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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, June 26, 2019 at 5:09:43 PM

Artist: M2U
Title: A Bella! (feat. Lucy)
Source: HIGH5
Tags: Side NazuSan Elcheer CrimmiSkye Kakao Android iOS 하이파이브 Rex Shin SQUARE MUSIQ PNIX GAMES
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3970kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.83 stars, 116 notes)
  2. Elcheer's Insane (4.33 stars, 421 notes)
  3. Insane (4.12 stars, 335 notes)
  4. Nazu's Insane (4.67 stars, 435 notes)
  5. Normal (2.17 stars, 208 notes)
  6. Side's Hard (3.4 stars, 302 notes)


Download: M2U - A Bella! (feat. Lucy)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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From HIGH5.

Side's Hard added.
Used NazuSan's mod.
Used Seynar's mod.
Used Breezy's mod.
Added NazuSan's Insane.
Added Elcheer's Insane.
Revived L^.^7
Changed name, tags, re-download.
Revived again.
Revived once again >.> Elcheer's Insane will be re-done.
Used smoke45's mod.
Used Kyuunex's mod.
Elcheer's Insane re-mapped and added.
REVIVED AGAIN. >:(
posted
Hi,

first time commenting on a beatmap so no idea how this works. Just played the insane map, and I thought it was pretty nice! i only noticed that the slider on 00:15:292 goes off screen. is this intentional?

I have a 16:10 monitor if that makes any difference
posted

Rest wrote:

Hi,

first time commenting on a beatmap so no idea how this works. Just played the insane map, and I thought it was pretty nice! i only noticed that the slider on 00:15:292 goes off screen. is this intentional?

I have a 16:10 monitor if that makes any difference
I think it's a bit off, thanks for pointing it out. When I was testing it I thought it was slightly off screen.
posted
Hi! just a random mod from #modreqs here ^^

I just took a short look at this map and I already like it ^^
but there are some issues you have to fix before it can get ranked!

[General]
  1. Some diffs are generally nice like easy, the hard GD; normal definitely needs some fixes
    and insane has potential as well
  2. I'll mod just 3 of your 4 diffs
  3. As I noticed you like using blankets, but please correct them if they are not perfect. I know there are
    a lot of mods which will also tell you this
  4. turn off the countdown, mostely nobody uses this anymore, and you don't need letterboxes in breaks
  5. AiMod says there are some conflicts with the setting of "Side's Hard", fix them
  6. hitsounding seems ok to me nevertheless you can create more interesting things by changing the sound
    sample of some notes. Use shift+Q/W/E/R to change it for one note/slider. So you could emphasize the beats
    just one example (insane diff)
    00:25:230 (5,6,7) - change the sample of all 3 slider starts to "normal"
  7. I would also recommend to use costume hitsounds. Maybe somebody will help you to find suitable hitsounds
    or you looking for them in your song folder if you have a lot of maps.
  8. I'll focus on the performance, shaping and flow. I won't mod hitsounding and comboing issues.


[Easy]
  1. As I've told you Easy is quite a nice map, there are only some small things to fix
  2. I recommend using HP 2
  3. 00:17:355 (4,5) - fix this blanket, the outer border of the slider has to match with the approach circle of 4
  4. 00:23:355 (5,1) - fix blanket
  5. 00:32:355 (3,1) - blanket again ^^
  6. 00:40:230 (2,3,4) - have you heard about polarity? just watch
    this video
    It's hard for new players to hit circles on red ticks or offbeats (the 2nd and 4th white ticks)
    They will definitely don't understand this pattern. Convert 2 and 3 to a slider or 2,3 and 4 to a repeating slider.
    Understand?
  7. 00:43:230 (3,1) - blanket, pls look at all blankets, if they fit perfect, I won't mention this problem again
  8. 00:52:230 (2) - using repeating 1/2 sliders are definitely not recommended in easy even if there
    is only one repeat but this one has 2 repeats. I won't even do this in hard
  9. 00:52:230 (2,3) - moreover because of the slider there is a polarity issue
  10. Imo this spinner is a bit to short for an easy. Eighter you map this section with slider/circle or anything
    or you don't change it and wait what other mods say about this
  11. 01:14:730 (2,3,4) - polarity
  12. 01:23:730 (3) - ctrl+J for a better flow, then fix distance snap and 01:25:230 (1) - ctrl+g
  13. 01:32:730 (2,3,4) - this doesn't fit here use this pattern
  14. 01:43:230 (1,2,3) - polarity
  15. 01:53:730 (3,3) - stack them correctly or move 3 to another position
  16. 01:57:480 (3) - move to 184/248 for a correct triangle


