CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Historia · forum

newyams99

Joined December 2013

newyams99 2016-03-31T06:51:51+00:00

Sup, a quick irc mod. Will continue if I get the chance.

23:06 newyams99: 00:05:545 (1,2,3,4) - I think the slider kicks for sliders 1 and 3 should be on the red ticks at 00:06:034 - and 00:07:338 -
23:06 newyams99: and then those sliders should end where the current circles 2 and 4 are
23:07 newyams99: thought that this could just help lower the density since you've used 1/1 repeat slider frequently
23:07 newyams99: and the quieter section could use a slightly easier rhythm
23:08 newyams99: o just noticed this was a tv size length
23:10 newyams99: check ur aimod too
23:12 newyams99: and you probably did this intentionally but lots of the blankets are off
23:16 newyams99: 00:51:523 (3,4) - the rhythm could be Ctrl + G'd
23:17 newyams99: I think it'd give more click emphasis on the drums at 00:51:849 - which was emphasized at 00:50:545 -
23:17 newyams99: same at 00:56:741 (3,4) -
23:20 newyams99: well that's pretty much it for the easy diff
23:20 newyams99: I don't point out small things usually and the rhythm's good enough imo
23:21 newyams99: so moving on to the normal
23:21 newyams99: 00:06:849 (4) - the end of this slider with the whistle sounds weird
23:21 newyams99: perhaps remove
23:23 newyams99: 00:15:980 - to 00:21:197 - has the exact same rhythm as the easy, but it's just got more clicking required
23:23 newyams99: if you could make a rhythm like the ones between 00:21:197 - and 00:26:414 - it'd be cool I think
23:24 newyams99: 00:35:871 (5) - is the repeat on this slider necessary?
23:24 newyams99: just thought it'd sound much clearer if you didn't have it
23:25 newyams99: 00:36:849 (1) - the spinner length is inconsistent with the easy diff, if that's something to be worried about in standard
23:25 newyams99: 00:48:588 (3) - if you're going to have a slider that's 2/1 length here in the normal
23:25 newyams99: you should remove the kick of this slider in the easy diff
23:26 newyams99: 01:06:197 (2,3) - how about this
23:28 newyams99: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4830138
23:28 newyams99: just to spice it up a bit since it's basically 1/1 rhythms again
23:29 newyams99: 01:15:817 (6) - add a finish at the end of this slider?
23:29 newyams99: k moving onto grievance
23:30 newyams99: 00:05:871 (3) - first of all, I don't think this hit is too necessary
23:30 newyams99: but I'd like to suggest deleting this hit because you could put slider 2 under slider 4
23:30 newyams99: and with the 1/1 gap
23:31 newyams99: you can contrast the jump with the overlap if you get what I mean
23:31 newyams99: since the instrumentals are loud then suddenly go quiet
23:31 newyams99: so if you had a jump pattern here I didn't really feel a sense of emphasis or contrast
23:32 newyams99: tbh the jumps are a bit large in this beginning section imo
23:32 newyams99: but that can probably left alone
23:32 newyams99: 00:08:317 (2) - overlaps with 00:08:643 (4) - when hit
23:33 newyams99: same thing about the deletion earlier for this hit as well 00:11:088 (1) -
23:34 newyams99: 00:17:936 (6,7) - perhaps delete circle 7 and make the slider extend to where the circle used to be
23:35 newyams99: since you matched this triplet 00:17:773 (4,5) - to the twinkle instrumentals I think the slider should be extended for the same reason
23:36 newyams99: 00:15:980 (1) - why not make the length of this consistent with 00:21:197 (1) - by making it longer?
23:37 newyams99: 00:24:621 (5,6,1) - I felt like the gap between 6 and 1 should be larger than 5 and 6
23:37 newyams99: cuz emphasis reasons

No Dap

3,379 posts

Joined July 2013

No Dap 2016-04-01T01:38:08+00:00

irc'd with nara

SPOILER

21:34 Moeka: 초반부분이 좀 별로인듯
21:34 Moeka: 강조가 부족함
21:35 Nara: ㅇㅇ 슬라 넘 많이쓴거같음
21:35 Moeka: 00:05:545 (1) - 이런거 
21:35 Moeka: 슬라속도 올린다던거 점프한다던가 하면 강조해서 좋지않음?
21:35 Moeka: 00:10:762 (1) - 이것도
21:35 Moeka: 00:36:849 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 이부분은 좀 잔잔해야할듯
21:35 Moeka: 점프가 잔잔한 음악이랑 안어울렸음
21:36 Moeka: 나머진 ㄱㅊ
21:36 Moeka: 00:48:588 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 이건 걍 제가 못쳐서 틀린거같고 ㅋㅋ
21:36 Nara: 저거 저는 안틀리던데
21:36 Nara: 다시하시면 쳐지실듯
21:36 Moeka: 님
21:36 Moeka: 님은 9등임 ㅋㅋ
21:37 Nara: ㅋㅋ
21:37 Moeka: 모르겠음 걍 제가 못하는거일지도
21:37 Nara: ㄹㅇ 더타곡임
21:37 Moeka: 쿠도스 매우 ㄳ

HabiHolic

5,405 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-04-01T06:24:15+00:00

Done.

http://puu.sh/o1IeQ/feb3bcd90a.zip

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

3,733 posts

Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2016-04-01T07:00:40+00:00

mod

13:54 FrostxE: 00:50:056 (2) - quite surprising here
13:55 FrostxE: would use a slider on 00:50:219 (3) - 
13:55 FrostxE: like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4838315
13:55 FrostxE: understand you follow the instrument and stop jump is awesome
13:55 FrostxE: but there is a significant vocal on 00:50:219
13:55 FrostxE: just only this to introduce because the current spacing is a bit hard to read
13:55 Aerous: oo
13:55 Aerous: i see
13:55 Aerous: yea kk
13:56 FrostxE: the rest like 00:51:849 (3,1) - you could leave like that
13:56 FrostxE: combo colours set?
13:56 Aerous: o right i forgot about it
13:57 FrostxE: add tag on Freesong's diff too
13:57 FrostxE: that's it x)

Minor mod~ good map good luck

Lasse

osu! Alumni

3,644 posts

Joined June 2011

Lasse 2016-04-01T10:43:44+00:00

m4m from your queue ~~since nobody is going to mod a two diff approval set for free~~

General

rip combo colors
bgs are fine
no delayed hitsounds, but you could consider removing some of the silence at the end of some (epsecially normal-hitfinish11) to save a bit of space
soft-sliderslide11 is not muted, but the other one is?
spinners at start and end could use some volume changes to follow the fading sounds and everything better
hitsound stuff from grievance applies to all diffs where it's relevant too obviously
after checking some diffs I decided I didn't want to write it multiple times, so: 00:50:463 - seems wrongly snapped to 1/4 on quite some diffs or 1/8 on pkhg's. pretty sure it's actually 1/6 00:50:436 - 00:50:491 -
same for 00:53:072 - 00:55:681 - 00:58:289 -

Grievance

00:13:371 (1) - no whistle like the other (non-clap) downbeats on purpose? doesnt sound very different
00:16:958 (5) - I get you want to stack this on 2, but spacing seems a bit low with the music compared to before with strong beat + vocal here :/ also feels like 00:17:284 (1) - deserves a bit more spacing too. + slightly lowering 00:16:795 (4) - spacing might work well
00:17:936 (6) - pretty much begs for a real whistle :'(
00:17:773 (4,5,6) - idk if you like manul stacks, but manually stacking this to the top would look nice imo http://i.imgur.com/6XZZSIq.jpg
00:24:784 (6,2,3,4) - autostacking kills this http://i.imgur.com/9rEOmTU.jpg when it hsould probably be http://i.imgur.com/taY6Cfk.jpg
00:25:273 (2,3,4) - gives all drums a clap, but 00:26:088 (1,2) - doesnt?
00:34:241 (1) - I guess putting it in the middle here gives it some kind of visual emphasis, still weird to have such low spacing on a strong cymbal and all
00:35:545 (1,1,2,1,2) - dont really get the pattern, sound are similar but 00:35:545 (1,1) - is overlapped 1/1 and then 00:36:034 (2,1) - is completely different?
00:36:849 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - whistles here feel completely unfitting and kill the piano a bit
00:39:458 (1) - can you silence the sliderslides for this part? normal/drum ones are pretty strong and feel a bit gross here
00:49:241 (1,2,3,4,1) - moving this a bit would make a nice visual transition to the new spacing http://i.imgur.com/8RZkdin.jpg
00:50:056 (2) - so strong with that drum and all, idk why it should be spaced that low, also could use a clap or sth
00:50:436 - how about somehow mapping this sound on the 1/6 (?) since you do on 00:53:045 (4) - and 00:55:654 (4) - etc. skipping this one feels off
01:14:920 - deleting this note would follow that high pitched sound so much better, also maybe use soft hitnormal + some additions?

