2016-12-31 19:10 Kuo Kyoka: the song would fit for new year eve
2016-12-31 19:11 biemote: XD(time to find another BN check

-Kamikaze- wrote:

Are you 100% sure that the romanized title should be Vajra -vajra-? I'm not totally sure and none of the ranked maps of this song use doubled word in their meta.
Also I can do a BN check on this after weekend if you want

Happy new year!