1. Daredevil (5,44 stars, 1509 notes)

-Tochi wrote:

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  Daredevil

1. 00:58:960 (1,2,3,4,5) - This stream is way too spaced, and it doesn't really fit much like that. Making it less spaced would be better. - This specific part is actually by me. Remade it.
2. 00:59:523 - The sound here is very weak, it's not worth mapping to imo (like u didn't map to this 01:01:679 - ). The slider plays awkward too, since it feels like u map to nothing there. Doing something like this http://puu.sh/oQuOG/7b49e92410.jpg Would fit more. Same with other parts like this. - The kicksliders emphasize vocals here. I think the NC helps enough to emphasize the change.
3. 01:41:523 (4) - NC because of SV change, and make 01:41:523 (4,5) - the more obvious. It's hard to see that it's a 3/4 gap. - Yeah I agree, fixed.
4. 01:45:179 (7,1) - I personally don't like this, even if it looks nice because it plays a bit awkward. - I think it's alright, the slider start is a continuation of the stream curve. However, I made the continuation a bit smoother so it should hopefully play better now.
5. 01:53:523 (5) - I recommend NC here. - Yeah, did that for consistency with the previous part.
6. 02:00:085 (4) - It feels and plays really, really bad imo when the downbeat isn't a clickable object. I highly recommend u to make it clickable. - But then I wouldn't be able to emphasize the stretched vocal at all. I think the half beat slider makes for an alright transition to the streamy riff part and I don't think it plays badly.
7. 02:04:116 (2) - Same as 01:04:116 (2) - Eh, I like I using some longer sliders for a change here and I think the transition to the 1/8 sliders here is alright. Replacing the end point with a 1/8 slider would be overmapped so it'd have to be a regular circle instead which would feel kinda weird imo. Will keep for now but will remain a possible subject of change in the future.
8. 02:23:898 (7,1) - This overlap looks really ugly D: Please avoid it, or polish it. - Made it look better.
9. 02:27:460 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is really confusing without NCs. Try adding a NC here 02:28:210 (6) - Now it's more clear that the rhythm is changing. - 02:28:776 (2) - Moved NC from here to 02:28:588 (1) -
10. 02:34:023 (3,4) - Why not spaced like http://puu.sh/oQwAJ/fa193958a3.jpg ? - I like it this way more. The others are sliders so you don't have to worry about acc, but this one's a circle so that's why.
11. 02:41:523 (4,5) - Basically the same comment as 01:41:523 (4,5) - - Added NC and decreased spacing a little bit.
12. 02:53:523 (5) - NC? - Yeah. Also changed the pattern a bit for more spacing.
13. 03:04:116 (2) - This should still end here 03:04:304 - - Same as before.
14. 05:28:116 (2) - I think u know what i will say here lol. - Yee^
    
    good luck o/

-Tochi wrote:

m4m

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  Daredevil

1. 03:17:054 (8,1) - Why change the spacing in the stream? the stream has another structure, just I feel this. Anyway did some changes here
2. 03:19:023 (4,1) - Avoid this tiny overlap. avoided
3. 03:46:960 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is overmapped. Starting this section from here 03:47:523 (1) - seems fine. I don't feel that lol
4. 03:52:023 (6,1) - Please avoid these kinda overlaps D: ok
5. 03:59:616 (7) - This should just be two circles, there's no sound at the end of the 1/4 slider. hmmm, I think kickslider should work good too, but maybe I'll change him once
6. 04:06:085 (10) - Remove NC. wtf, he hasn't nc
7. 04:28:023 (1) - This should be a 1/4 slider so it ends here 04:28:116 - and u should add a circle here 04:28:304 - I agree, did sone changes here
   
   good luck o/

Shiguma wrote:

M4M here finally - Mod reply here finally

I believe the source in Japanese is 頭文字D ARCADE STAGE 6 AA
Probably better like that and then having Initial D in tags - Initial D is the official English version of the series' title, so I'm not changing it to Japanese.

Metadata Basics Guide wrote:

1. Try to use official English source provided, if there's any. Source should be mentioned if the song was produced for a certain anime/game/movie/TV-Show or anything of that kind.

However, I wrote ARCADE STAGE in full caps now as that appears to be the official way to write it on their site.

Turning stack leniency to 6 I think would be a good idea because a lot of stacks look kinda poor to me, and instead if it was lowered to 6, perfect stacks would occur which would be nicer imo - Alright, sure, I don't see why not.