Nara

00:06:686 (6) - this having way lower spacing then 4 makes not much sense as it's like the same sound. maybe you can try sth like for 00:06:523 (5,6) - http://i.imgur.com/Le7wDQm.jpg movement and angles still fit wel land spacing works better. or reduce spacing for 4
00:15:654 (7,1) - overlap like before instead of stacking to continue the pattern and give downbear slightly more spacint than 8?
00:31:958 (3,4,5) - looking at how you spaced those 1/4 after slider before this is really easy to misread as 1/2 gap or sth
00:39:132 (6,1) - having some for of sv disparity between those to make 1 have more impact would work great
chorus having the same sv as the whole part before except the very early intro is pretty eh... :/
00:57:067 (3) - doesnt work at all
01:00:327 (1) - higher spacing than before would work better with how much impcat the sound has instead of stacking it on 5
01:07:501 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - why the 1/4 ;_; they move the emphasis to the red ticks, even though white ticks with the piano are much more important. If you want to overmap triples here then at least use them to emphasize the piano on the white ticks http://i.imgur.com/AInFOVJ.jpg or don't use overmapped 1/4 at all
same for 01:12:719 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:14:920 (4) - see grievance
01:15:409 - 01:15:572 - weird to suddenly ignore the 1/4, at least use kicksliders

Free Songs

00:26:088 (8) - why 1/8 lol doesnt work with the drums at all
00:41:985 - ingoring the 1/4 here?
00:59:349 (1) - extended slider feels off here since it skips a pretty strong sound

Habi

00:23:154 (5) - maybe out a normal/custom whistle here to emphasize the unique piano?
00:45:327 (3) - jump feels a bit excessive compared to others with that the music offers
00:48:996 (1) - why the random blue tick nc? strong sound is on 00:48:914 (5) - so if you want to nc on the stream do it there, this is just confusing and might actually make people misread the second parts as some weird 1/3 or sth, lol
01:14:675 (1) - weird to map the first 1/4 and ignore others

pkhg

can you change the yellow comboclor a bit? doesnt work that well with bg and the others imo
why no intro spinner
rip hitsounds, modding not hitsounded stuff is so gross.....
00:05:545 (1,2) - 00:10:762 (1,2) - why stack? I get it for the other sound, but those seem to strong to do that
well, those 1/8 at least work better than the 1/4 on some other diffs, but still seems off to me, see general
01:10:110 (4,1) - pls no http://i.imgur.com/she6P3S.jpg eww

Kibbleru

00:14:349 (1) - not 100% sure about snapping this to 1/3
00:36:034 (2) - since this doesnt even follow the vocals, maybe try a rhythm like http://i.imgur.com/8fIrv06.jpg instead? would be nice to have those clickable imo
01:15:817 - clickable here would go really well with how the drums on the red tick differ from the other red ticks, actually 01:14:675 (1,2,3) - feels a bit underwhelming with only clicking 1/4 on those sounds :'(

Normal

01:05:219 (4,1) - what's with the sudden .8x ds?
01:15:980 - how about mapping this a bit differently to get the finishing cymbal of the song clickable? feels a bit disappointing to end it on a sliderend

Easy

00:23:806 (1) - I'd move the red nodes a bit to make it slightly more simple. diff is meant for complete beginners that are bnarely getting used to more normal sliders, maybe sth like http://i.imgur.com/b2b7ZkJ.jpg ?
00:33:914 (4,1) - bit confusing since both are well visible when leaving 3, have the same spacing to it and 3 leads more into 1 then it does into 4

gl

Misure

952 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-04-01T11:35:30+00:00

Hello, m4m from your queue

[General]

widescreen support in Kibbleru's Hard,Habi's Insane and Grievance diff
why .jpg for a BG but .png for the other one:?

[Grievance]

00:20:382 (4) - 264|68 for a better flow to next slider maybe
00:24:947 (1) - like this for a better flow for 00:24:621 (5,6,1) - ?
00:26:251 (2) - ctrl+G? well not important tbh
00:27:067 (5,6) - kinda close, keep a distance about ×1.80?
00:30:327 (1,1) - this stack is not good imo, which make them so dense
00:35:545 (1,1,2) - kinda hard to read, maybe 00:35:871 (1,2) - ctrl+G or something better imo
00:58:860 - no NC here as you did as before?
01:04:893 - NC?

[Nara's Extra]

00:10:436 (7) - ctrl+G better imo
00:22:012 (3,4) - ^
00:24:784 (4,1) - kinda far maybe... 00:24:784 (4) - 368|332 better imo
01:15:654 - NC not necessary imo

[FreeSongs' Insane]

00:08:154 - place an 1/2 slider here to avoid empty?
00:13:371 - if you take ^, maybe things like this are proper
00:25:762 - NC to emphasise the strong beat here?
00:28:045 (1,1) - kinda close maybe
00:32:773 (2,1) - ^ besides maybe a little hard to read as 00:33:262 (1,2) -
00:39:458 - NC?
00:54:458 (1,2) - kinda hard to read though they are with the same color, maybe 344|124 better, as overlap you did before
too much straight sliders towards left (which can be realized when playing) consider to make some of them right-towards?

[Habi's Insane]

00:23:806 (1) - ctrl+G? for flow with 00:23:154 (5,6,1) -
00:49:893 (1,2) - kinda close imo, which may be easily read an 1/4 with tail of slider'
01:15:980 - NC?

[pkhg's Insane]

00:17:284 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G for 00:17:284 (1) - and for 00:17:610 (2) - ?
00:38:154 - useless inherited point here

[Kibbleru's Hard]

nothing to say

[Normal]

00:08:154 (1) - maybe things like this flow better?

[Easy]

nothing to say

Nice mapset!
Good luck

HabiHolic

5,405 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-04-01T14:14:13+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v14

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Fixed.

Nara

Nara 2016-04-01T19:54:19+00:00

Lasse wrote:
Nara
00:06:686 (6) - this having way lower spacing then 4 makes not much sense as it's like the same sound. maybe you can try sth like for 00:06:523 (5,6) - http://i.imgur.com/Le7wDQm.jpg movement and angles still fit wel land spacing works better. or reduce spacing for 4 wanna keep it
00:15:654 (7,1) - overlap like before instead of stacking to continue the pattern and give downbear slightly more spacint than 8? ^same as above
00:31:958 (3,4,5) - looking at how you spaced those 1/4 after slider before this is really easy to misread as 1/2 gap or sth hey it's extra diff, and it's really fine to playing
00:39:132 (6,1) - having some for of sv disparity between those to make 1 have more impact would work great fixed
chorus having the same sv as the whole part before except the very early intro is pretty eh... :/
00:57:067 (3) - doesnt work at all i think it's better than 1/2 slider
01:00:327 (1) - higher spacing than before would work better with how much impcat the sound has instead of stacking it on 5 fixed
01:07:501 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - why the 1/4 ;_; they move the emphasis to the red ticks, even though white ticks with the piano are much more important. If you want to overmap triples here then at least use them to emphasize the piano on the white ticks http://i.imgur.com/AInFOVJ.jpg or don't use overmapped 1/4 at all fixed
same for 01:12:719 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - fixed
01:14:920 (4) - see grievance unsnaping?
01:15:409 - 01:15:572 - weird to suddenly ignore the 1/4, at least use kicksliderskeep it

Misure wrote:
[Nara's Extra]
00:10:436 (7) - ctrl+G better imo no, not fixed :c
00:22:012 (3,4) - ^ same as above
00:24:784 (4,1) - kinda far maybe... 00:24:784 (4) - 368|332 better imo very nazi, but not fixed
01:15:654 - NC not necessary imowhy not NC

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84,296,65300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,264,65382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,232,65463,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,200,65545,5,2,0:0:0:0:
188,364,65708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,136,65871,2,0,P|79:104|7:155,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,284,66360,2,0,P|332:315|404:264,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,248,66849,6,0,P|76:312|84:352,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,192,67175,2,0,P|292:128|284:88,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,67501,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,270,67664,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,85,67827,1,8,0:0:0:0:
158,351,67991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,182,68154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,369,68317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
55,271,68480,2,0,P|14:192|69:128,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,228,68969,2,0,B|280:220|240:252|200:228|200:228|204:200|240:188,1,180
400,132,69458,6,0,L|489:124,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,228,69784,1,10,0:0:0:0:
264,64,69947,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,228,70110,2,0,L|220:236,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,328,70436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,292,70599,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,292,70681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,291,70762,6,0,P|143:247|147:203,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,144,71088,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,272,71251,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,71414,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,336,71577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,196,71741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,376,71904,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,252,72067,6,0,P|296:252|344:264,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,368,72393,2,0,P|448:368|400:356,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,347,72719,1,2,0:0:0:0:
438,237,72882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,193,73045,1,8,0:0:0:0:
314,283,73208,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,121,73371,5,2,0:0:0:0:
438,327,73534,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,240,73697,1,8,0:0:0:0:
406,246,73860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,159,74023,1,2,0:0:0:0:
359,362,74186,1,0,0:0:0:0:
402,121,74349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,270,74512,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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309,151,75491,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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186,122,75817,2,0,L|230:130,1,45
230,292,75980,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76061,12,0,81197,0:0:0:0:

thank you for mods

JamesHa

9 posts

Joined August 2013

JamesHa 2016-04-02T00:43:52+00:00

Habi

00:00:328 - I think you can add a spinner here at the start like the other diffs.
00:13:371 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - compared to 00:14:675 (1,2,3) - , I think you should CTRL + G the pattern. Have sliders first and then those single notes
00:32:936 (1) - make it clickable at the end?
01:02:692 - Make it a stream here like you did at 01:05:219 (1,2,3,4) -
01:07:501 (3) - Stack it with 01:06:523 (5) - http://puu.sh/o2ITU/f0c8694b97.jpg
01:08:154 (1) - Don't make an extended slider because you're missing a beat here 01:08:317 -

FreeSongs

00:05:871 - Don't have breaks? Kind of sad to see it here, plus since Habi mapped it you should do it too.
00:14:675 - Map it out since its pretty strong here? Plus a lot more fun to play with than spinner
00:22:175 (5,6) - Should have more spacing than 00:21:849 (3,4) - due to stronger vocals
00:24:947 (1) - Maybe like this ? http://puu.sh/o2J6W/90de897cc6.jpg and then 00:25:273 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/o2J7E/9ee9d40d45.jpg
00:36:849 (1) - Same thing here, you should map it out. Lower diffs mapped it out and same thing with the other two extras.
00:40:110 (4,5) - Maybe improve flow here with extended sliders? 00:40:110 (4) - CTRL + G
00:59:512 - Strong beat here, don't use an extended slider if there's a beat inbetween
01:02:284 (6) - CTRL + G and stack on 4? 01:01:795 (4) -
Fun diff

Nara

00:05:545 (1) - Use two notes instead of a slider? The music is different compared to 00:05:871 (2) -
00:06:523 (5,6) - Use different movement on the cursor to indicate the change in the vocals? http://puu.sh/o2JnI/31b719f819.jpg Just like at 00:16:632 (4,5,6) -
00:23:154 (3,4,5,6) - Stack each other? http://puu.sh/o2JsC/23a94875a5.jpg
00:27:556 (2) - If you want to follow vocal start it on 00:27:719 - http://puu.sh/o2JwX/1c0e714786.jpg
00:36:197 - Delete? Overmapped.
00:47:284 (1,2,3,4) - Bigger cursor movement here since vocals getting pretty intense? http://puu.sh/o2JCa/8790a68188.jpg and http://puu.sh/o2JDe/ef9df4cbfc.jpg
00:50:871 (3) - ends on strong beat , should be clickable
00:58:371 (3) - Use two circles , changes music http://puu.sh/o2JH2/b3bcf7c530.jpg
01:02:610 (6) - make it a stream , theres drums in the background ( Just like at 01:05:219 (2,3,4,5,1) - )
01:04:241 (1,2,3,4) - more spacing compared to 01:02:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:06:360 (4,2) - Blanket? http://puu.sh/o2JL2/f7eaead7a6.jpg
01:08:480 (3) - make it a extended slider , strong beat at the end. http://puu.sh/o2JMs/dae37cd6e0.jpg

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-04-02T01:30:16+00:00

Mathew

RVMathew wrote:
Hi there. saw your request on modreqs

Note that whatever I say is my own opinion so you do not have to follow everything I say.
It also happens that my right hand is injured as well, so I could not play the last 2 difficulties well.