[Normal]
  1. Normal definitely need some fixes! There are a lot of polarity issues, which makes it hard to play
    for new players
  2. some people say normal is a nice diff for creative slider shapes, but unfortunately I've just seen
    round or straight sliders, try to be creative and add some nice slider shapes ;)
  3. decrease Hp drain to 4
  4. 00:02:730 (6,7,1) - I'm not sure if this kind of overlapping is rankable, just wait for other mods
  5. 00:05:730 (6) - slider end at the white tick and move 7 that it's just on the red ticks, then add a circle
    here 00:06:855 -
  6. 00:06:480 (7,1) - fix this blanket ^^
  7. 00:11:730 (6) - reduce the lenght, it should end on the white tick
  8. 00:16:042 (5) - move to the previous white tick
  9. 00:17:730 (5,6) - this doesn't work for a normal xD... use
    this
  10. 00:18:855 (7,1) - fix blanket, I won't mention it anymore, fix all blanket issues you see
  11. 00:26:355 (5,6) - polarity, make it readable that you want to change to the red ticks, or map something
    at the big white tick there
  12. 00:29:730 (1) - this is to long, it should end here 00:30:292 - then add a circle here for polarity 00:30:667
  13. 00:36:292 (2,3,4) - this does not fit, make it like this
  14. 01:09:855 (3,3) - stack them or move the 2nd 3 to another position which is better because 01:11:355 (4,7) -
    they touch each other
  15. 01:20:355 (4,5,6) - this has a strange flow, move 4 and 5 a bit to the left, rotate 5 by 20°
  16. 01:52:230 (1) - ctrl+J, then fix distance snap and move 2 a bit higher for a better flow
  17. 01:54:480 (5) - slider end on the white tick
  18. 01:56:730 (5) - convert to 1/1 slider and add a circle 01:57:480 - here (with a finish hitsound)


[Insane]
  1. As I said Insane has a huge potential, keep on improving this map!
  2. I noticed you tried to make this map harder by using high slider velocity. This is unusual but creates
    a special feeling while playing, I like it. But nevertheless this is an insane and your hardest diff in this
    mapset. I think you could add more jumps, but if you do this you have to be consistent! I'll give you some examples.
  3. this is an insane! You don't have to keep things as simple as possible. In some parts of the song you mapped
    less than you could. I'll also give you some examples.
  4. decrease HP drain to 7


I'll give you some tipps for some jumps, please think about adding more jumps after you applied my recommendations:
  1. in insane a jump can be placed whenever a new combo begins (on a bit white tick)
    some examples:
    00:15:292 (6,1) -
    00:20:542 (4,5) -
    00:22:042 (1,2) -
    00:27:855 (3,4) -
    01:20:542 (4,5) -
    01:34:042 (9,1) -
    and so on
  2. sometimes the song implies a HUGE jump, there you can increase distance snap, or of course add another jump type
    my favorite jumps are called "snap jumps" (I call them like this)
    you need at least 4 cicles (or more of course) on a white,red,white,red tick
    the white-red cicles have a consistent distance snap but between red-white there's a huge jump
    just a picture
    some examples for your song:
    01:32:730 (4,5,6,7) -
    01:38:355 (3,4,1,2,3) -
    01:44:730 (5,6,7,8) -
    and so on