00:58:962 (3,4) - dat DS.... - This part was actually by me since I didn't like what FCL did with it initially so I decided to try something else myself, though patching up sections like this usually leaves some flaws in that need to be fixed sooner or later. Lowered the spacing and rearranged the pattern.
00:59:337 (6,1) - Poor angle imo - ^
I feel like the last two I pointed out work but still feel kinda overdone with the spacing maybe

01:37:775 (2,2) - ^ - Eh, I don't really mind if things don't always stack perfectly. I feel like it limits the placements of my notes and messes with my spacing. That said, I did stack some notes around this section since I found those easier to do without having to change patterns or spacing too much.
01:35:712 (4,1) - More distance? - Increased to 1.0x
01:51:275 (1) - This slider is kinda forced angle - Remade this part. lol
01:56:900 (4,5,6) - waaaay too sharp of a bend - I think it plays alright, so I'll keep it for now. If many people report having problems with it, I'll probably change it.
02:06:931 (1,2) - this could be not touching, and 02:07:400 (4,5) - these as well - I like more how it plays like this. Better impact. I'm not very concerned about the minor 'overlaps'.
02:08:431 (1,2) - ^ - I don't see the point of changing my spacing just so they won't overlap. lol
02:11:243 (6,7,8) - hmm... seems kinda unnecessary to go to the left suddenly - It's fine the way it is imo, emphasizes the highest pitch synths and doesn't play that awkwardly.
02:11:712 (1,2,3,4) - Smoothen out this curve - Done I guess.
02:27:837 (4,5) - :/ don't like this stack - Seems fine to me.
02:29:712 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - An accelerating stream would be cool instead of this cramped circular stream - Alright, did that.
02:31:212 (4) - ugly slider imo - not imo lol
02:41:150 (2,3,1) - needs to have more circular flow - I don't think so. The circles aren't really emphasizing anything aside from the background beat here.
02:57:275 (1,2) - these bends just seem weird to me - Not the best sliders ever but I think they work here. Will keep them for now. lol
03:04:868 (2,3,4) - this is another bend I don't like - I remade this part anyway but I did keep a bend in the new stream pattern because it emphasizes the song pretty well.
03:08:056 (4,5,6) - ^ - ^
03:08:337 (7,1) - This is weird, feel like slider shape could be simplified - Remapped as well. It's more simple now.
04:50:900 - This is where the break should end imo - I'd rather just end the break when the synths come back in.
05:14:900 (4) - The way this is set up I feel like having this go straight too and then starting the curve might be better: https://puu.sh/s6XX6/e14a11332a.png - That would mess too much with my positioning, I'm afraid. :/
05:18:650 (2) - Consider changing the shape of this - I quite like how it plays so I think I'll keep it ^^

Sorry for the short mod - Short? Still a taller wall than Trump's. lol
It was actually quite helpful, and I finally got around to remapping many sections of my parts. lol

Nice map overall, pretty fun
Hope to see it ranked one day, good luck - Thanks!

Shiguma wrote:

The really small curves on the sliders seem kind of weird to me but on the other hand I don't think they're bad. The slight curve on otherwise straight streams is something that seems kinda not as good tho to me, example: 00:15:837 (5,6,7,8,9) - FCL's style I guess. lol

00:19:962 (5,7,8,9) - This is the kind of thing I was talking about with stack leniency - I changed the stack leniency last time, dunno if it changes anything here but oh well.
00:22:400 (9,1) - Poor angle for this jump I think, would be better if it the stream was moved to the right and down a decent amount, like this perhaps: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6488611 (subsequent notes moved accordingly ofc) - Yeah it seems a bit cramped. Moved notes around a bit to make it a bit less awkward.
00:24:275 (1) - I don't understand the kiai here, it's not done anywhere else like this - I think it's a nice entry to the stronger vocals in the intro.
00:24:650 (2,3) - this angle seems kinda off a bit, (3) should be moved to the right a bit more? - Did that in the process of changing that jump earlier.
00:26:337 (4,5) - I feel like these should be swapped, in other words, 00:26:337 (4) - should be a circle here, and then slider starts at 00:26:525 - I know it ruins the pattern but it sounds wrong as is emphasis wise - The last slider's end seems to have a sound that should be clicked, so removed the last slider and replaced it with circles.
00:30:275 (4,1) - Blanket slightly off - Fixed.
00:38:150 (4,5,6) - The bend on this triple is different than the 2 surrounding it - Not sure what you mean exactly but raised the last circle of the triplet a bit. lol
00:41:806 - Not gonna make this sound have some sort of note on it? In fact if I were you I'd make all the sounds clickable (like you were doing in 00:37:962 (3,6,9,11,1) - because it was cool) - This sort of bothered me too, so changed the rhythm a bit. Didn't make everything clickable since I felt like leaving that half beat slider in played a bit better.
00:44:150 (4) - same as b4, maybe clickable? - Will keep this for now for consistency with the previous part. Sounds alright to me even if both aren't clickable, and the slider sorta helps to emphasize the kick snare I guess.
00:44:900 (8,9,10,11,1) - The spacing between each sliderhead should be same I think - Fixed visual spacing between last kickslider and the half beat slider. Actual spacing is not that important here because it relies on slider leniency in any case.
00:45:462 - Could technically be a buzzslider here but maybe not, mentioning cuz you did 00:44:900 (8,9,10,11) - so it'd be cool to see something there - 00:39:275 (1) - used a half beat slider to emphasize this part of the song so for consistency's sake I think it'd be better to keep the slider.
00:53:525 - No slider like 00:53:900 (1,1) - here? - The synth kicks in here so it'd probably be alright to keep it like this as well. Will keep in mind if others point it out.
00:58:962 (3,4) - dat DS....
00:59:337 (6,1) - Poor angle imo
I feel like the last two I pointed out work but still feel kinda overdone with the spacing maybe