Easy
1) 00:00:328 (1) - Notice how around 00:03:425 to the end of the spinner, the music builds up? I was thinking that you can add timing points, with each point having a successive increase in volume to reflect the build up. More timing points = smoother increase in volume.

2) 00:44:675 (1) - I would split the slider into a single note and a 1/1 slider. The reason is that the vocal part starts on the slider end, and I prefer having vocals start on a clickable beat. In addition you do not have to do a blanket.

Other than the above suggestion everything seems fine. If there is something I could say, it would be to try and reduce the amount of blankets, because nerves won't have to be frayed, trying to make them perfect. Blankets also reduce the number of pathways you can create, so you do limit yourself in terms of movement. This is only a suggestion; you do not have to follow it if you do not agree with me.

Normal
1) 00:15:980 (1,2,3) - If you are into symmetry you can perhaps have them symmetrical. Symmetry looks nice, but it is not necessary.

2) 00:27:719 (4) - I was thinking why not add a sliderwhistle for the body? The reason why I suggest it is that is spices up the slider, and when the vocalist holds the vocals, I think a sliderwhistle goes well with it.
- Applies to 00:30:327 (4), 00:32:936 (4),

Kibbleru's Hard
1) 00:06:113 It saddens me when I see empty space here, and at 00:11:889 as well, as I like mapping the vocals.

2) 00:15:980 onwards I would use this as the clap sound, because it fits so well with the music http://puu.sh/nVh3q/e6d18a77ae.wav. You already have this in the song folder; just copy the normal-hitclap and rename it to soft-hitclap

3) 00:24:947 (1,2,3) - I recommend unstacking 2 and 3, because I feel that you get much nicer movement from 3 to 4 if it was unstacked.

4) 00:49:893 (1,2), 00:52:501 (1,2) -, 00:55:110 (1,2) I was thinking that with each set, the distance between 1 and 2 would be increasing, but when you get to the 3rd set 00:55:110 (1,2), the distance between them is smaller compared to the earlier sets. I was wondering why? Wouldn't it make sense for the distance between these 2 notes be larger (say around 2x)

Phkg's Insane
Fine

Grievance
It is fine, but I do have to say OD6 is quite lenient.

Final thoughts
The mapset is fine.

Good luck.

Pinataman

pinataman wrote:
Hey. Here from modreqs. Hope this helps.

[General]

Unused hitsounds:
{normal-hitclap.wav} {soft-hitclap.wav} {soft-hitclap30.wav} {soft-hitwhistle30.wav}

[Grievance]

RVMathew wrote:
I do have to say OD6 is quite lenient.
agreed

00:05:871 (3,4) – This spacing is quite big. 00:05:545 (1,2) – are the emphasized notes, so I'd like to see big spacing on these instead of at (3,4).
00:06:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) – In addition, I think you should scale down the DS in this section and the following one at 00:11:088 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – a little bit. This would help show that it's a calmer section, and it would result in the section at 00:15:980 (1) – having noticeable higher spacing relative to this section, which better reflects the additional instruments in that section.
00:14:023 (5,6) – One last thing about this section is the spacing around here. (6) is on an offbeat in the music which isn't all that strong, so I'd like more of the intensity of this measure to fall on (5) by increasing the spacing into (5) and decreasing the spacing into (6). If you disagree, then consider instead scaling down the DS across the whole measure because you're building the intensity a little too early imo, and the measure at 00:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – is all you really need to start building intensity.

00:36:849 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) – compare this to 00:39:458 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - . In the music, the former section is building tension with the high piano notes and rising volume of the bass, and then the latter section is the release of that tension, which starts the high intensity section that makes up the core of the song's emphasis. This is mapped the opposite way though. You map it with all the intensity on the former section, and so the latter section feels underwhelming in comparison, which doesn't go with the pacing of the song imo. One way to address this would be to start your build up section at 00:36:849 (1) – with a lot smaller DS (for example, do Ctrl shift S by .5 on 00:36:849 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - and scale 00:38:154 (1,2,1,2) – down by .8). Additionally, increasing some of the jumps at 00:39:458 (1,2,3,4,5) – etc would help give the beginning of the chorus the kick it needs.

[Kibbleru]

00:14:349 (1,1,2,3,4) – Getting out of the break right here with these objects didn't feel right to me; it kind of surprised me in a way, so I'm not sure if there is something in the song that goes with a huge change in intensity from no objects to objects. I think a spinner at 00:14:675 (1) – does a better job of introducing the map.

00:26:414 (1,2) – This DS is the same as 00:25:599 (4,1) - . I'd prefer it if this DS were the same as 00:25:762 (1,2,3) – instead since the reverse slider is a little intense, which makes a weaker DS balance out the pattern. Alternatively, increase the DS at 00:25:762 (1,2,3) – if you want to keep this spacing.

[Normal]

00:27:719 (4,5,1) – Consider making this an equilateral triangle: http://puu.sh/nVhyr/ddb24f7669.jpg

00:53:643 (4) – What do you think about adding a clap in addition to the finish to places like this one to give a stronger emphasis here?

01:00:654 (2,3) – Try going for a smoother flow: http://puu.sh/nVhO1/606045b901.jpg

If you found this helpful, consider making this a M4M with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/303933, but don't feel obliged.

Good luck!

Lasse (M4M)

Lasse wrote:
m4m from your queue ~~since nobody is going to mod a two diff approval set for free~~

General
rip combo colors
bgs are fine
no delayed hitsounds, but you could consider removing some of the silence at the end of some (epsecially normal-hitfinish11) to save a bit of space
soft-sliderslide11 is not muted, but the other one is?
spinners at start and end could use some volume changes to follow the fading sounds and everything better
hitsound stuff from grievance applies to all diffs where it's relevant too obviously
after checking some diffs I decided I didn't want to write it multiple times, so: 00:50:463 - seems wrongly snapped to 1/4 on quite some diffs or 1/8 on pkhg's. pretty sure it's actually 1/6 00:50:436 - 00:50:491 -
same for 00:53:072 - 00:55:681 - 00:58:289 -

Grievance
00:13:371 (1) - no whistle like the other (non-clap) downbeats on purpose? doesnt sound very different
00:16:958 (5) - I get you want to stack this on 2, but spacing seems a bit low with the music compared to before with strong beat + vocal here :/ also feels like 00:17:284 (1) - deserves a bit more spacing too. + slightly lowering 00:16:795 (4) - spacing might work well I'll think of something later
00:17:936 (6) - pretty much begs for a real whistle :'(
00:17:773 (4,5,6) - idk if you like manul stacks, but manually stacking this to the top would look nice imo http://i.imgur.com/6XZZSIq.jpg
00:24:784 (6,2,3,4) - autostacking kills this http://i.imgur.com/9rEOmTU.jpg when it hsould probably be http://i.imgur.com/taY6Cfk.jpg
00:25:273 (2,3,4) - gives all drums a clap, but 00:26:088 (1,2) - doesnt?
00:34:241 (1) - I guess putting it in the middle here gives it some kind of visual emphasis, still weird to have such low spacing on a strong cymbal and all
00:35:545 (1,1,2,1,2) - dont really get the pattern, sound are similar but 00:35:545 (1,1) - is overlapped 1/1 and then 00:36:034 (2,1) - is completely different?
00:36:849 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - whistles here feel completely unfitting and kill the piano a bit
00:39:458 (1) - can you silence the sliderslides for this part? normal/drum ones are pretty strong and feel a bit gross here
00:49:241 (1,2,3,4,1) - moving this a bit would make a nice visual transition to the new spacing http://i.imgur.com/8RZkdin.jpg
00:50:056 (2) - so strong with that drum and all, idk why it should be spaced that low, also could use a clap or sth
00:50:436 - how about somehow mapping this sound on the 1/6 (?) since you do on 00:53:045 (4) - and 00:55:654 (4) - etc. skipping this one feels off
Talked to Frost about it he suggested to map the vocals at the start first due to transition issues
01:14:920 - deleting this note would follow that high pitched sound so much better, also maybe use soft hitnormal + some additions?Myabe later , I'll stick to what I have right now

Kibbleru
00:14:349 (1) - not 100% sure about snapping this to 1/3 To the background noise
00:36:034 (2) - since this doesnt even follow the vocals, maybe try a rhythm like http://i.imgur.com/8fIrv06.jpg instead? would be nice to have those clickable imo
01:15:817 - clickable here would go really well with how the drums on the red tick differ from the other red ticks, actually 01:14:675 (1,2,3) - feels a bit underwhelming with only clicking 1/4 on those sounds :'(

Normal
01:05:219 (4,1) - what's with the sudden .8x ds?
01:15:980 - how about mapping this a bit differently to get the finishing cymbal of the song clickable? feels a bit disappointing to end it on a sliderend

Easy
00:23:806 (1) - I'd move the red nodes a bit to make it slightly more simple. diff is meant for complete beginners that are bnarely getting used to more normal sliders, maybe sth like http://i.imgur.com/b2b7ZkJ.jpg ?
00:33:914 (4,1) - bit confusing since both are well visible when leaving 3, have the same spacing to it and 3 leads more into 1 then it does into 4

gl

Misure (M4M)

Misure wrote:
Hello, m4m from your queue
[General]
widescreen support in Kibbleru's Hard,Habi's Insane and Grievance diff
why .jpg for a BG but .png for the other one:?
[Grievance]
00:20:382 (4) - 264|68 for a better flow to next slider maybe should be okay for now
00:24:947 (1) - like this for a better flow for 00:24:621 (5,6,1) - ?
00:26:251 (2) - ctrl+G? well not important tbh nah its fine
00:27:067 (5,6) - kinda close, keep a distance about ×1.80? the player should be able to read this correctly , should be okay too
00:30:327 (1,1) - this stack is not good imo, which make them so dense if another modder suggest to change i'll do it for now no
00:35:545 (1,1,2) - kinda hard to read, maybe 00:35:871 (1,2) - ctrl+G or something better imo changed the pattern form previous mod
00:58:860 - no NC here as you did as before?
01:04:893 - NC? NC here is fine no changes
[Normal]
00:08:154 (1) - maybe things like this flow better?
[Easy]
nothing to say
Nice mapset!
Good luck

Thanks ! No reply = Fixed.