Now some issues:
  1. 00:04:605 (2,3) - fix blanket
  2. 00:05:730 (6,7,8) - you can map this part much better, using a little stream here is fine pic
    You can add a jump between the circle 6 and 7(start of the stream) this is possible for every stream and triplett
  3. 00:09:855 (7) - fix blanket, and/or stack 7 with end of 5
  4. 00:11:355 (3) - same again but with 1 and 3
  5. 00:12:855 (6,7) - convert to a 1/2 slider
  6. 00:14:542 (4,5) - blanket
  7. 00:17:730 (1,2,3) - they don't have the same distance snap, use 1,0 for a better flow
  8. 00:18:105 (3,4) - jump between them
  9. 00:21:292 (6) - I feel a jump here rotate the slider by 30° anti clockwise and fix the blanket
    then stack 00:21:855 (7,1) - and move them to 0/224, this creates a jump to 2 (of course reduce the distance a bit)
    it should look like this
  10. 00:22:792 (3,4) - this could be a nice jump but you stacked them ^^
  11. 00:28:792 (7) - I won't reduce slider velocity here, let the slider end at the red tick and add a circle at the following white
  12. 00:37:042 (4,5) - fix this blanket
  13. map the doubles here 00:37:980 - 00:38:073 - 00:38:261 - 00:38:355 -
  14. 00:45:292 (2,3,4) - wrong pattern, use: 1/2 slider - circle - 1/2 slider
  15. 00:46:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could be a nice star pattern but it actually looks... hmmmmh
  16. 00:47:167 (1,2,3) - make the distance between very very small like
    this and change their position that it's a good flow
  17. 00:47:730 (1,3) - maybe stack them?, fix the blanket as well
  18. 00:49:792 (7,8) - don't stack them, convert 8 to 2 circles you can stack them and then fix the distance snap to 00:50:261 (9) -
  19. 00:51:292 (2,4) - I won't stack them
  20. 00:52:792 (1) - that's definitely unrankable! you can't react fast enough to this repeat. delete this repeat and make the slider longer
    that it ends at the red tick
  21. 00:56:355 (8) - reduce lenght to 1/2 and add a circle here 00:56:730 -
  22. 00:58:980 (4) - stack 4 on 6
  23. 01:07:230 (7) - convert to a repeating 1/2 slider
  24. 01:08:355 (9) - make to 1/2 and add a circle at the big white tick
  25. 01:09:011 - add a circle here
  26. 01:10:792 (2,4) - this overlap looks a bit messy and is also not good for the flow
  27. 01:15:292 (3) - I think we had this before, no lower slider velo, slider end here 01:15:667 -
    and 01:15:855 - there is a dominant note that should be mapped (circle)
  28. 01:20:542 (4,5) - between them should be a jump
  29. 01:24:292 (6) - map the doubles instead of the large slider
  30. 01:26:730 (5,6,7,8,9) - the slider velo in this section is a bit too slow, make it 1,0
  31. 01:27:480 (8) - 1/2 slider and add circle here 01:27:855 -
  32. 01:33:480 (8,9) - first circle, then repeating slider
  33. 01:36:761 (9,10) - I won't stack it with 5 because it's not well readable
  34. 01:39:292 (4,5) - that's not a good flow, mark 4 and then ctrl+J, then fix distance snap and so on..
  35. 01:43:792 (2,5) - stack them or use another pattern because 01:44:730 (5,6,7,8) - the song implies huge
    jumps here
  36. 01:53:167 (6) - of course you can map a triplet here as a repeating 1/4 slider or with 3 circles
  37. 01:53:636 - add circle for a correct triplett
  38. 01:54:292 - missing cicle, listen to the song, you'll hear it
  39. 01:55:980 (5,6,7) - map more in this part! use this pattern
    there must be jumps between 4 and 5, something like this


Nice Mapset! Improve and good luck! ;)

If you want to mod one of my maps, just look at my signature
Edit... noo it doesn't exist -.- so...
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/905978
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/429241
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/404995
posted

NazuSan wrote:

Hi! just a random mod from #modreqs here ^^

I just took a short look at this map and I already like it ^^
but there are some issues you have to fix before it can get ranked!

[General]
  1. Some diffs are generally nice like easy, the hard GD; normal definitely needs some fixes
    and insane has potential as well
  2. I'll mod just 3 of your 4 diffs
  3. As I noticed you like using blankets, but please correct them if they are not perfect. I know there are
    a lot of mods which will also tell you this
  4. turn off the countdown, mostely nobody uses this anymore, and you don't need letterboxes in breaks Removed.
  5. AiMod says there are some conflicts with the setting of "Side's Hard", fix them I'll let Side check that out.
  6. hitsounding seems ok to me nevertheless you can create more interesting things by changing the sound
    sample of some notes. Use shift+Q/W/E/R to change it for one note/slider. So you could emphasize the beats
    just one example (insane diff)
    00:25:230 (5,6,7) - change the sample of all 3 slider starts to "normal" I know what I am doing with my hitsounding.
  7. I would also recommend to use costume hitsounds. Maybe somebody will help you to find suitable hitsounds
    or you looking for them in your song folder if you have a lot of maps. I don't need custom hitsounds for this map as the Soft and Normals do well with eachother.
  8. I'll focus on the performance, shaping and flow. I won't mod hitsounding and comboing issues.