01:01:962 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Really curved don't you think? - Reduced the curve slightly.
01:05:618 (1,2,3,1) - Varying distance spacings for this, don't think it's intentional - Well, even if not, it makes it somewhat more lenient to play, considering they're 1/8 kicksliders.
01:07:775 (1,2,3) - More consistent spacing, and more spacing in general I think - Increased slightly.
01:09:462 (3,1) - This jump is way less spacing than the 2 before it - It's not as intense and more consistent with 01:03:462 (3,1) -
01:10:400 (3,4,1) - Feel like the angles on these could be improved - Seems fine to me.
01:11:618 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Another stream with inconsistent spacing - Same as before, might tweak it a bit later if other people find it problematic, though.
01:12:837 (3,5) - Might as well stack these imo - It's his style I guess. lol
01:13:400 (6) - Since it seems like you're following the voice here, I feel like there should only be a sound on where the end of this slider is. In other words, delete (6) and place a circle at 01:13:587 - instead - This section is rhythmically quite ambiguous and inconsistent with upcoming parts, so did some rhythm changes here.
01:16:025 (4) - I think moving this 3 pixels to the right makes the pattern look nicer - This pattern was changed due to the previous rhythm changes.
01:16:681 (4,1) - and 01:17:056 (4,1) - Don't know how I feel about this - The stream jumps do an alright job at emphasizing the song here.
01:19:587 (1,3) - These sliders should be reworked, somehow 01:20:150 (2) - should be stacked with 01:18:837 (3) - and then the sliders are made in such a way that the slidertails still stack they way they are now - They seem alright to me.
01:22:212 (5,6) - More spacing needed - Seems fine to me.
01:22:962 (2,4) - Why not stack them - Did that.
03:16:775 (1,2,3,4) - This should curve too, kinda like and end bracket: ) - Seems fine to me. Different looking stream emphasizes the pause in the song. lol
I was trying to make the shape in the editor and take a screenshot but mine were looking like poop lol
03:23:712 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - The crookedness of this stream just looks random imo - Oh FCL, you and your streams... smoothened it into a curve. lol
03:46:962 (1,2,3,4,5) - The music isn't so intense to call for this spaced stream I don't think - Yeah I can't really hear anything here to justify a stream so sounds like it's overmapped. Changed it to a slider.
03:53:900 (4,1) - I don't like how they're touching xd - Fixed.
03:56:524 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Another stream that feels like sporadic random movements - I agree, it's been kinda triggering me for a while so changed it to a better shape. lol
04:05:900 - Multiple sounds you're ignoring by not having a note here, please place something here - Done.
04:10:775 (1,2) - I think these sliders should actually start at where 04:10:587 (4) - is, and that 04:11:337 - should be a circle - Agreed.
04:12:275 (4) - Think this should be a 1/2 slider that also has a NC on it instead of 04:12:650 (1) - Consistency-wise, you're right. However I don't feel like messing so much with the pattern right now, so I'll probably change it if it gets pointed out again. Right now, it's not too bad if the NC starts on the first vocal sound and a pause is left in between.
04:16:775 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section of the music in general, I suggest doing what I said before, following the "ah" vocals and having them clickable would be cool - I think it's fine the way it is and don't find it necessary to map to all of them, also more consistent with the slider usage during this part compared to the intro.
04:28:493 (2,3,4) - Seems like the 1/8ths are placed wrong, since I hear them at on these 04:28:587 (3,4) - but emphasis on the sliderend of 04:28:587 (3) - I know you can say that would screw up things but it sounds wrong as is because the 1/8ths seem like they're out of nowhere - That's mainly unnoticeable and plays better this way. Proper use of polarity.
04:35:056 (4,1) - The only disconnect stream in the map, iirc - I don't have a problem with that. That said, trimmed it a bit to make it look better.