EDIT : ALSO DOUBLE CHECKED WITH SHIRO ABOUT THE 1/6 DRUMS EX: 00:53:045 (4) -

Last edited by Aerous 2016-04-02T03:38:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-04-02T03:24:38+00:00

hi m4m

first off I think you should change your colours. Default colours look ugly af imo

Easy

00:10:762 (1) - rotate this way? http://puu.sh/o2QN5/4d921f149e.jpg Your way played alright but it just looked awkward
00:22:501 (3) - Curve the tail a bit more and move the anchor point in the middle
00:23:806 (1) - Since this is an easy I think its more appropriate to open up the curve and move the first anchor up and to the left a bit, basically just open up the shape http://puu.sh/o2Rkw/1adb3fb555.jpg
00:24:947 (2) - I dont think a blanket plays well here espcially since the tail of 00:23:806 (1) curves away form the head
00:39:458 (1) - hitsounds overpower in the kiai time; its noticeable here 00:49:893 (1) when things suddenly become drastically quiet. Bottom line, decrease kiai volume and increase the volume afer a bit. The kiai uses the normal sampleset and the other part uses soft sample set and the diffrenece in volume between those 2 on their own is big
01:06:849 (3) - if you were going for the blanket, its off. If not, nvm
01:08:806 (2) - ^
01:10:762 (1,2) - I think you should have these as normal curves, as all the other sliders are curved normally so it just makes these 2 look out of place

Normal

00:24:947 (4,5) - This is about your easy dif.. I think you should have used this rhythm for your easy diff as well because you were following the vocals for
it at the start
00:15:980 (1) - I do question the rhythm consistency for this part. Im guessing you are following the vocals since its really obvious at 00:21:197 (1) however that rhythm there looks way our of place because you didnt map the vocals consistently throughout the section.
You could have added a circle here 00:17:773
00:18:588 (1) should have been a 1/1 slider, the same as 00:15:980 (1) .
for 00:19:893 (4,5) you should have used the same rhythm you did for 00:21:197 (1,2,3) . I mean they're both the same rhythm and it just feels awkward that one has it and the other one doesnt, it doesnt feel like one has it for emphasis it just feels like one is out of place
00:22:501 (4,5) - should have the same rhythm as 00:21:197 (1,2,3) as well
00:31:632 (1,2) - for flow? http://puu.sh/o2Swh/249b12c35d.jpg
00:39:458 (1) - Can you lower that initial hitsound? it drowns out everything. same for 01:00:327 (1) . This may be in your easy diff as well that i might have missed, if so change it for that aswell
00:48:588 (3) - couldnt you make a more appealing shape?
00:51:523 (5) - I dont think you should stack this as all of your other stacks so far have been 1/2 beats apart and this one is 1 beat apart

Kibbleru's Hard

00:27:556 (1,2) - Increase the DS a bit would make it feel more like a 1/1 space. Just a bit

Pkhg's Insane

01:15:654 (2,3,4,5) - have you ever thought about putting the second half of the stream under neath slider 01:15:327 (1) - and have it upside down? Just felt like this would cause some reading problems since this is the easiest Insane in the set and it will be the first Insane the newbie-er players are going to play

Thats all from me, GL!

edit: add habi in description http://puu.sh/o2VNm/c52938059a.jpg

HabiHolic

5,405 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-04-02T04:19:34+00:00

1/6 beat Fixed.

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38643
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15980,26414,34241,36849,60327
DistanceSpacing: 2.7
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:ヒストリア
Artist:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
ArtistUnicode:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
Creator:Aerous
Version:Habi's Insane
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BeatmapID:941137
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[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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Birdy

5,733 posts

Joined April 2011

Birdy 2016-04-02T04:32:18+00:00

Hey, first mod in pretty much a full year. Shoot me in the face if this ends up being horrible.

[EZ]
00:13:371 (1) - Could add a whistle to the head? Not sure if it's not there on purpose.
00:21:197 (1) - Just slight cosmetic issue: The blanket could be perfected.
00:23:806 (1) - The zig-zag in the slider would fit 1/2 later, to match the vocals. Here it's kinda unnecessary.
00:34:241 (1) - Missing clap on the head.
01:12:067 (3) - Missing clap on the reverse.

[NM]
00:05:545 (1) - tbh could fit better around 84|284.
00:08:154 (1,2,3) - Ugly, and the straight slider doesn't even flow well. Do something witty and original!
00:23:154 (5) - Would be cool as a circle here and a 1/2 slider at the current end. Fits the rhythm better and doesn't ignore the one vocal hit it's currently ignoring.
00:50:708 (3,4) - The slider should be first, then the circle. Now there's a strong sound at the slider end, which would fit better for a circle.
01:12:067 (4) - Missing clap on the reverse.

[kibbleru's]
00:14:349 (1) - Nothing indicating the necessity of a 1/3 repeat slider here. Just Use 1/2™.
00:45:654 (4) - Would flow slightly better around 76|302.

[habi's]
00:24:458 (3,4,1) - Uh, keep the spacing constant. There's no reason for one jump and one with no jump, especially when (1) is clearly stronger sound than the (4). I mean, a 3 to 4 jump would fit. This 4 to 1 jump is just unacceptable.
00:54:458 (4) - Could be better as 1/1 slider and a circle in the current end.

That's all. Won't bother with the Extras. The Insanes (especially pkhg's, good job) looked fairly good from a quick run-through.

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-04-02T06:25:41+00:00

Fixed all on my part + kibbs

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2016-04-02T08:33:36+00:00

[Nara]

00:10:762 (1) - spread into two circles is really more fit with the song (two cymbal) imo and you can make a jump of it. you can try this rhythm
00:13:371 (1,2) - you can change this to four circles if you want, I saw you love jump circles :>
00:32:202 (4,5) - ahh imo, this spacing is questionable. it's really hard to read as 1/4. the spacing makes it more like 1/2. please reconsider about its spacing.
00:30:001 (6) - you can change this to two circles to emphasis two strong beats.
00:36:197 (4) - how about stack this to 00:36:034 (3) because it's downbeat. then make jump on (5).
00:37:501 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - don't you think these spacing are too big for calm part? o.o
00:50:871 (3) - this is the ONLY finish that on tail of slider, make it clickable like you did at every place?

[Freesong]

00:44:023 (4) - this note is really too far for 1/4 imo. please reconsider nerf it. it's more like 1/2.
00:49:730 (7) - tbh, remove clap on both head and tail then add whistle on head instead is really more fit with the song (and with kick slider.) if you use triple, that's an another choice. two claps allow for that. well at least try to follow me before reject.
00:59:349 - unused green line, in case you didn't forget to change SV. also remove NC on this note too.
01:00:001 (1) - if you didn't add this for art, it's an unnecessary NC. remove it.
01:00:980 (1) - same here. if no, add NC on 01:01:632 (3) . try to make them consistent.
01:10:762 (1) - add finish.
01:12:393 (1) - add clap.
great style.

GL, great map. soontm

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,464 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2016-04-02T11:35:55+00:00

I cant find any big problems in Nara's diff actually lol

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2016-04-02T14:11:34+00:00

No comment = fixed!

RVMathew

RVMathew wrote:
Freesongs' Insane
1) 00:06:113 It saddens me when I see empty space here, and at 00:11:889 as well, as I like mapping the vocals. I will consider to map this out if everyone is saying the same

2) You need a background

3) Tags conflict with the other difficulties.

4) 01:08:154 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Perhaps for the 2nd set of the triangle pattern you can make the distance between the notes a little bit larger to give a little bit of a challenge.

5) 01:12:067 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - If you want more variety in the jump patterns, you can have 1,2 (first 2 sets as stacked notes), then have the back and forth jumps for the last 2 sets. The idea is pretty cool, but for now, I will just keep mine.

6) 01:15:980 (7) - Since it starts on a downbeat, wouldn't it make sense for it to be a new combo?