[Easy]
  1. As I've told you Easy is quite a nice map, there are only some small things to fix
  2. I recommend using HP 2 Why 2? I know you're concerned for the newbies but I chose 3 because it's a bit suitable and I don't want to bore them with a medicore diff.
  3. 00:17:355 (4,5) - fix this blanket, the outer border of the slider has to match with the approach circle of 4 Fixed.
  4. 00:23:355 (5,1) - fix blanket Fixed.
  5. 00:32:355 (3,1) - blanket again ^^ Fixed.
  6. 00:40:230 (2,3,4) - have you heard about polarity? just watch
    this video I know about polarity I know when and when not to use it.
    It's hard for new players to hit circles on red ticks or offbeats (the 2nd and 4th white ticks)
    They will definitely don't understand this pattern. Convert 2 and 3 to a slider or 2,3 and 4 to a repeating slider.
    Understand? Lol'd.
  7. 00:43:230 (3,1) - blanket, pls look at all blankets, if they fit perfect, I won't mention this problem again Fixed?
  8. 00:52:230 (2) - using repeating 1/2 sliders are definitely not recommended in easy even if there Fixed.
    is only one repeat but this one has 2 repeats. I won't even do this in hard Fixed.
  9. 00:52:230 (2,3) - moreover because of the slider there is a polarity issue Fixed.
  10. Imo this spinner is a bit to short for an easy. Eighter you map this section with slider/circle or anything
    or you don't change it and wait what other mods say about this Not really imo.
  11. 01:14:730 (2,3,4) - polarity Fixed.
  12. 01:23:730 (3) - ctrl+J for a better flow, then fix distance snap and 01:25:230 (1) - ctrl+g Fixed.
  13. 01:32:730 (2,3,4) - this doesn't fit here use this pattern
  14. 01:43:230 (1,2,3) - polarity Fixed.
  15. 01:53:730 (3,3) - stack them correctly or move 3 to another position I thought you can't stack on Easies.
  16. 01:57:480 (3) - move to 184/248 for a correct triangle Fixed.


[Normal]
  1. Normal definitely need some fixes! There are a lot of polarity issues, which makes it hard to play
    for new players
  2. some people say normal is a nice diff for creative slider shapes, but unfortunately I've just seen
    round or straight sliders, try to be creative and add some nice slider shapes ;)Hmm, I like my boring and bland round/straight sliders if I am not a god of making unique sliders like everybody else.
  3. decrease Hp drain to 4 On a normal?
  4. 00:02:730 (6,7,1) - I'm not sure if this kind of overlapping is rankable, just wait for other mods
  5. 00:05:730 (6) - slider end at the white tick and move 7 that it's just on the red ticks, then add a circle
    here 00:06:855 -
  6. 00:06:480 (7,1) - fix this blanket ^^ Fixed.
  7. 00:11:730 (6) - reduce the lenght, it should end on the white tick Fixed.
  8. 00:16:042 (5) - move to the previous white tick
  9. 00:17:730 (5,6) - this doesn't work for a normal xD... use
    this
  10. 00:18:855 (7,1) - fix blanket, I won't mention it anymore, fix all blanket issues you see Fixed.
  11. 00:26:355 (5,6) - polarity, make it readable that you want to change to the red ticks, or map something
    at the big white tick there Fixed.
  12. 00:29:730 (1) - this is to long, it should end here 00:30:292 - then add a circle here for polarity 00:30:667
  13. 00:36:292 (2,3,4) - this does not fit, make it like this
  14. 01:09:855 (3,3) - stack them or move the 2nd 3 to another position which is better because 01:11:355 (4,7) -
    they touch each other Fixed.
  15. 01:20:355 (4,5,6) - this has a strange flow, move 4 and 5 a bit to the left, rotate 5 by 20° Fixed.
  16. 01:52:230 (1) - ctrl+J, then fix distance snap and move 2 a bit higher for a better flow Fixed.
  17. 01:54:480 (5) - slider end on the white tick Fixed.
  18. 01:56:730 (5) - convert to 1/1 slider and add a circle 01:57:480 - here (with a finish hitsound) I kind of like my long slider.


