Hello,Thnx for the mod!
- 00:11:569 (2) - maybe stack the tail on 00:10:772 (6) - for better structure ok
- 00:18:910 (1,2,3) - that linear flow doesn't fit well for this kind of section imo, i would reconsider this flow by changing the flow of this jump, maybe make a zigzag flow could be nice xd I made this just for the visual pattern as I thought it looked nice also because I skipped the slider for the measure. I'll chnage it if someone else metninos it
- 00:31:197 (4) - I would NC this one and remoove NC on this 00:31:357 (1) - too show the new rythmn. You're right done
- 00:43:803 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I know you won't change this probably, but this flow doesn't fit those vocals at all and plays horrible imo. 00:48:910 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - like same here dude.. xD yh I kinda dont wanna change it xD its a core element of the map if a different pattern fits better then I'll make a change
- 00:54:655 (1,2,1,2) - Oh and this totally flows badly xd kk, I'll try and think of a better pattern
Well you usually use those 1 2 1 2 up and down jump when it's whistle/clap/whistle/clap... etc not for vocal like that..
- 01:13:823 (1,2,1) - wtf is that NC choice, please remove nc here at least 01:14:302 (1) - XD and same here 01:15:419 (1) - remoove NC. I didnt check this at all xD, fixed
Gosh you are using same 1 2 1 2 , same flow jump all the diff, this is so lame... Please use more your creativity for your jumps.. xD yh you're kinda right, it was hard trying to come up with ideas though. I'll see what I can do
- 00:43:803 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - See here, those NC set and flow fits way better to this kind of voice rythmn.
- 00:48:910 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - combo inconsistency Someone point out that this NC pattern would make it easier to read since they're like back and forth jumps and I kinda agree with them
- 01:27:546 (5) - make this blanket a bit bigger please sone
This diff is really cool! thnx