P A N

P A N wrote:
[Freesong]
00:44:023 (4) - this note is really too far for 1/4 imo. please reconsider nerf it. it's more like 1/2.
00:49:730 (7) - tbh, remove clap on both head and tail then add whistle on head instead is really more fit with the song (and with kick slider.) if you use triple, that's an another choice. two claps allow for that. well at least try to follow me before reject. Removed claps and added whistle. The triplet you suggested also works well , but for now I don't want to break the pattern I created.
00:59:349 - unused green line, in case you didn't forget to change SV. also remove NC on this note too.
01:00:001 (1) - if you didn't add this for art, it's an unnecessary NC. remove it.
01:00:980 (1) - same here. if no, add NC on 01:01:632 (3) . try to make them consistent.
01:10:762 (1) - add finish.
01:12:393 (1) - add clap.
great style. :3

JamesHa

JamesHa wrote:
FreeSongs
00:05:871 - Don't have breaks? Kind of sad to see it here, plus since Habi mapped it you should do it too. will consider to map it out in the next update
00:14:675 - Map it out since its pretty strong here? Plus a lot more fun to play with than spinner ^
00:22:175 (5,6) - Should have more spacing than 00:21:849 (3,4) - due to stronger vocals
00:24:947 (1) - Maybe like this ? http://puu.sh/o2J6W/90de897cc6.jpg and then 00:25:273 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/o2J7E/9ee9d40d45.jpg Rearranged the pattern a bit
00:36:849 (1) - Same thing here, you should map it out. Lower diffs mapped it out and same thing with the other two extras. ^
00:40:110 (4,5) - Maybe improve flow here with extended sliders? 00:40:110 (4) - CTRL + G Moved them closer
00:59:512 - Strong beat here, don't use an extended slider if there's a beat inbetween
01:02:284 (6) - CTRL + G and stack on 4? 01:01:795 (4) - I think its fine and I don't want to break the flow I created
Fun diff :3

Misure

Misure wrote:
[FreeSongs' Insane]
00:08:154 - place an 1/2 slider here to avoid empty? planning to map this section out
00:13:371 - if you take ^, maybe things like this are proper ^
00:25:762 - NC to emphasise the strong beat here? 00:24:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes as a whole forms a pattern. I prefer to NC according to pattern rather than emphasizing strong beats
00:28:045 (1,1) - kinda close maybe
00:32:773 (2,1) - ^ besides maybe a little hard to read as 00:33:262 (1,2) - moved 00:33:262 (1,2) - closer to improve readability
00:39:458 - NC?
00:54:458 (1,2) - kinda hard to read though they are with the same color, maybe 344|124 better, as overlap you did before I think they are ok because I already made the similar jumps here 00:49:893 (1,2) - 00:52:501 (1,2) -. Might consider to change that if others say the same
too much straight sliders towards left (which can be realized when playing) consider to make some of them right-towards? Changed some sliders so that they are pointing to the right

Lasse

Lasse wrote:
Free Songs
00:26:088 (8) - why 1/8 lol doesnt work with the drums at all
00:41:985 - ingoring the 1/4 here? The 1/4 here is not that strong. I will just ignore it.. sry
00:59:349 (1) - extended slider feels off here since it skips a pretty strong sound

pinataman

pinataman wrote:
[Freesongs]

Add tags and insert background. fixed

00:05:708 (2) – I like not having a break after this and and would rather see you fill it in with low intensity rhythms with small spacing in order to keep the player engaged in the map instead of forcing them to wait until 00:16:143 (1) – to actually play the map. Same thing for the break at 00:10:925 (2) - will map this out in the next update

00:39:458 (2) – Treat this suggestion as a data point of a survey as to whether or not players like the ¾ sliders here. I prefer this without ¾ sliders. The kick sliders like at 00:49:241 (4) – were good, though. will consider that Thanks for the input!!

Thanks for the mods!! Also, since a lot of modders mentioned to map out the beginning section, I will map that part out and update it asap

update

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Last edited by FreeSongs 2016-04-03T11:54:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Nara

Nara 2016-04-03T03:43:15+00:00

JamesHa wrote:
Nara
00:05:545 (1) - Use two notes instead of a slider? The music is different compared to 00:05:871 (2) - fixed
00:06:523 (5,6) - Use different movement on the cursor to indicate the change in the vocals? http://puu.sh/o2JnI/31b719f819.jpg Just like at 00:16:632 (4,5,6) - fixed in other way
00:23:154 (3,4,5,6) - Stack each other? http://puu.sh/o2JsC/23a94875a5.jpg no :3
00:27:556 (2) - If you want to follow vocal start it on 00:27:719 - http://puu.sh/o2JwX/1c0e714786.jpg fixed in other way
00:36:197 - Delete? Overmapped. can't agree lol
00:47:284 (1,2,3,4) - Bigger cursor movement here since vocals getting pretty intense? http://puu.sh/o2JCa/8790a68188.jpg and http://puu.sh/o2JDe/ef9df4cbfc.jpg fixed something
00:50:871 (3) - ends on strong beat , should be clickable fixed
00:58:371 (3) - Use two circles , changes music http://puu.sh/o2JH2/b3bcf7c530.jpg fixed
01:02:610 (6) - make it a stream , theres drums in the background ( Just like at 01:05:219 (2,3,4,5,1) - ) no, prefer follow the vocal
01:04:241 (1,2,3,4) - more spacing compared to 01:02:936 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - fixed
01:06:360 (4,2) - Blanket? http://puu.sh/o2JL2/f7eaead7a6.jpg no :3
01:08:480 (3) - make it a extended slider , strong beat at the end. http://puu.sh/o2JMs/dae37cd6e0.jpg keep

P A N wrote:
[Nara]
00:10:762 (1) - spread into two circles is really more fit with the song (two cymbal) imo and you can make a jump of it. you can try this rhythm fixed
00:13:371 (1,2) - you can change this to four circles if you want, I saw you love jump circles :> no there are calm part to me
00:32:202 (4,5) - ahh imo, this spacing is questionable. it's really hard to read as 1/4. the spacing makes it more like 1/2. please reconsider about its spacing. play this one, it's really easy; also it's an extra diff! :3
00:30:001 (6) - you can change this to two circles to emphasis two strong beats. fixed
00:36:197 (4) - how about stack this to 00:36:034 (3) because it's downbeat. then make jump on (5). no :3
00:37:501 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - don't you think these spacing are too big for calm part? o.o but.. i like jump wanna keep it
00:50:871 (3) - this is the ONLY finish that on tail of slider, make it clickable like you did at every place? yea fixed

thank you for mod guys!

waiting for combo colors

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:ヒストリア
Artist:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
ArtistUnicode:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
Creator:Aerous
Version:Nara's Extra
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Tags:プライド革命 Pride Kakumei Jmmxps FreeSongs Kibbleru HabiHolic Nara pkhg tv size vocaloid
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Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-04-03T20:19:56+00:00

pkhg wrote:
can u like post it for me xd
im silenced umbrellas

Lasse wrote:
can you change the yellow comboclor a bit? doesnt work that well with bg and the others imo
why no intro spinner ok
rip hitsounds, modding not hitsounded stuff is so gross..... aerous' hitsounds are gross
00:05:545 (1,2) - 00:10:762 (1,2) - why stack? I get it for the other sound, but those seem to strong to do that why not
well, those 1/8 at least work better than the 1/4 on some other diffs, but still seems off to me, see general 1/6 now
01:10:110 (4,1) - pls no http://i.imgur.com/she6P3S.jpg eww its not like someone will notice it :d
Misure wrote:
00:17:284 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G for 00:17:284 (1) - and for 00:17:610 (2) - ? wanna keep it less spaced as possible
00:38:154 - useless inherited point here d e l e t e d
Kisses wrote:
01:15:654 (2,3,4,5) - have you ever thought about putting the second half of the stream under neath slider 01:15:327 (1) - and have it upside down? Just felt like this would cause some reading problems since this is the easiest Insane in the set and it will be the first Insane the newbie-er players are going to play lalready got testplays and seems k
http://puu.sh/o4370/488638aeb2.rar

Taeyang

Elite Mapper

1,209 posts

Joined June 2013

Taeyang 2016-04-04T13:28:46+00:00

Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General

Title unicode and Tags pkhg's Insane diff only not same
AudioLeadIn: 1000~1500 around
Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitclap30.wav
soft-hitwhistle30.wav
Difficulties end time is not consistent:
01:21:197 - Easy
01:21:197 - Normal
01:21:197 - Kibbleru's Hard
01:21:197 - FreeSongs' Insane
01:20:708 - pkhg's Insane
01:21:034 - Habi's Insane
01:21:197 - Grievance
01:21:197 - Nara's Extra

Easy

00:00:328 (1,1) - Check if the recovery time after this spinner is appropriate for the difficulty level
00:23:806 (1,2,3,1) - rhythm suggest
SPOILER
00:35:545 (3) - how do you think 3/4 reverse slide?
SPOILER

Habi's Insane

00:03:018 (1) - 이스핀 다른난이도들처럼 00:04:893 - 여기서 끊어주는게 좋을것같습니다.
00:05:545 (1,2) - 담요 약간 삐뚤어짐
00:17:284 (1,2,3) - 이흐름 약간 어색하다고 느껴지는데 2부분의 보컬도 강조해줄겸 이렇게 어떨까요?
SPOILER
00:23:154 (5,6) - 여기에 점프가 필요하다고생각합니다.00:23:643 (6,1) - 여기 가아닌
SPOILER
00:35:871 (1,2) - 컨쥐 한게 더 나아보입니다.00:35:545 (1,1) - 여긴 안티점프이고 00:36:034 (2,1) - 여긴 하프스택인데 어색해보입니다.
00:50:382 (2,3) - 인세이더라도 트릴뒤 점프는 약간 치기 힘들지 않을까싶습니다. 00:49:893 (1,2) - 여기 거리만큼 줄여주는게 좋을것 같습니다.
01:00:327 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 여기 점프를 약간 줄여줄 필요가있다고봅니다. 최소 01:04:241 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 여기보단 좁게 아니면 이곳은 약간 더넓게해주는편이 노래에 더어울릴것같습니다.
SPOILER
01:15:001 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 흐름 약간 어색한데 재배치 고려해보시는게 어떨까요? 대충 이런식으로?
SPOILER

Grievance

00:10:762 (1,2,1,2) - rhythm suggest just use same rhythm like here 00:05:545 (1,2,1,2) - make consistency play looks better
SPOILER
00:36:849 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this jumps i think doesn't fit in music,we can found loud sound
so how do you change to antijumps?
00:55:436 (3,4) - 00:52:827 (3,4) - 00:58:045 (3,4) - use same hitsound
01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - pattern suggest
SPOILER

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-04-04T22:13:54+00:00

Taeyang wrote:
Bold : Fix quickly/unrankable issues
blue : Highly recommend

General
Title unicode and Tags pkhg's Insane diff only not same
AudioLeadIn: 1000~1500 around
Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitclap30.wav
soft-hitwhistle30.wav
Difficulties end time is not consistent:
01:21:197 - Easy
01:21:197 - Normal
01:21:197 - Kibbleru's Hard
01:21:197 - FreeSongs' Insane
01:20:708 - pkhg's Insane
01:21:034 - Habi's Insane
01:21:197 - Grievance
01:21:197 - Nara's Extra

Easy
00:00:328 (1,1) - Check if the recovery time after this spinner is appropriate for the difficulty level
I'll check with someone soon
00:23:806 (1,2,3,1) - rhythm suggest I think mine is okay for now
SPOILER
00:35:545 (3) - how do you think 3/4 reverse slide? Sure!
SPOILER

Grievance
00:10:762 (1,2,1,2) - rhythm suggest just use same rhythm like here 00:05:545 (1,2,1,2) - make consistency play looks better The start I didnt want players to feel surprised with that start so I just used a slider instead. Easier to play
SPOILER
00:36:849 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this jumps i think doesn't fit in music,we can found loud sound
so how do you change to antijumps? Build up towards kiai time
00:55:436 (3,4) - 00:52:827 (3,4) - 00:58:045 (3,4) - use same hitsound ok
01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - pattern suggest :D!
SPOILER

Thanks~

Electoz

Beatmap Nominator

1,893 posts

Joined May 2015

Electoz 2016-04-08T15:25:44+00:00

Sorry for the late.