[Insane]
  1. As I said Insane has a huge potential, keep on improving this map!
  2. I noticed you tried to make this map harder by using high slider velocity. This is unusual but creates
    a special feeling while playing, I like it. But nevertheless this is an insane and your hardest diff in this
    mapset. I think you could add more jumps, but if you do this you have to be consistent! I'll give you some examples.
  3. this is an insane! You don't have to keep things as simple as possible. In some parts of the song you mapped
    less than you could. I'll also give you some examples.
  4. decrease HP drain to 7


I'll give you some tipps for some jumps, please think about adding more jumps after you applied my recommendations:
  1. in insane a jump can be placed whenever a new combo begins (on a bit white tick)
    some examples:
    00:15:292 (6,1) -
    00:20:542 (4,5) -
    00:22:042 (1,2) -
    00:27:855 (3,4) -
    01:20:542 (4,5) -
    01:34:042 (9,1) -
    and so on
  2. sometimes the song implies a HUGE jump, there you can increase distance snap, or of course add another jump type
    my favorite jumps are called "snap jumps" (I call them like this)
    you need at least 4 cicles (or more of course) on a white,red,white,red tick
    the white-red cicles have a consistent distance snap but between red-white there's a huge jump
    just a picture
    some examples for your song:
    01:32:730 (4,5,6,7) -
    01:38:355 (3,4,1,2,3) -
    01:44:730 (5,6,7,8) -
    and so on


Now I checked some of your "suggested" jumps and going over them with a friend of mine and those either work but are really not my thing or just random.

Now some issues:
  1. 00:04:605 (2,3) - fix blanket
  2. 00:05:730 (6,7,8) - you can map this part much better, using a little stream here is fine pic If I wanted a stream there, I would've placed it there. If I feel that I shouldn't place a stream there for the sake of difficulty I wouldn't force it.
    You can add a jump between the circle 6 and 7(start of the stream) this is possible for every stream and triplet
  3. 00:09:855 (7) - fix blanket, and/or stack 7 with end of 5 Fixed.
  4. 00:11:355 (3) - same again but with 1 and 3 Fixed.
  5. 00:12:855 (6,7) - convert to a 1/2 slider
  6. 00:14:542 (4,5) - blanket
  7. 00:17:730 (1,2,3) - they don't have the same distance snap, use 1,0 for a better flow
  8. 00:18:105 (3,4) - jump between them
  9. 00:21:292 (6) - I feel a jump here rotate the slider by 30° anti clockwise and fix the blanket
    then stack 00:21:855 (7,1) - and move them to 0/224, this creates a jump to 2 (of course reduce the distance a bit)
    it should look like this
  10. 00:22:792 (3,4) - this could be a nice jump but you stacked them ^^
  11. 00:28:792 (7) - I won't reduce slider velocity here, let the slider end at the red tick and add a circle at the following white
  12. 00:37:042 (4,5) - fix this blanket
  13. map the doubles here 00:37:980 - 00:38:073 - 00:38:261 - 00:38:355 -
  14. 00:45:292 (2,3,4) - wrong pattern, use: 1/2 slider - circle - 1/2 slider
  15. 00:46:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could be a nice star pattern but it actually looks... hmmmmh
  16. 00:47:167 (1,2,3) - make the distance between very very small like
    this and change their position that it's a good flow
  17. 00:47:730 (1,3) - maybe stack them?, fix the blanket as well
  18. 00:49:792 (7,8) - don't stack them, convert 8 to 2 circles you can stack them and then fix the distance snap to 00:50:261 (9) -
  19. 00:51:292 (2,4) - I won't stack them
  20. 00:52:792 (1) - that's definitely unrankable! you can't react fast enough to this repeat. delete this repeat and make the slider longer
    that it ends at the red tick I have seen worse and this is a bit tame compared others.
  21. 00:56:355 (8) - reduce lenght to 1/2 and add a circle here 00:56:730 -
  22. 00:58:980 (4) - stack 4 on 6
  23. 01:07:230 (7) - convert to a repeating 1/2 slider
  24. 01:08:355 (9) - make to 1/2 and add a circle at the big white tick
  25. 01:09:011 - add a circle here
  26. 01:10:792 (2,4) - this overlap looks a bit messy and is also not good for the flow
  27. 01:15:292 (3) - I think we had this before, no lower slider velo, slider end here 01:15:667 -
    and 01:15:855 - there is a dominant note that should be mapped (circle)
  28. 01:20:542 (4,5) - between them should be a jump Not going to force a jump if the song doesn't imply it for me.
  29. 01:24:292 (6) - map the doubles instead of the large slider
  30. 01:26:730 (5,6,7,8,9) - the slider velo in this section is a bit too slow, make it 1,0
  31. 01:27:480 (8) - 1/2 slider and add circle here 01:27:855 -
  32. 01:33:480 (8,9) - first circle, then repeating slider
  33. 01:36:761 (9,10) - I won't stack it with 5 because it's not well readable
  34. 01:39:292 (4,5) - that's not a good flow, mark 4 and then ctrl+J, then fix distance snap and so on..
  35. 01:43:792 (2,5) - stack them or use another pattern because 01:44:730 (5,6,7,8) - the song implies huge
    jumps here
  36. 01:53:167 (6) - of course you can map a triplet here as a repeating 1/4 slider or with 3 circles
  37. 01:53:636 - add circle for a correct triplett
  38. 01:54:292 - missing cicle, listen to the song, you'll hear it
  39. 01:55:980 (5,6,7) - map more in this part! use this pattern
    there must be jumps between 4 and 5, something like this


Nice Mapset! Improve and good luck! ;)

If you want to mod one of my maps, just look at my signature
Edit... noo it doesn't exist -.- so...
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/905978
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/429241
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/404995
I will get to your map soon, thanks for the mod.
posted
Really interested in doing an Extra difficulty for this; let me know what you think. ;w;
posted

SuperMIC wrote:

Really interested in doing an Extra difficulty for this; let me know what you think. ;w;
Hmm sure, give it a shot~
posted
Insane : 3.88* with AR9+OD8 + very fast slider velocity sometimes, for me you have 2 choices, make the map harder or make easier settings
I would personaly prefere the map to be harder so i'll mod this thinking about gaining difficulty :D

You have to know i like little combo numbers so i'll maybe say NC too much :D

00:02:730 (1) - NC
00:05:730 (1) - NC
00:11:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here u can make an harder patern, unstacking notes (like pentagone or triangles)
00:25:230 (1) - NC
00:28:230 (1) - NC
00:37:230 (1) - NC
00:36:292 (2) - I was talking about those parts, this is very hard for a not even 4* map
00:43:230 (5) - NC
00:49:230 (5) - NC
00:58:417 (1) - NC
01:06:855 (6) - Real stream ? And NC here 01:07:230 (1)
Maybe something like that (with less spacing of course)

01:12:855 (7,8,1,2,3) - I think you should not let an empty space and then make a patern with this
01:23:730 (5,6) - Replace with harder things (little sliders like before for example)
01:32:730 (1) - NC
01:35:730 (5) - NC
01:36:480 (7,8,9,10) - This is far to hard for hard players imo, little sliders should be better

01:44:730 (1) - NC

01:46:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - More spacing ? Like 1.2 maybe, or some jumps but i'm not sure it's the end so it's propably preferable to make the song harder somewhere else
01:47:730 (8) - NC
01:50:730 (8) - NC

I like the map, my general though is that it needs more spacing on slow parts and follow more the vocals on the hard parts to make harder rhythms. ^^
posted
Hey, M4M!


Easy


00:01:230 - Is the beginning intentionally left unmapped? The other difficulties are mapped here.

00:34:230 (3) - This slider looks sort of bland going through the Y-axis, maybe do an interesting curve with it that is symmetrical?

00:46:230 (3) - Curve this? I think it would look nice, and it flow into the next slider easily.

00:52:230 (2,1) - It's very difficult to tell, but if not, just make sure that these sliders are at the same slope for neatness.\

01:22:230 (1) - Maybe do a more interesting shape with this to match 01:23:730 (3)

01:38:730 (3) - You could do a more interesting slider shape towards the end to go with the song more.

01:38:730 (4,2) - You could stack these for neatness if possible. It makes the blanket look weird.

Normal


00:37:417 (4) - The slope of this note is uneven with the notes before it. (unless intended)

00:46:792 (7) - ^

01:31:230 (1) - Maybe curve this to blanket it with the preceding slider?

01:44:730 (5,6) - I would make these the exact same shape since they don't seem to be if you look at the ticks inside the sliders.

01:46:980 (2,4) - Slope of these sliders don't appear to be even, I would make them even for looks and neatness.