[General]

Unused hitsounds:
1. soft-hitclap30.wav
2. soft-hitwhistle30.wav

[Easy]

00:00:328 (1,1) - Same as what Taeyang said I guess, about the recovery time. Maybe you can change the spinner into a slider or something.
00:24:947 - Add clap? The finish alone here sounded so weak compared to the claps lol.
00:26:414 (1) - 00:29:023 (1) - Add finish? Since you have one on 00:31:632 (1) .
00:51:523 (3,4) - Ctrl+G the rhythm works better because you have a clap on the sliderend and yet you made a weaker beat here 00:52:175 (4) clickable. Same applies to 00:56:741 (3,4) .
01:14:675 (3) - Try this rhythm? I think there should be some object on 01:15:980 cuz you did it in Normal so why not. Actually a 2/1 repeat slider sounds fine too.

[Normal]

The way you stacked objects with both 1/1 and 1/2 could be confusing for players, I would unstack those with 1/1 beat spacing, up to you.
00:07:827 (6) - 00:13:045 (6) - These shouldn't be clickable if you're following vocal.
00:21:197 (1,2) - In this section from 00:15:980 until 00:23:806 you're following the drum and keeping the constant 1/1 rhythm so idk why you decided to ignore the drum and follow the vocal here which you didn't do the same at 00:15:980 (1) and also sounds really off cuz you break the 1/1 rhythm out of nowhere.
00:33:914 - Add either clap or whistle?
00:36:197 - I don't hear anything landed here except the vocal which is not the one you're following here so I think 00:35:871 (5) should be a 1/1 slider.
00:52:664 - Why a finish here lol, maybe a mistake or something? Could have been on 00:52:501 .
00:49:893 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - You used some claps on the whole thing here and then you changed into whistles on 00:55:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) so I'm kinda curious why you hitsounded these differently cuz to me the rhythm on both of these are pretty much same.
Feels like rhythm in some parts of 2nd kiai could have been denser but that's just my preference.

[Kibbleru's Hard]

00:17:773 (2) - Not sure if whistle is needed here.
00:26:414 (1,2) - 00:29:023 (1,2) - 00:31:632 (1,2) - Imo might better with doing stacks here cuz I have to make more movements after a downbeat which feels like the downbeats are less emphasized.
00:41:741 (4,5) - Idk maybe I would increase a spacing here.
00:54:784 - Map something here? Well at least there's a piano sound there and somehow it felt awkward to left this out compared to other 2/1 spacings, just my preference tho.
01:01:958 (2,4) - There's only an overlap here in those 1/1 slider patterns so it kinda stands out. Well it hardly matters anyway if you want to keep it for the flow.
01:07:501 (4,5) - Actually I prefer a rhythm you did on 01:12:719 (3,4,1) compared to this one because you have a sliderend landed on the downbeat and also both 01:07:501 - 01:07:827 should be clickable since they're the same sound.
01:14:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - Kicksliders instead? I feel like the rhythm is kinda tensed up.

Ok hope that helps, good luck~

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-04-10T00:42:59+00:00

Fixed all thanks for the mod ~

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2016-04-14T15:13:15+00:00

Hello.
Your mod back, exp^0= ???

Please, reply to this mod and tell me why you didn't change without saying "it's my style" or "there are already ranked maps with the same kind of pattern" or other reasons like this.

Easy

01:05:545 (1,2) - Could be better if their direction is on the left instead to introduce the next slider 01:06:849 (3) - better for beginners. And also fix that blanket.

Normal

00:42:067 (1,2) - Here you don't use parallel sliders to make something esthetical, so why don't to make a curved slider like this instead, to make the whole pattern a little better to play ?
SPOILER
00:51:034 (4,5,6) - This may be the most difficult part to read in this diff, because of you have a 3/2 gap between 00:51:034 (4,5) -, and the stacked objects 00:51:523 (5,6) - don't really help the player to read this part properly. Consider changing the pattern to make something easier to read, (avoid this 3/2 gap)

Kibbleru's Hard

00:05:545 (1,2,1,2) - This is just a Hard diff, you really should reduce the distance between 00:10:762 (1,2) - because it's really difficult to aim 184BPM 1/2 circles without being introduced by a fast pattern.
00:34:241 (1,2,1) - This may be considered as a reading issue, visually, the distance between 00:34:241 (1,2) - and 00:34:893 (2,1) - is the same but they don't have the same gap. You can do it on Insane diff, but on Hard diff, it's really questionnable.

pkhg's Insane

00:41:741 (4,5,1) - difficult to read, because there is nothing really fast before this pattern which gives some "acceleration" to the player to expect a pattern like this. Also this slider 00:41:414 (3) - covers 00:42:067 (1) - and if the player is not really careful he could really get a sliderbreak here (when i was testplaying i misread this part). Consider changing their placement.

Habi's Insane

00:21:197 (1,2) - The distance between these objects is a little low (1.20) compared to the default distance you used before (1.40), just for the sake of blanket and it looks a little weird. But you can increase the distance if you make the blanket more "open" if you see what i mean. Same for 00:23:154 (5,6) -
00:52:991 (3,4) - The distance between them is a little low compared to 00:55:599 (3,4) - or 00:50:382 (2,3) - and the player could misread and consider this as a 1/6 spacing instead of a 1/2 (i misread it when testplaying).

FreeSongs' Insane

01:07:991 (2,1) - There should be a little more distance between these circles to make this jump pattern easier to read like you did for 01:13:208 (2,1) - , because the player may be trapped by the distance between 01:07:991 (2,2) - visually, and he could misread the pattern (i was about to misread it when i was testplaying).

Nara's Extra

01:00:654 (2) - It surprised me a little, when you see on editor it doesn't really flow well but when you play it, you don't know why but it works. But i think there is a better solution for it, tro something more esthetical, and which works fine like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4929652

Grievance

nothing to say.

Good luck ~

Nara

Nara 2016-04-14T21:30:08+00:00

@cb
fixed :3

http://puu.sh/oil6Z/56fea72e32.zip

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-04-14T21:45:55+00:00

[General]

Can you swap Combo colors 4 and 5? That way the two blue colors aren't side by side. They are quite similar imo.

[Grievance]

01:00:327 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Idk about you but when i tried mapping this song, the section here just felt like one of the strongest points in the song; same with 01:04:241 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - . It's just a bit surprising you mapped them with comparatively low spacing/difficulty patterns.

[Nara's Extra]

00:20:871 (5,1) - Something like this would look pretty nice, visually. And the added jump would make a good emphasis point.

~

00:50:382 (3,4,5) - 1/6

[FreeSong's Insane]

00:14:675 (1) - I would end this a 1/2 beat earlier at 00:15:817 - . Theres a vocal there too so it fits. This is just so you can begin clicking on a downbeat instead of on the red tick after the downbeat, which isn't as strong.

[Habi's Insane]

00:05:545 (1,2) - Just fix this blanket <3

[Kibb's Hard]

00:34:241 (1,2,1) - This spacing is kinda confusing... between 1/2 and 1/1. Can yo maybe make the jump to slider 2 a bit smaller?

Call me back!

Nara

Nara 2016-04-14T21:56:18+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
[General]
[Nara's Extra]

00:20:871 (5,1) - Something like this would look pretty nice, visually. And the added jump would make a good emphasis point.
~
00:50:382 (3,4,5) - 1/6

fixed all
http://puu.sh/oini5/ce6ba8e30b.zip

Last edited by Nara 2016-04-14T22:02:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sotarks

3,502 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-04-14T21:57:06+00:00

grievance quality hitsounding Kappa

Aerous

1,492 posts

Joined September 2013

Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-04-14T22:18:49+00:00

@CB Fixed everything you suggested in your post

@Monstrata Fixed it by increasing the distance , hoped it helped. And changed color combos gonna change the others one after they send me their diffs.

xd

+ fixed kibb's hard

pkhg wrote:
n o c h a n g e s

x d

Last edited by Aerous 2016-04-16T03:03:32+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

FreeSongs

502 posts

Joined November 2012

FreeSongs 2016-04-15T00:14:57+00:00

@Monstrata: Fixed
@Cherry Blossom: Increased the distance and rearranged the pattern. Hope its easier to read now

update

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 38643
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Historia
TitleUnicode:ヒストリア
Artist:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
ArtistUnicode:CHiCO with HoneyWorks
Creator:Aerous
Version:FreeSongs' Insane
Source:
Tags:プライド革命 Pride Kakumei Jmmxps FreeSongs Kibbleru HabiHolic Nara pkhg tv size vocaloid
BeatmapID:932142
BeatmapSetID:431625

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HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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HabiHolic

5,405 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-04-15T09:34:19+00:00

Fixed.

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496,180,73045,2,0,L|408:188,1,89,10|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,73371,6,0,B|228:136|288:148|256:232,1,178,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,176,73860,1,2,1:2:0:0:
340,104,74023,2,0,L|444:116,1,89,8|2,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
172,176,74349,2,0,L|83:165,1,89,10|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
16,248,74675,6,0,L|24:296,2,44.5,10|0|2,0:0|1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
56,84,75001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,336,75164,1,0,1:0:0:0:
276,188,75327,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,28,75491,1,2,1:2:0:0:
152,268,75654,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,136,75817,1,0,1:0:0:0:
64,164,75980,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76061,12,0,81034,0:0:0:0:

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-04-16T03:32:06+00:00

Lets GOOOOOOOOO

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2016-04-16T21:04:15+00:00

Alright, bubbled!