01:55:605 (2) - Looks uneven with the upcoming notes.

01:56:355 (4,5) - Blanket looks slightly uneven if you look at the approach circle.

Side's Hard


00:07:042 (4,1) - Not sure why these have different spacing, the other notes in this section are all evenly spaced.

00:14:730 (1) - I would curve this the opposite way so that it flows into the next note.

00:18:480 (4) - I would tilt this slightly towards the next upcoming slider, would improve the flow.

00:28:605 (2) - I would make the spacing with note even between the 2 sliders, it looks kind of random. Or if you don't want to do that, you could curve 00:28:792 (3) to blanket it with the preceding note.

00:37:605 (2) - Tilt the opposite way for better flow?

00:40:230 (5) - Curve opposite way for better flow?

00:46:980 - I think having a note here stacked sounds much better.

00:58:980 - A note here would also sound better.

01:09:480 (3,4) - You could make these both the slider shape because the music suggests it since it is the exact same sound.

01:21:292 (4) - This looks slightly uneven with (2) and (3).

01:33:480 - A note here would also be better, these sections just sound so weird without a note because I hear a beat.

01:45:480 - ^

01:55:042 (4) - In this section of the song, I hear other parts where you could have mapped this. I suggest you add a bit more of these.

Insane


00:09:855 (7,8,1) - Slope of these look uneven.

00:13:230 (1,3) - Stack these? The blanket then looks uneven.

00:18:855 (6) - You could improve the curve on this to form a neater blanket.

00:21:292 (6) - You could adjust this slider so that the head blankets with (5).

00:37:042 (4,5) - Neater blanket?

01:08:917 - I hear the stream start here, consider this?

01:19:042 (8,1) - Blanket is uneven, it looks weird left uneven.



Overall, it's a cool mapset. Have you considered adding another Insane around 4.5 stars for this? I think it would be cool.

Have a star!
posted

Breezy wrote:

Side's Hard


00:07:042 (4,1) - Not sure why these have different spacing, the other notes in this section are all evenly spaced. It was mostly to emphasize the finish at this final bar. Unfortunately I couldn't really do it here 00:13:230 (1) - because it's also the start of the first verse plus the triangle looks nice so it might look a bit out of place but it's by no means a misread concern (trust me I've gotten countless testplays for this diff and no one has had any issues here)

00:14:730 (1) - I would curve this the opposite way so that it flows into the next note. It could work that way too but I like how it flows from the previous note this way

00:18:480 (4) - I would tilt this slightly towards the next upcoming slider, would improve the flow. Not sure if you mean to move this up a bit or just tilt the repeat angle but I assume it's the second. Honestly the flow stays the same since even at this difficulty level players flat hold these repeat sliders so rotating it wouldn't help flow.

00:28:605 (2) - I would make the spacing with note even between the 2 sliders, it looks kind of random. Or if you don't want to do that, you could curve 00:28:792 (3) to blanket it with the preceding note. Oh this is is something I end up doing throughout the 4th bar of every beat pretty much is using 1.8x spacing to emphasize this (basically the downbeat of the stanza as some people call it I think) since it's where a lot of the impact in the music is. I did like the idea behind curving (3) but I prefer keeping it a straight line because it mirrors (1) and it's a similar sound in the music as (1) as well so it's kinda like a little compliment to it I feel.

00:37:605 (2) - Tilt the opposite way for better flow? Similar example to the suggestion made at 00:14:730 (1) - It wouldn't really make a difference but it plays better coming from (1) than going into (3) if that makes sense.

00:40:230 (5) - Curve opposite way for better flow? Also same as above

00:46:980 - I think having a note here stacked sounds much better. I've gotten this suggestion before and it's not a bad suggestion ofc but the reason I left these parts empty is to give 00:47:167 (1) - a LOT of emphasis as a pause. Since this part is also the jump section of the map having a non-stop 5 note tapping and then a slider or something else would make it a lot harder and that's not what I'm going for with this difficulty. I did however also add an NC here to help with that emphasis

00:58:980 - A note here would also sound better. Didn't do this but did do that NC thing mentioned above.

01:09:480 (3,4) - You could make these both the slider shape because the music suggests it since it is the exact same sound. Sure and good point!

01:21:292 (4) - This looks slightly uneven with (2) and (3). Fixed it (I think)

01:33:480 - A note here would also be better, these sections just sound so weird without a note because I hear a beat. Explained at the previous points.

01:45:480 - ^ same

01:55:042 (4) - In this section of the song, I hear other parts where you could have mapped this. I suggest you add a bit more of these. This kind of ties with the whole 4th bar thing I mentioned above which is usually why these sections are a bit more difficult than the others. I wouldn't mind adding more of these 1/2 sliders or even triples but it doesn't really fit with the idea I had originally.


Thanks for the mod! :)
Also made a few small self-mod changes.

osu file format v14

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Breezy wrote:

Hey, M4M!


Easy


00:01:230 - Is the beginning intentionally left unmapped? The other difficulties are mapped here.

00:34:230 (3) - This slider looks sort of bland going through the Y-axis, maybe do an interesting curve with it that is symmetrical?

00:46:230 (3) - Curve this? I think it would look nice, and it flow into the next slider easily.

00:52:230 (2,1) - It's very difficult to tell, but if not, just make sure that these sliders are at the same slope for neatness.\

01:22:230 (1) - Maybe do a more interesting shape with this to match 01:23:730 (3)

01:38:730 (3) - You could do a more interesting slider shape towards the end to go with the song more.

01:38:730 (4,2) - You could stack these for neatness if possible. It makes the blanket look weird.

Normal


00:37:417 (4) - The slope of this note is uneven with the notes before it. (unless intended)

00:46:792 (7) - ^

01:31:230 (1) - Maybe curve this to blanket it with the preceding slider?

01:44:730 (5,6) - I would make these the exact same shape since they don't seem to be if you look at the ticks inside the sliders.

01:46:980 (2,4) - Slope of these sliders don't appear to be even, I would make them even for looks and neatness.

01:55:605 (2) - Looks uneven with the upcoming notes.

01:56:355 (4,5) - Blanket looks slightly uneven if you look at the approach circle.

Insane


00:09:855 (7,8,1) - Slope of these look uneven.

00:13:230 (1,3) - Stack these? The blanket then looks uneven.

00:18:855 (6) - You could improve the curve on this to form a neater blanket.

00:21:292 (6) - You could adjust this slider so that the head blankets with (5).

00:37:042 (4,5) - Neater blanket?

01:08:917 - I hear the stream start here, consider this?

01:19:042 (8,1) - Blanket is uneven, it looks weird left uneven.



Overall, it's a cool mapset. Have you considered adding another Insane around 4.5 stars for this? I think it would be cool. I'm just taking my time on how to make more difficult maps, besides I might end up with a worse insane than the one I made.

Have a star!

Seynar wrote:

Insane : 3.88* with AR9+OD8 + very fast slider velocity sometimes, for me you have 2 choices, make the map harder or make easier settings What's wrong with map how it is difficulty wise? Most of the mapping here is to the Lucy's vocals.

I would personaly prefere the map to be harder so i'll mod this thinking about gaining difficulty :D

You have to know i like little combo numbers so i'll maybe say NC too much :D

00:02:730 (1) - NC
00:05:730 (1) - NC
00:11:730 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here u can make an harder patern, unstacking notes (like pentagone or triangles)
00:25:230 (1) - NC
00:28:230 (1) - NC
00:37:230 (1) - NC
00:36:292 (2) - I was talking about those parts, this is very hard for a not even 4* map
00:43:230 (5) - NC
00:49:230 (5) - NC
00:58:417 (1) - NC
01:06:855 (6) - Real stream ? And NC here 01:07:230 (1)
Maybe something like that (with less spacing of course)

01:12:855 (7,8,1,2,3) - I think you should not let an empty space and then make a patern with this
01:23:730 (5,6) - Replace with harder things (little sliders like before for example)
01:32:730 (1) - NC
01:35:730 (5) - NC
01:36:480 (7,8,9,10) - This is far to hard for hard players imo, little sliders should be better

01:44:730 (1) - NC

01:46:230 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - More spacing ? Like 1.2 maybe, or some jumps but i'm not sure it's the end so it's propably preferable to make the song harder somewhere else
01:47:730 (8) - NC
01:50:730 (8) - NC

I like the map, my general though is that it needs more spacing on slow parts and follow more the vocals on the hard parts to make harder rhythms. ^^


Thanks for the mods~
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I made a insane for u~ (4.6*)
Map is finished, just need some hitsounds :D

I'll post it or pm you when it's done ^^
Just want to notify you :D
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