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2016-04-16T21:19:42+00:00

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Nara

Nara 2016-04-16T21:22:53+00:00

rip

Yuii-

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Yuii- 2016-04-17T21:24:08+00:00

I'll push this set forward once the other Historia is fully ranked!

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-04-24T23:07:26+00:00

Updated Kibb's Hard since the timing got fucked up

Updated every diff with hitsounds from Yuii (Except pkhg and habi)

Yuii-

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Yuii- 2016-04-26T01:45:03+00:00

Posting logs in 5 minutes!

2016-04-25 20:09 Yuii-: i know how much you hate hitsounds
2016-04-25 20:09 Yuii-: but maaaan
2016-04-25 20:09 Yuii-: maps are polished enough
2016-04-25 20:09 Yuii-: but it's like
2016-04-25 20:09 Yuii-: hitsounds are too random, volume is too high, ughh
2016-04-25 20:09 Aerous:

ill do better LOL
2016-04-25 20:10 Yuii-: k let me fix the hs
2016-04-25 20:10 Yuii-: and i will send you the diff
2016-04-25 20:10 Aerous: o
2016-04-25 20:10 Aerous: ok thanks
2016-04-25 20:11 Yuii-: also
2016-04-25 20:11 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/932162 CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Historia [pkhg's Insane]]
2016-04-25 20:11 Yuii-: 00:41:414 (3,1) - tell him to fix this
2016-04-25 20:11 Aerous: ye
2016-04-25 20:11 Aerous: i might just fix it for him
2016-04-25 20:11 Aerous: and message him
2016-04-25 20:12 Aerous: changed it to like this http://puu.sh/ovKkm/6564a66c8c.jpg
2016-04-25 20:13 Yuii-: nice
2016-04-25 20:13 Yuii-: on your diff (now that i am hitsounding it)
2016-04-25 20:13 Yuii-: 00:26:088 (1,2,1) - sure about the spacing?
2016-04-25 20:14 Aerous: ya
2016-04-25 20:14 Aerous: test played
2016-04-25 20:14 Aerous: a lot of times
2016-04-25 20:14 Aerous: even shitty players like me can do it

2016-04-25 20:18 Yuii-: alright!
2016-04-25 20:26 Yuii-: 65% done
2016-04-25 20:26 Aerous: !!
2016-04-25 20:40 Yuii-: done
2016-04-25 20:40 Aerous: !!
2016-04-25 20:40 Yuii-: http://puu.sh/ovLRz/1b4c749b5e.osu
2016-04-25 20:40 Yuii-: Take care
2016-04-25 20:40 Yuii-: with the metadata
2016-04-25 20:40 Yuii-: my puush is screwed
2016-04-25 20:40 Aerous: kk
2016-04-25 20:41 Yuii-: Tell me if you like it, first ofc
2016-04-25 20:42 Aerous: ya its better than mine
2016-04-25 20:42 Aerous: should i copy it to the other diff
2016-04-25 20:42 Aerous: but i have to deal with SV and stuff dont i if i copy the lines with it
2016-04-25 20:42 Yuii-: Hmm
2016-04-25 20:43 Yuii-: You have a point there
2016-04-25 20:43 Yuii-: There isn't another way?
2016-04-25 20:43 Yuii-: Avoiding SVs?
2016-04-25 20:43 Yuii-: Also 00:34:241 (1) - add a whistle on tail, I forgot kek
2016-04-25 20:43 Aerous: ya if i dont copy the lines to it
2016-04-25 20:43 Yuii-: Hmm
2016-04-25 20:43 Yuii-: Don't copy the lines and add them later
2016-04-25 20:43 Yuii-: I only added like... 7 anyway
2016-04-25 20:44 Aerous: wait
2016-04-25 20:44 Aerous: did u only add
2016-04-25 20:44 Aerous: 00:36:849 -
2016-04-25 20:44 Aerous: ?
2016-04-25 20:44 Aerous: because if its only that small part
2016-04-25 20:44 Yuii-: 00:04:811 - 00:05:463 - 00:37:420 - 00:37:583 - 00:38:072 - 00:38:235 - 00:39:050 - 00:38:724 - 01:14:594 -
2016-04-25 20:44 Aerous: i can do it
2016-04-25 20:45 Yuii-: And also modified some volumes
2016-04-25 20:45 Yuii-: Because too loud / too low
2016-04-25 20:49 Aerous: pkhg i wont bother with hs
2016-04-25 20:49 Aerous: cuz i think he did it himself
2016-04-25 20:49 Aerous: I THINK
2016-04-25 20:49 Aerous: habi too
2016-04-25 20:50 Aerous: man
2016-04-25 20:50 Aerous: freesongs
2016-04-25 20:50 Aerous: gonna be a pain
2016-04-25 20:51 Yuii-: leave it from habi and pkhg then
2016-04-25 20:51 Yuii-: Ya, Habi's hs are pretty
2016-04-25 20:52 Yuii-: don't you think pkhg's hs are too quiet?
2016-04-25 20:52 Aerous: i think its fine
2016-04-25 20:52 Yuii-: Alright
2016-04-25 20:53 Yuii-: Poke me whenever it's done for a final recheck and then I will push it forward
2016-04-25 20:53 Aerous: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/953106 CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Historia [Nara's Extra]]
2016-04-25 20:53 Aerous: can you check
2016-04-25 20:53 Aerous: 00:26:414 -
2016-04-25 20:53 Aerous: wahts the SV for it
2016-04-25 20:53 Yuii-: sure
2016-04-25 20:53 Yuii-: 1.0xx
2016-04-25 20:53 Yuii-: 1.00
2016-04-25 20:54 Aerous: whats after it
2016-04-25 20:54 Yuii-: http://puu.sh/ovMBA/051b9af047.png
2016-04-25 20:58 Aerous: for freesongs
2016-04-25 20:58 Aerous: is this suppose to be extended
2016-04-25 20:58 Aerous: 00:24:947 (1) -
2016-04-25 20:59 Yuii-: I don't see any problem yet that is a really motherfucking pattern
2016-04-25 20:59 Yuii-: 00:24:947 (1) - downwards, 00:25:273 (2,3,4) - upwards, 00:25:599 (5) - down again
2016-04-25 21:00 Yuii-: Thing with that not being finished on the downbeat it's cause there's nothing there and the vocals are extended
2016-04-25 21:00 Yuii-: so yeah, I'd say it's okay!
2016-04-25 21:00 Yuii-: brb
2016-04-25 21:11 Aerous: k
2016-04-25 21:11 Aerous: updating
2016-04-25 21:18 Aerous: ya updated
2016-04-25 21:19 Aerous: idk about nara hp od compared to mine
2016-04-25 21:25 Yuii-: Will check
2016-04-25 21:25 Aerous: im test playing from freesongs' nara and mine
2016-04-25 21:25 Aerous: ifd i screwed up any SV changes
2016-04-25 21:25 Yuii-: sure
2016-04-25 21:27 Yuii-: 00:39:132 (6) -
2016-04-25 21:27 Aerous: which diff
2016-04-25 21:27 Aerous: o
2016-04-25 21:27 Aerous: hs
2016-04-25 21:28 Yuii-: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/953106 CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Historia [Nara's Extra]]
2016-04-25 21:28 Aerous: o
2016-04-25 21:28 Aerous: extended it
2016-04-25 21:29 Yuii-: !
2016-04-25 21:29 Aerous: ok fixed
2016-04-25 21:30 Aerous: anything else?
2016-04-25 21:30 Yuii-: 00:57:067 (3) - 1/6 really?
2016-04-25 21:30 Aerous: idk about it but no mods complained about it
2016-04-25 21:31 Aerous: i can change it
2016-04-25 21:31 Aerous: if u want
2016-04-25 21:31 Yuii-: nah, leave it then
2016-04-25 21:31 Yuii-: it was quite random haha
2016-04-25 21:31 Yuii-: checking FS' diff
2016-04-25 21:31 Yuii-: check the lowest diffs please
2016-04-25 21:31 Aerous: i did with DT
2016-04-25 21:33 Yuii-: on the editor heyt hey
2016-04-25 21:33 Yuii-: 00:39:458 - on FS, can you please add sampleset soft to every slider tail on this section?
2016-04-25 21:33 Yuii-: 00:42:067 -
2016-04-25 21:33 Yuii-: 00:44:675 -
2016-04-25 21:34 Aerous: ;w;
2016-04-25 21:34 Yuii-: 00:50:056 (2,1,2,3,4) - also this is hm
2016-04-25 21:35 Aerous: http://puu.sh/ovOTY/94fb03b767.png
2016-04-25 21:35 Aerous: this one right?
2016-04-25 21:35 Aerous: double checking
2016-04-25 21:35 Yuii-: nono
2016-04-25 21:35 Yuii-: Was referring
2016-04-25 21:35 Yuii-: Wait
2016-04-25 21:36 Yuii-: You click on 00:39:458 (1) - 's tail for example
2016-04-25 21:36 Yuii-: And then Sampleset - Soft
2016-04-25 21:36 Yuii-: No need to add 5000 green lines
2016-04-25 21:36 Yuii-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5014923
2016-04-25 21:36 Aerous: o
2016-04-25 21:36 Aerous: LMAO
2016-04-25 21:36 Yuii-: Like shown on the picture
2016-04-25 21:36 Aerous: ya
2016-04-25 21:37 Aerous: ok
2016-04-25 21:37 Aerous: done
2016-04-25 21:37 Yuii-: Cool
2016-04-25 21:37 Yuii-: 01:06:034 (3) - Mind adding an NC for consistency?
2016-04-25 21:38 Yuii-: 01:11:251 (3) - here too!
2016-04-25 21:38 Aerous: ok mom
2016-04-25 21:38 Yuii-: And also I'd like some other thoughts on 00:50:056 (2,1,2) - being kinda hard to read
2016-04-25 21:38 Yuii-: Will check Kibb's meanwhile
2016-04-25 21:40 Yuii-: Aw dammit, he's not online
2016-04-25 21:40 Aerous: he was
2016-04-25 21:40 Aerous: i can change it
2016-04-25 21:40 Aerous: he said i can
2016-04-25 21:40 Aerous: LOL
2016-04-25 21:40 Aerous: he doesnt give a shit if i change his hard
2016-04-25 21:42 Yuii-: It's about 00:30:164 (1) - and 00:27:556 (1) -
2016-04-25 21:42 Aerous: is it dqable
2016-04-25 21:42 Aerous: if not then ill just leave it
2016-04-25 21:42 Yuii-: then leave it
2016-04-25 21:42 Aerous: brb food
2016-04-25 21:43 Aerous: ill be back in like
2016-04-25 21:43 Yuii-: sure enjoy your meal
2016-04-25 21:43 Aerous: 10mins
2016-04-25 21:43 Aerous: xd
2016-04-25 21:43 Yuii-: I will just list down all the stuff
2016-04-25 21:43 Aerous: ok thanks
2016-04-25 21:54 Yuii-: 00:18:588 (1,2) - (On Normal) you better improve that blanket lmao
2016-04-25 21:56 Yuii-: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5014986 can you try to adjust this a bitttt 00:44:023 (5) - ? Normal ofc
2016-04-25 21:57 Yuii-: 00:56:741 (5,6) - in sections where you are always stacking 1/2s this is hella confusing
2016-04-25 21:57 Yuii-: not mentioning the fact that 00:56:251 (4,5) - is the only 3/2 in the whole diff
2016-04-25 21:58 Yuii-: 01:15:817 (6,1) - emphasiz is impossible?
2016-04-25 21:59 Yuii-: EASY DIFF NOW OK BOY?
2016-04-25 21:59 Yuii-: 00:10:762 (1) - can you adjkust this as well zzz
2016-04-25 22:00 Yuii-: 01:02:936 (1) - and this one too
2016-04-25 22:00 Yuii-: sorry for being too picky
2016-04-25 22:01 Yuii-: you gave me too many dqs!!
2016-04-25 22:01 Yuii-: 01:15:980 - clickable
2016-04-25 22:01 Yuii-: please

2016-04-25 22:06 Aerous: ok
2016-04-25 22:06 Aerous: back
2016-04-25 22:06 Yuii-: wb!
2016-04-25 22:08 Aerous: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/932143 CHiCO with HoneyWorks - Historia [Normal]]
2016-04-25 22:08 Aerous: 00:56:741 (5,6) -
2016-04-25 22:08 Aerous: can i just unsatack it
2016-04-25 22:08 Aerous: http://puu.sh/ovQJx/c2e12ac635.jpg
2016-04-25 22:09 Yuii-: as long as the 3/4 is clear, yes
2016-04-25 22:09 Yuii-: i feel like the unstack is waaay better
2016-04-25 22:12 Aerous: updating
2016-04-25 22:12 Yuii-: alright
2016-04-25 22:12 Aerous: freesongs changed it
2016-04-25 22:12 Aerous: kk
2016-04-25 22:13 Aerous: updated
2016-04-25 22:13 Aerous: LETESE GO
2016-04-25 22:14 Yuii-: You know that I have to rebub right?
2016-04-25 22:14 Aerous: u do?
2016-04-25 22:14 Aerous: theres only like hs change
2016-04-25 22:14 Aerous: and a bit of arrangement
2016-04-25 22:14 Yuii-: And the timing
2016-04-25 22:14 Yuii-: And cause of that I can't qualify
2016-04-25 22:15 Yuii-: Timing things can't be ignored

2016-04-25 22:15 Aerous: k just do it
2016-04-25 22:15 Aerous: ill call up my boi monstrata
2016-04-25 22:15 Yuii-: I gotta check first!!!
2016-04-25 22:15 Yuii-: Checking hs
2016-04-25 22:15 Aerous: kk
2016-04-25 22:15 Aerous:

2016-04-25 22:15 Yuii-: Don't call anyone yet
2016-04-25 22:15 Yuii-: What was the thingy FS changed?
2016-04-25 22:16 Aerous: o
2016-04-25 22:16 Aerous: kk
2016-04-25 22:16 Aerous: uh
2016-04-25 22:16 Aerous: 00:50:056 (2,1,2) -
2016-04-25 22:16 Yuii-: awesome
2016-04-25 22:22 Yuii-: normal-hitfinish11.wav and normal-hitclap11.wav
2016-04-25 22:22 Yuii-: are unused?
2016-04-25 22:22 Aerous: lol ill delete it
2016-04-25 22:22 Yuii-: oki
2016-04-25 22:22 Yuii-: but am
2016-04-25 22:22 Yuii-: I'm not sure
2016-04-25 22:22 Yuii-: Just checking the map
2016-04-25 22:22 Yuii-: and I can't see them being used
2016-04-25 22:23 Yuii-: Oh, nope
2016-04-25 22:23 Aerous: yolo
2016-04-25 22:23 Aerous: isnt there
2016-04-25 22:23 Aerous: a
2016-04-25 22:23 Aerous: hitsound checker
2016-04-25 22:23 Aerous: from ticclick
2016-04-25 22:23 Yuii-: You use your Normal1 hitfinish
2016-04-25 22:23 Yuii-: Yeah, but I don't trust in those things
2016-04-25 22:23 Yuii-: Normal 11 is not being used
2016-04-25 22:23 Aerous: k
2016-04-25 22:23 Aerous: like the ones you told me becore
2016-04-25 22:23 Yuii-: Let me check with claps
2016-04-25 22:23 Aerous: i deleted it
2016-04-25 22:23 Yuii-: ok ok
2016-04-25 22:23 Aerous: nara just gave me his diff
2016-04-25 22:24 Yuii-: Oh then it might be a possibility
2016-04-25 22:25 Aerous: i didnt update it yet
2016-04-25 22:25 Aerous: hes still changing a few things
2016-04-25 22:25 Yuii-: I was referring to hitsounds haha
2016-04-25 22:26 Yuii-: Just checked, you use Sampleset Soft with 11
2016-04-25 22:26 Aerous: o
2016-04-25 22:26 Aerous: LOL
2016-04-25 22:26 Aerous: i deleted it anyways
2016-04-25 22:26 Yuii-: So yeah, the 2 hs I mentioned are unused
2016-04-25 22:26 Aerous: kk
2016-04-25 22:27 Aerous: updating baby
2016-04-25 22:27 Yuii-: Alright bae
2016-04-25 22:27 Yuii-: Thanks for your patient!
2016-04-25 22:27 Yuii-: I gotta avoid more DQs from you, you bad boy

2016-04-25 22:28 Aerous: xddd
2016-04-25 22:30 Aerous: uodated
2016-04-25 22:30 Yuii-: when are we gonna make a cool mapset bae?
2016-04-25 22:31 Aerous: soon TM
2016-04-25 22:32 Yuii-: What did he change exactly?
2016-04-25 22:32 Yuii-: ™
2016-04-25 22:32 Aerous: not sure
2016-04-25 22:32 Aerous: rip
2016-04-25 22:32 Yuii-: ok
2016-04-25 22:32 Yuii-: rechecking now
2016-04-25 22:34 Aerous: updating nara he just told me to change one slider shape
2016-04-25 22:35 Yuii-: combo colours please
2016-04-25 22:35 Yuii-: like PLEASE
2016-04-25 22:35 Yuii-: i think easy/normal have different
2016-04-25 22:35 Yuii-: i am colourblind
2016-04-25 22:35 Yuii-: you tell me
2016-04-25 22:36 Aerous: xd i think you are colorblind
2016-04-25 22:36 Aerous: http://puu.sh/ovSmT/b88384f52f.png
2016-04-25 22:37 Yuii-: dude
2016-04-25 22:37 Yuii-: compare them with the other diffs
2016-04-25 22:37 Yuii-: i swear
2016-04-25 22:37 Aerous: i think you';re high but ok ill check
2016-04-25 22:37 Yuii-: pkhg is using 4 combo colours but that's cause of the bg
2016-04-25 22:38 Aerous: OH SHIT
2016-04-25 22:38 Aerous: IT IS DIFF
2016-04-25 22:39 Yuii-: HOLY SHIOT
2016-04-25 22:39 Yuii-: THE COLOURBLINDESS WINS
2016-04-25 22:39 Yuii-: I'M PROUD OF IT MOM
2016-04-25 22:39 Aerous: updating
2016-04-25 22:39 Aerous: ok
2016-04-25 22:40 Yuii-: nice nice

Yuii-

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Yuii- 2016-04-26T01:57:18+00:00

Learn to kudos.

I know I'm helpful but please.

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2016-04-26T05:23:16+00:00

Rechecked, and everything seems good to go!

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2016-04-26T10:02:18+00:00

rip spam clap 800% volume

Myxo

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Myxo 2016-04-27T05:29:15+00:00

Disqualified on request.

Aerous

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Topic Starter

Aerous 2016-04-27T05:53:30+00:00

ok updated pkhg as he requested it

00:41:741 (4,5,1) - only that didnt change from before. HS increase in volume on pkhg's insane

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2016-04-27T07:08:58+00:00

Rebub

Yuii-

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Yuii- 2016-04-27T09:52:47+00:00

Rq

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2016-05-04T22:07:37+00:00

I just noticed, but can someone tell me how FreeSongs' Insane passed the qualification ?

00:39:458 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Hello?!
00:42:067 (1,2,3,4) - HELLOOOOOO
00:44:675 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - i'm done

00:50:545 (2,3,4) - and wtf is this spacing and flow

anywayyyy gratz lol and ignore my post just like you ignored this diff xdxd

pkhg and Habi carried this set tbh

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-05-05T01:41:33+00:00

Because no one complains and reports?

QATs no longer judge and check maps, this is how the new change works.

So, if you really have concern over a map, please do raise discussion and report in time.

Cherry Blossom

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Cherry Blossom 2016-05-05T01:47:19+00:00

it rather looks like a bad meme....
no worries.

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-05-05T01:48:36+00:00

I really have difficulty distinguishing between annoying meme and serious stuff haha

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2016-05-05T10:02:37+00:00

wat about me

Sotarks

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Sotarks 2016-05-06T00:50:52+00:00

well I actually think FreeSongs' Insane is not that good.. It's not a meme..
But anyway too late.. End of the conversation ^^'

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